GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:42, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Review
[edit]- Lead
- Minor edit: "has perform" >> "has performed"
- Background
- Minor edit: "conspired" >> "worked" (it's a song, not a terrorist plan)
- Minor edit: "Herbert approbated the particular tune the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him." >> "Herbert named the particular tune as the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him."
- Composition
- Minor edit: "industrial" >> "industrial music"
- Charts
- Write "South Korea GAON International Chart" as title instead of "스트리밍 순위집계 : 온라인 음원 스트리밍 수" and add on the reference the week on which the song appeared, since the main link
http://gaonchart.co.kr/main/section/online/streaming/list.gaon
returns only the latest chart, thus rendering unverifiable the position. - The (subscrition required) tag must be added to the "US Hot Dance/Electronic Digital Songs" chart position reference.
Nothing else. 'til the charts are fixed, i'll put it on hold. —Hahc21 19:19, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- I believe everything is all in order. :) —DAP388 (talk) 19:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Mmm well, on the Gaon chart i was referring to this:
- "South Korea GAON International Chart" (in Korean). Korea Music Content Industry Association. To properly see the chart position, select 2011 and 2011.05.22~2011.05.28. Retrieved June 20, 2012.
- This way, anyone can verify the charts. And change the link to
http://www.gaonchart.co.kr/main/section/online/streaming/list.gaon?nationGbn=E
- I'll do it myself.
- Mmm well, on the Gaon chart i was referring to this:
Well, since eveything has been fixed. I'll pass the article. —Hahc21 20:09, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
Verdict
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