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The result was delete.  Sandstein  07:50, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

How To Improve The Current Healthcare Issues In Pakistan?[edit]

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Violates WP:NOTESSAY (thanks to User:Ubiquity for correcting me), may be copied from somewhere though Google doesn't make it clear. Smartyllama (talk) 19:31, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This debate has been included in the list of Health and fitness-related deletion discussions. JudgeRM (talk to me) 19:39, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Note: This debate has been included in the list of Pakistan-related deletion discussions. JudgeRM (talk to me) 19:39, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• Delete: Actually, I think it violates WP:NOTESSAY. ubiquity (talk) 20:19, 12 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed. Thanks for correcting me. :-) Smartyllama (talk)
• Delete Horribly written essay. Most of the information is already covered at other pages. Nothing worth saving--Savonneux (talk) 02:41, 13 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  I don't think this essay is "horribly written". It's clear that whoever wrote the page put a lot of thought into the writing. The problem is that unlike a standard article, this essay does not have a clear focus—hence it is difficult to find a place for it to fit in, as you said above. Altamel (talk) 03:58, 13 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Effort isn't correlative to excellence. It's a pretty much by the book secondary school expository essay. I'd even point out the parts where the author was padding out the word count without actually saying anything, if it were relevant. My ponit was that someone posted their homework.--Savonneux (talk) 05:04, 13 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• Redirect Most of the information is essay-like and a lot of it needs to be cut down. However, some facts can be Wikified and merged into Healthcare in Pakistan. Particularly the tiered breakdown of the healthcare system and government policies. So I would suggest retargeting to Healthcare in Pakistan, with this article's info being preserved in the history to be copied later into that article. Mar4d (talk) 07:33, 13 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
• Delete This is an opinion essay, not an encyclopedia article. Tigercompanion25 (talk) 15:43, 13 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
• I like the idea of wikifying some of the better content and then merging to Healthcare in Pakistan, such as the structure of the system, various data points, and policy initiatives. That latter article could really do with an infusion of new content to bolster it up. However, I see no reason to redirect, as the title is a highly implausible search item. As a second choice, delete as a violation of NOTESSAY. GAB^gab 15:32, 15 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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