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::::::And I have reverted those bad faith changes. There is obviously no consensus for them. And implying that those who disagree with you are bad editors is not acceptable here. Please read [[WP:AGF]]. It's sad that those so desperate to denigrate Aboriginal people are also unaware of Wikipedia's relevant rules, and also choose to denigrate other editors. You MUST await others commenting on your proposal. [[User:HiLo48|HiLo48]] ([[User talk:HiLo48|talk]]) 04:42, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
::::::And I have reverted those bad faith changes. There is obviously no consensus for them. And implying that those who disagree with you are bad editors is not acceptable here. Please read [[WP:AGF]]. It's sad that those so desperate to denigrate Aboriginal people are also unaware of Wikipedia's relevant rules, and also choose to denigrate other editors. You MUST await others commenting on your proposal. [[User:HiLo48|HiLo48]] ([[User talk:HiLo48|talk]]) 04:42, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
:::::::Hello {{u|HiLo48}}, can I suggest you follow your own advice and {{tq|read [[WP:AGF]]}}, describing those additions you reverted as {{tq|bad faith changes}} is neither constructive nor civil. You seem to be the one who {{tq|choose[s] to denigrate other editors}}. Now, I respectfully ask, please enlighten me on what was bad faith about either addition. [[User:Cavalryman|Cavalryman]] ([[User talk:Cavalryman|talk]]) 04:52, 23 June 2021 (UTC).
:::::::Hello {{u|HiLo48}}, can I suggest you follow your own advice and {{tq|read [[WP:AGF]]}}, describing those additions you reverted as {{tq|bad faith changes}} is neither constructive nor civil. You seem to be the one who {{tq|choose[s] to denigrate other editors}}. Now, I respectfully ask, please enlighten me on what was bad faith about either addition. [[User:Cavalryman|Cavalryman]] ([[User talk:Cavalryman|talk]]) 04:52, 23 June 2021 (UTC).
:::::::[[User:HiLo48|HiLo48]] whatever you think of Tudge, you can't write off a prominent politician because of their political affiliation. Please review [[WP:Encyclopedic style]] and [[WP:NPOV]]. Sutton, Walshe, Keen etc are not "liberal dinosaurs" but respected academics. Another storied academic, Prof Tim Rowse, has described Dark Emu's thesis as "demolished"[https://www.canberratimes.com.au/story/7302262/the-latest-salvo-in-the-dark-emu-debate/] in the light of Sutton & Walshe's critique. I'd also recommend reading the ''Good Weekend'' piece discussing Sutton & Walshe's work before you dismiss it out of hand. I believe the material that you removed should be restored ASAP. If you were referring to my additions when you mention {{tq|bad faith comments}} and {{tq|desperate to denigrate Aboriginal people}} [sic] I call upon you to please apologise unreservedly and strike through your comments at once. There is nothing in my edits to indicate bad faith or any other bad conduct [[User:Noteduck|Noteduck]] ([[User talk:Noteduck|talk]]) 04:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
Two of the main participants in this part of the discussion have been blocked for disruptive and COI editing here and at Talk:Bruce Pascoe. Other editors are welcome to continue discussions on the same theme, but it would be most constructive to do so in another section of this page. --JBL (talk) 13:15, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

As many of have been saying over the past year, this Wikipedia page does not accurately reflect the critical response to the book, and any attempts to address this are rigorously resisted by Dark Emu's Wikipedia supporters who claim critics have COI or are unreliable sources. But events are proving our claims that Dark Emu is deeply flawed. Editors are invited to read "Foragers or Farmers: Dark Emu and the Controversy over Aboriginal Agriculture" Published online: 05 Jan 2021 in Anthropological Forum A Journal of Social Anthropology and Comparative Sociology by Dr. Ian Keen School of Archaeology and Anthropology, College of Arts and Social Sciences, Australian National University, Canberra, Australia.

My suggestion is to include a paragraph in the "Critical Reception' section along the lines of "Australian anthropologist Ian Keen has 'subjected the evidence for Aboriginal farming presented in Dark Emu to scrutiny, and finds that while the boundary between foraging and farming is a fuzzy one, Aboriginal people were indeed hunters, gatherers and fishers at the time of the British colonisation of Australia'.Austhistory99 (talk) 12:24, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately, there's very little "published online" at the ANU College of Arts and Social Sciences's School of Archaeology & Anthropology's blurb. Without a proper publication or at least a transcript/video, there's not much that can be usefully presented here. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 13:19, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Exactly - that blurb to publicise a seminar does nothing to challenge Pascoe's assertions in the book. He does not suggest that all Aboriginal peoples were practising agriculture nor that they were not hunters and gatherers as well; he just highlights the existing research and evidence showing that there were settlements, aquaculture, grinding of grain, etc. in some parts of the country. There are always lively debates in topics such as history and archaeology, and differences in opinion about the extent of the farming do exist - we know that. But I have yet to see a serious examination or specific criticism about anything that he has written about, because he is mostly reporting what has already been written elsewhere. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 13:46, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It appears you have missed my recent point - we have moved beyond the "seminar blurb" stage - the peer-reviewed academic paper has now been published on 5th Jan 2021. Do you have access to this paper? [1] Austhistory99 (talk) 20:43, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
In an area as fraught as this, with blatant irrational attacks by racists, bigots and haters being the main criticisms of the book, all we have here is an abstract a few lines long. That abstract does not explicitly contradict the claims in the book. Like much of the criticism we see of this book on Wikipedia, this sub-section begins with a breach of WP:AGF and, effectively, WP:NPA. It deserves to be ignored, and the perpetrator deserves to be disciplined. HiLo48 (talk) 21:11, 6 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I have sent you only the publicly available abstract - if you cannot access the whole paper I am happy to send it to you, subject to copyright (only for your own research and not to be posted). If you haven't read the whole of Dr Keen's paper then you perhaps shouldn't be jumping to your conclusion. His paper is all about a critique of Dark Emu and Pascoe's methodology and some of his supporters and points out myriad examples of why Dark Emu is wrong and its detractors are 'correct'. Below is an excerpt from this paper where Dr Keen writes, "Many critiques of Dark Emu have come from the political right. They include the writings and broadcasts of Andrew Bolt (Morton 2019); articles in, and a book published by Quadrant magazine (O’Brien 2019), whose editor Keith Windschuttle engaged extensively in the ‘history wars’; and the Dark Emu Exposed (Anon. 2020) as well as the Quadrant online (quadrant.org.au) websites. Unfortunately, in my judgement these critiques of Pascoe’s treatment of his historical sources are largely correct. The forthcoming book by the anthropologist and linguist Peter Sutton and the archaeologist Keryn Walshe (Sutton and Walshe, forthcoming), brings a high standard of scholarship in scrutinising Pascoe’s claims, and adopts a non-political stance. Defences of Dark Emu have come from the political left. Rick Morton of The Saturday Paper, for example, writes: ‘after reading the explorer journals on which the book is based’ he was ‘unable to find any errors’ in Dark Emu (Morton 2019). This is quite surprising, as we shall see. Professor Marcia Langton is reported to have said that Dark Emu ‘is the most important book on Australia and should be read by every Australian’ (Lee 2020). Again, coming as it does from an eminent scholar, this is an unexpected judgement". (ibid, page 2)
Your biased position in uncritically defending Pascoe and Dark Emu and preventing countering viewpoints being available for Wikipedia readers, will be shown to have put you on the wrong side of history, especially when Sutton's book is published this year. There is no reason not to include the respected Dr Keen's (who has his own Wikipedia page!) academic views on Dark Emu Austhistory99 (talk) 00:52, 7 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Please drop the personal attacks. HiLo48 (talk) 02:36, 7 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Austhistory99 The publicly available abstract does not indicate what position the author has taken (if any), and even after your quote above, there is no specific criticism of the text - just a string of names, and his opinion. We need better than that for Wikipedia. Also, unless I am mis-remembering, are you not banned from editing this topic owing to COI? Let's await the Sutton book for a meaningful debate. I have no problem with robust criticisms which actually address specific topics in the book, but I don't see any yet. What Pascoe has done is throw light on past research which shows that many Aboriginal Australians did practise agriculture and aquaculture and in some cases had quite strong domestic economies, and I have yet to see anything which disproves this. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 06:31, 7 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Laterthanyouthink - You ask "...are you not banned from editing this topic owing to COI?" Not sure about being explicitly banned, but there's an interesting note regarding Austhistory99 and likely COI right near the top of this page. HiLo48 (talk) 07:02, 7 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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In my view, and in light of academic and other commentary over the last twelve months about the book the subject of this article, the article was failing the WP:NPOV requirement until just now, when I expanded the "Critical reception" by adding a new "Criticisms" section. As a consquence of strong criticisms of the subject book that have been made, not just by rightwing commentators, in the last twelve months, the book now appears to be largely discredited. Whereas the previous version of the article did not even mention most of the criticisms, the new section makes clear that the book has been heavily criticised, for various reasons. As the new section indicates, rightwingers have criticised the book for exaggerating its sources, and others have said not only that the exaggerations discredit the book's central thesis (which some of the critics support), but also that in any event that thesis is a disservice to Aborigines because it implies that agricultural pursuits are more worthy than hunting and gathering. (One of the academic critics has also critised certain other academics who have praised the book, but I chose to leave out that academic skirmishing.)

I also now respond briefly to some of the above comments about "reliable sources", which seem to me to be based on a fundamental misunderstanding of that term. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. If and to the extent that Wikipedia publishes assertions of fact, those assertions should therefore be supported by a citation to a "reliable source", ie a source of factual information that can considered to be reliable. Speaking generally, quality newspapers such as The Guardian are regarded as "reliable sources", because they generally publish reliably what purport to be facts, and publishers of opinion pieces are not regarded as "reliable sources" because opinions are debatable. Although some of the comments above criticise Quadrant on the basis that it is not regarded as a "reliable source", that criticism is misplaced. The reason Quadrant is so classified is, simply, that it publishes opinion pieces, not news focusing on reliably reported facts.

In the circumstances, if The Guardian publishes an article asserting that the subject book and its author "... have been targeted by rightwing commentators", as The Guardian has done on more than one occasion, that assertion can also be published in Wikipedia as being sourced to The Guardian. Similarly, if an academic associated with a reputable university writes an article in an academic journal, and especially if both the academic and the journal are the subject of separate Wikipedia articles, and the article identifies the rightwing commentators who have criticised the subject book, then the relevant passage can be quoted in Wikipedia and sourced to the author and journal. That is how the new section I have just added to the subject article begins, and it proceeds in similar fashion. No portion of the new section is sourced to Quadrant, or any book published by Quadrant, or any anonymously published website.

Finally, it is not correct to assert by implication that Associate Professor Keen's article is not publicly available. It is publicly available, albeit behind a paywall, just as Pascoe's book is publicly available, albeit that you have to buy it from someone. As a Wikipedia editor, I have assumed good faith on User:Austhistory99's part in quoting a passage from Keen's article on the assumption that User:Austhistory99 has correctly quoted that passage. Bahnfrend (talk) 12:30, 19 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

As soon as you wrote "the book now appears to be largely discredited", you lost all credibility. Your Criticism section is twice the size of the Praise section. That's completely inappropriate. HiLo48 (talk) 05:06, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't have any problem with criticisms being appropriately expressed, but see WP:CRIT. In the case of this book, Bahnfrend, the section you added was just way too long and quoted the critics at inappropriate length, definitely WP:UNDUE and NPOV. While there certainly are issues, and opinions differ (a lawyer posts his opinion here, highlighting some of the commentary and the heat in the debate), it is certainly not true to say that the book has been "largely discredited". This is not the impression returned by Google, even if you add "controversy" to your search terms. A few brief mentions of the criticisms, relating to the fact that Pascoe is not an historian, and the fact that he embellishes and adds his own opinions here and there, is enough. This is Wikipedia, and as there is no way to cover the wider debate in a concise way, in my view it is better to err on the brief side. We don't need continuing edit-warring over this. The book has been lauded, and it has been used to raise the awareness of the general public of some history that was largely being ignored. Geography teachers have developed teaching resources around it. Wikipedia is not here to be the mouthpiece of opinions. Let's give enough in the citations and further reading for those who wish to dig deeper to do so, but trying to represent a multitude of opinions in this article is only going to lead to further arguments. There are many many controversial books (I just thought to have a look at The Lucky Country as an example), but Wikipedia doesn't seek to cover all of the criticisms and opinions. I don't want to have to keep coming back to this page, and I'm sure a few other editors feel the same! Laterthanyouthink (talk) 04:38, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your effort User:Bahnfrend and please don't give up. Have another go at writing a much shorter paragraph noting the critique of Dark Emu by the academic Dr Ian Keen. Yes, I am quoting from his article exactly in good faith. If you fail again, we will look to bring in some other independent Wikipedia editors to resolve what is starting to look like bad faith from some current editors.Austhistory99 (talk) 01:14, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That is a bad faith faith post. My concern about the edits by User:Bahnfrend centred around them creating a criticism section twice the size of the praise section, plus using the words "the book now appears to be largely discredited". That was a bad faith comment. Have you read the book? Fully? HiLo48 (talk) 03:31, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I would like to add my support to the efforts of User:Bahnfrend. The article in its current form does not reflect WP:NPOV and the valid criticisms from Ian Keen, and apparently some other respected academics as well. merlinVtwelve (talk) 03:01, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Keen's major work on Aboriginal people was done almost half a century ago. We now know a lot more about this subject. Dark Emu is a much more modern view. Throwing around the adjective "respected" about other cherry picked writers is unhelpful. Have you read the book yourself? HiLo48 (talk) 03:36, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dr Keen has not retired from active research and his 50+ years of experience surely count for something.PetroAntonio (talk) 21:53, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, they count for something, but over that time period most white people have recognised that Aboriginal society and lifestyles were far more complex than generally believed fifty years ago. If Dr Keen still thinks the same way he did fifty years ago, he is not a very good scholar. Have you read Dark Emu? HiLo48 (talk) 23:37, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dr Keen has been active all that time, so, certainly, his views would have been informed by later research. But his review of Dark Emu is current and, presumably, based on his understanding of the latest research, which is obvious from the references he cites in his paper. Yes I have read Dark Emu very carefully. Have you read Dr Keen's paper?PetroAntonio (talk) 23:54, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
No. My local library doesn't have it. It has several copies of Dark emu, because it's an excellent book in which I see no flaws. HiLo48 (talk) 00:05, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps you should take up the offer of Austhistory99 to send you a copy of the Keen paperPetroAntonio (talk) 00:53, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Firstly, will you bloody well learn how to indent your posts properly! I keep fixing for you so you don't look like the novice editor you obviously are. Secondly, I see so point in reading Keen's paper. Dark Emu stands on its own. I find it fascinating when newbies, obviously from the hateful, racist right, pop up here with allegedly good sources, but which nobody else has ever heard of, while the vast majority of the population carries on respecting their target far more. HiLo48 (talk) 01:34, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry about the indenting. Hopefully this works. My book Bitter Harvest has been summarily dismissed by most editors of this article, partly on the basis that I have no qualifications to evaluate Dark Emu because I am 'not a historian'. Setting aside that neither is Bruce Pascoe a historian, you say that you can find no flaws in Dark Emu. May I, with great respect, ask if you are a historian? And what are the odds that a history written by a non-historian would have no flaws? PetroAntonio (talk) 01:56, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Oh dear. I should have recognised the name. Your conflict of interest here really makes your contributions worth nothing. HiLo48 (talk) 02:35, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Having a 'conflict of interest' does not prevent me from contributing to discussions. It does prevent me from directly editing articles but the rules do allow me to request or propose an edit via this forum PetroAntonio (talk) 02:44, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This isn't a forum. It's a place to discuss improvements to the article. And you stuffed up the indenting again. A serious recommendation I frequently make to people like yourself is to go away from this area of editing. Work on some other areas of Wikipedia where you can be of use. Your writing is excellent, and a lot of articles need massive cleanups. Engaging only in areas where you hold extreme opinions is a bad move. If you contribute elsewhere for a while, you can learn a lot more about standard Wikipedia conventions, and simply how to be more useful to the project. HiLo48 (talk) 02:59, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Let's hope I get the indenting right this time. HiLo48, I note what you say, nonetheless I would still be interested in your response to my questions. PetroAntonio (talk) 06:02, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dark Emu stands on its own — For the purpose of the Wikipedia article, Dark Emu cannot "stand on its own" - Wikipedia requires reliable independent sources. Mitch Ames (talk) 02:30, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to propose the following addition to the Critical Acclaim section: "The central premise of Dark Emu viz that Aboriginal people were essentially sedentary agriculturalists rather than nomadic hunter/gatherers, was challenged by anthropologist Dr Ian Keen, in a paper entitled "Foragers or Farmers: Dark Emu and the Controversy over Aboriginal Agriculture" published in the journal Anthropological Forum in January 2021". I apologize in advance for any mistakes or omissions I have made in formatting. PetroAntonio (talk) 21:23, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Only if we balance your cherry picking with reference to this new ABC article, which says of the book
"...if you’re looking for facts, look no further than Amy’s other recommendation: Dark Emu.
"...This text accesses the diaries and notes of the invaders/settlers/explorers to challenge the stories of exactly what was first seen and 'discovered' when this continent was invaded some 230+ years ago," she says.

"It does a lot of great work in correcting misinformation about the who, what and how of these lands were prior to invasion [and will] continue to be relevant to days of mourning and protests such as January 26th … it’s a myth-busting title that will take a bit of intentional reading time but be worth every minute." HiLo48 (talk) 21:43, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fine by me. I'll let you make the necessary addition. PetroAntonio (talk) 22:03, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't believe either addition helps the article. They are just clutter. And point scoring attempts. HiLo48 (talk) 22:28, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The current Critical Reception section contains the following criticism "The main criticism of the book by academics has been of Pascoe's claim that since 1880 there has been an academic suppression of alternative historical accounts about Aboriginal peoples' housing, farming and cultivation practices." That is followed by an expansion which includes the gratuitous observation that "Lourandos and McNiven are delighted at the book's success in reaching the broader public", which sounds rather like clutter to me. But that is by the way. There is now criticism of the book by another well qualified academic. My proposed addition makes no judgement or assessment of Dr Keen's analysis. It simply points out its existence. Surely that is the purpose of the article - to provide the public with relevant information about the topic? PetroAntonio (talk) 22:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The central premise of Dark Emu viz that Aboriginal people were essentially sedentary agriculturalists..." I don't have my copy to hand because I lent it to someone, but I'm pretty sure that this misrepresents the content of the book. Pascoe mentions specific examples, such as the eel traps and villages of the Gunditjmara, and he certainly doesn't claim that the peoples of the central desert area were settled agriculturalists. Remember that there are many different peoples (and were more, with hundreds of languages), and anything which suggests that they were a homogeneous society is clearly wrong. (I used an outdent because my tablet app doesn't show any indenting and can only see what I'm typing.) Laterthanyouthink (talk) 22:58, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The back cover of Dark Emu, presumably with Pascoe's imprimatur, states that "Pascoe puts forward a compelling argument for a reconsideration of the hunter-gatherer label for pre-colonial Aboriginal Australians. The evidence insists that Aboriginal people right across the continent were using domesticated plants, sowing, harvesting, irrigating and storing - behaviours inconsistent with the hunter-gatherer tag." PetroAntonio (talk) 00:12, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"My proposed addition makes no judgement or assessment of Dr Keen's analysis. It simply points out its existence. Surely that is the purpose of the article - to provide the public with relevant information about the topic?" Who decides on the relevance, when do we decide it's enough, and when do we leave it out because it's from a known liar? Andrew Bolt has said an awful lot about the book. We include nothing of what he has said, and won't. HiLo48 (talk) 23:47, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Are you saying that Dr Keen is a liar? Or that I am? PetroAntonio (talk) 00:12, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This article attracts a lot of novice and naïve editors with minimal experience and understanding of how Wikipedia works, many of whom seem to have the single goal of proving that Aboriginal people were primitive savages who deserved to be conquered and have their land stolen. Because of this we need to be constantly vigilant with any negative additions. It's up to you to convince us that your proposed addition really adds anything of value to the article. I also note that you still haven't demonstrated an interest in assisting with and learning from any other area of Wikipedia. It looks a bit obsessional, and narrow. HiLo48 (talk) 00:20, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
HiLo48, I notice that you are adept at avoiding answering questions, so let me answer yours. If I am to become more proficient in editing Wikipedia articles, I would prefer to do my learning in an area in which I have some expertise, to wit Dark Emu. When I wrote Bitter Harvest it was not my intention to prove that "Aboriginal people were primitive savages who deserved to be conquered and have their land stolen". That is not what I believe. I set out to demonstrate that Pascoe had failed to prove his theory. (Incidentally in all my writings on this subject I have taken nothing from Andrew Bolt. Everything I have written is as a result of my own research.) In respect of the fact that I have developed an argument against Dark Emu, I could be said to be partisan, but that does not, of itself, discredit my views. But getting back to Dr Keen, other editors have read his paper and judged it a credible and substantive critique from a highly qualified source. If they are correct, then DR Keen's paper deserves mention in a section titled 'Critical Reception'. You, on the other hand, have declined to read Dr Keen's paper on the grounds that, in your opinion, Dark Emu is flawless, which incidentally would make it unique in the annals of non-fiction writing. That makes you a partisan player, not an objective editor. PetroAntonio (talk) 00:43, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
You have misrepresented my position. And my suggestion to edit elsewhere, one I have made to many new editors over the years, is precisely to avoid working on topic where you know a lot. That's not necessary to become a great contributor to Wikipedia. Being able to write well, and consistently apply our policies and guidelines on ANY article is just as useful. HiLo48 (talk) 01:34, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
In what way have I misrepresented your position? Could you clarify please. PetroAntonio (talk) 02:17, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"in your opinion, Dark Emu is flawless" An obvious example of something I did not say. HiLo48 (talk) 02:50, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"My local library doesn't have it (Dr Keen's paper). It has several copies of Dark emu, because it's an excellent book in which I see no flaws." PetroAntonio (talk) 02:55, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Not quite the same thing, but I take your point. I STILL recommend you get out and see a lot more of how Wikipedia works. HiLo48 (talk) 03:01, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The only way they could not be the same would be if you meant "there may be flaws in Dark Emu, but if there are I can't see them". If that is what you meant, why then why would you not be interested to see what those flaws might be? PetroAntonio (talk) 05:54, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Because most of those who have come here to point out "flaws" have done so using the Andrew Bolt approach, and those of us who care about the article's quality have become rather sick of protecting it from racist and bigoted nonsense. Not your fault, of course, but that's reality. Given that history here, your argument has to be particularly convincing. HiLo48 (talk) 06:23, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Is there another editor out there, who has read Dr Keen's paper, who believes it does not deserve to be mentioned in the article? PetroAntonio (talk) 04:41, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

While you wait for answers, how about you find everything written by all academics about Dark Emu? That way you can move away from charges of cherry-picking. HiLo48 (talk) 05:13, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Critical Reception section contains three unqualified positive reviews by academics and two by academics who support the book but take issue with one minor peripheral issue. My book Bitter Harvest, critical of Dark Emu, has been ignored because I am from the 'hateful, racist right'. The Dark Emu Exposed website is not acceptable for presumably similar reasons. That there would be no valid dissenting views on a work of history or anthropology defies common sense. So I offer an opinion by a qualified academic, almost certainly not from the hateful racist right. I am not the one cherry picking. PetroAntonio (talk) 06:21, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
May I suggest that you both take at least a day off this page, PetroAntonio and HiLo48, and return when we have at least one other editor involved, and/or a better understanding of what is going to be agreeable to all parties? PetroAntonio, I'm sorry to have reverted your change (and another introduced by a vandal after yours), but you had neither linked nor cited properly, but more importantly, as per my comments above, your characterisation of the content of the book was just plain incorrect. Pascoe definitely does not claim that [all, or any] Aboriginal people were "essentially sedentary". I will come back to this once I've had more time to concentrate on this, get my copy back, and preferably without the headache I have right now. You cannot use the publisher's blurb (which, btw, most writers don't have control over), and create a straw man argument. I don't have time for a thorough search now, but "There certainly was a lot of movement... but there was also a lot more sedentary living than we were led to believe." [1] It is very difficult to achieve a nuanced debate in a Wikipedia article within a reasonable length and without doing some of the contributors (sources) a disservice, hence my reluctance to keep growing this article. However, I would like to hear from more editors, and come back to this when I am better able to give it the attention it deserves. There is no rush. PA - I have put a welcome panel on your page with a lot of links to help you with some of the basics of editing Wikipedia, and may I suggest that if you want to get a bit of practice, create something in your sandbox first - then perhaps an addition to the Keen article, which looks as if it could do with a bit of updating? (And have a look at WP:SPA.) Laterthanyouthink (talk) 09:51, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Laterthanyouthink, thank you for your intervention and your suggestions. I welcome the input of other editors and I apologize for my ineptitude in linking to sources. I do accept that Pascoe does not explicitly state that Aborigines were essentially sedentary agriculturalists but he has structured his narrative to give that impression to the general public and that is what Dr Keen is attempting to address. I would be content to have my contribution amended along the lines of: 'The evidence that Dark Emu offers in support of the extent of pre-colonial Aboriginal agricultural practice has been challenged by anthropologist Dr Ian Keen, in a paper entitled "Foragers or Farmers: Dark Emu and the Controversy over Aboriginal Agriculture" published in the journal Anthropological Forum in January 2021 Keen argues that the evidence has been exaggerated and that the designation 'hunter-gatherer', that has traditionally been used to describe Aboriginal society, is appropriate." PetroAntonio (talk) 11:41, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

− Um, regardless of what legitimate contributers have said above, both user:Austhistory99 author of //www.dark-emu-exposed.org/ and user:PetroAntonio author of Bitter Harvest have serious and still undeclared conflicts of interest and it is completely unethical for either of them to be contributing to this article in anyway. Their contributions are unethical, intended to defame and these two editors are clearly WP:NOTHERE. I'm taking this to ANI. Bacondrum 11:16, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Courtesy link: WP:ANI#Serious conflict of interest issues, blatant advocacy and defamation. Mitch Ames (talk) 12:24, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Laterthanyouthink, I have no conflict of interest in relation to Dr Keen's paper and I have made no secret of the fact that I am the author of Bitter Harvest. I have made no secret of the fact that I believe Dark Emu is seriously flawed. In this thread I have made no attempt to promote my book. In any case, as far as I can ascertain the COI rules do not preclude someone with a conflict to propose an amendment or to participate in discussion. PetroAntonio (talk) 11:50, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You have written extensively on the subject, you are blatantly violating COI rules. The fact that neither you or Austhistory99 have declared this at any point in this discussion is deceptive and unethical. Bacondrum 11:54, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
And it gets worse, PetroAntonio should be indef blocked, no question about it. This is their work: https://quadrant.org.au/opinion/qed/2020/09/something-wiki-this-way-comes/

To satisfy a neutral point of view (NPOV) this article is ultimately going to have to refer to Dr Ian Keen's critique of Dark Emu. It is flippant of one editor to claim that because 'Keen's major work on Aboriginal people was done almost half a century ago', his views in 2020 on Dark Emu are invalid. Dr Keen has published a University text in 2004 on the hunter-gatherer economies of seven widely spaced Aboriginal societies at the threshold of colonisation (https://textbooks.zookal.com.au/products/aboriginal-economy-and-society-9780195507669?variant=34004192034948&gclid=CjwKCAiA9bmABhBbEiwASb35V6V_5RMGnTwh5BvKh_puiTgmtrwMquJEcFLW3dE-nltVtw0IbAL9phoCKSMQAvD_BwE, which he has summarised in a 2003 paper for any of you editors to read here (https://www.researchgate.net/publication/269867475_Aboriginal_economy_and_society_at_the_threshold_of_colonisation). Dr Keen is still a practicing academic. If none of us current editors can devise a short paragraph to include which mentions Dr Keen's critique of Dark Emu, it may well be time to call in some independent editors to resolve this long running impasse Austhistory99 (talk) 13:23, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Austhistory99 and PetroAntonio are indef blocked for disruptive editing including blatant advocacy and conflict of interest violations. All comments by these editors are to be disregarded. Bacondrum 01:21, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Significant disruption - blatant advocacy and conflict of interest violations

So, we've just experienced some significant disruption by now indef blocked editors engaged in blatant advocacy and conflict of interest violations. If anyone would like to start again with those conversations in good faith, please do. Bacondrum 15:14, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've restored the previous #Disputed section above, which was archived by Bacondrum. Yes there was blatant advocacy and COI, but the main section and #Disputed (second section break) were not started by the blocked editors, and the discussion does include some valid comments and suggestions by reputable editors in good standing. It might be appropriate to start a fresh discussion in a new section, but I think it premature to completely remove the discussion thus far. Mitch Ames (talk) 01:12, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Mitch. Sorry, I was trying to be helpful, but I understand why you restored the discussion. I archived it because it was a total mess and the arguments were lost in the disruptive editing. I think it would be best if the discussions were started anew. I certainly have no interest in trying to sort the legitimate discussion from the disruptive one. Bacondrum 01:18, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Can we redact or hide the disruptive comments, so legitimate editors can get back to discussing legitimate issues without having to wade through all those disruptive comments? Bacondrum 01:25, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think any of the comments justify redaction (see WP:TPO), and attempts to redact them would confuse people reading the responses. You could ask an admin or uninvolved editor to wrap the section with {{Discussion top}}, {{Discussion bottom}}, with reason= requesting a fresh discussion (not "discussion is closed", because I don't think it is). I've made minimal comments myself, but could still be considered "involved", so given the contentious material, I don't want to wrap the discussion myself. Mitch Ames (talk) 02:14, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I just took a look; it's hard to separate the problematic editors from the rest of the discussion (otherwise I would {{hat}} those parts). But I think Mitch Ames's suggestion is good, I'll wrap that in a moment. --JBL (talk) 13:10, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks guys. Bacondrum 22:25, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Disputed 3

Since I made my only edit to this article on 19 January 2021, I have had other things to do. I have now revisited the article and talk page, and am staggered both by the complete deletion of my edit and by the discussion in the talk page.

The only criticisms I can see of my edit are, first, that the criticism section I added was (allegedly) too long, and, secondly, that I am (allegedly) biased because I indicated on the talk page (but not in the article) that I consider the book the subject of the article now to be thoroughly discredited. On the basis of those criticisms, the whole of my edit, including even a statement sourced to The Guardian that that book and its author "... have been targeted by rightwing commentators", was deleted. I consider that deletion to be bad faith editing aimed at making the article misleading, which is contrary to Wikipedia policy. If the criticism had been good faith criticism, then the editor who deleted my edit would have shortened the edit, not deleted it altogether.

My responses to the criticisms of my edit are these. As a starting point, it seems to me that there are strong similarities between the author of the book the subject of this article and the now thoroughly discredited author David Irving. In each case, the author had not been trained as an historian, and published a book (in Irving's case, The Destruction of Dresden) that was initially acclaimed and sold very well, but was never treated seriously by academic historians. Further, and more importantly, Irving's book is now regarded as completely unreliable because of Irving's misuse of his sources, and it is increasingly obvious, from the detailed criticisms the book the subject of this article that have been published by several academic historians and anthropologists since late 2019, that that book is similarly unreliable for much the same reason. It is no answer to this to point to an ABC webpage that includes recent praise of the book by an academic who specialises in education, not history or anthropology.

As for the specific criticisms. First, there is good reason why the "criticisms" section I added was longer than the "praise" section: the criticisms are from multiple academic commentators (four in total, one of whom foreshadowed further criticism by two other academic commentators) who criticised the book from differing perspectives that warranted some explanation (for example, at least one of the critics supports the author's general thesis, but considers that the book severely damages that thesis by misusing the sources; another one criticises the thesis on the basis that it is unfair to Aborigines). Where a book the subject of a Wikipedia article has been heavily criticised, and several critics have made a variety of criticisms, it is entirely appropriate that explanations of the criticisms be included in the article, even if that means that the "criticisms" section is much, much longer than any "praise" section. So, eg, and this is in particular a response to the post by User:Laterthanyouthink on 22 January, the article Hitler's War, which is about one of Irving's other books, includes a very long section setting out the extensive and varied criticisms of that book by various academic writers. The last of those criticisms even asserts that the reason that that book appealed to many of its readers was that it told them what they wanted to read; in my view, such criticism is probably equally applicable to the book the subject of this article. As to whether it is appropriate to include lengthy criticisms sections in Wikipedia articles about books or authors, see also Dinesh D'Souza, which sets out detailed information concerning the various trenchant criticisms that have been made about various books that that author has written.

Secondly, it was entirely appropriate for me to state on the talk page my view that the book the subject of this article now appears to be thoroughly discredited, because that is an explanation for my view that the article, before I edited it, was misleading, inappropriate and contrary to Wikipedia NPOV policy.

I note that the article is now protected, in a form that is clearly not an NPOV form. As I have extended confirmed rights, I am able to edit the article despite the protection. However, at this stage I will refrain from reinstating my edit, which is what I plan to do given that my edit was entirely in keeping with Wikipedia policy and the extensive criticisms set out in detail in the articles The Destruction of Dresden and Hitler's War (about books written by a British author) and Dinesh D'Souza (about an American author who has written several heavily criticised books). My purpose in so refraining is to give other editors an opportunity to explain why the article should continue to be as misleading and contrary to Wikipedia policy as it is now. Any such explanation should also explain what, if anything, the editor plans to do about the extensive summaries of criticisms set out in the three other articles I have just mentioned. Bahnfrend (talk) 10:16, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hi, I'm sorry but I stopped reading at "the author of the book the subject of this article and the now thoroughly discredited author David Irving", which is a pitty because it looks like you were finally getting around to discussing content and sources. I'm sorry your earlier comments got lost in a sea of disruptive edits. Thankfully those being disruptive are now indef blocked. If you have changes you want to make please put forward the specific changes and the relevant sources, and please try to be succinct. I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say we don't want to discuss anything else but content and sources, and certainly not holocaust denial!?! David Irving has absolutely nothing to do with the subject of this article, absolutely nothing. Please focus on content and sources, I think everyone at this article has had enough, and again please have mercy on everyone here, make it succinct. Bacondrum 11:11, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • In regard to your edit that was reverted. Please see WP:NOCRIT "In most cases separate sections devoted to criticism, controversies, or the like should be avoided in an article because these sections call undue attention to negative viewpoints." Bacondrum 11:17, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'm sorry, but I have to disagree with you. According to Wikipedia:WikiProject Books, in relation to articles about individual books:
"quote the opinions of book reviewers. This section should contain a balanced reflection of the reviews. Providing balance is sometimes difficult because some reviews are more critical than others; some reviews may simply state "this book is great" while others may provide detailed analysis about what made the book good/bad. Because this section involves opinions, it should be heavy with quotes and citations."
There is a similar guideline in Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film#Critical response for articles about individual movies.
My edit followed the WikiProject Books guideline to the letter. It identified four academics, in each case either an anthropologist or an historian, who, since late 2019, had published a critique of the book that can be treated as a review. It also identified the affiliations of each adademic, and cited and quoted from all four of the critiques, in a neutral manner. All four of the critiques criticised the book for its treatment of its historical sources, and the critiques did so from more than one perspective. The phrases used by the academics to describe the author's treatment of his sources included "selective quoting", "distortion", and "selective use". Anyone familiar with academic writing would recognise the critiques as damning. Although the added "criticism" section was indeed longer than the "praise" section, the difference in length was not great. There has been no suggestion that my edit is not correctly sourced, or misquotes any of the critiques. Rather, the editors who consider that it should be omitted simply do not want the criticisms to be included in the article, and therefore want the article to continue in its present highly unbalanced form, which is simply not acceptable, and contrary to Wikipedia NPOV and WikiProject Books policy. Finally, David Irving does have a lot to do with this article, because, he, too, has been severely criticised for misusing his sources. The fact that he has also been criticised as a holocaust denier is simply irrelevant to that criticism. Bahnfrend (talk) 13:52, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Two very superficial comments: (1) Bringing up David Irving is inflammatory and counter-productive; it is akin to bringing up Hitler as a representative vegetarian, or something. You should drop it (and perhaps apologize for the distraction), not defend it. (2) The guidelines for book and movie criticisms do not endorse separate sub-sections for positive and negative criticism. --JBL (talk) 14:19, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I think we can include some praise and criticism, but I think lengthy sections dedicated to both are not warranted. Bahnfrend as an experienced editor I think you can do better than Nazi hyperbole and demanding that your content be included. You know better than that. Unless specific edits and sources are part the discussion then the discussion is essentially disruptive. I'm not interested in going through long winded and hyperbolic discussions, it's on you to make your case and your case is unconvincing so far - David Irving? come on. Bacondrum 19:41, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
guidelines for book and movie criticisms do not endorse separate sub-sections for positive and negative criticism — Presumably this can be trivially solved by combining the subsections into one section. Using this version as example, we could simply delete the sub-headings "Praise" and "Criticism", and possibly add a single sentence at the top, something like "the book has received mixed reviews". (Perhaps the combined section is too long and needs trimming, but my point is that "separate subsections" should be easily solved and need not hinder the presentation of negative reviews.) Mitch Ames (talk) 23:08, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I did say my comment was superficial! :) I agree that the structural issue is not hard to solve; the real question is which of the various possible sources genuinely merit inclusion, and how much weight to give them. --JBL (talk) 23:22, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, there's also the issue of due weight, looking at reviews in an impartial manner it is clear that this book is critically acclaimed, has won a great many major literary awards, been adapted for film and theater, schools etc. The critical reception as stands is fairly weighted and reflects the wider critical reception, including giving detractors views due weight. Bacondrum 06:45, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Criticisms of the book

The article (at this point in time) says "The main criticism of the book by academics has been of Pascoe's claim that since 1880 there has been an academic suppression of alternative historical accounts about Aboriginal peoples' housing, farming and cultivation practices."

But this is not quite true: there has been academic criticism of Pascoe's fundamental point as well. For example, Ian Keen's article "Foragers or Farmers: Dark Emu and the Controversy over Aboriginal Agriculture" (Anthropological Forum, 5 Jan 2021) concludes "while the boundary between foraging and farming is a fuzzy one, Aboriginal people were indeed hunters, gatherers and fishers at the time of the British colonisation of Australia." In my view, a balanced article should reference this article.

There is also an excellent review of the book by Michael Davis in Aboriginal History (Vol. 38, 2014, pp. 195-198). Davis highlights both positive and negative features of the book, praising the fact that Pascoe "has amassed a wealth of evidence to support his contention that Indigenous people, before European arrivals, maintained a sophisticated economy which featured aspects of farming practices and settled lifestyles including permanent settlements with established dwellings" and calling it an "important book," but also concluding inter alia that this "is not new" and that "Dark Emu asks the wrong question. It is not a matter of whether Indigenous peoples were hunter-gatherers or agriculturalists. The point – which Pascoe’s book does make – is rather to re-evaluate the specific nature of Indigenous economies, and to call for a societal re-evaluation that acknowledges the sophistication, complexity and malleability of these economies."

Another balanced review of the book is by Russell Marks in the broadly left-wing The Monthly (‘Taking Sides Over Dark Emu’, 5 February 2020). Marks points out that "throughout Dark Emu, Pascoe regularly exaggerates and embellishes," and gives several examples where Pascoe has misrepresented the sources that he quotes. According to Marks, "such selective quoting creates an impression of societies with a sturdiness, permanence, sedentarism and technical sophistication that’s not supported by the source material."

Marks also touches on the political reactions to the book, which may themselves perhaps be notable, if reliable references on those reactions can be found. -- Netwalker3 (talk) 07:15, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's more like it. Thanks, that makes much more sense than David Irving...and looking over Bahnfrend's additions again, I don't really object to them. I'll admit I was wrong to say the additions were false balance, they're actually reasonable. At the time they were introduced there was two bad actors being super disruptive and in the heat of it all, it looked like someone just adding more negative content, I accept that was not actually the case...then when we come back to it David Irving was suddenly part of the conversation...there's been a lot of argy-bargy on this page. Bacondrum 09:34, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I also think your suggested additions would be good. Bacondrum 09:41, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, but of course I can't edit the article. -- Netwalker3 (talk) 11:07, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
You could present your proposal here, or in a sandbox in your userspace, Special:MyPage/sandbox, and then invite comments. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 12:04, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Academic criticism

The following paper by Ian Keen (Phd Anthropology, Assoc. Prof at ANU) reads:

Bruce Pascoe's book Dark Emu, which has been a publishing phenomenon in Australia, argues that Aboriginal people were not ‘mere’ hunter-gatherers in 1788, but were farming. This article sets the argument of the book within the context of the views of archaeologists and anthropologists, as well as other historians, about Aboriginal agriculture. Some have argued that Aboriginal people were hunter-gatherers and asked why they did not adopt agriculture, while others have suggested that at least some groups were practicing farming. The article finds that while the boundary between foraging and farming is a fuzzy one, Aboriginal people were indeed hunters, gatherers and fishers at the time of the British colonisation of Australia.

I guess this warrants a paragraph in the Criticism section — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2406:3400:319:C860:B18B:F961:976F:5502 (talk) 00:11, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

See above conversation. Bacondrum 02:05, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Keen's paper (doi:10.1080/00664677.2020.1861538) is now freely accessible. I recommend reading it. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 13:15, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

See also:

There's a blurb for Peter Sutton's book at MUP. There's also "Anthropologist and archaeologist say Dark Emu was littered with weak evidence and unsourced claims" by Rob Harris at The Sydney Morning Herald (12 June 2021), and "Author Bruce Pascoe's best-selling Aboriginal history book Dark Emu 'debunked' " by Frank Chung, news.com.au (12 June 2021). I suspect there's more to come. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 11:12, 12 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

And also:

This article has been mentioned by a media organization template on this talkpage BRD

Mitch Ames, other interested.

About Undid revision 1015129906 by Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) - good faith edit but per Template:Press documentation "Do not use this template to highlight poor quality sources that would not normally be sufficient to support article content. This is especially important on the talk pages of contentious subjects"

The Spectator is perfectly fine for this use, see its WP:RSP entry. It's not poor quality for this context (not saying it's right, I'm saying it fits the template at this talkpage). IMO Quadrant [2] is good enough for inclusion here too (wow, he really likes writing about the topic [3]), neither is a blog or Breitbart. WP gets coverage like this at times, it can be interesting, and this template is not exclusive for "nice" stuff.

Exluding stuff like this seems like bowdlerization. Pinging source/media active editors NewslingerSmallbones if they have an opinion. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 08:44, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

My understanding is that the Australian edition of The Spectator is more politically extreme than the British edition and doesn't have a good reputation for fact checking (eg [4]), so the RSP entry isn't useful here. Quadrant has also been held to not be a RS in various discussions across Wikipedia, as noted at RSP. Nick-D (talk) 09:34, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Point, though I think not a dealbreaker (apparently they did survive the payout). They are still good for "Peter O'Brien said that" on a WP talkpage, WP:RS is about article-space. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 09:43, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The particular problem with Quadrant is that most of the people published in it these days are pretty obscure, so it is not clear why their opinion is worth noting in an article subject to WP:BLP, especially given that the magazine's editorial standards mean that what they write can't be assumed to be factually accurate. Independent and reliable sourcing establishing that authors in Quadrant have a noteworthy opinion is needed to guard against this. That the article by Mr O'Brian in The Spectator contains what appears to be several serious slurs directed at Mr Pascoe illustrates why these sources are highly problematical in Wikipedia articles concerning living people, and editors who seek to add such material (instead of material referenced to clearly factually accurate and/or clearly noteworthy commentary) are at great risk of being blocked. WP:BLP is required reading here, and it is important to note that Wikipedia deliberately has quite conservative standards. Nick-D (talk) 10:05, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I do agree Quadrant is a rubbish source, I still think the opinions are worth including, penned by a now blocked editor, who was having a massive cry about wikipedia. No big deal if they are not included though. Bacondrum 10:30, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
(ec) I'm willing to drop Quadrant, it's more iffy. But, "noting in an article/these sources are highly problematical in Wikipedia articles" doesn't apply, this is not article-space. WP:BLP applies, but mentioning (for example) that O'Brian said "It became clear to me that Wikipedia editors are highly partisan and that Bruce Pascoe is a protected species." (Spectator) on a WP-talkpage and linking to the article where he said it is not a WP:BLP violation. WP links Breitbart, OpIndia and Donald Trump's tweets where appropriate, even in article-space. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:44, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I tried to add the quadrant commentary, and a Bolt commentary, but was reverted. I think we should include those and the others you suggested. I agree, they are relevant and interesting. As you said "this template is not exclusive for "nice" stuff". This article became part of the culture war for a moment there, that's worth noting. Bacondrum 09:49, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Another one, [5] Herald Sun but I can't read it because paywall, so I won't try to add it. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 09:55, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's the Bolt commentary that I mentioned above. Bacondrum 10:26, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Gotcha. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:28, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
First up, I'd definitely be less likely to support a link to Quadrant, because according to WP:RSP it is "generally unreliable" vs The Spectator, which is only "No consensus, unclear, or additional considerations apply". In both cases Wikipedia is only asserting that "Peter O'Brien said....", which is reasonable on the face of it. However {{Press}} does clearly say "Do not use this template to highlight poor quality sources that would not normally be sufficient to support article content. This is especially important on the talk pages of contentious subjects", and Dark Emu (book) is definitely a contentious subject. The linked article is more about O'Brien's own editing dispute than the Wikipedia article per se, so while it may be treated as accurate in terms of what O'Brien says, his opinion in this case is clearly biased so not a reliable source on the subject matter - both the Dark Emu book itself, and Wikipedia's editing practices. (Had he been commenting on an editing dispute in which he was not involved, it might be reasonable to link to that, but not when he's commenting on his own edits.) Mitch Ames (talk) 14:28, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fair enough, wouldn't want to give these rather sad commentaries too much air anyways, I can see why it's best not to link. We got a laugh out of it at least. Bacondrum 21:09, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Farmers or Hunter-Gatherers? The Dark Emu Debate

This is outside my normal area of interest and looking at some of the august names in the page history and TP I assume this will no doubt be integrated soon. This weekend several news outlets ran stories on the impending publication of a book penned by two prominent academics “debunking” Dark Emu, titled Farmers or Hunter-Gatherers? The Dark Emu Debate.[1] I am unsure if it is more appropriate to wait until after publication, but there are a couple of stories available already[2][3] so there may be enough to add something to this page. Cavalryman (talk) 04:19, 13 June 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Cavalryman, all of this was already above in #Academic criticism. Would you like to undo this section? Errantius (talk) 09:23, 13 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Haha, I should have been more observant, I suspected someone here would be onto this. I am happy to leave this section here. Kind regards, Cavalryman (talk) 10:39, 13 June 2021 (UTC).[reply]
Sutton and Walsh were on ABC local radio in Perth this morning, talking about the books. Mitch Ames (talk) 01:58, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Sutton, Peter; Walshe, Keryn (2021). Farmers or Hunter-Gatherers? The Dark Emu Debate. Melbourne: Melbourne University Publishing. ISBN 9780522877854.
  2. ^ Rintoul, Stuart (12 June 2021). "Debunking Dark Emu: did the publishing phenomenon get it wrong?". Good Weekend. Melbourne. Retrieved 13 June 2021.
  3. ^ Chung, Frank (12 June 2021). "Author Bruce Pascoe's best-selling Aboriginal history book Dark Emu 'debunked'". News.com.au. Sydney. Retrieved 13 June 2021.

Addressing the controversy while remaining measured and enclopedic

Given that the debate over Dark Emu has become a lot more prominent recently, I think to good to start a talk page subsection specifically devoted to it that gives necessary space to the controversy while allowing editors an opportunity to discuss how to best address the now well-established evidentiary issues with Pascoe's book.

To start with, I propose the following addition to the end of the header: :

The accuracy of Pascoe's book has been extensively discussed and disputed in the Australian media and political spheres, and several academic responses have largely rejected Pascoe's thesis that Indigenous Australian society was based on sedentary agriculture rather than on a hunter-gatherer economy (put Sutton & Walshe, Keen and other relevant sources here as footnotes).

Thoughts on this? I think the media debate should needs to be addressed as long as WP:RS is kept in mind: this means basing material on more respected sources like The Conversation, The Age and The Australian and less on sources with a less-established track record of reliability like Quadrant or The Spectator. This is a great resource for a list of RS sources: WP:RSP. The critical thing is keeping it all measured, thoroughly sourced, and in line with appropriate encyclopedic tone as per WP:TONE. Comments, suggestions etc welcome Noteduck (talk) 02:39, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The debate over Dark Emu has NOT become a lot more prominent recently. HiLo48 (talk) 11:35, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think the Sutton & Walshe book is a big enough deal to allude to in the lead. I'd go with:

The accuracy of Pascoe's book has been debated in the Australian media and political spheres. Several academic responses have largely rejected Pascoe's thesis that Indigenous Australian society was based on sedentary agriculture rather than on a hunter-gatherer economy.

--RaiderAspect (talk) 11:30, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I wouldn't. It's minor trivia. The book is hugely successful. The opposition to it is gaining no traction. HiLo48 (talk) 00:18, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think a full academic response is pretty significant. Federal education minister Alan Tudge now says he doesn't want it taught in schools.[6] A few more expert criticisms: historian Richard Trembath[7] and a lecture by Sorbonne anthropologist Christophe Darmangeat (unfortunately I can't read French, but some of the media sources have referred to it)[8] Noteduck (talk) 04:25, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The opinions of a Liberal dinosaur count for nothing in debates like this. He is simply pandering to his conservative, right wing audience. He is NOT an expert on Aboriginal history. Fortunately, book choice is one made by state education departments. HiLo48 (talk) 04:37, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I have just added to the page then came here to discuss an additional sentence to the lead, and I see the good editors here are already on it. I agree something based on Sutton and Walshe is the lead is warranted, I like either suggested additions above, I do not think describing the debate as extensive is overplaying it. Kind regards, Cavalryman (talk) 04:35, 23 June 2021 (UTC).[reply]
And I have reverted those bad faith changes. There is obviously no consensus for them. And implying that those who disagree with you are bad editors is not acceptable here. Please read WP:AGF. It's sad that those so desperate to denigrate Aboriginal people are also unaware of Wikipedia's relevant rules, and also choose to denigrate other editors. You MUST await others commenting on your proposal. HiLo48 (talk) 04:42, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hello HiLo48, can I suggest you follow your own advice and read WP:AGF, describing those additions you reverted as bad faith changes is neither constructive nor civil. You seem to be the one who choose[s] to denigrate other editors. Now, I respectfully ask, please enlighten me on what was bad faith about either addition. Cavalryman (talk) 04:52, 23 June 2021 (UTC).[reply]
HiLo48 whatever you think of Tudge, you can't write off a prominent politician because of their political affiliation. Please review WP:Encyclopedic style and WP:NPOV. Sutton, Walshe, Keen etc are not "liberal dinosaurs" but respected academics. Another storied academic, Prof Tim Rowse, has described Dark Emu's thesis as "demolished"[9] in the light of Sutton & Walshe's critique. I'd also recommend reading the Good Weekend piece discussing Sutton & Walshe's work before you dismiss it out of hand. I believe the material that you removed should be restored ASAP. If you were referring to my additions when you mention bad faith comments and desperate to denigrate Aboriginal people [sic] I call upon you to please apologise unreservedly and strike through your comments at once. There is nothing in my edits to indicate bad faith or any other bad conduct Noteduck (talk) 04:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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