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:What you "believe" is completely and totally irrelevant, per [[WP:OR]]. The only pertinent question is "What do reliable secondary -- <u>'''''not'''''</u> primary --sources say."{{parabr}}BTW, your use of "epidemiology" in this context is a slip on your part indicating your POV about abortions -- which, of course, is the entire point of your edits.{{parabr}}You will '''''not''''' add it to the article unless and until you have a consensus to do so on this talk page. It will be removed otherwise. [[User:Beyond My Ken|Beyond My Ken]] ([[User talk:Beyond My Ken|talk]]) 04:31, 30 December 2018 (UTC)
:What you "believe" is completely and totally irrelevant, per [[WP:OR]]. The only pertinent question is "What do reliable secondary -- <u>'''''not'''''</u> primary --sources say."{{parabr}}BTW, your use of "epidemiology" in this context is a slip on your part indicating your POV about abortions -- which, of course, is the entire point of your edits.{{parabr}}You will '''''not''''' add it to the article unless and until you have a consensus to do so on this talk page. It will be removed otherwise. [[User:Beyond My Ken|Beyond My Ken]] ([[User talk:Beyond My Ken|talk]]) 04:31, 30 December 2018 (UTC)

::[[User:Mwright1469|Mwright1469]] Thank you for that passionate response. I'm using medical and scientific terminology because this is the language I use as a clinician. If the scientific jargon is too much for you, we can use lay terms so it's easier for you.
::Beyond that, the following secondary source does the calculation of PPAF's abortion numbers, using PPAF's reported 2014 abortion counts, and a nation-wide study looking at total number of abortions.<ref>{{cite web |url=https://www.liveaction.org/learn/3percent/}}</ref> Given that the basic math of (323,999/926,200)*100% checks out, the 35% abortion services provision number is reliable.

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PPFA vs Planned Parenthood

I figure that I should ask before doing this – May I replace the jargon "PPFA" with "Planned Parenthood" throughout the page? The organization is called "Planned Parenthood" familiarly, as a self reference in its logo and elsewhere, and in the title page. Although Planned Parenthood Federation of America may be its corporate name, it's like calling Walmart by its formal 'Walmart Stores' name. And then to add a jargon abbreviation on top of that...

Ira

Ira Leviton (talk) 14:26, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think I object, but it's worth noting that it's not just jargon: the name "Planned Parenthood" is used by many (related, but distinct) organizations (Planned Parenthood of Massachusetts is not the same organization as PPFA, nor as IPPF, nor as PPAF, and they do different things). So possibly more care is required than just a replace-all. --JBL (talk) 15:43, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Is this article about a specific one of those organizations though? If so then their is no harm using "Planned Parenthood", and simply referring to the others by the full names. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 15:47, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I presume that some statements in the article are about PPFA specifically, others are about particular regional PP organizations, and others are about combinations of several of these organizations. Probably in most cases "Planned Parenthood" is clear; but I think if a switch is going to be made it should be done by a human sensitive to the possibility of confusion, not an automated replace-all. --JBL (talk) 17:40, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Should we really be having an article that is a mixture of such things though. If someone was to read this article would they be looking for just PPFA or about the regional groups too? Even if they were looking for them both do the reliable resources ever use the two terms interchangeably? Emir of Wikipedia (talk)

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Number of abortions per year.

I would like to propose a change

a total of nearly 9.5 million discrete services including 324,000 abortions "(of 652,639 total abortions for 2014 according to CDC) [1]"

To ensure accuracy as "discrete services" is slightly misleading as they provide 49.64% of abortions in the USA per 2014 and thereby would qualify as a major abortion provider. This is not to take away from any other services they may or may not provide.

135.23.244.37 (talk) 00:01, 4 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Can we find a secondary source that has done the calculation? The CDC report is from 2014 and PPFA's 2014-2015 report has the corresponding numbers. Someone out there has definitely gone over this one. Mwright1469 (talk) 04:14, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Read the Limitations section of that CDC report. Such math is impossible, as the CDC "is unable to obtain the total number of abortions performed in the United States". Bradv🍁 04:16, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The real number is closer to 34.9%. (323,999/926,200[1])*100% = 35% (one-third). This study is much more accurate. @Brad. Can we build a consensus around this? I'm surprised it hasn't been talked about yet since we're already saying PPAF is the largest abortion services provider. Mwright1469 (talk) 04:35, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

History

Hello,

I would like to expand the history section to include more on where the term planned parenthood came from. Hmprescott (talk) 18:58, 28 February 2018 (UTC)Please advise.[reply]

New York Times: "Planned Parenthood Is Accused of Mistreating Pregnant Employees"

This should be included in the article.

https://www.nytimes.com/2018/12/20/business/planned-parenthood-pregnant-employee-discrimination-women.html

Lpouer4832xs (talk) 22:21, 20 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Might be too insignificant at this point or suffering from WP:Recentism. Give it a bit. Zero Serenity (talk - contributions) 22:35, 20 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
OK. I just wanted to see if others thought it should be included in the article. Thanks for your feedback. Lpouer4832xs (talk) 20:41, 21 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Abortion Section - PPFA Abortion Market Share

Hi guys! Just piggy backing off of the Number of abortions per year thread. It's important to contextualize PPFA's abortion market share in the US given that it's not a small organization. I know Beyond My Ken feels strongly about this so let's come to a consensus. What percent of abortions are performed by PPFA?

I believe they perform 35% (one-third) of the abortions (323,999/926,200[2])*100% = 35% (one-third). This study uses slightly different methods to calculate abortion incidence than CDC but it's safe to say between 35-50% of abortions in the U.S. are performed by Planned Parenthood.

I will add in the edits if no one objects but I do want to hear from Beyond My Ken first, since he seems passionate about the epidemiology on this matter. Mwright1469 (talk) 04:22, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Jones, Rachel; Jerman, Jenna (17 January 2017). "Abortion Incidence and Service Availability In the United States, 2014". Perspect Sex Reprod Health. 49 (1): 17–27. doi:10.1363/psrh.12015. Retrieved 30 December 2018.
  2. ^ Jones, Rachel; Jerman, Jenna (17 January 2017). "Abortion Incidence and Service Availability In the United States, 2014". Perspect Sex Reprod Health. 49 (1): 17–27. doi:10.1363/psrh.12015. Retrieved 30 December 2018.
What you "believe" is completely and totally irrelevant, per WP:OR. The only pertinent question is "What do reliable secondary -- not primary --sources say."
BTW, your use of "epidemiology" in this context is a slip on your part indicating your POV about abortions -- which, of course, is the entire point of your edits.
You will not add it to the article unless and until you have a consensus to do so on this talk page. It will be removed otherwise. Beyond My Ken (talk) 04:31, 30 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Mwright1469 Thank you for that passionate response. I'm using medical and scientific terminology because this is the language I use as a clinician. If the scientific jargon is too much for you, we can use lay terms so it's easier for you.
Beyond that, the following secondary source does the calculation of PPAF's abortion numbers, using PPAF's reported 2014 abortion counts, and a nation-wide study looking at total number of abortions.[1] Given that the basic math of (323,999/926,200)*100% checks out, the 35% abortion services provision number is reliable.
  1. ^ https://www.liveaction.org/learn/3percent/. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)

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