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GA Review[edit]
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Terry Conroy/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:18, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:18, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:41, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- in a 14-year career in the Football League It may be helpful to give the years he was active in a (x–y) form here. Something similar may look good near a seven-year international career.
- You can add "Irish club" before "Glentoran" as you have done for Waterford.
- distinctive appearance of pale skin and bright ginger hair and sideburns Maybe shorten this to "distinctive pale skin, bright ginger hair and sideburns"? (Also in "Style of play")
- Does "insurance" need a link? (Also in "Personal life")
- Ireland
- When you begin with the main article, you should write the full name of the person
- two jobs as a factory worker "...two jobs: as a factory worker..."
- Does "housekeeping" need a link?
- he was too small Too "young" if it refers to age, or "short" if it refers to height?
- Stoke City
- A few images would give this a more interesting look.
- "Friendly" may be appropriately wikilinked.
- more cartilage in his knees "from" and not "in", I think
- "John Mahoney" is a duplink
- Later career
- International career
- Both of these games...France finished third. Source?
- Duplinks: Shamrock Rovers and XI, Lansdowne Road
- Style of play
- Italics for "Daily Express".
- "Victoria Ground" is a duplink, but linking it may be relevant here
- Personal life
- Honours
No copyvio detected. Will check sources later. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:26, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Alright, done with the above issues. Moving on to sources: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:19, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
- Assuming good faith for offline inaccessible sources.
- Page ranges for refs 1 and 11?
- I expect each point in the infobox is sourced, there or somewhere else in the article?
- A note on the top of the section "International" saying ref 7 supports everything in it would be helpful, as in the preceding section.
- It is better to name the publisher properly whenever you can, instead of using the website name. For example, you can say Rec.Sport.Soccer Statistics Foundation instead of rsssf.com (ref 59)
Great, can be promoted now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:48, 11 June 2016 (UTC)