GA Review
[edit]- Lead
- The event's name is "The Great American Bash," so the first sentence needs to add "The" before "Great American Bash"
- That is a grammar issue my friend. –LAX 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Link "event" to List of WWE pay-per-view events **optional**
- "and champion Eddie Guerrero" --> "and champion -- Eddie Guerrero"
- After "succession," add "(which was the only was to win the match)" **optional**
- But it wasn't the only way to win. That was the way promoted to win, but if a wrestler took his end of the rope off his arm, he would have been DQed. I, personally, don't think that's very note worthy. –LAX 23:31, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Background
- to make an "impact" --> to "make an impact"
- wlink "abducting"
- Consistency between "Undertaker" and "The Undertaker"
- Again, that has to do with grammar. –LAX 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Reviewers note: Ah, remember when Cena was only competing for the United States championship? Those were the days ;)
- "between champion John Cena" --> "between champion -- John Cena"
- "between the champion—John Cena—..."? –LAX 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- also, you say the match is for the WWE Championship, which is an error
- wlink "counted out," "elimination match," and "standard one-on-one match"
- add an image **optional**
- Event
- The John Cena image caption suggests that he was not champion heading out of the event. also, align that picture to the left, unless a picture is added to the background and aligned to the left there. it looks awkward to have everything on the right side of the page.
- I would, but doing either would violate WP:MOS#Images. –LAX 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- it should be noted that both men have their wrist tied to the same rope, with a bell in the middle
- "on him through it" --> "onto him through it"
- "Next was the main event" --> "The final match of the card was the main event"
- again, consistency between "The Undertaker" and "Undertaker"
- Like I said, it's a grammar issue. –LAX 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Aftermath
- Mention that Theodore Long took over as GM
- also note the second match that Cena won in the best of 5 series.
- Why? I don't really see the point. I think that Cena won the series should only be noted. –LAX 23:21, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
All is done, I believe. –LAX 23:48, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
The article looks great and is in great condition. -- iMatthew T.C. 23:14, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
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Cheers, -- iMatthew T.C. 23:26, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
Official Theme Song?
[edit]Shouldn't it be noted that the official theme for the 2004 edition of The Great American bash was "Amerika" by Rammstein, or is there no "citation" to support that, because I remember vividly from watching WWE at that PPV that was definitely the theme used.216.157.195.66 (talk) 19:18, 2 July 2012 (UTC)