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Honestly, this article needs some cleanup. Also, since a great majority of the edits were made by only one person, it may not conform with the "neutral point of view" thing, or whatever it's called. |
Honestly, this article needs some cleanup. Also, since a great majority of the edits were made by only one person, it may not conform with the "neutral point of view" thing, or whatever it's called. |
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Someone who knows more about [[supply-side economics]] should expand the article and put it in some context and explain what Kudlow did on his jobs and give dates and numbers. The separate facts need to be interwoven and need to be put in some context. This article looks like a skeleton with no flesh. |
Someone who knows more about [[supply-side economics]] should expand the article and put it in some context and explain what Kudlow did on his jobs and give dates and numbers. The separate facts need to be interwoven and need to be put in some context. This article looks like a skeleton with no flesh. The relationship between Kudlow and supply-side economics has to be explained in a way that is easy to undertand for readers who don't know much about the topic. |
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Also, it should be explained why and how and when Kudlow began taking drugs, and how he recovered, and what it has to do with his personal and professional and religious life. For example, did he start taking cocaine or drinking too much because he felt too much pressure while working or because of personal problems, or both? |
Also, it should be explained why and how and when Kudlow began taking drugs, and how he recovered, and what it has to do with his personal and professional and religious life. For example, did he start taking cocaine or drinking too much because he felt too much pressure while working or because of personal problems, or both? |
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Revision as of 16:54, 20 August 2005
Johnny Depp?
What the hell is he doing in this page???- Y2A
Clean-up of article
The events mentioned in the article need to be ordered chronologically, i.e., what Kudlow did first, comes first in the article. The years in which he was in specific jobs need to be specified.
The events need to be explained more accurately, with more details and facts.
The individual facts must be checked.
Attention from "experts", expansion, and cleanup of the article, POV/NPOV
Honestly, this article needs some cleanup. Also, since a great majority of the edits were made by only one person, it may not conform with the "neutral point of view" thing, or whatever it's called.
Someone who knows more about supply-side economics should expand the article and put it in some context and explain what Kudlow did on his jobs and give dates and numbers. The separate facts need to be interwoven and need to be put in some context. This article looks like a skeleton with no flesh. The relationship between Kudlow and supply-side economics has to be explained in a way that is easy to undertand for readers who don't know much about the topic.
Also, it should be explained why and how and when Kudlow began taking drugs, and how he recovered, and what it has to do with his personal and professional and religious life. For example, did he start taking cocaine or drinking too much because he felt too much pressure while working or because of personal problems, or both?
Nothing is told about his youth nor his first two marriages.
What conflicts has Kudlow had in politics? Who has criticized him, how and why? Who has supported him? What about his relationship to James Cramer who supports the Democratic Party, or Kudlow's frequent debates with Paul Krugman? Why do certain people appear on his TV programs and not others?
Where did he learn about supply-side economics? What exactly did he do at the Federal Reserve Bank of New York? What is his legacy from his time at the Office of Management and Budget? What did he do at Bear Stearns?
Also, the article needs some serious linguistic, orthographic and grammatical cleanup.
The different facts in the article have to be connected somehow, and not just stand loose. The paragraphs need to be expanded with more details. 2004-12-29T22:45Z 16:43, August 20, 2005 (UTC)