GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:04, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Infobox
[edit]- If Soul is an influence and not stated by a critic, then only Pop should be there.
- Done; added a source in the body. Till
Lead
[edit]- "No Can Do" received generally mixed reviews → "No Can Do" garnered mixed reviews
- Done. Till
- from music critics, as some felt that the song was dull, but most agreed that it was an improvement from their previous single "Girls". → from music critics; some felt that the song was dull, but others agreed that it was better than their previous single, "Girls"
- Done. Till
- it also appeared on the chart in Slovakia. → it also charted on the singles chart in Slovakia at number 53.
- Done. Till
- Link music video
- Done. Till
- Mention only live performance?
- But it's sooo minor. Till
- Doesn't matter, it was still performed live. Aaron • You Da One 11:52, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Added. Till
- Doesn't matter, it was still performed live. Aaron • You Da One 11:52, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- But it's sooo minor. Till
Background
[edit]- (2007), and the completion of the album's → (2007) and finishing its supporting tour,
- Done. Till
- Despite their announcement, they soon began work on the album. → Source?
- Done; added source. Till
- I'd change the title of this section to "Background and release"
- Done. Till
- Perhaps say what the extended play consists of?
- Done. Till
Composition
[edit]- For the audio sample, is 38 seconds 10% of 3:10?
- No it's 20% but in my defense I didn't upload it (don't know how to). Till
- You can remove it and ask someone to upload one that is 10%. It won't affect it's GA status if you do it after I've passed it. Aaron • You Da One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- No it's 20% but in my defense I didn't upload it (don't know how to). Till
- How can you use the album notes for genres?
- Lol woops, fixed. Till
- Pop and Soul are still referenced to the album notes. Aaron • You Da One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- There is no mention of Pop here, only soul. Aaron • You Da One
- Done. Till
- There is no mention of Pop here, only soul. Aaron • You Da One
- Pop and Soul are still referenced to the album notes. Aaron • You Da One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Lol woops, fixed. Till
- The single release has a length of 3:10 (three minutes and ten seconds). → This implies that the album version is different in some way?
- Fixed. Till
- According to the digital sheet music published at Sheet Music Direct by Sony-ATV Music Publishing and EMI Music Publishing, → Not needed.
- Removed. Till
- "No Can Do" samples the song "Yes It's You", performed by Tennessee artist Sweet Charles Sherrell. → Sherrel was a bassist, not a singer, and helped produce songs for James Brown, so how does it sample something of his?
- But that's what the source says. Till
- Hmm okay. I just didn't quite understand how it could be done lol. Aaron • You Da One 11:54, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- But that's what the source says. Till
- As you have included info about Keisha explaining the lyrics, I'd change the title of the this section "Composition and lyrics"
- Done. Till
Critical reception
[edit]- The reviewer from Orange → A reviewer for Orange
- Done. Till
- There a re lots of quotes, can you paraphrase some into your own words?
- ? Aaron • You Da One 11:55, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Till
- ? Aaron • You Da One 11:55, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
Commercial performance
[edit]- Why don't you use the Official Charts Company website archive for the peak instead of Musicweek? You can't get much more reliable than the Official Charts Company website.
- Why? They state the same thing. Plus Music week is just as reliable. Till
- I guess it's just because that is who is the official publisher and who I use. Aaron • You Da One 11:56, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Why? They state the same thing. Plus Music week is just as reliable. Till
- brought their total single sales to three million. → Is this over their entire career?
- Yeah but as of now it's like 4 million. Till
- "No Can Do" failed to chart on the Irish Singles Chart, becoming the group's first single since "Soul Sound" to not chart in that country. → No source, so remove.
- Done. Till
- Why not mention the European chart?
- Done. Till
Music video
[edit]- Link music video
- Done. Till
- Puig has previously created → Puig had previously directed
- Done. Till
- Perhaps add a screen shot?
- Idk how to do that. Till
- Ask someone to add one, or post a new thread on WP:Songs? Aaron • You Da One 11:57, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Idk how to do that. Till
Live performances
[edit]- No issues.
Track listings
[edit]- I'd change this to "Formats and track listings"
- Done. Till
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Vanessa Brown died in 1999, how is she credited?
- Wrong Vanessa Brown LOL. Fixed. Till
Charts
[edit]- No issues.
Release history
[edit]- No issues.
References
[edit]- I went through and corrected any that were erroneous.
- Ty. Till
- You need to to change every reference to the date format: Day/Month/Year, for example 1 January 2000 (No comma). This article is about a British group, and is written in British English, so the dates should be written in British English.
- Is this necessary? I mean people will know the date. All their articles follow the 2000-01-01 format. Till
- Yes, they are a British group, therefore the article must be 100% written in British English. Aaron • You Da One 11:58, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Done, and omg it looks so weird and ugly. Till
- Yes, they are a British group, therefore the article must be 100% written in British English. Aaron • You Da One 11:58, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Is this necessary? I mean people will know the date. All their articles follow the 2000-01-01 format. Till
- Sheetmusicdirect link doesn't go to anything. Why not use Musicnotes.com ?
- I checked but only Sheetmusicdirect has the sheet music, not Musicnotes.com (for some odd reason). Till
- It didn't open with the No Can Do page though. Aaron • You Da One 11:58, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- Ohh you mean the actual sheet music itself on the Sheetmusicdirect website? Yeah, you can only view it with this program called Scorch. Till
- Passing :) Aaron • You Da One 11:20, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Calvin. Till 11:21, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Passing :) Aaron • You Da One 11:20, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
- Ohh you mean the actual sheet music itself on the Sheetmusicdirect website? Yeah, you can only view it with this program called Scorch. Till
- It didn't open with the No Can Do page though. Aaron • You Da One 11:58, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
- I checked but only Sheetmusicdirect has the sheet music, not Musicnotes.com (for some odd reason). Till