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The overwhelming majority of RS reporting makes the connection cited in version '''A''' above. Please review and consider. [http://www.bbc.com/news/world-us-canada-40927089] [http://time.com/4899810/donald-trump-charlottesville/] [https://www.npr.org/2017/08/14/543418468/trump-calls-out-kkk-white-supremacists-after-charlottesville-racism-is-evil] [http://www.latimes.com/politics/washington/la-na-essential-washington-updates-trump-racism-is-evil-including-1502729266-htmlstory.html] [https://www.politico.com/story/2017/08/14/white-house-defends-trump-charlottesville-241604] [https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2017/aug/14/donald-trump-charlottesville-response-washington] [https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/racism-is-evil-trump-says-condemning-white-supremacists-and-hate-groups/2017/08/14/0af638a0-810c-11e7-902a-2a9f2d808496_story.html?utm_term=.9a4cd3b2da19] [http://thehill.com/homenews/administration/346483-trump-declares-racism-is-evil-after-firestorm].
The overwhelming majority of RS reporting makes the connection cited in version '''A''' above. Please review and consider. [http://www.bbc.com/news/world-us-canada-40927089] [http://time.com/4899810/donald-trump-charlottesville/] [https://www.npr.org/2017/08/14/543418468/trump-calls-out-kkk-white-supremacists-after-charlottesville-racism-is-evil] [http://www.latimes.com/politics/washington/la-na-essential-washington-updates-trump-racism-is-evil-including-1502729266-htmlstory.html] [https://www.politico.com/story/2017/08/14/white-house-defends-trump-charlottesville-241604] [https://www.theguardian.com/us-news/2017/aug/14/donald-trump-charlottesville-response-washington] [https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/racism-is-evil-trump-says-condemning-white-supremacists-and-hate-groups/2017/08/14/0af638a0-810c-11e7-902a-2a9f2d808496_story.html?utm_term=.9a4cd3b2da19] [http://thehill.com/homenews/administration/346483-trump-declares-racism-is-evil-after-firestorm].
In fact, these sources suggest we should consider adding further context to the POTUS remarks, e.g. his public approval ratings hit their lowest levels of his presidency following his initial response to Charlottesville, and that there was sharp criticism from within his Republican party. [[User:SPECIFICO |<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b>]][[User_talk:SPECIFICO | ''talk'']] 16:12, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
In fact, these sources suggest we should consider adding further context to the POTUS remarks, e.g. his public approval ratings hit their lowest levels of his presidency following his initial response to Charlottesville, and that there was sharp criticism from within his Republican party. [[User:SPECIFICO |<b style="color: #0011FF;"> SPECIFICO</b>]][[User_talk:SPECIFICO | ''talk'']] 16:12, 19 February 2018 (UTC)
::Your comment may not be encrypted but it is hopelessly confusing and completely irrelevant to this discussion. One more time - please watch [[WP:SOAPBOX]].[[User:Volunteer Marek|Volunteer Marek]] ([[User talk:Volunteer Marek|talk]]) 16:34, 19 February 2018 (UTC)


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    The title chosen for the article

    I think that the editors have done a commendable job in terms of keeping the article balanced and including all the relevant information! I have two alternative suggestions regarding the article title, though - "Race-related controversies involving Donald Trump" or "Allegations of racism against Donald Trump". I think that the current heading (while appropriate for an encyclopedia article) may leave the reader with the impression that Donald Trump is primarily known for his views on race or is an expert on human races. He is a very famous politician and businessman, but the books he has written (to the best of my knowledge) avoid the topic of race/racial differences between populations and he is not exactly a racial anthropologist like Carleton Coon, if we are to take one example of a person who has theorized about/undertaken systematic studies regarding the various human phenotypes.Oleg Morgan (talk) 18:51, 27 January 2018 (EET)

    Yeah, racial views does make it seem like he's known for his views on race.. Galobtter (pingó mió) 17:03, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Good thoughtful comments. I'm certainly open to a change. Gandydancer (talk) 17:10, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The current title is not precise, but I struggle to find a better one that is both precise and concise. The most accurate would something like History of racially-provocative remarks and racially-motivated actions by Donald Trump.- MrX 🖋 17:17, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Except while correct technically, it gives the impression its historical, rather than its actual use which is to indicate 'This is a history of (up until the present time) racial issues involving dondald trump'. How about 'Donald Trump's racial controversies'. Every one of them has caused a controversy at some point, either legally or in the news. And there is no argument that its due to him (regardless of his actual intent). The better sources (that bring all the incidents together) clearly indicate its a pattern of controversial racial-based actions/statements (its not a 'view' for example, when you refuse to rent houses to black people, it is however a racially-based controversy). Only in death does duty end (talk) 10:21, 29 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you all for the nice comments and the feedback offered! I like the other suggestions provided and am actually still undecided as to what the best title would be. I think that History of racially-provocative remarks and racially-motivated actions by Donald Trump accurately describes the scope of the article, though for the sake of neutrality the words "allegedly" or "purportedly" may need to be added as well. However, as rightly pointed out, the heading in question is not concise enough.Donald Trump's racial controversies would probably be a good compromise.Oleg Morgan (talk) 12:40, 29 January 2018 (EET)
    I think Donald Trump's racial controversies would be an improvement. Gandydancer (talk) 18:43, 30 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I also don't like "racial views of Donald Trump", something like "accusations of racism against Donald Trump" would be better. Racism is inherently irrational and arises from ignorance, stereotyping and prejudice, not from having "views". Better still, delete the whole bloody thing and merge it back into the Donald Trump article. The article got Afd'd, and while the admin judged the consensus correctly, the consensus was not a correct application of wikipedia policy regarding WP:POVFORK and WP:BLP. There really is no precedent on wikipedia for an entire article dedicated to whether a living person is or isn't a racist. 222.153.254.63 (talk) 22:59, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Among the alternative titles offered, Accusations of racism against Donald Trump matches article content most closely. — JFG talk 07:32, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Donald Trump, racial issues would be the even better as some are far more than just 'accusations'. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 13:56, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I think we should keep the current title. It is neutral, unlike "controversies" or "accusations" or "allegations". And it leaves room for the other side, i.e. his own and others' defenses of his views, which are absolutely required to be included by Wikipedia policy. MelanieN alt (talk) 17:19, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I didn't realize this discussion was still ongoing. I agree with Oleg and JFG and support Accusations of racism against Donald Trump which is what comprises this article. If the article was actually about his views, they certainly are not given proper weight. The article includes some of his denials in response to the racist allegations against him by journalists and pundits, not actual his views (as in POV), most of which are actually supported by his actions, and the lede would read much differently - certainly not weighted so heavily with allegations of racism by op eds and commentary from news orgs and advocacies. Atsme📞📧 18:19, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Agreed. Accusations of racism against Donald Trump covers the content already in the article but is a more neutral title. Lin4671again (talk) 19:03, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Absolutely not. This article is not about accusations; it's about Trump's 45 year documented history of racially-provocative remarks and racially-motivated actions. The word "accusations" is an expression of doubt in this context, and completely inappropriate for neutral encyclopedia.- MrX 🖋 20:18, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree. BTW, at one point I said that Donald Trump's racial controversies would be an improvement. What with a few weeks of working on the article I've changed my mind and now feel that what we've got is the best title for the article. Gandydancer (talk) 21:11, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    'Controversies' or 'issues' would be the best for accuracy, for neutrality, and for being most comprehensive scope, IMO. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 00:26, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I think Accusations of racism against Donald Trump would be an improvement and fit more with what we actually have in the article. PackMecEng (talk) 21:13, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You may think that, but it wouldn't conform to WP:NPOV or WP:TITLE. It also starts to brush up against WP:NOR.- MrX 🖋 21:53, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I frankly don't understand the argument. What's wrong with giving the article a descriptive title? That is absolutely part of our titling policy. This article documents multiple accusations of racism, that's what the title should describe. When you say "no, it documents a long history of racist actions by Donald Trump", you are simply embracing the POV of his accusers. On the contrary, very little in the article purports to document Trump's "racial views", because he hasn't really expressed any consistent views on the topic, therefore the current title is inadequate. — JFG talk 23:10, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    That's ridiculous. I'm embracing the reliable sources for crying out loud. And my argument is very easy to understand. This article is about Trump's racial views, not other people accusations. This is not creative writing where we try to turn the tables and make the so called accusers look like the bad guys.- MrX 🖋 00:21, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    MrX, we're not supposed to make anyone look like the "bad guys"...including Trump. I am dismayed by your comment. We're supposed be writing from a NPOV, and for you to say things like "creative writing" and "turn the tables" is very disconcerting. I counted 5 editors who indicated support for Accusations of racism against Donald Trump. Atsme📞📧 02:12, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Opened a move request, to see where we stand. — JFG talk 02:39, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    State of the Union speech

    @PackMecEng: what makes you think this is "undue"[1]? zzz (talk) 01:14, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    A few things really.
    -One probably best not to quote Think Progress for the type of partisan institution that it is.
    -Two generally not good to list being endorsed by someone as something controlled or targeted by that person. Like we don't list Duke's endorsement of Trump as a candidate for example since he was someone that Trump did publicly denounce.
    -Three comments by Jason Johnson seem undue in general, not very notable.
    -Finally the view that the state of the union was racist is a minority view over all and not widely covered.
    Just not a major story that holds weight that shows racial views of his. PackMecEng (talk) 01:26, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I summarised the Time source; I make no judgement on the notability of (blue-linked) people included in that source. Other sources can be added also, so I don't agree that it's "not widely covered". zzz (talk) 01:35, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    See Google ""americans are dreamers too"" - 226,000 results. [2] including all the main Reliable Sources (plus Fox, Breitbart etc.) zzz (talk) 01:56, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah because that was part of the speech. From the whole first page of that google result none of them mention racism and only Mother Jones mention Duke. PackMecEng (talk) 02:03, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The first one on the list, CNN says "some... thought it marginalized immigrants". I would say that is clearly in scope for this page, even without the "R" word. CBC's article is entitled "'Americans are dreamers, too': Trump ditches the fog horn for state of the union speech" and subtitled "Trump's line on immigration called 'remarkable' and 'intentionally divisive'" - again, obviously relevant for this article (and also mentions Duke). Etc. etc. WHITE SUPREMACISTS PRAISE TRUMP FOR HIS 'AMERICANS ARE DREAMERS, TOO' REMARK White Nationalists Celebrate Trump’s ‘Americans Are Dreamers, Too’ SOTU Linezzz (talk) 02:15, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The CNN quote you mention was not by CNN, they were quoting twitter. Not really applicable or particularly damming. Never really heard of CBC before, they are state sponsored right? But anyhow the quotes from there are again from twitter, same guy are before and same issue with citing Duke as listed above. I should point out divisive does not equal racist. The Newsweek source seems to cover it, but they still seem to be the minority view. The Daily Beast just points out people parroted it, with no commentary on it. Again these do not hold much weight for such a divisive claim that it was a racial statement. PackMecEng (talk) 03:57, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    No one is claiming it is a majority view that it was divisive. It doesn't need to be. It is reported that many people saw it as divisive. In my opinion that is enough to cover it in this article. I'm ok to wait and see what others think. zzz (talk) 04:07, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    If I am shown wrong that is fine. Hopefully some others will chime in with their thoughts. PackMecEng (talk) 04:10, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    This remark was discussed on Washington Week in Review with Robert Costa and other prominent journalists: "And from the State of the Union, the Democrats were really unhappy with the president’s rhetoric on immigration, and they were also unhappy that he appropriated the “dreamer” line, you know. That was one of the big lines from the speech, “Americans are dreamers too.” That incensed a lot of people." So it seems to me that this establishes the fact that it is an important issue and it actually goes far beyond the "Pretty Korean lady" remark which was overwhelmingly thought to be appropriate for the article in our above discussion. I also want to mention that it is a mistake IMO to insist that unless the word "racist" is mentioned we can't use the incident. All the better if one can find a notable person that uses the word (as I did when I added Mark Shields comment to the Elizabeth Warren section), but it was considered a racist viewpoint even without Shield's comment. I strongly favor including this information that has been deleted. Gandydancer (talk) 19:28, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I don't think either of us were saying that sources must include the term racist. But that it would support Trump having a racial view, which this clearly does not. Incensed people does not equal his racial view. PackMecEng (talk) 19:40, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The Time source states "Immediately, critics, journalists, activists and other commentators took to social media to question the phrase “Americans are dreamers, too,” suggesting that it amounted to a racist dog-whistle against immigrants." Which is corroborated by white supremacists' support for the phrase. zzz (talk) 11:36, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "Incensed people does not equal his racial view." Sure, as long as you separate this latest event from everything that's gone on before it. Of course Trump wouldn't admit that the Dreamers catch phrase had anything to do with the drug smuggling, raping, lazy Mexicans - no more than he and the birthers would admit that their opinions had anything to do with the fact that Obama was a black man. Gandydancer (talk) 16:13, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm relatively new to Wikipedia but I understand something about original research and having to have claims properly sourced. The claim that the phrase "Americans are dreamers too" is racist can only be supported as such if reliable sources say that the phrase was racist. Of course there is bound to be someone somewhere who would claim that Trump was being racist if he asked for sugar for his tea, but I doubt that sad individual would count as a reliable source. Trumps use of the phrase "Americans are dreamers too" was a clever turning of a phrase the Democrats had been trying to use for their own political ends, but to suggest it was racially motivated is clearly nonsense - had he said "White Americans are Dreamers too" I would conceded the phase is racist, but "Americans are dreamers too"? Incredible! So unless there are reliable sources that support the notion that the use of the phrase was racist, it should definitely not be included in this article. Lin4671again (talk) 16:38, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    There are reliable sources (see above). The question is, I suppose, is there enough of them. I would say yes, there are. zzz (talk) 16:52, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You are missing my point - I said "So unless there are reliable sources that support the notion that the use of the phrase was racist.." I know there are many sources that us the phrase but are there any reliable sources that suggest that the use of the phrase was 'racist, racially-charged or racially motivated" - if not the information is not relevant to this article or the article scope needs to be broadened by editing the first sentence. Lin4671again (talk) 17:04, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    No, I got your point. "Immediately, critics, journalists, activists and other commentators took to social media to question the phrase “Americans are dreamers, too,” suggesting that it amounted to a racist dog-whistle against immigrants" (see above). Critics, journalists, activists and other commentators think the use of the phrase was racist, racially-charged or racially motivated. zzz (talk) 17:08, 10 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    zzz there are only two objections to your edit. I think you should re-add it. Gandydancer (talk) 02:02, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    So two are for it and two against and that is consensus? PackMecEng (talk) 02:12, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Count three against. The mental gymnastics to construe anything Trump says as racist are truly mind-boggling. "Americans are dreamers too", sure, clever pun on DACA, no race involved. Did you know that American citizens come in all sizes and colors? — JFG talk 02:28, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "The mental gymnastics to construe anything Trump says as racist are truly mind-boggling." So, do you have some examples in mind, of statements falsely construed as racist? Or are you merely saying that, in your opinion, this particular statement is not racist, and so it should not be mentioned? Can you explain how that is consistent with WP:NOR? zzz (talk) 16:26, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @Signedzzz: Well, we are possibly drifting into OR or FORUM territory, but let's take a well-known example: many commenters have been accusing Trump of racism because he embraced and amplified the birtherism claims. However, how is that more racist than using the exact same political smear against a very white adversary like Ted Cruz? Trump attacks everybody irrespective of race, gender or political party. So, when he attacks a black politician like Barack Obama he is considered racist, and when he attacks a female politician like Hillary Clinton he is considered misogynist. When he attacks a conservative politician like Jeb Bush or Ted Cruz, he is considered a traitor to Republican values. When he attacks a veteran like John McCain he is considered disrespectful to the military. But when he praises Martin Luther King, when he hires Ben Carson, is he racist? When he appoints Nikki Haley or Linda McMahon, is he a misogynist? When he wants a military parade, is he smearing the military? (Oh right, then he's a childish dictator…) Everything he does is viewed under a lens of evil symbolism, and that is quite puzzling to observe for a dispassionate outside observer of American politics. — JFG talk 23:21, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Back to the direct question raised, indeed I totally fail to see how "Americans are dreamers too" can be construed as racist. There are certainly plenty of pundits who "hear a dog whistle" but this analogy is getting really tired. — JFG talk 23:24, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, you don't think birtherism is racist, I forgot that. Back to the question of the SOTU, you don't think that was racist either. However, as you say, there are plenty who do, so that should be stated in this article. Any RS that agree with you can also be added, of course. zzz (talk) 23:30, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Obviously, everything we document in the encyclopedia must be properly sourced. We must still be aware that not everybody agrees that all utterances by Trump must have malevolent undertones. The birtherism affair has certainly been exploited by people with racist motives, I do not dispute that. I'm only stating that Trump has used similar weapons against all his opponents, so that cannot be taken as evidence of racism. — JFG talk 01:42, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:NOTFORUM. Please don't talk about what you don't understand. Tell us what RS report. SPECIFICO talk 00:05, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for the condescension, always a pleasure. — JFG talk 01:36, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    So you have no constructive suggestions based on RS that would support your benign view of what RS cited here describe as POTUS' racist postures and policies? If so, let's move on. SPECIFICO talk 02:10, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It comes down to this is a undue addition of a almost fringe viewpoint. PackMecEng (talk) 02:13, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The subject of this thread is the remark "Americans are dreamers too". Many editors agree that construing this as racist is, as PackMecEng eloquently stated, "an undue addition of an almost fringe viewpoint", so there is no consensus to keep it in the article; indeed let's drop this and move on. — JFG talk 02:26, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Removal of Palm Beach clubs

    @Signedzzz: Why did you remove this section? Consensus at Talk:Racial_views_of_Donald_Trump/Archive_1#Palm_beach_clubs was to include. --Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 13:10, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I actually did not notice the talk section. I removed it because it all seems to hang on other clubs not allowing blacks or Jews, but the refs don't confirm this. Another problem is stating that it "has been called "one of the more Jewish-friendly clubs on Palm Beach"" when that is not actually a direct quote, and the person who expressed the opinion is just someone who was strongly in favour of moving the embassy to Jerusalem, not a huge fan of Mar-a-lago specifically. zzz (talk) 14:45, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Do you support having the section included in someway but reworded or are you totally against its inclusion? --Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 14:50, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I certainly don't think it deserves a section, that is why I moved it to the "Defenses" section before deleting it. If you have a source that directly confirms the racism of the other clubs, then I have no objection. zzz (talk) 14:59, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I felt it was appropriate. I read the refs and what we have at Mar-a-Lago and it is my impression that it was a smart move on his part, besides the fact that he needed to open his place to those other than the old wealthy aristocracy if he wanted to get clientele, rather than a moral position. Never the less, he apparently did open his club to all. No one came right out and said that the other clubs don't allow Jews, though it was inferred. I wish we could find a good factual site on the subject as well... Gandydancer (talk) 15:43, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Having looked at the text, I think it does not currently belong in the article. I also don't see where it's declared "consensus". SPECIFICO talk 21:11, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "But Trump undercut his adversaries with a searing attack, claiming that local officials seemed to accept the established private clubs in town that had excluded Jews and blacks while imposing tough rules on his inclusive one. Trump’s lawyer sent every member of the town council copies of two classic movies about discrimination: “A Gentleman’s Agreement,” about a journalist who pretends to be Jewish to expose anti-Semitism, and “Guess Who’s Coming to Dinner” about a white couple’s reaction to their daughter bringing home a black fiance." from [3] describing how Trump had to fight for his inclusive club in a way that the private clubs that excluded black and Jewish people didn't have to fight. Lin4671again (talk) 21:44, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    From the same article: "Wyett, who is Jewish, said he would hear Trump talk with pride about Mar-a-Lago’s nondiscriminatory policy, but wondered if it was a business strategy: “Was he smart enough to realize that Palm Beach is about 40 percent Jewish and he was not going to attract the old guard anyway?”" I have already done a revert today, but that addition to the lead definitely needs to be reverted.zzz (talk) 21:59, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Really? Is this article just setting out to deal with the evidence that suggests that Trump is racist or is it trying to deal with all evidence? Had you said you felt the addition should be moved to the 'Defences' section I may have thought the latter....Lin4671again (talk) 22:15, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The following text should be removed from the opening sentence of the lede: but, also, in the 1980's he turned his Mar-a-Lago mansion into an inclusive private club at a time when Palm Beach private clubs excluded black and Jewish people,[5] and in 2017 unequivocally stated that "racism is evil". SPECIFICO talk 23:31, 11 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree. This is anecdotal and does not belong in the lead. Trump's public remarks and actions are far more noteworthy than what someone claims they heard Trump say with pride.- MrX 🖋 00:36, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    What about outside of the lead? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 14:23, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Do you lot think that we should include this somewhere outside of the lead? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 22:15, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    S--thole remark

    The following edit(s) were removed from the article:

    "A conservative editor and former Peace Corps alumnae reported that her tour in Senegal was marred by public hygienic practices including defecating in public.(ref)Karin McQuillan (January 9, 2018). "What I Learned in the Peace Corps in Africa: Trump Is Right". American Thinker. Retrieved February 11, 2018."(endref)

    and

    "In 2015, prior to Trump's alleged comment, the New York Times reported that open defecation was widespread in many underdeveloped countries, specifically citing those in sub-Saharan Africa.(ref)Rick Gladstone (June 30, 2015). "Dirty Water and Open Defecation Threaten Gains in Child Health". New York Times. Retrieved February 11, 2018.(end ref)

    These were deleted with the notation WP:SYNTH (which I take to mean no WP:OR).

    The first edit relays a widely circulated email documenting a Peace Corps (now conservative editor of notable online magazine) narrative of her experience with fecal matter in Senegal during her overseas assignment. I don't see where reporting this is WP:OR. The Peace Corps alumna was demonstrating, rather successfully, I thought, of the literal truth of the remark. It was circulated sufficiently that snopes investigated it. Snopes agrees that she made the statement, which is why I'm offering no link to snopes, since the truth is in the citation itself.

    The second NY Times comment on Sub-Saharan Africa popped up during my online search. It, too, suggests the same literal interpretation of Trump's remarks.

    How are either of these WP:SYNTH? They are both accurate. They both support his remark. Neither is WP:OR. Student7 (talk) 00:11, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Using the first source would not constitute original research, but it would be WP:UNDUE. The second source is unusable because it makes no mention of Trump's racial views and it predates the shithole remark.- MrX 🖋 00:24, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    How is the Peace Corps observations, widely circulated on the internet, and even reviewed for accuracy by snopes (who has a large in-basket), and who edits a notable magazine, "undue?"
    I suppose I could pin the NY Times citation on Trump's remarks themselves, though he doubtlessly used other sources in identifying these countries as "s--holes." It cannot be proven that Trump's remarks derived specifically from the NY Times, but it seems to me to have been taken from the same sources. When people defecate outside in front of foreigners, it's going to be noticed. The fact that the NY Times and Trump wandered upon the same facts independently seem irrelevant per se and not WP:OR but rather the reverse. Same conclusions given the same facts. Student7 (talk) 03:20, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Please read WP:WEIGHT WP:SYNTH and WP:NPOV before returning to this article or talk page. I am not doubting your good intentions, but the text is rather obviously inappropriate and it's important you get up to speed on basic editing principles. SPECIFICO talk 03:38, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "Widely circulated on the internet" does not factor into content decisions. If you want the material in the artilce, you have to show that it (Trump's not racist because of the shortage of bathrooms in Africa) represents a significant viewpoint covered in reliable sources. Unfortunately, a blog post by peace corps volunteer Karin McQuillan does not satisfy that requirement.- MrX 🖋 12:29, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you MrX.
    Let's say I said you were "short," and we both agreed that "short" was a pejorative. Let's say I found a WP:RS that said you were 4'11". While that might not prove that you were "short" according to everyone's definition, it would put the remark into objective, rather than subjective, context. Note that the date of the reliable source would not be germane. The measurement could have taken place prior to my observation. Your height would still be the same. The RS would not have to include the gratuitous commentary that their measurement therefore "supports" or "refutes" my observation. It would simply be objective data.
    McQuillan was writing in the American Thinker, a notable online publication. The subtitle heading is "Journalists and pundits." I suggest that McQuillan fits this description. It is not clear to me that I am "trying to prove" Trump is anything but accurate in his description. Whether he is "racist" or not is somewhat beyond documenting one remark one way or another. The citation tends to indicate that he was objective in this one remark, anyway. The New York Times article does the same, and is way more objective since they weren't trying to prove that anyone was bigoted or free from bigotry. They were just reporting the facts gathered by WHO. Student7 (talk) 19:39, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Not everything written in a notable publication gets WP:WEIGHT in any particular WP article. Please review the links I referred to above. SPECIFICO talk 19:44, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Trump's immigration plan

    Given the overtones of racial bias/preference in the current Trump immigration plan, perhaps more should included in this article?

    https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/wonk/wp/2018/02/06/trump-immigration-plan-could-keep-whites-in-u-s-majority-for-up-to-five-more-years/?utm_term=.c3f0a67a0cc9

    http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/nationworld/politics/ct-trump-immigration-plan-white-majority-20180206-story.html

    https://www.cnbc.com/2018/02/05/trump-shoots-down-mccain-coons-immigration-daca-plan.html

    http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/americas/un-donald-trump-shithole-immigrants-haiti-africa-racist-huamn-rights-united-nations-a8155186.html

    https://www.usatoday.com/story/news/politics/onpolitics/2018/01/11/reactions-trumps-immigration-comments/1026851001/

    http://thehill.com/homenews/house/371548-gutierrez-slams-trumps-immigration-remarks-he-did-nothing-to-bring-lawmakers

    C. W. Gilmore (talk) 04:46, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    More people calling Trump's plan racist, doesn't make it so. — JFG talk 08:16, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Reducing immigration for predominately non-white countries, is racist and that is the proposed change to the immigration system, to reduce diversity in the background of immigration with such ideas as ending the lottery, etc., etc.C. W. Gilmore (talk) 21:53, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Seeking to reduce illegal immigration is not, in itself, racist. If the argument is that reducing illegal immigration will keep the USA white majority for longer, and is therefore racist, surely the corollary is also true: that to not reduce illegal immigration is also racist as it speeds the rate at which the USA will no longer be a non white majority!. Bottom line is that you can not conflate immigration and racism when both the citizenry of the USA and those trying to immigrate includes every race on earth. Lin4671again (talk) 10:30, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The proposed changes to the immigration system by Trump will have little effect on "illegal immigration" but will have the effect of reducing the diversity of "legal" immigration by end such programmes as the lottery. Trump Administration plans for immigration appears to be designed solely to reduce immigration for those 'shitehole' countries and nothing to do with "illegal immigration". According to the experts, you reduce "illegal immigration" by limiting their access to working in the USA; as first Carter and then Reagan attempted with proposals to check Social Security numbers for workers and big business interests gutted from those bills before they became law. E-verify is voluntary for employers, now if that were made mandatory, then it would reduce working illegally by up to 80%. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 21:53, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Primary sourced video

    moved to next thread below
    The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.

    I've removed a mention of Trump's "racism is evil" remark that was primary-sourced to a video of his remarks that were widely reported as dissembling and that were met with renewed criticism of his reaction to the incident. The accompanying NY Times article, which was not cited, gives the full context of that televised snippet, which RS tell us follows a pattern of brief scripted politically correct comments preceded and followed by inflammatory and controversial remarks. In the wake of the video statement, NYT reports criticism among his staff, 3 executives quitting Trump's American Manufacturing advisory council, and far-right sources who said the video remarks were not to be taken seriously. Cherry-picked primary sourced content and used out of context as SYNTH clearly does not meet our editorial policies and guidelines. If any of this is in the article, it would need to use the secondary NYT article along with the video snippet and give proper weight to the thrust of that secondary report. SPECIFICO talk 15:13, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    See my remarks below, which I was in the process of writing when your post appeared. There is no SYNTH involved in quoting a speech without comment, as my edit did. — JFG talk 15:24, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    What about Trump's views as expressed directly?

    I added a direct quote of Donald Trump saying "racism is evil", and was reverted by SPECIFICO, with an edit summary stating that the New York Times subsequently dismissed Trump's plain statement, and rejecting the source as primary. I believe that in an article titled "Racial views of Donald Trump", we should be able to document views about racism that Trump has expressed himself directly (yes, primary source, so what?), in addition to all the commentary from people who deem him racist. Removing this makes a mockery of our neutrality policy. — JFG talk 15:16, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Please put this in the section I opened immediately above to address this. BTW you did not cite the secondary source, so no you did not include any commentary or even any hint that there wasa such commentary. And the commentary is not about the label "racist" -- which we all know is a straw man. The whole reason we have this article is that his views are more nuanced and that the bare label denies our readers the detailed information they seek. You may move this reply of mine along with yours when you delete this separate section. SPECIFICO talk 15:25, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    If you feel that more context should be given, please feel free to WP:SOFIXIT. Blunt removal of this short quote was an utter violation of our NPOV policy pillar. — JFG talk 16:14, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    primary source, so what? WP:PRIMARY is policy. zzz (talk) 16:23, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Indeed, and if you read that policy, you will note that quoting a statement from someone without further comment is an acceptable use of a primary source. Otherwise we could never quote anybody. Anyway, this is nitpicking, because Trump's statement has been quoted by secondary RS, notably The New York Times. — JFG talk 17:10, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I've removed a mention of Trump's "racism is evil" remark that was primary-sourced to a video of his remarks that were widely reported as dissembling and that were met with renewed criticism of his reaction to the incident. The accompanying NY Times article, which was not cited, gives the full context of that televised snippet, which RS tell us follows a pattern of brief scripted politically correct comments preceded and followed by inflammatory and controversial remarks. In the wake of the video statement, NYT reports criticism among his staff, 3 executives quitting Trump's American Manufacturing advisory council, and far-right sources who said the video remarks were not to be taken seriously. Cherry-picked primary sourced content and used out of context as SYNTH clearly does not meet our editorial policies and guidelines. If any of this is in the article, it would need to use the secondary NYT article along with the video snippet and give proper weight to the thrust of that secondary report. SPECIFICO talk 15:13, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    There is no SYNTH involved in quoting a speech without comment, as my edit did. — JFG talk 15:24, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    SYNTH is about context, and this was used in the worst possible way from a primary source without giving our readers the benefit of the context that was readily available from the same source -- namely the article that accompanied and explained the video for NYTimes readers that day. Not good. ##. Meanwhile, it's clear that primary assertions by politicians, even in the absence of an immediate secondary contextualization such as was ignored here, are subject to widespread fact checking. And especially for those politicians who are documented by RS to routinely spread false and contradictory statments -- both about fact and about their own actions and opinions -- this use of a primary source is really not even worth the effort to discuss. A balanced NPOV account is required. In the absence of that, the primary cherry gets unpicked. SPECIFICO talk 17:50, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Oh sure, our readers can't possibly make up their mind for themselves by reading a plain quote, they need The New York Times to tell them how they should interpret Trump's remarks. I see. — JFG talk 18:07, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    That's correct. That's why we don't just cherrypick primary sources and why we rely on fact checkers and of course that still fails to address the SYNTH misuse of that primary source which is also a core no-no. SPECIFICO talk 18:12, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Cherry-picking is everywhere on Wikipedia. This whole article could be construed as a giant cherry-picking exercise (see some remarks at the AfD). In this speech, and elsewhere, Trump has explicitly condemned racism. Apparently you don't want to admit it, and you are entitled to your opinion. Let other readers see what he said and make up their mind: some will see hypocrisy, others will see common sense, and neutrality will be upheld. I'm totally flabbergasted that you are sincerely advocating to remove Donald Trump's first-person statement about racism from an article called "Racial views of Donald Trump". — JFG talk 18:26, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    That's cherrypicking from a rejected AfD, so? WP:OTHERSTUFF usw. SPECIFICO talk 19:33, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for not addressing my question. Why should Trump's publicly-expressed view on racism not be mentioned in an article titled "Racial views of Donald Trump"? — JFG talk 20:08, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I suggest you make busy with other things and let's just let other editors comment. Judging from the number of thank you pings I've received, I know there are several lurkers who will eventually share their views. Time to chill. Give it a week. (Or add the context as at the main Trump article.) Thanks. SPECIFICO talk 20:45, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with JFG it is silly to exclude Trump's statement. Sir Joseph (talk) 20:47, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Without reviewing all the sources (I am on vacation after all), I can see no legitimate reason for removing this comment, or for hedging it around with press commentary saying he didn't mean it. I think we should have the quote in the article, along with any context other than just three words (Was that the whole sentence?) I think the one notation we should add is that he said it "in prepared remarks". We all know that Trump reading prepared remarks is a very different animal from Trump speaking off the cuff, so that qualification should be included IMO. MelanieN alt (talk) 21:46, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    MelanieN, shame on you peeking here during vacation 😼. However the simple alternative is to properly contextualize POTUS' remarks, as e.g. in the Donald Trump article, using the NYTimes story that pointed to that primary source video. That way, our readers can understand what the primary source showed. In the initial insertion of the content primary-sourced to the video, the secondary article was not cited -- leaving our readers in the dark. Anyway the primary sourced bit without the secondary would be undue, since there are tens of thousands of such video clips of Trump on the internet. Why choose this one? The secondary article, not initially cited, tells us why, so we briefly summarize it. SPECIFICO talk 22:30, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Contextualize or editorialize so reader's can understand ... what? A particular POV? No. We publish in a dispassionate tone per NPOV what the article says...and keep in mind, news orgs are questionable sources when it involves opinions and not statements of fact...and it is at that point that we use intext attribution. Atsme📞📧 22:52, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Atsme my love,👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩 have you reviewed the question at hand here?
    A primary source video was used as a bare ref for one sentence uttered in the video with no context and no citation to the RS article that included the video. The article itself was not an opinion piece -- it quoted various notable individuals whose comments it summarized. SPECIFICO talk 23:08, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    This is very difficult to do when the basic facts can not be agreed upon. Establishing what the most simple baseline of factual evidence allows to build out to the most neutral point of view in the article. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 23:11, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    C.W., this thread is about a single narrow question. Whether a primary sourced cherrypicked statement should be used while omitting the full citation of the RS secondary source that published it and while omitting any of the relevant core information in that RS reference. You seem to be making a more general comment. SPECIFICO talk 23:25, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It is a general statement and one that reflects on this narrow question. Trump has made many statements and many conflicting one; they conflict either with other statements or actions so it is very difficult to develop a baseline of which is factual and which are not. This is one of those cases, the statement was made, but given other statements and other actions, is it a factual statement? C. W. Gilmore (talk) 23:54, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    "Is it a factual statement?" Well, there is no question that Trump stated "racism is evil" in the cited speech; now, some people will believe him and some won't. NPOV requires us Wikipedians not to comment one way or the other, and let readers make up their mind. — JFG talk 00:19, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Well, what does the other evidence show about how 'factual' the statement is? Do his other statements and actions contradict this statement? Does this statement fit his historical actions in business and private life? If any of these are answered in the negative, then it brings the 'factual' nature of the statement into serious question and those contradictions need to be dealt with before accepting this comment as 'factual', IMO. Consider the Access Hollywood tape which Trump later denied, which of those statements is the 'factual' one? C. W. Gilmore (talk) 00:26, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You appear to question Trump's motives or "true beliefs", that is not what is at stake here. It's a fact that he uttered "racism is evil", just as well as it's a fact he uttered "grab'em by the pussy". Each reader can make up their own mind about Trump's sincerity in both cases, that should not prevent Wikipedia from reporting what he said. — JFG talk 01:58, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    No, he's telling you it's UNDUE without the secondary source that demonstrates at least some suggestion that it's not UNDUE like other cherrypicked primary snippets and so there's what the Americans call Catch-22. You can't just grab a primary source and stick it where you please, because that fails WP:WEIGHT but if you want to claim due weight then you must cite at least one secondary source, and for some reason you decline to do so, even though it would in a sense relieve you of your immediate conundrum. SPECIFICO talk 02:25, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Dear SPECIFICO, while you seem to have time to intervene in a dialogue between another editor and myself, I'm still waiting for your answer to the central question of this thread. Again, I have no problem citing the secondary source and that is not the point. — JFG talk 02:31, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The problem with quoting Trump is that he says conflicting things [4] even on a single subject [5] so to ensure accuracy, more than a single quote is needed and it needs to be supported with actions; as with 'build the wall', that is a statement that is consistent and followed by actions, even though Mexico dos not appear willing to pay for it. The question on so many issues is which Trump quote is the 'Factual' one[6] so one must look at actions as well as the words to understand what the true intentions are and which statements to give weight worth quoting. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 14:52, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    (edit conflict)🤗😘 SPECIFICO, I choose not to argue the RS argument...I've said my piece and have higher priorities on my list of things to do. I'll just leave with this closing thought (paraphrasing what a trusted admin explained to me in 2015 (and I wasn't too happy with his response at the time but I respected it): a major misconception is that a source can be declared "reliable", and that declaration is a fixed, absolute judgment. Reliability depends on two things - (1) the source itself and (2) how it is used. We have no way of providing a blanket approval that any source is reliable for all purposes. What matters is the greater context of the article. Atsme📞📧 23:39, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    So true. That's why it's not ok to omit the secondary RS and cherrypick a few words from an internet video. SPECIFICO talk 23:51, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @SPECIFICO: The "primary source video" is a strawman argument; I already said I'm fine with adding the accompanying secondary article, and you could have added it yourself instead of removing Trump's quote. The real purpose of this thread, as I opened it, is to clarify whether we should plainly include Trump's directly-expressed views on racism or dilute them in commentary and opinion by others. So far, you have avoided answering the question. — JFG talk 00:14, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Please. You didn't open the discussion. You ignored my explanation of your primary sourced cherrypick and then opened a duplicate thread minutes later, now claiming (I'm not sure what it buys you) that you what? Own this thread? As I've already said -- your view is known. We need to hear from others about how to fix the problem. SPECIFICO talk 00:21, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    AGF much? We were writing our threads simultaneously; you happened to hit "Save" three minutes earlier. Now, will you answer the question I have been asking? I did answer yours. — JFG talk 00:25, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Support adding Trump's plainly stated view about racism in the article titled "Racial Views of Donald Trump." Seems to be a no-brainer. Mr Ernie (talk) 16:07, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    This [7]section is nothing but Trump stating he is not a racist, why do we need to add one more? Besides, when actions don't match the words, how many times do you need to quote those words? At least with building The Wall, actions and words match up, but not so much on racial issues. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 16:35, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree. But just to state this in terms of our Wikipedia core policies: We can't cherrypick a single primary source out of the tens of thousands of statements from a public figure. So the initial edit clearly was wrong. But when we examine all the secondary sources that included that video or references to Trump's anti-racism revisionist statements, we see that the overwhelming weight of RS narrative is that Trump read those pre-scripted remarks to stem the firestorm of criticism he faced. RS then go on to detail how he was unable to stay on point with the anti-racism stance and immediately reverted to his initial inflammatory and racist narrative. That is what secondary RS tell us. That's why we don't cherrypick primary snippets. It's especially why we don't extract primary illustrations from a secondary RS like the initially cited NYTimes video, whose sole purpose in the source was to lay the background for the prolonged condemnation that followed the "racism is evil" words. MelanieN made a slight improvement by telling our readers that the "evil" bit was a prescripted remark, but that's rather oblique, when the fact it was scripted is significant only becuase POTUS reverted to his unscripted narrative in the following days and weeks. The cherrypicked content with no secondary sourced context is UNDUE. Citing it without the accompanying RS secondary narrative is even worse. SPECIFICO talk 16:48, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah I do not know why that section exists. The defenses should be with the claims. Also only about half of it is actually Trump saying he didn't do it. PackMecEng (talk) 16:39, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    We need to keep things in perspective and abide by WP:BLPSTYLE, Beware of claims that rely on guilt by association, and biased, malicious or overly promotional content. Next is WP:NEWSORG with regards to an author's opinion vs statements of fact. To say one's "actions" don't match the words when based on nothing more than media opinion is a bit of a stretch. As a wise admin once explained, media is the court of public opinion, not a legal court and their opinions are their own. When referencing the border wall, the reality is that it is a national security issue, not a racial issue, and a substantial number of American citizens support a wall. Sharyl Attkisson wrote a piece in The Hill about how polls have been conducted. Also see WP:LABEL which is important MOS guidance (my bold underline): Value-laden labels—such as calling an organization a cult, an individual a racist, terrorist, or freedom fighter, or a sexual practice a perversion—may express contentious opinion and are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution. Avoid myth in its informal sense, and establish the scholarly context for any formal use of the term. Atsme📞📧 17:57, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    None of that applies to the edit, content or sources under discussion here. SPECIFICO talk 18:03, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The entire article is subject to it. Atsme📞📧 23:28, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Propsed article text

    There is no consensus to reinsert the challenged content. I have removed a bit of text that was reinserted recently (a) without consensus, and (b) not conforming to statements in the cited source. I propose the following article text, cited to the NY Times story:

    Two days later, responding to the wave of disapproval that met his initial remarks, Trump delivered a prepared statement, saying "Racism is evil, and those who cause violence in its name are criminals and thugs."

    This text reflects the statements in the NYTimes article and reflects the statements in the cited source If anyone wishes to propose and alternative text, please put it up and we can discuss the relative merits. SPECIFICO talk 02:50, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    For comparison, the text I added, citing the same New York Times source, is:

    Two days later, Trump forcefully denounced far-right violence, stating: "Racism is evil, and those who cause violence in its name are criminals and thugs."[1]

    Which one shall we add? — JFG talk 03:26, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Sources

    1. ^ Thrush, Glenn (August 14, 2017). "New Outcry as Trump Rebukes Charlottesville Racists 2 Days Later". The New York Times. Retrieved February 16, 2018.
    If you'll examine every instance of "forcefully" in the NYT source, it's readily apparent that the article does not call Mr. Trump's tepid and temporary moderation "forceful". SPECIFICO talk 03:47, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Sure, the "forcefully" qualifier is not in the source and is not necessary, striking it. — JFG talk 12:56, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You're disrupting the discussion to change it after you've posted it. The challenged content should not have been re-inserted without consensus and if you're also conceding that it violated WP:V then it's not helpful to take a second bite of the apple in the middle of the discussion. What would be helpful is to add a few words that convey the main thrust of the NYTimes source. To wit: Trump droned a few scripted words and then quickly reverted to his pandering to the far-right and racist elements with such ardour that a total of 3 individuals ended up resigning from his American Manufacturing panel, that iconic white supremacist Richard Spencer gloated that the remarks were not serious, and that he resumed preparations to pardon Joe Arpaio - famed birther, racial profiler, and recently convicted criminal. If you now admit that "sure" it's not in Verified by the cited source, then what possible justification could there be for inserting this false content into the artice? Please withdraw your re-jiggered text above and drop the stick. SPECIFICO talk 14:46, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The problem, as with the response to Charlottesville, he said one thing, then the opposite the next day, and then back to his first position the day after that; there is no consistency. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 15:05, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It is not a problem, we simply just the multiple responses. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 18:05, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    That's not WP policy. We reflect RS portrayal of events. In fact we could have a separate article that discusses all the disingenuous scripted statements his staff makes him read in between savage twitter attacks, coded dog-whistles to the most rabid of his "base", and unannounced policy decisions, such as staffing the white house with 100+ folks who lack the security clearance to get through the door. We are not his press secretaries. We need to present the NPOV balance of mainstream reporting here. "Fool me once..." Nobody, and I mean nobody -- friend or foe of Trump -- takes these anodyne interludes seriously. And it is highly alarming to see experienced editors doggedly inserting text that fails verification, that's sourced to a primary cherrypick, or that leads to SYNTH deviations from the RS narrative. SPECIFICO talk 19:02, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I am not saying that we should abandon RS portrayal or violate NPOV, but rather that we should not cherrypick what some editors would like the article to say about Trump when verified sources say otherwise even if that appears to lack consistency. Wikipedia is not meant to make Trump look "consistent" to readers but to show what the sources say. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 22:14, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support the wording proposed by SPECIFICO above. It's a much better representation of what the source says. Obviously Trump was in no hurry to disavow racism, and only did so under considerable pressure.- MrX 🖋 19:32, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Obviously, there is no consensus among local editors. #RfC: Racism is evil opened below to gather broader input. — JFG talk 21:51, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    cherry picking wording in lead

    The wording "though this was settled in 1975 without admission of guilt" has been added to the housing discrimination information in the lead. I have removed it because it is cherry picking from the DoJ ruling:

    "[The settlement] required the Trumps to place ads in newspapers saying that they welcomed black applicants. It said that the Trumps would familiarize themselves with the Fair Housing Act, which prohibited discrimination. So it also specifically said they don't admit wrongdoing, but they did have to take several measures that the Trumps had fought for two years not to take."

    This detail is best included in the body of the article as it is no more important than the fact that they needed to place ads, etc. Gandydancer (talk) 20:05, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Details of the ruling are indeed undue for the lead, but the outcome of the lawsuit should be there. I suggest writing simply "In 1973, he was sued by the U.S. Department of Justice for housing discrimination against black renters, and settled the case." What do you think? — JFG talk 20:12, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The problem is, the statement as currently written and even the proposed change both would leave the reader with the impression that Trump had been found to have discriminated against black renters, which he wasn't. My suggestion is merely that 'alleged' be added before 'housing discrimination' - any reader wanting to find out what happened can then follow the link to the reference. Lin4671again (talk) 20:18, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Lin, actually I've worked on a lot of WP corporate articles in which lawsuits have been documented and I know from my work here that much more often than not the settlement includes the wording that the offender did not admit to the offense. It is really quite the norm. @ JFK, perhaps, let's see what others think. Gandydancer (talk) 20:27, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It would also be more precise to say "In 1973, his company was sued…" Trump wasn't sued personally, and his father's practices seemed to be the main target of the plaintiffs. — JFG talk 23:10, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, that's the whole point of the settlement negotiation. Deniability. Unfortunately for WP this also means cherry-pickability. SPECIFICO talk 20:47, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    So, please be clear - do you think it should be included or not? Gandydancer (talk) 21:53, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It should not be included. The matter was settled, full stop. Thanks for the reminder. SPECIFICO talk 23:04, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Are you saying that you want the accusation included, and the settlement omitted? That's picking a side… Include both or exclude both. — JFG talk 00:23, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Let's be really, really clear - it is cherrypicking to not use intext attribution, to pick only from a particular POV and not include all views, and to editorialize. If the true purpose is not leave readers with "an impression", then provide both views and let them decide on their own. Atsme📞📧 22:55, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The lead would be a mile long if we did all that. It's all in the body Atsme. Gandydancer (talk) 23:25, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    We're not supposed to include every single statement from every RS - that's where editorial judgment comes into play - see WP:INTEXT. We summarize what RS say - if a source is not providing the various views, that in itself raises question. We should not lose sight of the fact that we're an encyclopedia, not WP:RGW or WP:SOAPBOX or WP:ADVOCACY. If editors will simply limit content to statements of fact rather than "opinions" (see WP:NEWSORG), we eliminate the "political" issues. Write the article based on statements of fact, and quote the opinions using in-text. Atsme📞📧 23:51, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    There are three possible outcomes to a lawsuit: win, lose, settle. When mentioning a resolved lawsuit in an article, the least we can do is document the outcome, without commentary. Otherwise, we'd run afoul of BLP. — JFG talk 00:22, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Warren's Native American claim

    This article is discussing Trump's racial views and the subsection on his use of the term 'Pocahontas' was entirely focused on that until this final sentence has been added - "Warren denies that she ever claimed to be a minority to secure employment. FactCheck has reviewed her employment history and interviewed her past employers and has been unable to find anything that disputes her claim"

    My point is simply that I do not feel this additional sentence is required. Prior to its addition the subsection started by explaining why Trump is choosing to mock Warren for claiming native American ancestry; it then provides the context - an 'honoring native Americans' event - at which he used the term; it then has several statements of people attacking Trump for his use of the phrase; it then ended with the White House response in which the White House Press Secretary Sarah Huckabee Sanders stated, "What most people find offensive is Senator Warren lying about her heritage to advance her career."

    The newly added sentence is not relevant to whether Trump's use of the term was racist - it is nothing more than starting a discussion on the strength of, and possible motives behind, Warren's claims. Other editors may now add to this discussion. I don't think this is good for the article and would suggest the recently added sentence, that is not directly relevant to the subject of this article, should be deleted.

    Just saying. Lin4671again (talk) 21:32, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    In the other sections where information in this article is a condensation of info from elsewhere we give a short summary of the information. In this case a charge was made, it was denied, and an outside source found no evidence that she had used her claim to gain employment preference. What with Trump/Sanders accusing her of lying you can't expect that the article does not need to not include the fact that no guilt was found. Gandydancer (talk) 23:10, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Apply that same argument to almost everything as it applies to Trump - the claims are made, the accusations of lying are made, allegations of racism and collusion are made - nothing proven. If one person is not to be judged in the court of public opinion, why should anyone else? WP:BALANCE. Atsme📞📧 23:31, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The section seems to be balanced overall regarding Warren, it should be left without major changes from the research I've been doing, IMO. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 00:47, 14 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Requested move 16 February 2018

    Racial views of Donald TrumpAccusations of racism against Donald Trump – According to an informal discussion above, the proposed title better reflects article contents. Almost all the article prose consists of perceptions of racism in reaction to statements or actions by Trump in relation to various incidents. There is however very little content documenting any "racial views" that Trump may harbor, and many editors have noted that his stated views have been hard to pinpoint. — JFG talk 02:32, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Survey

    Yeah that is a good example why accusations of racism against Donald Trump is actually more accurate. Since that quote "...laziness is a trait in blacks." is a second hand account of what someone else said he said with no one else backig it up.[8] PackMecEng (talk) 23:56, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    What's the problem? Nixon was famously bigoted against various ethnic and religious groups. Why be so defensive about this? It's not as if Trump tries to conceal it. SPECIFICO talk 00:04, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    That is not an accurate representation of the quote. You could have at least read the part of the article that I pulled it from. Trump was asked if the book it appeared in was accurate, and said that it was. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 00:00, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    And you could of read the next paragraph that said “He made up this quote. I’ve heard the quote before, and it’s nonsense,” Trump said. “I’ve never said anything like it, ever.” PackMecEng (talk) 00:02, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I did. And I presumed that politicians lie. Was this a poor presumption on my part? (Hint: It's not). When someone like Trump -who can't take any criticism without popping his top- is accused of racism, they're not going to wait ten years to lash out at the person making the accusation, unless that person isn't particularly offended by the accusation. You know who's not offended by accusations of racism, don't you? ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 00:08, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    They certainly do, all the dam time. But a few things. One he was not a politician at the time. Two when he confirmed it that was during a general interview on a lot of things and was not specific to that quote, hell he probably didn't read it. Three it still comes down to a disgruntled former employs word vs his, not something we could definitively say he said. More of a accusation if you will...PackMecEng (talk) 00:15, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Side note to the wait 10 years. It was two years in a different interview when he was asked about it. PackMecEng (talk) 00:18, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    One he was not a politician at the time. He was campaigning for a nomination at the time, therefore he was a politician. And if you think that Donald Trump on his own has more credibility than a politician, you owe politicians an apology.
    Two when he confirmed it that was during a general interview on a lot of things and was not specific to that quote, hell he probably didn't read it. That quote had been one of the most visible parts of the book. Your implication that he didn't know about it is weak, very weak.
    Three it still comes down to a disgruntled former employs word vs his Again; you owe disgruntled former employees an apology for implying they might be less honest than Trump.
    More of a accusation if you will... I've already addressed this in my last comment.
    It was two years in a different interview when he was asked about it. He was asked about it in late 1999. That's 9 years later, far closer to ten than two. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 01:59, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    With the timeline, he denied the comments right before dropping out. The book was 91, the probably true was 97, and the denial was 99. I was referring to the 97 to 99. So 8 years and some change, but like I said, do you think he actually sat down and read the thing? Also I don't know if the former employee is less honest or not, but it would be fair to label it an accusation instead of fact since there is reasonable doubt on both sides. Also dang it I take issue with the other politicians part, I'm from Illinois, we wouldn't know a politician telling the truth if they kicked us and then admitted it! PackMecEng (talk) 02:20, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - This article is not about accusations; it's about Trump's 45 year documented history of racially-provocative remarks and racially-motivated actions. The word "accusations" is an expression of doubt in this context, and completely inappropriate for a neutral encyclopedia. We are obligated to adhere to WP:NPOV, WP:V, and WP:NOR. This is not creative writing where we try to turn the tables on reliable sources and try to make the so-called accusers look like the bad guys.- MrX 🖋 21:37, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    According to whom? Journalists who are biased against him? Meh. It is what it is - opinion, not fact. Atsme📞📧 22:10, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    A relevant question here would be "Why are those journalists biased against him?"
    Of course, the obvious and best answer is "Because of all the horrible things he says and does." ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 22:13, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Whistle britches, you can't make this stuff up... Atsme📞📧 22:16, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @Atsme, it sounds like you don't agree with WP:V and WP:RS. Feel free to take your policy revision proposals to the appropriate policy pages and let us know when they change. Meanwhile, Trump's 45 year history of racism is well-documented, and that's the subject of this article.- MrX 🖋 22:17, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I respect your opinion, MrX...just don't agree with it. And Trump colluded with the Russians...meh! Atsme📞📧 22:23, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @Atsme: That doesn't address my point at all. You keep saying "the media is biased against Trump" and I'm not disagreeing with that. I'm saying that there's a reason they're biased against him. Just like the media is biased against Kim Jong Un and Jeffrey Dahmer. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 22:36, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It goes back a long way...I get it...we're barely beyond year one and it continues...I get it. Atsme📞📧 22:59, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    This is interesting, because I've stated my point as plainly as is humanly possible (twice now), and you still seem to have missed it entirely. I know you're rather smart, so you don't have difficulty understanding my meaning. And I'm assuming you're not intentionally ignoring it. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 23:14, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    (edit conflict) Yes, Mr. Pants...I get your point-y...twice now. I yield my remaining 30 secs to the gentleman from Star Trek: The Next Generation. Beam me up, Scotty. Atsme📞📧 23:39, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    So you're not discussing this in good faith, then? You're using deception to win an argument. That's disappointing. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 23:56, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • sigh* No, whistle britches...I don't play games. I'm far too seasoned for such nonsense. Show me verifiable statements of fact, not opinions, rumor or propaganda like that which is being force-fed to the public by propaganda machines, bait & click news orgs and political pundits. It's amazing what some people will say if you pay them enough...which may explain why I have little faith in politicians. Atsme📞📧 01:03, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You sit here and proclaim to have little faith in politicians... wait for it... While defending your faith in a politician. A politician who is demonstrably the most untrustworthy one to ever hold his office. You say you're too old to play games, but I don't see you doing anything but playing games in this thread. And while you may think your position is reasonable, I'm telling you right now: It's not. Nor will you be able to ever convince me that it is. All you have accomplished in this thread wrt me is losing a huge chunk of the respect I previously held for you. I wasn't exaggerating about being disappointed. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 01:59, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    We write what the sources say...we don't editorialize...and we do our best to use sound editorial judgment when deciding what belongs in the article per PAGs. Common sense is a welcome collaborator. I still believe the title of this article should reflect its contents, and I'm saddened that it has caused you disappointment. Enjoy the weekend and be happy. Atsme📞📧 02:26, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Atsme, Trump has been despised ever since he slithered through the Queens-Midtown Tunnel in the late 1970's to tear up and glass-plate the old Commodore Hotel on 42nd Street. There's lots of RS about how his mentor Roy Cohn taught him that any publicity is good publicity - even infamy. He has not suffered controversy and disparagement, he has courted and fomented it. Isn't that much obvious by now? Actually, I'm hoping you'll saddle up one of those ponies of yours and go lasso up a few of the 13 Russians the Grand Jury just put on the wanted list. SPECIFICO talk 23:35, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Indicted...and 13 is the lucky number! Atsme📞📧 23:41, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - most of the article does not actually tell the reader about Trump's self-professed views on race, but rather how commentators and pundits interpret his statements and actions. The alternative is more neutral and more faithful to the content of the article. Maybe a third alternative like "Donald Trump and race" could also be considered, as it is likewise more neutral. NoMoreHeroes (talk) 01:32, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
      Actually, only 29.9% (4081 out of 5822 words) of the article is criticism of Trump for racism. The other 71.1% are descriptions of Trump's actions, his comments, third party comments defending Trump, polling information, and other background information. The article is obviously not about accusations.- MrX 🖋 02:36, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - I think changing the title would be making it sound like he doesn't hold any negative racial views. After all "accusations" implies no one knows whether they are true. I don't think anyone can deny that he has said and done racist things, in fact that is more like a selling point for him. So the current title is NPOV while also being accurate as a description.ZXCVBNM (TALK) 02:32, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - I feel that the proposed title spins the matter in Trump's favor. Editors are correct that there is more verifiable meat behind these "accusations" than, say, those at Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations. Other proposed or considered titles spin the matter the other way. The idea is not to spin the matter, and the easiest way to get there is by using as few words as possible. The essential words are "Donald Trump" and "racism". Thus, Donald Trump and racism.
      JFG, apparently you missed my comments[9][10] in the previous RM, or failed to see their obvious wisdom; It's a joke, folks. otherwise my suggested title would be what you were proposing here. I think it would be the least controversial and therefore the most likely to reach consensus, and if this fails I might (repeat, might) follow with my own RM.
      Re the image above, I hope that model was well paid. ―Mandruss  10:39, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose The current title is neutral. For one thing it does not use the word "racism". And it allows Trump to speak for himself. The proposed title would lend Wikipedia's credibility to the notion or accusation of racism. MelanieN alt (talk) 13:53, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The first sentence is literally people calling him racist "observers across the political spectrum to conclude that he is racist". That is already lending Wikipedia's credibility to the accusation. The whole lead minus the last sentence of the second paragraph is accusations of racism. The title should reflect the content of the article, very little is Trump's personal views with most of it sources commenting on how they think he is racist. PackMecEng (talk) 01:43, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    No, the first sentence is literally Donald Trump having a "history of making racially-charged remarks and pursuing racially-motivated actions and policies", and that's why observers have concluded that he is racist.22:34, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
    Yes that is what I wrote, people calling him racist and what the first sentence backs up. PackMecEng (talk) 22:37, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose per my last Oppose which I can't be arsed to find, They're not accusations they're racial views period. –Davey2010Talk 21:50, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose The subject of this article is Trump's racial views. That is the baseline. Then, yes, there are reactions to those racial views. Jytdog (talk) 01:56, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @Jytdog: That is the issue at the heart of the title change. The actual contents of the article is largely how sources think he is racist. Very little of the article is dedicated to Trump stating his views or even responding to accusations. PackMecEng (talk) 02:03, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    If only the man would ever give a straight answer. I think, though, that plenty of people hear his dog whistles well enough. Drmies (talk) 02:28, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Somebody's actual racial views are not always what they say they are. Probably rarely. Self-reports are somewhat relevant. We must have had five major discussions last summer/fall about what to do with various white supremacists stating "i am not a white supremacist". The community consistently said that their self-reports were not much relevant. Jytdog (talk) 02:46, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Agreed they could be dishonest with others or even themselves. But again if they are denying it and we have to rely on "dog whistles" aka peoples subjective guesses, we cannot really state as fact he is racist. PackMecEng (talk) 22:25, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The key fact is that Trump's core views appear to be quite consistent across time and space. There's a certain amount of text and data needed to sort the wheat from the chaff, but then once his "racial views" are clarified -- as the article does reasonably well -- we don't need much more space to state them over and over. It's natural that the bulk of the article would therefore be concerned with the applications, implications, and provocations of his views. The explication and reaction then provide profile and context for understanding his views. I don't see how the article could be structured any other way. It doesn't go against the title or the topic at all, IMO. SPECIFICO talk 03:15, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support per PackMecEng and Atsme. As well, it's neutral and has an encyclopedic tone. What's currently in place is neither. -- ψλ 03:18, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    But the content of the article is largely accusations, so per common name the purposed title is more accurate. PackMecEng (talk) 22:20, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    (edit conflict) @K.e.coffman: Well, that's indeed the problem: the title says that the article subject is Trump's racial views, and the contents speak almost entirely about people's reactions to Trump's comments about one incident or another, calling him a racist. Almost nothing on his professed views. — JFG talk 22:23, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    No it doesn't. As I have already pointed out, only 29.9% of the article is criticism or condemnation of Trump's racism.- MrX 🖋 22:29, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @PackMecEng & JFG: There's no problem here. If the topic were "Accusations..." then we'd have sources that discuss others who accused DJT of racism. The article in present form discusses his views. K.e.coffman (talk) 00:40, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    COMMONNAME is about what name "is most frequently used to refer to the subject in English-language reliable sources". It is not about what title best describes what RS talk about. Misuse of shortcut, five yard penalty and loss of down. Not that it matters, really, which is why this is small. The stated rationale is the same as that given by multiple others. Just a bit of drive-by nitpicking to show I'm not ignoring you guys. ―Mandruss  12:49, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - After a fair amount of editing over several weeks I'm pretty convinced that the present title is the best one that's been suggested so far. "Accusations" would be a terrible choice, IMO. Gandydancer (talk) 01:26, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Threaded discussion

    Let's see, we just rejected one proposed move to water down the title. Then we just rejected misrepresenting the "shithole" smear of a couple dozen nations of colored folks as if it maybe didn't really really happen. And so now we are going to spend our time discussing whether to pretend the subject of this article is a bunch of "allegations" because -- who knows if any of this is true? SPECIFICO talk 21:22, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Sadly, this has become the norm for Trump-related articles and I have to say, it as pathetic as it is transparent. The fomula seems to be first, try to delete the article entirely, claiming it's an attack page and that Wikipedia is not a newspaper. When that fails, try to pepper the article with weasel words, cherry-picked quotes, and equivocations. When that doesn't work, try to change the title so that instead of the article being about Trump's well-documented racism, it becomes and article about accusations in which Trump is portrayed as the victim. - MrX 🖋 21:46, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Fortunately...as more information comes forward, more editors will realize why we should pay closer attention to WP:NOTNEWS. Wait for it...Atsme📞📧 22:26, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah, the news will come out tomorrow that it wasn't really Trump who said and did all those things. Does this article even get into the thousands of Puerto Ricans he let die when he could have provided disaster assistance. And they weren't even "illegal". That's something well documented in RS. I'll check and maybe we can add a section about that. SPECIFICO talk 22:31, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    He let die? Provide RS please - my eyes and ears are open - constantly - wish they weren't at 3 AM. Atsme📞📧 22:41, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    [11] Newsweek doesn't seem to take any issue with putting the claim right there in a headline, and then backing it up in the body. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 23:18, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    To be fair on the Newsweek source, it states that then attributes it at the end to people on the ground. The money and supplies are there with more money coming. But the infrastructure to do anything with it was lets say poor before the disaster and has not gotten much better. It would be a hard sell to say it was racially motivated. PackMecEng (talk) 23:47, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It would be a hard sell to say it was racially motivated. Apparently not that hard. [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 23:54, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah because The Root and Vox are good neutral sources... The Guardian an article responding to a TV comedian and People quoting twitter to say hes racist... Seems fairly hard doesn't it? PackMecEng (talk) 00:00, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Ahh, I see. First you claim nobody says this stuff, then you dismiss all the people saying this stuff so as to support your point that nobody says this stuff. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 00:05, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Nah more I just want reliable sources backing up crazy claims. I don't think I am asking to much. PackMecEng (talk) 00:17, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Needs more historical perspective and actual fact-based reporting. Atsme📞📧 00:18, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Atsme, you know perfectly well that has nothing to do with the loss of electricity, potable water, transportation, and other critical life support systems. I'm giving you a giant trout for posting that off-topic garbage here. Please do better. SPECIFICO talk 00:47, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    It's time to get caught up on the facts - Vox’s Alexia Fernández Campbell reported that the Puerto Rican government’s own missteps in the reconstruction effort, including botching a massive recovery contract with Whitefish Energy, have further hampered the power restoration effort. See the article. Please, let's leave our biases at login and get back on point. This article needs to be renamed to reflect it's contents. Atsme📞📧 01:12, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You're on thin ice. I suggest you drop the whataboutism and the right-wing talking points. They don't change the mainstream reporting, which is all we care about here. SPECIFICO talk 01:15, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    FYI, I have friends and family there...I'm well aware. Atsme📞📧 01:26, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    A look at the differences in the way the federal response played out in Huston and Puerto Rico, including Trump's actions and comments, is evidence in it's self. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 02:24, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Comment

    As with nearly all polls on WP, there was some support for various other views, but there was nothing to suggest that there could possibly be consensus for a proposal like this. It's a distraction, and because there's no possibility of consensus for this proposal, it's just hurting all the other articles we could be working on. Instead we have to keep showing up to prevent edits and moves that obviously fail verification and cherrypick undue content and points of view. SPECIFICO talk 00:13, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I've been persuaded to sign up by this article

    Hi all. Just to let you all know that reading this article has persuaded me to sign up as an editor. I have used Wikipedia for years and encourage my students to use this fantastic resource, but to use it carefully always ensuring that claims are always referenced by reliable sources, and watching for any articles where it appears an article has been written for a political purpose.

    And then I came across this article!!!

    I am not a US citizen and nor do I live in the USA (as millions of non-citizens do) so have no direct bias either way as far as Trump is concerned. But looking at this article as a neutral observer who has some familiarity with Wikipedia policies (and did some more research on this before signing up), it appears to me that this article is about as biased an article I can imagine without being tagged as such. Can some editors not see this or is it just that they are viewing this article through partisan eyes? In any case, let me make a couple of points:

    If it is appropriate for an article on 'Racial views of Donald Trump', there should also be an article on 'Racial views of Barack Obama', even if that article found evidence suggesting that his racial views were entirely non-racist/antiracist.
    If you are going to keep an article called 'Racial views of Donald Trump' rather than a more neutral title, at least structure the article with a more balanced approach.
    And finally, the ACLU accusing Trump of racism is not exactly a reliable source.

    In conclusion, I think it is clear that Wikipedia requires some more neutral editors to help improve articles so that it can continue to be a trusted, respected and amazingly useful resource for all. I intend to make a small contribution towards that end. Birtig (talk) 16:16, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles existing on Wikipedia are based on notability, which we determine by(amongst other things) the amount of significant on the subject matter. There has been a lot of coverage on Trump's racial views throughout the years, before his campaign, during it, and during his presidency. If there was the same amount of(or enough) coverage of Obama's views, then an article would be warranted on his views as well. It isn't about comparing President to President, its simply what can be determined notable through reliable sources. Also there is discussion on moving the title name right above here, which you can participate in. In regards to ACLU, in which references are you referring to. Or do you just mean the quote that was given, as that isn't be used as a source but simply quoting what was said by someone about the subject, the same as the Newt Gingrich quote or the others in the Defenses section. WikiVirusC(talk) 16:29, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Hello WikiVirus. When I read the subsection about the Pardoning of Arpaio it just seems to me that to accuse Trump of racism for deciding to pardon an 85 year old man who had served law enforcement for 50 years was bizarre. While Arpaio was found guilty of using racial profiling when ordered not to, deciding that he deserves a pardon after serving his country for 50 years is not automatically 'racist' in of itself. And just because the ACLU accuses Trump of racism for this decision is not proof that it was racism. Birtig (talk) 16:39, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The statement isn't saying he is racists, it is saying Arpaio is and the pardon is Trump forgiving, or in their quote 'endorsing', the racism. Nothing there is implying proof, it is stating what was thought about the action, from the ACLU, along with Speaker Ryan, Senators. That was the ACLU's statement. WikiVirusC(talk) 16:44, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    There are issues that have been/are being discussed, Birtig, but it's the editors who participate in local surveys, or an WP:RfC which involves wider community input that determines WP:CONSENSUS. Atsme📞📧 16:52, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Forgive me making this point - I am new - but the ACLU tweeted "that this White House supports racism and bigotry". Due to its partisan nature, the ACLU should not be quoted. If a reliable source were to say the same thing that would be different, but the ACLU... Wikipedia must surely be better than this. Birtig (talk) 17:19, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The ACLU is a reliable source for its own findings and is acceptable with attribution. O3000 (talk) 20:56, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Birtig, you say you are not from the US. I am from the US. You say Argaio served my country for 50 years. Did you read the Arpaio article? Gandydancer (talk) 22:12, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The main applicable policy is Wikipedia:Neutral point of view, which "nutshell" states: "Articles must not take sides, but should explain the sides, fairly and without editorial bias." ACLU is one of the sides, or part of one of the sides. They are a major player on that side. We don't exclude viewpoints because they come from partisan sources. What we don't do is take the ACLU's viewpoint and present it as fact. If you feel that the pro-Trump side is under-represented, you're free to propose new content for consideration under the sizable array of Wikipedia policy (which only begins with NPOV).
    But keep in mind that Wikipedia does not define neutrality as parity, but rather strives to represent the sides in proportion to their treatment in reliable sources. If reliable sources over all tend to criticize Trump more than praise him, policy requires us to reflect that in our content—and that is not Wikipedia bias. ―Mandruss  22:36, 17 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    This article is about 'racial views' and not religious discrimination

    Hi all

    The subsection on immigration had a paragraph that stated: "On Friday, January 27, 2017, via executive order titled Protecting the Nation from Foreign Terrorist Entry into the United States, President Trump ordered the U.S border indefinitely closed to Syrian refugee families fleeing the bloody Syrian war. He also abruptly ceased immigration from six other Muslim nations - the order was for 90 days. A religious test was also implemented for Muslim refugees, which gave immigration priority to Christians over Muslims. Besides Syria, admission into the U.S. was halted for refugees from Iraq, Iran, Sudan, Libya, Somalia and Yemen. Human rights activists described these actions as government approved religious persecution.[61][62]"

    This may imply religious discrimination but it does not imply racial discrimination so I have deleted it. Birtig (talk) 15:49, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Hi Y'all. I've undone your removal of well-sourced content and added a reference to the Fourth Circuit's attribution of the "travel ban" to Trump's racist statements. SPECIFICO talk 16:16, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Just to be clear, the Fourth Circuit did not use the word 'racist' anywhere in its 285 page opinion, but a writer of an opinion piece in a newspaper says that the judgement was due to 'racist statements'. Birtig (talk) 19:28, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Please be more respectful of the author, Jennifer Rubin. We really don't need to disparage journalists or anyone else for that matter. SPECIFICO talk 19:41, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Apologies...on rereading you are correct. I have deleted the offending section from my post above. Birtig (talk) 19:51, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    You should strike it rather than delete it if an editor has already commented on it. Gandydancer (talk) 20:32, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    I do not think it's necessary to attribute the word to Jennifer Rubin's column. It clearly summarizes the court's statements in the opinion and reflects the mainstream understanding of the ban and the court decision. Please remove your addition of the attribution, which was clearly premature for which you should seek consensus here on talk. You are editing in a topic area that requires caution and deliberate restraint. SPECIFICO talk 20:38, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Fine. Let's leave it misleading. I will do as you ask. Birtig (talk) 20:41, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    The current wording "the Fourth Circuit Court of Appeals noted that Trump's "Travel Bans" implemented racist views" is misleading as one would easily interprete this to mean that the court actually used the word "racist". In legal decisions excast wording matter. The wording Rubin cites is "anti-Muslim bias", and I think there are also atter statements along that line in the decions. We don't have other examples of media choosing to apply the word "racist" when referring to the decision. Politico uses "anti-Muslim animus" and other media reports I can find also uses wording along that line. Choosing "racist" when we have one source for that and other media and court use "anti-Muslim" etc. seems like negative cherrypicking, and also misleading. The whole sentence is somewhat misleading as it doesn't mention that the Supreme Court had allowed the order they ruled against to go temporarily into effect. Iselilja (talk) 22:18, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree, Iselilja, and our NPOV policy is emphatic about us using nonjudgmental language, and that we present opinions and conflicting findings in a disinterested tone. Do not editorialize. When editorial bias towards one particular point of view can be detected the article needs to be fixed. Several editors have detected editorial bias toward a particular POV. Another emphatic statement in NPOV that I also mentioned in the survey is that the NPOV policy (my bold) is non-negotiable, and the principles upon which it is based cannot be superseded by other policies or guidelines, nor by editor consensus. Hopefully we can collaborate in a productive manner and resolve the NPOV issues. Atsme📞📧 16:01, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Trump as an icon of multiculturalism and inclusiveness

    In his book Devil's Bargain, Joshua Green includes a section (Bloomberg) on how Trump & The Apprentice became a symbol of a modern, diverse and inclusive America

    • Trump and the show’s creators featured their minority contestants as striving, ambitious entrepreneurs
    • They did a wonderful job of showing America as it was even then: multiethnic, multiracial, and multigenerational (Monique Nelson)
    • The Apprentice was viewed by corporate America as the epitome of the forward-thinking, multicultural programming that all advertisers were increasingly seeking
    • Trump and The Apprentice, up through the end of the decade, were considered by advertisers and audiences alike to be a triumph of American multiculturalism
    • At his peak in 2010, Trump’s positive Q Score with black audiences was 27, while his positive score among English-speaking Hispanic audiences reached 18. Among nonblack audiences, however, Trump’s positive Q Score was just 8
    • Trump had achieved by 2010 what Republican politicians had struggled, without success, to accomplish for the better part of 50 years. He had made himself genuinely popular with a broad segment of blacks and Hispanics

    While indirect, I think this may be relevant for inclusion to give a fuller view on Donald Trump¨s relationship with minorities, which I think is the underlying topic of this article. Iselilja (talk) 21:08, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    This has to do with the TV show's advertising sales strategy, not with Trump's personal or political posture. I think it could go in an article about his work as a TV producer, but not here. SPECIFICO talk 21:26, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Have you read the WP article on this book? The reception section reminds me of posters about Broadway bombs with a few cherry picked words from terrible reviews to look like they are raves. Read the actual articles quoted in the WP article and they are extremely negative about the subjects of the book; hence the title Devil's Bargain. I would not trust this book to describe the character of the subjects. O3000 (talk) 21:33, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Agreed with Specifico here (wait, what? I actually agree with Specifico for once? Who'da thunk it?) In all seriousness, the things described by the book aren't really involving Trump's views on race, rather than the show's influence on racial conversations. Jdcomix (talk) 21:34, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree, Iselilja - it belongs in this article because it reflects his views equally as much as the biased sources do and will help correct some of the WEIGHT and BALANCE issues. What we've been experiencing here is reluctance to include as little as possible that reflects opposition to Trump being a racist, including the opposing views I've already pointed out that were published in the same MSM sources. The lede is a cherry-picked rendition designed to disparage Trump as a racist based on what biased RS have published less anything in those same sources that disputes the racist POV. Worse yet, not all are race-related. The following Slate article describes Tesler's analysis: Since 2009, Tesler has been chronicling what he calls the “racialization” of issues in the Obama era—the extent to which public opinion on topics unrelated to race have taken on a racial cast as Obama has staked out positions on them." We should be using editorial judgment to not include topics unrelated to race, such as the ban on certain Muslim countries that Obama first named, the border wall that prior presidents supported - they need to be removed as neither is racially motivated. Atsme📞📧 16:27, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Nope. First, SPECIFICO is right that this is about a TV show not about Trump's racial views. Second, guess what? On Wikipedia we use the evil "MSM" sources, not "WMS" (wacky media sources). So that's a non-starter. Third, both the Muslim ban and the wall have racial components to them, as has been frequently noted by many many many many many reliable sources, so we're keeping that. Trying to remove it is also a non-starter. As far as Tesler's analysis - what's your point? Volunteer Marek (talk) 16:33, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    RfC: Trump's reaction to Charlottesville

    There is disagreement among editors about the way to mention Trump's second reaction to Charlottesville events. Two proposals are on the table, cited to the same New York Times article:

    • Version A:

    Two days later, responding to the wave of disapproval that met his initial remarks, Trump delivered a prepared statement, saying "Racism is evil, and those who cause violence in its name are criminals and thugs."[1]

    • Version B:

    Two days later, Trump denounced far-right violence, stating: "Racism is evil, and those who cause violence in its name are criminals and thugs."[1]

    Which one shall we add?

    For context, the disputed text would sit between current paragraphs:

    In his initial statement on the rally, Trump did not denounce white nationalists but instead condemned "hatred, bigotry, and violence on many sides". His statement and his subsequent defenses of it, in which he also referred to "very fine people on both sides", suggested a moral equivalence between the white supremacist marchers and those who protested against them, leading some observers to state that he was sympathetic to white supremacy.[2]

    and

    Ten days after the rally, in prepared remarks at an American Legion conference, Trump called for the country to unite. He said: "We are not defined by the color of our skin, the figure on our paycheck or the party of our politics. Rather, we are defined by our shared humanity, our citizenship in this magnificent nation and by the love that fills our hearts."[3]

    JFG talk 21:46, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Sources

    1. ^ a b Thrush, Glenn (August 14, 2017). "New Outcry as Trump Rebukes Charlottesville Racists 2 Days Later". The New York Times. Retrieved February 16, 2018.
    2. ^ Thrush, Glenn; Haberman, Maggie (August 15, 2017). "Trump Gives White Supremacists an Unequivocal Boost". The New York Times. Archived from the original on August 17, 2017. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |deadurl= ignored (|url-status= suggested) (help)
    3. ^ Fabian, Jordan (August 23, 2017). "After divisive rally, Trump calls for unity". The Hill. Retrieved January 16, 2018.

    Survey

    • Version B, a straightforward quote of Trump's statement, with no comment or editorializing. — JFG talk 21:48, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • B - nonjudgmental language per NPOV; i.e., neither sympathizes with nor disparages its subject. Atsme📞📧 22:13, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • B - whether the statement he made was pre-prepared or ad lib is irrelevant. What matters is that he choose to condemn and in a way that was quite unequivocal. Birtig (talk) 22:29, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • A - mentioning it was a prepared statement puts in into context of why Trump later went back to statements more in line with his initial statement that there were some good people on both sides. C. W. Gilmore (talk) 22:45, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • B - as per the above reasons. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 23:04, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • A - as it actually reflects what the source says. The source is not just about the quote, it's about the fact that the statement was made after the disapproval. To omit that fact is to carry out misrepresentation of the source (and POV) by omission.Volunteer Marek (talk) 23:14, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • A - reflects the cited NY Times source about the prepared statement. It's important to read that source to see that the "evil" bit was read with a strange air of detachment and that Trump returned almost immediately to race-baiting remarks of various kinds, and that the "evil" bit was "not taken seriously" by observers across the political spectrum, etc. etc. Adding more and more sources, e.g. the much later cherrypicked Hill reference, does not change the facts surrounding the event at which Trump read the "racism is evil" remark. There having been no previous support for including this scripted air kiss to political correctness, the stated motivation of the current RfC appears to suggest forum-shopping. SPECIFICO talk 23:24, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • B - More natural, to the point, neutral without pushing a undue pov. PackMecEng (talk) 23:42, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • A - B is self-serving, and would tend to mislead readers. A is far more representative of the source (and other sources) in that it places Trump's dubious sentiments in the appropriate context. - MrX 🖋 01:47, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • A - I don't have assess to the NYT but I did read the Hill link. Ditto to what MrX said. Gandydancer (talk) 02:27, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • In Between A and B (A with language mod). I think that we should mention the very wide criticism the initial stmt received. However, it would be incorrect to state in our voice that Trump was responding and not delivering this of his volition - my understanding of his stmt is that he did not say he was responding to anything in particular. I suggest: Two days later, following a wave of disapproval that met his initial remarks, Trump delivered a prepared statement, saying "Racism is evil, and those who cause violence in its name are criminals and thugs."[1]Icewhiz (talk) 13:04, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @Icewhiz: -- we need to choose one or the other for the purposes of this poll. If you re-read the NYTimes source cited above for both texts, I think you'll see that the connection between the initial criticism of Trump's equivocation to the prepared statement "racism is evil" is directly from the cited source. SPECIFICO talk 14:28, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    RfCs often closeout on a different option than what they started out with. I can not support A as it is currently worded, as responding has us taking a position on Trump's motivations (that I agree are likely per the sources, but I would not state it as a definitive). I agree that the outcry following his initial statements is highly relevant. If I have to choose between two (which for the record, I don't believe I do) - This is a !vote for B. I will support A with a minor language modification per my suggestion above.Icewhiz (talk) 14:46, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for the explanation. I think your proposed change actually does improve the text of A. I would support it. My only concern is that this is at least the third time that the cherrypicked POV version B has reared its head, and I am afraid we'll see endless repetitions of what's basically a settled issue. I don't know a good way to deal with this and switch to your improved text. In fact, that's a core reason why this formal RfC is so pointless. I suppose if all previous commenters agree, we could change the language to your version. At this point, we can't just add yours as alternative C because it will fork and diffuse the poll. SPECIFICO talk 15:57, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Please keep in mind that WP:NPOV clearly states: This policy is non-negotiable, and the principles upon which it is based cannot be superseded by other policies or guidelines, nor by editor consensus. It applies to statements challenged as noncompliant per WP:YESPOV, nonjudgmental language and no editorializing. Atsme📞📧 15:42, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Discussion

    It is completely and utterly false and deceitful to assert that the first version involves some kind of "editorializing" or is "judgmental" (sic). The first version is simply more accurate. Trump at first failed to denounce the racism of the rally, he was criticized and THEN he made the statement. The fact that the statement was made only AFTER the criticism is a key piece of information and including it is NOT "editorializing". And it is textbook POV and WP:AGENDA to try to exclude that information from the article with an apparent purpose of misleading the reader.

    "Non-judgmental" means "present all the facts". "Judgmental" would involve cherry picking only some of them to portray them in a false light. And that appears to be the purpose of this RfC and some of the "B" !votes.

    Also, please change the name of this section.Volunteer Marek (talk) 23:18, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Well, let's see...the term "racially charged" first sentence in the lede is cited without in-text attribution while ignoring the opposing views in the only RS which is the NYTimes and it actually includes other views which were ignored, including: The White House rejected assertions that Mr. Trump is racist. “This president fights tirelessly for all Americans, regardless of race, religion, gender or background,” said Raj Shah, a White House spokesman and Mr. Trump’s aides and allies expressed frustration that his comments were interpreted through a racial prism. Other cited sources include The Nation, which is a progressive left magazine, then there is the Real Estate section of Fortune Magazine (which is owned by Time), and Rolling Stone magazine, which is known as a music magazine. Yet, in WikiVoice it states in the lede, "...that have led observers across the political spectrum to conclude that he is racist." How is that compliant with WP:NPOV? What political spectrum? The left's spectrum? Rolling Stone and Fortune Magazine's spectrum? Now that the breaking news hype is over, it's time to deploy neutrality such as this CNN article, and what about the entirely different view by Fortune, the Chicago Tribune, even Politico had to tone down their sensationalism somewhat. To say RS overwhelmingly justify the racist label in WikiVoice is simply incorrect. Atsme📞📧 01:41, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    What? I honestly can't make any sense out your comment or understand what it has to do with the subject of this RfC.- MrX 🖋 01:55, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    My comment isn't encrypted, MrX, so you should be able to make sense of it. You know what kind of sources our PAGs require in order to include contentious and disparaging material about a WP:PUBLICFIGURE, and I know you're aware of WP:SOURCETYPES - Material should be attributed in-text where sources disagree. WP:NEWSORG - If the statement is not authoritative, attribute the opinion to the author in the text of the article and do not represent it as fact. I even provided a few quotes from the within the same cited sources, from updates of those same sources, and from sources that disagree with the contentious label used in WikiVoice in the lede. I've stated my position. If you need further information, please refer to the section below titled Recent edits - textbook SYNTH and WEASEL. Happy editing, MrX. Atsme📞📧 06:03, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Additional RS to consider

    @Atsme, JFG, Emir of Wikipedia, Birtig, and PackMecEng: The overwhelming majority of RS reporting makes the connection cited in version A above. Please review and consider. [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24]. In fact, these sources suggest we should consider adding further context to the POTUS remarks, e.g. his public approval ratings hit their lowest levels of his presidency following his initial response to Charlottesville, and that there was sharp criticism from within his Republican party. SPECIFICO talk 16:12, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Your comment may not be encrypted but it is hopelessly confusing and completely irrelevant to this discussion. One more time - please watch WP:SOAPBOX.Volunteer Marek (talk) 16:34, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Recent edits - textbook SYNTH and WEASEL

    • This edit whitewashes what the source says. The source says "numerous studies" - indeed that is the point of the article - not "some studies" [25]. In this case "tone it down" means "I'm gonna POV this".
    • This, with a misleading summary "remove gossip", actually removes well sourced text. This is NOT "gossip", that's absurd.
    • This is a clear cut case of SYNTH which juxtaposes two separate facts and tries to imply - via original research - that the first part of the claim is false. It also embellishes a bit on what is actually in the relevant source.

    Volunteer Marek (talk) 23:12, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    "President has dime bars for breakfast" is gossip. "President makes sweeping racist statements while in the process of trying to enact anti-immigration laws" is certainly *not* gossip. Only in death does duty end (talk) 23:16, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    According to the meaning of gossip when googled, "casual or unconstrained conversation or reports about other people, typically involving details which are not confirmed as true". Therefore the issue is not the importance or trivial nature of the information but whether the sources are identified and reliable or just unattributed hearsay. Birtig (talk) 00:25, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Read WP:YESPOV, particularly Avoid stating opinions as facts, and Prefer nonjudgmental language which states (my bold underline): A neutral point of view neither sympathizes with nor disparages its subject (or what reliable sources say about the subject), although this must sometimes be balanced against clarity. Present opinions and conflicting findings in a disinterested tone. Do not editorialize. When editorial bias towards one particular point of view can be detected the article needs to be fixed. There is also Indicate the relative prominence of opposing views which is not being applied as it should. Opinions are not facts and allegations of racism are opinions. POV has been detected, not just but one but by several editors. Also refer to WP:NEWSORG. Atsme📞📧 23:44, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    What exactly are you addressing? This appears to be just a random statement which has nothing to do with the issues raised above. Please watch WP:SOAPBOX.Volunteer Marek (talk) 03:50, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree on all points. The first is a whitewash. The second has a questionable edit summary, although I'm not sure the article suffers for losing the material. The third does seem to run afoul of synth. It takes a cherry picked portion of the raw speech, and portions of two other sources and combines them in a way that suggests something new. There may be a source that makes such a conclusion, but those three ain't them.- MrX 🖋 02:07, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    As the author of the challenged edits, let me respond to VM's criticism:

    • Regarding the first edit, the first cited source (The Nation) writes about ONE study, and the second source (Vox) mentions three studies -- that's "some" in my book, not "numerous". We could also say that these were cherry-picked studies from left-wing sources, but I'm not even bothering to look for counter-studies. My edit made the lead more neutral regardless. However, comparing the sources with our prose, I'm disturbed by a glaring misrepresentation: the Vox source says Trump’s rise was driven by racism and racial resentment, whereas our text says since Trump's ascendance in the Republican Party, racist attitudes and racial resentment have become more significant. That's an inversion of cause and consequence: the source says racism fueled Trump's rise while our text says Trump's rise increased racism. Very misleading!
    • My second edit actually removed textbook gossip -- well-sourced gossip is still gossip, i.e. unverified hearsay, which has no place in our encyclopedia.
    • In the third edit, the claim of SYNTH is unclear, and the article text could be modified to avoid any. Simply mention Trump's quote that is relevant to race: Whether we are black or brown or white, we all bleed the same red blood of patriots and omit any opinions about his speech, or list sources giving positive as well as negative opinions of it.

    Looking forward to further discussion in order to uphold neutrality. — JFG talk 02:25, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

    Marek's opening comment and restorative edits are all that's needed to "uphold neutrality" -- no independent editor is objecting, so let's drop it now and move on per WP:OWN SPECIFICO talk 02:42, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • JFG, well, it may be "some" in YOUR book, but on Wikipedia we don't go by "JFG's book" we go by what reliable sources say. And these sources say "numerous", not "some". WP:OR. I agree on the inversion of the cause and effect though. How about we keep "numerous" and you can propose appropriate wording for taking care of the other issue?
    • No, to call this gossip is absurd. "Well sourced gossip" is in fact pretty much an oxymoron.
    • There's nothing unclear about it being SYNTH. To different claims/ideas are forged together to imply something which is not actually in any of the sources.Volunteer Marek (talk) 03:50, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    @Volunteer Marek: 1. Did you forget about WP:BALANCE, WP:UNDUE and WP:LEAD? The Vox source cites three studies linking Trump with racist feelings in the electorate, and calls them "numerous", we don't have to parrot their claims. Besides, the article text grossly misrepresents even Vox by inverting cause and consequence. This cannot stand, especially in the lede section which is supposed to summarize the gist of the article body. So if you want to keep this, please insert a proper representation of the source in the article body, add counter-studies, and finally write a balanced summary in the lede. 2. Gossip sourced to the New York Times is still gossip. 3. I proposed a way to avoid any appearance of SYNTH; what do you think? — JFG talk 04:18, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Um, no, it's just that WP:BALANCE would mean that you go and find sources which say there AREN'T "numerous" studies. And if a reliable source says "numerous", then yes indeed we have to "parrot their claim" - i.e. not misrepresent them as you're trying to do. I've already said that you can propose better wording in regard to the cause and effect so please stop red herringing this.
    And no, please stop it with this "gossip" nonsense. Well sourced info is not "gossip". Indeed it is the opposite of gossip.
    And your "proposal to avoid SYNTH" wasn't actually a proposal to avoid synth, it was a proposal to remove relevant text according to some WP:IJUSTDONTLIKEIT. How does that work? How about instead of removing relevant text, we remove the SYNTH that you put in there? Problem solved. Volunteer Marek (talk) 04:26, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    1. Fair enough that we'd have to find counter-studies for balance, and I can't be bothered to do such research right now. Whether three studies are "numerous" is a matter of personal opinion, and I agree to disagree; we could simply qualify the studies count more neutrally, by stating "Several studies have claimed…" rather than "Numerous studies…" or "Some studies…". On my other remark, glad to see you admit the misrepresentation, so how about switching to this text: Several studies and surveys have claimed that racist attitudes and racial resentment have fueled Trump's political ascendance, and have become more significant than economic factors in determining party allegiance of voters.
    2. Looks like we don't have the same definition of gossip. Seems that this "well-sourced" hearsay is sourced to nobody in particular, and was denied by several participants. Contrary to the "shithole" incident which was confirmed, "forgotten" or not-really-denied by many named sources. So until somebody has the guts to say "I was here and I confirm Trump said that", it's just WP:GOSSIP, "scandal mongering" as our WP:NOT policy calls it, and we must remove it from the encyclopedia.
    3. First of all, I wasn't the author of the original prose that had been removed, I just restored it without further editing, so don't accuse me of introducing SYNTH, a tactic I despise. The "we share the same blood" quote from the inauguration speech is eminently relevant to this article because it is one of the rare instances of actual direct expressions of "racial views of Donald Trump", so it deserves inclusion. We can either include it without comment, or with balanced comments from sources making positive and negative interpretations of his statement. Neither approach should involve any editorial synthesis. — JFG talk 04:56, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    1. You drop the "claimed" weaseling and that'd be acceptable.
    2. Sorry, but this is simply NOT gossip. We have New York Times and Washington Post reporting on it. It caused a lot of controversy. You can't just make up arbitrary rules for what you think is "gossip" and then try to exclude text because you WP:IJUSTDONTLIKEIT. Anyway, this has been in the article a long time, and by removing this you violated the "consensus required to restore challenged edits" discretionary sanctions so please self-revert.
    3. You may not have been the author but you put it back in (I didn't accuse you of "introducing" it, I said you "put it in there", which is correct - so how about YOU don't falsely accuse me of stuff, speaking of tactics). And you're still doing the SYNTH, just now on the talk instead of the article. Hell, you're essentially trying to hold the well sourced text hostage - "your choices are either to remove the well sourced text or let me do my SYNTH". No, these are not the only choices. The obvious choice is to remove the SYNTH. As was done before you reinserted it.Volunteer Marek (talk) 05:06, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    1. Okay, will replace "claimed" with "stated" and make the edit.
    2. I didn't violate anything: I removed the paragraph, was challenged by you, came here to discuss. Textbook BRD. We happen to disagree whether this content meets the definition of gossip by WP policy (not "arbitrary rules"), fine, so be it. Will open the discussion to wider comments.
    3. Look, it's not about me, you or another editor, let's stick to discussing the contents. The inauguration speech contains an explicit statement by Trump about race. Whether you like this statement or not, it exists, and is therefore relevant to an article called "Racial views of Donald Trump". Censoring it is POV. We don't need to add editorial comments around it, which the original text does. How about you suggest a wording that would not give any appearance of synth? — JFG talk 05:26, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:TE - This insistent denial reads as if the talk page is intended for bilateral negotiations to re-write basic WP policy. The fact is that Marek identified and documented the defects, including the textbook example of SYNTH with the paragraph that began "While..." and proceeded to two concatenate two separate sources to lead our readers astray. Other editors affirm Marek's fixes, and it's time to drop it and move on to other issues. SPECIFICO talk 14:38, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    1. No, I disagree - it should be removed. This WaPo article states: "Obama’s race is largely responsible for the association between racial resentment and economic anxiety. And this racialized political environment undoubtedly aided Donald Trump’s rise to the top of the Republican Party." The 2nd WaPo article summarized the findings of survey analysts for Monkey Cage, WaPo and The Atlantic stating: "all of whom suggested that those voting for Trump felt what we would call white vulnerability, racial resentment, and mixed in with that, an anxiety about losing cultural status." The Vox article evaluates the Monkey Cage survey: "racial resentment is the biggest predictor of white vulnerability among white millennials." The Monkey Cage survey included responses from 503 African Americans, 510 whites, 505 Latinos and 258 Asian Americans. The questions asked to measure white vulnerability included: 1) whether whites were “economically losing ground through no fault of their own”; 2) whether discrimination against whites was “as big a problem as that against Blacks and other minorities”; and 3) if minorities overtaking whites as the majority of the U.S. population by 2050 would “strengthen or weaken the country.” The survey demonstrated discrimination against whites which ties in racial resentment and white vulnerability. The 12-15-2017 WaPo article linked racial resentment to "political attitudes" in a Slate article which states (my bold): "Tesler has been chronicling what he calls the “racialization” of issues in the Obama era—the extent to which public opinion on topics unrelated to race have taken on a racial castas Obama has staked out positions on them." None of what the survey demonstrated reflects in what our article states: Some studies and surveys have claimed that Trump's political ascendance has made racist attitudes and racial resentment more significant than economic factors in determining party allegiance of voters. Remove it, or state what the cited sources are actually saying.
    2. Yes it is gossip, all opinion-based, not statements of fact.
    3. We need a closer review of the contentious statements in this article to make sure the material accurately reflects what the cited sources say. Atsme📞📧 09:03, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Atsme, we've already addressed #1 - please read other people's comments.
    No, it's not gossip, no not "opinion". It's reliably sourced. People, please stop making stuff up.
    Sure - but in the meantime, we do not leave WP:SYNTH in the article.Volunteer Marek (talk) 16:26, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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