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Muslim violence against hindus is virtually nonexistent although 15 hindus died because of muslim violence. Muslim mobs were seen firing gun shots. The article has a lot of assumptions favouring the muslim community. As an example, in one place, the violence by muslim mobs is justified as a necessary step. Is this a personal blog? Chanting of jai shri ram by violent hindu mob is mentioned, but the chanting of allah hu akbar by violent muslim mob is nowhere to be seen. [[User:Quanta127|Quanta127]] ([[User talk:Quanta127|talk]]) 16:41, 23 April 2020 (UTC) |
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1RR now in effect
Please be mindful, everyone. El_C 14:39, 29 February 2020 (UTC)
- Can this fact be included in a new section or mentioned somewhere in the article. Zikrullah (talk) 18:03, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is noted in in the article whenever one edits, in Template:Editnotices/Page/2020 Delhi riots, as well as at the top of this talk page in Template:IPA AE. El_C 18:52, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
"POV-embattled," by the way, means battlements of POV dot, litter, even crisscross the topic. This is long, but please bear with me. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:56, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- Stage 1
The lead which is locked in the article right now is a summary of the topic, not the main body. It has due weight and overall reliability. In Stage 1, we have cited and summarized content from newspapers:
- (a) which have correspondents based in India.
- (b) whose articles (which are of interest to us) have bylines (i.e. the name of the correspondents shows up below the title of their story) and
- (c) which are published in liberal democracies where there is no significant POV around this issue. (i.e. South Asian newspapers have been ruled out at this stage.)
We have cited from: NYTimes, Washington Post, Independent, Guardian, Times (London), and Le Monde. (There are obviously others as well, which we did not use. I will make a list elsewhere of newspapers which have correspondents based in India.)
By definition, the lead will not have all the notable details. The sources it cites may not have all the notable details either, because their main audience (an international one) may not be conversant with, or generally interested in, all local details. For expansion, therefore, you will need to look at the reliable high-quality Indian sources whose perspectives match the one in the lead, which now serves as a template of DUE.
- Stage 2
In my view, for recent Indian events just six national newspapers in India are enough for fleshing out the details:
The Statesman (Kolkata, founded 1875/1817), The Hindu (Chennai, founded 1878), The Free Press Journal (Mumbai, founded 1928), The Indian Express (Delhi, founded 1933), Deccan Chronicle (Hyderabad, founded 1938), and The Telegraph (Kolkata) (founded 1982)
- Question: Why bother to write such a lead in the first place?
- Answer: Because if we don't, we will not have a DUE summary of the topic against which to measure the neutrality of our additions. Later, when a topic becomes older, text-books, other encyclopedias, reviews of literature, and so forth, become available for determining DUE, but for now, there is nothing else. Also, as the lead is what people read first, and sometimes, they read no further: it is important for it to be comprehensive and neutral, especially when the rest of the article is not.
- Question: Why start with only these six Indian newspapers?
- Answer: Because these newspapers have old traditions of excellence and independence. As print newspapers based in different regions of India, they necessarily have to summarize—in the multi-ethnic Indian context—in a manner that local or digital newspapers do not.
As an example, consider the "peace marches" in the New York Times story, which have been paraphrased in the lead as:
After the violence had abated in the thickly-settled mixed Hindu-Muslim neighbourhoods of North East Delhi, some Hindu politicians paraded alleged Hindu victims of Muslim violence in an attempt to reshape the accounting of events and to further inflame hostility towards Muslims.[1]
References
- ^ Gettleman, Jeffrey; Yasir, Sameer; Raj, Suhasini; Kumar, Hari (12 March 2020), "'If We Kill You, Nothing Will Happen': How Delhi's Police Turned Against Muslims", The New York Times, Photographs by Loke, Atul, retrieved 13 March 2020,
The religiously mixed and extremely crowded neighborhoods in northeastern Delhi that were on fire in late February have cooled. But some Hindu politicians continue to lead so-called peace marches, trotting out casualties of the violence with their heads wrapped in white medical tape, trying to upend the narrative and make Hindus seem like the victims, which is stoking more anti-Muslim hatred.
There are stories about one peace march on February 29 in:
- this Deccan Chronicle story (with byline, )
- this Hindu story (with byline, )
- this Indian Express story (with byline )
- this Statesman story (by their web desk, not OK)
- The Telegraph (Kolkata) Press Trust of India (PTI) feed, (not OK)
- The Telegraph (Kolkata) signed article by Pheroze Vincent, printed two days later ( )
These should, therefore, be used to further expand the topic of peace marches, at least one peace march. Similarly, determining whether there were other marches, before or after, will require examining these sources for other dates.
- Stage 3
- After the main body is fleshed out in such fashion, the lead should be rewritten by summing up the main body. No footnotes, let alone extended quotes, will then be required in the lead unless a statement is highly controversial. But for now, they are essential.
In the language of artificial intelligence, the stages are 1: The lead is written using sources that are relatively low-res (or high-level (OED: high-level: relating to or concerned with a subject, system, or phenomenon as a whole, rather than its particular details.), or macro-level). 2. The main body is fleshed out using sources that are high-res (low-level, micro-level), but in keeping with the content of stage 1 (i.e. DUE). 3. The lead is rewritten as a low-res/high-level version of the main body.
Good luck, @SerChevalerie, NedFausa, SharabSalam, Kautilya3, Slatersteven, and DIYeditor: Pinging also: @RegentsPark, Abecedare, DougWeller, El C, Anachronist, Drmies, Johnbod, Bishonen, and Vanamonde93: Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:56, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- Fowler&fowler, thanks. SerChevalerie (talk) 14:34, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
- Even though you haven't pinged me, I have been keeping this talk page in my watchlist. You did very well! Thank you, Fowler&fowler. --KartikeyaS (talk) 08:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Fowler&fowler's List of foreign newspapers with correspondents in India
Dear @SerChevalerie, NedFausa, SharabSalam, Kautilya3, Slatersteven, DIYeditor, and KartikeyaS343: Pinging also: @RegentsPark, Abecedare, DougWeller, El C, Anachronist, Drmies, Johnbod, Bishonen, and Vanamonde93: Collapsed below is a list I had mentioned above. It is much bigger than I had thought, and there are still some (Haarets, Jerusalem Post, in Israel, South African newspapers) which I have not examined. Still, used judiciously, it may prove useful in the future. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:34, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- PS I have not added the links/urls for newspapers that rigorously require a subscription, only the titles of the stories. (It is easier to search the title on Google.) If someone wants small blurbs from them, I'm happy to provide them. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:44, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
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Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:34, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
Proposed removal of a sentence from the lead
I propose removal of a sentence from the third para of the lead. Following is the sentence:
"When in response to Mishra's ultimatum, Hindu men began to gather, violence erupted."
This sentence is unsourced and there is no reliable source present in the adjacent sentences to confirm the authenticity of this statement that Hindu men began to gather in response to Kapil Mishra's ultimatum and as a result, violent erupted. In fact, in his ultimatum dt 23rd February 2020, Mishra had said that he and his men are retreating and will remain silent until Trump leaves the country. Trump left India on 25th February but riots began on 23rd February itself. -Yoonadue (talk) 10:08, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- I applaud Yoonadue for raising this issue here, where it belongs, after yesterday falsely calling it spam and then edit warring over its restoration. Questioning this sentence is important because it directly ascribes the deadly violence to an individual, Kapil Mishra, whom we name. The nearest following inline citation is to a perennially reliable source, The New York Times, which does not name Kapil Mishra. It does, however, mention "members of Mr. Modi's party who have been widely accused of instigating the recent violence in Delhi." (For the record, Kapil Mishra and Prime Minister Narendra Modi both belong to the Bharatiya Janata Party.) Please note the hyperlink within the quoted passage; it redirects to an earlier story in The New York Times that does name Kapil Mishra. Following his "fiery speech" of February 23, The Times reports: "Within hours, the worst Hindu-Muslim violence in India in years was exploding." The Times does not expressly say that Hindu men gathered in response to Mishra's ultimatum or that violence erupted because of his fiery speech. The Times does, though, strongly insinuate such causation. As Wikipedians adherent to WP:Libel, we must ask ourselves if this is good enough to, in effect, indict Kapil Mishra for inciting murderous rioting. I think not. The disputed sentence should be promptly rewritten or removed. NedFausa (talk) 17:51, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
- In response to the above note and a message on my talkpage: Libel seems to be a stretch given the cited article saying,
When the violence started on Feb. 23 — as Hindu men gathered to forcibly eject a peaceful Muslim protest near their neighborhood
, especially when that is read in context of the earlier NYT article that Ned pointed out, which is devoted to analyzing Mishra role as the alleged instigator. Nevertheless, out of an abundance of caution, I have for now modified the language in the sentence to indicate only a temporal connection between the speech and the violence, rather than a causal one. Editors are welcome/encouraged to discuss and decide, what exact phrasing is preferable and what sources should be cited; my ad hoc word-choice need not be given any extra weight, although please leave it in place till an alternative gains consensus. Abecedare (talk) 23:46, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
@ Abecedare,
The new version of the sentence as edited by you is as follows:
After Mishra's ultimatum, Hindu men began to gather and violence erupted. This is a very slight change in the original sentence and hence it doesn't settle the issue. What you have presented from a source in support of the sentence is this :
When the violence started on Feb. 23 — as Hindu men gathered to forcibly eject a peaceful Muslim protest near their neighborhood
I am sorry but this source doesn't imply that after Mishra's ultimatum, Hindu men began to gather and violence erupted. If we go by local sources, Hindu men had gathered before the said ultimatum and minor stone pelting might have happened from both the sides. But after police intervention and Mishra's ultimatum (related to Trump's visit), Hindus had retreated. This indicates that the lethal violence was actually initiated by the Muslim rioters. However, we don't have sources to support this statement as well. Thats why I have proposed to remove the said sentence rather than making a change to it. -Yoonadue (talk) 03:18, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Please give me some time. I will post here later today and give you a summary of what of the foreign sources say (in Stage 1) and the notable Indian ones do (in Stage 2). Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:54, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoonadue: Sorry for the delayed response but, as I indicated above, the issue is best discussed with other involved editors (who I am glad to see are already engaged) and I, as an admin, don't get to decide the content by diktat. A couple of general tips though:
- If you refer to local or other sources, specify and (ideally) link to them, so that others can examine the quality of sources and what exactly they say.
- If "we don't have sources to support X statement", don't bring X statement into the discussion. That just detracts from the task of analyzing and summarizing what the best sources on a topic say, which is what wikipedians do.
- Abecedare (talk) 13:40, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoonadue: Sorry for the delayed response but, as I indicated above, the issue is best discussed with other involved editors (who I am glad to see are already engaged) and I, as an admin, don't get to decide the content by diktat. A couple of general tips though:
Fowler&fowler's Foreign newspapers and other media in India on the event(s) leading to the riot
- As promised I have collected all the reliable foreign sources. Here they are. There are a lot of them; they will need to be summarized with prudence and common sense. Good luck. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:32, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
Foreign newspapers and other media in India on the event(s) leading to the riot
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What the local sources say
- Clash erupts between pro & anti CAA groups in Jaffrabad area, The Economic Times, 23 February 2020.
Shaan (28), a resident of Kabir Nagar, said the situation escalated after BJP leader Kapil Mishra tweeted that he would hit the streets. "It was then that the stone-pelting began from their side. The other side also responded and the situation flared up," he said.
- Who failed Delhi?, India Today, 6 March 2020.
At around 1.22 pm, Mishra tweeted for his supporters to reach the venue, telling them that if the police couldn’t stop the public road from being blocked, the people would. By 3 pm, a large group had gathered and begun shouting slogans against the anti-CAA protesters. According to a police assessment, Bhim Army supporters first pelted stones on the pro-CAA group at 4.42 pm, and they in turn chased them away with sticks and stones.
- Jeevan Prakash Sharma, Delhi Riots 2020: Who Fanned The Flames of Hatred? Is Kapil Mishra Only To Blame?, Outlook, 9 March 2020.
“I heard him talking to people. Yahi sahi mauka hai. Isse bhuna lo. Ab chook gaye to dubaara mauka nahi milega. (This is the right time. Exploit it. If you miss it, you won’t get another opportunity),” Ahmed says, quoting what he claims to be Mishra’s conversation. Mishra apparently left around 4:30 pm. According to Ahmed, “I saw them sending messages from their mobile phones. I left after about an hour or so and later came to know that riots have broken out.”
-- Kautilya3 (talk) 08:02, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- What do non local sources say?Slatersteven (talk) 10:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- The non-local sources were accurately summarised by Abecedare. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 10:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Then I would go with those, they are more neutral.Slatersteven (talk) 10:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- The non-local sources were accurately summarised by Abecedare. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 10:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- What do non local sources say?Slatersteven (talk) 10:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
No one is denying that Kapil Mishra tweeted and gathered Hindu men; stone pelting too occured from both the sides. But when Police intervened, the stone pelting was stopped and he gave an ultimatum that they are going back until Trump leaves. Please re-read the sentence being discussed here. Its clear misrepresentation of sources as no source says that Hindu men gathered in response to his ultimatum. -Yoonadue (talk) 10:15, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Kautilya3 Why are you citing local sources? The principal author of the lead has already decreed that such sources may not be used in his lead. You're merely confusing the issue. This is unconstructive. NedFausa (talk) 17:15, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Proposed correction of riots' duration in infobox
March 1 date
All the available sources say that the duration of riots was 3 days ie 23 Feb to 25 Feb 2020 but the infobox in our article says 23 Feb to 1 March (7 days). Even the cited reference states riots duration to be 3 days and what happened on 1st March was nothing but rumour. Therefore, I propose correction in riots' date and duration in the infobox. -Yoonadue (talk) 12:56, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- Yoonadue, please refer to the section 2020 Delhi riots § 27 February to 1 March specifically the part that mentions
In the Welcome area, one shop was set on fire on 1 March.
Do you have any better WP:RS for the same? SerChevalerie (talk) 14:37, 11 April 2020 (UTC)- I removed the reference from the date parameter of the Infobox because it fails to support riots continuing through 1 March 2020. I left the time interval template intact but added {citation needed}. The previously cited source situates the deadly riots between February 23 and 25; it reports a shop set afire on Saturday, February 29, but that by itself does not constitute a riot. We need a more definitive reference here. NedFausa (talk) 15:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- NedFausa, thank you, I had completely missed this while adding the information. SerChevalerie (talk) 15:56, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- To begin with, this paves the way for a discussion on the removal (or moving) of the subsubsection dedicated to "1 March". SerChevalerie (talk) 16:00, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- As it stands, 1 March contains just two sentences, the first dealing with rumors and the second recounting closure of seven metro stations for an hour. This is trivial stuff. I support quick removal of that subsection on grounds of being not noteworthy. NedFausa (talk) 16:10, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- I support this change. (If the information is deemed worthy in the future, it can always be pulled from the history). SerChevalerie (talk) 16:34, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- As it stands, 1 March contains just two sentences, the first dealing with rumors and the second recounting closure of seven metro stations for an hour. This is trivial stuff. I support quick removal of that subsection on grounds of being not noteworthy. NedFausa (talk) 16:10, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- To begin with, this paves the way for a discussion on the removal (or moving) of the subsubsection dedicated to "1 March". SerChevalerie (talk) 16:00, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- NedFausa, thank you, I had completely missed this while adding the information. SerChevalerie (talk) 15:56, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- I removed the reference from the date parameter of the Infobox because it fails to support riots continuing through 1 March 2020. I left the time interval template intact but added {citation needed}. The previously cited source situates the deadly riots between February 23 and 25; it reports a shop set afire on Saturday, February 29, but that by itself does not constitute a riot. We need a more definitive reference here. NedFausa (talk) 15:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- FYI. If anyone has a reasoned objection to the substance of the edit (ie, not just a procedural objection), please let me know on my talkpage, and I'll revert it so that it can be discussed first. Barring that I'd like to keep the admin mitts minimally involved with the page. Happy editing. Abecedare (talk) 20:33, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
- Dear Abecedare I object, and object strenuously. I have no idea how long the violence lasted, precisely. But the peremptory declaration of consensus by NedFausa—who otherwise has been proclaiming "As a practical matter, I no longer believe it's possible to change 2020 Delhi riots through a process of proposal and consensus"—a mere six hours after a post is made is not in keeping with any Wikipedia policy that I know. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:31, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- And Yoonadue what is it you do not understand about summarizing sources? Just a couple of days ago, I gave you dozens of reliable sources in the sections above (see Talk:2020_Delhi_riots#Fowler&fowler's_List_of_foreign_newspapers_with_correspondents_in_India and Talk:2020_Delhi_riots#Fowler&fowler's_Foreign_newspapers_and_other_media_in_India_on_the_event(s)_leading_to_the_riot). I have offered to give you blurbs about a topic from those that require a subscription. These sources do not point to any consensus about the duration of the riots to be precisely three days. Summary style, or precis writing, is an art, not a science. You are attempting to do a double distillation, that of the lead, which is already a distillation, in one or two words in an infobox, and are citing it to one random source, which is not the most reliable. I am not saying you are wrong or right, but thus far in the discussions in this talk page, you have done nothing but open new threads that dispute nothing but little details. Admin Abecedare has already told everyone, as a matter of advice, to focus on the main body, but this advice is going unheeded. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:38, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Dear Abecedare I object, and object strenuously. I have no idea how long the violence lasted, precisely. But the peremptory declaration of consensus by NedFausa—who otherwise has been proclaiming "As a practical matter, I no longer believe it's possible to change 2020 Delhi riots through a process of proposal and consensus"—a mere six hours after a post is made is not in keeping with any Wikipedia policy that I know. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:31, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
I would like to highlight a few points from the discussion User Talk:Fowler&fowler § 2020 Delhi riots edit objection, just to add some more perspective on the issue:
- By F&f: "There are all sorts of dates and time frames given for the riots. We, for example, say that mobs of Hindu were going around Muslim neighborhoods attempting to scare Muslims out of house and home in the days leading up to Holi (celebrated March 9). We mention that in the lead. So, what do we mean by putting even the date of March 1 as the last date for the riots? I mean, do we mean, killing? Do we mean intimidation by mobs with threats of death? If the former, what date do we assign to the decomposed bodies found in the fetid canals for days afterward; if the latter, then even March 1 is too soon."
- By admin Abecedare: "I agree with your position that it will be hard/impossible to nail down any single date as the definitive end-date for the riots... while the discussion on what the final arrangement should be takes place. That final choice could be between excluding dates altogether from the infobox; keeping it really vague "around end-Feb 2020"; slightly vague "Feb 23 to approx March 1"; reflecting the range of dates offered by sources, eg, "3-10 days starting Feb 23"; providing the most common end-date in the infobox and detailing the complexity in a footnote etc."
Personally I agree with the temporary solution "Feb 23 to approx March 1" offered by Abecedare. SerChevalerie (talk) 12:02, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- In the meanwhile, I second F&F's suggestion to add the Diplomat source in the infobox in place of the "cn" tag. SerChevalerie (talk) 12:05, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Sorry, I did not see this. I meant (and I've corrected on my user talk page) using the citation: Singh, Jasminder (3 April 2020), "The 2020 Delhi Riots: Implications for Southeast Asia", Diplomat, retrieved 12 April 2020,
Quote: Between February 23 and March 1, mobs of Hindus and Muslims clashed, resulting in dozens of casualties, while vehicles, shops, and houses were razed to the ground. In all, 53 people were killed, mostly Muslims.
, but adding {{Better source}} to call the attention of others, to make it known, that the source "is not unimpeachable," as admin Abecedare so felicitously put it on my user talk page. Best regards, Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:51, 12 April 2020 (UTC)- That sounds good. SerChevalerie (talk) 17:28, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- SerChevalerie: Please be so kind as to explain why you endorse including March 1 in the Infobox's time interval template. The suggested citation comes from The Diplomat, an international online news magazine based in Washington, D.C. Its author, a senior analyst at a think tank in Singapore, refers to "the February 2020 sectarian violence"—not the February–March 2020 sectarian violence. He does state that mobs clashed "between February 23 and March 1," but it's unclear to me at least whether that means clashes occurred from February 23 through March 1 or February 23 to March 1—i.e., February 23 through February 29.
- This ambiguity implicates undue weight, which directs:
Neutrality requires that each article…fairly represent all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources, in proportion to the prominence of each viewpoint in the published, reliable sources.
Is March 1 proportional to the prominence given to that date by a cross-section of reliable sources, or is it what our policy describes as a minority view? Bear in mind, we are proposing to situate this date not buried in body text but within the Infobox, which stands in a prominent place near the top of Wikipedia's 2020 Delhi riots page. The inclusion of {Better source} does not mitigate the undue weight we would accord to March 1 by citing a minority view. NedFausa (talk) 18:15, 13 April 2020 (UTC)- NedFausa, I guess I should have clarified, I only support this proposal on a temporary basis. I still think we should include Abecedare's "Feb 23 to approx March 1" suggestion with F&f's source and a {Better source} tag until we can analyse the sources and clearly determine the exact date. SerChevalerie (talk) 19:34, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- SerChevalerie: I oppose your proposal to support "Feb 23 to approx March 1" by citing a source that does not use any form of the word approximate. I object on grounds of WP:SYNTH, which directs:
Do not combine different parts of one source to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by the source.
Ambiguity ≠ approximate. And again, the {Better source} tag fails to mitigate this issue. Since you readily acknowledge we need a better source, why not find one? NedFausa (talk) 20:11, 13 April 2020 (UTC)- That makes sense, thanks for pointing that out. SerChevalerie (talk) 04:14, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
- SerChevalerie: I oppose your proposal to support "Feb 23 to approx March 1" by citing a source that does not use any form of the word approximate. I object on grounds of WP:SYNTH, which directs:
- NedFausa, I guess I should have clarified, I only support this proposal on a temporary basis. I still think we should include Abecedare's "Feb 23 to approx March 1" suggestion with F&f's source and a {Better source} tag until we can analyse the sources and clearly determine the exact date. SerChevalerie (talk) 19:34, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- That sounds good. SerChevalerie (talk) 17:28, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- Sorry, I did not see this. I meant (and I've corrected on my user talk page) using the citation: Singh, Jasminder (3 April 2020), "The 2020 Delhi Riots: Implications for Southeast Asia", Diplomat, retrieved 12 April 2020,
Fowler&fowler's foreign sources about the duration of the 2020 Delhi riots
Here are some newspaper and media sources from North America, and the UK. They are all over the place, from two to six; the median seems to be four. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:48, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
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Fowler&fowler«Talk» 00:48, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
All the facts are put in wrong way
This has been made Uneditable because the facts here are put in wrong way. CAA nowhere is Muslim opposite bill. Riots was not Hindu attacking Muslim. Nowhere AAP MLA Tahir Hussain mentioned. Add the lady who was arrested from JNU. All fake. Karuna0585 (talk) 03:50, 15 April 2020 (UTC) — Karuna0585 (talk • contribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic.
- And none of your claims are backed up by reliable sources. Provide those, and your suggestions can be considered, but as you presented them, they're useless. ~Anachronist (talk) 04:19, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
Comment
The article is totally fake it doesnt recognise the person tahir Hussain [BLP violation redacted Doug Weller talk 11:55, 17 April 2020 (UTC)]. Neither there is any report that suggest that killed persons was from Hindu and Muslim community. This article is totally fake... Badshah3956 (talk) 04:57, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
- Badshah3956 Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources state about article subjects. If you have suggestions for specific changes to the article that are supported with independent reliable sources, please offer them. Please also understand that this is a very controversial subject and collaboration amongst people of differing viewpoints is required. 331dot (talk) 10:06, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
- 331dot, the above section has a very similar comment by a different user. I think both accounts belong to the same person.--SharʿabSalam▼ (talk) 10:10, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
- Agree we go wit what RS say.Slatersteven (talk) 10:11, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Lets not start to discus users conduct here. And lets not make reports based on flimsy evidence.Slatersteven (talk) 10:31, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Enforcement of our WP:BLP policy on this page
You simply cannot accuse living or recently deceased people of crimes for which they have not been convicted, and this includes starting riots. You can discuss reliable sources (not Opindia or Swarajya please) that discuss them, but that's the limit. Doug Weller talk 12:04, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Are these sources applicable here?
There is a comment by a guy named Doug Weller about reliable sources.
Rajdeep Sardesai - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rajdeep_Sardesai
1- He stated on twitter that After spending a day on streets of NE Delhi,my takeaways 1) this is a Hindu Muslim riot in which BOTH communities have been involved in terrible acts of violence. Street Protests, provocation, attack, retaliation, a cycle of violence was unleashed.Tough to say who ‘started’ it.
link-https://twitter.com/sardesairajdeep/status/1232701219711463428
2- BBC - sixth paragraph- Access to these areas was severely restricted on Tuesday, when most of the violence took place. Judging by the names released so far, both Muslims and Hindus are among the dead and injured. link- https://www.bbc.com/news/world-asia-india-51639856
3- ‘Trapped for 45 minutes’ “Around 3 p.m., Muslims started throwing stones and eventually Hindus retaliated. My other family members and I who were at the shop managed to go to one of our shops on the street and went to the terrace. We were trapped there for about 45 minutes. I took multiple videos and photographs,” he said while showing them. In the videos, rioters wearing masks and holding sticks were seen throwing stones.
“When I started taking videos, Shahnawaz hid himself,” alleged the 25-year-old.
The police also said that during investigation, eyewitnesses had found him as the ‘main aggressor’.
4- Damage worth crores, AAP MLA’s ‘apathy’ In Shiv Vihar, several shops and homes owned by Hindus were torched on 24 February. Residents alleged that the incineration continued until Thursday morning.
Anil Sharma owned three shops that were set afire — Anil Sweet Corner, Anil Pastry, and a workhouse for both of them. Sharad Kumar, who was employed at the workhouse, told ThePrint: “A mob from the nearby Aqsa Masjid surrounded us from the afternoon of 24 February, and then burned everything down in the next 4-5 hours with petrol bombs and acid bottles. They caused damage of more than a crore to the shops, as each shop had materials worth Rs 40-50 lakh each.”
Sharad continued: “A Muslim mob from adjoining Mustafabad area kept coming back to throw stones and petrol until this morning (Thursday), after which we recovered mutilated bodies of workers which were trapped in a nearby building and workshops.”
5- Locals said a large Muslim mob from Mustafabad, which is across a small bridge over a narrow drain from Brijpuri, started pouring in and throwing stones.
"It was chaotic and loud, and we rushed out from our homes to see what was happening," said Sharma, who was with Rahul at the time.
"We hadn't even clearly understood what was happening when a bullet fired from the mob on the other side hit him. He cried out 'oh brother' and collapsed. We rushed him to a hospital but he couldn't be saved," Sharma added.
link- https://www.france24.com/en/20200228-in-delhi-two-tales-of-one-deadly-riot
6- With death staring at them after armed rioters had marched through Shiv Vihar and started setting homes and shops ablaze on February 24, the three women — and hundreds of Muslim and Hindu families — had fled their homes and reached the adjoining neighbourhoods of Mustafabad, Chandu Nagar, Chaman Park, all predominantly Muslim pockets.
Similarly, a large number of Hindu families whose homes have been torched have taken shelter in temples and in the houses of their relatives.
- Its hard to judge without really knowing what you want to use them for. But (for example) the BBC source is very dated and can hardly reflect what we now know.Slatersteven (talk) 14:40, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
are you saying Hindu deceased might come back to life, and I want that the lead which mentions that only Hindu mob attacked Muslims using the word chiefly to be made neutral as few sources mention that Muslim mob from Mustafabad attacked Hindus. France24 link also mentions about Muslim mob.
- We do not say only Hindu mobs. And so I am not saying people can come back to life, I am saying that a source that is out of date cant be used to reflect current knowledge. If I find a source form 1939 saying that X number of RAF pilots have been killed that can only be used for 1939.Slatersteven (talk) 14:55, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Are you or other Wikipedia account holders include in this article that Muslim mob from Mustafabad attacked Hindus? Sources given above.
Another source mentions mob from Aqsa masjid without mentioning religion of mob.
- Does it matter where they attacked from?Slatersteven (talk) 16:23, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- Hi Zubisko, please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. Regarding your question about WP:RS, please refer to the section on this page § Fowler&fowler's: Developing the article main body, and eventually rewriting the lead (in POV-embattled India-related articles). As for your suggestion, I would firstly like to clarify that the article does not mention that Hindus were not attacked; rather the lead, too, clearly states that while more Muslims were killed, Hindus were also among those murdered. As for the specific text you highlighted, can you please suggest where it could be added in the main body of the article? SerChevalerie (talk) 16:32, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
It should be added in first paragraph that Muslim mob from Mustafabad attacked Hindus as mentioned in sources.
And the page should also mention that Hindu victims took shelter in temples from telegraph source given above, as the main picture is about Muslims taking shelter in temples in tents.
Where it should be mentioned should be decided by those who are editing the article, but these facts should be included.
Of the 53 people killed, two-thirds were Muslims who were shot, slashed with repeated blows or set on fire. This line about how Muslims were killed suggest as if Hindus were killed in less brutal manner or in soothing way.
Which is not, as "The Crime Branch has arrested an accused in connection with the murder case of a man in Gokulpuri, whose body was found in mutilated condition in Anil Sweet House, Brijpuri on February 26 following violence in the national capital, police said. The accused and deceased have been identified as Mohammad Shahnawaz (27), a resident of Shiv Vihar and Dilbar Negi (22), respectively. Negi’s body was burnt by a mob of rioters after cutting off his hands and feet. Six months back, he had come to Delhi from his native Uttarakhand to get employed."
link- https://theprint.in/india/crime-branch-arrests-shiv-vihar-resident-for-murder-of-uttarakhand-man-in-delhi-riots/377284/ Zubisko (talk) 16:55, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- "And the page should also mention that Hindu victims took shelter in temples from telegraph source given above..." Done in "Aftermath" section SerChevalerie (talk) 17:16, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- Why do we need to know where they came from, do we say where the Hindu attack came from?Slatersteven (talk) 17:23, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- Zubisko, you allege that "This line about how Muslims were killed suggest as if Hindus were killed in less brutal manner or in soothing way." However, please read the entire first paragraph, which says,
Of the 53 people killed, two-thirds were Muslims who were shot, slashed with repeated blows or set on fire. The dead also included a policeman, an intelligence officer and over a dozen Hindus, who were shot or assaulted.
As for your statement that "Where it should be mentioned should be decided by those who are editing the article..." please read and follow WP:Edit requests guidelines. Your suggested changes must be in a "Change X to Y" format (along with reliable sources). SerChevalerie (talk) 17:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- Zubisko, you allege that "This line about how Muslims were killed suggest as if Hindus were killed in less brutal manner or in soothing way." However, please read the entire first paragraph, which says,
- Why do we need to know where they came from, do we say where the Hindu attack came from?Slatersteven (talk) 17:23, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 19 April 2020
This article is completely out of facts and can't be trusted. News citations are missing and most of the language written seems personal statements. 122.172.74.123 (talk) 19:22, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- This isn't an edit request. You need to explain exactly what changes you would like made to the article. Black Kite (talk) 19:34, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 23 April 2020
"groups of violent Hindu men attacked Muslim houses and businesses for three days, often firebombing them with cooking gas cylinders and gutting them without any resistance from the police." The whole narrative is written as if the Muslims were victims. However the video proofs were released for Tahir Hussain keeping a lot of petrol bombs in his home and even participated in violence. Please check below video, from 2:50 and the evidence is clear that the riot was pre-planned by few master minds from Muslim religion. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJBV6psKEZo&list=LL80BYtvuBBRdMtvqyJxEq0w&index=3&t=0s If the riot is not preplanned by Muslims why they had acids and petrol bombs in large numbers ready ??
"23 February and incitement" to "17 February and incitment" Proofs were released for Mr.Umar Khalid provoking the mobilisation of muslims even before the 23 February incident written in the article. On 17th Feb the incitment happened. Check 2:03 in below video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJBV6psKEZo&list=LL80BYtvuBBRdMtvqyJxEq0w&index=3&t=0s
By the end the whole article is written with conspiracy theory alone in mind. Single sided to show Muslim as victims while the video proofs were available that this wasn't the case. Please read the case history once. Rajag89 (talk) 03:16, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
- Please read wp:rs.Slatersteven (talk) 09:38, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
- Not done. It's not clear what changes you want to make. –Deacon Vorbis (carbon • videos) 15:11, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
This page violates wikipedia community standards. Extremely biased towards one community
Muslim violence against hindus is virtually nonexistent although 15 hindus died because of muslim violence. Muslim mobs were seen firing gun shots. The article has a lot of assumptions favouring the muslim community. As an example, in one place, the violence by muslim mobs is justified as a necessary step. Is this a personal blog? Chanting of jai shri ram by violent hindu mob is mentioned, but the chanting of allah hu akbar by violent muslim mob is nowhere to be seen. Quanta127 (talk) 16:41, 23 April 2020 (UTC)