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:::{{u|Slatersteven}}, if that's the case, it was not clear to me, which reasserts the importance of clear good faith edit summaries. – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 18:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
:::{{u|Slatersteven}}, if that's the case, it was not clear to me, which reasserts the importance of clear good faith edit summaries. – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 18:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
::::"but the objection by one WP:POINTY user" Mandruss did not raise the objection. Nor am I sure they have objected to it.[[User:Slatersteven|Slatersteven]] ([[User talk:Slatersteven|talk]]) 18:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
::::"but the objection by one WP:POINTY user" Mandruss did not raise the objection. Nor am I sure they have objected to it.[[User:Slatersteven|Slatersteven]] ([[User talk:Slatersteven|talk]]) 18:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
::{{ping|Muboshgu}} Jeppiz was calling Guitarguy2323 "pointy", not me, ignoring the fact that I had already added my objection to that of the "pointy" Guitarguy2323, whose implied objection per UNDUE should have been enough anyway. Contrary to Jeppiz's edit summary, we don't include disputed content pending consensus to omit it; that's bass-ackwards and Jeppiz has been around long enough to know that. As have a few other editors involved in this. &#8213;[[User:Mandruss|<span style="color:#775C57;">'''''Mandruss'''''</span>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Mandruss|<span style="color:#888;">&#9742;</span>]] 18:21, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
There are a ton of sources, look through this lot https://www.google.com/search?q=Donald+Trump+%2B+coup&rlz=1C1CHBD_en-GBGB925GB925&ei=nAW4X4C6F7PIxgO4i4CIDw&start=0&sa=N&ved=2ahUKEwiA-PWc25HtAhUzpHEKHbgFAPE4FBDy0wN6BAgHEDc&biw=1280&bih=824.[[User:Slatersteven|Slatersteven]] ([[User talk:Slatersteven|talk]]) 18:08, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
There are a ton of sources, look through this lot https://www.google.com/search?q=Donald+Trump+%2B+coup&rlz=1C1CHBD_en-GBGB925GB925&ei=nAW4X4C6F7PIxgO4i4CIDw&start=0&sa=N&ved=2ahUKEwiA-PWc25HtAhUzpHEKHbgFAPE4FBDy0wN6BAgHEDc&biw=1280&bih=824.[[User:Slatersteven|Slatersteven]] ([[User talk:Slatersteven|talk]]) 18:08, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

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    Former good article nomineeDonald Trump was a Social sciences and society good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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    DateProcessResult
    June 2, 2006Good article nomineeNot listed
    February 12, 2007Good article nomineeNot listed
    September 18, 2016Good article nomineeNot listed
    May 25, 2017Good article nomineeNot listed
    December 2, 2018Good article nomineeNot listed
    July 15, 2019Good article nomineeNot listed
    August 31, 2019Featured article candidateNot promoted
    April 29, 2020Peer reviewReviewed
    Current status: Former good article nominee

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    01. Use the official White House portrait as the infobox image. (Dec 2016, Jan 2017, Oct 2017, March 2020) (temporarily suspended by #19 following copyright issues on the inauguration portrait, enforced when an official public-domain portrait was released on 31 October 2017)

    02. Show birthplace as "Queens, New York City, U.S." in the infobox. (Nov 2016, Oct 2018, Feb 2021) "New York City" de-linked. (September 2020)

    03. Omit reference to county-level election statistics. (Dec 2016)

    04. Superseded by #15
    Lead phrasing of Trump "gaining a majority of the U.S. Electoral College" and "receiving a smaller share of the popular vote nationwide", without quoting numbers. (Nov 2016, Dec 2016) (Superseded by #15 since 11 February 2017)

    05. Use Trump's annual net worth evaluation and matching ranking, from the Forbes list of billionaires, not from monthly or "live" estimates. (Oct 2016) In the lead section, just write: Forbes estimates his net worth to be [$x.x] billion. (July 2018, July 2018) Removed from the lead per #47.

    06. Do not include allegations of sexual misconduct in the lead section. (June 2016, Feb 2018)

    07. Superseded by #35
    Include "Many of his public statements were controversial or false." in the lead. (Sep 2016, February 2017, wording shortened per April 2017, upheld with July 2018) (superseded by #35 since 18 February 2019)

    08. Mention that Trump is the first president elected "without prior military or government service". (Dec 2016)

    09. Include a link to Trump's Twitter account in the "External links" section. (Jan 2017) Include a link to an archive of Trump's Twitter account in the "External links" section. (Jan 2021)

    10. Canceled
    Keep Barron Trump's name in the list of children and wikilink it, which redirects to his section in Family of Donald Trump per AfD consensus. (Jan 2017, Nov 2016) Canceled: Barron's BLP has existed since June 2019. (June 2024)
    11. Superseded by #17
    The lead sentence is "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American businessman, television personality, politician, and the 45th President of the United States." (Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Feb 2017) (superseded by #17 since 2 April 2017)

    12. The article title is Donald Trump, not Donald J. Trump. (RM Jan 2017, RM June 2019)

    13. Auto-archival is set for discussions with no comments for 14 days. Manual archival is allowed for (1) closed discussions, 24 hours after the closure, provided the closure has not been challenged, and (2) "answered" edit requests, 24 hours after the "answer", provided there has been no follow-on discussion after the "answer". (Jan 2017) (amended with respect to manual archiving, to better reflect common practice at this article) (Nov 2019)

    14. Omit mention of Trump's alleged bathmophobia/fear of slopes. (Feb 2017)

    15. Superseded by lead rewrite
    Supersedes #4. There is no consensus to change the formulation of the paragraph which summarizes election results in the lead (starting with "Trump won the general election on November 8, 2016, …"). Accordingly the pre-RfC text (Diff 8 Jan 2017) has been restored, with minor adjustments to past tense (Diff 11 Feb 2018). No new changes should be applied without debate. (RfC Feb 2017, Jan 2017, Feb 2017, Feb 2017) In particular, there is no consensus to include any wording akin to "losing the popular vote". (RfC March 2017) (Superseded by local consensus on 26 May 2017 and lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017)
    16. Superseded by lead rewrite
    Do not mention Russian influence on the presidential election in the lead section. (RfC March 2017) (Superseded by lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017)
    17. Superseded by #50
    Supersedes #11. The lead paragraph is "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is the 45th and current president of the United States. Before entering politics, he was a businessman and television personality." The hatnote is simply {{Other uses}}. (April 2017, RfC April 2017, April 2017, April 2017, April 2017, July 2017, Dec 2018) Amended by lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017 and removal of inauguration date on 4 July 2018. Lower-case "p" in "president" per Dec 2018 and MOS:JOBTITLES RfC Oct 2017. Wikilinks modified per April 2020. Wikilink modified again per July 2020. "45th" de-linked. (Jan 2021)
    18. Superseded by #63
    The "Alma mater" infobox entry shows "Wharton School (BSEcon.)", does not mention Fordham University. (April 2017, April 2017, Aug 2020, Dec 2020)
    19. Obsolete
    Following deletion of Trump's official White House portrait for copyright reasons on 2 June 2017, infobox image was replaced by File:Donald Trump Pentagon 2017.jpg. (June 2017 for replacement, June 2017, declined REFUND on 11 June 2017) (replaced by White House official public-domain portrait according to #1 since 31 Oct 2017)

    20. Mention protests in the lead section with this exact wording: His election and policies have sparked numerous protests. (June 2017, May 2018) (Note: In February 2021, when he was no longer president, the verb tense was changed from "have sparked" to "sparked", without objection.)

    21. Superseded by #39
    Omit any opinions about Trump's psychology held by mental health academics or professionals who have not examined him. (July 2017, Aug 2017) (superseded by #36 on 18 June 2019, then by #39 since 20 Aug 2019)

    22. Do not call Trump a "liar" in Wikipedia's voice. Falsehoods he uttered can be mentioned, while being mindful of calling them "lies", which implies malicious intent. (RfC Aug 2017)

    23. Superseded by #52
    The lead includes the following sentence: Trump ordered a travel ban on citizens from several Muslim-majority countries, citing security concerns; after legal challenges, the Supreme Court upheld the policy's third revision. (Aug 2017, Nov 2017, Dec 2017, Jan 2018, Jan 2018) Wording updated (July 2018) and again (Sep 2018).
    24. Superseded by #30
    Do not include allegations of racism in the lead. (Feb 2018) (superseded by #30 since 16 Aug 2018)

    25. Do not add web archives to cited sources which are not dead. (Dec 2017, March 2018)

    26. Do not include opinions by Michael Hayden and Michael Morell that Trump is a "useful fool […] manipulated by Moscow" or an "unwitting agent of the Russian Federation". (RfC April 2018)

    27. State that Trump falsely claimed that Hillary Clinton started the Barack Obama birther rumors. (April 2018, June 2018)

    28. Include, in the Wealth section, a sentence on Jonathan Greenberg's allegation that Trump deceived him in order to get on the Forbes 400 list. (June 2018, June 2018)

    29. Include material about the Trump administration family separation policy in the article. (June 2018)

    30. Supersedes #24. The lead includes: "Many of his comments and actions have been characterized as racially charged or racist." (RfC Sep 2018, Oct 2018, RfC May 2019)

    31. Do not mention Trump's office space donation to Jesse Jackson's Rainbow/Push Coalition in 1999. (Nov 2018)

    32. Omit from the lead the fact that Trump is the first sitting U.S. president to meet with a North Korean supreme leader. (RfC July 2018, Nov 2018)

    33. Do not mention "birtherism" in the lead section. (RfC Nov 2018)

    34. Refer to Ivana Zelníčková as a Czech model, with a link to Czechs (people), not Czechoslovakia (country). (Jan 2019)

    35. Superseded by #49
    Supersedes #7. Include in the lead: Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. (RfC Feb 2019)
    36. Superseded by #39
    Include one paragraph merged from Health of Donald Trump describing views about Trump's psychology expressed by public figures, media sources, and mental health professionals who have not examined him. (June 2019) (paragraph removed per RfC Aug 2019 yielding consensus #39)

    37. Resolved: Content related to Trump's presidency should be limited to summary-level about things that are likely to have a lasting impact on his life and/or long-term presidential legacy. If something is borderline or debatable, the resolution does not apply. (June 2019)

    38. Do not state in the lead that Trump is the wealthiest U.S. president ever. (RfC June 2019)

    39. Supersedes #21 and #36. Do not include any paragraph regarding Trump's mental health or mental fitness for office. Do not bring up for discussion again until an announced formal diagnosis or WP:MEDRS-level sources are provided. This does not prevent inclusion of content about temperamental fitness for office. (RfC Aug 2019, July 2021)

    40. Include, when discussing Trump's exercise or the lack thereof: He has called golfing his "primary form of exercise", although he usually does not walk the course. He considers exercise a waste of energy, because he believes the body is "like a battery, with a finite amount of energy" which is depleted by exercise. (RfC Aug 2019)

    41. Omit book authorship (or lack thereof) from the lead section. (RfC Nov 2019)

    42. House and Senate outcomes of the impeachment process are separated by a full stop. For example: He was impeached by the House on December 18, 2019, for abuse of power and obstruction of Congress. He was acquitted of both charges by the Senate on February 5, 2020. (Feb 2020)

    43. The rules for edits to the lead are no different from those for edits below the lead. For edits that do not conflict with existing consensus: Prior consensus is NOT required. BOLD edits are allowed, subject to normal BRD process. The mere fact that an edit has not been discussed is not a valid reason to revert it. (March 2020)

    44. The lead section should mention North Korea, focusing on Trump's meetings with Kim and some degree of clarification that they haven't produced clear results. (RfC May 2020)

    45. Superseded by #48
    There is no consensus to mention the COVID-19 pandemic in the lead section. (RfC May 2020, July 2020) (Superseded by RfC Aug 2020)

    46. Use the caption "Official portrait, 2017" for the infobox image. (Aug 2020, Jan 2021)

    47. Do not mention Trump's net worth or Forbes ranking (or equivalents from other publications) in the lead, nor in the infobox. (Sep 2020)

    48. Supersedes #45. Trump's reaction to the COVID-19 pandemic should be mentioned in the lead section. There is no consensus on specific wording, but the status quo is Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic; he minimized the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. (Oct 2020, RfC Aug 2020)

    49. Supersedes #35. Include in lead: Trump has made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, to a degree unprecedented in American politics. (Dec 2020)

    50. Supersedes #17. The lead sentence is: Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, and businessman who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021. (March 2021), amended (July 2021), inclusion of politician (RfC September 2021)

    51. Include in the lead that many of Trump's comments and actions have been characterized as misogynistic. (Aug 2021 and Sep 2021)

    52. Supersedes #23. The lead should contain a summary of Trump's actions on immigration, including the Muslim travel ban (cf. item 23), the wall, and the family separation policy. (September 2021)

    53. The lead should mention that Trump promotes conspiracy theories. (October 2021)

    54. Include in the lead that, quote, Scholars and historians rank Trump as one of the worst presidents in U.S. history. (October 2021)

    55. Regarding Trump's comments on the 2017 far-right rally in Charlottesville, Virginia, do not wiki-link "Trump's comments" in this manner. (RfC December 2021)

    56. Retain the content that Trump never confronted Putin over its alleged bounties against American soldiers in Afghanistan but add context. Current wording can be altered or contextualized; no consensus was achieved on alternate wordings. (RfC November 2021) Trump's expressions of doubt regarding the Russian Bounties Program should be included in some capacity, though there there is no consensus on a specific way to characterize these expressed doubts. (RfC March 2022)

    57. Do not mention in the lead Gallup polling that states Trump's the only president to never reach 50% approval rating. (RfC January 2022)

    58. Use inline citations in the lead for the more contentious and controversial statements. Editors should further discuss which sentences would benefit from having inline citations. (RfC May 2022, discussion on what to cite May 2022)

    59. Do not label or categorize Trump as a far-right politician. (RfC August 2022)

    60. Insert the links described in the RfC January 2023.

    61. When a thread is started with a general assertion that the article is biased for or against Trump (i.e., without a specific, policy-based suggestion for a change to the article), it is to be handled as follows:

    1. Reply briefly with a link to Talk:Donald Trump/Response to claims of bias.
    2. Close the thread using {{archive top}} and {{archive bottom}}, referring to this consensus item.
    3. Wait at least 24 hours per current consensus #13.
    4. Manually archive the thread.

    This does not apply to posts that are clearly in bad faith, which are to be removed on sight. (May 2023)

    62. The article's description of the five people who died during and subsequent to the January 6 Capitol attack should avoid a) mentioning the causes of death and b) an explicit mention of the Capitol Police Officer who died. (RfC July 2023)

    63. Supersedes #18. The alma mater field of the infobox reads: "University of Pennsylvania (BS)". (September 2023)

    64. Omit the {{Very long}} tag. (January 2024)

    65. Mention the Abraham Accords in the article; no consensus was achieved on specific wordings. (RfC February 2024)

    66. Omit {{infobox criminal}}. (RfC June 2024)

    67. The "Health habits" section includes: "Trump says he has never drunk alcohol, smoked cigarettes, or used drugs. He sleeps about four or five hours a night." (February 2021)

    Proposed shortening of one sentence in the lead section

    Any thoughts on shortening a statement in the lead section as follows?

    CURRENT VERSION: Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics.
    PROPOSED NEW VERSION: Trump has made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, to a degree unprecedented in American politics.

    This would go down from 33 words to 22 words; it would preserve the most important bits (i.e., the level/rate of falsehoods is unprecedented) while omitting the unremarkable/obvious (the fact that these falsehoods have been documented - obviously they have been or else we wouldn't be making a reference to it in the Wikipedia bio). Neutralitytalk 01:33, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    This seeks to alter #Current consensus #35.
    the fact that these falsehoods have been documented - obviously they have been or else we wouldn't be making a reference to it in the Wikipedia bio - I'd disagree with that statement. We might be saying that because reliable sources have said that without any documented fact-checking (or at least without anything remotely approaching the scale of what WaPo et al have done). We do that kind of thing all the time. We generally don't require sources to prove the truth of what they say. ―Mandruss  01:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • On the actual proposed rewording, do you support or oppose? It was not clear to me from your comment. Neutralitytalk 13:58, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    That's because I'm waiting for other comments. I could even end up abstaining, and you'll know that by the absence of a bullet with my name on it. ―Mandruss  14:06, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I would like to see some discussion about the need for "the media have widely described" wrt NPOV. And whether the change is due to a change in situation or due to differences in policy interpretation. ―Mandruss  14:15, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Minor note..."his campaign" is singular, whereas he has had two campaigns now. (Though "false and misleading statements" doesn't begin to cover the situation...) Perhaps an opportunity to finally change "The statements have been..." to "The misinformation has been..." Bdushaw (talk) 10:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support the proposal with "campaign" changi7ng to "campaigns". I've long thought the extra stuff was really just there to deter edit warring, but as long as it is clearly spelled out in the body of the article I don't see the need for the longer version. -- Scjessey (talk) 11:22, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • That's a good catch. I just changed "campaign" to "campaigns" --Neutralitytalk 13:58, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support. No need to tiptoe around the facts. François Robere (talk) 12:08, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support this improvement. It's a fact, so say it plainly. -- Valjean (talk) 15:56, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support This is definitely an improvement. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:59, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support The statement is accurate with no need to substantiate it. Gandydancer (talk) 16:04, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - Not seeing a need to overturn long standing and well participated consensus.[1] PackMecEng (talk) 16:11, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      There is no need. I have no idea why this is even being discussed now. Efcharisto (talk) 02:10, 10 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Economy is always good. Drmies (talk) 16:14, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Trump said this is the best economy ever. Question: That comma bothers me, but I see why the wording felt awkward without it. Is there a way to improve the sentence structure? SPECIFICO talk 17:10, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think the comma seems awkward because the sentence ought to begin with "To a degree..." Bdushaw (talk) 17:52, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Strong oppose so blithely replacing a consensus resulting from an RfC that was open for six weeks and ran to over 10,000 words. I wonder why the decision is so much easier this time. ―Mandruss  16:27, 6 October 2020 (UTC) (Eighteen days later, "blithely" no longer applies. Replaced with "oppose" at the bottom.) ―Mandruss  06:01, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Note that discussion was closed in February 2019. François Robere (talk) 17:06, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Why? Because in the 18 months since the press and numerous recent books have resolved any doubts they formerly may have held. SPECIFICO talk 20:42, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Quoting Paul Krugmann: Of course, we’re learning that Donald Trump and those around him lie about everything and don’t care at all about endangering other people. But that’s more of a confirmation than a revelation — we basically already knew that, although we didn’t expect such graphic evidence. I wonder why the statement is restricted to the two official campaigns and the presidency. This is his general bio, not the "Presidency of" article, and he's been making documented false statements since at least the 80s. If we remove the fact-checkers, shouldn't we remove the campaigns and the presidency, as well, and simply say that he's made many false and misleading statements before and during his presidency (to be changed to "before, during and after his presidency" sooner or later?) Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 06:27, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The question is whether sources provide a statement to that effect. If you can provide enough sources that do, then we can. François Robere (talk) 18:41, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    One of the things the statement says implicitly is that he is lying while president. It is one thing to lie as a real estate developer or steak salesman, another to lie to the American public as president about such things as pandemic response. Perhaps the statement ought to more explicitly reflect this more consequential lying as president? I note that since the original statement was included in the lead, the section on Veracity was substantially expanded. Bdushaw (talk) 19:20, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • I would support total removal from the lead. I would also support changing the proposed removed wording into a footnote. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 17:00, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support the proposed change. Regarding the former RfC, I note that the process can be rather bizarre, and not altogether logical. The existing sentence has, essentially, "weasel words" in "the media have widely described" - we have had considerable recent discussion on the use of such words (and recalling my recent RfC where my attempt to use such words in a misguided attempt a compromise went over like a lead balloon), with the solid consensus that they should be avoided. Just state the thing; the problem in this case is that just stating the thing is to use Wikivoice to convey a clear flaw in Trump, which gets perceived badly, by some. The proposed wording states the facts clearly and economically. I suspect for better English the sentence ought to start with "To a degree unprecedented...", however. Bdushaw (talk) 17:52, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support: precision and concision are beautiful things soibangla (talk) 18:52, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Comment It might be worthwhile to try a different sentence structure, to avoid "to a degree..." Something like:
    KICKING AROUND IDEAS VERSION: Trump has made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, a tactic unprecedented in American politics.
    Or using a semicolon to make a substantive statement about how unprecedented the misinformation is (corrosion of democracy?). Bdushaw (talk) 19:01, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    "Tactic" is interpretational, suggests planning. François Robere (talk) 20:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Are you suggesting it was unplanned? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 20:06, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't like the alternative wording. I disagree that tactics imply "planning", because a tactic can be reactionary. Planning would imply a "strategy", but I would argue Trump's lies are habitual and are only occasionally part of some sort of overall strategy, otherwise we would have reliable sources to support the idea Trump's lies are part of a plan. -- Scjessey (talk) 20:39, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Trump has made more false and misleading statements than any other American president or presidential candidate in history. SPECIFICO talk 20:45, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Do you have a WP:RS for that? Or is it alternative wording you are proposing? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 20:49, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Isn't that a paraphrase of the initial suggestion above? However, I think this is better: Trump has made more false and misleading statements than any other president or presidential candidate in American history SPECIFICO talk 17:15, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    KICKING AROUND IDEAS VERSION: The many false and misleading statements Trump has made during his campaigns and presidency are unprecedented in American politics. ??? Bdushaw (talk) 22:36, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    KICKING AROUND IDEAS VERSION: The degree of false or misleading statements made by Trump during his campaigns and presidency is unprecedented in American politics. ??? (need "or" rather than "and") Bdushaw (talk) 22:44, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Neutrality's wording is correct: "to a degree unprecedented". "All politicians lie", but Trump doesn't just lie more than others, he rarely tells the truth. He is in a different universe, where hardly a single molecule of truth exists. It's a foreign concept to him. -- Valjean (talk) 01:42, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • Support per nom. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 05:38, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support per nom, as well. I let the issue sit overnight, and the nom's original proposal seems best. I thought of changing "many" to "an extraordinary number" ("torrent"?), but we perhaps should not belabor the issue. But it should be "false OR misleading". Bdushaw (talk) 10:03, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose, regretfully since I rarely disagree with Neutrality. Even as the sentence is we are constantly getting complaints about it at the talk page. If we change it to a simple assertion in Wikipedia's voice, without any explanation about what we are basing it on, we will be getting dozens of complaints a day, every day - and to some extent they will be justified. -- MelanieN (talk) 20:31, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      We should never be concerned about the number of unjustified complaints, but I don't necessarily disagree with to some extent they will be justified. ―Mandruss  20:43, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      I totally disagree with "let's go ahead and change the article in a way that will justifiably offend lots of readers, rather than keeping it as it is giving the basis for our statement." As you know, we hashed out the existing wording over a long period of time, and it has been stable for several years now if I recall correctly. The existing wording makes it clear: this is not something we are saying arbitrarily or because we are biased; we are saying it because is one of his most defining characteristics and there is overwhelming evidence for it. The proposed wording WOULD sound like we are saying it arbitrarily or because we are biased. -- MelanieN (talk) 21:39, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The article is loaded with things that sound like we are biased – to readers who don't understand our policies (and some editors who don't understand our policies). The only question for me is how to best comply with those policies – and they are so vague, convoluted, and seemingly self-contradictory that there is no clear answer, leaving things wide open to editor bias. ―Mandruss  22:32, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      @MelanieN: - the existing wording has a problem though. It's not only the media which is saying that Trump's behaviour is unprecedented. It's academics. The mega-citation with the bundled references has six instances of that: (1) McGranahan is an academic source, (2) the NYT source refers to the historian Doris Kearns Goodwin, (3) the WaPo source refers to presidential historian Michael R. Beschloss, (4) the LA Times source refers to political scholar George Edwards, (5) the Toronto Star refers to presidential historian Douglas Brinkley, and (6) Skjeseth is also an academic sources. Given that academics believe that Trump's behaviour is unprecedented, I believe that Wikipedia can reflect it in wiki-voice. Does this change your view? starship.paint (talk) 08:58, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      No, it doesn't. Thanks for spelling all this out, Starship, and I'm glad it is in the article text. However, it does not make "Trump is an unprecedented liar" into the factual equivalent of "the sky is blue". IMO we need to supply support, even in the lead, for such an inflammatory statement. -- MelanieN (talk) 15:10, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Factcheckers have confirmed that Trump has made more false and misleading statements than any other president in American history. -- Isn't that readily Verifiable? SPECIFICO talk 20:59, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Yes, but, per policy, not all that is verifiable must be included in an article, let alone in its lead. If it's included, policy is sufficiently vague (flexible) that editors can reasonably disagree about how to word it. ―Mandruss  21:02, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Huh? This discussion is about shortening it, not removing longstanding consensus content. Emir asked to be sure it's Verified. Yes it is. SPECIFICO talk 21:27, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      It helps to put replies in context, or use {{tq}}.
      Not to put too fine a point on it, but the fact-checkers (WaPo, Toronto Star, et al) have not actually compared Trump to his predecessors. I don't know that anybody has at the item level, as if that were even possible or useful given that presidents haven't always made multiple public statements per day that were immediately fact-checked. That wasn't even feasible until the widespread use of computers, roughly 1980s (or maybe advent of the internet, mid-1990s). Any "verifiability" we have that Trump is unprecedented is from sources other than the fact-checker databases, and we accept their analysis without actual proof. ―Mandruss  21:45, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Then why do we currently say that in the article? I don't recall being involved in the initial consensus, because at the time I did not feel comfortable with what might have sounded partisan. However MelanieN without discounting your argument, I think it is the case that the press has been more willing, over the course of the most recent year, to emphasize Trump's false statements and even to call them lies. And we have a number of books in the past year that go into great detail on it. SPECIFICO talk 23:08, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Then why do we currently say that in the article? That's my point, which may have been unclear. I was responding only to your bolded comment, and the article does not currently say that Trump's "unprecedence" has been confirmed by fact-checkers. It says that the media have widely described Trump as unprecedented and the false and misleading statements have been documented by fact-checkers – not the same thing. You may be equating fact-checkers with reliable sources, and I'm not. That was not the intent of the phrase in the 2019 discussion, as I understood it. ―Mandruss  23:15, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      No, actually for the purpose of the current discussion, it is the same thing. Otherwise, you should have shared your concern at the top of the thread. Let's stay focused on the matter at hand. SPECIFICO talk 23:48, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Alternative: "Media outlets have widely considered Trump as largely unprecedent in making false and misleading statements during his 2016 election campaign and his presidency." We could do with sounding a lot more neutral about the matter, and not seeming like Wikipedia shares that a view, while also being far more concise. Onetwothreeip (talk) 01:31, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • I would strongly oppose that. The fact of Trump's unprecedented level of false and misleading statements is a fact, not a "view," and we do not hedge on that. Neutralitytalk 01:56, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I never said it was a view. It should be paramount that Wikipedia appears neutral. Onetwothreeip (talk) 02:21, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    You wrote that you wished to avoid "seeming like Wikipedia shares that view." Neutralitytalk 04:11, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Neutrality: No worries, what I meant was that it seems like Wikipedia has a view. Onetwothreeip (talk) 05:40, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Onetwothreeip, Wikipedia (that's us) is not supposed to choose sides, but it is unabashedly, because of our RS policy, on the side of RS when there is no doubt about a matter. Wikipedia (editors) is unabashedly on the side of the fact that the sky is blue and that Trump is a liar on an unprecedented scale. That's not opinion or a "view", it's a well-established fact backed by the vast preponderance of RS and huge amounts of measurable data. Few facts are more firmly established by data and data analysis. You can bank on this, because experience has taught us that, quoting David Zurawik, we should "just assume Trump's always lying and fact check him backwards"[1] because he's a "habitual liar".[2]
    You see, facts are not like opinions. They aren't mushy. They can withstand the onslaught of fact checkers and scientific analysis. They are falsifiable. They survive. Our duty is to make sure we don't present facts as opinions (and the converse). This is about the fact that Trump is a liar on an unprecedented scale and manner, and opinions that doubt that fact have little due weight and should only get passing mention. NPOV does require we document disagreement with that fact, but due weight tells us to do so in a very limited manner.
    Wikipedia is a reality-based encyclopedia. It is neutral when it documents what RS say, even if what RS say appears to be biased (to the uninformed). NPOV requires that we document that bias and not censor or neuter it. Bias isn't always bad, and it's actually good to be biased for the facts. The facts are not central in politics, but are often held more firmly by one side more than the other, hence the famous quote "Reality has a well known liberal bias", or, as Paul Krugman put it, "Facts Have a Well-Known Liberal Bias". -- Valjean (talk) 04:57, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Wikipedia (editors) is unabashedly on the side of the fact that the sky is blue and that Trump is a liar on an unprecedented scale. There are a number of editors who are unable to check their POV about this at the door. Somehow that POV never makes it into mainspace, which suggests that "Wikipedia (editors)" is not unabashedly on the side of it, your view notwithstanding. Apparently "Wikipedia (editors)" feels that such strong statements are not supportable by Wikipedia policy. I happen to agree that Trump is a liar on an unprecedented scale, as well as a number of other really bad things, but I know my opinion is irrelevant here and it's crucial to understand that. I save that for discussions among family and friends. I happen to agree that RS supports the kind of content currently in this article about that, but that is quite different from wildly irresponsible statements about blue sky "fact" that Trump is a liar on an unprecedented scale.Mandruss  05:36, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree that not all Wikipedia editors are on the side of RS. I would never state in Wikipedia's voice that Trump is a liar on an unprecedented scale., but our sources would justify saying that Trump has made many false or misleading statements on a scale described as "unprecedented" in American politics. -- Valjean (talk) 05:50, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If you would never state that in an article, to say it on an article talk page is to voice your POV opinion, violating NOTFORUM and distracting from policy-based discussion. Not to mention at least giving the strong impression that you are unable to leave your POV out of content decisions. ―Mandruss  06:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I agree with Neutrality. Let's reboot and get back to the source for the "unprecedented" wording. It isn't used in a willy nilly fashion.

    • It has long been a truism that politicians lie, but with the entry of Donald Trump into the U.S. political domain, the frequency, degree, and impact of lying in politics are now unprecedented [...] Donald Trump is different. By all metrics and counting schemes, his lies are off the charts. We simply have not seen such an accomplished and effective liar before in U.S. politics.[3] Bolding added.

    That is the sense in which we should continue to use the word. Trump isn't even close to anyone else. He's off the charts dishonest. -- Valjean (talk) 02:04, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    References

    1. ^ Zurawik, David (August 26, 2018). "Zurawik: Let's just assume Trump's always lying and fact check him backward". The Baltimore Sun. Retrieved September 14, 2018.
    2. ^ Stelter, Brian; Bernstein, Carl; Sullivan, Margaret; Zurawik, David (August 26, 2018). "How to cover a habitual liar". CNN. Retrieved September 14, 2018.
    3. ^ McGranahan, Carole (May 2017). "An anthropology of lying: Trump and the political sociality of moral outrage". American Ethnologist. 44 (2): 243–248. doi:10.1111/amet.12475. It has long been a truism that politicians lie, but with the entry of Donald Trump into the U.S. political domain, the frequency, degree, and impact of lying in politics are now unprecedented [...] Donald Trump is different. By all metrics and counting schemes, his lies are off the charts. We simply have not seen such an accomplished and effective liar before in U.S. politics.
    You are far from the only offender, but statements like Trump isn't even close to anyone else. He's off the charts dishonest. are pure POV and have no place in any Wikipedia content discussion. That one simultaneously cites one source – or a hundred sources – does not make that appropriate. ―Mandruss  02:28, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Excuse me for agreeing with RS and paraphrasing them. -- Valjean (talk) 02:40, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The point is that:
    • Whether you or I agree with RS is completely irrelevant for our purposes, as Wikipedia editing is not about our opinions.
    • You didn't say you were paraphrasing RS, you presented it as objective fact. Those are not the same thing.
    This is not hair-splitting. What we say affects how we think about these things, and that makes it important. In my view it also demonstrates how we're thinking about them. ―Mandruss  02:48, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Valjean: Then let's say Media outlets have widely considered Trump as largely unprecedented in making false and misleading statements during his 2016 election campaign and his presidency., because this is what reliable sources say. We shouldn't go beyond objective reliable sources. Onetwothreeip (talk) 05:39, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    That wording is grammatially awkward, at least to my American ears. Above I suggested that our sources would justify saying that Trump has made many false or misleading statements on a scale described as "unprecedented" in American politics. I have stricken "many" as "scale" covers that aspect. "Described" refers to the fact that sources do this so we don't need to mention them. When we say the "sky is blue", we don't say that "reliable sources say the sky is blue." -- Valjean (talk) 05:56, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Valjean: I agree with that wording, with some minor changes. Trump has made misleading and false statements on a scale described as "unprecedented" by various media outlets. Onetwothreeip (talk) 06:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose this change as a way to backdoor a controversial claim into Wikivoice. How many lies did Andrew Jackson tell? There is no way to have this material without attribution because there is no way to actually prove it. It will lead to endless disruption on the article and talk page as drive by readers and editors change it to something else. Mr Ernie (talk) 06:44, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Far from endless disruption, changes to consensus content are easily reverted without counting against 1RR. Persistent re-reverting by the "drive by" would earn a DS block, although that never happens when they are referred to the ArbCom restrictions and/or the #Current consensus list; the first revert is almost always enough. This has been proven to be a non-issue at this article. ―Mandruss  07:17, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      And I haven't seen any readers who have WP:ECP status. ―Mandruss  07:21, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Since the RfC on this statement, which was prior to the pandemic, yes?, there has been a significant change in the landscape. There are new sources, e.g., 'You’re Gonna Beat It.' How Donald Trump’s COVID-19 Battle Has Only Fueled Misinformation or From COVID-19 to voting: Trump is nation's single largest spreader of disinformation, studies say I would say a revisit to the consensus statement is warranted, in any case. An important factor here is he is acting as the nation's leader with this misinformation - which is different than misinformation at other times. The lead statement should reflect that factor (drop "campaign", ignore misinformation prior to presidency?) As I've noted before, Trump's use of misinformation is one of his most notable characteristics; certainly a suitable, definitive statement in the lead is necessary. Voting and Covid-19 could be noted as two primary topics of misinformation. Bdushaw (talk) 07:45, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      We could abandon "unprecedented" and its complications for a statement like:
    KICKING AROUND IDEAS VERSION: While president, Trump has made many false or misleading statements, becoming a significant source of disinformation on voting practices and pandemic responses in 2020.
    (Interesting to note the difference between "disinformation" and "misinformation" in this context.) Bdushaw (talk) 08:36, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    This fails to describe the outstanding nature of his falsehoods and misleading comments. Over long careers, plenty of politicians will have made "many false or misleading statements". starship.paint (talk) 09:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think you are right - it is a curious problem how to describe, in a NPOV way, such incessant, voluminous disinformation and propaganda. I am not sure "unprecedented" does it either, while being a lightening rod for objections. I find I am, frankly, at a loss.

    Bdushaw (talk) 19:59, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Could a statement like:
    KICKING AROUND IDEAS VERSION: To promote or defend his image, policies or projects, Trump has regularly employed incessant, aggressive campaigns of falsehoods, disinformation or propaganda in public rallies and on radio, television, print or social media.
    be supported? I believe this is getting closer to the truth of the matter, maybe. Bdushaw (talk) 11:43, 12 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    (Needs three serial commas per convention in this article. Following policies, disinformation, and print. Best to get such minute details taken care of before the text makes it into the consensus list, not after.) ―Mandruss  19:29, 12 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    At this point, our efforts are in retrograde, with each attempt worse than the preceding. I think we should leave the current text alone. None of the subsequent attempts is without problems. The first one (that I foolishly criticised for a misplaced comma) was OK, and there seemed to be consensus for that one. I would not object to using that one, but it's clear there's a little too much meaning to be gracefully crammed into a single sentence. Let's go with v.1 or v.0. SPECIFICO talk 21:46, 12 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Yes, well, perhaps my thrashing was still a useful exercise...people have been complaining how we never think outside the box. :) I have no objection to Neutrality's PROPOSED NEW VERSION, which I think is an improvement, given the difficulties. I think including "factcheckers" is of no value now; I have modest objections to the troubles "unprecedented" raises (also based on the troubles we had with the word on another article Dismissal of U.S. attorneys controversy; first sentence), but know of no better alternative (I tried, as all can see). As an aside, I noted the article is rather weak at describing Trump's use of political rallies during his campaigns and presidency. Such rallies are part of Trump's identity. Bdushaw (talk) 22:47, 12 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    While I agree on the revised statement, a continued discussion of it is still warranted, IMO - the statement falls well short in that it misrepresents what are deliberate, massive campaigns of disinformation (following the Russian model?). I revise the statement above, just for kicks, and give a few citations on the massive disinformation campaigns that are going on, and have gone on. Its quite a bit more than what Donald Trump says or tweets out from time-to-time; its industrialized disinformation. All not unrelated to his hour-long call ins to friendly radio or TV programs.
    KICKING AROUND IDEAS VERSION: To promote or defend his image, views or policies, Trump has employed aggressive campaigns of falsehoods, disinformation or propaganda in public rallies and on radio, television, or social media.
    Billion dollar disinformation/Atlantic, Misinformation Machine/Sci. American, Trump's billion-dollar "Death Star"/Salon, Disinformation machine/CNN etc. The attacks on basic science are particularly disturbing, and have been notice. Bdushaw (talk) 11:16, 13 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Okay, skimming over the above, it seems that this is (unsurprisingly) leading to a lot of discussion about potential modifications to the clause. Trying to stay on topic, I'd suggest a guiding question might be this: Would it be possible to make the passage more concise without fundamentally altering its meaning?
    The concerns raised above about the switch to Wikipedia's voice are reasonable enough to warrant consideration, but they apply only to the "unprecedented" part, since the first part is already present in the page. That'd leave us with something like Trump has made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, to a degree the media has widely described as unprecedented in American politics. But for that, the distinction between what's widely present in secondary sources and what we're willing to state in Wikipedia's voice shouldn't exist, since per WP:V/WP:NOR/other core policies, Wikipedia's voice is supposed to reflect what's been widely present in secondary sources. So that leads to Neutrality's proposal. It might seem like it's saying something stronger, but fundamentally it's really not; it's just cutting out statements that don't need to be there. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 08:22, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Regarding "unprecedented": The first bullet at WP:WIKIVOICE reads:

    Avoid stating opinions as facts. Usually, articles will contain information about the significant opinions that have been expressed about their subjects. However, these opinions should not be stated in Wikipedia's voice. Rather, they should be attributed in the text to particular sources, or where justified, described as widespread views, etc. For example, an article should not state that "genocide is an evil action", but it may state that "genocide has been described by John So-and-so as the epitome of human evil."

    Does widespread RS agreement make "unprecedented" a "fact" for the purposes of this bullet? Apparently not, or we wouldn't have the passage "However, these opinions should not be stated in Wikipedia's voice. Rather, they should be [...] where justified, described as widespread views, etc." Since it's entirely unproveable, "unprecedented" will always be an "opinion" for the purposes of this bullet, despite the fact that the opinion is widely held. So I disagree that that qualification doesn't need to be there. In any case, there is nothing factually incorrect about the status quo language and we are beating our heads against a wall in an effort to save 11 words in the lead, a lead that many or most editors insist is not overly long. Those 11 words certainly do not constitute undue weight for this issue. ―Mandruss  09:13, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - per the nom and soibangla. Neutrality's original proposal seems like a distinct improvement to me. I disagree with the basis of Mr Ernie's opposing rationale in particular - not just for the reason that Mandruss cites, but also because, to my understanding, it's an accepted fact among RS that Trump has used misleading statements to a degree not seen before in US politics, not a "controversial claim". Jr8825Talk 02:34, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support. This essentially removes The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as, which is partially WP:PEACOCK stuff (it hypes how important it is) and partially describing facts as opinions ("the media have widely described"). Also, the current wording is inaccurate in that academic sources have also described it that way; but more generally, when something is essentially universally described a certain way by high-quality sources, it is inappropriate to characterize it as "described." Some people above have argued that this fact must always be framed as an opinion, but they haven't presented any actual reason why this would be the case (and, notably, they seem to implicitly concede that it is treated as fact by the overwhelming majority of sources.) If we go by that standard, any editor could, based on their personal feelings, term any fact covered by sources as a mere opinion and insist that we cover it as such - the flipside of "don't state opinions as facts" is "don't state facts as opinions"; and we rely on sourcing to determine which is which, not the gut feelings of editors. The sourcing here indicates that this is a fact. --Aquillion (talk) 02:48, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose. Insufficient justification for a change to the text resulting from six weeks and 10,000 words of discussion. See also my previous comments. ―Mandruss  06:04, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      @Mandruss: I noticed that you didn't respond directly to the points that SPECIFICO and François Robere raised earlier, that the RfC dates from almost 2 years ago and there's now a much greater body of published media on Trump's exceptional use of false/misleading statements, allowing the statement to be given with more brevity and as widely accepted fact. Jr8825Talk 00:24, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Re the use of wiki voice for "unprecedented", see this comment. No one has responded to that, and I don't require them to do so. I remain unconvinced by those arguments, and I generally don't consume discussion space to say "I remain unconvinced." ―Mandruss  10:13, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      On current consensus 35 (the long discussion you refer to), the point being amended is #3 from the close. The close says itself: Slight Consensus was for substantiating the "unprecedented" claim by citing fact-checkers. This was argued for mainly to avoid WP:WEASEL. Most seemed receptive to this logic. It was only part of the discussion, and there was only slight consensus for it. A full discussion just on that part has taken place here, and editors feel WP:WEASEL isn't a problem. So I personally disagree there is insufficient justification to overturn that consensus. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 02:12, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      "See also my previous comments." (which have nothing to do with WEASEL) ―Mandruss  14:09, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support new version. SPECIFICO talk 22:51, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Recent citation Today in the NY Times Dishonesty Has Defined the Trump Presidency. The Consequences Could Be Lasting "Whether President Trump wins or loses on Nov. 3, the very concept of public trust in an established set of facts necessary for the operation of a democratic society has been eroded." Unprecedented, indeed. Bdushaw (talk) 11:18, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support for brevity + link to Veracity of statements by Donald Trump for details. — JFG talk 07:46, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support per nominator for brevity amongst other reasons. I would also support JFG's suggestion that a link be included. 207.161.86.162 (talk) 08:24, 11 November 2020 (UTC)*[reply]
    • Oppose. As per statements by MelanieN and BlackBird1008 (and possibly others above), removing the phrase that indicates these lies have been looked at by professionals with the specific purpose of determining the truth of his statements weakens it and leaves the reader with the impression that it's just "general opinion" without a clear factual basis. Despayre  tête-à-tête 22:34, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Closure

    Does this need an RfC? Opinion above appears to be split, with most supporting the proposal (numerically, about 9 or 10 editors), but a substantial minority (numerically, about 4 or 5 editors) opposing it. Neutralitytalk 22:18, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Yes, your proposal has consensus. SPECIFICO talk 22:42, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I've listed this at WP:RFCL, as I think everyone would benefit from an uninvolved close. Neutralitytalk 02:17, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    "during his campaign"

    I note the present lead has "campaign", singular, while the suggested text was corrected to "campaigns", plural. (And I note to all that it is lead, rather than lede. WP:Manual of Style/Lead section) The lead wikilinks campaign to Donald Trump 2016 presidential campaign. Might I suggest a revision to "2016 and 2020 campaigns", where now the years wikilink to the appropriate article? (There could be a 2024 campaign, but we can defer that problem to a later date.) Alternatively, and redundantly but more clear, one could write "2016 campaign and 2020 campaign". Bdushaw (talk) 12:23, 6 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Oppose, the media needs to be mentioned to maintain some resemblance of objectivity in the statement. I’d support removing the statement all together because many of the “false or misleading” statements he has made are subjective BlackBird1008 (talk) 22:48, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    RfC: Arab–Israeli normalization agreements

    Should the text below be added under the "Foreign policy" section? Please refer to article's history and the above talk-page section for details.

    On August 13, 2020, Trump announced that the United Arab Emirates and Israel were to normalize relations under the Israel–United Arab Emirates normalization agreement.[1] The normalization agreement between Bahrain and Israel was announced by Trump on September 11, 2020.[2] On October 23, 2020, Trump announced that Sudan will start to normalize ties with Israel, making it the third Arab state to do so as part of the Trump administration-brokered Abraham Accords.[3]

    -- Tobby72 (talk) 11:06, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • (Summoned by bot) Yes per the sources presented appears WP:DUE as it significant foreign policy event --Shrike (talk) 14:45, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No The article is supposed to be about the man, something at this level of detail might be DUE in Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration. It is not really the case, afaics, that the Sudan arrangement, whatever it is, is "part of" the Abraham Accords although I suppose it could be argued that is a consequence of them. It doesn't mention the Accords in the joint statement nor in most of the sources I have seen and it seems to be something being put about by a Trump aide, even the given VoA source doesn't say that, it says that UAE and Bahrain signed the Accords, which is my understanding as well. Selfstudier (talk) 15:38, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes - the man himself was present and a large part of the negotiations. The man himself was photographed with the other leaders when they announced the "deals". It's completely due weight to include how he is the only president of the US since the formation of Israel to broker at least three separate successful (i.e. productive towards a goal of peace/relations) discussions between Israel and Arab nations. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 15:52, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Berchanhimez, to be fair, this was always easy, as long as everyone was prepared to throw the Palestinians under the bus. That's what changed from every previous administration. Guy (help! - typo?) 18:25, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      One can argue that the Palestinians threw themselves under the bus Shrike (talk) 21:11, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      To expand on my own comment with some more information/sourcing: this may prove to be the most significant foreign policy achievement of his first term (from this article by a left-leaning news source). I wouldn't call "the most significant foreign policy achievement of his first term" something that's insignificant. Here's the BBC explaining why they matter, which is separate from the BBC article Tobby included in the RFC to begin with. The NYT even quotes Nancy Pelosi herself as saying it was "an important day". The biographies of many other people include their greatest achievements, and there's a consensus in the news media that this may be the best foreign policy achievement during his time in office - that is certainly biographically significant more so than the rest of that section now. The section does quite a thorough job of covering his "negative" achievements in foreign policy (ex: withdrawal from treaties, etc) - but per WP:DUE it must also cover his positive policy achievements such as this - especially when the news considers it almost unanimously the "most positive" thing he's done in his term in office. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 20:02, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No - a relatively insignificant foreign policy success that has almost zero effect on Trump's life. Belongs in Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration. -- Scjessey (talk) 19:51, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes - obviously belong, just as other important peace deals are discussed in the articles of presidents involved. (I must also express my incredulity at the comment above. During 70 years, Israel has signed five peace treaties with Arab states; three out of five have come about this year. Calling that a "relatively insignificant foreign policy" is just nonsensical). Jeppiz (talk) 20:33, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      "Calling that a "relatively insignificant foreign policy" is just nonsensical." None of these countries where geopolitical adversaries of Israel. If Trump had brokered a peace deal between Israel and Syria, for example, that would be meaningful. -- Scjessey (talk) 21:31, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      You are wrong. According to The Times of Israel, "In a televised address Saturday on the new Israeli-Sudanese normalization deal, Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu hinted that Israel carried out bombing raids in Sudan several years ago to stop Iran from smuggling weapons to Hamas via the African nation. ... Noting the historic significance of Friday’s breakthrough, Netanyahu stressed that Sudan was once an enemy state that fought against Israel in 1948. In 1967 it hosted the Arab League summit in which the so-called “3 No’s” were announced, he added: No peace with Israel, no recognition of Israel and no negotiations with Israel. ... He thanked "President Trump and his team above all — together with him we are changing history." The new accords were being reached "despite all the experts and commentators who said it was impossible," he said." -- Tobby72 (talk) 07:27, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Netanyahu will say almost anything to talk up Trump's successes because it benefits him politically, so he's not a reliable source for this sort of thing. Again, this is simply not biographically significant. It should be in the foreign policy article, not the BLP. -- Scjessey (talk) 13:37, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No amount of guffawing by the article's subject would make this especially relevant to the article, and these agreements are not significant either. Onetwothreeip (talk) 23:45, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes given the gravity of the event in terms of geopolitical realities and related to his first term, as noted by User:Berchanhimez above. Arab states, even if not traditional "enemies" of Israel, granting it recognition is inherently notable given the history there. Also, any state shifting diplomatic recognition in itself is arguably notable insofar as it entails a major change in relations between one state and another. WhinyTheYounger (talk) 03:40, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose The foreign policy events are significant, but this biography of Trump is not the place to include the statement. If Trump had made the achievements a major factor of his campaigns and administration - if he had personally argued for them, or if he had personally put his efforts and political capital on the line for them, perhaps inclusion would be warranted (if so, suggest rewording to be more Trump-centric). In addition, there has been quite a lot of discussion of restructuring the article to shorten it (for the same reason), with a reduction of the entire foreign policy section back to a summary paragraph or two. Any addition now would likely just be removed, along with a lot of other subsections, in a month or so. Presidency of Donald Trump is the more appropriate article for presidential topics not directly Trump related. Bdushaw (talk) 09:18, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • Why are Trump's achievements inappropriate for his biographical article, but yet Barack Obama's foreign policy achievements are not inappropriate for his, or George W. Bush's for his... keeping in mind both of those (and many other presidents') articles are either Good or Featured status? He did put his own political capital on the line and he did personally mediate between at least the leaders themselves - hence why even "liberal" media such as Vox are calling it significant for him personally. I agree the wording could be improved - but the correct thing to do then is to help improve it, not argue against inclusion. Would you be okay with the following? On August 13, 2020, Trump and the leaders of the United Arab Emirates and Israel announced they had reached an agreement to normalize diplomatic relations under the Israel–United Arab Emirates normalization agreement. This was followed by a similar agreement between Bahrain and Israel, announced by Trump on September 11, 2020. On October 23, 2020, Trump announced that Sudan will start to normalize ties with Israel, making it the third Arab state to do so as part of the Abraham Accords, which have been called potentially the most significant foreign policy achievement of Trump during his four year term as president. - with the same citations already given in the original RFC and in my reply above (specifically citing the last part (most significant) to Vox)? If people think my wording is an improvement please feel free to do what you will with it. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 13:59, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
        • The content of an article is not decided on the basis of the content of an entirely different article. Again, this will have ZERO biographical impact, so it doesn't belong in the biography. -- Scjessey (talk) 15:17, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
          • Per the precedent of past presidents, which does impact the decision here, a president's foreign policy achievements are considered "biographically important". If you don't agree, that's fine, but you should be trying to get the foreign policy impacts removed from all other articles as well. Otherwise, your opposition here is just not liking that Trump's article could have something slightly positive in it? I note that you don't disagree with the citations that I brought up that call it the "most significant" thing Trump's done for foreign policy as president? You seem to be nitpicking your disagreement and ignoring the rest of what people have said. Regardless, I think it's clear you're doing that, so I'll just let whoever closes this do what they will with your non-policy-based and precedent-ignoring disagreement. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 15:21, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
            • Disagree. Trump's life has not been like Bush's life and certainly not like Obama's life, from the standpoint of notability for Wikipedia's purposes. Please cite the Wikipedia policy that the BLPs about very different people should be treated the same in this way. And please review WP:AGF and keep your suspicions to yourself until you have tangible evidence to back them up. ―Mandruss  15:40, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
              • You have said nothing about why WP:DUE and WP:SS do not apply to Mr. Trump other than "his life is different than other presidents". That is not an argument against inclusion of this material which due weight and summary style mandate given the other information currently in this article. This has been called by reliable sources the "most significant" achievement of his time in office and merits inclusion as such per DUE and SS. I'm happy to wait for others to opine, but I will point out again that neither Mandruss or Scjessey have offered any policy based argument as to why DUE and SS do not apply here, nor have they even acknowledged that reliable sources call this the "most significant" thing he's done in office. I'll let other people opine here, but I hope whoever closes/acts on this RfC will note that these responses in this thread have ignored the policy-based arguments myself and others have brought up and ignored what reliable sources say to put their own opinion as to its significance into the discussion. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 15:55, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
                • You are confusing biographical significance and general significance. Trump's foreign policy activities will have no discernable impact on Trump's life or presidency, which means they are biographically insignificant. The policy-based argument that you seek is WP:UNDUE and WP:SS, in that including this material would violate both. -- Scjessey (talk) 18:47, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
                • given the other information currently in this article. And what if I also oppose much of that other information, for the same reason? Should I remain silent and surrender to that slippery slope? I disagree that DUE and SS mandate any such thing – I dearly wish policy were so clear, with nice bright lines for us to follow – but I'm prepared to accept the judgment of whoever closes/acts on this RfC. ―Mandruss  10:36, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No and I can't say it any better than Bdushaw did.Mandruss  13:36, 26 October 2020 (UTC) (Now abstaining after subsequent discussion.) ―Mandruss  12:26, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No, as foreign policy has not been a central or important aspect of the Trump administrant, this has no bearing on his personal biography, esp. as we continuously speak about article length and how to trim. Mention in Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration. ValarianB (talk) 16:00, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No - Presidency of Donald Trump, Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration, United Arab Emirates–United States relations, Benjamin Netanyahu, etc. are all more suitable for this content; this is probably not in the top 5 most important foreign policy aspects of his presidency. It also doesn't really represent any shift in U.S. policy, balances of power, etc. It is far less significant than, for instance, the withdrawal from the Iran nuclear agreement, the withdrawal from the Paris Agreement, the increased tension with European allies/NATO, the deal with the Taliban, the failed North Korea talks, etc., all of which represented a major shift/development in U.S. policy. Neutralitytalk 16:47, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      You are wrong. Asia Times: "Aside from the US electoral aims, the agreement has geopolitical ramifications, most notably furthering the already significant isolation of Iran in the region. ... This agreement and the other recent ones undermine the now defunct Arab consensus that normalization cannot occur until there is an independent Palestinian state. ... The Sudan-Israel agreement is thus not only a triumph for Israeli foreign policy but for the American camp. While the UAE and Bahrain agreements only cemented already existing foreign policy orientation, the deal with Khartoum marks a new direction for a country of 40 million and a step away from a dark past."[1]
      Joe Biden: "The UAE’s offer to publicly recognize the State of Israel is a welcome, brave, and badly-needed act of statesmanship ... A Biden-Harris Administration will seek to build on this progress, and will challenge all the nations of the region to keep pace."[2]
    • Tobby72, **Yes** - This is a historically significant event with plenty of coverage and deserves to be in the main article. May His Shadow Fall Upon You📧 19:35, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • -- Tobby72 (talk) 11:07, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      I don't see the word "Trump" in any of that. I'm hard pressed to imagine Trump doing any of the diplomatic negotiation required, since Trump is not a diplomat or a statesman. Did Trump actively encourage the State Department to pursue this agreement? AFAIK he allowed it to happen, which meant doing nothing (not all foreign policy initiative starts at the top). Feel free to quote sources that contradict me. ―Mandruss  11:17, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Reuters: "President Donald Trump on Thursday managed to pull off a rare victory for U.S. diplomacy in the Middle East ahead of his Nov. 3 re-election bid by helping to broker a deal between American allies Israel and the United Arab Emirates."
      Deutsche Welle: "Trump announced the agreement on Friday, following a three-way phone call he had with Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu and Bahrain's King Hamad bin Isa Al Khalifa. ... The announcement comes after two weeks of intense lobbying on the part of the Trump Administration, particularly the president's son-in-law and senior advisor Jared Kushner and Secretary of State Mike Pompeo, both of whom personally visited the king and crown prince of Bahrain, urging them to open full diplomatic relations with Israel."
      BBC News: "This is a diplomatic achievement for President Trump and for his son-in-law Jared Kushner, who largely brokered the agreements with Bahrain and the United Arab Emirates."
      The Denver Post: "The ceremony follows months of intricate diplomacy headed by Jared Kushner, Trump’s son-in-law and senior adviser, and the president’s envoy for international negotiations, Avi Berkowitz."
      The Times of Israel: "Trump announced the Israel-Sudan deal on Friday at the White House in a call with Netanyahu and Sudan’s leaders. ... Trump earlier on Friday signed a waiver to remove Khartoum from the State Department’s blacklist of state terror sponsors." -- Tobby72 (talk) 12:05, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      That's enough to make me withdraw my opposition, and I'm striking my !vote. Not enough to earn my support, as I now feel the pro and con arguments are roughly equal in strength. ―Mandruss  12:26, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The article you cited from the Asia Times is an opinion piece, and it refers to the moves "furthering the already significant isolation of Iran" - i.e., as I said above, these moves fit into a wider theme, and are neither a major shift in U.S. policy nor a significant balances of power shift. If Trump brokered some sort of agreement between Turkey and Syria, or between the Saudis and the Iranians, or between warring Libyan factions, then I would be the first one to support inclusion in this article. This is not at this level. Neutralitytalk 14:35, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Trump brokered peace agreement between Israel and Sudan. It fought in wars against Israel in 1948 and 1967. -- Tobby72 (talk) 17:02, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      That has nothing to do with my comment above: "neither a major shift in U.S. policy nor a significant balances of power shift." Neutralitytalk 17:09, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      USA Today: "It comes days after Trump announced he would take Sudan off the State Department's list of state sponsors of terrorism – a pivotal move that will help end Sudan's financial isolation and bolster its transition from dictatorship to democracy. ... The Trump administration said under the new agreement, the U.S. would also work with Sudan to help ease its debt burden and become a part of the broader international community." -- Tobby72 (talk) 17:45, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Yes, it's important to Sudan and Sudanese-U.S. relations. That's not the same thing as balance of power shift. Neutralitytalk 18:10, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No, put it in Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration instead per others opposing the change. FreeMediaKid! 22:44, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No. Belongs in the off-shoot articles. Due to size constraints, not every action taken by the administration can be mentioned in the main Trump bio. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 03:51, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes per Berchanhimez. This has been called by reliable sources the "most significant" foreign policy achievement of his time in office. Presidents have more power in foreign affairs than in domestic policy so Trump's most significant achievement in foreign policy should definitely be included in the article. Let's at least be consistent with Barack Obama's article. -- Tobby72 (talk) 09:06, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The question is whether the WP:WEIGHT of mainstream RS have called this "most significant". I see no references or analysis from any participant here that supports that proposition. Even remotely. c.f. North Korea, Saudi, Russia, China... etc. SPECIFICO talk 13:02, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Closing admin note: Please note that Tobby72 is the proposer of this RfC, and has now also voted "yes" (and "per another user", oddly) above. ValarianB (talk) 13:22, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Wikipedia:Requests for comment#Suggestions for responding: All editors (including IP users) are welcome to respond to any RfC. Try not to be confrontational. Be friendly and civil, and assume good faith of other editors' actions. -- Tobby72 (talk) 17:02, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No, per my comment to OP directly above. SPECIFICO talk 13:03, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment Frankly, I am concerned wit the OP's zeal in framing this matter in the best light possible for the BLP subject. Note this edit to Political positions of Joe Biden, which lists only Trump by name, and the leaders of the UAE and Israel generically, followed by Biden praised the agreement as a "welcome, brave, and badly-needed act of statesmanship.", which to the quick glance makes it appear that Joe Biden is praising the only named person, Trump's, statesmanship. In reality, per the source, Biden was singling out the UAE directly, Today, Israel and the United Arab Emirates have taken a historic step to bridge the deep divides of the Middle East. The UAE’s offer to publicly recognize the State of Israel is a welcome, brave, and badly-needed act of statesmanship.. ValarianB (talk)
      Fortunately, on widely-followed articles, this sort of thing is quickly spotted and corrected. SPECIFICO talk 13:27, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Note this edit to Political positions of Joe Biden. The US and Trump are NOT marginal facilitators. -- Tobby72 (talk) 17:02, 27 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes (with the caveat that this might be removed in further reductions of the section) the "Israel" section feels incomplete without some mention of this treaty. Reducing this to one sentence seems likely and appropriate if the section is reduced further. power~enwiki (π, ν) 01:53, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes for now, as it is currently deemed by the sources to be one of the most significant and notable actions of Trump. Of course things can change so this might need looking at with whatever happens over the next 8 years. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 15:30, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No: Not material to his life, this BLP is already full, belongs in presidency/foreign policy articles. soibangla (talk) 17:46, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes Of course this belongs here. Its is one of the reasons he has been nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize, which he won't get cause that committee only awards that to US Presidents who later cause the presenters a sense of buyers remorse[2]. But indeed, Trump's encouragement to one time foes to come to the table to work out peaceful resolutions on an international level is worth noting here and elsewhere.--MONGO (talk) 18:28, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • "Its is one of the reasons he has been nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize" LOL no it isn't. He was nominated by the same whack job who did it last time before the agreement. -- Scjessey (talk) 22:17, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No (Summoned by bot) I'd expect this to find lodging in the Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration article, with a mention in Presidency of Donald Trump, as it is significant to his administration. Assorted articles exist to prevent any one of them from growing to an unwieldy length, which every Trump article has the potential for.Lindenfall (talk) 20:42, 28 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes per all the above justifications. Additionally, it will be significantly more important once Saudi Arabia signs the peace deal. [4] Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk) 06:55, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      According to the source you cited, that's not very likely. Saudia Arabia's top diplomat on Thursday called for direct peace talks between Israel and the Palestinians, while again suggesting the kingdom won't normalize ties with the Jewish state until the decades-old conflict is resolved. In an interview with a US-based think tank, Saudi Foreign Minister Prince Faisal bin Farhan Al Saud underlined the kingdom’s support for the Arab Peace Initiative, which sees a Palestinian state as a prerequisite to rapprochement between Israel and the Arab world. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 21:29, 30 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No this belongs in "Foreign policy of the Donald Trump administration." Bahar1397 (talk) 22:37, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No. RS haven't actually reported that diplomatic relations have been established between Israel and UAE or Bahrain, just that they would be if Israel stops the annexation of the West Bank (which Israel has merely suspended) and if the UAE gets to buy F-35s (which Israel opposes, last I heard). So, two big ifs. Sudan is another big if since the current transitional government, which wanted to get off the terrorism list, is unelected, and the Sudanese public [is] largely opposed to normalization of ties with Israel. Trump announcements "that XYZ were to/ will start to" are not significant enough events in Trump's biography unless RS report that these "deals" led to peace in the Middle East, e.g. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 19:02, 30 October 2020 (UTC) 21:30, 30 October 2020 (UTC)Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk)[reply]
    • Yes - while obviously it should have more detail in the relevant article, it has a lot of coverage and clearly does meet DUE. I am distinctly concerned by the people saying "foreign affairs isn't important to Trump, so it doesn't warrant inclusion. That screams non-neutrality. It's bound up with both his presidency and that is bound up with him. If someone wants to recommend an even more slimmed down version, I'd happily consider it, but it should be included. Nosebagbear (talk) 20:17, 30 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment. This is a peculiar RfC - it requests a consensus on a particular statement on a particular topic of foreign policy, and one that is of interest to the OP. It is peculiar because this is a hodge-podge way of formulating an article - are we to have an RfC on every specific foreign policy topic that is of interest to someone? A more constructive approach might be to postulate that we need to shorten the foreign policy section (of this biography) to be a few key paragraphs on Trump's main aims and efforts, then ask for the top 3-5 topics, say, that are particularly relevant and could be summarized in a sentence or two. If this RfC statement is approved, for example, does that mean it becomes an immovable boulder in the foreign policy section, such that when someone cleans up that section (as we've discussed, so it is likely to happen), the text in question would have to awkwardly remain? Is this middle east result the most important foreign policy accomplishment by Trump (his specific contributions to it still seem minimal to me)? Bdushaw (talk) 20:30, 30 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes include it as the most historic agreements brokered since camp David accords. It should be in the body and mentioned in the lead like Jimmy Carter. ConstantPlancks (talk) 03:37, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes based on precedent and WP:NPOV. See Jimmy Carter (Camp David Accords) and Bill Clinton (Oslo Accords and Israel–Jordan peace treaty) Adoring nanny (talk) 03:26, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Absolutely Yes. Our "Foreign policy" section of this article already includes much more detail about much less significant developments. Unless there is a massive cleanout of this section, which does not currently appear likely, the above paragraph should be included. -- MelanieN (talk) 19:58, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The vast bulk of the foreign policy stuff should come out, and agreements to formalize what had been quiet friendly relations for many years certainly don’t rank as noteworthy here, especially considering how Trump did a 180 on the Kushner plan announced in January to get these agreements. These agreements were possible only in spite of Trump’s stated policy on West Bank annexation, rather than because of it. soibangla (talk) 20:31, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      While you (and everyone) are free to your opinion, on Wikipedia we go based on reliable sources - at least one of which has blatantly called it the "most significant" thing Trump's done. If this is not present, then per due weight anything that isn't directly called the "most significant" by reliable sources should also not be included. I agree that most stuff should come out - but if anything remains, then this must because it is covered immensely in reliable sources and has been called the "most significant" by at least one of them. Not to mention the word "significant" (sometimes with "very" or other words) is used often to discuss these developments. Regards -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 20:40, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      It's not an opinion that the deal was made possible because Netanyahu suspended his longtime objective of annexing West Bank settlements, and the Kushner plan in January greenlighted the annexation, which was contrary to decades of American and international policy for a two-state solution. So by agreeing to this deal, the Trump administration reversed its stated policy of just months earlier. It's also not an opinion that Israel and UAE had "a robust diplomatic relationship that had long been one of the Middle East's worst-kept secrets." soibangla (talk) 00:16, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      That's not what I was calling an opinion. Your opinion I was referring to was that it "do[esn't] rank as noteworthy" - which is countered by the fact that a majority of reliable sources call it "significant" or similar, and one even calls it the "most significant". I've seen no reasoning from anyone here as to why those reliable sources should be ignored or discounted. n.b. I fixed your comment for list-gap as well. Regardless, I think the best thing is to let the closer of this discussion evaluate whether the concerns about due weight are merited/valid or not based on the comments here, so I won't hammer it anymore in responses to you. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 00:28, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If we're talking about significance, we should give more weight to his major initiatives that have not yielded results: China, DPRK and Iran. These are the three major policies that Trump pursued, but they didn't pan out, which created the need for the Israel/UAE deal to get some foreign policy points on the board in an election year. Not to mention Netanyahu's political motivations, but that's another topic. This deal put on paper realities that had existed for years. soibangla (talk) 00:45, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Note: I've changed the beginning of some comments to follow MOS:LISTGAP by changing beginning colons to beginning asterisks as per the beginning comments and the overwhelming majority of new-lines. This should not have any visual effect whatsoever, but improves the flow for users of accessibility devices/programs. Regards -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 20:40, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes but condensed. This material is sufficiently noteworthy for inclusion here but only in a condensed format. The UAE and Bahrain agreements can be easily consolidated into a single sentence. Sudan isn't noteworthy because, well, DJT announces lots of stuff that never comes to pass. R2 (bleep) 00:37, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Not as phrased. That Trump made certain announcements is verifiable enough, but runs foul of WP:NOTNEWS. If there's sourcing for Trump having played a role in the normalisation of diplomatic relationships between Israel and these Arab states & Sudan; then include a brief mention of that. - Ryk72 talk 05:34, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes – Those agreements are recognized as very significant developments towards peace in the Middle East, which has been a salient objective of the Trump administration ever since his election (and a stated goal of U.S. foreign policy for decades). Kushner brokered those deals at Trump's behest. Obviously we're not at the "ultimate deal" level he touted during his 2016 campaign, but that's not reason enough to dismiss those announcements as merely political fodder. I also believe this may be lead-worthy material, especially if/when a couple more countries sign up to normalizing relations with Israel. — JFG talk 07:53, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • @JFG: Even if they are regarded as "very significant" towards Middle East peace (which they really aren't), they have almost ZERO impact on Trump's life. That should be reflected in this article. Any coverage here should be minimal, and there's no way in a million years it would make the lead. -- Scjessey (talk) 13:49, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
        • @Scjessey: RE they have almost ZERO impact on Trump's life.: Irrelevant. The vast majority of what is in our "presidency" section has zero impact on his life. Shall we remove our entire coverage of immigration? Of "energy and climate"? Of health care, gay rights, abortion? None of those things seem to impact him personally. Significant actions as president are always included in that president's biography. That's because they become part of the person's legacy. I agree it would not make the lead, but that's not what this discussion is about. This material is proposed to be added to the "Foreign policy" section of the text. -- MelanieN (talk) 17:51, 3 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment: I just want to address some arguments that have been made recently. First of all there is very likely to be a significant reduction in the foreign policy content on this article anyway, so it's not particularly valid that this should be included because other stuff is. On reliable sources, there is a lack of attribution for this to Trump specifically. The balance of reliable sources shows that this belongs on Wikipedia, but not on the Donald Trump biography. Onetwothreeip (talk) 22:58, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Source

    You have GOT to source this line, in the last paragraph before the fold, "Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic". What is 'slowly'? His administration addressed the issue in January 2020, when the virus was in its infancy. Yes, he handled the outbreak poorly, but that's easy to say in hindsight. I would argue that he reacted quickly but ineffectively to COVID-19. --Sebanderson (talk) 15:30, 6 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Have you had a look at the corresponding entry under #Current consensus above? In any case, worth being aware of MOS:LEADCITE. Regards, HaeB (talk) 15:41, 6 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The whole sentence is synthesis of *opinion* stated as fact in a BLP. This is a hard libel which is very legally problematic as written and should be removed immediately or phrased to be clearly the opinion of his opponents. Coming to a consensus on WP does not wash it of legal problems. WP is not a place for pushing political stances as if they were hard facts. — al-Shimoni (talk) 13:59, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    How can you be here twelve years and not understand that citing reputable sources is just that and not staking a claim in and of itself? The whole point isn't that what's being said is a fact, it's that it's a fact it's being said. This *also* isn't the place to explore your insecurities about him facing a loss. If you have an argument to make, make it in good faith in the interest of the truth and not fandom. 2603:9001:6B08:9E6A:61F0:4EE2:4AC3:4A50 (talk) 06:32, 10 November 2020 (UTC) 06:31, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:WIKIVOICE clearly states that opinions should not be stated in wikivoice, and should be attributed in the text to a source or as a widespread view rather than presented without caveat in wikivoice as if it were a fact.Sandman9083 (talk) 05:43, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Challenging the presdential election legitimacy and results and declare of victory prior to seal of votes

    Should I add a section about the current Trump attitude towards the 2020 USA Presidential elections? It's quite a unique behavior and unprecedented by any incumbent or even nominee. His twitter campaign towards the legitimacy of the elections, his flagged tweets, his claims of victory, etc. I think it's a biogrophically significant part of his presidency and is a potential paragraph that's significant regardless of the elections' outcomes. Dr.EbrahimSaadawi (talk) 14:48, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    In my opinion, anything presidency-related should be established in one or more of the many Trump sub-articles before being considered for inclusion here. If accepted here, it should summarize the material in the sub-article(s), not adding any details. The relationship between this article and the sub-articles should be similar to that between this article's lead and its body. ―Mandruss  15:23, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    This could be something big though. It should not be in this article yet, but it might be appropriate later. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 16:12, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think any definitive adds about the outcome of the election or Trumps attitude should wait until he leaves office. There is too much emotion in the world right now to appear objective and there are about 70 million people who think he still has a chance to win. Also if he does by some chance win, the section would have to be heavily edited BlackBird1008 (talk) 23:28, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    At this point in time it is becomming more and more clear than Donald Trump has lost this election. Joe Biden has Huge leads in all the major key states. Trump's efforts to reverse those results have failed countless times. About 90% of them have been dismissed due to lack of evdience and the fact they only affect a really small number of votes. There is no way Trump wins this election. World Leaders, Politicians, and many others have declared Joe Biden the President-elect. Hell, this wikipedia's President-elect page has Biden as the president-elect. I think it is about time to add the successor to this page. I mean the odds of Trump overriding Biden's huge leads are slim to none and Republican leaders are beginning to accept it. Phoenix X Maximus (talk) 19:59, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Proposals for addition to this full-protected article

    Please start a new subsection for each proposal. If there is consensus to add a particular fact let's not quibble about the wording, but try to get rapid consensus so we can find an uninvolved administrator to make the addition.

    Add election call to the lead

    The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


    I propose to add In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, major news organizations have projected that Trump lost his bid for re-election. -- MelanieN (talk) 18:41, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • SupportMandruss  18:45, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support though I have quibbles about the wording. power~enwiki (π, ν) 18:50, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment: We should include something about this, yes, but the wording isn't ideal. We should also include something about when he will be succeeded by president-elect Biden, along the lines of what was added to Obama's article in 2016 ("On January 20, 2017, Obama will be succeeded by President-elect Donald Trump"), and include Biden in the infobox as elect; see Obama the day after the 2016 election. --Tataral (talk) 18:52, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Those details need not go in the lead. I'll start a separate section for your proposed additions. Let's keep this section to the proposed wording, we can get separate consensus for additions. -- MelanieN (talk) 18:55, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Good call. ―Mandruss  18:58, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      P.S. Biden is already in the infobox as president-elect. -- MelanieN (talk) 18:57, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      He had been removed again[5] shortly before I wrote my comment, so I didn't notice that he had been readded, for which I apologise. --Tataral (talk) 19:19, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support I don't like the wording either but at this point there needs to be some mention of the election in the lede Zingarese talk · contribs 21:27, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support. This should be implemented quickly, as the current state of the lede is a major NPOV violation. We should remain open to improvements of this wording later on, and of course to mentioning who his main opponent in that election was - it's quite strange that the lede has not included this information so far. Regards, HaeB (talk) 22:13, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Strong support, and urge immediate implementation. Not having this on the page hours after the projections have been made is a WP:DEADLINE IS NOW violation at the biggest possible scale. If administrator discretion is needed to determine some aspects of the wording, fine, but the status quo is obviously unacceptable. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 22:38, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Essays can't be violated, but I think the unanimous support of five editors is enough to implement this proposal. ―Mandruss  22:49, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Happy enough to implement it, but could I get some idea of where in the lead this ought to go? Just tack it on at the end? GorillaWarfare (talk) 23:01, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      GorillaWarfare, I would say yeah, put it at the end, since the last three paragraphs are all about his presidency. No strong views about whether it should be a separate paragraph from COVID or not. {{u|Sdkb}}talk 23:10, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Originally at the end of the last para.[6]Mandruss  23:11, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • 'Comment: the lead currently doesn't even mention the election campaign any more.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:13, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    Add election call to the 2020 presidential campaign section

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    I propose to add On November 7, 2020, after four days of vote counting, most major news outlets projected Biden as the winner of the presidential election.[1] -- MelanieN (talk) 18:41, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • SupportMandruss  18:45, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support (though it looks like this is already in the article). power~enwiki (π, ν) 18:48, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Without TP consensus, don't count on it staying there. ―Mandruss  18:50, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    Add Trump reaction to the 2020 presidential campaign section

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    I propose to add Trump indicated that he does not accept this result and said "this election is far from over". He revived his claims of election fraud and said he will continue to launch legal challenges in key swing states.[2] -- MelanieN (talk) 18:41, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • SupportMandruss  18:46, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support (though it looks like this is already in the article). power~enwiki (π, ν) 18:48, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    Sources

    1. ^ "Election 2020 Live Updates: Joseph R. Biden Jr. Has Won the Presidency". The New York Times. November 7, 2020. Retrieved 7 November 2020.
    2. ^ King, Ledyard (November 7, 2020). "Trump revives baseless claims of election fraud after Biden wins presidential race". USA Today. Retrieved 7 November 2020.

    Add a sentence to the lead about succession

    Tataral has proposed: We should also include something about when he will be succeeded by president-elect Biden, along the lines of what what added to Obama's article in 2016 ("On January 20, 2017, Obama will be succeeded by President-elect Donald Trump").-- MelanieN (talk) 19:00, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • I Oppose for now. He is still only called by the networks, and has challenged the call. -- MelanieN (talk) 19:00, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Could you expand on how this is relevant under Wikipedia policies? The networks are reliable sources about the outcome of the election. Trump is not. It does not seem compatible with WP:NPOV to omit the formers' views in the lede because the latter does not agree with them. Regards, HaeB (talk) 22:22, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The courts are valid primary sources for the official outcome of the election. All indications are that Trump will force them to speak, but they have not yet done so. If the courts speak and reliable sources disagree with them, who will Wikipedia side with? The courts, I hope, although that's a very unlikely situation. There is no deadline and therefore no reason to rush to judgment on this. ―Mandruss  22:35, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Not following that one, @Mandruss: in the US, the legislatures determine the results of presidential elections, not the courts. SPECIFICO talk 11:51, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Well I think Bush-Gore was ultimately decided in the U.S. Supreme Court. ―Mandruss  12:06, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      I know you thought that, but it is incorrect. An encyclopedia needs to be clear and accurate. SPECIFICO talk 12:12, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Whatever. I won't quibble with you about whether SCOTUS technically decided the election or issued a ruling that ultimately resulted in the Bush win. As for An encyclopedia needs to be clear and accurate, I have not proposed any content about this minor point. I suggest we move on. ―Mandruss  12:36, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose per MelanieN, and Trump is not Obama. ―Mandruss  19:02, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • I Support on the basis that math is math - most of the votes are in, and Trump has no legal basis to challenge this outcome. Double standards won't do this article any favors. --50.69.20.91 (talk) 19:44, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose until official results of the election are recorded. Lindenfall (talk) 19:57, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment. What about Trump is projected to be succeeded by President-elect Joe Biden? El komodos drago (talk to me) 20:58, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes. JohndanR (talk) 22:16, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support. We can discuss the precise wording, but the name of the expected successor and the date of the transition are highly relevant facts in any politician's article. Regards, HaeB (talk) 22:22, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose at this stage.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:07, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support All reliable sources have recognized Biden as President-Elect and have judged Trump's challenges as groundless and frivolous. So far, they have been swiftly dismissed by the courts. Liz Read! Talk! 02:26, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - For now. There is no rush. PackMecEng (talk) 17:34, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose He could still die or resign before the end of 2020. JackFromReedsburg (talk | contribs) 20:16, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support All reliable sources and Biden's own Wikipedia articles names him as president-elect. JJARichardson (talk) 22:36, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose per precedent: Talk:Barack_Obama/Archive_81#Should_Trump_be_listed_in_the_Infobox_as_Obama's_successor?. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 23:18, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • I misunderstood the question. This is for the lead, not the infobox? Then support (per precedent). Arguments like Trump is not Obama are meritless; the constant argument that the presidency is nothing in the context of Trump's life is baloney. Once you're a president, you're remembered in history for being a president. Not for running The Apprentice. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 14:34, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - I like this wording, it's matter-of-fact without rubbing salt on a contentious issue by unnecessarily saying that Trump "lost". Presumably it would replace the text "In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, major news organizations have projected that Trump lost his bid for re-election." The wording suggested by El komodos drago works just as well in my view. Jr8825Talk 07:56, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support per Jr8825. Volunteer Marek 04:12, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support unless a reliable source that contradicts this claim can be found. As per my knowledge, such a source does not exist (and I am obviously discounting Breibart and similar). But I'd invite the opposing camp to provide such a source, in which case I would reconsider.Eccekevin (talk) 01:06, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose Gotta go with Mandruss's reasoning, as stated above, on this. GenQuest "Talk to Me" 12:58, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment If we did it 4 years ago, in the Obama article? then we should do the same here. Otherwise, don't. FWIW - Biden was elected president of the United States, despite the Trump camp's 'desperate' claims. GoodDay (talk) 13:52, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • Furthermore, please don't tell me about the Electoral College not having voted yet & Congress not having certified yet, as I know all about that. Even though that would be a much better argument for the exclusionist, then their courts argument. SCOTUS doesn't decide US prez elections & as for 2000? It was the Gore camp that threw in the towel, because there wasn't enough time left to do over the Florida recount correctly. Either way, the result would've been the same - Bush winning. GoodDay (talk) 14:24, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support per Jr8825. Mgasparin (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Copy-edit/language updates

    I note that the section "2020 presidential campaign" still has much of the text in the incorrect past-tense (unsure of the technical term): "have focused" rather than "focused", "has repeatedly" rather than "repeatedly", "Several sources described Trump's campaign message as shifting" perhaps "Several sources opined that the Trump campaign shifted" (or something like that; unsure of the use of weasel words), etc. Perhaps a general update is in order. While I am here, IMO that Trump has not yet conceded is of unprecedented, historical nature and should be noted, with "conceded" being an important word. e.g., WA Post, Guardian, USA Today. (Thx to everyone for all their attentiveness!) Bdushaw (talk) 17:31, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    The article is back under full protection. IMO while that is the case we should limit our protected-edit requests to things that are of urgent importance, not tweaks. -- MelanieN (talk) 23:28, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    A defeated president conceding defeat is more-or-less a media creation. AFAIK, the early presidents like Adams, J.Q. Adams, Van Buren (for examples) haven't been recorded as conceding. Indeed, if Trump were to not attend Biden inauguration? that also wouldn't be a first, as both Adams's & A. Johnson didn't attend their successors inaugurals. GoodDay (talk) 14:30, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    "President Elect"

    That's impossible until the electors meet. 139.138.6.121 (talk) 22:06, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Are you referring to the "Succeeded by" in the infobox? If so, I would support its removal at least until the succession is official (i.e. when the Electoral College votes). It's Succeeded by, not Projected to be succeeded by. "Succeeded" is past tense. ―Mandruss  22:20, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, Biden can't hold that title at the present because the electors have not yet voted. 139.138.6.121 (talk) 22:53, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Biden is the president-elect; this is established in his own article too and is how he is described by all reliable sources. We described Trump as president-elect and included him as Obama's successor in Obama's article the day after the 2016 election, ages before the electoral college convened and before the votes were even counted.[7],[8] Judging by reliable sources it's an extremist fringe POV/conspiracy theory that Biden "isn't president-elect". It's standard practice in Wikipedia to include elected successors in the infobox with the qualification "elect". There is no reason to invent a new rule applied only to Biden just because Trump lost. --Tataral (talk) 22:54, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Biden is the president-elect - no, he's the presumptive president-elect. 139.138.6.121 (talk) 23:18, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I do not consider this article bound by editors' decisions in different situations at other articles. I never have, and I know of no policy that says it should be. In any case, if I had the time I could probably find articles where things weren't done the way you insist is the only way, and I'd be interested to know why Obama's article is the sole determiner for this article. That it was the most recent would be a weak reason. ―Mandruss  23:06, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Even if there have been constant attempts over the last four years to portray Trump far more favourably in this article than he is usually portrayed by reliable sources, there is no need to deny reality and no need for this article to directly contradict the consensus version of the Joe Biden article and the consensus among the world's reliable sources, and to invent a new rule for Biden never before in Wikipedia's history applied to any other American president or president-elect (or, most likely, any other politician on the planet), including Trump in 2016. --Tataral (talk) 23:36, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If a consensus had been reached here to take the more conservative approach, before any consensus had been reached at Joe Biden, would you be arguing so strenuously that this article should determine Biden's content? If not, I call red herring. ―Mandruss  00:17, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    No, it's not a "conservative approach," it's a fringe POV. Biden is the president-elect, that is simply a fact for Wikipedia's purposes because reliable sources have established it and Wikipedia has established it through its consensus-making processes (on ITN, the Biden article and elsewhere), and the Donald Trump article should not be used as propaganda for a fringe POV the contradicts our own article on the president-elect, the ITN announcement on Wikipedia's own main page, and all the world's reliable sources. Everyone from Mitt Romney and Boris Johnson to Barack Obama and Angela Merkel have congratulated Biden as president-elect by now. --Tataral (talk) 00:30, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Reliable sources do not determine the outcomes of elections and I stand by my position, prepared to be overridden by consensus as always. That's consensus here, not elsewhere. I suggest we wait for comments from others. ―Mandruss  00:35, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Reliable sources do determine the outcomes of elections as far as Wikipedia is concerned, and this issue has already been decided as far as Wikipedia is concerned through our normal consensus-making processes in numerous venues (including our main page). Further attempts to revive this conspiracy theory that Biden isn't really president-elect is a total waste of other editors' time and is likely to be viewed as disruptive. --Tataral (talk) 00:54, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with Tataral, WP:OR applies here. We must only include what reliable news sources include. Both sides agree on who the president-elect is.[1] Gsquaredxc (talk) 02:22, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If Wikipedia declared Donald Trump President-Elect the day after the 2016 Election, I don't see a reason to depart from this practice for Biden. It doesn't matter whether or not Trump has conceded, reliable sources, like the AP, have called the election. Biden is now the President-Elect until Jan. 20, 2021 when he'll be inaugurated as President. Liz Read! Talk! 02:23, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Liz: Biden is now the President-Elect is patently false, until the Electoral College votes. Until then, Biden is the presumptive president-elect. They are not the same thing, and, even if unlikely, it is within the realm of realistic possibility that the presumption will be proven wrong. We can't predict what courts might do with much certainty. The argument for inclusion is that we should ignore the "presumptive" factor because most sources are doing so. As for 2016, WP:CCC. ―Mandruss  02:36, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The argument for inclusion is that we should ignore the "presumptive" factor because most sources are doing so. And that's a good reason for ignoring it. We follow Reliable Sources, remember? Our article does say some version of "news media called the election" rather than "he was elected", but otherwise we are treating him as the president-elect. As we have done with every previous president. Let it go, Mandruss. You may be technically correct, but WP:Verifiability, not truth, remember? -- MelanieN (talk) 02:45, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Agreed with MelanieN here, verifiability, not truth. ɱ (talk) 03:36, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    No, he isn't "presumptive president-elect", he is president-elect because that is what RS call him. Also, let me quote another editor (Chrisvls) from Talk:Joe Biden: "It would seem out of step with the way the encyclopedia works to have us make a different call than a consensus of reliable sources. This seems especially true given the nature of the term President Elect, which is informal and there is even federal law that allows for the government to designate the president elect before the Electoral College vote. From our article: "The president-elect is the common or honorific title accorded to the person who conclusively appears to have won a presidential election in the United States [...]" In short, due the nature of the title President-elect, regular WP:RS rules apply" --Tataral (talk) 04:40, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If the point of Wikipedia is what can be verified through other sources, then the term should be used because even Fox News is doing so. I assume other wiki-articles can't be sources, but I want to point out how President-elect of the United States says the term is for someone who appears to have won and doesn't say that the Electoral College has to vote before the term can be used. I like the way Aar phrased this on the Biden talk page: "Reliable sources consider Biden the president-elect. Therefore, as far as Wikipedia is concerned, that is what he is." There are many sources to verify the use of the term: CNN, YouTube, WSJ, AP News, NPR, CBS, BBC, and so on. There are also sources that can be used to verify that Trump is trying to challenge the results, but even those sources often use the term 'president-elect' for Biden. 74.131.76.216 (talk) 06:30, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • How about verifiability and truth? The term is codified in federal law as the apparent successful candidate for the office of President in an election. It directs the GSA to "ascertain" the apparent winner and provide transitional services to the President-elect.[9] See this term "apparent" when the Administrator of the GSA confirmed Barack Obama as president-elect the day after the election.[10] It has nothing to do with the Electoral College as suggested here. Also, as is clear from coverage of the current election, the GSA does not "declare" one the President-Elect, but merely ascertains it.[11] GreatCaesarsGhost 03:58, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The GSA ascertains this for purposes of the transition act alone. O3000 (talk) 17:01, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    My point is that the term has both casual vernacular use and codified legal use, both which support Biden being P-E today. There is a suggestion presented by the IP that the P-E is the winner of the EC vote, but this is not supported by common use OR law. GreatCaesarsGhost 19:37, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Why are we arguing about this specific section when the Wikipedia Page for Mike Pence has the section about "Vice President-Elect" Kamala Harris. If that can be put onto the page of Vice President Pence, why can't that be done for President Trump's page? User_talk:MyJunoBaldwin 17:28, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    References

    1. ^ Steinhauser, Paul (2020-11-07). "Biden wins presidency, Trump denied second term in White House, Fox News projects". Fox News. Retrieved 2020-11-08.

    All sources including Fox News have named Biden president-elect. I agree, he should be in the successor category to POTUS. AjayTO (talk) 06:47, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Seems this argument was had 4 years ago. If we want to be 100% accurate? then yes, only the electors themselves got elected on November 3. So far 279 Biden pledged electors & 217 Trump pledged electors, with 42 left to be decided. Do we wanna wait until December 14 for the Electoral College to do the actual voting for president & vice president? then Congress certifying it all on January 6? GoodDay (talk) 14:41, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I think at this point in time it is going to hard to deny reality. Joe Biden is the president-elect. Yes Trump has decided to challenge the results in courts but a huge majority of them have been thrown out/dismissed due to lack of evidence. There are zero signs that Trump is going to win re-election. None. Everybody at this point in time has accepted it. Even Wikipedia has. The President-elect page for instance has Joe Biden as president-elect, There is a page dedicated to Biden's inauguration,etc... . World Leaders, Politicians, and many others have already come to accept Biden as the 46th president. I don't see why we should wait for the next year when the result is painfully obvious. Phoenix X Maximus (talk) 20:11, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I agree we should include the elect because Biden is going to be the next president. Whether we like it or not. Pentock (talk) 03:08, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    "Succeeded by" field

    The "succeeded by" field should be removed from Trump's infobox, as he is still the U.S. President and has not yet been succeeded by anyone. DanJWilde (talk) 12:01, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Infoboxes almost always include prospective successors when they are known. If you rewind to 2016 I'm almost certain you'll find the same thing happened on Obama's article when the result was called by all major media outlets. - 2A01:4B00:86C4:B800:3D89:6477:D59:D57F (talk) 12:05, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Still does not make it right. I would rather wait till it is official.Slatersteven (talk) 12:10, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Barack Obama's infobox did not name Donald Trump as his successor until Trump was inaugurated. I agree with Slatersteven that the result is not yet official. I may be wrong but I feel as if I have read somewhere on here that successors should not be named in infoboxes until they formally succeed (although I accept that I may be wrong - this may just be for dates). I believe edits made to Shinzo Abe's infobox when Yoshihide Suga was named as his successor were reverted for this reason. DanJWilde (talk) 12:43, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I feel inclined to agree with the issue raised. Despite recent events, it's also quite clear in the infobox that Trump assumed office in 2017, not 2016 when he won the last election. It's not appropriate for the successor to already be noted until they are sworn in. -- Tytrox (talk) 14:59, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Barack Obama the day after the 2016 election. --Tataral (talk) 18:14, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Should act "Designate". As Trump still not concede the election.Marxistfounder (talk) 16:09, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Whether or not Trump ever concedes is irrelevant. But, I agree that he is still president and there has not yet been a succession. O3000 (talk) 16:14, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    He does not have to concede, he just has to be officially told "your fired".Slatersteven (talk) 16:20, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Duplicates #"President Elect". I still support removal of "Succeeded by" for now, per my comments there. The opposing arguments have merit but are not enough to change my stubborn mind. (I was advised to stand down by an editor who has earned my respect, and I was prepared to do so until I saw this thread). Likely but not certainly, the field will be in the infobox within a month or two regardless, so we're probably only debating what should happen before then. ―Mandruss  16:35, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    A grammar argument: The infobox item "succeeded by" is past tense, suggesting that the succession has already happened. Since it has not yet happened, IMO we should not put a name there until the president-elect has actually become the president. As for the current situation, the article is still locked, but we may be approaching consensus to remove Biden's name from the "succeeded by" box. That will be up to whatever uninvolved administrator evaluates this discussion. -- MelanieN (talk) 17:17, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    This is not necessarily accurate from a grammar point of view. In English past, tense can also designate a-temporal or defined situations. For example in the sentence 'cold air fronts are generally succeded by warm air fronts' etc... So past in this use, as in the 'succeded by' does not necessarily mean past in the sense of time.Eccekevin (talk) 23:03, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Is it just me, or do you keep changing your position as to this field and the use of caution more generally? The infobox item "succeeded by" is past tense Beat you by 19 hours.[12]Mandruss  17:33, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with you here. DanJWilde (talk) 17:37, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Has consensus not already been reached though? I am fairly new to Wikipedia's processes. DanJWilde (talk) 17:42, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Consensus is a fairly fuzzy concept, with opinions often varying. My opinion is that we are short of a consensus to remove, considering the strong opposition at #"President Elect". If the field had not been already added, we would be short of a consensus to add it, but that's how it goes sometimes. Actually I'm not clear how it got added without consensus, given #Page protection, but I'll resist the urge to wikilawyer this point. ―Mandruss  17:52, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree. Regardless of who anyone in the country thinks won the election, Trump is objectively still the president until at least January 20 and is able to direct and carry out any laws until then. We can put “succeeded by” at the time when he is actually succeeded, when (presumably) Biden is sworn in Anon0098 (talk) 17:59, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Biden's own article names him as president-elect but this article gives the impression the election is still in play. I think WP:BOLD action is in order. JJARichardson (talk) 21:49, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    No, it should not be removed. It is standard practice in Wikipedia, and has been for as long as infoboxes have been around, to include the elected successor as "succeeded by" with the appropriate qualification (e.g. "elect"). This is what we did for Trump and Obama the day after the 2016 election too. There is no reason to invent a new rule only applied to Biden. In the context of the infobox, "succeeded by" can mean both "[has been] succeeded by" or "[will be, is scheduled to be etc.] succeeeded by". The inclusion of the president-elect is useful information that readers are interested in. --Tataral (talk) 18:12, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Now removed pending consensus to include. ―Mandruss  18:29, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Template:Infobox officeholder: "The infobox for an incumbent officeholder should not mention an elected or designated successor, or the end date of the term, until the transition actually takes place." ―Mandruss  19:50, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Overall, this article gives equal weight to the competing narratives that Biden won the election and the election has not been settled. Regardless of what the infobox template says, listing the successor when known happens virtually every time. Omitting it now is a biased choice that does not reflect reliable sources. GreatCaesarsGhost 20:05, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    listing the successor when known happens virtually every time - Here are two alternative rebuttals, take your pick. (It's unfortunate that process is still so unclear after 19 years, but I don't run the place (also unfortunate).)
    • That argues that practice supersedes guidance, and that the guidance simply needs updating to reflect practice. That might work if the precedent discussions considered the guidance and rejected it, but that has not been shown. More likely, editors were simply not aware of the guidance, which is easily missed at the bottom of the doc's lead rather than being attached to the |successor= parameter description.
    • The template guidance represents a community consensus that cannot be overridden by local consensus, per WP:CONLEVEL. The precedents are simply wrong and carry no weight. ―Mandruss  20:15, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree, this article deviates significantly from reliable sources in its coverage of the election result (i.e. the fact that Biden won the election) and the fact that Biden is the president-elect; instead it treats the election result as unclear at best by giving equal weight (WP:FALSEBALANCE) to fringe "alternative facts", unlike all the world's reliable sources. Of course, this is nothing new, as I can attest to after four years of arguing on and off, mostly in vain, for a more mainstream coverage of Trump based on how he is usually covered by reliable sources. --Tataral (talk) 20:19, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    There is no reason to end discussion, but there is also no reason not to start a Survey section, and I will do so below. ―Mandruss  20:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Can we apply consensus to Mike Pence's page? I started the same argument over there regarding VP-elect Kamala Harris. -- Tytrox (talk) 23:50, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    @Tytrox: First, there is no resolution here yet. If there is a consensus here, it won't be binding there (I assume that's what you meant), although it could be presented as part of an argument there and editors there could agree or disagree. For better or worse, there is no policy or guideline that the articles must be consistent with each other. ―Mandruss  00:37, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Mandruss: That's fair. Just thought I'd table it anyway, just due to virtually same circumstances. -- Tytrox (talk) 00:44, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    @GorillaWarfare: Hi, GW! Sorry to bother you, but I'm hoping to get an interim ruling on this question of whether to put Biden in the infobox as successor, or not. We do not seem to have a consensus one way or the other by head count (I get five to include, seven to omit); the arguments on the omit side cite wikipedia guidelines, and on the include side, call it a common-sense argument; both are valid. But I wondered if you can give us a guideline on what the status of the article should be while the question is debated? I ask because people are continuing to add it and remove it. If we had an interim guideline we could put an invisible comment in the field. -- MelanieN (talk) 21:07, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    There's definitely no consensus at the moment. Whether that means we should omit the field pending consensus to add, or include it pending consensus to remove, I'm not sure, but I do agree we should pick one and add it to a hidden comment to try to end the warring. Perhaps other uninvolved admins watching this page have thoughts? GorillaWarfare (talk) 21:20, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    There is already a hidden comment, as of this edit. I'll be very interested to see the rationale for including hotly disputed content that not only lacks consensus but would go against the slight trend now extant. ―Mandruss  21:29, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    No objection to that hidden comment—per User:Awilley's comment just now below it seems he is going with "omit pending consensus to add", which makes sense to me. GorillaWarfare (talk) 21:32, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Survey: "Succeeded by" field

    Omit or include.

    • Omit per {{Infobox officeholder}} guidance:

      The infobox for an incumbent officeholder should not mention an elected or designated successor, or the end date of the term, until the transition actually takes place.

      Arguments that we should disregard that long-standing guidance are uncompelling. Editors arguing that the guidance needs updating to reflect common practice are welcome to try that and see if the community accepts it. If they are successful, I will support inclusion here. ―Mandruss  20:57, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include the successor is consistently listed across the project. There is a clear benefit to including it and a clear detriment to omitting it. We are not obligated to follow any rule that prevents us from improving the encyclopedia. It is inherently suspicious that we should seek to deviate from longstanding practice at this moment where such a choice endorses (intentionally or not) a bad faith argument about Biden's status as the successor . GreatCaesarsGhost 21:35, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit per Mandruss and the fact that if Biden were to (heaven forbid) pass away, resign, refuse to take office for family/health reasons, faithless electors make it so neither Trump or Biden have 270... there's tons of situations in which Biden will not succeed Trump. The successor field should not be filled out until the person has actually succeeded. It's not called "likely to succeed", it's called "successor", and to this day, Biden has not yet succeeded Trump. Discussion as to whether the field should be renamed or another field added of "expected successor" or similar may very well happen, but until that time, it is inaccurate to call Biden the successor of Trump until the oath of office is taken and Biden is officially president. What is/was done on other articles does not mean we must make the same mistakes again. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 22:19, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • I'm going to put some arguments here for/against WP:OTHERSTUFF since people seem to be arguing "but we've always done it when the election's called" - Obama's article didn't have him listed as the successor in late December because he hadn't been inaugurated yet, nor did George W Bush. It seems there's actually an ultimate precedent for not putting succeeded by until the inauguration. I'm unwilling to go back past 2008 because the prior would've been.. well, 2000, which is... not available. Long story short, for those arguing "precedent", I encourage you to actually go look because your "precedents" are actually not what you think they are. Any vote that argues per "precedent" or similar should be interpreted to omit - because precedent is to omit. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 00:43, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
        • It's been brought up a few times that the precedent seems to differ between presidents' articles and other offices in the US. I agree with some others that a wider (centralized possibly) RFC would be useful, but until that time, given that the template documentation has not been questioned in a long time and seems to be followed when it's brought up from what I can see, I feel we should honor that. I just figured I'd make clear that my view is the same even after it's been brought up that there is discrepancy between the history of presidents' articles and that of other offices, and add my support for if someone wants to make a wider RFC. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 19:12, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include because it needs to be added. And the bottom paragraph "In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, major news organizations have projected that Trump lost his bid for re-election." needs to be changed immediately, because it's completely misrepresenting what is already a decided result. The polls are already in.. I don't see why there are so many mods on here trying to delegitimize the result of the election on this article. Quite frankly I think more than one person on here should have their editing privileges removed, because they're clearly coordinating to delegitimize the electoral system. Saying that there are multiple ways in which Biden couldn't succeed Trump is NOT an argument to sow doubt that Biden won the election. That much has been decided based off the number of votes Biden got in Pen, AZ and Nevada. I don't see why it's so hard for people to comprehend basic math, but Biden IS the President Elect. --50.69.20.91 (talk) 22:23, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Word to the wise: Just state your argument and save the accusations and aspersions. A pattern of such will get you topic-banned or blocked. ―Mandruss  22:27, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      I'll note also that winning an election does not mean someone has succeeded another as an officeholder. I don't personally think the debate over "who won" is even relevant here. He has not succeeded Trump until he assumes office - period. The result also hasn't been decided yet - that happens when the electors officially vote. As happened in 2016, I think there's going to be at least a few faithless electors who vote for random people like Ted Cruz or something. Regardless, someone does not succeed another until they assume the position - not simply when they're offered the position, or when they accept the position, but when they assume the position. Again, a discussion over changing the field/display to reference "eventual successor" or something is an argument to be had in a different place. Trump is still the president for another ~2 months, after which time (assuming nothing changes) Biden will be added as the successor and an end date to Trump's term as president be added. I think you've conflated "the election" with "the office" here - nobody here in this section so far has disputed or "delegitimized" the outcome of the election - and that's not what this section is even about. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 22:59, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit per @Mandruss:'s argument. The officeholder infobox template is clear. -- Tytrox (talk) 23:45, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit As posted by User:Mandruss above, the infobox guidance for officeholders specifically forbids mentioning a successor, or an end date of their term. until the transition has actually happened. IMO this settles the question and there is nothing more to say. On the suggestion to include it in the infobox, we don't. We leave it out. If people want to discuss adding a sentence about the expected succession to the text, maybe that should become the subject of a separate discussion, but the infobox question appears to be settled per Wikipedia guidelines. -- MelanieN (talk) 23:47, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include. It's undisputed that he is the president-elect, as far as reliable sources are concerned; even George W. Bush has congratulated him as president-elect. We included Trump in Obama's article the day after the 2016 election and it's standard practice to include the successor-elect. Also, this article (Donald Trump) should be consistent with the information in other articles including the article on the president-elect, what we announced on the main page and the consensus among RS, and not push a fringe conspiracy theory that Biden didn't win the election. --Tataral (talk) 00:16, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • User:Tataral: As my information above shows, this was in dispute and the result was that it was not included in the infobox until the inauguration itself on that article. Whether it was added does not matter - whether it had consensus to be added to that article does. There are lots of things in any president's article that were added at some point or another - including BLP violations and death threats - and the use of the fact that they were added at one point while ignoring that they were later removed with consensus for not including them would be a very slippery slope. I agree with some others on this page that a larger centralized RFC - not limited to the USA - would be useful to clarify how Wikipedia should handle this - but until that time, the precedent is to not include until the succession happens. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 04:12, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit Trump has not been succeeded by Biden, he will be succeeded by him. The wording suggests that Trump is no longer president. In the last edit for Barack Obama's article before his term expired, there was no entry for "Succeeded by."[13] There is a discussion about this at Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 81#Should Trump be listed in the Infobox as Obama's successor? The same reasoning applies here. TFD (talk) 01:09, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include. For God's sake this is what we're discussing now? Instead of improving the article, we chose to lock it away from further improvements and arguing over negligible things like this? Just change the word "succeeded by" with "will be succeeded by" or "successor (presumptive)". I know this is democracy, some of you just want your voices heard (or cannot bear your candidate's loss, so you fell into bias-land), but the topic is just plain stupid. This is simple matter, please don't make it complicated. Per WP:IAR, I agree with GreatCaesarsGhost. We are not obligated to follow any rule that prevents us from improving the encyclopedia.—SquidHomme (talk) 08:51, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      This is simple matter, please don't make it complicated. I couldn't agree more. Follow guidelines unless you can make a case for a single-instance exception to them. If you disagree with a guideline or feel it no longer reflects common practice, seek to change it. There is nothing "complicated" about that, and it's the approach that best promotes site-wide consistency (which, I would argue, is a Good Thing for the encyclopedia). IAR is meant to allow exceptions to the PAGs, not to allow blanket disregard for one because we disagree with it. ―Mandruss  13:17, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit per Mandruss. Some states are still counting, there are recount challenges in several states, there are legal challenges all over the place (absurd and unlikely to succeed but still happening), the Electoral College doesn't vote for a few weeks and Republicans are actively campaigning for electors to ignore the popular vote, there's a sound theory that Trump will resign before transition in which case he'll be succeeded by Pence (as I understand it); there's a lot of dust to settle yet and it's far too soon for Wikipedia to say this is a sure thing. I'd personally be more confident adding succession after the Electoral College votes, as the situation is likely to be substantially more stable at that point. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 13:34, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Suggestion If the "Omit" votes prevail here you may want to put some hidden text in the infobox code asking people not to add Joe Biden yet and explaining why. Judging by the way things have gone in the past, I suspect the longer you try to enforce this the more difficult it will become. ~Awilley (talk) 17:38, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Any consensus here will probably warrant a #Current consensus item, and common practice at this article is to do as you say, including a pointer to the list item. Once done, enforcement is easy and 1RR-exempt. ―Mandruss  17:49, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit - Per Mandruss. This seems fairly cut and dry. PackMecEng (talk) 17:59, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include - We do this for all political offices, when a successor has been elected. WHY do it differently here & now? PS: I must confess, I came close to using profanity, when I noticed some of you trying to exclude the field. GoodDay (talk) 20:47, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Because as Mandruss points out, per {{Infobox officeholder}} The infobox for an incumbent officeholder should not mention an elected or designated successor, or the end date of the term, until the transition actually takes place. PackMecEng (talk) 20:52, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Look around you. There's hundreds of such articles which do include the designated successor. Just please, stop trying to make one article different from the rest. It's damn annoying. GoodDay (talk) 20:56, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Some examples might help but otherwise that is just WP:OTHERSTUFF. PackMecEng (talk) 21:03, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    We didn't do it when Bush or Obama were still in office.[14][15] Trump's designated successor incidentally is Vice President Mike Pence. Should Trump leave office before his term expires, Pence would become president. TFD (talk) 08:26, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include - Wikipedia should not give in to attacks, we should continue to follow WP:NOTTRUTH standards like we always do. Consistency removes bias from Wikipedia. In a time like this, Wikipedia is continuously being searched for inconsistencies. Gsquaredxc (talk) 22:22, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • Consistency would be not including the end of term nor successor until Trump leaves office upon Biden's inauguration on January 20, 2021. This is how it has been done for Trump (when he succeeded Obama) and Obama (when he succeeded Bush). If you are arguing for consistency, you are arguing against inclusion. Your bold not-vote does not align with your explanation. Please clarify. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 23:34, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment - note that @Mandruss: has just breached the 1RR restriction on this article. GoodDay (talk) 21:00, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      User:Mandruss and User:GoodDay, CUT IT OUT! Do you want to get the article locked again? Edit warring over this very issue was the reason it was reinstated last time. -- MelanieN (talk) 21:15, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      And GoodDay, you were in the wrong. As the kids say on the playground, you started it. You should not have added it while the issue was under discussion here. -- MelanieN (talk) 21:17, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      User talk:GoodDay#November 2020. ―Mandruss  21:19, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      (edit conflict)Note: I've partial-blocked GoodDay from this article. I didn't block Mandruss because when I removed the 1RR restriction earlier today I specifically said, "If I see [edit warring] going on I will start blocking people's accounts, starting with the editors who are reverting against the status quo ante, those reverting against emerging consensus on the talk page, and those who are not using helpful WP:Edit summaries that clearly describe what they're doing and why they're doing it." Mandruss AFAICT was reverting toward the status quo, towards the apparent consensus (the vote was 7-4 for omit at the time by my count), and was using good edit summaries. ~Awilley (talk) 21:24, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include—Pennsylvania if they don't do a recount will make Biden win with 279 votes. 290 if he wins Arizona. It's reasonable to say that and if faithless electors crash the election that will quickly be shut down. --HurricaneTracker495 (talk) 22:18, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit I thought this was a cut and dry include, but Mandruss and Ivanvector convince me otherwise. Wug·a·po·des 23:44, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit, as per the arguments above. It seems Trump has made this an issue for the first time. But we don't need to bend the rules because he is trying to.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:01, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include per GreatCaesarsGhost and GoodDay.--Darryl Kerrigan (talk) 00:31, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include, with extreme prejudice. In every Wikipedia article that mentions the 2020 election, it says that Biden won. Why? Because that's what all reliable sources say. Such sources also all say that Trump's allegations of fraud have no basis in fact. If they say that Biden is the president-elect, we have to say that, and thus, that he will succeed Trump. And, even if you think that the election isn't over or that Trump has a shot at appealing this, it would still be objectively inconsistent to hold out on mentioning that in the infobox, yet to state everywhere else on the site that Biden is pres-elect. In other words, if you, like the reliable sources we trust, think that the election is over, then the choice is clear. If you think that it's not over, then we have to reevaluate every article about 2020 on all of Wikipedia. I imagine no one is in favor of that, so we should include this. Cpotisch (talk) 07:18, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      This issue is not to do about the election results. If you read up a bit, it's about whether when to put up Biden's name as the Successor based on when he takes up Office. The infobox template clearly states that the successor should not be documented until the handover is done. -- Tytrox (talk) 07:11, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Then how come every single candidate who lost re-election this month has their successor listed in their infobox? The point of designating someone “-elect” is that they haven’t assumed the office yet. The consensus on hundreds of other pages seems to be that if the media projects a winner, then, in the eyes of a Wikipedia, that person is the [whatever office]-elect, even without the state certifying the result. Why would it be different here? Either every other page is wrong, or this one is. Cpotisch (talk) 07:26, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Then how come every single candidate who lost re-election this month has their successor listed in their infobox? Well, my best guess is that editors there were not aware of the template guidance. If they had been, I think most of them would have supported omission because they believe in generally following guidelines for the sake of site-wide consistency. That's been my experience. The guidance is oddly placed at the end of the template doc's lead, rather than as part of the |successor= parameter description, so it could be easily missed even by editors who know about template doc and how to view it.
      Either every other page is wrong, or this one is. Agree, and I'd say the former. As I've said previously, if any editor believes that a large number of errors resulting from editor unawareness (as opposed to fully informed decisions) means they are no longer errors, they are free to seek to change the template doc to reflect that. Until that is successful, my preference is to follow the doc, not the errors (and correcting the errors would not be an enormous task). ―Mandruss  09:30, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      With all due respect, Template documentation does not constitute a policy or guideline, and just because some random bit of text at the bottom of the doc says something that doesn't trump (pun unintended!) actual usage in articles. If all other successors for other posts have already been filled in, then this one should be too, for consistency. And also consistency with what I believe happened on Obama's page when Trump was elected.  — Amakuru (talk) 09:58, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      If template parameter usage guidance does not have the same status as a guideline, it serves exactly no purpose or function, represents a significant waste of editor time, and should not exist. In my experience editors who are aware of such guidance treat it as guidelines, understanding that it's the only way to coordinate site-wide consistency in template parameter usage (particularly infobox fields). If we feel site-wide consistency is a worthwhile goal, and I believe we do, the only way to get editors on the same page is to have a common, central place to go for that kind of information. Template doc is that place. Clearly, it would be unreasonable to expect editors to conduct a survey of all existing |successor= parameter usage to determine what they should do. In this case, it's even worse: an editor would have to conduct a survey of all |successor= parameter usage between elections and transitions, researching edit histories and old revisions. That would be utterly unworkable, and something only Wikipedia could come up with (or only en-wiki; I don't know whether, say, the Germans have more sense). ―Mandruss  10:15, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Question – how much precedent is there for this in articles on political officeholders? If there is already an uncontroversial (albeit technically incorrect) consensus within this field to use infoboxes this way, then it seems like a good case for WP:IAR (and updating the template guidance), as it's beneficial to the reader. I was going to vote for including, but I'm unsure from reading above exactly what the history is on US presidential articles – did this dispute originate over content (whether someone actually is the president-elect) or has there been past disagreement over using infoboxes this way? Jr8825Talk 11:49, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      My read of the discussion so far, and I've done no research of my own, is as follows. There is apparently wide precedent for inclusion for politicians in general, but precedent for omission for U.S. presidents, per this comment. There is no reason for U.S. presidents to be a special case, so I would say precedent favors inclusion overall.
      As I've said, I'll support inclusion if the template doc is successfully changed to allow inclusion. As I haven't said, I would be on the opposition side as to such a change, as I would prefer to be "technically" correct. I think the existing guidance makes more sense than the precedents. ―Mandruss  12:22, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      In this case, we should Omit the 'succeeded by' field here, for now, as there isn't a consensus on using it for US presidents, and we would need a broader discussion on whether it's appropriate to call a future officeholder a successor (and a consensus in favour) in order to overrule this. I do think this conversation needs to be had sooner rather than later, should we open a discussion at the village pump? A lack of consistency among politicians' infoboxes is not a good thing, especially as it could easily appear as if we're specifically avoiding calling Biden successor given the current controversy. Jr8825Talk 14:47, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      I think a neutrally-framed RfC is in order, but I would do it at Template talk:Infobox officeholder and advertise it in various other talk venues including WP:VPP, WP:VPR, and Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Politics. It will probably run for at least 30 days, and then might have to wait for weeks for an uninvolved closer, so this discussion should not wait for that outcome. If that outcome differs from this outcome, this article can be changed at that time with little discussion necessary. ―Mandruss  15:03, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      I've added a pre-RfC subsection below. ―Mandruss  16:19, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit obviously. Frankly I'm surprised there are editors who want to jump the gun on this. To my mind, this is something that should happen at or after the moment of succession, which is still 70-odd days away. It is important to understand that this field has nothing to do with the results of the election. It should not be predictive or anticipatory, because like the rest of the article it is supposed to reflect what has happened. -- Scjessey (talk) 14:26, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include obviously. We know who Trump's successor will be, and we can and should include (elect) or similar to indicate that this is provisional at the moment. There is no reason why US presidents should be an exception to the widely-used convention in this respect, and it looks downright odd to be omitting the successor from the infobox when it's already known who it will be.  — Amakuru (talk) 16:26, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • Because Wikipedia isn't meant to be predicting the future. We all think Biden will be President, but we don't know for sure because something could happen in the 70-odd days between now and the inauguration. BLPs are supposed to be written from the historical perspective in the past tense. There's no reason why this cannot wait until January 20. This is how it should be on all BLPs. -- Scjessey (talk) 17:53, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include obviously. I think we need to take into account that the page for Vice President Mike Pence has the "succeeded by" field on the page with mention of Vice President-Elect Kamala Harris. If that page can have the "succeeded by" field, what is there to argue that President Trump's page cannot have such a field. That being said, I understand concern about a possible recount maybe changing the electoral map, but at this point it is very unlikely that any lawsuits would change such a result. I hope this statement can be understood. MyJunoBaldwin (talk) 18:21, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      The Pence article is not set in stone. One could argue with equal strength that Pence should be consistent with Trump, once we have a resolution here. Has there been anything approaching this amount of discussion participation about this at Pence? If not, how could Pence possibly carry more weight? ―Mandruss  18:32, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Here is the link to the "Pence" talk page discussion about this specific issue you're asking about Talk:Mike Pence#Remove "Succeeded by" information based on VP-elect Kamala Harris. It is not as robust (or, frankly, as "bigly") as this page's discussion. But someone did use the example of the Obama-Trump discussion, which I believe is linked in this page as well. MyJunoBaldwin (talk) 18:37, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Right, that discussion is a tiny fraction of this one, involves far fewer editors, and represents far less scrutiny of the question. It would make no sense for that to govern the content at this article, or even influence it. ―Mandruss  18:53, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include obviously. It is a disservice to the reader not to include this obvious fact. Also 1) the infobox guidlines are not laws, and as all guidelines they need to meet the moment 2) the Barack Obama and Donald Trump precedent exists and should be followed. The election result was clear then and it is now. Eccekevin (talk) 22:57, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment It is standard practice to do this, as you can see by pretty much all pages of House and Senate members, regardless of the guidlines. I think another option would be to add (elect) or (designate) in brackets to add clarity, for example as it is on Mark Meadows page in reference to Madison CawthornEccekevin (talk) 02:07, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment - The RfC is now open at: Template talk:Infobox officeholder#RfC: Interim use of successor=. Please participate there. This discussion should not wait for that outcome, and this article can be changed with no fuss if that outcome is different. ―Mandruss  13:53, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit in this instance. This follows the precedent set election Obama's 2008 election and Trump's 2016 election. I would note that in the U.S., the transition between presidents takes considerably longer than in other countries, so presidents-elect should be handled differently than their counterparts elsewhere. -- Calidum 15:09, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Omit While Biden will become President on January 20, 2021, the succeeded by section should not be added now per precedent and to avoid confusion. Also WP:CRYSTAL. --Enos733 (talk) 17:34, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include: we should must follow historical precedent, including but not limited to AP calling elections since 1848, rather than entertain a “flood the zone with shit” disinformation effort that was relentlessly telegraphed for many months by a president and his surrogates/supporters who have abundantly demonstrated their fondness for conspiracy theories and what can be charitably called preposterous falsehoods. We’re not here to assuage anyone’s hurt feelings. soibangla (talk) 19:22, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • @Soibangla: Historical precedent is that one is not succeeded until their successor takes office. Wikipedia precedent is the same (as evidenced multiple times in this discussion). Thus, as I've said before, your not-vote is actually against inclusion of it until noon EST on January 20, 2021. I encourage you to either revisit your comment and provide a rationale that actually supports your bolded not-vote or reconsider it altogether, as your comment right now appears attempting to right great wrongs while ignoring Wikipedia guidelines and precedent. Regards -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 23:01, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      • That's a pretty clear WP:RGW kind of argument. Wikipedia should report on politics and government, not get involved in them, no matter how righteous the goal. Anyway, no one is suggesting the article should deny Biden has been declared president-elect – that can and probably should be done in prose – the question is how we should use a context-free infobox field. So I'll call straw man on that. ―Mandruss  23:47, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
        • My position has nothing to do with RGW or a strawman soibangla (talk) 19:09, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Include: I always find it useful so you can easily click to whoever is next in line. As far as I know this has always been done, why should it be different for Joe Biden? Johndavies837 (talk) 05:16, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      @Johndavies837: Your premise is incorrect, and your question has already received several answers. Feel free to read existing discussion. Or, you can just move on and your !vote will be given equal weight anyway. ―Mandruss  05:25, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Pre-RfC: "Succeeded by" field

    The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


    Here's a proposed RfC for Template talk:Infobox officeholder, discussed above. Suggestions for improvement welcome. As I commented above, this article's discussion should not wait for the outcome of the RfC, and the article can be changed with no fuss if the RfC outcome is different. ―Mandruss  03:30, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    (rfc|bio|pol)

    This RfC is about the |successor= parameter of {{infobox officeholder}}. When present, this field displays as Succeeded by in the infobox. When an incumbent loses re-election, should the parameter be filled in immediately or wait until the successor takes office? 16:18, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

    BACKGROUND
    1. The infobox template doc currently says: "The infobox for an incumbent officeholder should not mention an elected or designated successor, or the end date of the term, until the transition actually takes place."
    2. There is apparently quite a bit of precedent for filling in the parameter immediately, adding "(elect)" following the successor's name. The "(elect)" is then removed when the transition takes place.
    3. The template doc guidance is oddly placed at the end of the doc's lead, rather than in the |successor= parameter description, so it would be easy to miss. It is unknown whether editors creating the precedents were aware of its existence, or whether such awareness would have affected their edits.
    4. In a discussion at Talk:Donald Trump, some of the disagreement centers around the interpretation of the phrase Succeeded by, some editors saying it's past tense and should be treated as such, others saying it can mean "to be succeeded by" when "(elect)" is shown.
    5. The goal of this RfC is to establish a community consensus for site-wide consistency in these situations, one way or the other. ―Mandruss  16:18, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

    Suggestion - Perhaps one of the possible options for an RfC could be to add a parameter to the infobox for "elected successor" or "to be succeeded by"? Jr8825Talk 16:36, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Hmmm. My take is that "(elect)" adequately accomplishes the same thing, and readers could figure it out without a lot of effort. Your suggestion would add complication to the RfC, possibly reducing the chances of reaching a consensus. If the new parameter was accepted, it would add complexity to the template and its doc – for marginal benefit in my opinion. If somebody wanted to propose such a thing in the RfC discussion, they would be free to do so even if I would oppose; I rarely see RfCs that stick to the options initially presented. ―Mandruss  16:46, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Fair enough, was just toying with ideas and a more straightforward RfC sounds good. Jr8825Talk 16:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Note: past tense in English does not always refer to a past situation. Take this example: 'in case of the death of the President, he is succeeded by the Vice-President'. This does not indicate a situation in the past but rather it has a determinative function in an a-temporal way. Additionally, including it now simply follows precedent, since the day after the election this is what Barack Obama's page looked like. There is no meaningful or reliable evidence that the result of the election is in question, hence this is no different than 2016.Eccekevin (talk) 23:08, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Eccekevin: I'm confused by this, as my understanding, based on the comments above by Berchanhimez and Mandruss, was that it was ultimately decided to exclude it from the Obama article until Trump's inauguration – someone's got it wrong. If nobody is able to scour through the history to confirm who is right, I'll do so myself tomorrow. It does matter as my !vote to omit above is based on the assumption that there is no current consensus for including the successor on US presidential articles. Jr8825Talk 23:16, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Eccekevin, you may have a viable point there (tense of "succeeded"), and that could be part of an argument in the RfC discussion. But this section is about how to frame the RfC, and it currently just refers to what editors have said in this discussion. It doesn't take a position on that, so I don't see a need to change that part of it. Do you disagree? ―Mandruss  23:53, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't disagree, but my point was a linguistic one: a tense is a category that describes the grammatical aspect. In the English language, the past tense does not necessarily indicate that an action has occurred in the past. I just want to make sure that the language in the RfC isn't confusing and it grammatically accurate.Eccekevin (talk) 23:58, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Ok, help me out here. How would you improve the RfC framing, specifically? ―Mandruss  00:01, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    In agreement with such an RFC. My major concern is consistency across these article infoboxes, concerning 'lame-duck' periods. GoodDay (talk) 22:05, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks. I'll probably start the RfC on Friday unless there is further discussion about improvements. ―Mandruss  22:09, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Not sure if it matter, but by digging in the template history, the user that added that line in Template talk:Infobox officeholder (and much of the template itself) is Philip Stevens. Eccekevin (talk) 02:13, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    Signature achievements per lead and body

    It is reported by several sources today that Biden plans to reverse many of Trump's signature policy actions sometime before dinner on 1/21. We should consider how this will be handled in the article and its presentation of Trump's achievements and legacy. See, e.g. Biden plans immediate flurry of executive orders to reverse Trump policies. Also Biden Could Roll Back Trump Agenda With Blitz of Executive Actions SPECIFICO talk 18:28, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    It would only be appropriate once said reversals happen. Right now it's only speculation, and nothing is certain. JackFromReedsburg (talk | contribs) 20:19, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    We also need to be careful to avoid original reporting. -- Tytrox (talk) 02:58, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, major news organizations have projected that Trump lost his bid for re-election.

    This section desperately needs a revision, because it's blatantly trying to undermine the result of the election. The media didn't project anything - they used the data that was given to them by the states, which determined based on the counted ballots that Biden won Pennsylvania, Arizona, Nevada and Georgia - thus winning him the election. I don't know if basic math is beyond some people with the right to edit this article, or if you have an agenda that would imply an intent to misinform readers in the article - but this is nothing if not a misrepresentation of facts. --50.69.20.91 (talk) 22:31, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I agree. I think that one of these options would be OK.
    • Option A - In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, major news organizations have projected that Trump was defeated by former vice president Joe Biden.
    • Option B - In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, major news organizations have projected that Trump lost his bid for re-election to former vice president Joe Biden.
    I personally prefer Option A, but if you have more ideas, they are always welcome. Interstellarity (talk) 22:34, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Not what I was suggesting at all. It needs to be stated clearly and definitively that Trump lost the election, because he did. The states in which Biden won have a margin of difference based on the counted ballots that make it very clear that Biden won the election. To imply at all that it was "news outlets" that declared Biden the winner is again, misrepresenting the facts.

    Option A2 - In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, Trump lost his bid for re-election to former vice president Joe Biden.
    Option B2 - In the 2020 U.S. presidential election, Trump was defeated by former vice president Joe Biden.

    Those are the only clear options. It's a small change but it's a needed one, especially right now when there are still parties trying to undermine the result of an election that - has been decided, sans a few states that haven't finished voting but wouldn't give Trump the electoral votes needed to win. --50.69.20.91 (talk) 22:39, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Apologies, but the IP editor is mistaken. Media outlets are projecting Biden as the winner, because at present, per the rules of a US election (as I have seen on the Guardian) he is not technically the winner until counts are completed and the Electoral College makes its votes. Remember, per the US democractic process, the popular votes does not dictate the winner - it dictates how the Electoral College in each state votes: if Democrats win the state, that college votes for their candidate, and vice versa. There are exceptions - both Nebraska and Maine have given a vote to the opposing candidate that didn't win that state. Let me clarify more with this extract from the Guardian's current live blog:

    "Although Democratic nominee Joe Biden is now president-elect Joe Biden, there are still quite a few steps left in the US electoral process. He is projected to win, but a few more things have to take place before it becomes official. Here’s what happens now, and when it has to be done by.

    When American citizens vote for a presidential candidate, they really are voting for electors in their state. Those electors in most cases are committed to support the voters’ candidate of choice. The number of electors is equal to the number of electoral votes held by each state.

    8 December: this is the deadline for resolving election disputes at the state level. All state recounts and court contests over presidential election results are to be completed by this date.

    14 December: electors vote by paper ballot in their respective state capitols and also in the District of Columbia, which while it is the seat of the US government, is not actually a state. Thirty-three states and DC have laws or party regulations requiring electors to vote the same way the popular vote goes in the state. In some states, electors can even be replaced or subjected to penalties if they do not toe the line. An elector who doesn’t vote according to who won the popular vote is known as a “faithless elector”. The votes for president and vice-president are counted and the electors sign six “certificates of the vote”. The certificates, along with other official papers, are sent by registered mail to various officials, including the president of the Senate.

    23 December: the certificates must be delivered to the designated officials.

    6 January 2021: the House and Senate hold a joint session to count the electoral votes. If one ticket has received 270 or more electoral votes, the president of the Senate, currently vice-president Mike Pence, announces the results."

    Thus the line "Biden is projected to win" or "Trump is projected to lose" is currently correct, in terms of the stage the election process is in. GUtt01 (talk) 22:51, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I'm not sure how the indenting is going in this thread so sorry for my likely violation of MOS:LISTGAP here, please anyone feel free to fix. Having said that, Option B1 - i.e. "projected" and "lost his bid". Elections are not contests in which one person is "battling" another. Biden did not "defeat" Trump - while that's a common way of referring to it, what happened is Trump lost the election. The American citizens are the ones who voted and their actions are what caused Trump's loss - not any direct action of Biden. Some may argue that it's semantics, and sure, it is - but this entire section is arguing the semantics of whether "lost his bid to" or "was defeated by" is better/more accurate - and "lost his bid for reelection" is more accurate. It's also clearer to people who don't speak English as a first language - where the word "defeated" suggests a personal contest, whereas "lost his bid for reelection to" does not. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 23:02, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    At this time, after multiple further projections and multiple resolutions to lawsuits, A2/B2 are better, and I prefer B2 without the "defeated" word, per my struck rationale above. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 22:58, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Oppose The media does not determine who wins or loses; the electoral college decides. Thus the current wording is more correcting than declaring he objectively won or lost. Saying he lost would be "misrepresenting" as you claim Anon0098 (talk) 23:19, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    You're right, the electoral college does decide. And did. It's literally at the point where there is no conceivable way Trump could win because the ballots are pretty much all counted in the states that put Biden over the 270 threshold, thus Biden has been declared the president elect. The media didn't declare or decide anything - the electoral college did. --50.69.20.91 (talk) 23:24, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    What are you talking about? They vote on Dec. 14 Anon0098 (talk) 23:44, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Your interpretation of what "won the election" refers to is interesting but irrelevant; we are required to go by what the sources say, and they are unanimous in treating the election of the electoral college the event that decides the election. If you think they are incorrect to do so, you should write letters to them requesting retractions or corrections, but until they do so we have to reflect their coverage, which essentially unanimously states that Trump lost on Nov 3rd when his electors were defeated (even if it took a while for that fact to become clear.) --Aquillion (talk) 10:29, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Did we wait to list Trump as Obama's successor? No. He was declared the winner unanimously by virtually every editor on here, and the article reflects such. Go back to the revision history and you can see for yourself. The rules don't suddenly chance because you don't like the result this time. This is how every president-elect has been treated on this site since it's conception - we edit accordingly, with the information we have. --50.69.20.91 (talk) 23:59, 8 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    The wording "major news organizations have projected" is unfortunate because it makes the election result seem more uncertain than reliable sources have reported. We should simply state that he lost the election to Biden because that is what reliable sources state. Everyone from Boris Johnson to George W. Bush have now congratulated president-elect Biden, and it's a fringe conspiracy theory, nothing more, that Biden isn't president-elect. --Tataral (talk) 00:22, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Tataral Agreed. | MK17b | (talk) 00:34, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    There is no proposal to say that Biden isn't president-elect, so that's a straw man. The proposal, or one of them, is to avoid saying outright, until it's official, that Trump lost. I disagree with your assessment of what that omission would imply. I hear the RS argument loud and clear, but verifiability does not guarantee inclusion per policy. And don't make me invoke WP:IAR, since I hate doing that. ―Mandruss  00:52, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    It doesn't matter whether it was done improperly before. That's not an excuse to do that again. And no, if you look at the history of Barack Obama's article you'll find that even multiple days after the election was called it wasn't present in the infobox. So in fact, if you want to argue "we did it before", we actually didn't. And you'll note that even on December 30, 2016, Trump was still not listed as the successor. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 00:39, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:OTHERSTUFF applies to deletion discussions, not article content; we are in fact supposed to make some effort to follow precedent when it comes to decisions like this - otherwise we run afoul of WP:DUE by eg. placing undue emphasis on one thing over another. Also, the successor listing isn't what's being discussed here; the appropriate comparison is when HRC's article was updated to indicate she had lost, which was almost immediately; this is the way we have handled every single previous election (see my collection of links below.) More generally, we are required to reflect what the sources say, and they are straightforwardly saying that Trump was lost, not presenting it as a matter of debatable opinion or a mere inference. Turning a statement of fact into "the news says..." is an inappropriate way to introduce WP:NPOV violations by casting doubt on factual statements. --Aquillion (talk) 10:24, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    That Trump's legal maneuvering has exactly zero chance of success is opinion, not fact – particularly for people who know little to nothing about (1) what the maneuvers will be, and (2) the relevant law. It is within policy for us to choose to use unqualified wiki voice here, and it's also within policy for us to choose to be accurate about fact, provided we remain verifiable. You are overstating your case, methinks, by saying the latter choice would be a clear policy violation. ―Mandruss  12:51, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Stylistic points: I don't think we should use the word "election" or some form of it more than once in the same sentence. Secondly, saying that Trump "lost his bid for re-election to" Biden makes it sound like Biden was "re-elected" in his place. Trump failed in his bid. Trump lost to Biden. He didn't lose his bid to Biden. I know what is meant but it sounds strange.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:40, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Just thought I'd add that if you look at the discussion at Talk:President-elect of the United States, you'll see this exact debate about when you can call some a President-elect (whether you have to wait for the electoral college) happened in 2008 and 2016. Seems like a perennial issue that maybe we should launch an RfC and decide before 2024. Liz Read! Talk! 02:18, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Weak option B2 - to me it seems strange to avoid saying that Trump has lost the election. For example, the Joe Biden article's lead already says "Having defeated incumbent Donald Trump in the 2020 United States presidential election, he will be inaugurated as the 46th president on January 20, 2021. Are there any RS even disputing the fact that Trump has lost the election? However, I think the suggestion above is a better alternative. Jr8825Talk 07:49, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Trump has lost reelection, as clearly stated in the relevant article. Massaging this fact may placate his followers, but doing so is not encyclopedic as it muddies the waters for the wider readership. 2A0C:5BC0:40:107B:6852:6195:FDF4:DD65 (talk) 09:39, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • A2 or, failing that, B2, since the reliable sources are unanimous at this point (and not just the news; all reputable sources discussing the election are stating it.) Note that back in 2016 his article was updated to declare him president-elect in the article voice by the end of the day of the election, as soon as sources started widely referring to him as such; Hillary Clinton's article was likewise updated within a day of the election to indicate she had been defeated, as was Mitt Romney's, John McCain's, and John Kerry's - that is to say that every single US Presidential election that has ended while Wikipedia was in operation was handled that way. Strenuous opposition to options A or B because they plainly violate WP:NPOV by reporting a widely-covered fact as if it were a mere attributed opinion. --Aquillion (talk) 10:24, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support A2 or B2 which are statements of fact based on reliable sources. We are doing a serious disservice to readers and objectivity as long as the article remains unamended. JJARichardson (talk) 15:42, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Have any news organisation denies Donny lost?Slatersteven (talk) 12:54, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • A. Most accurate, verifiable, within the discretion afforded us by policy. ―Mandruss  13:48, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • A2 (but with "re-election" unhyphenated). This statement is the most accurate and unambiguous and follows historical precedent set on Wikipedia. 2A0C:5BC0:40:107B:49B1:9C8E:FC66:DEA6 (talk) 10:43, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • A2 or B2. All reliable sources unanimously agree on the result of the election. On the Charles Darwin page we don't say 'all sources concur that he was born in 1809'; we say 'he was born in 1809'. If there is unanimous agreement among all reliable sources, Wikipedia presents the facts as they are. When the Electors convene, this can be rephrased.Eccekevin (talk) 22:55, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I understand the need to remain neutral with regard to withholding the declaration that Trump lost the election until it has been verified by the official electoral college votes in December. Also, I appreciate that it is not being denied by those in charge that Biden is in fact the president-elect. However, in this case, choosing this neutrality helps spread misinformation because making this issue a debate undermines democracy. This is because it gaslights people into thinking that the election was stolen, and that Biden did not win. The truth is that Biden won the election, and this is not my opinion. It is a fact, verified by multiple media outlets, as well as world leaders who have recognized Biden as the next president, including Boris Johnson, a right-wing leader resembling Trump himself. Additionally, I see a double standard compared to 2016, when Wikipedia did not wait until the electors officially cast their votes in December to declare that Hillary Clinton lost and that Trump would succeed Obama as the next president.

    Therefore, those in charge here need to understand that waiting until the electors have cast their votes to declare Biden the winner, saying that the media projects Biden will win, as opposed to saying that he won, and other forms of neutrality with regard to this issue are just as complicit in spreading misinformation and undermining democracy as overtly stating that Biden is not the next president.

    Again, I understand why neutrality is important. It stops the spread of misinformation and helps weed out bias. Nevertheless, there are exceptions to every rule, and this is one of them, for in this case, being neutral helps spread misinformation and allows bias that favors Trump’s claims that the election was stolen to persist. I therefore politely implore those in charge here to reconsider their neutral stance in this instance. I’m looking at you, Mandruss. Ascarboro97 (talk) 18:32, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I almost missed your reference to me, at the end of that long comment without a ping. I'll stand by my !vote, but worry not. Clearly, the prevailing sentiment is to use Wikipedia as a tool to help stop Trump's obstructive belligerence and pave the way for a smooth transition for the sake of the country. I understand people's desire to do that, but in my opinion it is not an appropriate use of an encyclopedia that should be dispassionate and apolitical. We should report about politics, not create content to help achieve desirable outcomes. ―Mandruss  14:37, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • A2 or B2. We must match the overwhelming consensus of reliable sources; the encyclopedia is supposed to reflect reality as the sources report it. Neutralitytalk 14:46, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Lede addition

    Trump is the first US president to (1) lose the popular vote (twice), (2) be impeached AND (3) fail to win reelection. Please add this noteworthy accomplishment to the lede. 2A0C:5BC0:40:107B:6852:6195:FDF4:DD65 (talk) 09:18, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Meh. Sounds like piling on. O3000 (talk) 14:53, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I would agree, the lead is a summery of the article, not a newspaper style leader.Slatersteven (talk) 14:55, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Do you mean all 3 combined? Or seperately? Please note all those things have happened before. --67.85.37.186 (talk) 01:51, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Combined, hence "AND." 2A0C:5BC0:40:107B:49B1:9C8E:FC66:DEA6 (talk) 10:40, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    My mom used to be a Boolean operator. ;) ―Mandruss  19:47, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Due to the laws of probability, there are many expressions of the form X AND Y AND Z that are uniquely true about Trump. For example, Trump is the first US president who (1) is male AND (2) plays golf AND (3) is named Donald. Unless commentators make a big deal about this, we shouldn't.--Jack Upland (talk) 21:33, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Agree. This is similar to stating that a mass shooting event was the most deadly mass shooting event since Columbine in a high school involving multiple shooters who were students there and who committed suicide before they could be apprehended. That's no exaggeration; I've seen things just like that inserted into articles several times, by editors who don't understand that Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information. That's policy, by the way. A few bored reporters like to report such things as if they are baseball statistics, and some editors see it and are unable to evaluate its usefulness to an encyclopedia. ―Mandruss  16:41, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Temporary suspension of WP:1RR rule

    In order to give regular editors the leeway they need to deal with an increase in unhelpful "drive-by" edits, I am temporarily suspending the one-revert rule that has been on this article. The "24-hour BRD" rule listed in the Discretionary Sanctions template at the top of this page still applies. Here's what this means in practice:

    • Every editor may now make up to 3 reverts per day per WP:3RR. BUT...
    • You may not make the same edit or revert more than once per day (per the BRD rule) and after your first time making that edit or revert, you must discuss it on the talk page and wait 24 hours before attempting that edit again.

    Put another way, reverts are linked to content. You can revert up to 3 different edits per day, but you can't add or remove the same content more than once per day.

    Again, the purpose of this is to allow regular/experienced/content editors to deal with legitimately unhelpful or POV edits. It's not to give people more leeway in edit warring over content disputes that are under discussion or to engage in "tag-team edit warring" where editors take turns reverting the same content over and over. If I see that going on I will start blocking people's accounts, starting with the editors who are reverting against the status quo ante, those reverting against emerging consensus on the talk page, and those who are not using helpful WP:Edit summaries that clearly describe what they're doing and why they're doing it. ~Awilley (talk) 17:28, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Pretty much all of the reverts you're exempting are already exempt per WP:3RRNO anyway as either BLP issues or overt vandalism. Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 19:19, 9 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Section under "2020 presidential campaign" contains incorrect date

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    This line: "On election night, November 5, with the result unclear, Trump declared victory.[843] On November 7, most major news outlets projected Biden as the winner.[844] In response, Trump said, "this election is far from over". He alleged election fraud without providing evidence and said he would continue to launch legal challenges in key states." contains incorrect information. Election night was November 3rd, 2020. Request that the date be updated to accurately reflect the correct timeframe. 68.202.210.41 (talk) 13:18, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Fixed. Thanks. Bdushaw (talk) 13:37, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    With regard to the sentence which was incorrect (sorry), I think we should mention election day. Otherwise the narrative is unclear and strange. Something like "On November 4, the day after election day, with the results still unclear, Trump declared victory. However, I don't know what the correct American terminology for election day is.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:58, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    As an American, I would like to say that the correct American terminology for election day is Election Day (usually capitalized, if I'm not mistaken). ―Mandruss  01:05, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    This was my fault. I screwed up, sorry. starship.paint (talk) 11:02, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I've already claimed responsibility. However, Trump claimed victory in the early morning, November 4. Saying that it was the day after Election Day would be misleading, because it was actually on election night. Leaving this out will make it confusing in the future, but I'm not sure how to word this elegantly.--Jack Upland (talk) 19:24, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Jack Upland: Possible wordsmithing improvement. Elegant? Probably not.
    Current:

    On Election Day, November 3, the results were unclear, but nevertheless, early on November 4, Trump declared victory

    Suggested:

    The election was held on November 3. The following morning, with the election results unclear due to slower ballot counting in several states, Trump declared victory, saying "Frankly, we did win."

    Mandruss  23:10, 12 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Trump declared victory at 2 am. Saying that it was the "following morning" seems misleading to me. Basically he made the call on election night.--Jack Upland (talk) 20:52, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Jack Upland: That distinction is really important in a Trump biography? It seems to me the essential point is that results were unclear, not the difference between 2am and 9am. But ok.

    The election was held on November 3. At 2:00 the following morning, with the election results unclear due to slower ballot counting in several states, Trump declared victory, saying "Frankly, we did win."

    Mandruss  00:02, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't think that it's biographically important that it was 2 am. I think it's important that it was on election night, a fact that several sources have emphasised. To me, the "following morning" suggests there was a passage of time between election night and Trump's claim, during which presumably people went to bed. The fact is, when the count halted for the night, Trump called a press coverage and made those comments. There was no gap in time. Trump's reaction was immediate. Part of the problem is that "night" and "morning" are ambiguous. Maybe this doesn't matter, but I think it has potential to cause confusion in the future. I'm also not sure about the "slower ballot counting". Isn't it also true that the count in several states is very close?--Jack Upland (talk) 00:48, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Jack Upland: "At 2:00 the following morning" couldn't be much more unambiguous or more precise (I suppose we could say "At 2:02:34 the following morning"). The morning following November 3 is November 4, that's how clocks work, and people learn at about age 6 that 2:00 in the morning is two hours after midnight (like, in the the middle of the night, when most folks were sleeping). What's confusing?
    If some states were still uncalled after the others had been called, that seems "slower" by definition. Or close enough for our purposes here.
    As for your last sentence, I don't know how that applies to this particular sentence. ―Mandruss  01:10, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Ok, I see your point, I think. Some of the states were uncalled because they were very close, not because not enough ballots had been counted. So I can dispense with that part (returning us closer to the status quo).

    The election was held on November 3. At 2:00 the following morning, with the election results unclear, Trump declared victory, saying "Frankly, we did win."

    Mandruss  01:42, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Both of us agree that saying that it was 2 am is unnecessary. However, if you say that it was 2 am the following morning, that is unambiguous. However, this was a quest for elegance. Perhaps that quest was in vain...--Jack Upland (talk) 03:35, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    You said, Saying that it was the "following morning" seems misleading to me. I addressed that concern by adding the time-of-day, which removed the ambiguity. Now you're saying the time-of-day is unnecessary. As for your quest for an undefined and unexplained "elegance", we are not writing literature here. All we need is to follow the usual goals of good non-fiction writing, such as correct grammar, clarity, flow, avoidance of repetitiveness and redundancy, and so forth, and I don't think the status quo language does that very well at all. That "but nevertheless" seems particularly grating to my ear. I'm at a loss to understand what would satisfy you at this point, so I'm going ahead with a BOLD edit. ―Mandruss  03:51, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't know, maybe "morning" implies "at or after dawn, but before noon" where you live, and that's why "the following morning" seemed misleading to you. Where I live, it might mean that, or it might mean "between midnight and noon", depending on the context, so I don't see it as a problem. As I see it, my edit leaves no room for misunderstanding, even where you live. ―Mandruss  04:37, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Consensus #48

    Bullet #48 does not belong under "current consensus," and the comment commanding users not to edit the Covid paragraph is inappropriate. The bullet suggests only that there is consensus for a paragraph on Trump's handling of the pandemic, not specific wording, and it specifically notes that prior discussions did not reach consensus on wording.

    Instead, the term "status quo" is used, which does not reflect any policy disallowing further changes. This is a rather ham-handed effort to imply there is consensus where there is none and order users not to make changes to material without any grounding in policy or prior discussion. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 06:39, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Background: Talk:Donald Trump/Archive 125#Consensus 48 question. ―Mandruss  06:54, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Oh boy. This one. So my primitive understanding is that CC#48 is a consensus for keeping the COVID response in the lead, and, while there's no consensus on the precise text, depending on who you ask, it can be interpreted as meaning there's a consensus on keeping that status-quo text until a consensus is found on an alternative. And of course our policy on this is clear as mud. At the most recent RfC, the closer's exact comment was "focus on identifying and improving specific problems with the wording through a combination of editing and talkpage discussion, making a concerted effort to understand and mitigate the objections of their fellow editors".
    As it happens, I think "reacted slowly" is inherently judgemental language, so shouldn't be stated in wikivoice per WP:YESPOV. I tried to make this change yesterday but was reverted. The problem is that if the statement is an "uncontested and uncontroversial factual assertion" among RS, then NPOV does leave wriggle room for stating analytical assertions in wikivoice... so it's not entirely clear-cut. I think the wording would be better changed, but a case can be made that it's technically supportable by our policies.
    • My suggestion would be: "In response to the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump initially downplayed the threat to public health, ignored or contradicted recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing." I think the rest of the sentence consists of supported facts and can be stated in wikivoice once the "reacted slowly" bit is changed. I have a rough RfC draft waiting in the wings, which I was considering starting a preliminary conversation on, but as it happens Wikieditor19920 beat me to it. Jr8825Talk 07:56, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Jr8825: Actually, WP:NOCON is pretty crystal clear. Where wording cannot be agreed upon, even if it is simply a modification, typically the entire segment is left out. There is no reference to "status quo" in WP:NOCON.
    @Mandruss: Provided a link to a discussion (that I participated in) where the was continued disagreement and no resolution. And yet, somehow this point has wormed its way into the list of consensus bullets, despite clearly lacking consensus, under this mystical and inaccurate notion of "status quo."
    I agree that the criticisms of Trump's handling of Covid were widespread, but I would venture to say they are not so undisputed and uncontroversial, even if it occurred along partisan fault lines. Given the lack of consensus, we should be resolving doubts in favor of the cautious route, which means providing attribution. Nothing about this waters down or counteracts the meaning if the text. I don't know how this ended up in the list of content with consensus, but it is ridiculous that an editor thought it appropriate to a) include it despite consensus so clearly not being apparent and b) insert a comment into the article ordering editors not to make changes when the text was perfectly subject to challenge. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 08:29, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    NOCON really isn't that clear, it allows for two different scenarios: one where the current version is retained and one where the contentious content is removed, and does not firmly say when each should be occur ("commonly" and "often" are the words it uses). Anyway, I think the best thing to do is focus on finding better wording that editors can agree on, rather than worry about what the current wording's status is. Jr8825Talk 08:45, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    There IS consensus to include a statement. We devised a statement that after 5-months of discussion had considerable support, though it was deemed to not have a consensus. The trouble is that attempting to devise a consensus statement seems to just lead to endless discussion and no consensus - endless instability. I found the statement we included to be compelling and well-supported by reliable citations. There was zero (0) support for the weasel words, such as are presently in the lead: "was widely criticized" (by who?). Its just a fact he was slow, deliberately slow, as the article text pretty clearly describes. Factually correct and NPOV, but politically sensitive and perceived as POV. Meanwhile, for all the complaints about the statement given in CC#48 no one has yet brought an alternate suggestion to these Talk pages to attempt to devise an acceptable solution; we will not revert war ourselves to such a solution. Color me cynical. Bdushaw (talk) 11:46, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Please have some respect for the prior extensive discussions. Please respect the existing content of the article that the lead is meant to represent. These are obvious points... Bdushaw (talk) 11:50, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Bdushaw: I'm not sure whether you're referring to Wikieditor, me, or both of us, but I've read the RfCs and am not trying to challenge CC#48. My personal concern is purely limited to the wikivoice wording of "Trump reacted slowly". I've seen a significant number of editors raise concerns about it, more than can simply be dismissed as bad faith or sensitivity due to support for Trump[1] – I definitely have no sympathy for him, and yet I can see policy-based objections to this wording. My concern boils down to the tone, not the accuracy. WP:IMPARTIAL and the non-judgemental principle of WP:YESPOV can be failed, even if the content is factual. I can break down in a more detailed way why I think it's a problem, but I'd like to suggest an alternative (well actually I just did :) but I didn't highlight it clearly so it looks like you missed it) – I've underlined it so it's more visible. What are your thoughts on this? I think it retains much of the strength of the current wording.
    I agree with you that the new weasel wording isn't an improvement. I think it may be better to revert the text back to the 'status quo' until we find support for an alternative (such as mine, perhaps, but if not I'll happily drop the stick). Jr8825Talk 13:30, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    References

    1. ^ The wording was very contentious at the first discussionRfC
    I was speaking broadly, based on months of similar conflicts/arguments. Seems to me that those wishing to revise the status quo (its just a status quo, not a consensus, not set in stone!) have a straightforward path - start a new section entitled something like "Proposed revised COVID-19 statement for the lead" and give the statement and arguments for it. Editors on this article raise all manner of bias/political concerns, repeatedly; I am skeptical of such concerns wrt the consensus. There is a sense of bad faith/political motivations, without pointing any fingers; perhaps less trouble now that the election is over. A possible solution may be to attempt wording that avoids the question entirely. But I suggest a clean start to the question with a new Talk entry. Trump has behaved more poorly than slowly, however - a good case to be made that he was counterproductive numerous times - ridiculing masking, attitude, politicizing pandemic response, disinfectant injections, large rallies, etc etc. and now 10 days have gone by since the election and with the pandemic roaring in an entirely predictable/predicted way, he has been AWOL on the issue. A revised statement should likely touch on these more recent terrible consequences. But start a clean, new Talk section, IMO; that has been the obvious process (????!!!!) (and be prepared for months of discussion...) Bdushaw (talk) 13:59, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Process is important here, and hence accuracy. The citation you gave was not an RfC. There was a Talk Discussion (the link you gave), and a formal RfC. The status quo statement was a result of these extensive discussions. I personally thought the SQ statement had a consensus, but the uninvolved closers did not see it that way. Bdushaw (talk) 14:06, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I see, I overlooked that it wasn't an actual RfC as CC#48 lists it as "link 1", followed by "link 2" for the RfC, and I didn't pay enough attention to the actual title. To be honest I jumped the gun a bit here by throwing a suggestion that I'd been working on into this section, as it happened to be on the same issue. While it's a bit repetitious, I'll start a new section specifically on the wording "reacted slowly". Jr8825Talk 14:12, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Bdushaw: Anyone wishing to edit a portion of the article that lacks consensus can do so by making bold edits or suggesting changes on the talk page. There is no "status quo" other than a term of art. At no point was the section mentioned in 48 the subject of any specific consensus over wording, and WP:NOCON frankly counsels against leaving it out for that reason. "Uninvolved editors" were wrong to suggest otherwise, and I think you should actually provide a policy link to support your assertions here about "status quo" being a thing. Further, the provided discussions show continued disagreement and debate, not consensus or "status quo." Wikieditor19920 (talk) 15:47, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Irrespective of everything, but as a matter of reality, the avenue you suggest will lead to a wild west of anarchy, turmoil and instability, in lead edits...Troubles with edits in an article should be brought to the Talk pages for resolution. Bdushaw (talk) 15:59, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Bdushaw: No, problems ensue when the process is misused and editors assert consensus where there is none. Disagreement is allowed. The term you are using, "status quo," is not reflected in policy, and the discussions linked do not support the notion that this language is settled or undisputed. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 17:27, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    No one said it was settled. But it is a little odd, don't you think, that after a laborious, months long discussion process where some language is coaxed out to be finally tentatively included, Joe Schmoe editor can wander in and "fix" it, then Jane Schmoe editor can object and "fix" it some more, then Frank Schmoe, etc etc. No one has ever objected to bringing the statement to these talk pages to derive something better, as challenging as that may be. It is, I may add, a little something, to presume that the 20-30 editors involved with this process got it all wrong. Bdushaw (talk) 17:45, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    No, I don't think it's odd at all that editors are allowed to make changes to text, because I was the one who saw the problems with the text weeks ago, and I still see them present in the text now. You are misrepresenting past discussions by claiming greater involvement than there was, asserting consensus where there is none, and are behaving as if WP:OWN doesn't apply and only you or editors you agree with are allowed to make textual changes. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 18:07, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    And by the way, you are totally entitled to your opinion, to disagree with me, and boldly revert my changes. What I am advocating here goes both ways. But do not make up consensus where there is none. The notion of "status quo" is non-binding and has no implication other than as a term of art or a suggestion for a particular variant. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 18:12, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Wikieditor, I don't think you heard what Bdushaw just said. You didn't discover anything, you exhumed a dead woman. This was thoroughly discussed and resolved the first several times it was "discovered". SPECIFICO talk 20:00, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @SPECIFICO:, that's a wonderful analogy, and has nothing to do with what we're talking about. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 00:53, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Lead COVID-19 wording, "Trump reacted slowly"

    Does the phrase "Trump reacted slowly" meet the following 3 tests against main components of our WP:NPOV policy?

    • Avoid stating facts as opinions: Is "Trump reacted slowly" an uncontested and uncontroversial factual statement (per the WP:WEIGHT of WP:RS)?
    Passes test A Factual assertions ... should normally be directly stated in Wikipedia's voice → wikivoice is appropriate; maintain the current wording.
    • Avoid stating opinions as facts: Is "Trump reacted slowly" a significant opinion rather than a fact?
    Fails test B Opinions should be attributed in the text → maintain the current wording with attribution (e.g. "Trump's response has been characterized as")
    • Prefer non-judgmental language: Is "Trump reacted slowly" non-judgemental or is the language justified by a balance against clarity?
    Fails test C Even where a topic is presented in terms of facts ... the tone of Wikipedia articles should be impartial → consider rewording to maintain an impartial tone.

    If editors feel that the phrasing may fail tests B or C, would the following be an improvement:

    Suggestions for alternative wording:

    • In response to the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump initially downplayed the threat to public health, ignored or contradicted recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing.
    • (added)Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic exacerbated/worsened its effects, he downplayed... (is considered to have?)
    • (added)Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic was/has been ineffective, he downplayed...

    Note on current consensus: Current consensus #48 states "there is no consensus on specific wording" on COVID-19 in the lead. It identifies the current phrasing as the "status-quo", retained on the basis of the extensive discussion surrounding it, rather than an explicit consensus in favour of it; some editors have expressed the view that a consensus would be required before making substantive changes. Following the closer's comments at the RfC, closed on 23 August, this section intends to focus on identifying and improving specific problems with the wording. It does not seek to overturn any aspect of CC#48. Jr8825Talk 14:25, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    (ec) Has the previous text been restored? The proposed version is not better. It omits the sentence that gives an overview and orients the reader for the litany of failures that is recited in the "suggestion..." above. With the benefit of an additional several additional months' perspective, the word "slowly" seems euphemistic. SPECIFICO talk 14:52, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Why would we continue to give UNDUE weight to the "China travel ban"? Except for the insistent repetition of Trump and his supporters, there is no RS weight that calls this significant or even effective. Moreover, the lack of action on travel from Europe for over a month after Trump knew of the danger is acknowledged and cited by RS but not duly covered here. SPECIFICO talk 15:44, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @SPECIFICO: euphemistic for killing lots of Americans, I presume? Do RS now spell this out clearly? A Google search finds this article in Nature saying "many experts blame Trump for the country’s failure to contain the outbreak". Are we able to say something close to this? The problem is that the article's author isn't saying it unequivocally themselves (they're attributing it to "many experts"). I still think that "Trump reacted slowly" isn't good enough for Wikipedia, as you said, it's euphemistic and if a scientific journal article isn't ready to state something like this without attribution, how can we do so as an encyclopedia? As a Brit looking in, it doesn't seem consistent (for example, by deaths per capita, Boris Johnson's response has been equally inept and deadly; much of the UK press has been utterly witheringly critical and you'd have an easy time finding RS saying that his government's response was deadly slow, yet the Boris Johnson article doesn't say "Johnson reacted slowly"). In my view, we either need to (1) take a route around such analytical wording in the lead until the sources are in place, while retaining the scathing facts (my suggestion) (2) attribute it (like Nature, as the current text introduced by Wikieditor19920 does, or (3) be more explicit, as you're suggesting, if we can find an uncontested and uncontroversial factual statement that's more explanatory. My !vote would for taking any of these options over the current wording. Jr8825Talk 15:37, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Please drop this straw man about Trump killing people. The coronavirus is not Vince Foster. I have said no such thing and I've already needed to emphasize that in the "Biased" section above. Thank you. SPECIFICO talk 15:44, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry SPECIFICO, I didn't intend to paraphrase you there, or comment on your views. I should've made it clearer I was extending my thought process out from the points you'd made. My phasing was not good either, what I should've said was 'exacerbating the mortality rate', which isn't a straw man as such (I mean, it's the end result of his disastrous response, and I've read RS saying this) but this is definitely a step into more sensitive territory, so I'll leave this be as there are more productive directions to take this conversation. Jr8825Talk 17:17, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Assert facts, not opinions says that facts include "information that is accepted as true and about which there is no serious dispute." That is the situation here. TFD (talk) 15:40, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @The Four Deuces: The thing is, while I personally agree that Trump reacted slowly, I'm not comfortable with saying such a broad, blanket statement in Wikipedia's voice, particularly as it's still a current event (so we don't have the benefit of hindsight or historiography). ASSERT is a very strong argument for keeping the wording as it is, but I still feel it's too judgemental – it's negative, and it implies Trump reacted slowly in every single aspect (not just policy, but also misunderstanding it and privately not taking it seriously). This could certainly be true (I suspect it is) and some RS may have speculated this, but we can't say with authority what was going on inside his head. The flipside is he could've been deliberately holding off on action for any other reason (economic concerns related to personal electoral interests, for example). The US is not the only country that responded appallingly to the pandemic – Bolsonaro's lead is much better in my view: Bolsonaro's response to the COVID-19 pandemic in Brazil was criticized across the political spectrum; he sought to downplay the pandemic and its effects, opposed quarantine measures, and fired two health ministers, while the death toll increased rapidly. It's not that I want to avoid negative commentary, it's that I feel this particular phrase is inherently problematic. Jr8825Talk 17:40, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    No doubt there is mitigation: the U.S. does not have universal health care, it has a federal system, citizens don't listen to government instructions or science and few leaders did not respond slowly. I don't remember Biden and Pelosi making any suggestions about what to do and they had the same information Trump had. Nonetheless it is more accurate to say that Trump was criticized for responding slowly rather than critics say he responded slowly. TFD (talk) 18:35, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't think anyone's arguing for "critics say he responded slowly", the problem is the status quo wording is "Trump reacted slowly" not "Trump was criticized for responding slowly" (and, since we're having this discussion, perhaps we can find a better alternative to "slow" anyway (see the chain below bouncing ideas off Bdushaw). Jr8825Talk 18:49, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Avoid using Wiki voice It is a fact that he was widely criticized for his response and it is appropriate to acknowledge this. We should steer from using Wiki voice and restating criticisms where unnecessary. It's not the job of Wikipedia to criticize, it's our job to summarize criticisms. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 15:53, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Is there any reasonable opinion that Trump did not react slowly? If not, then it is misleading to imply that there is. TFD (talk) 16:11, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    There's no need for criticism in Wiki voice. Simply stating what he did in factual terms ought to be enough. Spudlace (talk) 05:39, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree. WP:WIKIVOICE is clear that opinions should not be made in wiki voice, and just because an opinion isn't challenged in a RS, doesnt transform it into a fact. Sandman9083 (talk) 05:48, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    The issue is tricky because it is an assessment of the degree that Trump was viewed as slow. The classic example is we do not say "the earth is widely viewed as round", although flat earthers might like to have "the earth is sometimes viewed as flat" - rather, in wikivoice, "the earth is round". In the Trump case we are attempting to assess whether RS is sufficiently unambiguous that the question has no significant lingering doubt. I would say so - but we can look for citations that argue that the proper response was to go slow... If it were me, just now, I would attempt an entirely new statement, updated to the recent facts, and not belabor this particular point. The facts are, however, bad for Trump, politically - seems unavoidable. Bdushaw (talk) 16:20, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    @Bdushaw: toying with ideas here:
    • Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic (is considered to have?) exacerbated/worsened its effects, he downplayed...
    • Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic was/has been ineffective, he downplayed...
    these use wikivoice and can be supported with RS. I'm still not 100% about not using attribution, but these seem like more direct statements than the inherently subjective-sounding 'reacted slowly'. Jr8825Talk 17:53, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Something like this might work, though I am no referee. I was just thinking that the SQ statement was derived from a chronological perspective (start->finish), whereas we might now do better taking a wide-angle view of Trump's 11-month history of pandemic response. An important aspect now, unclear before, is how Trump politicized the pandemic response; medical facts are not important, but if you wear a mask you are against me, etc. Earlier today I was noting that Trump is not at all assisting the nascent Biden administration in formulating its pandemic strategy. I believe the objection to "slow" is political rather than factual, however, so any statement that comes off making Trump look bad will likely continue to have problems. Bdushaw (talk) 18:13, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    A subclause ("politicized the pandemic response due to the approaching US presidential election") may be a good candidate for inclusion in a new sentence. re: the objection to "slow", it's not just political: "slow" may be factual, but it's also, fundamentally, a judgement of some kind, even if it's a widely held, uncontested judgement. (What constitutes "slow"? And, as you pointed out, to what degree was he slow, as it's always a relative thing?) In contrast, saying the earth is round, or that the impact of COVID would've been lessened if the US federal government had taken actions it didn't, or communicated the risk of COVID-19 better, aren't inherently judgements. Jr8825Talk 18:34, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Whether the earth is spherical or not is a fact that can be scientifically proven, regardless of your expectations or thoughts on the matter. Whether Trump's response was "slow" depends on expectations and competing priorities, and is clearly a broad opinion statement. WP:WIKIVOICE states that opinions should not be stated in wiki voice as if it were a fact, but should rather be attributed to the source or described as a widespread view in the text. Sandman9083 (talk) 04:49, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Another way the issue might be approached is if we say "critics say" (or whatever) to then actually be able to list those critics. For the statement in question you have, e.g. "NY Times, WA Post, health officials, doctors, New England Journal of Medicine, etc etc say..." The list is long indeed - so seems to me we can drop "critics say" (or whatever). Bdushaw (talk) 16:42, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    • Reliable sources are pretty clear that Trump "reacted slowly" (an extremely charitable summary, if anything). I'm not aware of any significant equal or comparable weight of independent reliable sources disputing this, or claiming he acted swiftly or effectively. So Wikipedia policy is quite clear on how to handle this - we reflect reliable sources, and we don't water them down with weasel words or create the appearance of uncertainty where none actually exists. A neutral, WP:NPOV-compliant summary is one that accurately reflects the weight of reliable sources, not one that satisfies editors' personal commitments to both-sidesism. At some point we have to tell readers the truth and resist the urge to rewrite history. MastCell Talk 16:58, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
      Anyway, why all the concern about his delayed, slow, or negligent policies? They were all within his presidential authority and discretion. Let's not impose any value judgment on the documented RS fact. SPECIFICO talk 17:21, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Specifico: Your characterization of "weasel words" is incorrect. It is standard practice to use terms like "widely criticized" or "widely acknowledged" in leads, and this is perfectly acceptable as long as specific attribution is provided later in the body. MOS:LEAD. This does not fall under WP:WEASEL. I thought you were aware of that. Second, attribution is not "watering down," it is how we describe observations by commentators without asserting them as fact. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 17:27, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    You talkin' to me? I don't see that I used "weasel" on this page? I do think that with the benefit of 10 months' hindsight, "slow" is not the salient description of Trump's approach. It's more widely described in RS as abdication. SPECIFICO talk 19:55, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Providing attribution for widely held understandings of the world or events, when there is no actual substantive disagreement among reliable sources, is a) poor writing, and b) potentially misleading. To say that Trump was "widely criticized" for acting slowly is like saying that HIV is "widely believed" to be the cause of AIDS. It's literally true, and satisfies a particular narrowly technical concept of "neutrality", but it's also misleading and at odds with Wikipedia's definition of neutrality, which enjoins us to avoid presenting widely accepted realities as if they were opinions (even "widely-held" ones). MastCell Talk 18:04, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Inapt analogy. We don't compare scientific facts with analytical commentary. Obviously it is disputed, no doubt along partisan fault lines. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 18:18, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Wikieditor, in assessing DUE WEIGHT, you need to be sure to exclude Trump's own statements and those of self-interested parties and allies who repeat them. SPECIFICO talk 19:55, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    According to the Discovery Channel, "In science, a fact is an observation that's been confirmed so many times that scientists can, for all intents and purposes, accept it as "true." But everything in science comes with a level of uncertainty, so nothing is ever scientifically "true" beyond a shadow of a doubt."[16] Scientific facts, such as whether Covid-19 actually exists or is a hoax created by George Soros, are disputed along partisan lines. It's only in religious fundamentalism and conspiracism that one finds absolute certainty. TFD (talk) 21:14, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Wikiedtor19920, While I never get tired of self-assured pseudonymous editors explaining how science works to me, TFD is correct. The role of HIV in causing AIDS is the result of "analytical commentary", and continues to be disputed vigorously be a small fringe of partisans. Yet we present it in Wiki-voice, without attribution, because there is no significant dispute in reliable sources. Likewise with Trump's slow reaction to the Covid-19 pandemic. MastCell Talk 23:15, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @MastCell: Perhaps a brush-up on policy, then. It's a ridiculous analogy. Criticisms are opinions, not assertions of fact. We do not restate subjective characterizations in Wiki voice. "Slow reaction" is one such characterization; maybe it has merit to it, but that doesn't change the analysis. It must be attributed. That is part of writing a detached, neutral summary. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 01:58, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Support This is a far better version. To describe something as slow is an opinion, and should be properly attributed as an opinion if it is to be included. If for whatever reason it is "charitable" to say that Trump was slow, then we should absolutely not be charitable. Onetwothreeip (talk) 20:35, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Support This version is much more neutral than the current wording and sticks to the facts, If a majority of the other world leaders had reacted sooner, then the current wording would be okay, however, that is not the case as a majority of world leaders reacted in the same timeframe as trump. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BlackBird1008 (talk • contribs) 20:54, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Just some ideas: the statement "Trump's pandemic response was ineffective..." does bypass the "slow" question, though it could still be construed as an opinion (I don't think it is, but others may). The phrase "widely criticized across the political spectrum" (above) is more a statement as to a political assessment of the man, than a characterization of a particular response per se. One factor important here and elsewhere in the article, but not described properly yet, is the degree to which people respond to the actions and statements of a president. Trump's rhetoric and examples were picked up on by many people, leading to such poor pandemic response (in Red states particularly); people follow their leader; even globally people have followed Trump. Rallies, take malaria drugs, no masks, no social distancing, it's no problem if you are macho enough, etc. All eventually leading to the present dangerous circumstance of runaway infections, even prior to the start of the dangerous winter season, c.f., recent Fouci statements. So a phrase something like "Trump set dangerous examples in pandemic response" may be in order. Then there is an abrogation of Federal leadership/coordination with respect to such things as scarcity of personal protection equipment, states fending for themselves, etc, indeed an abrogation of any Federal response at all at the moment. Perhaps still too early for such an effort, but our prior Discussion featured a table of various possibilities, which allowed editors to see all the possibilities and state their preferences. In short, beyond the "slow" question, there are a wide range of possibilities as to a revised statement, if people want to open this Pandora's box. Bdushaw (talk) 21:20, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    And extraordinary pressure to open economies early, a source of much of the present problem. That particular issue occurred toward the tail end of our previous discussions, I believe. Bdushaw (talk) 21:27, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    We would still need to attribute a characterisation as ineffective, as that is also a matter of opinion. It is not as if there is a significant reliable opinion that says Trump was not slow, it is that this is still an opinion, even if an expert one. There is also quite a lack of sources provided that characterise the response primarily as slow, rather than other views like ineffective, negligent and so on. Onetwothreeip (talk) 21:48, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Support Attribution is required. This is an assessment, and users here have been sloppy to treat it as fact, because that assessment varies slightly from source to source. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 01:03, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I oppose the various changes proposed by Jr8825, for much the same reasons as stated by MastCell and others. Our job is to faithfully reflect the reliable sources, and the current text does that. I've also reverted a recent addition that adds in the hedging language and removes "falsely" with respect to the various bogus COVID-19-related statements. That runs afoul of WP:EVALFRINGE, among other principles. There is certainly no consensus as to those changes. Neutralitytalk 22:10, 13 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I haven't been part of this discussion but I was pinged to it. I'm going to say this very loudly: Do not change the article while this discussion is underway. There has been edit warring over this, and if there is any more of it I am going to request full protection again. This sentence has been formally discussed and formally closed several times; there was virtually unanimous support for saying something in the lead, and a majority but not a formal consensus for what became the status quo wording: Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic; he downplayed the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. (BTW somebody said I wrote that version; actually that version was written by User:Neutrality as an improvement on something I had proposed, and I immediately agreed with their version.) If you have a different opinion or a better way to word it, by all means propose it here and let's discuss it. That’s how this discussion was started, by User:Jr8825, and by all means let’s continue it. Maybe we can come up with a better wording. If so, it should be clearly proposed and debated, as the previous discussions were, and not implemented unless and until there appears to be considerable support for it. -- MelanieN (talk) 16:17, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Arbitrary break

    I am unsure of suggestions for a way forward, but I will say some things that may be indisputable. It seems to me this "slow" business is intractable and we should try a different approach. Things have evolved since the status quo statement was derived, and for all this effort we may be better off striving for a new, updated statement that describes COVID-19 and Trump, a defining problem for the Trump administration. A good place to start would be "Trump downplayed the danger" (hence minimized the Federal response) since he explicitly says as much. RE "slow" and "weasel words", I suspect the problem is more general - that there will always be those that want the weasel words in characterizing Trump's response, however that is done, and those that see sufficient sourcing that the additional wording should be left out. We should be able to find factual wording, less about characterization more about factual, that allows us to leave out the "weasel words". Indisputable is the existence of the election campaign and how that influenced Trump, e.g., the dangerous rallies, statements about vaccines sooner rather than later. A final indisputable fact is a consequence of the lack of a sufficient Federal response is the present runaway infection rate and lack of an updated strategy for dealing with it; the Trump administration has thrown its hands up. Can we devise a suitable statement that is so sufficiently factual as to avoid assessments/opinions? Bdushaw (talk) 17:26, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Would it be satisfactory to merely change it from Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic; he downplayed the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. to Trump downplayed the threat of the COVID-19 pandemic, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing.? – Muboshgu (talk) 17:32, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Just kicking around ideas, how about Throughout the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump downplayed its threat and minimized the Federal response; he ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, politicized pandemic mitigation measures in the run up to the 2020 election, and promoted false information about unproven treatments, the availability of testing, and vaccine timelines. Perhaps something along those lines, encompassing the 11 months of pandemic? A severe constraint, and a source of conflict, is that a statement for the lead has to be concise, hence the statement is easily uncomfortably pointed. Bdushaw (talk) 18:27, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    (The other problem with "slow" it occurs to me, is that it carries an implication that the response sped up later, whereas that is not obviously true.) Bdushaw (talk) 18:31, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    A revision, already: Throughout the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump downplayed its threat; he ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, politicized mitigation measures in the run up to the 2020 election, and promoted false information about unproven treatments, testing, and vaccines. Bdushaw (talk) 18:48, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Instead of the euphemistic "slow" the first sentence should just state Trump did not mount any effective measures to mitigate the spread of the virus, instead adopting a policy of denial and distraction.. Then the rest of what you wrote makes good sense, and with the benefit of 10.4375 months experience, RS no longer say "slow" response, they say "no" response. SPECIFICO talk 19:09, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Well, we seek a consensus statement/others will suggest, but another revision incorporating your suggestion might be Throughout the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump downplayed its threat and did not orchestrate any effective virus mitigation measures; he ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, politicized mitigation measures in the run up to the 2020 election, and promoted false information about unproven treatments, testing, and vaccines. The "2020 election" phrase gives a logical lead in to the election sentences presently in the lead. We leave out canceling the pandemic program in Fall 2019, withdrawing from WHO, and continuing to try to delete the ACA. Bdushaw (talk) 19:21, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Not sure orchestration is among his skills. Maybe "conduct", to keep within your imagery. I think my blue version has the benefit of stating the context directly upfront. BTW we should all be referring to the standing article text for any lead edit. SPECIFICO talk 19:46, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think all of these are improvements over "slow" myself. A couple of redundant words I think can be cut are "any effective virus mitigation measures" and "contradicted many recommendations from health", (it's harder to make the case that any is uncontested, virus is obvious from the context and many is an unnecessary qualification). I'm not keen on 'orchestration', or even 'conducted', I would stick with 'implemented'. The disadvantage of Bdushaw's first suggestions (i.e. jumping straight into downplayed the threat) is the point someone made about my similar initial suggestion, which is that it removes the analytical overview to which the other facts relate (personally I think the facts would still speak for themselves, but it would be advantageous to have an overarching summary as I'm confident we have the sourcing for it). The alternative to SPECIFICO's "Trump did not mount effective measures" would be the suggestion I made above, "Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic was ineffective, he downplayed, which at the moment is probably my preference. Jr8825Talk 11:48, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    "Support there has been a fair amount of debate over this sentence. "Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic was/has been ineffective, he downplayed..." seems like a fair compromise. It is difficult to measure if it was specifically exacerbated but there seems to be enough consensus that it at least was inneffective to stop the spread throughout the country.Anon0098 (talk) 20:30, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I'm glad to see us discussing and coming up with versions. Keep it up. My only comment at this point is to oppose the additional sentence that SPECIFICO suggested. We are talking about the lead section of a very large biography, with a subject about whom there is an enormous amount to say, and I think we need to keep our coronavirus material to a single sentence. We should focus on what he did, as the proposed sentences here do - rather than what he didn't do, or evaluations of his response. -- MelanieN (talk) 20:38, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I could see that, however in that spirit we do need to convey his choice not to confront the threat. His response was not downplayed or ineffective. It was, for various documented reasons, denial. So instead of "downplayed", how about "denied the scope of"? SPECIFICO talk 21:14, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The thing about "downplayed" is the man himself used the term, hence it is unassailable by editors. Bring in "denied the scope of" and we'll get "characterized as denying the scope of"... I am uncertain of how strong the RS is for "denial" or even "ineffective", bearing in mind that I'm not the one you have to convince. Though "denial" is fairly well already encompassed in the recent suggestions, really. I also keep reminding myself that the Feds abandoned the pandemic material support question, leaving the states to fight for themselves; the dire straits of hospitals and care givers across the nation in terms of materials/ventilators/etc will only get worse. "Left pandemic response planning and material support to the states" might be a phrase to use. (I don't advocate anything at this point, and seek to see the responses of others.) Bdushaw (talk) 21:43, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Or to put it another way, it seems to me the present article text does not make any case for "denial" - that would need to be developed. Covid denial/Atlantic Bdushaw (talk) 21:54, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Its possible that the case could be made that Trump abandoned all pandemic response at the time of the election; wasn't there reporting that "there is nothing that can be done"? Perhaps not denial, but accepted hopelessness. Bdushaw (talk) 22:00, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Another thing to bear in mind is that we will likely have to have an RfC for any statement that seems like it might be successful, unless there is obvious support for it/minimal objections to it. Bdushaw (talk) 21:43, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    For my part, I am fine with the status quo, so it is really up to the no-slowly editors to gain consensus for any improvement. The decision to ignore the threat has now been central to RS coverage, but I forget how well referenced it is in the current article text. SPECIFICO talk 22:04, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    BTW do we have a good source for "politicized mitigation measures in the run up to the 2020 election"? Is it put that way in sources, do we have it referenced in the article text? Otherwise we probably shouldn't say it in the lead. -- MelanieN (talk) 03:21, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think there's plenty of sourcing for this, a Google search for "trump politicized mask wearing" turns up 1,250,000 results and, at least here in the UK, the first page is almost entirely reliable sources. One possible issue I can see is that the Biden campaign also politicized the coronavirus response by focusing their campaign on it. Obviously this isn't a fair or equal comparison, as the government of the day should put public health first and it was in response to Trump's failure to take action to a crisis (so a legitimate political issue), but potentially an objection we'd have to address at an RfC. Jr8825Talk 11:26, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    RE Politicizing measures/election The issue could be made more clear in the article and further development is warranted, e.g., Philly Inquirer on Trump pressuring PA to reopen early as part of his campaign measure; also USA Today/PA reopening. There are countless factors that were politicized on account of the election - e.g., masking, social distancing, Trump's super-spreader rally events (costing Herman Cain his life and infecting 180 Secret Service agents), political pressures on health agencies, and particularly political pressure for battleground states to reopen early. Then there was Trump's behavior while he was battling his own virus; he was definitely making political statements. The case can easily be made, but some work on the article would be helpful. We are severely cramped by the excessive length of the article, however. (IMO Trump's pandemic response over the last 11 months was: (a) I don't have a clue what to do (nor will I listen to anyone), and (b) I will take whatever action I need to win on 3 November.) Bdushaw (talk) 12:39, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Support changing wording: WP:WIKIVOICE states that opinions, even mainstream opinions, should be attributed in the text as such. adding "Trump's response has been characterized as" would be a great improvement. Sandman9083 (talk) 05:31, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Table of Options

    A table to be kept at the bottom of this Talk section to keep track of the various options. The aim here is for the table to help evolution toward a consensus statement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bdushaw (talk • contribs) 11:01, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Options for Lead Statement Describing Trump and COVID-19
    Version Lead Text +Politicized? Notes/Supported by Article?
    SQ Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic; he downplayed the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. Status quo
    A1 In response to the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump initially downplayed the threat to public health, ignored or contradicted recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. Only avoiding "slow"
    A2 Trump downplayed the threat of the COVID-19 pandemic, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. Only avoiding "slow"
    B Throughout the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump downplayed its threat; he ignored or contradicted recommendations from health officials, politicized mitigation measures in the run up to the 2020 election, and promoted false information about unproven treatments, testing, and vaccines. Y
    C1 Trump did not mount any effective measures to mitigate the spread of the virus, instead adopting a policy of denial and distraction. "Any effective measures"
    First sentence
    C2 Throughout the COVID-19 pandemic, Trump downplayed its threat and did not implement any effective virus mitigation measures; he ignored or contradicted recommendations from health officials, politicized mitigation measures in the run up to the 2020 election, and promoted false information about unproven treatments, testing, and vaccines. Y "Any effective measures"
    Text needs work
    D Trump's response to the COVID-19 pandemic was ineffective, he downplayed the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. "Response ... ineffective"
    Z Template

    I don't think we should keep this table on the talk page. There appears to be no consensus for changing the text, and unlike other text that's glued in place with claims of "implicit consensus" (AKA old age), this bit was thoughtully widely and deeply discussed on this talk page. It's always good to improve any part of the article, but I would not elevate or prioritize this based only on the preference of a few editors who periodically test the waters. SPECIFICO talk 20:33, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    There appears to be no consensus for changing the text – what makes you say this, SPECIFICO? From reading the comments in the above section, I think there may well be a weak consensus forming in favour of change, particularly if we can refine the suggestions above and narrow them down to 2 or 3 preferred alternatives. (There definitely isn't a consensus against change, at the very least). I agree with Bdushaw that the table is a practical way of organising a complex discussion, particularly as it's so dense that it may discourage the involvement of fresh eyes. Ideally we can take forward a small number of suggestions, so that they can be presented alongside the SQ in a more straightforward discussion. If your concern is purely because you think a table "elevates" it above other discussion, perhaps it can be wrapped in a collapsible section to avoid taking up too much space? Jr8825Talk 21:04, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Well, retaining the SQ is always an option - people spoke fairly bitterly about changing the SQ. If SQ remains, I would suggest it be elevated from "status quo" to "consensus" statement, however; enough with the tom foolery. I've tried to do the right thing, organize, develop, and present other options, but have noted that the people who initiated this process with strong complaints have not come forward with their own options. Seems to be complain about it, but make no good-faith effort to fix it... Regarding "slow", some people have called it an opinion, but being as how this is in regards to pandemic, the speed of response is a scientific/medical factor; as scientific as the earth is flat. One silly option would be to actually include a list of people/organizations that have criticized Trump as slow (News agencies, medical associations, doctors, etc. have criticized Trump as slow); there is guidance to that effect, to be specific, though in this case it would certainly look like poor writing. I think I will step aside from this discussion now (noting the sinkhole of time for little reward), with a support for the SQ as a consensus if no better statement can be developed and agreed upon here. It's clear there will be endless complaints about whatever is developed, sorry to say. I've noted in the news reports that people are dying in North Dakota of COVID, while angrily denying their state to hospital staff; ultimately an effect of Trump disinformation. As a world we seem to be on the brink of abandoning the Age of Enlightenment. Bdushaw (talk) 22:03, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If we don't see the improved text here, then there cannot be consensus for an unspecified alternative. In general there's always consensus for improving every article and every part of WP. There's no such thing as a meaningful but unspecified consensus to improve a few sentences. I should say, however that I misread your post above to say that you thought the table should be pinned to the page rather than pinned to the section and archived when it expires. So it's a bit less elevated, now that I see what you said. SPECIFICO talk 00:14, 18 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Bdushaw: Not a single one of your options reflects the crux of the proposal here, which is to include the "Trump's response was widely criticized for." Wikieditor19920 (talk) 05:19, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Sentence regarding fraud (versus widespread fraud)

    Some level of fraud has been inherent to elections of this scale, and, indeed, the use of mail-in ballots does increase the opportunity for this to took place. I refer to the comments of Attorney General Barr, saying prior to any federal investigation that fraud will be found. However, widespread fraud is far less common; this is where Trump's claims are unsubstantiated. As such, I suggest changing the sentence from "He has made unsubstantiated accusations of electoral fraud, mounted a series of legal challenges to the results, and ordered White House officials not to cooperate in the presidential transition." to "He has made unsubstantiated accusations of widespread electoral fraud, mounted a series of legal challenges to the results, and ordered White House officials not to cooperate in the presidential transition." thorpewilliam (talk) 01:43, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I reverted your edition because I think "accusations of electoral fraud" conveys the meaning just fine, and 'widespread fraud' would only serve to emphasise Trump's unsubstantiated allegations, rather than explain it more clearly. Jr8825Talk 09:25, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Jr8825:Neither sounds particularly favourable to Trump given the use of the adjective "unsubstantiated" however by specifying "widespread" in relation to that I believe it is more accurate both of his claims and of those claims' unsubstantiated qualities. Regardless, the article should intend to be fair and factual, not to emphasise nor diminish anything claimed by the subject beyond what is allowed by reason. I believe it is worthwhile to include the word in the sentence and I don't see it notably changing the article's degree of objectivity. Regards, thorpewilliam (talk) 11:00, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    indeed, the use of mail-in ballots does increase the opportunity for (fraud) to took place. Studies suggest the opposite. [17][18] And I agree with Jr8825 about not including "widespread". It's not just that he hasn't shown "widespread" fraud; he basically hasn't shown any fraud at all. Federal officials - yes, people in Trump's own administration - have said this was the best run and most secure election in history. [19] -- MelanieN (talk) 17:12, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Which makes his claims of widespread fraud all the more remarkable, and perhaps article-worthy. ―Mandruss  17:46, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @MelanieN: The source you provided doesn't say mail-in votes are less susceptible to fraud, though fraud remains extremely rare and even more rarely does it bring the outcome of an election into question. However, some level of irregularities (including fraud, wittingly or not) have occurred in every election, albeit nowhere near enough to alter the outcome – "...voting irregularities happen every election but, as our reporting has shown, are extremely rare and don't amount to negating a national election." (USA Today) It is for this reason that I believe it's a worthwhile distinction to make. thorpewilliam (talk) 02:08, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Trump goes on a firing spree

    Should we add a sentence to the "2020 election" section about how, following the election, Trump fired multiple administration officials, sometimes replacing them with Trump loyalists? "Over the past week, President Trump has axed his defense secretary and other top Pentagon aides, his second-in-command at the U.S. Agency for International Development, two top Homeland Security officials, a senior climate scientist and the leader of the agency that safeguards nuclear weapons."[20]. "The Trump administration has carried out sweeping changes atop the Defense Department's civilian leadership structure, removing several of its most senior officials and replacing them with perceived loyalists to the President. The flurry of changes, announced by the Department of Defense in a statement roughly 24 hours after President Donald Trump fired Defense Secretary Mark Esper, has put officials inside the Pentagon on edge and fueled a growing sense of alarm among military and civilian officials, who are concerned about what could come next. Four senior civilian officials have been fired or have resigned since Monday, including Esper, his chief of staff and the top officials overseeing policy and intelligence. They were replaced by perceived Trump loyalists, including a controversial figure who promoted fringe conspiracy theories and called former President Barack Obama a terrorist."[21] -- MelanieN (talk) 21:02, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Yes, some coverage of this is called for. Neutralitytalk 21:09, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Is it in the Presidency article, or one of the other sub-articles? That should be prerequisite to consideration here. See WP:SYNC. ―Mandruss  00:14, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    That's a good point. I'll see about adding something to some of the sub-articles before proposing it here. -- MelanieN (talk) 00:39, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Just to note that I still intend to do this but it's been slow going due to RL issues. I'll get it done soon. -- MelanieN (talk) 16:26, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Legal Affairs and Bankruptcies Clarification

    At the end of 2.3 Legal Affairs and Bankruptcies, it says, "In May, DC District Court judge Amit Mehta ruled that Mazars must comply with the subpoena, and judge Edgardo Ramos of the Southern District Court of New York ruled that the banks must also comply." The use of "also" at the end of the sentence implies that the banks and something else have to comply with the subpoena. This is not the case: it is the judge that is different, not the banks. Therefore, for clarity, I propose changing this sentence to: "In May, DC District Court judge Amit Mehta ruled that Mazars must comply with the subpoena, and judge Edgardo Ramos of the Southern District Court of New York also ruled that the banks must comply." In this sentence, the word "also" comes before "ruled" instead of "comply." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrytzkalmyr (talk • contribs) 22:07, 15 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    The word "current"

    Buried in the RfC is the phrase "the current president." This directly contradicts WP:DATED, which disallows terms like "current," "recent" and "now." Everything in Wikipedia is presumed to be current. We don't say, for example, that, "The Good Doctor is a current American medical drama series."

    I understand my edit was reverted because "current" was included among a myriad of other points in multi-pronged RfC. But it's still non-MOS and it hardly seems controversial or contentious to remove that word. The phrase "Donald Trump is the US president" is exactly the same as "Donald Trump is the current US president." The very word "is" indicates "current".--Tenebrae (talk) 00:31, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Please read the first five words of the guideline you cite. In any case, that sentence will be changing soon enough anyway. We've lived with any "error" there for this long, we'll survive until January 20. ―Mandruss  00:45, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I did: "Except on pages updated regularly" followed by a link to the Current Events portal. Virtually every page of a popular celebrity is "updated regularly" — the link to the Current Events portal shows that the vague term "updated regularly" refers to current events and not biographies.
    Here's the rest of it, detailing the spirit of the rule, which is that everything in Wikipedia is current unless otherwise noted:

    ...terms such as now, currently, to date, so far, soon, and recently should usually be avoided in favor of phrases such as during the 1990s, since 2010, and in August 1969. For current and future events, use phrases like as of November 2020 or since the beginning of 2020 to signal the time-dependence of the information....

    --Tenebrae (talk) 16:21, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree that "45th and current POTUS" is redundant, considering all former presidents are mentioned as presidenting in the past tense. But mine has proven to be the minority view thus far. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:16, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Presidential evaluation by historians

    At the end of every President's intro section, there has been a short blurb about whether or not their presidency is regarded as favorable, unfavorable, or mediocre. When will we add Trump's evaluation and how will it be decided what is put? CoryJosh (talk) 01:18, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I think we need at least ten years of historical perspective before we even think about that. Let's discuss it in 2031. ―Mandruss  01:31, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Such material is based on the consensus of reliable sources. If there is already a consensus among reliable sources there is no reason to wait ten years. The only reason that we would often, in the case of a more normal politician (e.g. Justin Trudeau or Alexander De Croo), have to wait for a little while (not necessarily ten years), is that we would have to wait for a consensus of reliable sources to emerge (for example the publication of books and scholarly articles doesn't happen overnight). In Trump's case a consensus among historians, political scientists and other scholars that he is considered the worst president in American history appears to be present already now. We already cover this in other articles such as Historical rankings of presidents of the United States: "APSA conducted a repeat of this poll in 2018, with Donald Trump appearing for the first time, in last position". I expect that there will a ton of further reliable sources elaborating on this, and that we should at the very least add something about this within the next year or so, but probably sooner, like within the next couple of months.
    We included Obama's legacy (although Obama was a more normal and uncontroversial politician who didn't do anything outrageous or radical, and who had good relations with his predecessor) within a year or so after he left office ("Since leaving office, his presidency has been favorably ranked by historians and the American general public"[22]). No need to wait ten times longer for Trump who has behaved in such a way that it is a hundred times easier for reliable sources to form a firm opinion regarding his presidency. --Tataral (talk) 01:56, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Those reliable sources may soften their tone in ten years. That's one of the reasons to wait. I can't speak for the wisdom, or lack thereof, of editors at other articles. ―Mandruss  02:00, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    If a new consensus were to emerge regarding Trump in ten, hundred or thousand years, we would cover that at that time, but we can't wait to cover something because something might happen in the distant future, or because the future may see things differently (for example, had Wikipedia existed during the Roman Empire, it wouldn't make sense for them to wait 2,000 years to cover their leaders until the "correct" perspective prevailed in RS). Trump has been the world's most visible man for about five years and we have some five years of massive RS coverage of him now (including the time when when he was a candidate). If we were to add something to this article about his legacy in a year or so it would rely on about six of coverage of the world's most visible man in academic and media sources, which is more than enough for us to include something about this when there is a clear RS consensus. Stating that his presidency is viewed unfavourably and that he is ranked among the worst U.S. presidents is a no-brainer, completely uncontroversial in terms of how he is viewed by RS and ranked by scholars. --Tataral (talk) 02:13, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think we could make some comment, cautiously. However, we shouldn't have a sentence in the lead if it isn't reflected in the body. But it is really pointless to include snap judgments about Trump being the worst president ever. The article can speak for itself.--Jack Upland (talk) 08:51, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    should->shouldn't ―Mandruss  13:07, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I have corrected my comment (in bold). Sorry about that.--Jack Upland (talk) 23:38, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    When the well-regarded C-SPAN Survey on Presidents comes out, we'll almost certainly want to include material on that (a longer version in the body and probably one sentence in the lead); this is an authoritative scholarly survey that usually gets significant attention. They only do the survey periodically, however - most recently in 2000, 2009, and 2017 - so it might be a while before a new iteration comes out. Neutralitytalk 23:08, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Want to bet they do one in 2021? Looks to me like they do one every time an administration is replaced by a new one. -- MelanieN (talk) 23:26, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    IMO we shouldn't be reporting any evaluations of his presidency or place in history until he has been out of office for at least a year. -- MelanieN (talk) 23:24, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Regarding how long we should wait once he's left office, I think we should cross that bridge when we get to it. It doesn't seem as though this conversation is worth having while he's still president. Jr8825Talk 18:43, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Border Wall Funding

    At the beginning of "2018-2019 federal government shutdown," it says that Trump wanted 5.6 billion dollars in federal funds for the border wall. At the beginning of "National emergency regarding the southern border," it says he wanted 5.7 billion dollars. Both should say 5.7 billion dollars. I have looked at other sources and have confirmed that it was 5.7 billion, but the CNBC source that is cited for the second number is fine, I think. The NYT article that the first number (5.6 billion) is attributed to takes a quote from Trump where he said that he was asking for 5.6 billion dollars. The White House officially asked Congress for 5.7 billion dollars, however. If you would like another source, here it is: https://www.politico.com/story/2019/01/06/trump-emergency-border-wall-government-shutdown-1082712. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 02:15, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Great. What are you proposing? Mgasparin (talk) 04:06, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Trump demanded 5.6 billions (NYT article) in a cabinet meeting on January 1, 2019. (Here's another source on that "Freewheeling and Mostly Fact-Free Cabinet Meeting.") On January 6, the WH "officially asked" (whatever that means - "we hereby ask?") for 5.7 billion dollars (Politico). The Politico article is about the wall while the section is about the government shutdown. Since a lot of the presidency content will probably be cut once Trump is safely out of office (and considering that Trump got neither 5.6 nor 5.7 billion, I'd suggest leaving the sentence as is. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:54, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The presidency content will probably be cut, but will the longest government shutdown in the history of the country be cut? I doubt it. I think we should replace the 5.6 with 5.7 and just keep the CNBC article, not the NYT article. It is trivial, but accurate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrytzkalmyr (talk • contribs) 15:28, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Abu Bakr al-Baghdadi

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    There is no mention of al-Baghdadi anywhere in the article. Yes, Trump merely approved the mission, but considering that bin Laden's death has a whole section on Obama's page, I think this should get at least a mention. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 02:13, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Okay, what wording would you propose? Keep in mind Consensus #37 and that this article is devoted solely to events that will have a lasting impact on either his presidency or personal life. I'm personally in two minds about inclusion of that event. AFAIK it has almost been entirely eclipsed by so many other events that hardly anyone mentions it anymore (failing #37). That being said, consensus on WP and public opinion can change. 10 years from now, academia and the general public may consider it an important event that shaped his presidency, therefore warranting inclusion (WP:10YT). Mgasparin (talk) 04:19, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I suppose it doesn't meet Consensus #37 criteria right now. We'll see if it gets more importance in the future. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 15:30, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    Biased Last Paragraph In Intro Section

    The last paragraph in the intro section seems very controversial, biased, and in an accusing tone. My personal thoughts (non favorable) to the subject aside Wikipedia should be based on facts and not bias one way or the other. I am requesting either that the paragraph is taken out completely or that it is completely rewritten to take the accusations away and report on the facts. 67.80.108.160 (talk) 08:39, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    The tone of that paragraph is based on the sources you can find under the Donald_Trump#COVID-19_pandemic section. The facts we present are always represented by reliable sources, as is the case here. — Czello 08:45, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I have removed "specious" as a description of the legal challenges to the election in this paragraph. Some of the legal challenges have been successful. And the fact that a challenge fails doesn't make it "specious".--Jack Upland (talk) 09:00, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    As others have said we go with RS, see wp:or. not what we think.Slatersteven (talk) 10:14, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    RS have widely called his claims and "challenges", whether "legal" or on Twitter, baseless[23][24], or used similar descriptions (e.g. "dead on arrival", "no merit",[25], "frivolous"[26]), so that's what we go with. It is uncontroversial that the lawsuits are "baseless" or "frivolous". --Tataral (talk) 00:13, 18 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Third Paragraph of Intro is Largely Unorganized

    The third paragraph goes from his political positions to the 2016 election results to protests to lies to racist statements. I fail to see how these are connected. Should we try to reorganize the introduction to make it more connected? Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 16:21, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I'd like to hear your more specific suggestions. It seems to me that, when you have a lot of brief, unrelated things like that, the only options are to throw them together in a paragraph or create a bunch of one- or two-sentence paragraphs. Not sure how we could "reorganize" that. ―Mandruss  00:13, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Well, for the political positions, do we really need that in the lead? I'm a relatively new user, so I'm not sure how much weight this argument carries, but I haven't seen political positions being described in the leads of the articles for former presidents. The part about the election as well as the sentence after it can go right before the Russian interference investigation part in the lead, as this topic is directly connected to the 2016 election. I think the sentence about protests can also be included with that, as it was a response to the election. The false statements and racially charged/racist comments can stay together, as both are examples of public statements. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 00:33, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I'd say how much weight that argument carries depends on who's around. Some think it's important for U.S. presidents' leads to be consistent in ways like that; I'm not one of them. Things are complicated enough without creating such linkages.
    Simply rearranging things without changing them is less controversial in my experience, provided there is some cogent rationale. I think it would help if you wrote a proposed paragraph 3 and wrapped it in a {{tq2}} template for easy readability. ―Mandruss  00:45, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I was going to suggest exactly the same thing, if you could make a draft mock-up of your suggestions it'll be easier to visualise what you're suggesting. Regarding Trump's political positions, they're included because reliable sources have noted that they're remarkable for a US president and have been the defining characteristics of his presidency. Jr8825Talk 00:56, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    5.7 COVID-19 Pandemic

    The first sentence of the COVID-19 Pandemic section says, "In December 2019, the pandemic of COVID-19 coronavirus erupted in Wuhan, China; the virus spread worldwide within weeks." In December 2019, COVID-19 was not a pandemic; rather, as explained later in the section, it was classified as a pandemic on March 11, 2020. I suggest changing it to "In December 2019, the SARS-CoV-2 coronavirus erupted in Wuhan, China; the virus spread worldwide within weeks." Note that I said SARS-CoV-2, as this is the virus, while COVID-19 is the disease it causes. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 20:28, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Fixed, thanks. Bdushaw (talk) 09:15, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Repetition

    From the lead: "Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics." From 6.3 False Statements: "As president, Trump has frequently made false statements in public speeches and remarks. The misinformation has been documented by fact-checkers; academics and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics." This is largely word-for-word. Do we really need the same thing twice? I think we should at least rephrase it. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 20:47, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    You have a point, and I'd suggest that any change should be to the body, not the lead, which is covered by #Current consensus #35. I'd also suggest that this a relatively minor issue that could be deferred. Readers are unlikely to even notice the repetitiveness. ―Mandruss  23:15, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Also this specific bit of lead wording may well change, depending on the outcome of the discussion above. Jr8825Talk 00:31, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Extra Commas in Racial Views

    6.6 Racial Views: "Trump's comments in reaction to the 2017 Charlottesville far-right rally were interpreted, by some, as implying a moral equivalence between white supremacist demonstrators and counter-protesters." "by some" is not an appositive or parenthetical element, so the commas are not correctly placed. The sentence should read as follows: "Trump's comments in reaction to the 2017 Charlottesville far-right rally were interpreted by some as implying a moral equivalence between white supremacist demonstrators and counter-protesters," with the commas around "by some" removed. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 20:55, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

     Done - Sounds reasonable enough for a BOLD edit, subject to challenge. ―Mandruss  22:16, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Photo of Stormy Daniels

    What is this adding to the article? Yes, there's that whole scandal, but why the photo? Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 17:51, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Agree. Entirely decorative, and if a reader wants to know what Stormy Daniels looks/looked like, that information is but one click away. That's why we have wikilinks. Removed. ―Mandruss  17:56, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm not sure it's decorative, but it is certainly UNDUE. SPECIFICO talk 18:23, 17 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    But I like Stormy Daniels... Bdushaw (talk) 13:35, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    So did Trump. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:57, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I agree with SPECIFICO...its UNUDE. (stopping now...) Bdushaw (talk) 14:06, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Fine. Click on the link to Stormy Daniels in that section. Voilà. Mrytzkalmyr (talk) 15:18, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    DOJ authorization to investigate

    Ref. these edits: [27], [28]. The info is newspaper-ish, but I edited instead of removing it. Barr isn't dumb, just unethical, placating the toddler-in-chief while maintaining plausible deniability with the two big ifs ("if there are any", "if true"). Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:33, 19 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Not really objecting to these recent edits, but noting my edits just prior to these were attempting an organization like (a) legal maneuvers (shenanigans), then (b) using the power of the federal government by blocking the transition and bringing the DOJ in on the action. (b) likely has other elements yet to appear; the news that Trump invited Michigan GOP to the whitehouse was interesting. With time, an optimal organization will likely be apparent. Bdushaw (talk) 09:06, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Rewrite without bias

    The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


    This article is smothered in left-leaning bias. Could the writer please keep personal opinions off the page? Every paragraph oozes with hate. Disgusting. Amaideach (talk) 00:11, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    @Amaideach: nobody is going to just rewrite the article from scratch - one it would take forever, two, it would violate consensus on many items. Please help by pointing out specific instances (sentences, etc) of bias you see and people will gladly discuss them here. Note that facts, by definition, cannot be biased, but the presentation can - thus calling this article "left-leaning bias" is unhelpful as many of the things are simply facts about Trump. This applies whether you agree with/like Trump or you hate his guts/administration. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 00:15, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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    Add the loser.com phenomenon

    Add the section: “Loser.com” phenomenon Shortly after major news outlets called the 2020 US presidential election for Joe Biden (who was Trump’s rival candidate), on Monday 9 November 2020, it was noticed that loser.com redirects to Trump’s Wikipedia page.

    This is at least the second time that Trump has run afoul of this website. In 2016, after Trump came in second during the Iowa Caucus , Loser.com redirected viewers to Trump’s Wikipedia page.

    The website Loser.com has been owned by comedian Brian Connelly since 1995. The website has been used to troll various people and organizations over the years, such as Kanye West, Wikileaks, and U.S. President Barack Obama.

    References: https://www.snopes.com/fact-check/loser-com-trump-wikipedia-page/, https://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/americas/us-election-2020/loser-website-trump-wikipedia-page-us-election-b1720938.html, https://www.msn.com/en-gb/news/world/losercom-redirects-to-trumps-wikipedia-page/ar-BB1aUmLW, https://time.com/4204929/donald-trump-trolled-loser-wikipedia/ 176.203.219.26 (talk) 08:46, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Per WP:PROPORTION, not in this article. Possibly at Donald Trump in popular culture. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 11:18, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I would agree, not really relevant.Slatersteven (talk) 12:21, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 20 November 2020

    say trump is no onger president and it is fake news 131.109.147.105 (talk) 15:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

     Not done Misuse of the edit request facility (next time please read the instructions). Also false, Trump is president until January 20. ―Mandruss  15:23, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Attempted Coup By Experts?

    So we just gonna go full conspiracy nuts? and also with proper sourcing thats not full blown left wing tds? How the mighty have fallen  :( Guitarguy2323 (talk) 15:47, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Side discussion about OP's choice of words. ―Mandruss  17:16, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Please read wp:soap.Slatersteven (talk) 15:54, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Easy there. The OP is objecting to the recent addition of content that certainly bears objection. That they failed to use the correct words like UNDUE doesn't make it soapbox. ―Mandruss  16:01, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    NO they use words like "So we just gonna go full conspiracy nuts".Slatersteven (talk) 16:08, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Again, wrong words, but not soapbox in intent. The content was added less than three hours ago and I guarantee this discussion would have been started soon anyway. ―Mandruss  16:13, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I can only judge by the words they use (such as "with proper sourcing thats not full blown left wing tds") and not my mind reading ability.Slatersteven (talk) 16:15, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    But this is not the correct place to discuss their actions, so will stop and just asked them to reword this.Slatersteven (talk) 16:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    The current phrasing in the article's lead is less than optimal, but the intended meaning is "described by experts as an attempted coup". From the way you wrote your heading, it's unclear that you understand that. (Not that I would expect that to change your objection.) ―Mandruss  17:29, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I have removed the content pending consensus to include it.[29]Mandruss  17:48, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I think it is clear this has been said, by a lot of sources, and no valid reason for exclusion has been provided.Slatersteven (talk) 17:53, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    I agree with Slatersteven. This is very well sourced and it's hardly disputed that it has been described as an attempted coup. It is also highly notable, as no President has ever done something even remotely similar. It certainly belongs in the article. (On a side-note, it's less than 24h since I warned the OP for abusing WP:SOAP in a different article). Jeppiz (talk) 17:57, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Comes off as WP:WEASEL. Also the sources should be a bit better for such a bit claim. For example unattributed opinion columns are not great. The first Washington Post article comes close but punts it with a "according to historians and other experts". Everything else are just opinion columns. PackMecEng (talk) 18:02, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    There is exactly no valid process reason to revert a perfectly legitimate BRD challenge – regardless of positions on the content question. Content and process are two different things. I've already asked Jeppiz to self-revert at their UTP. ―Mandruss  18:05, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    Mandruss, I am using my one revert for today to remove it. Jeppiz, calling Mandruss WP:POINTY in an edit summary is not WP:AGF. Mind WP:BRD on this highly sensitive WP:BLP. 18:13, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
    He was referring to the OP in this thread.Slatersteven (talk) 18:15, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Slatersteven, if that's the case, it was not clear to me, which reasserts the importance of clear good faith edit summaries. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    "but the objection by one WP:POINTY user" Mandruss did not raise the objection. Nor am I sure they have objected to it.Slatersteven (talk) 18:19, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    @Muboshgu: Jeppiz was calling Guitarguy2323 "pointy", not me, ignoring the fact that I had already added my objection to that of the "pointy" Guitarguy2323, whose implied objection per UNDUE should have been enough anyway. Contrary to Jeppiz's edit summary, we don't include disputed content pending consensus to omit it; that's bass-ackwards and Jeppiz has been around long enough to know that. As have a few other editors involved in this. ―Mandruss  18:21, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

    There are a ton of sources, look through this lot https://www.google.com/search?q=Donald+Trump+%2B+coup&rlz=1C1CHBD_en-GBGB925GB925&ei=nAW4X4C6F7PIxgO4i4CIDw&start=0&sa=N&ved=2ahUKEwiA-PWc25HtAhUzpHEKHbgFAPE4FBDy0wN6BAgHEDc&biw=1280&bih=824.Slatersteven (talk) 18:08, 20 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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