- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 19:38, 28 October 2008 [1].
Gary King (talk) 06:04, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved concerns from SrX
- Comment - how did he get exposure? How did he come about? Small sentence would do.--SRX 13:51, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. I tried to keep it interesting; I hope it is! Gary King (talk) 17:25, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support Comment from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
"he was soon convicted and sent to prison on a three-year term"—Soon after what?Dabomb87 (talk) 19:09, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]- I changed to "eventually" as I don't know the exact time period. Gary King (talk) 19:33, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
(edit conflict) Also, add birthname to the lead sentence.Dabomb87 (talk) 19:34, 18 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Try to link the publishers in the references. (MTV, etc.)
- Otherwise, sources look good.
–Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 16:31, 19 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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