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GA Review
[edit]- This review is transcluded from Talk:Narrative structure of The Lord of the Rings/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:31, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
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- I have done a minor copyedit; feel free to discuss any changes you might disagree with.
- Thank you.
- "balanced pair...threads of story" I think semicolons would be better than commas here. Also for the body.
- Done.
- "the "Nation's best-loved book." You should mention where the survey was conducted.
- Added.
- "and the two supported each other" would be better as "and that the two support each other"
- Done.
- "inevitability of loss...fade" this is confusing, it needs a colon somewhere in there
- Edited ("like" to "as").
- The images are all licensed and used correctly.
- Noted.
- The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
- Noted.
- Spotchecks:
- Seiler, Andy (16 December 2003). "'Rings' comes full circle". USA Today. Verifies all claims made.
- Diver, Krysia (5 October 2004). "A lord for Germany". The Sydney Morning Herald. Verifies all claims made.
- Nepveu, Kate (16 December 2008). "LotR re-read: Fellowship I.2, 'The Shadow of the Past'". Tor.com. Verifies all claims made.
- Drout, Michael D. C. (2004). "Tolkien's Prose Style and its Literary and Rhetorical Effects". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
- Noted.
- That's all I have. AryKun (talk) 10:30, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
- All done to date. Many thanks for the review! Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:34, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 14:54, 28 July 2023 (UTC)