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Article January 6 United States Capitol attack (Log · Page History)
User Alalch Emis (Edit Counter· Top Edits)
Total edits 239
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(Semi-)automated edits 8 (3.3%)
Reverted edits 11 (4.6%)
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Major edits · 210 (87.9%)
(Semi-)automated edits · 8 (3.3%)
Manual edits · 231 (96.7%)
Reverted edits · 11 (4.6%)
Unreverted edits · 228 (95.4%)
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Diff · History -5,361 Conspiracy theories: moved content to combine with existing section in daughter article: Special:Diff/1064751699 -- User:Soibangla: Can discuss.
Diff · History -1 Conspiracy theories =: t
Diff · History 5 move conspiracy theories to reactions as opposed to response (shorthand for the law enforcement response)
Diff · History -1 rm overlinking User:Bishonen
Diff · History 8 Undid revision 1064205138 by Flalf (talk) No neutrality concern: "patriot groups" refers to the patriot movement
Diff · History -30 Trump's conduct: ce, less copying from source
Diff · History -149 Damage: both images are obviously fine, but they are extremely similar, and the additional image doesn't have any added illustrational effect; leave only the longstanding image
Diff · History 4 Casualties: wiki A. Babbitt
Diff · History -672 Convictions: this type of content was split out into Criminal charges in the 2021 United States Capitol attack, and is summarized here in the aftermath section; per WP:WEIGHT and WP:BLPBALANCE Angeli can't be singled out -- more names are needed, and there isn't space for them; that's why the split had been made -- see consensus template on talk page
Diff · History -12 Damage and theft: --> Damage; laptop h4 --> h3 [damage and theft content are not very connected]
Diff · History -374 rm Salon opinion piece from first sentence as source for statement of fact [also: WP:RSP -- There is no consensus on the reliability of Salon. Editors consider Salon biased or opinionated, and its statements should be attributed.]
Diff · History -63 restore longstanding 1st sentence per MOS:AVOIDBOLD [man rvt of: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1052453163&oldid=1052365991]
Diff · History -4 Technology theft and cybersecurity concerns: --> Laptop theft and cybersecurity concerns [Technology theft is stealing a technology from a competitor or country; stealing electronic equipment is not it]
Diff · History -2 this language was more technically correct
Diff · History -1 dependent clause belonging to next sentence [partial man rvt]
Diff · History 4 Historians' perspective: switch content that should be moved to Criminal charges brought in the 2021 United States Capitol attack to note as a temporary solution
Diff · History -2 Planning: ce
Diff · History 17 Planning: format note
Diff · History -1 Planning: combine too short paragraph about chatter
Diff · History -1 Planning: combine FBI Norfolk paragraphs
Diff · History -125 Planning: partial switch to note, combine social media paragraphs
Diff · History 0 Groups: capitalization
Diff · History 0 Groups: "OK" -> OK, wlink
Diff · History 13 Groups: truer with source -- 'Qanon and "Valknot" [actually valknut] symbolism' makes Valknot seem like some fringe group. However, valknot is a symbol [a symbol isn't symbolism], not a group; related group [and symbolism] in this context is white supremacists
Diff · History 2 Groups: split too long para
Diff · History 0 Groups: move angeli note to evangelical christians
Diff · History 19 Groups: recombine: shirts with shirts, groups with groups; move groups multiple ref back to groups
Diff · History 0 Groups: move white supremacist sentence from where it's not particularly relevant to combine white supremacist content
Diff · History -57 Groups: combine symbols, apparel, iconography, flags; move angeli prayer to note
Diff · History -23 Participants and response: pipe not tenable after group name correction [yes I understand that this is a play on words] -- neo-nazi wlinked earlier and is sufficient.
Diff · History 3 Participants and response: combine short paragraphs and format note
Diff · History -68 combine Nationalist Social Club content... ce
Diff · History 0 Groups: Nationalist Social Club not National Socialist Club
Diff · History 113 Groups: move oath keepers specific paragraph to note; add hatnote that directs to the same content in the oath keepers article
Diff · History 0 Participants and response: fix potential markup-related glitch
Diff · History -15 Participants and response: ce
Diff · History 89 Participants and response: move miscellaneous iconography to note
Diff · History 18 combine para -- Eastman spoke alongside Giuliani; move retired to note
Diff · History 29 State lawmakers: move state lawmakers' names to note; rm Weaver claimed to have been "in the thick of it"; combine Evans
Diff · History -1,275 Groups: rm case of mistaken identity concerning laptop thief -- harmless, but doesn't help the reader learn more about the Capitol attack; would there not be cases of mistaken identity in a sprawling investigation like this?
Diff · History 50 See also: rm entry already included in 'Historians' perspective'; add invis. text
Diff · History -123 See also: rm coup -- see discussions: Talk:List of coups and coup attempts by country#2021 United States Capitol storming and Talk:List of coups and coup attempts#2021 US Capitol attack -- consensus needed
Diff · History -32 rm very long template according to general sentiment in Talk:2021 United States Capitol attack/Archive 18#Article is not too long -- concrete ideas on shortening are needed on the talk page, template has already proven to be unhelpful
Diff · History -1 more natural wording, less parenthesized text
Diff · History -1 Congress reconvened: Biden's win
Diff · History -90 Aftermath: rm top templates -- hatnote not needed, already in h3; anchor not valid
Diff · History -180 Aftermath: rm paragraph for Congress reconvening because of sourced addition elsewhere
Diff · History -23 Attack on the Capitol: rm cite tag -- citation not needed in a h2 top summary because it closely follows detailed sourced content below
Diff · History -456 Historians' perspective: rm duplicate [same thing mentioned in previous paragraph]
Diff · History -1 External links: rem break
Diff · History -124 See also: these historical see also entries are not needed because of the hatnote underneath 'Historians' perspective'
Diff · History 39 restore short Trump quote in lead -- Talk:2021 United States Capitol attack/Archive 17#26 Quotes around "stolen"
Diff · History 5 Casualties: join into paragraph; "officer" -> "police officer"
Diff · History 1 Casualties: comma
Diff · History 13 Casualties: clarity [B. Sicknick not in a group of "four Trump supporters"]
Diff · History -75 integrate repeated information in lead [number of people charged]
Diff · History -1 join first paragraph, looks like someone accidentally split it
Diff · History 1 (reverted)  space
Diff · History 534 (reverted)  add new reuters report
Diff · History -4,892 Suicides: switch to transclusion per WP:SYNC, no substantive change /wiki deaths of Smith and Liebengood/ -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1039258773&oldid=1038786455
Diff · History 16 sentence gives me note vibes
Diff · History -38 See also: rem entry also included in a see also hatnote
Diff · History -57 Historians' perspective: rem list of coups, event not included in that list
Diff · History -11 (reverted)  rem 'Wednesday', this didn't really hurt, but it was just unconventional, and had no particular relevance
Diff · History -5,403 Law enforcement and National Guard response: switch to transclusion per WP:SYNC; diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1038733022&oldid=1038717674
Diff · History -3 Law enforcement and National Guard response: ce
Diff · History -4 Historians' perspective: flag displayed -> flag flown [more idiomatic]
Diff · History 67 change wlink to more relevant content
Diff · History 164 Analysis and terminology: excerpt hatnote is aesthetically and functionally not really compatible with other hatnotes
Diff · History 6,093 Contemporary analysis and terminology: restore this very short prose subsection which is based around the longstanding first sentence (which was in the article for months), and around historical see also links, reformatted as a hatnote. All of this is vitally needed here and not anywhere else.
Diff · History -7 it's very confusing to present the Capitol and Congress as two "coequal" entities that were attacked, when it was the Congress that was attacked, and the Capitol was the location. It's like saying "Bob's house and Bob were attacked" instead of "Bob was attacked in his house"
Diff · History 1 Attempt to overturn the presidential election: grammar
Diff · History -9 change ibx title consistent with article after move
Diff · History 5 Undid revision 1037736769 by NonReproBlue (talk) see talk page for comments on how a stable version can't be the one with a copyediting omission. the stable version construct here is completely false. you are reverting to a banal error. the substantive point of content will be revised substantively and systematically and article won't be eroded like this
Diff · History 5 (reverted)  restore "mock" in ibx consistent with rest of article. absence of "mock" here was due to a copyediting omission made at the time that "mock" was added to gallows everywhere based on a discussion that was had and concluded naturally then. If one wants to change this, one should remove "mock" everywhere, based on a current discussion (no consensus yet), and not just erode this systematic change piece by piece
Diff · History -16 Casualties: ce [repetitive prose]
Diff · History 189 Contemporary analysis and terminology: restore non-transcludable template
Diff · History 7 Contemporary analysis and terminology: hat=no
Diff · History -1 Contemporary analysis and terminology: typo
Diff · History 163 Restoring a portion of the stable version (just terminology) using excerpting. Per talk there had been and there is no consensus for removing this important part. When it's removed we see that instant needless contention ensues on the talk page where people request inclusion of terms x and y in the article, and project woozy theories about terminology. Removing this was just unbelievably ill-considered.
Diff · History 21 Undid revision 1037286676 by Gouncbeatduke (talk) Chrisahn is not edit warring, you are. There is extant explicit (albeit rough) consensus to use mock (see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_storming_of_the_United_States_Capitol/Archive_16#Mock_Gallows), and if you want to carry out this change you need to change the consensus. There is renewed discussion, but it hasn't developed enough. Maybe start an RfC.
Diff · History 11 Suicides: flow; generic 'officer' -> law enforcement member
Diff · History -1 Suicides: riots -> riot
Diff · History 1 style [deaths before injuries]
Diff · History 184 (reverted)  Casualties: change further (links to more relevant articles)
Diff · History -1 (reverted)  Undid revision 1034941992 by Alalch Emis (talk) 3RR
Diff · History 2 (reverted)  Undid revision 1034940282 by VQuakr (talk) MOS:QUOTEPOV; colourful language that needs to be clearly separated from wikivoice
Diff · History 2 (reverted)  Undid revision 1034935796 by VQuakr (talk) it doesn't look an indirect quote but much more readily reads like a paraphrase. We would not be saying steal the elections, but something like vote rigging, electoral fraud, election manipulation etc.
Diff · History 2 (reverted)  Undid revision 1034856737 by Alexysun (talk) per user:Chrisahn: The quotes around "stolen" clarify that this colloquial, non-encyclopedic term is often used by Trump and his supporters; similarly for the quotes around "fraudulent", which are also present in the source.
Diff · History -5,175 Bombs discovered near Capitol Complex: switch to transclusion -- see: Special:Diff/1034664769/1034798383
Diff · History 169 fix ref
Diff · History 567 fix ref
Diff · History 189 Contemporary analysis and terminology: add see also
Diff · History -16 Law enforcement and National Guard response: shorter, consistent with lead
Diff · History 4 Law enforcement and National Guard response: wiki
Diff · History 13 Law enforcement and National Guard response: wiki, generic term
Diff · History -34 rem overlink
Diff · History 547 Senate adjourned: add pence reportedly refusing to evacuate complex
Diff · History -85 Casualties: adjust death of B. Sicknick
Diff · History 7 Casualties: fix parameter
Diff · History 179 Casualties: add further
Diff · History 361 Media documentation: add original title of film
Diff · History 4 wiki 1st
Diff · History 18 switch inline note to note ref
Diff · History 3 Official predictions and warnings: further maybe better
Diff · History 136 Background: section to better support transclusion, but also more accurate headings; see also -> main
Diff · History 561 fix ref [provisional, should transclude this part too]
Diff · History -1,657 Law enforcement preparations: forgot to remove [now complete]
Diff · History 8 Law enforcement preparations: transclude the previous (basically identical) paragraph as well; only substantive difference is inclusion of Muriel Bowser's statement, which is probably good -- see changes to daughter article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1032179677&oldid=1032177768
Diff · History -5,515 Law enforcement preparations: switch, partial, to transclusion; no substantive change -- see: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Law_enforcement_response_to_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1032177768&oldid=1032177599
Diff · History 1,410 Impact and legacy: add h3 Media documentation
Diff · History 205 Casualties: add in-body l3 summary
Diff · History 23 Attack on the Capitol: l3 Casualties (seems conventional)
Diff · History 36 add Notes [see preceding summary]
Diff · History 545 Police injuries: -> Injuries; NPoV
Diff · History 28 convert history list see alsos to relevant hatnote; add broader Timeline of violent and dangerous incidents at the U.S. Capitol
Diff · History -9 Damage, theft, and impact: -> Damage and theft, because impact-related subsection was moved, see preceding summary
Diff · History 15 resection: move [1] conservation of items meshed with "Damage, theft, and impact"; [2] passage on disconnected historical precedent strangely located in 'Background'; [3] terminology ~to~ l2 'Impact and legacy' (or just 'Impact', not sure); adjust terminology heading to better reflect content; make sure impact follows aftermath, so put 'Events elsewhere' before aftermath
Diff · History -1 Terminology used to refer to the event: fix
Diff · History 1,368 Terminology used to refer to the event: expand media side of terminology and move to top (seems better there); see talk
Diff · History -1 Deaths: tweak parameter
Diff · History -95 Deaths: rem improvised hatnote
Diff · History -9,265 Deaths: switch Sicknick's death to transclusion after merge with daughter article -- further summary there: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Death_of_Brian_Sicknick&type=revision&diff=1030534474&oldid=1030415665; transclusion serves to preserve a unified consensus-formed WP:DUE perspective on the subject, without arbitrary divergences in the two summaries and need to maintain both; done per WP:SUMMARYSTYLE
Diff · History 58 Deaths: attempt at a more logical hatnote; see also is not for directing to the main article from a summary; this section however is a summary of a broader subject (all of the deaths), so generic further/main don't work so well either
Diff · History 47 Freedom Plaza rallies: a speaker must be a person, not a group
Diff · History -18 upd lnk
Diff · History -8,433 State capitols and cities: transclude – rem mechanical listing of states (the alr. stated WP:SPEAKSELF rationale)
Diff · History -3 Domestic reactions: leftover word
Diff · History -5,863 Misinformation about the event: trim (content merged with main, antifa, article)
Diff · History 3 merge antifa false flag from participating groups
Diff · History 0 lowercase antifa per AP -- https://www.apstylebook.com/blog_posts/9 -- and prevailing practice where it's the primary subject on Wikipedia; the basic idea is that antifa is a contraction of antifascist like neocon is of neoconservative (so mostly just a stylized common noun)
Diff · History 56 Misinformation about the event: wiki for main location of antifa conspiracy
Diff · History -8,621 (reverted)  State capitols and cities: WP:SPEAKSELF: the plain listing of states was bad. as the prose didn't speak for itself but required the reader to look at the references; per WP:SUMMARY "Longer articles are split into sections, each usually several good-sized paragraphs long". It's more of a legitimate section now, and it isn't long.
Diff · History -2,634 International reactions switch to transclusion (minor substantive change resulting from merging summary here with lead there)
Diff · History 500 restore ref
Diff · History -160 Domestic reactions: accidental pic
Diff · History -10,393 Domestic reactions: switch to transclusion (no substantive change)
Diff · History -5,403 Aftermath: switch to transclusion (no substantive change)
Diff · History -6 Political, legal, and social repercussions: ce
Diff · History 3 Political, legal, and social repercussions: avoid word repetition
Diff · History 34 merge reactions with aftermath per September 11 attacks#Aftermath (reactions are also an aspect of the aftermath)
Diff · History 19 Aftermath: wiki
Diff · History 873 Aftermath: add summaries of legislation section from aftermath article
Diff · History 0 Aftermath: word choice; avoid too dense linking
Diff · History -2 Aftermath: word choice
Diff · History 0 Aftermath: ce
Diff · History 6 Aftermath: more relevant wiki
Diff · History 0 Aftermath: move pic
Diff · History 550 Aftermath: ref from impeachment
Diff · History 160 Aftermath: add a random aftermath pic
Diff · History -1 Aftermath:
Diff · History 1 Aftermath: ce; forgot to mention - previous edit was based on a discussion: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_United_States_Capitol_attack#Cont._-_in_light_of_the_Aftermath_AfD; and previous discussions around ideas about length and summarizing
Diff · History -26,402 Aftermath: move to daughter article has been finalized; leftover duplicate content is replaced with a reworked lead of the daughter article; rem too long template
Diff · History -8,308 Arrests: move to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029580728&oldid=1029580336
Diff · History -2,117 Lawsuits: move section to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029580336&oldid=1029579088
Diff · History -1,454 Senate investigation: move to corresponding section of Criminal charges brought in the 2021 United States Capitol attack -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Criminal_charges_brought_in_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029579557&oldid=1029563162
Diff · History -2,637 Independent commission: move comission to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029579088&oldid=1029578153
Diff · History -1,684 Aftermath security measures: move security bill to aftermath article -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029578153&oldid=1029576658
Diff · History -8,846 move Completion of electoral vote count to Aftermath of the 2021 United States Capitol attack -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Aftermath_of_the_2021_United_States_Capitol_attack&type=revision&diff=1029576658&oldid=1029424057
Diff · History -1 Aftermath security measures: ce
Diff · History -347 Aftermath security measures: bit more shortening
Diff · History -1,881 Social media bans: move parler scraping to main content location -- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Parler&type=revision&diff=1029430902&oldid=1029429476
Diff · History -208 Aftermath security measures: shorten travel restrictions
Diff · History 2 moved misinformation from aftermath to domestic reactions where I believe it belongs, and consistently with main reactions article
Diff · History 88 Lawsuits: add main
Diff · History 131 Aftermath: add covid main
Diff · History 0 Misinformation about attackers: --> Misinformation about the event; better reflects actual scope of section
Diff · History 2 Aftermath: arrests as subsection of investigations (consistent with main article)
Diff · History -2 Arrests: not a subsection to the aftermath security response
Diff · History -1,069 Arrests: rem warnagiris, covered in main (move videos and refs there)
Diff · History 104 Arrests: add main
Diff · History -193 Social media bans: rem one wrong further link; parler main
Diff · History 220 Social media bans: add main
Diff · History -3 Scrutiny of police response: main instead of further
Diff · History 1,262 Social media bans: readd from aftermath article because this section is so brief and a heading is needed for the main template which is due
Diff · History 0 Aftermath: order: move impeachment up (importance)
Diff · History 1,252 Aftermath: add brief resignations section (can be further shortened but a heading is needed for the main template); reorder according to what's more natural and consistent with aftermath article
Diff · History 24 Aftermath security measures: upd link
Diff · History 424 Social media bans: add further
Diff · History 112 Aftermath security measures: add main march 4
Diff · History 0 Congress proceedings -> official proceedings
Diff · History -18 trim synonymous methods (rioting = mob violence)
Diff · History 346 readd obstr. of jutice to ibx-methods after 2nd guilty plea
Diff · History 1 lead: order: deaths -> injuries (a universal convention)
Diff · History -6,800 Weapons used: trim; the molotov guy should be merged with the mention of eleven molotov cocktails up above
Diff · History 17 ToC depth limit: 3; easier to navigate and to spot the main section (Attack on the Capitol building)
Diff · History 95 State capitols and cities: add main (lvl 4 subsection of protests article); see also for inaug. week protests -> wiki
Diff · History -236 Aftermath: bit of picture overload, moving stacked pic to aftermath main which should be expanding on this section
Diff · History 158 added "severing of corporate and other ties" to infobox bc significant consequences for trump (deutsche bank etc); link to aftermath section
Diff · History -176 rem repetition – consolidate FBI Dec 29 warning (overcite now, someone should review)
Diff · History 43 Manual revert of 1005239994 by Yodabyte Despite the bombs not being at the Capitol grounds, planting of bombs is still considered a part of this event; conclusion to be derived from Chrisahn's post is not that bombing be removed from methods but that the location be corrected in the lead.
Diff · History 0 mv militia link from bottom up
Diff · History 73
Diff · History -110 mv "anarchy" to terminology (media discourse); rem undue mentions of outlets and undue weight on outlets being foreign (UK & Canada); rem dubious "many" /* Reactions */
Diff · History 4 phrase not term /* Terminology used to refer to event */
Diff · History -32 moved damage to damage line in infobox
Diff · History -156 indiana converted to mention (no incident) /* State capitols and cities */
Diff · History 0 moved pic up /* State capitols and cities */
Diff · History 3,300 restored peaceful states, just mentioning them by name /* Events outside Washington, D.C. */
Diff · History 378 Per current consensus that "Word "urge" is not to be used in lead.", I am removing the word urge and restoring Trump's "if you don't fight..." statement as reported by reliable sources in a form which is not an out-of-context fragment (WP:HEADLINES may apply), and this is in agreement with the corresponding paragraph in article body.
Diff · History -9 move pic higher /* State capitols and cities */
Diff · History 619 add ref Q 17th letter /* State capitols and cities */
Diff · History -2 link /* State capitols and cities */
Diff · History 396 move sentence about subsequent development to bottom /* Events outside Washington, D.C. */
Diff · History -1,143 refactor (bullets), word order/* State capitols and cities */
Diff · History 26 methods: fix link & capitalization
Diff · History 18 add demonstration to methods
Diff · History -4 method: civil disobedience -> civil disorder (both are good IMO)
Diff · History 0 bracket
Diff · History 0 comma
Diff · History 60 fix link
Diff · History -58 Undid revision 1004947912 by Alalch Emis (talk) bad link
Diff · History 58 (reverted)  added big lie to methods (method of political subversion)
Diff · History 19 refname big lie multi
Diff · History 229 blist methods and categorize in 2 basic categories; fleshed out the political subversion methods; removed "gun violence" (not supported; mix-up of who did the shooting perhaps); per RfC changed "tactics of terrorism" (pleonasm because methods = tactics in this context so it's like methods: methods of terrorism) to terrorism
Diff · History 19 refname
Diff · History -28 infobox: execution-style murder -> lynching (much more appropriate/factual)
Diff · History 1 add bracket; tactics of terrorism and listing of these methods is now particularly supported by the RfC close – do not revert; discuss pls
Diff · History 5 correct link for bombing to tac. of terr. #bombing
Diff · History 13 chrisahn you are wrong, that is not how methods work methods are in the ABSTRACT; changed "intention to" to alleged to reflect this as well; shootings > gun violence
Diff · History 29 manual revert of 1004540969 -> failure of trump supporters, consistent with lead & other articles on civil disturbances etc.; do we have an article on trump's second term presidency or dictatorship? no? so it's a failure. everyone called it a failure, it's sourced.
Diff · History 0 mv planting of pipe bombs section up, to a logical place
Diff · History 0 mv weapons cache discovery and arrest to appropriate section
Diff · History -19 what is more important – that someone attempted to bomb buildings or that bombs were found? /* Discovery of improvised explosive devices */
Diff · History -10 rem "attempted" from methods; methods are in the abstract (the *type* of chosen action/tactic, not what was done in concrete terms and whether it succeeded or not)
Diff · History -10 "The event led to the evacuation and lockdown of the Capitol" is factually inaccurate; the lockdown lasted throughout the event and lawmakers were evacuated in middle of it, so the event didn't *lead to* these things; same for deaths. Real notability needs to be established in separate sentence. What the event really "led to" is aftermath.
Diff · History -3 even if exact cause of sicknick's death is yet unknown, but for the event he would have been alive (that isn't being questioned), so he died from the event
Diff · History 0 President-elect capitalization (correct own error)
Diff · History 0 Vice-President-elect (two hyphens) not Vice President-elect, per [https://www.govinfo.gov/features/new-edition-gpo-style-manual GPO Style Manual]
Diff · History 33 link certificates of asc. in lead
Diff · History 4 joe biden
Diff · History 488 Major rewrite of 1st paragraph to establish notability in upper portion of lead per MOS:LEAD and tie it up with goals and results. it's a little longer but other paragraphs can become shorter, in time.
Diff · History 96 added bombing as the quintessential tactic of terrorism, to methods
Diff · History 87 reordered goals; impeachment closer to top because of significance; both results - consequences for Trump (impeachment and suspension from social media) codensed to one bullet; added resumption of presidential transition
Diff · History -10 shortened heading /* Attempted bombing and supply of Molotov cocktails */
Diff · History -135 clarified bombing attempt; not *suspected* pipe bomb anymore; removed repetition: night before + previous night /* Improvised explosive and incendiary devices */ -> Attempted bombing
Diff · History -12 result: vandalism already mentioned as method (it's a method and damage resulted from it) – removed; condensed damage and ransacked offices to one bullet; looting -> property stolen
Diff · History 29 result: moved delay to top of list, because it demarcates failure from success, as the most essential result, consistent with similar articles ("result: Defeat of..." etc.); explicitly noted the failure
Diff · History -275 "capture or incapacitation of lawmakers" is method not goal; goal identified in cited article as: "intention of disrupting..."; both this method and real goal are already covered, therefore removed this non-goal
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