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Статия January 6 United States Capitol attack (Дневник · История на страница)
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Разлика · История -5 361 Conspiracy theories: moved content to combine with existing section in daughter article: Special:Diff/1064751699 -- User:Soibangla: Can discuss.
Разлика · История -1 Conspiracy theories =: t
Разлика · История 5 move conspiracy theories to reactions as opposed to response (shorthand for the law enforcement response)
Разлика · История -1 rm overlinking User:Bishonen
Разлика · История 8 Undid revision 1064205138 by Flalf (talk) No neutrality concern: "patriot groups" refers to the patriot movement
Разлика · История -30 Trump's conduct: ce, less copying from source
Разлика · История -149 Damage: both images are obviously fine, but they are extremely similar, and the additional image doesn't have any added illustrational effect; leave only the longstanding image
Разлика · История 4 Casualties: wiki A. Babbitt
Разлика · История -672 Convictions: this type of content was split out into Criminal charges in the 2021 United States Capitol attack, and is summarized here in the aftermath section; per WP:WEIGHT and WP:BLPBALANCE Angeli can't be singled out -- more names are needed, and there isn't space for them; that's why the split had been made -- see consensus template on talk page
Разлика · История -12 Damage and theft: --> Damage; laptop h4 --> h3 [damage and theft content are not very connected]
Разлика · История -374 rm Salon opinion piece from first sentence as source for statement of fact [also: WP:RSP -- There is no consensus on the reliability of Salon. Editors consider Salon biased or opinionated, and its statements should be attributed.]
Разлика · История -63 restore longstanding 1st sentence per MOS:AVOIDBOLD [man rvt of: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1052453163&oldid=1052365991]
Разлика · История -4 Technology theft and cybersecurity concerns: --> Laptop theft and cybersecurity concerns [Technology theft is stealing a technology from a competitor or country; stealing electronic equipment is not it]
Разлика · История -2 this language was more technically correct
Разлика · История -1 dependent clause belonging to next sentence [partial man rvt]
Разлика · История 4 Historians' perspective: switch content that should be moved to Criminal charges brought in the 2021 United States Capitol attack to note as a temporary solution
Разлика · История -2 Planning: ce
Разлика · История 17 Planning: format note
Разлика · История -1 Planning: combine too short paragraph about chatter
Разлика · История -1 Planning: combine FBI Norfolk paragraphs
Разлика · История -125 Planning: partial switch to note, combine social media paragraphs
Разлика · История 0 Groups: capitalization
Разлика · История 0 Groups: "OK" -> OK, wlink
Разлика · История 13 Groups: truer with source -- 'Qanon and "Valknot" [actually valknut] symbolism' makes Valknot seem like some fringe group. However, valknot is a symbol [a symbol isn't symbolism], not a group; related group [and symbolism] in this context is white supremacists
Разлика · История 2 Groups: split too long para
Разлика · История 0 Groups: move angeli note to evangelical christians
Разлика · История 19 Groups: recombine: shirts with shirts, groups with groups; move groups multiple ref back to groups
Разлика · История 0 Groups: move white supremacist sentence from where it's not particularly relevant to combine white supremacist content
Разлика · История -57 Groups: combine symbols, apparel, iconography, flags; move angeli prayer to note
Разлика · История -23 Participants and response: pipe not tenable after group name correction [yes I understand that this is a play on words] -- neo-nazi wlinked earlier and is sufficient.
Разлика · История 3 Participants and response: combine short paragraphs and format note
Разлика · История -68 combine Nationalist Social Club content... ce
Разлика · История 0 Groups: Nationalist Social Club not National Socialist Club
Разлика · История 113 Groups: move oath keepers specific paragraph to note; add hatnote that directs to the same content in the oath keepers article
Разлика · История 0 Participants and response: fix potential markup-related glitch
Разлика · История -15 Participants and response: ce
Разлика · История 89 Participants and response: move miscellaneous iconography to note
Разлика · История 18 combine para -- Eastman spoke alongside Giuliani; move retired to note
Разлика · История 29 State lawmakers: move state lawmakers' names to note; rm Weaver claimed to have been "in the thick of it"; combine Evans
Разлика · История -1 275 Groups: rm case of mistaken identity concerning laptop thief -- harmless, but doesn't help the reader learn more about the Capitol attack; would there not be cases of mistaken identity in a sprawling investigation like this?
Разлика · История 50 See also: rm entry already included in 'Historians' perspective'; add invis. text
Разлика · История -123 See also: rm coup -- see discussions: Talk:List of coups and coup attempts by country#2021 United States Capitol storming and Talk:List of coups and coup attempts#2021 US Capitol attack -- consensus needed
Разлика · История -32 rm very long template according to general sentiment in Talk:2021 United States Capitol attack/Archive 18#Article is not too long -- concrete ideas on shortening are needed on the talk page, template has already proven to be unhelpful
Разлика · История -1 more natural wording, less parenthesized text
Разлика · История -1 Congress reconvened: Biden's win
Разлика · История -90 Aftermath: rm top templates -- hatnote not needed, already in h3; anchor not valid
Разлика · История -180 Aftermath: rm paragraph for Congress reconvening because of sourced addition elsewhere
Разлика · История -23 Attack on the Capitol: rm cite tag -- citation not needed in a h2 top summary because it closely follows detailed sourced content below
Разлика · История -456 Historians' perspective: rm duplicate [same thing mentioned in previous paragraph]
Разлика · История -1 External links: rem break
Разлика · История -124 See also: these historical see also entries are not needed because of the hatnote underneath 'Historians' perspective'
Разлика · История 39 restore short Trump quote in lead -- Talk:2021 United States Capitol attack/Archive 17#26 Quotes around "stolen"
Разлика · История 5 Casualties: join into paragraph; "officer" -> "police officer"
Разлика · История 1 Casualties: comma
Разлика · История 13 Casualties: clarity [B. Sicknick not in a group of "four Trump supporters"]
Разлика · История -75 integrate repeated information in lead [number of people charged]
Разлика · История -1 join first paragraph, looks like someone accidentally split it
Разлика · История 1 (върнато)  space
Разлика · История 534 (върнато)  add new reuters report
Разлика · История -4 892 Suicides: switch to transclusion per WP:SYNC, no substantive change /wiki deaths of Smith and Liebengood/ -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1039258773&oldid=1038786455
Разлика · История 16 sentence gives me note vibes
Разлика · История -38 See also: rem entry also included in a see also hatnote
Разлика · История -57 Historians' perspective: rem list of coups, event not included in that list
Разлика · История -11 (върнато)  rem 'Wednesday', this didn't really hurt, but it was just unconventional, and had no particular relevance
Разлика · История -5 403 Law enforcement and National Guard response: switch to transclusion per WP:SYNC; diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1038733022&oldid=1038717674
Разлика · История -3 Law enforcement and National Guard response: ce
Разлика · История -4 Historians' perspective: flag displayed -> flag flown [more idiomatic]
Разлика · История 67 change wlink to more relevant content
Разлика · История 164 Analysis and terminology: excerpt hatnote is aesthetically and functionally not really compatible with other hatnotes
Разлика · История 6 093 Contemporary analysis and terminology: restore this very short prose subsection which is based around the longstanding first sentence (which was in the article for months), and around historical see also links, reformatted as a hatnote. All of this is vitally needed here and not anywhere else.
Разлика · История -7 it's very confusing to present the Capitol and Congress as two "coequal" entities that were attacked, when it was the Congress that was attacked, and the Capitol was the location. It's like saying "Bob's house and Bob were attacked" instead of "Bob was attacked in his house"
Разлика · История 1 Attempt to overturn the presidential election: grammar
Разлика · История -9 change ibx title consistent with article after move
Разлика · История 5 Undid revision 1037736769 by NonReproBlue (talk) see talk page for comments on how a stable version can't be the one with a copyediting omission. the stable version construct here is completely false. you are reverting to a banal error. the substantive point of content will be revised substantively and systematically and article won't be eroded like this
Разлика · История 5 (върнато)  restore "mock" in ibx consistent with rest of article. absence of "mock" here was due to a copyediting omission made at the time that "mock" was added to gallows everywhere based on a discussion that was had and concluded naturally then. If one wants to change this, one should remove "mock" everywhere, based on a current discussion (no consensus yet), and not just erode this systematic change piece by piece
Разлика · История -16 Casualties: ce [repetitive prose]
Разлика · История 189 Contemporary analysis and terminology: restore non-transcludable template
Разлика · История 7 Contemporary analysis and terminology: hat=no
Разлика · История -1 Contemporary analysis and terminology: typo
Разлика · История 163 Restoring a portion of the stable version (just terminology) using excerpting. Per talk there had been and there is no consensus for removing this important part. When it's removed we see that instant needless contention ensues on the talk page where people request inclusion of terms x and y in the article, and project woozy theories about terminology. Removing this was just unbelievably ill-considered.
Разлика · История 21 Undid revision 1037286676 by Gouncbeatduke (talk) Chrisahn is not edit warring, you are. There is extant explicit (albeit rough) consensus to use mock (see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_storming_of_the_United_States_Capitol/Archive_16#Mock_Gallows), and if you want to carry out this change you need to change the consensus. There is renewed discussion, but it hasn't developed enough. Maybe start an RfC.
Разлика · История 11 Suicides: flow; generic 'officer' -> law enforcement member
Разлика · История -1 Suicides: riots -> riot
Разлика · История 1 style [deaths before injuries]
Разлика · История 184 (върнато)  Casualties: change further (links to more relevant articles)
Разлика · История -1 (върнато)  Undid revision 1034941992 by Alalch Emis (talk) 3RR
Разлика · История 2 (върнато)  Undid revision 1034940282 by VQuakr (talk) MOS:QUOTEPOV; colourful language that needs to be clearly separated from wikivoice
Разлика · История 2 (върнато)  Undid revision 1034935796 by VQuakr (talk) it doesn't look an indirect quote but much more readily reads like a paraphrase. We would not be saying steal the elections, but something like vote rigging, electoral fraud, election manipulation etc.
Разлика · История 2 (върнато)  Undid revision 1034856737 by Alexysun (talk) per user:Chrisahn: The quotes around "stolen" clarify that this colloquial, non-encyclopedic term is often used by Trump and his supporters; similarly for the quotes around "fraudulent", which are also present in the source.
Разлика · История -5 175 Bombs discovered near Capitol Complex: switch to transclusion -- see: Special:Diff/1034664769/1034798383
Разлика · История 169 fix ref
Разлика · История 567 fix ref
Разлика · История 189 Contemporary analysis and terminology: add see also
Разлика · История -16 Law enforcement and National Guard response: shorter, consistent with lead
Разлика · История 4 Law enforcement and National Guard response: wiki
Разлика · История 13 Law enforcement and National Guard response: wiki, generic term
Разлика · История -34 rem overlink
Разлика · История 547 Senate adjourned: add pence reportedly refusing to evacuate complex
Разлика · История -85 Casualties: adjust death of B. Sicknick
Разлика · История 7 Casualties: fix parameter
Разлика · История 179 Casualties: add further
Разлика · История 361 Media documentation: add original title of film
Разлика · История 4 wiki 1st
Разлика · История 18 switch inline note to note ref
Разлика · История 3 Official predictions and warnings: further maybe better
Разлика · История 136 Background: section to better support transclusion, but also more accurate headings; see also -> main
Разлика · История 561 fix ref [provisional, should transclude this part too]
Разлика · История -1 657 Law enforcement preparations: forgot to remove [now complete]
Разлика · История 8 Law enforcement preparations: transclude the previous (basically identical) paragraph as well; only substantive difference is inclusion of Muriel Bowser's statement, which is probably good -- see changes to daughter article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1032179677&oldid=1032177768
Разлика · История -5 515 Law enforcement preparations: switch, partial, to transclusion; no substantive change -- see: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1032177768&oldid=1032177599
Разлика · История 1 410 Impact and legacy: add h3 Media documentation
Разлика · История 205 Casualties: add in-body l3 summary
Разлика · История 23 Attack on the Capitol: l3 Casualties (seems conventional)
Разлика · История 36 add Notes [see preceding summary]
Разлика · История 545 Police injuries: -> Injuries; NPoV
Разлика · История 28 convert history list see alsos to relevant hatnote; add broader Timeline of violent and dangerous incidents at the U.S. Capitol
Разлика · История -9 Damage, theft, and impact: -> Damage and theft, because impact-related subsection was moved, see preceding summary
Разлика · История 15 resection: move [1] conservation of items meshed with "Damage, theft, and impact"; [2] passage on disconnected historical precedent strangely located in 'Background'; [3] terminology ~to~ l2 'Impact and legacy' (or just 'Impact', not sure); adjust terminology heading to better reflect content; make sure impact follows aftermath, so put 'Events elsewhere' before aftermath
Разлика · История -1 Terminology used to refer to the event: fix
Разлика · История 1 368 Terminology used to refer to the event: expand media side of terminology and move to top (seems better there); see talk
Разлика · История -1 Deaths: tweak parameter
Разлика · История -95 Deaths: rem improvised hatnote
Разлика · История -9 265 Deaths: switch Sicknick's death to transclusion after merge with daughter article -- further summary there: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Death_of_Brian_Sicknick&type=revision&diff=1030534474&oldid=1030415665; transclusion serves to preserve a unified consensus-formed WP:DUE perspective on the subject, without arbitrary divergences in the two summaries and need to maintain both; done per WP:SUMMARYSTYLE
Разлика · История 58 Deaths: attempt at a more logical hatnote; see also is not for directing to the main article from a summary; this section however is a summary of a broader subject (all of the deaths), so generic further/main don't work so well either
Разлика · История 47 Freedom Plaza rallies: a speaker must be a person, not a group
Разлика · История -18 upd lnk
Разлика · История -8 433 State capitols and cities: transclude – rem mechanical listing of states (the alr. stated WP:SPEAKSELF rationale)
Разлика · История -3 Domestic reactions: leftover word
Разлика · История -5 863 Misinformation about the event: trim (content merged with main, antifa, article)
Разлика · История 3 merge antifa false flag from participating groups
Разлика · История 0 lowercase antifa per AP -- https://www.apstylebook.com/blog_posts/9 -- and prevailing practice where it's the primary subject on Wikipedia; the basic idea is that antifa is a contraction of antifascist like neocon is of neoconservative (so mostly just a stylized common noun)
Разлика · История 56 Misinformation about the event: wiki for main location of antifa conspiracy
Разлика · История -8 621 (върнато)  State capitols and cities: WP:SPEAKSELF: the plain listing of states was bad. as the prose didn't speak for itself but required the reader to look at the references; per WP:SUMMARY "Longer articles are split into sections, each usually several good-sized paragraphs long". It's more of a legitimate section now, and it isn't long.
Разлика · История -2 634 International reactions switch to transclusion (minor substantive change resulting from merging summary here with lead there)
Разлика · История 500 restore ref
Разлика · История -160 Domestic reactions: accidental pic
Разлика · История -10 393 Domestic reactions: switch to transclusion (no substantive change)
Разлика · История -5 403 Aftermath: switch to transclusion (no substantive change)
Разлика · История -6 Political, legal, and social repercussions: ce
Разлика · История 3 Political, legal, and social repercussions: avoid word repetition
Разлика · История 34 merge reactions with aftermath per September 11 attacks#Aftermath (reactions are also an aspect of the aftermath)
Разлика · История 19 Aftermath: wiki
Разлика · История 873 Aftermath: add summaries of legislation section from aftermath article
Разлика · История 0 Aftermath: word choice; avoid too dense linking
Разлика · История -2 Aftermath: word choice
Разлика · История 0 Aftermath: ce
Разлика · История 6 Aftermath: more relevant wiki
Разлика · История 0 Aftermath: move pic
Разлика · История 550 Aftermath: ref from impeachment
Разлика · История 160 Aftermath: add a random aftermath pic
Разлика · История -1 Aftermath:
Разлика · История 1 Aftermath: ce; forgot to mention - previous edit was based on a discussion: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_United_States_Capitol_attack#Cont._-_in_light_of_the_Aftermath_AfD; and previous discussions around ideas about length and summarizing
Разлика · История -26 402 Aftermath: move to daughter article has been finalized; leftover duplicate content is replaced with a reworked lead of the daughter article; rem too long template
Разлика · История -8 308 Arrests: move to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029580728&oldid=1029580336
Разлика · История -2 117 Lawsuits: move section to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029580336&oldid=1029579088
Разлика · История -1 454 Senate investigation: move to corresponding section of Criminal charges brought in the 2021 United States Capitol attack -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Criminal_charges_brought_in_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029579557&oldid=1029563162
Разлика · История -2 637 Independent commission: move comission to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029579088&oldid=1029578153
Разлика · История -1 684 Aftermath security measures: move security bill to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029578153&oldid=1029576658
Разлика · История -8 846 move Completion of electoral vote count to Aftermath of the 2021 United States Capitol attack -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029576658&oldid=1029424057
Разлика · История -1 Aftermath security measures: ce
Разлика · История -347 Aftermath security measures: bit more shortening
Разлика · История -1 881 Social media bans: move parler scraping to main content location -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Parler&type=revision&diff=1029430902&oldid=1029429476
Разлика · История -208 Aftermath security measures: shorten travel restrictions
Разлика · История 2 moved misinformation from aftermath to domestic reactions where I believe it belongs, and consistently with main reactions article
Разлика · История 88 Lawsuits: add main
Разлика · История 131 Aftermath: add covid main
Разлика · История 0 Misinformation about attackers: --> Misinformation about the event; better reflects actual scope of section
Разлика · История 2 Aftermath: arrests as subsection of investigations (consistent with main article)
Разлика · История -2 Arrests: not a subsection to the aftermath security response
Разлика · История -1 069 Arrests: rem warnagiris, covered in main (move videos and refs there)
Разлика · История 104 Arrests: add main
Разлика · История -193 Social media bans: rem one wrong further link; parler main
Разлика · История 220 Social media bans: add main
Разлика · История -3 Scrutiny of police response: main instead of further
Разлика · История 1 262 Social media bans: readd from aftermath article because this section is so brief and a heading is needed for the main template which is due
Разлика · История 0 Aftermath: order: move impeachment up (importance)
Разлика · История 1 252 Aftermath: add brief resignations section (can be further shortened but a heading is needed for the main template); reorder according to what's more natural and consistent with aftermath article
Разлика · История 24 Aftermath security measures: upd link
Разлика · История 424 Social media bans: add further
Разлика · История 112 Aftermath security measures: add main march 4
Разлика · История 0 Congress proceedings -> official proceedings
Разлика · История -18 trim synonymous methods (rioting = mob violence)
Разлика · История 346 readd obstr. of jutice to ibx-methods after 2nd guilty plea
Разлика · История 1 lead: order: deaths -> injuries (a universal convention)
Разлика · История -6 800 Weapons used: trim; the molotov guy should be merged with the mention of eleven molotov cocktails up above
Разлика · История 17 ToC depth limit: 3; easier to navigate and to spot the main section (Attack on the Capitol building)
Разлика · История 95 State capitols and cities: add main (lvl 4 subsection of protests article); see also for inaug. week protests -> wiki
Разлика · История -236 Aftermath: bit of picture overload, moving stacked pic to aftermath main which should be expanding on this section
Разлика · История 158 added "severing of corporate and other ties" to infobox bc significant consequences for trump (deutsche bank etc); link to aftermath section
Разлика · История -176 rem repetition – consolidate FBI Dec 29 warning (overcite now, someone should review)
Разлика · История 43 Manual revert of 1005239994 by Yodabyte Despite the bombs not being at the Capitol grounds, planting of bombs is still considered a part of this event; conclusion to be derived from Chrisahn's post is not that bombing be removed from methods but that the location be corrected in the lead.
Разлика · История 0 mv militia link from bottom up
Разлика · История 73
Разлика · История -110 mv "anarchy" to terminology (media discourse); rem undue mentions of outlets and undue weight on outlets being foreign (UK & Canada); rem dubious "many" /* Reactions */
Разлика · История 4 phrase not term /* Terminology used to refer to event */
Разлика · История -32 moved damage to damage line in infobox
Разлика · История -156 indiana converted to mention (no incident) /* State capitols and cities */
Разлика · История 0 moved pic up /* State capitols and cities */
Разлика · История 3 300 restored peaceful states, just mentioning them by name /* Events outside Washington, D.C. */
Разлика · История 378 Per current consensus that "Word "urge" is not to be used in lead.", I am removing the word urge and restoring Trump's "if you don't fight..." statement as reported by reliable sources in a form which is not an out-of-context fragment (WP:HEADLINES may apply), and this is in agreement with the corresponding paragraph in article body.
Разлика · История -9 move pic higher /* State capitols and cities */
Разлика · История 619 add ref Q 17th letter /* State capitols and cities */
Разлика · История -2 link /* State capitols and cities */
Разлика · История 396 move sentence about subsequent development to bottom /* Events outside Washington, D.C. */
Разлика · История -1 143 refactor (bullets), word order/* State capitols and cities */
Разлика · История 26 methods: fix link & capitalization
Разлика · История 18 add demonstration to methods
Разлика · История -4 method: civil disobedience -> civil disorder (both are good IMO)
Разлика · История 0 bracket
Разлика · История 0 comma
Разлика · История 60 fix link
Разлика · История -58 Undid revision 1004947912 by Alalch Emis (talk) bad link
Разлика · История 58 (върнато)  added big lie to methods (method of political subversion)
Разлика · История 19 refname big lie multi
Разлика · История 229 blist methods and categorize in 2 basic categories; fleshed out the political subversion methods; removed "gun violence" (not supported; mix-up of who did the shooting perhaps); per RfC changed "tactics of terrorism" (pleonasm because methods = tactics in this context so it's like methods: methods of terrorism) to terrorism
Разлика · История 19 refname
Разлика · История -28 infobox: execution-style murder -> lynching (much more appropriate/factual)
Разлика · История 1 add bracket; tactics of terrorism and listing of these methods is now particularly supported by the RfC close – do not revert; discuss pls
Разлика · История 5 correct link for bombing to tac. of terr. #bombing
Разлика · История 13 chrisahn you are wrong, that is not how methods work methods are in the ABSTRACT; changed "intention to" to alleged to reflect this as well; shootings > gun violence
Разлика · История 29 manual revert of 1004540969 -> failure of trump supporters, consistent with lead & other articles on civil disturbances etc.; do we have an article on trump's second term presidency or dictatorship? no? so it's a failure. everyone called it a failure, it's sourced.
Разлика · История 0 mv planting of pipe bombs section up, to a logical place
Разлика · История 0 mv weapons cache discovery and arrest to appropriate section
Разлика · История -19 what is more important – that someone attempted to bomb buildings or that bombs were found? /* Discovery of improvised explosive devices */
Разлика · История -10 rem "attempted" from methods; methods are in the abstract (the *type* of chosen action/tactic, not what was done in concrete terms and whether it succeeded or not)
Разлика · История -10 "The event led to the evacuation and lockdown of the Capitol" is factually inaccurate; the lockdown lasted throughout the event and lawmakers were evacuated in middle of it, so the event didn't *lead to* these things; same for deaths. Real notability needs to be established in separate sentence. What the event really "led to" is aftermath.
Разлика · История -3 even if exact cause of sicknick's death is yet unknown, but for the event he would have been alive (that isn't being questioned), so he died from the event
Разлика · История 0 President-elect capitalization (correct own error)
Разлика · История 0 Vice-President-elect (two hyphens) not Vice President-elect, per [https://www.govinfo.gov/features/new-edition-gpo-style-manual GPO Style Manual]
Разлика · История 33 link certificates of asc. in lead
Разлика · История 4 joe biden
Разлика · История 488 Major rewrite of 1st paragraph to establish notability in upper portion of lead per MOS:LEAD and tie it up with goals and results. it's a little longer but other paragraphs can become shorter, in time.
Разлика · История 96 added bombing as the quintessential tactic of terrorism, to methods
Разлика · История 87 reordered goals; impeachment closer to top because of significance; both results - consequences for Trump (impeachment and suspension from social media) codensed to one bullet; added resumption of presidential transition
Разлика · История -10 shortened heading /* Attempted bombing and supply of Molotov cocktails */
Разлика · История -135 clarified bombing attempt; not *suspected* pipe bomb anymore; removed repetition: night before + previous night /* Improvised explosive and incendiary devices */ -> Attempted bombing
Разлика · История -12 result: vandalism already mentioned as method (it's a method and damage resulted from it) – removed; condensed damage and ransacked offices to one bullet; looting -> property stolen
Разлика · История 29 result: moved delay to top of list, because it demarcates failure from success, as the most essential result, consistent with similar articles ("result: Defeat of..." etc.); explicitly noted the failure
Разлика · История -275 "capture or incapacitation of lawmakers" is method not goal; goal identified in cited article as: "intention of disrupting..."; both this method and real goal are already covered, therefore removed this non-goal
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