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This page needs expanding as it is an American educational institution. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Destitute (talk • contribs)

Statistical updates

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Hi Editors, I'm Robin, here as part of my work for Beutler Ink on behalf of The Culinary Institute. I have a request to update some of the basic statistics and make a few other minor changes in the article.

I propose changing:

In the infobox

 Done STEMinfo (talk) 01:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
 Done STEMinfo (talk) 01:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In the Faculty section:

  • The first sentence to read "As of Fall 2022, the school had 130 full-time and 67 part-time faculty members." per the NCES link
 Done I changed the wording to indicate that the source for the faculty demographics is the school's own web directory. STEMinfo (talk) 02:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In the Admissions section:

  • The Princeton Review selectivity rating to reflect the current number of 75 out of 99 per the updated report
  • The applications received to 1,887 in fall 2022, with 95% accepted, per NCES
  • The SAT range of accepted students being 930 to 1200 and ACT composite range being 17 to 26 per this report from College Board
 Done In your recommended text, you named a ref that I can't find anywhere else. <ref name=CollegeBoard2024/> You also wrote that the ACT and SAT scores are in this report, but it clearly says not available. I instead used the Princeton Review report, but clarified it that those are numbers CIA self-reported to the Review. I removed the unsourced 2016 transfer data. It doesn't seem important. STEMinfo (talk) 01:33, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In the Enrollment section:

  • Enrollment to 3,005 undergrads (415 transfers) and 119 graduates; 95% of students being enrolled full time per the NCES
  • 18% of students being from New York and 12% of students being international per the NCES
  • 82% of students being 24 or younger (replacing the sentence "The student body has an average age of 22 years") per the NCES
  • Average GPA being 3.0 and 68% of students living on campus per Princeton Review
  • Replacing the second paragraph with the following, which is more up to date
 Done BINK Robin I learned a lot doing these edits. There were list defined references in the table that I deleted. Those had to be removed from the references or a ref error shows up. Please also include the references in the requested change section, rather than just a ref name, so the reflist talk section doesn't come up with a number and letters and nothing else. It makes it easier to check the refs, particularly if they are being used incorrectly. You can test your future text requests in your sandbox, to make sure the requests won't cause any cascading problems, such as with undefined ref names or stray defined refs that are unused. I also noticed when I went to close this request that you closed it before it was done. It's done now. STEMinfo (talk) 01:56, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@STEMinfo I've learned a fair bit too. Thanks for your patience with this. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for those stray references in the future. BINK Robin (talk) 20:46, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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As of 2024, the school offered certificates in culinary arts;[1] associate degrees in baking and pastry arts and culinary arts;[2] bachelor's degrees in food business management, hospitality management, applied food studies, and culinary science, as well as culinary arts and baking and pastry arts degrees for transfer students;[3] and master's degrees in culinary arts, food business, Sustainable food systems, and wine and beverage management.[4]

References

  1. ^ "CIA Accelerated Culinary Arts Certificate Program (ACAP)". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  2. ^ "CIA Associate Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  3. ^ "CIA Bachelor's Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  4. ^ "CIA Master's Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.

Please let me know what you think! Cheers, BINK Robin (talk) 15:32, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@BINK Robin: The edit backlog is getting long. It would speed things up if you posted the actual text you want added. See my draft doc for the TextDiff suggestion. User:STEMinfo/COI_edit_requests_for_novices#Showing_before_and_after_text_side_by_side STEMinfo (talk) 23:07, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@STEMinfo: I'm happy to provide the request in that format! I'll break it up just a little because I think it will be easier to look at.
Infobox
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<table class="infobox vcard"><caption class="infobox-title fn org">The Culinary Institute of America</caption><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;"><div style="display: inline-block; line-height: 1.2em; padding: .1em 0; ">Former name</div></th><td class="infobox-data nickname">New Haven Restaurant Institute (1946–1947)<br>Restaurant Institute of Connecticut (1947–1951)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Type</th><td class="infobox-data">[[Private university|Private]] culinary school</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Established</th><td class="infobox-data">May 22, 1946<span class="noprint">; 78 years ago</span><span style="display:none"> (<span class="bday dtstart published updated">May 22, 1946</span>)</span></td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Founders</th><td class="infobox-data">[[Frances Roth]], [[Katharine Cramer Angell|Katharine Angell]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Financial endowment|Endowment]]</th><td class="infobox-data">$138.3 million (2019)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Chairperson|Chairman]]</th><td class="infobox-data">[[Jon L. Luther]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[University president|President]]</th><td class="infobox-data">[[L. Timothy Ryan]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Provost (education)|Provost]]</th><td class="infobox-data">Mark Erickson</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;"><div style="display: inline-block; line-height: 1.2em; padding: .1em 0; ">Academic staff</div></th><td class="infobox-data">170</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Undergraduate education|Undergraduates]]</th><td class="infobox-data">2,918 (Fall 2016)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Location</th><td class="infobox-data adr"><div style="display:inline" class="locality">[[Hyde Park, New York|Hyde Park]]</div>, <div style="display:inline" class="state">New York</div>, <div style="display:inline" class="country-name">United States</div><br /><span class="geo-inline"><span class="plainlinks nourlexpansion">[https://geohack.toolforge.org/geohack.php?pagename=Talk:The_Culinary_Institute_of_America&params=41_44_45_N_73_56_0_W_type:edu_region:US-NY <span class="geo-default"><span class="geo-dms" title="Maps, aerial photos, and other data for this location"><span class="latitude">41°44′45″N</span> <span class="longitude">73°56′0″W</span></span></span><span class="geo-multi-punct"> / </span><span class="geo-nondefault"><span class="geo-dec" title="Maps, aerial photos, and other data for this location">41.74583°N 73.93333°W</span><span style="display:none"> / <span class="geo">41.74583; -73.93333</span></span></span>]</span>[[Category:Pages using gadget WikiMiniAtlas]]</span></td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[School colors|Colors]]</th><td class="infobox-data">Sage Green and Fire Gold<br /><span class="legend-color mw-no-invert" style="background-color:#2c6849; color:white;"> </span> <span class="legend-color mw-no-invert" style="background-color:#ef8a33; color:black;"> </span></td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Athletic nickname|Nickname]]</th><td class="infobox-data">Steels</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;"><div style="display: inline-block; line-height: 1.2em; padding: .1em 0; ">Sporting affiliations</div></th><td class="infobox-data">[[Hudson Valley Intercollegiate Athletic Conference|HVIAC]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Mascot</th><td class="infobox-data">Sting</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Website</th><td class="infobox-data"><span class="url">[http://www.ciachef.edu www<wbr/>.ciachef<wbr/>.edu]</span></td></tr></table>
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<table class="infobox vcard"><caption class="infobox-title fn org">The Culinary Institute of America</caption><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;"><div style="display: inline-block; line-height: 1.2em; padding: .1em 0; ">Former name</div></th><td class="infobox-data nickname">New Haven Restaurant Institute (1946–1947)<br>Restaurant Institute of Connecticut (1947–1951)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Type</th><td class="infobox-data">[[Private university|Private]] culinary school</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Established</th><td class="infobox-data">May 22, 1946<span class="noprint">; 78 years ago</span><span style="display:none"> (<span class="bday dtstart published updated">May 22, 1946</span>)</span></td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Founders</th><td class="infobox-data">[[Frances Roth]], [[Katharine Cramer Angell|Katharine Angell]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Financial endowment|Endowment]]</th><td class="infobox-data">$138.3 million (2019)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Chairperson|Chairman]]</th><td class="infobox-data">John C. Metz Jr.</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[University president|President]]</th><td class="infobox-data">[[L. Timothy Ryan]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Provost (education)|Provost]]</th><td class="infobox-data">Mark Erickson</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;"><div style="display: inline-block; line-height: 1.2em; padding: .1em 0; ">Academic staff</div></th><td class="infobox-data">197</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Undergraduate education|Undergraduates]]</th><td class="infobox-data">3,005 (Fall 2022)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Postgraduate education|Postgraduates]]</th><td class="infobox-data">119 (Fall 2022)</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Location</th><td class="infobox-data adr"><div style="display:inline" class="locality">[[Hyde Park, New York|Hyde Park]]</div>, <div style="display:inline" class="state">New York</div>, <div style="display:inline" class="country-name">United States</div><br /><span class="geo-inline"><span class="plainlinks nourlexpansion">[https://geohack.toolforge.org/geohack.php?pagename=Talk:The_Culinary_Institute_of_America&params=41_44_45_N_73_56_0_W_type:edu_region:US-NY <span class="geo-default"><span class="geo-dms" title="Maps, aerial photos, and other data for this location"><span class="latitude">41°44′45″N</span> <span class="longitude">73°56′0″W</span></span></span><span class="geo-multi-punct"> / </span><span class="geo-nondefault"><span class="geo-dec" title="Maps, aerial photos, and other data for this location">41.74583°N 73.93333°W</span><span style="display:none"> / <span class="geo">41.74583; -73.93333</span></span></span>]</span>[[Category:Pages using gadget WikiMiniAtlas]]</span></td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[School colors|Colors]]</th><td class="infobox-data">Sage Green and Fire Gold<br /><span class="legend-color mw-no-invert" style="background-color:#2c6849; color:white;"> </span> <span class="legend-color mw-no-invert" style="background-color:#ef8a33; color:black;"> </span></td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">[[Athletic nickname|Nickname]]</th><td class="infobox-data">Steels</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;"><div style="display: inline-block; line-height: 1.2em; padding: .1em 0; ">Sporting affiliations</div></th><td class="infobox-data">[[Hudson Valley Intercollegiate Athletic Conference|HVIAC]]</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Mascot</th><td class="infobox-data">Sting</td></tr><tr><th scope="row" class="infobox-label" style="padding-right:0.65em;">Website</th><td class="infobox-data"><span class="url">[http://www.ciachef.edu www<wbr/>.ciachef<wbr/>.edu]</span></td></tr></table>


The Culinary Institute of America
Former name
New Haven Restaurant Institute (1946–1947)
Restaurant Institute of Connecticut (1947–1951)
TypePrivate culinary school
EstablishedMay 22, 1946; 78 years ago (May 22, 1946)[1]
FoundersFrances Roth, Katharine Angell
Endowment$138.3 million (2019)[10]
ChairmanJohn C. Metz Jr.[11]
PresidentL. Timothy Ryan[3]
ProvostMark Erickson
Academic staff
197[9]
Undergraduates3,005 (Fall 2022)[9]
Postgraduates119 (Fall 2022)[9]
Location,
New York
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United States

41°44′45″N 73°56′0″W / 41.74583°N 73.93333°W / 41.74583; -73.93333
ColorsSage Green and Fire Gold[6]
   
NicknameSteels
Sporting affiliations
HVIAC
MascotSting
Websitewww.ciachef.edu

References

  1. ^ a b c Cite error: The named reference ArchHist was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ As of June 30, 2019. "U.S. and Canadian 2019 NTSE Participating Institutions Listed by Fiscal Year 2019 Endowment Market Value, and Percentage Change in Market Value from FY18 to FY19 (Revised)". National Association of College and University Business Officers and TIAA. Archived from the original on September 23, 2023. Retrieved September 25, 2020.
  3. ^ a b c d Cite error: The named reference AR2015-6 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  4. ^ Cite error: The named reference Faculty was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  5. ^ Cite error: The named reference DACStats2 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  6. ^ a b c Cite error: The named reference colors was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  7. ^ As of June 30, 2019. "U.S. and Canadian 2019 NTSE Participating Institutions Listed by Fiscal Year 2019 Endowment Market Value, and Percentage Change in Market Value from FY18 to FY19 (Revised)". National Association of College and University Business Officers and TIAA. Retrieved September 25, 2020.
  8. ^ "Culinary Institute of America elects John C. Metz Jr. chairman of the board". The Culinary Institute of America. October 28, 2022. Retrieved April 29, 2024.
  9. ^ a b c d e f Cite error: The named reference NCES was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  10. ^ As of June 30, 2019. "U.S. and Canadian 2019 NTSE Participating Institutions Listed by Fiscal Year 2019 Endowment Market Value, and Percentage Change in Market Value from FY18 to FY19 (Revised)". National Association of College and University Business Officers and TIAA. Retrieved September 25, 2020.
  11. ^ "Culinary Institute of America elects John C. Metz Jr. chairman of the board". The Culinary Institute of America. October 28, 2022. Retrieved April 29, 2024.

This makes some statistical updates and updates the current chairman.

Faculty (note, I made some additional tweaks to this part of the request describing faculty composition)
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The school's full-time faculty number approximately 150. The school differs from most colleges as its faculty is largely composed of chefs.<sup class="reference nowrap"><span title="Page: ii">:&hairsp;ii&hairsp;</span></sup> The college employs a number of [[American Culinary Federation]]-certified Certified Master Chefs, as well as Master Bakers certified by the Retail Bakers of America. The faculty also includes authors of textbooks, magazines, and other published media. Many of the instructors are graduates of the school.
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As of Fall 2022, the school had 130 full-time and 67 part-time faculty members. The school's faculty comprises instructors and professionals from food, beverage, and hospitality industries, including [[Liberal arts education|liberal arts]] instructors, including [[American Culinary Federation]] Certified Master Chefs, Retail Bakers of America Certified Master Bakers, [[sommeliers]], authors, [[dietitians]], food industry executives, historians, and other academics.

This makes some statistical updates, offers a clearer timeframe, as well as offers some updated language on the current faculty composition to better reflect the CIA's current faculty.

As of Fall 2022, the school had 130 full-time and 67 part-time faculty members.[3] The school's faculty comprises instructors and professionals from food, beverage, and hospitality industries, including liberal arts instructors, including American Culinary Federation Certified Master Chefs, Retail Bakers of America Certified Master Bakers, sommeliers, authors, dietitians, food industry executives, historians, and other academics.[5]

References

  1. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference Faculty was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ Cite error: The named reference SelfStudy was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  3. ^ a b "College Navigator: Culinary Institute of America". National Center for Education Statistics. United States Department of Education. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  4. ^ "Meet the CIA's Faculty". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved May 13, 2024.
  5. ^ "Meet the CIA's Faculty". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved May 13, 2024.
Admissions
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Undergraduate admission to the Culinary Institute of America is characterized by [[College Board]] as "not selective". The [[Princeton Review]], in its 2017 edition, gave the university an admissions selectivity rating of 70 out of 99.

For the freshman class entering Fall 2017, the Culinary Institute of America received 989 applications of which 934 were accepted for a 94% admissions rate. The admitted students' academic profile showed an SAT average score of 970 to 1190, while the average composite ACT score was 17–23. The school began accepting the [[Common Application]] in 2016, after becoming a member on August 1 of that year.

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Undergraduate admission to the Culinary Institute of America is characterized by [[College Board]] as "not selective". As of April 2024, [[The Princeton Review]] gave the university an admissions selectivity rating of 75 out of 99. In fall 2022, the school received 1,887 applications, of which 95 percent were accepted. The admitted students' academic profile showed an [[SAT]] range of 930 to 1200 and an [[ACT (test)|ACT]] composite range of 17 to 26. The school began accepting the [[Common Application]] in 2016, after becoming a member on August 1 of that year.

This makes some needed statistical updates and removes an outdated table for which there is no data to bring it up to date. I'd also question if editors think it is necessary to include the College Board Selectivity Rating, but will defer to the community's thoughts on that. If the selectivity rating is removed, the box below has the updated text.

As of April 2024, The Princeton Review gave the university an admissions selectivity rating of 75 out of 99.[4]

In fall 2022, the school received 1,887 applications, of which 95 percent were accepted.[5] The admitted students' academic profile showed an SAT range of 930 to 1200 and an ACT composite range of 17 to 26.[6] The school began accepting the Common Application in 2016, after becoming a member on August 1 of that year.[3]

References

  1. ^ a b c Cite error: The named reference CBprof was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ Cite error: The named reference PRprof was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  3. ^ a b c Cite error: The named reference CommonApp was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  4. ^ a b "The Culinary Institute of America". The Princeton Review. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  5. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference NCES was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  6. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference CollegeBoard2024 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
Enrollment
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In Fall 2016, the university had an enrollment of 2,774 [[Undergraduate education|undergraduate students]] (including 512 first-year students) and 19 [[graduate student]]s. Of all students, 32% are from the state of New York and 12.2% are international students, from 37 countries. The student body has an average age of 22 years. 57% of students were in the top half of their high school class rank, with 6% in their class's top tenth. The average high school GPA was 3.10. 443 students applied to transfer to the CIA, with a 98% admission rate and 72% enrollment rate for those admitted. 82% of first-year students lived in college housing, while 61% of all undergraduates lived in college housing. 100% of the student body is enrolled as full-time students. In 2014, undergraduates were enrolled in five schools: the School of Culinary Arts, the School of Baking and Pastry Arts, the School of Business and Management, the School of Liberal Arts and Food Studies, and the School of Culinary Science and Nutrition. Within the bachelor programs, 83% of student majors are in business management, 10% in culinary science, and 6% are interdisciplinary.
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In fall 2022, the university had an enrollment of 3,005 [[undergraduate]] students, of which 415 were transfer students, and 119 [[graduate education|graduate]] students; 95 percent of students were enrolled full-time. Of all the students, 18 percent were from New York and 12 percent were international students. Approximately 82 percent of the student body was 24 years of age or younger. The average high school [[grade point average]] was 3.0, and 68 percent of undergraduate students lived on campus.

As of 2024, the school offered certificates in [[culinary arts]]; [[associate degree]]s in [[baking]] and pastry arts and culinary arts; [[bachelor's degree]]s in food business management, [[Hospitality management studies|hospitality management]], applied food studies, and culinary science, as well as culinary arts and baking and pastry arts degrees for transfer students; and [[master's degree]]s in culinary arts, food business, [[Sustainable food system]]s, and wine and beverage management.

This removes a table that has no data to update it, and otherwise updates statistics and degree offerings, mirroring the current language as closely as possible. The templates don't want to play nicely with the tables, so I've separated out the updated table below.

In fall 2022, the university had an enrollment of 3,005 undergraduate students, of which 415 were transfer students, and 119 graduate students; 95 percent of students were enrolled full-time. Of all the students, 18 percent were from New York and 12 percent were international students. Approximately 82 percent of the student body was 24 years of age or younger.[5] The average high school grade point average was 3.0, and 68 percent of undergraduate students lived on campus.[6]

As of 2024, the school offered certificates in culinary arts;[11] associate degrees in baking and pastry arts and culinary arts;[12] bachelor's degrees in food business management, hospitality management, applied food studies, and culinary science, as well as culinary arts and baking and pastry arts degrees for transfer students;[13] and master's degrees in culinary arts, food business, Sustainable food systems, and wine and beverage management.[14]


References

  1. ^ a b c d Cite error: The named reference CBprof was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ Cite error: The named reference Data was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  3. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference PRprof was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  4. ^ Cite error: The named reference Programs was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  5. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference NCES was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  6. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference PR2024 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  7. ^ "CIA Accelerated Culinary Arts Certificate Program (ACAP)". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  8. ^ "CIA Associate Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  9. ^ "CIA Bachelor's Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  10. ^ "CIA Master's Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  11. ^ "CIA Accelerated Culinary Arts Certificate Program (ACAP)". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  12. ^ "CIA Associate Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  13. ^ "CIA Bachelor's Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
  14. ^ "CIA Master's Degree Programs". The Culinary Institute of America. Retrieved April 24, 2024.
Demographics of student body (Fall 2022)[1][2][3]
Racial composition Student body New York (2020) US (2023)
Black 7% 12.4% 13.6%
Asian 8% 6% 6.3%
White 46% 61.6% 58.9%
Hispanic and Latino 19% 18.7% 19.1%
International 11% N/A N/A
Two or more races 5% 10.2% 3%

References

  1. ^ Cite error: The named reference NCES was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. ^ "New York: 2020 Census". United States Census Bureau. August 25, 2021. Retrieved May 31, 2024.
  3. ^ "Quick Facts". United States Census Bureau. 2023. Retrieved May 31, 2024.
That should cover it. Thanks for taking a look! BINK Robin (talk) 15:50, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@BINK Robin: The tables really get screwed up with the templates. Instead of posting the whole infobox, just post the lines that change. And the before and after prose isn't just changing numbers - you rewrote a bit also. I'll revisit later. STEMinfo (talk) 00:04, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@STEMinfo: You know, I could have made those prose changes more prominent. That was an oversight on my part. Below is a text diff of just the lines that I'd like to update in the Infobox. As for the rest, I can request those changes separately if you like. Thanks for your patience here. Cheers, BINK Robin (talk) 17:02, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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|chairman = [[Jon L. Luther]]<ref name="AR2015-6"/>[[Jon L. Luther]]<ref name="AR2015-6"/> <br/> |academic_staff = 170<ref name="Faculty"/> |undergrad =2,918 |postgrad =
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|chairman = [[Jon L. Luther]]<ref name="AR2015-6"/>John C. Metz Jr.<ref>{{cite web |title=Culinary Institute of America elects John C. Metz Jr. chairman of the board |website=The Culinary Institute of America |date=October 28, 2022 |access-date=April 29, 2024 |url=https://www.ciachef.edu/john-c-metz-jr-chairman-of-the-board-release/}}</ref><br/> |academic_staff = 197<ref name=NCES>{{cite web |title=College Navigator: Culinary Institute of America |website=National Center for Education Statistics |publisher=United States Department of Education |access-date=April 24, 2024 |url=https://nces.ed.gov/collegenavigator/?q=Culinary+Institute+of+America&s=all&id=190503}}</ref><br/> |undergrad = 3,005 (Fall 2022)<ref name=NCES/> |postgrad = 119 (Fall 2022)<ref name=NCES/>

BINK Robin (talk) 17:02, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done @BINK Robin: FYI that you still had Jon Luther's name in the requested text. Also, you might want to let them know that an old indexed but inaccessible otherwise page on their web site still says Luther is Chairman. See this link. STEMinfo (talk) 22:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@STEMinfo: Thank you! I’ll pass your note along. I’ve marked this request as answered and will revisit the enrollment and admissions changes later on. Cheers! BINK Robin (talk) 21:13, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi editors, as part of my work with The Culinary Institute of America, I am requesting changes to the Criticism section of the article. Per WP:STRUCTURE and WP:NOCRIT, I think the section should be redistributed into the History section at the appropriate places in the timeline to improve article neutrality and balance.

I'd also be curious for editors' thoughts on the content itself. I think the paragraphs on the 2008 complaints are WP:TMI and contain some details related to L. Timothy Ryan that need qualification per WP:BLPSTYLE, in particular I think adding the word "alleged" regarding his leadership style is important, because sourcing does not offer concrete evidence of a rather serious charge. Additionally, I think that it is important to include Ryan's response to the allegations and his analysis of why things escalated the way they did. Student walkouts are also pretty typical on college campuses and I don't believe they warrant separation into a criticism section. Overall, I think these paragraphs could be tightened up a fair bit with these changes in mind.

The paragraph regarding CCA protests is also over-detailed and the way it is written is a bit confusing. I also think that change to the way any institution is staffed is pretty routine and doesn't seem like it would be major or critical history. The protests were limited to those whose positions were eliminated but didn't extend beyond that, and I think that is pretty routine and a case of WP:NOTEVERYTHING.

Finally, I'd argue that the final paragraph of the current Criticism section contains a significant overabundance of information that is not directly relevant to the CIA as well as a phrase that pretty clearly seems to be WP:OR ("soon after the Weinstein effect began and because of it"). I think there is an opportunity to trim it significantly to keep the content focused on the CIA and keep the article WP:ONTOPIC.

I have created a draft in my user space showing all of what I hope to accomplish and a diff that specifically shows the changes in position and the textual changes that I hope we can use as a starting point.

@STEMinfo: would you be interested in reviewing this request? I did not use TextDiff because that wouldn't really work to show the changes in position and text but hope the diff I linked above explains it better. Cheers BINK Robin (talk) 21:18, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sdkb, Melchior2006, and Nikkimaria: thank you for taking a look at this request and making the changes you made. Sdkb, I saw your note about moving the section into "History". With the edits that have been made, would any of you feel comfortable with merging the remaining "Criticism" section into the appropriate places in the "History" section, in line with WP:NOCRIT? BINK Robin (talk) 14:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think it would be fine to merge the the criticism content into appropriate sections. You can also delete the photo of the demonstration, since the demo was pretty small and the attention it draws is, in my opinion, UNDUE. -- Melchior2006 (talk) 15:03, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Given that our capacity of photos is more constrained than our capacity of sources, DUE doesn't apply in quite the same way. We want the most relevant/due photo for a given section, but if the best-quality photo depicts only a minor event, it can still be a good option/better than nothing. Readers do not expect images to be DUE in the same way as text; they just expect them to be representative.
Therefore, I'd hesitate to remove the photo unless we have a better option available. I'd note for BINK Robin that you have the opportunity to influence our calculus by providing us with high-quality options for the history section uploaded to Commons. The best options are those that depict historical events that happened at the school, not just buildings (which are better for the campus section, although we welcome good images of those too). Sdkbtalk 16:06, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Melchior2006 and Sdkb: thank you both for your thoughts. I talked with my contacts at the Culinary Institute of America and they provided me with the following photos as potential replacements. Confirmation of permissions should be in the VRT inbox. The first is of Frances Roth, co-founder of the CIA, which I think would give a nice visual of the person who started the school and could also be used on the Frances Roth article to give it an infobox image. The second is of some students working in a kitchen classroom in 1974. Please let me know if you think either of those work as replacements for the protest photo. Cheers, BINK Robin (talk) 18:55, 26 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I think the new photo of the students in the kitchen is good. I still doubt the "criticism" section, because it is too much like recent news and based on a lot of allegations. Were the allegations ever proved? The protests in 2017 were about "planned" layoffs. That was seven years ago. Is that really so unusual? Did the layoffs even take place? This seems like an abuse of Wikipedia for anti-CIA publicity purposes. -- Melchior2006 (talk) 17:53, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Melchior2006:Thanks for the response! I will try to answer your questions the best I can.
According to WPDH, the workers were told they would be laid off on September 22, which would have been the Friday after this article was published. I haven't located any sourcing confirming the layoffs.
From what I can tell, the only reporting on the allegations to force workers to cut ties with their union comes from this Spectrum News article, which quotes union president Raymond Minew saying as much. The three other sources ([1], 2, 3) on the 2017 protests do not mention any allegations of forcing workers to cut ties with their union and I have not located sourcing showing a third-party check on those allegations.
I haven't seen anything about the protests in sourcing beyond when they occurred, so I think there is an argument that this content has some WP:RECENTISM problems. I'll leave the heart of the discussion on whether to include that content to volunteers, but I would argue that this is pretty routine and ultimately not something critical to understanding the history of the CIA. Staffing changes like these are pretty atypical for articles about colleges and universities in general.
Regardless of what the final decision is on keeping that content, I do think the "Criticism" heading causes some neutrality problems, and I think WP:NOCRIT and WP:STRUCTURE both come into play with the section heading. To me, folding this content into "History" makes the most sense from a general organizational standpoint and from a neutrality standpoint. Since I have a COI, I'll defer to what other editors decide is appropraite, but I hope that provides a little more clarity. Cheers, BINK Robin (talk) 21:15, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Firstly, the Edit-COI request template is not to be used when there is a dispute with the article. Secondly, you have not provided your request in an X to Y format (see WP:COIEDIT). Thirdly, a "Criticism" section does not necessarily consitute undue weight, it is merely if and when the information violates WP:NPOV is there a necessity to delete the section. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 23:19, 13 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Criticism" might not be the best heading. Two of the criticisms have to do with labor union disputes, and a third has to do with protests about CIA producing "little more than telegenic lightweights" (NY Times' conclusion). What if we split these up according the appropriate sections in the article. The union disputes should be trimmed substantially according to BINK Robin's points. The disputes are not that unusual and don't have much to say about the CIA as a whole. -- Melchior2006 (talk) 07:11, 14 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@P,TO 19104 and Melchior2006: I think if we wanted to distribute the content and remove the Criticism heading, it could look something like this:

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<div role="note" class="hatnote navigation-not-searchable">Main article: [[:History of the Culinary Institute of America]]</div>

[[File:1. John M. Davies House, Exterior, From the Northwest.jpg|thumb|left|alt=An ornate Second Empire-style house|The [[Betts House (Yale University)|Davies Mansion]] in 1964, during its use by the CIA]] The New Haven Restaurant Institute was founded by New Haven attorney [[Frances Roth]] and [[Katharine Cramer Angell|Katharine Angell]] on May 22, 1946 in [[New Haven]], Connecticut as a vocational training school for returning World War II veterans. It was the first [[Cooking school|culinary college]] in the United States. With assistance from [[Yale University]], the school purchased the [[Betts House (Yale University)|Davies mansion]] in New Haven's [[Prospect Hill (New Haven)|Prospect Hill]] neighborhood. The first class consisted of sixteen students and the faculty included a [[dietitian]], a baker, and a chef. In 1947 the school was renamed the Restaurant Institute of Connecticut to reflect its growing repute; the school's name was changed again to the Culinary Institute of America in 1951. [[File:CIA Students 1974.jpg|thumb|CIA students in 1974]]

Enrollment grew to approximately 1,000 students by 1969, beyond the capacity of its original campus, so the school purchased the [[St. Andrew-on-Hudson]] [[Jesuit]] [[Catholic novitiate|novitiate]] in Hyde Park, New York in 1970. In 1971, the college began awarding associate degrees, and opened its doors in Hyde Park in the following year. From 1974 to 1979, the school built three residence halls, a culinary library, a career planning center, and a learning resources center. From 1982 to 1984, the American Bounty and [[Caterina de' Medici]] Restaurants and St. Andrew's Café opened. In 1984, the school's continuing education center (later named the [[J. Willard Marriott]] Education Center) opened, and the school improved its teaching kitchens and constructed an experimental kitchen and food laboratory. In 1990, the school opened a baking and pastry facility, named two years later as the [[Takaki Bakery|Shunsuke Takaki]] School of Baking and Pastry. In 1993, the school opened its [[Conrad N. Hilton]] Library and began offering bachelor's degree programs. In 1995, the school's first branch campus opened, [[the Culinary Institute of America at Greystone]] in St. Helena, California. In 1998, the Student Recreation Center was opened.[[File:Culinary Institute of America (276631101).jpg|thumb|upright=1.2|alt=A four-story Neocolonial brick building|Roth Hall, the primary facility at the school's Hyde Park campus]] The Apple Pie Bakery Café opened in 2000, and the [[Colavita]] Center opened the following year. More residence halls were built at the school's Hyde Park campus in 2004. In 2005, Anton Plaza opened in Hyde Park while the Ventura Center for Menu Research and Development opened in St. Helena. The school's third campus opened in 2008 in San Antonio. Two years later, the CIA opened a campus in Singapore consisting of a facility on the campus of [[Temasek Polytechnic]]. In 2012, the CIA began offering a bachelor's degree program in culinary science, and in 2014 introduced a bachelor's degree in applied food studies. In 2015, the college expanded its recreation center and added a new dining facility for students, called The Egg; both are housed in the CIA's Student Commons building. In the same year, the college acquired a portion of [[Copia (museum)|Copia]], a museum in downtown [[Napa, California]] that operated from 2001 to 2008. In 2016, the college opened a campus, [[the Culinary Institute of America at Copia]], which houses the CIA's new Food Business School. The college, which was outgrowing its St. Helena campus, purchased the northern portion of the Copia property for $12.5 million. In 2018, the CIA launched a Bachelor of Science degree program in Hospitality Management and introduced master's-level education with a Master of Professional Studies degree program in Food Business. In 2019, the college began offering a Master of Professional Studies degree program in Wine Management.
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<div role="note" class="hatnote navigation-not-searchable">Main article: [[:History of the Culinary Institute of America]]</div>

[[File:1. John M. Davies House, Exterior, From the Northwest.jpg|thumb|left|alt=An ornate Second Empire-style house|The [[Betts House (Yale University)|Davies Mansion]] in 1964, during its use by the CIA]] The New Haven Restaurant Institute was founded by New Haven attorney [[Frances Roth]] and [[Katharine Cramer Angell|Katharine Angell]] on May 22, 1946 in [[New Haven]], Connecticut as a vocational training school for returning World War II veterans. It was the first [[Cooking school|culinary college]] in the United States. With assistance from [[Yale University]], the school purchased the [[Betts House (Yale University)|Davies mansion]] in New Haven's [[Prospect Hill (New Haven)|Prospect Hill]] neighborhood. The first class consisted of sixteen students and the faculty included a [[dietitian]], a baker, and a chef. In 1947 the school was renamed the Restaurant Institute of Connecticut to reflect its growing repute; the school's name was changed again to the Culinary Institute of America in 1951. [[File:CIA Students 1974.jpg|thumb|CIA students in 1974]] Enrollment grew to approximately 1,000 students by 1969, beyond the capacity of its original campus, so the school purchased the [[St. Andrew-on-Hudson]] [[Jesuit]] [[Catholic novitiate|novitiate]] in Hyde Park, New York in 1970. In 1971, the college began awarding associate degrees, and opened its doors in Hyde Park in the following year. From 1974 to 1979, the school built three residence halls, a culinary library, a career planning center, and a learning resources center. From 1982 to 1984, the American Bounty and [[Caterina de' Medici]] Restaurants and St. Andrew's Café opened. In 1984, the school's continuing education center (later named the [[J. Willard Marriott]] Education Center) opened, and the school improved its teaching kitchens and constructed an experimental kitchen and food laboratory. In 1990, the school opened a baking and pastry facility, named two years later as the [[Takaki Bakery|Shunsuke Takaki]] School of Baking and Pastry. In 1993, the school opened its [[Conrad N. Hilton]] Library and began offering bachelor's degree programs. In 1995, the school's first branch campus opened, [[the Culinary Institute of America at Greystone]] in St. Helena, California. In 1998, the Student Recreation Center was opened.[[File:Culinary Institute of America (276631101).jpg|thumb|upright=1.2|alt=A four-story Neocolonial brick building|Roth Hall, the primary facility at the school's Hyde Park campus]] The Apple Pie Bakery Café opened in 2000, and the [[Colavita]] Center opened the following year. More residence halls were built at the school's Hyde Park campus in 2004. In 2005, Anton Plaza opened in Hyde Park while the Ventura Center for Menu Research and Development opened in St. Helena. On April 23, 2008, the school's teachers' union approved a vote of no confidence regarding CIA president [[L. Timothy Ryan|Tim Ryan]], the result was 85 to 9 against him. A thirteen-item list of complaints included outdated technology, poor-quality classes, and bad dining hall meals. Ryan later met with union representatives and described coming improvements in scheduling and curriculum. Immediately after the faculty's vote of no confidence, the board of trustees unanimously voted in support of Ryan and extended his contract. In the course of the controversy, the school prevented the campus newspaper, ''La Papillote'', from writing about the issue, which prompted its editor to resign. Administrators later apologized and reportedly allowed a full report in the paper's next issue. The school's third campus opened in 2008 in San Antonio. Two years later, the CIA opened a campus in Singapore consisting of a facility on the campus of [[Temasek Polytechnic]]. In 2012, the CIA began offering a bachelor's degree program in culinary science, and in 2014 introduced a bachelor's degree in applied food studies. On April 23, 2013, about 90 students held a [[walkout]] to protest declining educational standards.

In 2015, the college expanded its recreation center and added a new dining facility for students, called The Egg; both are housed in the CIA's Student Commons building. In the same year, the college acquired a portion of [[Copia (museum)|Copia]], a museum in downtown [[Napa, California]] that operated from 2001 to 2008. On September 27, 2015, the Culinary Craft Association (CCA), a union at the school, protested the CIA's outsourcing of jobs. The school had allegedly demanded that union workers cut ties other unions in order to keep their jobs. In 2016, the college opened a campus, [[the Culinary Institute of America at Copia]], which houses the CIA's new Food Business School. The college, which was outgrowing its St. Helena campus, purchased the northern portion of the Copia property for $12.5 million. On September 22, 2017, CCA held another protest about planned layoffs. In 2018, the CIA launched a Bachelor of Science degree program in Hospitality Management and introduced master's-level education with a Master of Professional Studies degree program in Food Business. In 2019, the college began offering a Master of Professional Studies degree program in Wine Management.
An ornate Second Empire-style house
The Davies Mansion in 1964, during its use by the CIA

The New Haven Restaurant Institute was founded by New Haven attorney Frances Roth and Katharine Angell on May 22, 1946 in New Haven, Connecticut as a vocational training school for returning World War II veterans.[1] It was the first culinary college in the United States.[2] With assistance from Yale University, the school purchased the Davies mansion in New Haven's Prospect Hill neighborhood.[1][3] The first class consisted of sixteen students and the faculty included a dietitian, a baker, and a chef. In 1947 the school was renamed the Restaurant Institute of Connecticut to reflect its growing repute; the school's name was changed again to the Culinary Institute of America in 1951.[4]

CIA students in 1974
Enrollment grew to approximately 1,000 students by 1969, beyond the capacity of its original campus, so the school purchased the St. Andrew-on-Hudson Jesuit novitiate in Hyde Park, New York in 1970.[1] In 1971, the college began awarding associate degrees, and opened its doors in Hyde Park in the following year. From 1974 to 1979, the school built three residence halls, a culinary library, a career planning center, and a learning resources center. From 1982 to 1984, the American Bounty and Caterina de' Medici Restaurants and St. Andrew's Café opened. In 1984, the school's continuing education center (later named the J. Willard Marriott Education Center) opened, and the school improved its teaching kitchens and constructed an experimental kitchen and food laboratory. In 1990, the school opened a baking and pastry facility, named two years later as the Shunsuke Takaki School of Baking and Pastry. In 1993, the school opened its Conrad N. Hilton Library and began offering bachelor's degree programs. In 1995, the school's first branch campus opened, the Culinary Institute of America at Greystone in St. Helena, California. In 1998, the Student Recreation Center was opened.
A four-story Neocolonial brick building
Roth Hall, the primary facility at the school's Hyde Park campus

The Apple Pie Bakery Café opened in 2000, and the Colavita Center opened the following year. More residence halls were built at the school's Hyde Park campus in 2004. In 2005, Anton Plaza opened in Hyde Park while the Ventura Center for Menu Research and Development opened in St. Helena. On April 23, 2008, the school's teachers' union approved a vote of no confidence regarding CIA president Tim Ryan, the result was 85 to 9 against him.[10] A thirteen-item list of complaints included outdated technology, poor-quality classes, and bad dining hall meals. Ryan later met with union representatives and described coming improvements in scheduling and curriculum.[11] Immediately after the faculty's vote of no confidence, the board of trustees unanimously voted in support of Ryan and extended his contract.[10] In the course of the controversy, the school prevented the campus newspaper, La Papillote, from writing about the issue, which prompted its editor to resign. Administrators later apologized and reportedly allowed a full report in the paper's next issue.[11] The school's third campus opened in 2008 in San Antonio. Two years later, the CIA opened a campus in Singapore consisting of a facility on the campus of Temasek Polytechnic. In 2012, the CIA began offering a bachelor's degree program in culinary science, and in 2014 introduced a bachelor's degree in applied food studies.[4] On April 23, 2013, about 90 students held a walkout to protest declining educational standards.[12]

In 2015, the college expanded its recreation center and added a new dining facility for students, called The Egg; both are housed in the CIA's Student Commons building. In the same year, the college acquired a portion of Copia, a museum in downtown Napa, California that operated from 2001 to 2008. On September 27, 2015, the Culinary Craft Association (CCA), a union at the school, protested the CIA's outsourcing of jobs. The school had allegedly demanded that union workers cut ties other unions in order to keep their jobs.[13][14] In 2016, the college opened a campus, the Culinary Institute of America at Copia, which houses the CIA's new Food Business School.[5] The college, which was outgrowing its St. Helena campus, purchased the northern portion of the Copia property for $12.5 million.[6] On September 22, 2017, CCA held another protest about planned layoffs.[15][14][16] In 2018, the CIA launched a Bachelor of Science degree program in Hospitality Management[7] and introduced master's-level education with a Master of Professional Studies degree program in Food Business.[8] In 2019, the college began offering a Master of Professional Studies degree program in Wine Management.[9]

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  • The sources are all named in the live article but I have not included the full citations here due to the mixture of citation formats used.

I think that WP:STRUCTURE supports this, particularly where STRUCTURE says "Segregation of text or other content into different regions or subsections, based solely on the apparent POV of the content itself, may result in an unencyclopedic structure, such as a back-and-forth dialogue between proponents and opponents… Try to achieve a more neutral text by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections that ignore or fight against each other." Labor disputes aren't inherently negative, but I think separating them into a Criticism section makes that content less encyclopedic than if it were included at the appropriate place in the History section.

This is also consistent with the essay WP:NOCRIT, which makes similar arguments, though I recognize that essays are not policy.

I hope that clarifies what I was/am hoping to accomplish and offers an acceptable placement of the text. Cheers, BINK Robin (talk) 16:08, 14 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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I dropped a {{huh}} tag in the Organization section, because I found the wording clunky and unhelpful. I've copied the sentence I placed it in below.

There is proportionately a large number of departments, [sic] for operating various functions related to foodservice classes and restaurants.

I really only think we need a clarification on the first part of the sentence (before the comma), but once we have a clarification we should probably reword the whole thing to be more easy to read. Unfortunately, the cited source is a study the school did of itself, and I suspect (based on the "via CIA Archives and Special Collections" tag that one would only be able to access the source itself from one of the Culinary's campuses, possibly only the main Hyde Park one. In effect I'm asking, "proportionally to what?" Hamtechperson 01:32, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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