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Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 5 February 2024

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In the last paragraph of the opening section, "The first evacuation order on 13 October 2024" is an incorrect date and should be "The first evacuation order on 13 October 2023". Atriskofmistake (talk) 02:11, 5 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done here. Thanks for flagging, Atriskofmistake. Philipnelson99 (talk) 02:13, 5 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 10 August 2024

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According to MOS:APOSTROPHE and MOS:QUOTEMARKS, apostrophes and quotation marks should be straight rather than curly. Thus, change all instances of curly apostrophes or quotes (like ‘’ or “”) with their straight counterparts.

As a special case, in Gaza Strip evacuations#Accusations of war crime, change "The Israeli military’s “evacuation orders” are unlawful and amount to forcible transfer, a grave violation of international humanitarian law".[1] to "The Israeli military's 'evacuation orders' are unlawful and amount to forcible transfer, a grave violation of international humanitarian law".[2] AEagleLionThing (talk) 02:45, 10 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Fixed: If there are other specific instances, feel free to point them out and re-activate this request. Left guide (talk) 01:46, 11 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In Gaza Strip evacuations#Conditions, within a citation, change it so that:
{{cite web |title=In historic move, a Palestinian state recognized by Spain, Ireland and Norway |url=https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/latest-norway-ireland-spain-make-coordinated-move-recognize-110458003#:~:text=“Families%20are%20living%20among%20rubble,of%20supply%20shortages%20and%20insecurity. |website=ABC News |publisher=Associated Press |access-date=1 June 2024}}
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{{cite web |title=In historic move, a Palestinian state recognized by Spain, Ireland and Norway |url=https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/latest-norway-ireland-spain-make-coordinated-move-recognize-110458003 |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20240601145045/https://abcnews.go.com/International/wireStory/latest-norway-ireland-spain-make-coordinated-move-recognize-110458003 |archive-date=1 June 2024 |url-status=dead |website=ABC News |publisher=Associated Press |access-date=1 June 2024}}
The link is dead, and it would remove the highlighted text being embedded in the URL. It would also remove the curly quote. AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:38, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the lead, change it so that:
{{cite web |title=How Israel is shrinking Gaza’s ‘safe zones’ |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/7/25/how-israel-is-shrinking-gazas-safe-zones |website=Al Jazeera |access-date=3 August 2024}}
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{{cite web |title=How Israel is shrinking Gaza's 'safe zones' |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/7/25/how-israel-is-shrinking-gazas-safe-zones |website=Al Jazeera |access-date=3 August 2024}}
AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:41, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In Gaza Strip evacuations#Evacuation of Khan Younis, change it so that:
{{cite web |last1=Salman |first1=Abeer |title=Dozens killed and thousands flee as Israel shrinks ‘humanitarian zone’ in Gaza |url=https://www.cnn.com/2024/07/23/middleeast/israel-gaza-war-khan-younis-humanitarian-zone-intl/index.html |website=CNN |access-date=28 July 2024}}
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{{cite web |last1=Salman |first1=Abeer |title=Dozens killed and thousands flee as Israel shrinks 'humanitarian zone' in Gaza |url=https://www.cnn.com/2024/07/23/middleeast/israel-gaza-war-khan-younis-humanitarian-zone-intl/index.html |website=CNN |access-date=28 July 2024}}
AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also in Gaza Strip evacuations#Evacuation of Khan Younis, change it so that:
{{cite web |last1=Tantesh |first1=Malak A. |title=‘Like judgment day’: evacuees tell of fleeing Israel’s assault on Khan Younis |url=https://www.theguardian.com/world/article/2024/jul/27/like-judgment-day-evacuees-tell-of-fleeing-israels-assault-on-khan-younis |website=The Guardian |access-date=3 August 2024}}
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{{cite web |last1=Tantesh |first1=Malak A. |title='Like judgment day': evacuees tell of fleeing Israel's assault on Khan Younis |url=https://www.theguardian.com/world/article/2024/jul/27/like-judgment-day-evacuees-tell-of-fleeing-israels-assault-on-khan-younis |website=The Guardian |access-date=3 August 2024}}
AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:45, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In Gaza Strip evacuations#UN response, change it so that:
{{cite web |last1=Koffaify |first1=Ephrem |title=UN’s Gaza chief says scenes after Al-Mawasi attack among ‘most horrific’ of past 9 months |url=https://www.arabnews.com/node/2549936/amp# |website=Arab News |access-date=27 July 2024}}
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{{cite web |last1=Koffaify |first1=Ephrem |title=UN's Gaza chief says scenes after Al-Mawasi attack among 'most horrific' of past 9 months |url=https://www.arabnews.com/node/2549936/amp# |website=Arab News |access-date=27 July 2024}}
and so that:
{{cite web |title=UNICEF chief calls for urgent security reset in Gaza amid ‘new horrors’ |url=https://news.un.org/en/story/2024/07/1152471 |website=UN News |publisher=United Nations |access-date=3 August 2024}}
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{{cite web |title=UNICEF chief calls for urgent security reset in Gaza amid 'new horrors' |url=https://news.un.org/en/story/2024/07/1152471 |website=UN News |publisher=United Nations |access-date=3 August 2024}}
AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:48, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the lead as well, change it so that:
{{cite news |last1=Lawal |first1=Shola |title=Can South Africa’s ICJ case against Israel stop war in Gaza? |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/1/3/can-south-africas-icj-case-against-israel-stop-war-in-gaza |access-date=13 August 2024 |work=Al Jazeera |language=en}}
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{{cite news |last1=Lawal |first1=Shola |title=Can South Africa's ICJ case against Israel stop war in Gaza? |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/1/3/can-south-africas-icj-case-against-israel-stop-war-in-gaza |access-date=13 August 2024 |work=Al Jazeera |language=en}}
AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:51, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In Gaza Strip evacuations#June and July 2024, change it so that:
{{cite web |last1=Abdulrahim |first1=Raja |last2=Fuller |first2=Thomas |title=Many in Gaza City Ignore Israeli Military’s Calls to Evacuate |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2024/07/11/world/middleeast/gaza-city-evacuation-israel-military.html |website=The New York Times |access-date=13 July 2024}}
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{{cite web |last1=Abdulrahim |first1=Raja |last2=Fuller |first2=Thomas |title=Many in Gaza City Ignore Israeli Military's Calls to Evacuate |url=https://www.nytimes.com/2024/07/11/world/middleeast/gaza-city-evacuation-israel-military.html |website=The New York Times |access-date=13 July 2024}}
. AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:54, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Again in Gaza Strip evacuations#Evacuation of Khan Younis, change it so that:
{{cite web |title=More than 180,000 displaced from Gaza’s Khan Younis in four days, UN says |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/7/26/more-than-180000-displaced-from-gazas-khan-younis-in-four-days-un-says#:~:text='About%20182%2C000%20people'%20displaced%20from,–%20Thursday%2C%20UN%20OCHA%20says.&text=More%20than%20180%2C000%20Palestinians%20have,the%20United%20Nations%20has%20said. |website=Al Jazeera |access-date=3 August 2024}}
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{{cite web |title=More than 180,000 displaced from Gaza's Khan Younis in four days, UN says |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2024/7/26/more-than-180000-displaced-from-gazas-khan-younis-in-four-days-un-says |website=Al Jazeera |access-date=3 August 2024}}
It'd also remove the highlighted link embedded in the URL.
In addition, in the same section, change it so that:
One evacuee described the conditions, stating, "We barely had time to collect our things, most people fled without taking anything. During previous evacuation orders they gave us a day or two, but this time we didn’t even have half an hour."
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One evacuee described the conditions, stating, "We barely had time to collect our things, most people fled without taking anything. During previous evacuation orders they gave us a day or two, but this time we didn't even have half an hour."
AEagleLionThing (talk) 21:59, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Furthermore in Gaza Strip evacuations#Evacuation of Khan Younis, change it so that:
{{cite web |title=Displaced Palestinians sleep on steps of Gaza’s Nasser Hospital |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/program/newsfeed/2024/7/24/displaced-palestinians-sleep-on-steps-of-gazas-nasser-hospital#:~:text=Dozens%20of%20Palestinians%20are%20sleeping,an%20assault%20on%20Khan%20Younis. |website=Al Jazeera |access-date=3 August 2024}}
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{{cite web |title=Displaced Palestinians sleep on steps of Gaza's Nasser Hospital |url=https://www.aljazeera.com/program/newsfeed/2024/7/24/displaced-palestinians-sleep-on-steps-of-gazas-nasser-hospital |website=Al Jazeera |access-date=3 August 2024}}
It'd remove the highlighted text thing too. AEagleLionThing (talk) 22:01, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also in Gaza Strip evacuations#UN response, change
Scott Anderson, the UNRWA head in Gaza, stated, "People are often only able to take whatever they can carry. They’re mostly on foot and some are only able to carry their children. Many have lost everything and they need everything."
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Scott Anderson, the UNRWA head in Gaza, stated, "People are often only able to take whatever they can carry. They're mostly on foot and some are only able to carry their children. Many have lost everything and they need everything."
AEagleLionThing (talk) 22:02, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
 Note: using Template:Text diff would really help. M.Bitton (talk) 01:49, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
 Suggestion accepted: Updated to use Template:Text diff. Thanks for letting me know. AEagleLionThing (talk) 05:43, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
 Partly done: I have corrected the last part (the "Gaza Strip evacuations#UN response"), but I won't change the sources' titles (they are what they are). M.Bitton (talk) 14:21, 18 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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