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I've edited and re-edited this article since it was first declined. It was definitely over-the-top when I first submitted it, but I didn't see it then. Every time I've gone back to edit it, I've found more content that needed to be cut that I was previously unaware of. That said, if the submission still violates NPOV, it's not for a lack of trying, and I'd appreciate it if you'd edit for neutrality. Thanks. [[User:JSFarman2|JSFarman2]] ([[User talk:JSFarman2|talk]]) 17:08, 11 May 2016 (UTC) |
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Close paraphrasing of https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=719938635&action=compare&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.psfk.com%2F2015%2F03%2Fneuehouse-master-and-dynamic-boom-mic-microphones.html. [[User:Zppix|Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ]] ([[User talk:Zppix|talk]]) 18:38, 12 May 2016 (UTC) |
Close paraphrasing of https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=719938635&action=compare&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.psfk.com%2F2015%2F03%2Fneuehouse-master-and-dynamic-boom-mic-microphones.html. [[User:Zppix|Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ]] ([[User talk:Zppix|talk]]) 18:38, 12 May 2016 (UTC) |
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:The offending phrase was "over the course of nine months." I removed it! Thanks [[User:Zppix|Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ]] ([[User talk:Zppix|talk]])[[User:JSFarman2|JSFarman2]] ([[User talk:JSFarman2|talk]]) 19:28, 12 May 2016 (UTC) |
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Note to reviewers (moved from article comment)[edit]
I've edited and re-edited this article since it was first declined. It was definitely over-the-top when I first submitted it, but I didn't see it then. Every time I've gone back to edit it, I've found more content that needed to be cut that I was previously unaware of. That said, if the submission still violates NPOV, it's not for a lack of trying, and I'd appreciate it if you'd edit for neutrality. Thanks. JSFarman2 (talk) 17:08, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
Close Paraphrasing[edit]
Close paraphrasing of https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=719938635&action=compare&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.psfk.com%2F2015%2F03%2Fneuehouse-master-and-dynamic-boom-mic-microphones.html. Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ (talk) 18:38, 12 May 2016 (UTC)
- The offending phrase was "over the course of nine months." I removed it! Thanks Ⓩⓟⓟⓘⓧ (talk)JSFarman2 (talk) 19:28, 12 May 2016 (UTC)