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::Thank you, [[User:C.Fred|C.Fred]], and I would love to do that. [[User:Panix comics|Panix comics]], could we please do that here? Discuss and seek consensus? --[[User:Tenebrae|Tenebrae]] ([[User talk:Tenebrae|talk]]) 02:35, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
::Thank you, [[User:C.Fred|C.Fred]], and I would love to do that. [[User:Panix comics|Panix comics]], could we please do that here? Discuss and seek consensus? --[[User:Tenebrae|Tenebrae]] ([[User talk:Tenebrae|talk]]) 02:35, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
:::[[User:Tenebrae|Tenebrae]] We can discuss it here, but you just violated the RFC and put your own version back. When you do this, in violation of the rules, I don't see you as a partner in this. You just reverted against the rules, a corrected version to a version that would get a big fat '''F''' in a 4th grade NYC public school home work assignment. You now revert back to the corrected version and then we can work together and fix your objections. Forget the rules, it is just rude.
[[User:Panix comics|Panix comics]] ([[User talk:Panix comics|talk]]) 03:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)


:::::The articles edits are broken down for ease of discussion individual aspects of the edit. I would just like to comment, that as a person who has done limited professional editing, the seeked|sought dichotomy has been controversial among American English Speaking scholars...and a little less so in London. However, today it is considered acceptable. "sought" might actually even be considered archaic because, since the 1950s its usage has diminished greatly. Regardless of that, I earmarked, if I recall correctly, 3 run on sentences, 3 misplaced modifies, a misuse of an adverb and the failure of a proper use of a transition phase or two. These are common English problems in articles and papers, especially among younger writers, or those less practiced with written communication. The way references are embedded in these articles, also makes these kinds of errors more common. But they really have important impact (and yes you can dig up on that word usage now) on common readability.
:::::The articles edits are broken down for ease of discussion individual aspects of the edit. I would just like to comment, that as a person who has done limited professional editing, the seeked|sought dichotomy has been controversial among American English Speaking scholars...and a little less so in London. However, today it is considered acceptable. "sought" might actually even be considered archaic because, since the 1950s its usage has diminished greatly. Regardless of that, I earmarked, if I recall correctly, 3 run on sentences, 3 misplaced modifies, a misuse of an adverb and the failure of a proper use of a transition phase or two. These are common English problems in articles and papers, especially among younger writers, or those less practiced with written communication. The way references are embedded in these articles, also makes these kinds of errors more common. But they really have important impact (and yes you can dig up on that word usage now) on common readability.

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Detective Comics

The Steve Englehast page, and Englehasrt's official site, say that he wrote Detective up to 476. -- Beardo 16:30, 18 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Page needs a clean up and clearer writing

Added some minor edits with a consolidated reference.

Thanx!

Panix comics (talk) 19:51, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Images

Someone want to re-work this so the covers are examples of his style rather than a decorative gallery?

Thanks - J Greb 22:58, 11 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Today's edits

A new editor, User:Panix comics, has begun edit-warring after the revert of non-constructive, unexplained and now contentious edits to BLP article. The version I reverted contained unexplained deletions of pertinent content, non-encyclopedic WP:TONE and other issues. By linking to the editor in this post, I am attempting to initiate discussion, as I also asked for in my most recent edit-summary. --Tenebrae (talk) 01:20, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Why are you doing this? Every edit was explained in the edit comments and the article was vastly improved. Nothing was deleted, and important information was added. There woulkdn't be a need to make any changes if the article was organized properly and if Terry Austin was properly recognized as the essential inker to the Detective Stories and adequate mention was made of the Mister Miracle Material.

Why are you edit warring? Panix comics (talk) 07:20, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]


BTW - Rogers is dead, so what are you talking about ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Panix comics (talk • contribs) 07:21, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

As noted, the changes include as follows:
  • Accreditation of the collaboration for det #476 etc
  • Addition of the important work done with Mister Miracle
  • tethered apart the confusing confluence between biographical information and his comic career, such as it is in most biographies.
  • fixed the lousy grammar that existed, including several run on sentences.
  • added a legacy section which describes why this individual is even important and deserves an entry
added dispute resolution on the page to the Arts, Media, Architecture section.

Panix comics (talk) 21:24, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The previous version of this article strung together different aspects of the career of Rogers in his biography. And then it failed to include vital works of the artist, and an essential collaborator. I fixed this and then it was reverse make false claims as to me not identifying the reasons for the edits, and then the user reversing these edits claimed that we are dealing with a living persons biography, when the artist has been dead since 2007. While suggestions on improvement is welcome, he seems intent on zero sum rollbacks and refuses discussion or compromise. Panix comics (talk) 07:36, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Invalid RfC

Panix comics has attempted to create an RfC without a neutral statement or question, but rather his own personal take. He also violated WP:BRD by unilaterally reverting to his contentious edits without consensus. And BLP, incidentally, also applies to article subjects recently dead. 2007 may or may not count as recently — it's certainly more recent than untold thousands of historical figures — but WP:VERIFY, WP:NPOV and other policies still apply.--Tenebrae (talk) 00:03, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The RFC is not nuetral and it up to you to decide that anyway. The RFC is in effect and you are not supposed to revert it. I have seeked consensus. Why are you afraid of getting outsiders to mediate. You do not own this article. And why defend run on sentences. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Panix comics (talk • contribs) 01:57, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I haven't reverted anything. I've simply pointed out that your intemperate post violates WP:RfC protocol, which states, "Include a brief, neutral statement of or question about the issue in the talk page section, immediately below the RfC template." You haven't done anything of the sort. And someone who says, "I have seeked consensus" is not anyone who should be editing anything. --Tenebrae (talk) 02:01, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can we get this focused on the content of the article and not the conduct of the editors? I think it might help if, rather than sweeping revisions, Panix comics were to propose some smaller edits that can be more easily evaluated. Also, ten years is long enough that Rogers is not recently deceased, so WP:BLP guidelines do not reply—but general rules on reliable sources do. —C.Fred (talk) 02:23, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you, C.Fred, and I would love to do that. Panix comics, could we please do that here? Discuss and seek consensus? --Tenebrae (talk) 02:35, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Tenebrae We can discuss it here, but you just violated the RFC and put your own version back. When you do this, in violation of the rules, I don't see you as a partner in this. You just reverted against the rules, a corrected version to a version that would get a big fat F in a 4th grade NYC public school home work assignment. You now revert back to the corrected version and then we can work together and fix your objections. Forget the rules, it is just rude.

Panix comics (talk) 03:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The articles edits are broken down for ease of discussion individual aspects of the edit. I would just like to comment, that as a person who has done limited professional editing, the seeked|sought dichotomy has been controversial among American English Speaking scholars...and a little less so in London. However, today it is considered acceptable. "sought" might actually even be considered archaic because, since the 1950s its usage has diminished greatly. Regardless of that, I earmarked, if I recall correctly, 3 run on sentences, 3 misplaced modifies, a misuse of an adverb and the failure of a proper use of a transition phase or two. These are common English problems in articles and papers, especially among younger writers, or those less practiced with written communication. The way references are embedded in these articles, also makes these kinds of errors more common. But they really have important impact (and yes you can dig up on that word usage now) on common readability.
You need to separate his general biographical information and his career information as they are in almost all important biographies. Many biographies also separate the subjects educational background, and end with a death section. I think the reason for the mishmash here is that the section was nearly cut and pasted out of the referenced sources. Those sources, including the interviews, are rather informal, but here there needs to be a more rigid organization of the information.

Panix comics (talk) 02:47, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I don't want to get into an argument over "seeked" — it's wrong in American English, and even something as prosaic as Merriam-Webster will verify that. Or even a simple Google search. And while I would like to take you at your word that you've done any "professional editing", things like "English Speaking scholars", "The articles edits" and "the subjects educational background" make me wonder about that. If nothing else, I would ask that you familiarize yourself with our Manual of Style and our guidelines for writing biographies.
Be that as it may — and incidentally, I am far from a "younger writer", I'm afraid! — I appreciate your willingness to discuss and collaborate. Thank you for that.
The first thing I would ask is why remove the last part of the WP:LEAD, which is supposed to encapsulate that for which a subject is notable. The phrase and the sentence you removed ("...in the 1970s, particularly as one of the illustrators of Batman and the Silver Surfer. In addition, Rogers illustrated one of the first graphic novels, Detectives Inc. (1979).") are both factual, contextual and in perspective.
Secondly, there are both grammatical and MOS errors in your sentence "Rogers Born in Flushing, Queens, NY on Jan. 22, 1950,but grew up in upstate suburb of Ardsley, N.Y." I don't believe that sentence should replace the extant "William Marshall Rogers III was born in the Flushing neighborhood of the New York City borough of Queens, and raised there and in Ardsley, New York." (The birth date is in the lead, and repeating it here is fine, if not usually done, if you'd like to add it.)
What are your thoughts? --Tenebrae (talk) 03:03, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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