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== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Jawshan Kabir|Jawshan Kabir]] (June 28) ==
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== Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Jawshan Kabir]] has been accepted ==
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Congratulations on the article! It was much more informative. Here is some basic followup and advice to help you with future articles and help you improve this one. Please excuse my heavy reliance on Catholic examples, but I am Catholic and I don't want to misuse examples I don't understand.
*Wikipedia has to stay neutral. This means that we cannot state the truth of any religious position in Wikipedia's voice. What we can do is say "Muslims believe", "the Catholic Church teaches", "according to the New Testament" or "Dawkins says that" and then say what they say. Note where I added this to the article. If you can give more specific in-text attribution, that would be amazing!
*When you say the "context" of a prayer, I am rather confused, could you specify? I just left those sentences as is, but they should be clarified.
*You can pipe links. This means that the text of the link need not be the title of the linked article. What you do is write <nowiki>[[name of linked article|text to appear]]</nowiki> and you have a piped link.
*I added Gabriel in parenthesis to the article text. Feel free to remove. I just thought that since anyone Christian or with a Christian cultural background will recognize that name better, it might improve comprehension for a large number of your readers.
Anyways, nice job on the article. It was a pleasure to review and accept it. Happy editing! [[user:Happysquirrel|Happy Squirrel]] ([[user talk:Happysquirrel|talk]]) 15:27, 29 June 2015 (UTC)

== How to format GoogleBooks links ==

Hello Saff, I notice that some of your footnotes are just cited as a title and "google.com". This is unhelpful because a reader can't easily see the author, date, publisher, etc. of the book.

If you have any footnote to a book on GoogleBooks, please just take the link and plug it into the tool at http://reftag.appspot.com, and it will ''instantly'' give you a fully-formatted Wikipedia footnote you can paste in. Please just take 10-15 minutes, and go to the articles you have published so far, and use that tool to format your footnotes so they are nice, clear, and full. That way too, if the link is ever broken (due to websites changing), readers can still see exactly what book you mean, and find a better/current link. It's a ''very'' useful tool and I use it all the time, so good luck with it! [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 02:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

::Thanks for the useful link and tool.[[User:Saff V.|Saff V.]] ([[User talk:Saff V.#top|talk]]) 09:46, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

==Talkback==
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:{{ping|Mhhossein}}Thanks for your help. I have a question. What is orphan and what should I do?[[User:Saff V.|Saff V.]] ([[User talk:Saff V.#top|talk]]) 05:07, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
::This tag shows that there's no link to your article from other articles. In fact you should put the link of your article in other articles so that the readers have the chance of finding this article. [[User:Mhhossein|Mhhossein]] ([[User talk:Mhhossein|talk]]) 05:10, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
::More explanation is found [[Wikipedia:Orphan|here]]. [[User:Mhhossein|Mhhossein]] ([[User talk:Mhhossein|talk]]) 05:11, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

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:@[[User:Stfg|Stfg]] Thanks a lot.[[User:Saff V.|Saff V.]] ([[User talk:Saff V.#top|talk]]) 12:31, 4 August 2015 (UTC)

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== Supplication of Abu Hamzah al-Thumali ==

Hello, Saff V. - In response to your request of a copyedit of [[Supplication of Abu Hamzah al-Thumali]] at [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests]], I just read and did my best to copyedit the article. Since I know nothing about the subject, it was not easy. If I've made any errors, please feel free to correct them. If you wish, you can explain to me what you would like to say, and I will try to word [express] it correctly. There were two things I wasn't sure about:

1) In trying to make the second-to-last sentence of the section [[Supplication of Abu Hamzah al-Thumali#Chain of authority]] grammatically correct, I had to delete something about "confirmed" or "confirming". If that needs to be in the article, you'll have to figure out a way to express it, or try to explain it to me so that I can put it into correct English.

2) Recited at night/in the evening ''or'' at dawn or recited at night/in the evening ''and'' at dawn? Now I've got "or" in one place and "and" at another. That's got to be made consistent. [[User:Corinne|Corinne]] ([[User talk:Corinne|talk]]) 00:03, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

:I thought of two more things that would improve the article:

1) For non-Muslim readers, you might either explain what "supplication" means in this context (that is, the particular meaning of "supplication" as it is used in this article), and/or link the word to an article or part of an article so readers can read more if they want to.

2) Also, even though the name [[Abu Hamza al-Thumali]] is linked to an article, you might think about giving a few details about when and where he lived and wrote. I don't see a single mention of a date or time period in the article. [[User:Corinne|Corinne]] ([[User talk:Corinne|talk]]) 00:09, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

P.S. Why do you have "Hamzah" in bold at the beginning of the article and "Hamza" throughout the article? [[User:Corinne|Corinne]] ([[User talk:Corinne|talk]]) 00:13, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

::{{ping|Corinne}} Thanks for your contribution in the article. In reply to your question:
1.The better sentence is ''The Shia scholars of biographical evaluation and historians believed that Abu Hamza al-Thumali's narration was accurate. If the difference appear between narrations, scholars prefer his narration and solve the problem. Also, hadiths or narration that have some connection to him are verified by scholars of biographical evaluation such as Najasi, Shaykh Tusi, Ibn Babawayh, and Ibn Shahre Ashub. The Sunni scholars have not confirmed him.'' 2. In the correct style, is better use ''or'' between these words (every night and dawn). Because the Du'a recite one time in day and [[Imam al-Sajjad]], the fourth [[Shia]] Imam , invoked the Du'a in every night or dawn of [[Ramadan]]. Therefore, The correct sentence is ''[[Imam al-Sajjad]], the fourth [[Shia]] Imam , invoked the supplication of Abu Hamza al-Thimali in every night or dawn of [[Ramadan]].'' 3. I linked the ''supplication'' word to [[Du'a]] page and in this page readers can read more information about the word. Also, I added [[Du'a]] in the see also. 4. I added Abu Hamza al-Thimali section in the article and wrote a few details about him and his character. 5. The correct spell was ''Hamza'' and ''Hamzah'' replaced with Hamza.[[User:Saff V.|Saff V.]] ([[User talk:Saff V.#top|talk]]) 10:36, 5 September 2015 (UTC)

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