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== Jennison ==
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I think this needs rewritten in a form that useless less words of opinion. I found the same problem in the article that sent me here, on General Lewis Armistead, where this battle, w/o citation or evidence, is referred to as "senseless," surely a word of opinion.
I think this needs rewritten in a form that useless less words of opinion. I found the same problem in the article that sent me here, on General Lewis Armistead, where this battle, w/o citation or evidence, is referred to as "senseless," surely a word of opinion.


[[Special:Contributions/129.62.200.171|129.62.200.171]] ([[User talk:129.62.200.171|talk]]) 21:01, 26 April 2011 (UTC)rrr
[[Special:Contributions/129.62.200.171|129.62.200.171]] ([[User talk:129.62.200.171|talk]]) 21:01, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

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Good articleBattle of Malvern Hill has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Jennison

I have removed the claim about Private Edwin Jennison being the youngest casualty of the war. My references do not mention him and the link provided to PS 110 does not claim he was the youngest. This link -- http://sciway3.net/proctor/marion/military/wbts/edwin.html -- claims that his name was actually Jemison and that he was 17. We can put something back in if we get some better references because the photo of this soldier is quite famous. Hal Jespersen (talk) 15:08, 28 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Broken Link

This link comes up as not found, although it goes to the right site:

Glendale and Malvern Hill battlefields at the Civil War Preservation Trust

The error says that the page is currently not available. I'm not sure if they moved it permanently or temporarily. Bill the Cat 7 (talk) 21:07, 5 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Hal Jespersen (talk) 13:50, 6 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Too opinionated?

I am certainly no expert on this battle and Lee's tactics were certainly questionable. However, the battle would seem to have accomplished something since, "Despite his victory, Maj. Gen. George B. McClellan withdrew . . ."

I might not have ventured a comment, but there is also a clear misuse of the word "untenable" in the AFTERMATH section, drawing into question the professionalism of the article.

I think this needs rewritten in a form that useless less words of opinion. I found the same problem in the article that sent me here, on General Lewis Armistead, where this battle, w/o citation or evidence, is referred to as "senseless," surely a word of opinion.

129.62.200.171 (talk) 21:01, 26 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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