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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Launchballer talk 17:13, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

Mike Ross (Suits)

Moved to mainspace by OlifanofmrTennant (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

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Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 22:38, 6 April 2024 (UTC).

  • Full review to follow, but I'd like to see more hook proposals before proceeding. I'm not that big of a fan of ALT0 as currently written as it requires reliance on familiarity with Suits, and ALT1 isn't really that interesting either. My suggestion would be to propose a hook or multiple hooks targeted towards those who may not know anything about the series. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:06, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
Yes, that's a much better hook. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:52, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
  • I was about to continue the review, but I noticed that there are still several incomplete sentences or writing in the article. Multiple sentences in the article, for example the last sentence of the lede, are lacking periods and seem to be unfinished. The article does meet newness requirements at least so it should be eligible for further review. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:10, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
@OlifanofmrTennant: Made a typo with the ping. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:10, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
@Narutolovehinata5: I added periods is their anything specifc that needs to be done?Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 22:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
Right now, I feel like the article doesn't meet WP:DYKCOMPLETE. There are still multiple parts that are just one or two sentences, and the part about his Suits character is still much longer than the parts about the real world (such as creation and reception). Launchballer might be able to make a better explanation though. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:13, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Hell no. This article is obviously missing information about seasons 2 and 3, which I've added empty section headers and {{expand section}}s to.--Launchballer 09:11, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: Upon reflection I think that I should not have moved this into the main space in the first place. The only reason I did so was for the wikicup which has led to me rushing out poor quality content, I feel that it should be draftied. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:31, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

I hear you. My sister was out of the house all last week so I was trying to publish an article a day, which had the effect that a) I hit the wall yesterday morning (hence why I've been ignoring Naruto's pings on his talk page), and b) I managed to publish an article on Sunday that misgendered its subject. My advice to you is to move this back to draftspace and have another crack when it's ready.--Launchballer 17:07, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
I'm withdrawing thisQuestions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:11, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

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