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GA Review

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Unsuccessful. Phlsph7 (talk) 10:27, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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This review is transcluded from Talk:75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Phlsph7 (talk · contribs) 10:26, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Hello Pharaoh496 and thanks for almost single-handedly writing this article. Unfortunately, about half the content in the body of the article is unreferenced. Examples are the paragraphs starting with "Foreign diplomatic relations between Australia and India are well-established", "PM Albanese visited India in March 2023. During the visit, he also led a trade delegation", and "In 1996, the Border-Gavaskar Trophy was created, a test series". This fails the GA criterion 2b, which states that text in the body of the article should have citations no later than the end of the paragraph. This should be addressed before a renomination. A few other observations:

  • Ideally, the first sentence should start with a definition, see MOS:LEADSENTENCE. It could start with "75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event was an event..." or something similar.
  • Why does every single picture have Modi and Albanese in it? More variety would be better.
  • In first innings Usman Khawaja and add "the" before "first" and add a comma after "innings"
  • In the first innings, Shubman Gill and a little repetitive since the sentence before the previous sentence starts the same way
  • respectively, In result Australia the comma should probably be a period

Phlsph7 (talk) 10:26, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Pharaoh496 (talk · contribs) 19:14, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Images are appropriately tagged. What makes the following reliable sources?

  • moneycontrol.com -- I can't find an "About" page that would give me information about the site.
  • inshorts.com -- ditto.

I'll do spotchecks next, probably later today. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:39, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Spotchecks. Footnote numbers refer to this version.

  • FN 37 cites "Rohit Sharma and Shubman Gill opened India's account, adding 74 runs for the first wicket. After scoring his twenty-first run, Sharma became the sixth Indian to cross 17,000 runs in international cricket." Does not mention Gill or the first wicket partnership score.
  • FN 35 cites "... with Khawaja being dismissed short of a double hundred. As Green departed for 114, A late order partnership between Nathan Lyon and Todd Murphy saw Australia set a commanding total for 480 ...". I listened to this and I don't think Khawaja is mentioned, nor Green.
  • FN 36 cites "... with Ashwin taking the wickets of the remainder of the batters, bringing up his thirty-second five wicket haul in international cricket. He became not only the highest wicket taker for India in games against Australia, but also the highest wicket taker in the Border-Gavaskar Trophy ..." The source has "He also surpassed India legend Anil Kumble and became the bowler with the most 5-wicket haul in India with 26."
  • FN 43 cites "This was the second time that both of them had won this award. After the match, Kohli presented his signed jerseys to Khawaja and Carey as a symbol of friendship" The first part of this is not in the given source.

As the first four spotchecks all failed, I am going to stop here and fail this nomination. If/when you fix these and renominate, please note that there are some uncited sentences in the article that will need to be cited before it can pass GA -- some of the bullets under "Match summary", for example, and most of the paragraph starting "After the gallery visit", and some of the list in the "Attendance" section. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:26, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:75_Years_of_Friendship_through_Cricket_Event

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