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*::::I also preferred the lead as it was, it was concise and I don't think the details about Love Me Do and Capitol's albums are necessary for it. Also - "the first pop act since Buddy Holly to issue an album of all-original compositions" is not mentioned in the article, nor is it true. [[Billy Fury]] wrote all of the songs on ''[[The Sound of Fury (album)|The Sound of Fury]]'' (1960). The same goes for the descriptively-named ''All My Own Work'' by [[Jerry Lordan]] (1960). Additionally, there are no all-original Buddy Holly albums. [[User:Humbledaisy|Humbledaisy]] ([[User talk:Humbledaisy|talk]]) 09:06, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
*::::I also preferred the lead as it was, it was concise and I don't think the details about Love Me Do and Capitol's albums are necessary for it. Also - "the first pop act since Buddy Holly to issue an album of all-original compositions" is not mentioned in the article, nor is it true. [[Billy Fury]] wrote all of the songs on ''[[The Sound of Fury (album)|The Sound of Fury]]'' (1960). The same goes for the descriptively-named ''All My Own Work'' by [[Jerry Lordan]] (1960). Additionally, there are no all-original Buddy Holly albums. [[User:Humbledaisy|Humbledaisy]] ([[User talk:Humbledaisy|talk]]) 09:06, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
*:::::Thanks. I've reverted it back to a four-paragraph format. The only major difference now is a sentence about the retirement from live performances, which I strongly believe should have been in the lead long ago, but for whatever reason wasn't. [[User:ILIL|ili]] ([[User talk:ILIL|talk]]) 14:31, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
*:::::Thanks. I've reverted it back to a four-paragraph format. The only major difference now is a sentence about the retirement from live performances, which I strongly believe should have been in the lead long ago, but for whatever reason wasn't. [[User:ILIL|ili]] ([[User talk:ILIL|talk]]) 14:31, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
*:::::: Thanks [[User:Patthedog|Patthedog]] ([[User talk:Patthedog|talk]]) 15:58, 7 May 2022 (UTC)

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"best-known line-up"

That's ridiculous.--Jack Upland (talk) 05:49, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I agree, it’s a farcical statement for the lead. It makes the group sound like a revolving door band. The Beatles always was, always will be, JPGR. WWGB (talk) 06:28, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Not so. Pete Best was a Beatle for their most crucially formative two and a half years and certainly shouldn't be overlooked. His fantastic bass-drum driven style was instrumental (so to speak) in concatenating that unique sound during their Hamburg period. All Ringo had to do was slip into Best's seat and play likewise, which is evident if you've studied the early recordings. Just because the Beatles have gone to extremes to erase Pete Best doesn't mean Wikipedia must comply. Too bad Wikimedia doesn't have any photos of Best with the band considering how many exist, or do they get quickly yanked down if they appear? Racing Forward (talk) 21:30, 16 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. That said, I'm struggling to think of another way to phrase it that doesn't give the impression Pete and Stu weren't members of the Beatles.Humbledaisy (talk) 12:23, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I found a similar issue when writing their song list a few years ago. I originally had "Throughout their career, every band member contributed to songwriting," but somehow at FLC pointed out Stu and Pete were officially members, so I changed it to "Following their signing with EMI in 1962, each member of the "Fab Four" contributed to songwriting.", although now it's "...each member of the Beatles contributed to songwriting". I agree using the phrase "best-known lineup" for the Beatles is rather preposterous. It's a similar equivalent to Rush or Beastie Boys, who made records with other members besides Alex, Geddy, and Neil or Mike D, Ad-Rock, and MCA, but really to most people those are the only members; and for the Beatles, it'll always be JPGR like WWGB said. We definitely should find another way to word it. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 16:54, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't understand the issue. The Beatles had many different line-ups, but most people only know the "Fab Four". It's an immutable fact; not something that can be debated or interpreted another way. Are we afraid of confusing readers who don't know that the Beatles weren't always JPGR? WP:OVERSIMPLIFY: "It is important not to oversimplify material in the effort to make it more understandable." ili (talk) 19:53, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think the issue was neatly resolved with this change back on Jan 15 --John (User:Jwy/talk) 23:16, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not an improvement IMO, if only because it makes the second sentence a run-on. Another good reason was noted in 2020 by @Bookman1968:

In the second sentence, the two clauses are a textbook example of some common fault I can't name. An exemplar is "Polly, being born with ginger hair, is thought of as the best Chancellor of the Exchequer of all time." These are unrelated ideas that should at least be two sentences.

I agreed with the editor and thought that the simple solution was to move the mention of the four members by name into the first sentence. ili (talk) 01:24, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
What I liked about the Jan 15 edit is that avoided the "best-known lineup" bit by saying it was the four that were famous and had a big impact on music, avoiding "membership" issues. I had missed the grammar problems. If we can resolve the grammar issue and use that idea, I think we have improvement. --John (User:Jwy/talk) 03:33, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't and don't agree that listing the four in the same sentence as saying the Beatles are "regarded as the most influential band of all time" is such a "textbook example", as Bookman1968 defined it. For a band to achieve any sort of standing, it does require individuals (and it's often said that the Beatles were more than the sum of their parts). But for an individual to become the best Chancellor of the Exchequer of all time, they don't need a head of hair, either at birth or while in office. The Polly example therefore makes no sense at all; I don't know if "non sequitur" would best describe the illogical effect.
Not saying that the wording to which Bookman1968 was opposed was ideal, by any means, but come on, it was nowhere near the glaring error ("textbook example") that was suggested. JG66 (talk) 04:21, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Rockers Island, Ringo Usher

This island was purchased by Ringo Usher is 1987. Guityrocks (talk) 21:26, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 17 April 2022

2A02:C7C:5A04:4E00:B413:5C4F:A9E7:2B42 (talk) 15:24, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Should read ‘British’ group rather than ‘English’ as at least one founding member ‘Stuart Sutcliffe’ was Scottish, so you have him as being part of an English band? Needs to be amended. Thanks.

 Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}} template. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 15:27, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Short description

I’m wondering why the short description reads 1962-1970 rather than 1960-1970. Surely it should be the latter? Humbledaisy (talk)

Someone's mistake, presumably. ili (talk) 14:22, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead improvements?

Hi,

With regards to your recent improvements to the lead you need to tighten things a little more please. The success of Love Me Do led to them releasing a second single, Please Please Me. And the success of that single prompted EMI to push for the album of the same name. Atm it just jars. And besides, I did prefer it as it was but if you feel the need then please get it right. Thanks Patthedog (talk) 17:14, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

That's why I changed it to "was followed by". We probably don't need every single listed, but noting the first two albums is sufficient. --Jayron32 17:34, 6 May 2022 (UTC)
Except PPL (single) was even more successful than LMD (number 1). It was that event that led to the album, so what happens if you try and tweak stuff it then gets complicated. That's why it was fine before - don't try and blame me when you get called out.Patthedog (talk) 17:50, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

I've copied the above from Jayron's talk page as I think it ought to be on the record here. Patthedog (talk) 17:58, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • The idea behind expanding the lead seems to be, "We need to devote more detail to all the albums they recorded, including the Capitol releases." What we end up with is a passing reference to Sgt. Pepper and three or four sentences devoted to Let It Be – and a length to rival the history of Italy. Insanity. ili (talk) 18:14, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • To add, if we must include any extraordinary/important details about the Beatles' pre-1965 albums, then I would suggest the fact that they were self-contained affairs with an emphasis on original material. See: Cultural impact of the Beatles#Cultural legitimisation of pop music. Also, it is probably lead-worthy that the U.S. received a different set of albums between 1964–66. ili (talk) 18:31, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for your changes. It looks much better now. --Jayron32 18:33, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I've incorporated the extra details I mentioned, even though it ends up breaking the fourth paragraph rule. MOS:LEADLENGTH states that the rule can be broken in some case. I think if there ever was a band who deserved more than four paragraphs, it would be this one. If this expansion is not seen as an improvement then I would not object to a revert. ili (talk) 21:35, 6 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I'd just like to reiterate that I preferred the lead as it was and it's getting flabby again. It was concise and punchy before and the risk is by adding more and more information the reader is put off going any further. If these additions aren't already in the main article then maybe put them there? Just my thoughts. Patthedog (talk) 07:31, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I also preferred the lead as it was, it was concise and I don't think the details about Love Me Do and Capitol's albums are necessary for it. Also - "the first pop act since Buddy Holly to issue an album of all-original compositions" is not mentioned in the article, nor is it true. Billy Fury wrote all of the songs on The Sound of Fury (1960). The same goes for the descriptively-named All My Own Work by Jerry Lordan (1960). Additionally, there are no all-original Buddy Holly albums. Humbledaisy (talk) 09:06, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks. I've reverted it back to a four-paragraph format. The only major difference now is a sentence about the retirement from live performances, which I strongly believe should have been in the lead long ago, but for whatever reason wasn't. ili (talk) 14:31, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks Patthedog (talk) 15:58, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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