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[[File:Information.svg|25px|alt=Information icon]] Hello, I'm [[User:Doniago|Doniago]]. I noticed that you made a change to an article, [[:The Bourne Identity (2002 film)]], but you didn't provide a [[Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources|reliable source]]. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to [[Wikipedia:Citing sources|include a citation]] and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the [[Help:Referencing for beginners|referencing for beginners]] tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on [[User_talk:Doniago|my talk page]]. Thank you. <!-- Template:uw-unsourced1 --> [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 20:20, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

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Welcome!

Hello, JCJC777, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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You really do seem to be getting it, excellent! I hope you stay and edit more stuff once the whole Mental Health page gets all fixed up. One thing you can do is add it to your watch list, so changes are immediately evident to you. I have about 500 (!) articles on my watch list right now. Dbrodbeck (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Many thanks for your help. I have set up a watchlist!... JCJC777 (talk) 14:04, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Mental Health edits

Hi. I have reverted the edits because the sourcing does not meet WP:MEDRS. Please discuss the changes at the talk page. (Oh, and if another user reverts your edits, please do not re add them without first discussing the changes). I assume you are also the IP user from before right? Dbrodbeck (talk) 23:08, 17 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In response to your feedback

You're welcome. And remember the five pillars :).

Lectonar (talk) 11:11, 19 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 

Coffee

Thanks for trying to improve the Coffee article, but if you read the section Health and pharmacology you'll see that the edit you were making about psychological effects of caffeine is already discussed and sourced to http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/12204388

I should also mention that Wikipedia is not a reliable source, so you must not use a Wikipedia article to support information that you are adding to another article. I see that you've added essentially the same information twice now. If you find your edits reverted, please look at the edit summaries as they may give you some idea of why that happened. Cheers --RexxS (talk) 20:49, 7 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

RexxS thanks for your help. JCJC777


Your recent edits

I have removed edit(s) you made here. Some or all of the content appears to be copy and pasted from here. Please remember, you must write in your own words. We cannot copy and paste from other websites. Please provide the sources and restore the content which I removed, ensuring that it is written in your own words.

For further information, please read Wikipedia:Copyright violations. If you have questions, please ask. Best wishes, Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:58, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More

I see lots more copy paste in your edits. Please go through them and either remove them or rewrite them in your own words. Thank you, and happy editing. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 12:07, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reference titles

Please add a title to your links, if possible. Instead of <ref>http://www.google.com</ref>, please use <ref>[http://www.google.com Google search engine]</ref>. Note the brackets "[" & "]". This produces [1][2]. If you want to display more data, you can use cite web or cite book.

References

Thank you for your contributions! Jim1138 (talk) 18:42, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Citation suggestion

Thank you for your contributions to the caffeine article. If you haven't seen this yet, please check out User:Diberri's Wikipedia template filling tool (instructions). Given a PubMed ID, one can quickly produce a full citation that can be copied and pasted into a Wikipedia article. This tool can save you a lot of work and ensure that the citations are displayed in a consistent manner. Also most of the citation that you supplied were to primary sources. Per WP:MEDRS, I have removed these while retaining the secondary sources that you have added. Cheers. Boghog (talk) 13:45, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Using articles as sources

Hi JCJC777! As you probably have noticed, I removed your references to other Wikipedia articles. Please read: Primary, secondary and tertiary sources. It says "Wikipedia articles (or Wikipedia mirrors) are not reliable sources for any purpose." Thank you! Lova Falk talk 14:37, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

[1] is a useful site for references. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:00, 7 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Good job with the sources! Lova Falk talk 09:52, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Lova thanks for your help. JCJC777

"Empty" sections

Hello and thanks for your interest in improving Wikipedia. I have a tip. If you're going to start a prevention section effectively just to say one is missing, consider creating a blank section and using {{empty section}}. It looks like this:

Your current wording of "prevention is getting more attention" or whatever sounds a bit vague and isn't being supported by a reliable medical source specific to the disease/disorder. I hope this helps. Thanks again for your interest. Biosthmors (talk) 17:34, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hmmmm..... see here. Please don't do silly things like that again. =) Is there something I could say to help you understand how to edit here? Biosthmors (talk) 17:44, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
And don't worry too much, I do silly things myself around here from time to time too! Biosthmors (talk) 17:51, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Hi guys thanks for your help. I am trying to refer sufferers of schizophrenia etc to the general mental disorder prevention section - any suggestions? P.s. Is there an issue with quoting the recent Schizophrenia Commission? Yours in ignorance and hopefulness (JCJC777 (talk) 17:54, 20 November 2012 (UTC))[reply]
There might not be! My ignorance has thus been proclaimed. =) Add a quote to the existing section? Then we'll see if we like it! Biosthmors (talk) 17:59, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I'm also not sure on the wisdom of linking readers of the prevention of schizophrenia section over to mental disorders prevention section. If reliable sources state something important about schizophrenia prevention, can't we just include those facts as prose and not bother with the link? Thanks. Biosthmors (talk) 18:02, 20 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
You're probably right. The problem is that diagnosis terms for mental health are actually vague and much argued over. I wanted to give sufferers thus labelled an idea of the bigger mental health prevention picture. Let me have a think. Thanks again (JCJC777 (talk) 18:05, 20 November 2012 (UTC))[reply]


Hi James I saw you reversed my edit on Schizophrenia prevention/early intervention - please could you explain your thinking? Isn't it right and helpful to readers to separate (a) content on real prevention from (b) content on early intervention once the disorder is already partly visible? Thanks and best wishes (JCJC777 (talk) 07:22, 21 November 2012 (UTC))[reply]

Sure this text does not deal with prevention itself but discusses research. "The 2012 UK Schizophrenia Commission called for more prevention research; " We should also present the conclusions first. Thus disagree with the reordering. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 15:29, 21 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]


A few things

Sorry, I am just so short of time; I figure people read Wiki on the internet; they can easily click through to read reference details themselves; Wiki could save contributors so much time by saying this is fine. (JCJC777 (talk) 10:23, 22 November 2012 (UTC))[reply]

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:57, 21 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Secondary sources are required for most major topics per WP:MEDRS. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 14:04, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Barnstar

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For your improvements on medicine-related articles. Tomcat (7) 11:17, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Refs

You have been adding this statement unrefenced "Focus is increasing on prevention of mental disorders" I have found a secondary source that supports it for anxiety disorders.

  • Bienvenu, OJ (2007 Dec). "Prevention of anxiety disorders". International review of psychiatry (Abingdon, England). 19 (6): 647–54. PMID 18092242. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help); Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help) Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 14:09, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Many thanks James, very helpful. Thanks again for all your help. We're helping people here, giving them signposts to find hope and ways forward, and helping to reduce future human suffering (JCJC777 (talk) 15:48, 22 November 2012 (UTC))[reply]
Could you please properly format your references? There is a tool in the top of the edit book where all you need to enter is the PMID and it will fill in the rest.
Also please only use secondary sources. Case studies are not sufficient. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 17:12, 5 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Better refs

Hi James thanks, am pressed now but will try to do so. Am aware I am prehistoric in terms of sophistication. Will look up that tool. Thanks (JCJC777 (talk) 18:00, 5 December 2012 (UTC))[reply]

We have instructions here Wikipedia:MEDHOW It is supper easy. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 19:24, 5 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Please format your references

Using the cite template. There is a tool in the edit box and explanations on how to use it here WP:MEDHOW. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 12:55, 2 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Rugby union addition

Hi JCJC777, I reverted your recent addition to the rugby union article. Please don't take offence as it is an intertesting stat, but it is probably better appearing in the 'History of rugby union' article under a section based on the development of the game. Also the fact is a bit trivial for the article, as we could probably add a 101 interesting facts about players over the years but they would just be that, interesting facts, it needs a narrative. Thirdly the statement isn't true as it is taken from an analysis of only the England players, so we could only state that England players have become larger, not rugby players. Fourth, Western people have all become taller and heavier since the 1960s, so that needs to be factored into the writer's analyis too, which it isn't. Hope that explains my reasoning. Cheers, FruitMonkey (talk) 12:25, 25 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Please do not copy and paste sentences but rather paraphrase content per this edit here [2] Thanks Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 15:25, 2 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I do not understand why you do not format references similar to the rest of the text? I have gone and done so yet you revert my changes? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 15:46, 2 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]
No worries. Expect as much :-) Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 17:44, 2 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Multiple sclerosis

I have reverted twice your addition to the article. Please do not re-add it. The investigation on modafinil is interesting but too preliminary and specific to mention it in the main article, since it is only primary preliminary research. Moreover off-label and alternative are not the same, since in off-label it is usually a phsysician who recommends the use of a product based on his experience and not so much on evidence. In this sense the approapiate place for this kind of research would be the "associated symptoms" in the treatment section, and to include it there we would need a secondary source in a peer-reviewed journal (and even then we would need to discuss if it is better to include it here or in "treatment of multiple sclerosis" article, where I have included a summarized version of your edit.)

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I left you a comment there about meta-planning. Regards, – SJ + 20:56, 3 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Mental disorder

I undid your edit to Mental disorder as you did not add a reference. Significant content must be verifiable. Please add reliable sources or reliable medical sources in the case of medical content. Also, please be aware of English variants and maintain the variant throughout the article. If the article uses British English, Australian English, American English, etc., please maintain that. Quotes are an exception. You used "programmes" where there is "programs" in the article. Please see wp:engvar for exceptions and resolutions to issues. You can undo my undo (via View history), but please add a reference before you save. References should / must be added when you add your significant content. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask them on my talk page. Thank you and welcome to Wikipedia! Jim1138 (talk) 16:59, 21 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

You did add a link! Which I did not check. My apology. I assumed that it was a link such as you might link some somewhat irrelevant item. 20 links are quite a few. Are there any that specificlly discuss cash transfer programmes for mental disorders?
I see that "programme" and "program" are used interchangeably. That probably should be cleaned up- maybe in the future... BTW: you did duplicate "Some countries run conditional cash transfer welfare programmes...". I removed the second one. Again, my apology. Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 20:05, 21 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I think none of the refs apply to mental health programs; shall I take them all out? JCJC777
Twenty refs for one sentence is probably a bit much... Given the link, (my bad) all could be removed. Do you know of any places that use conditional cash transfers for mental health? I know a few people that could use such a program. Being CEOs and upper management, maybe conditional stock options... Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 01:33, 22 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Were you going to provide a ref for "Many causes of psychosis are also causes of schizophrenia."? Lots of drugs cause acute psychosis but do not really cause schizophrenia. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 20:17, 13 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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