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Oracle Exalogic[edit]
The Oracle Exalogic page was created and contained quite a bit of marketing speak.[1] Much of this was removed and an advert notice added for further cleanup.[2] This was reverted with a revision note of "cleanup".[3] Would welcome input. Further discussion: User_talk:CeciliaPang#Oracle_Exalogic — ceejayoz talk 04:18, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
- The removed text was hedged with "Oracle claims" however it did not appear to belong in the lead, maybe a "Marketing" section? Rich Farmbrough, 16:31, 25 November 2011 (UTC).
- This article has no reliable sources and is essentially a press release. It should be stubbed pending addition of not-Oracle sources. Gerardw (talk) 13:31, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
- There are enough independent sources about Exalogic (just see Russian article: ru:Exalogic#Примечания), however, this text is written like a promo booklet. If one of users could be a proofreader (I have some gaps in English), I'll try to translate from Russian within 1-2 weeks, Bezik (talk) 17:24, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
- I've translated my Russian article, could someone of experienced editors check the text and remove "advertising" banner? Bezik (talk) 09:00, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you, Bezik. What you wrote is very much better than what was there before. I had not even realised, from the old version, that Exalogic included hardware.
- I have been through your text, improving the English grammar. Further improvements may be possible. I have not intended to change the meaning; if I have changed the meaning, it is my mistake. I have also removed the "advertising" banner. Maproom (talk) 10:38, 30 November 2011 (UTC)