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The first part of the citation has been removed, though of course something can/should be said about the questionable tactics employed by Wikileaks concerning the redacting of private info. As it stood however the sentence was demonstrably false based on publication dates as minimal fact-checking would have shown.[[User:SashiRolls|SashiRolls]] ([[User talk:SashiRolls|talk]]) 14:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC) |
The first part of the citation has been removed, though of course something can/should be said about the questionable tactics employed by Wikileaks concerning the redacting of private info. As it stood however the sentence was demonstrably false based on publication dates as minimal fact-checking would have shown.[[User:SashiRolls|SashiRolls]] ([[User talk:SashiRolls|talk]]) 14:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC) |
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: You're correct to remove the first part of the first sentence. I assumed Pink News had gotten its dates correct without checking. [[User:Snooganssnoogans|Snooganssnoogans]] ([[User talk:Snooganssnoogans|talk]]) 15:03, 27 August 2016 (UTC) |
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Inaccurate Characterization of "Brexit" opinion...
Article contains a factually incorrect statement that Stein was "in favor of the UK leaving the EU." No where in the cited source is that opinion ever expressed by Stein or tied to Stein. On the contrary, Stein is quoted in the article as stating she was in favor of the UK remaining in the EU, and working to fix problems with the EU that led to anti-EU sentiment: "Before the Brexit vote I agreed with Jeremy Corbyn, Caroline Lucas and the UK Greens who supported staying in the EU but working to fix it, because the EU has many problems. They also recalled the problems that existed before the EU between European nations. The EU was created to fix those problems. " — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ckrachmer (talk • contribs) 17:12, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- She has completely changed her official statement on her website (without indicating that she made changes). There is a screenshot of what her official statement looked like when I edited it into this page here: http://www.forwardprogressives.com/green-party-jill-stein-busted-cover-up-praise-bigotry-driven-brexit/
- So yes, the wiki page should reflect both her immediate reaction and subsequent reversal. Thanks for pointing it out. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:24, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- So yes, the wiki page should not contain a factually incorrect statement that Stein was "in favor of the UK leaving the EU." as it still does because of your active refusal to let that be changed on "your" page.SashiRolls (talk) 08:25, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
Section on Education/Quantitive Easing
The quote from Jill Stein about quantitive easing being something like "a magic trick we don't need to understand" is authentic, but its use here connotes bias against Jill Stein, both in the manner in which it is inserted into this context, and the manner in which it is decontextualized from its original context. Quantitive easing is an economic method the details of which are publicly available online for anyone to read about and understand. The context in which Dr Stein called it a "magic trick" was meant simply to emphasize how effective and good she thought the policy was, whereas the use of the quote here implies that Jill Stein's policy makes no sense. I recommend the quote be deleted here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.228.167.176 (talk) 16:35, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
- That's part of her trying to explain how QE could be used to cancel student debt. If she fleshes out how in more detail, go ahead and add it. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:45, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
No mention in the education section that she is a Harvard Educated doctor who graduated at the top of her class. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DebbieKat (talk • contribs) 03:29, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
ties to Russia
This morning, I read this article "https://theintercept.com/2016/08/08/dems-tactic-of-accusing-adversaries-of-kremlin-ties-and-russia-sympathies-has-long-history-in-us' and related it with the wikipedia page a read a while ago.. I noticed there was an antagonism and I think the section concerning the December meeting with Putin in the wikipedia page is misleading:
The articles in its current form contains this sentence: "She met with president Putin in Moscow in December 2015 at a banquet celebrating the 10th anniversary of the Russian state propaganda network Russia Today.[141] While in Russia, Stein criticised U.S. foreign policy and the state of human rights in the U.S.; she did not criticize Russia's foreign policy or human rights in Russia"
What is said in that sentence is not corroborated by facts, Based on the video which is their only disclosed material/source of "Americablog.com", you cannot say the she "criticised U.S. foreign policy and the state of human rights in the U.S.; she did not criticise Russia's foreign policy or human rights in Russia".
This sentence is actually misleading, as it suggests Dr Stein is not critical towards Russia. However, she did publicly criticised Russia: "she criticised Russia for diverting scarce resources into military spending while its people suffered" Quote from a media outlet the_intercept (and not the blog..) (ref: https://theintercept.com/2016/08/08/dems-tactic-of-accusing-adversaries-of-kremlin-ties-and-russia-sympathies-has-long-history-in-us/). Finally, the word "propaganda" to describe RT has a negative tone.
Overall, if you want to report on her meeting with Putin in december 2015, the main message is 1) anti-militaristic attitude and 2) she's in favour of balance of power in international relations. As the election 2016 are getting close, all the sources and pages should be verified. Such a misleading part is not acceptable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Marcsoisfranc (talk • contribs) 19:14, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
I agree. This is one example of the systemic bias of the page that has not yet been corrected. SashiRolls (talk) 08:51, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Tax returns
Releasing a two-page summary of the tax returns for one year is generally not considered a release of tax returns. See, for instance, PolitiFact rating Sanders's claim that he has released his past tax returns as "false" for precisely this reason. http://www.politifact.com/truth-o-meter/statements/2016/apr/06/bernie-s/bernie-sanders-has-released-few-tax-returns-compar/ Snooganssnoogans (talk) 18:05, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
- Indeed, it is not a release of tax returns.VictoriaGraysonTalk 23:19, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
Releasing page 1 and 2 of your 1040 is the core of the tax report. It is sufficient to see how much was earned, who earned it and how. Look at your last tax return and you will see all the core info is on the first 2 pages. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AlejandroMS (talk • contribs) 20:33, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- The reliable source PolitiFact disagrees with you. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 20:38, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
NPOV template
The NPOV template is being added to this page.SashiRolls (talk) 11:56, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Zero reason to add this template. You just add it to any page where the consensus is against your ludicrous edits. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:11, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- another personal attack. SashiRolls (talk) 19:19, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
Editors also involved on Ajamu Baraka's page
For information, I would note that several of those involved here are also very active on her running mate's page (in particular Snoogansnoogans, Neutrality, and VictoriaGrayson). Cf. Ajamu Baraka There is currently an NPOV dispute on that page, concerning the inclusion of ad hominem attacks from articles titled:
- "What if the Green Party Stopped Being Kooky and Started Getting Real?"
- "Friends Don't Let Friends Vote for Jill Stein" (Tablet Magazine)
- "Stein Campaign Says Running Mate Didn’t Realize He Was Talking to and Being Republished By Holocaust Denier" (Gawker)
Anyone interested in Wikipedia neutrality is urged to look into the matter further.
Also, it is worth noting that User:Neutrality has been cited in an article at the Atlantic as the most prolific editor of Tim Kaine's page in the week preceding his nomination (30K of adds that week).
The Wikipedia page of Virginia Senator Tim Kaine [...] has seen 62 edits on Friday alone. There have been almost 90 edits over the past week. Many of them originate from a user called Neutrality, a longtime Wikipedia editor who has made more than 110,000 edits to the encyclopedia. [1] SashiRolls (talk) 01:20, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
- ^ Robinson Meyer and Graham Starr (July 22, 2016). "Is Wikipedia Foreshadowing Clinton's Vice Presidential Pick?". the Atlantic.
- Is there any point in your continued efforts to cast ridiculous aspersions not only on myself, but on other editors? Give it a rest. Neutralitytalk 01:24, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, the point is to warn people concerning this activism, using verifiable and reliable sources. You say I'm casting ridiculous aspersions on you. You have the right to respond: do you deny any of the items exposed above? If not, in what way are the claims made ridiculous? SashiRolls (talk) 09:55, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- In addition, it is worth noting that Neutrality has fought to remove a harmless introductory summary of Baraka's work published at TeleSUR, though he received the support of only one person (also an activist lobbying for inclusion of the ad hominem atttacks) at the Reliable sources noticeboard SashiRolls (talk) 10:33, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
For the first time, I decided to try to add more neutral language to the page, eliminating terms like "rhetoric" and "highly critical" which indicate an authorial point of view and within minutes Snooganssnoogans reached his daily three revert WP:3RR limit for this page.
An excellent example of biased editing is his revert of the following edit:
- Stein later
changededited her official statement on the resultoutcome(without indicating so on her website),sayingclarifying that "Before the Brexit vote I agreed with Jeremy Corbyn, Caroline Lucas and the UK Greens who supported staying in the EU but working to fix it."
In her original post, Stein had not indicated her position prior to the referendum; in the edited version she did. This is, by any standard, a clarification of her position not a change of position. The effort to slow down cleanup of the article has been duly noted. SashiRolls (talk) 11:55, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- You've done your best to turn Ajamu Baraka's page into a mess. Now you're here to rewrite text in the most pro-Stein fashion. You've again implied that everyone who does not describe your favored candidates in the most laudatory terms must have insincere intentions, so I guess we can expect that you've come here to turn this page into a mess as we ll. It is more descriptive to say that someone quickly deleted a tweet rather than just deleted it. 'Highly' is used several times on both Trump's and Clinton's pages. Your recommended edit on Brexit is ludicrious. The statement was drastically different between the two versions. First version was highly critical of the EU, considered Brexit a victory and said not a single nice thing about the EU or said anything that could be interpreted as supportive of the UK staying in the EU. The second version scrubbed the most pointed criticism of the EU, removed the statement that this was a victory and added that she supported the UK staying in the EU. Readers can decide for themselves whether this change is a "clarification" or Stein flip-flopping. Editors should not describe it unless reliable secondary sources can be found. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:09, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- I've taken the time to reread her two statements carefully (that is why this comment is later than the following one). In neither post does she speak about having a post-referendum position on whether Britain should stay in Europe or leave Europe, contrary to what you assert. Indeed, readers can decide for themselves on the truth of your assertions above. The main difference between the two statements is that she indicates that prior to the referendum she supported the position of Corbyn & the Greens and makes clear that she will continue to support them. SashiRolls (talk) 12:52, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
You have made 4 reverts in the last half an hour, sir. 11:53 (deletion of content), 11:25, 11:24, and 11:22. This is a violation of the WP:3RR rule. SashiRolls (talk) 12:13, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- The intention was to do those reverts in one edit (as can be seen from how I reverted those edits over a short period). I'm not skilled enough to revert several edits at once. I don't think I violated the spirit of the rule. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:20, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- You wished to revert an 11:34 edit at 11:22? I'm confused. SashiRolls (talk) 12:32, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- All reverts except that one was intended to be part of the one revert. "Stein has made unequivocally clear that she does not believe that vaccines cause autism" should be dropped. Her clarified position is "I'm not aware of any evidence that vaccines cause autism." Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:45, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
Namiba adds the supposed position of another candidate
I can't revert. This edit clearly has no business on this page: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jill_Stein&type=revision&diff=734304767&oldid=734304253. There are two problems:
(i) Trump's and Clinton's pages don't compare and contrast their positions with those of other candidates. After all, the pages are about those individuals, not other people. (ii) The editor adds a statement from 2008 without adding her current position on the subject. This suggests that the editor has insincere intentions.
Please revert. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:16, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
Editor reinterprets Stein's clear Brexit statements
SashiRolls has already shown him/herself to have the worst reading comprehension I've ever encountered on wikipedia, and is now here to turn this page into a garbled mess. Stein in no unclear terms talks about Brexit favorably in her original statement, calling it a "victory" and saying absolutely nothing that can be interpreted as being in favor of the EU or the UK leaving the EU. SashiRolls has now rewritten and reinterpreted Stein's meaning to whitewash her original statement.
- after violating the WP:3RR rule, you have now violated the WPP:NPA rule as you have done on the other page. SashiRolls (talk) 15:52, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
This is what the sentence correctly looked like: "Having initially spoken in favor of the UK leaving the European Union in her official statement on the referendum outcome, Stein later changed her official statement (without indicating so on her website), saying "Before the Brexit vote I agreed with Jeremy Corbyn, Caroline Lucas and the UK Greens who supported staying in the EU but working to fix it."
- correctly? please. Again, nowhere does she indicate that she supports the UK leaving or staying in the union. Stating that something is a victory for those who oppose EU austerity policies is not saying that she is in favor of the UK leaving the EU.
This is SashiRolls removing any and all substance from her remarks, adding instead a bunch of weasel words: "Having initially expressing understanding concerning the Brexit vote because of the European austerity policy, Stein later clarified her position, adding that "Before the Brexit vote I agreed with Jeremy Corbyn, Caroline Lucas and the UK Greens who supported staying in the EU but working to fix it."
- another violation of the WP:NPA policy in this and the following paragraph. SashiRolls (talk) 15:52, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
She did not just "express understanding". She did not "clarify" the statement. This is getting ludicrious.Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:58, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- She expresses understanding, she did not call for Brexit... "The austerity policies pushed aggressively by the EU bankers in the wake of the 2008 economic collapse has harmed the economies of European nations. It has also led to the kind of divisions between the working class and immigrants that fueled the Brexit. The increase in anti-immigrant, anti-Muslim and anti-refugee sentiment expanded because of the EU's economic policies, and was a key driver in support of the UK's departure from the European Union." SashiRolls (talk) 15:52, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
The page is now in better condition, in my opinion. I hope it is easier to read than it was when I arrived and appropriate weight is given to the different positions. As things stood, we had two factual errors unsupported in the source material (Jill Stein did not indicate that she thought the UK should leave the EU, nor did she say that she did not believe "issues" with vaccines had not been addressed, just before a quote showing what she actually said), many formulations showing authorial interpretation, undue weight being placed on minor sources (tweets) and on, decontextualized citations (the Wifi in schools discussion in particular, in which no mention was made of the fact that Stein was discussing the drive to computerize kindergarten education), unnecessary repetitions, impossibly long paragraphs, etc. I have humbly tried to improve both the style and neutrality of the entry. I do think that Snooganssnoogans might consider stepping back from this page for a while, as I had no intention of irritating him by cleaning the page up in terms of style and neutrality. SashiRolls (talk) 15:52, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- ^ "Green Candidate Jill Stein Isn't Anti-Vaccine". Young Turks. Retrieved 2016-08-13.
Editor is ruining this page with nonsense. Please revert.
Pinging regular editors to this page and other politicians' pages again to quickly settle this disruptive editing: User: Neutrality, User: VictoriaGrayson, User: Activist, User: Volunteer_Marek, User: Gouncbeatduke, User: SkepticalRaptor. SashiRolls and Namiba have in a series of edits over the day added a bunch of nonsense and ridiculous interpretations of statements. It's getting difficult to count all the nonsense that needs to reverted at this point (I've reached my 3RR quota). The last few edits dubiously interpret her wi-fi statement and describe them in vague terms (nobody knows the term "wireless fidelity", the wi-fi statement falls under 'science' not 'education'). Snooganssnoogans (talk) 14:08, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- The edits are so ridiculous and extensive that they should be reverted in whole until the user gets consensus for them on the talk page. The page is now a mess. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 14:25, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Is this yet another personal attack? :( SashiRolls (talk) 15:53, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
I agree these edits are not following Wikipedia policy, as is the usual case with SashiRolls. See the talk page of Ajamu Baraka for example.VictoriaGraysonTalk 17:06, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Interesting. No discussion of the relevant points above; nothing, just a global revert/rollback, reinserting two factual errors, leaving dated information, reverting to text which refers to Jill Stein's statements as "rhetoric". This is Wikipedia neutrality? I guess we know what the worth of wikipedia is. Will file a dispute for what it's worth to see if we can have any faith in the neutrality of these pages or if official wikipedia policy is to bully editors making good faith edits and do nothing about repeated personal attacks. SashiRolls (talk) 19:17, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
When not to remove NPOV template A template should not be removed if any of the following applies:
- When the issue has not yet been resolved;
- When there is ongoing activity or discussion related to the template issue;
- When you do not understand the issues raised by the template;
- When you simply disagree with the template (seek consensus first);
- You have been paid to edit the article or have some other conflict of interest.
1, 2, & 4 definitely apply. I suspect 3 does as well, because you didn't have the time to look into the changes, reading the sources carefully as I did. As for 5, only you can know that. SashiRolls (talk) 19:34, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- I don't see the word "rhetoric" anywhere in the revision I reverted to. I also performed a search via CTRL+F.VictoriaGraysonTalk 19:45, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Very strange, you rolled back all of my edits and yet the word "rhetoric" which I had changed somehow also disappeared since yesterday [2] (ctrl-f)
- Could I ask for the wiki version of the page prior to your rollback that I can store it on my own personal mediawiki during the dispute process please (or are my hours of work just lost forever?) (I have mediawiki installed on my own server for my students.) I can provide an email address for that purpose, if there is a private way to communicate. Thank you. SashiRolls (talk) 19:58, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- I didn't rollback all your edits. Please me more careful with your accusations.VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:46, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- But you did roll back a significant number of my edits, which seems to be against wikipedia policy (I just learned this in fact, looking through the page of someone who thanked me for posting the following section "Censored material")
- I didn't rollback all your edits. Please me more careful with your accusations.VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:46, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Please keep in mind these things when going to use rollback:
- Rollback should never be used to edit war.
- Rollback should be used to revert clear cases of vandalism only, and not good faith edits.
- Why are you risking your rollback and reviewer status to prevent correction of erroneous information on this page? Please understand, I have no desire for you to get in trouble, I'm only looking for neutrality. SashiRolls (talk) 00:06, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- I didn't use the rollback function at all.VictoriaGraysonTalk 01:07, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK. I guess it was a manual cut and paste rollback then (here). Like I said, I'm not looking to cause trouble, I'm looking for honest responses to my questions below (the purpose of the talk page as I understand it is to reach compromise positions.) You stated below that none of the references cited were reliable sources, and yet 5 of the 6 were already contained in the article. In fact, I agree with you regarding all of the sources on the Brexit question: the fact that she edited her page does not seem to me to be a scandal, especially given that the only significant change was to make clear that she shared the position of the UK Greens and Corbyn prior to the vote (i.e. Remain). Normally, on a talk page, there is some negotiation, an attempt to find a compromise solution, and yet I haven't seen much effort to reach consensus on the part of the three editors who have voted so far. Could I ask you to be more specific, please, as to what specifically you find as being wrong with my edit, since clearly it's not a question of "reliable sources" since I introduced only one source. Thank you for participating in a constructive way in an effort to reach consensus. SashiRolls (talk) 01:20, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
Field cricket Gryllus pennsylvanicus
- I didn't use the rollback function at all.VictoriaGraysonTalk 01:07, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- ...
Censored material
I will attempt to reconstruct briefly the major changes made to the page, then reverted without any comment by Victoria Grayson, below.
Technology in Education (Wi-Fi + computers in Kindergarten)
Necessary context was provided for the much-cited quotation concerning wi-fi in schools. While this was originally an education question, only the health aspect / wifi aspect of the discussion has been cherry-picked from the video (currently citing "The World According to Matthew" rather than the original video posted by "Safe Teach for Schools"). What is currently on the page is in gray below.
In a much-discussed interaction with parents and teachers, Stein stated that she felt the move towards computerized education in kindergarten was good neither for young children's cognitive nor social development, saying that "We should be moving away from screens at all levels of education."[1] She argues that such a policy is not good for teachers, children, or communities, but does benefit device manufacturers.[1] Her position on wi-fi in the classroom is likewise critical of device manufacturers:
We should not be subjecting kid’s brains especially to that... and we don’t follow this issue in our country, but in Europe where they do [...] they have good precautions about wireless. Maybe not good enough [...] it’s very hard to study this stuff. You know, we make guinea pigs out of whole populations and then we discover how many die. This is the paradigm for how public health works in this country. [...] Our research institutions, as well, need to be publicly funded and publicly accountable, not for the device manufacturers, not sponsored by the pharmaceutical companies. [1]
I would like to see the education section improved, education is not just university. Given the strong contrast with Clinton's proximity to Google in education (which you can see it subtly in her discussion with Christine Lagarde [3] from time to time... surprised this link isn't on the HRC page.) In any case, could someone make a suggestion of how to add the above quote to education, while still leaving the shock quote on wifi in "health" to satisfy everyone? SashiRolls (talk) 13:32, 16 August 2016 (UTC)
Insofar as there have been no arguments presented concerning this issue below, I have reinserted the text. The fact is that both CNN and "The World according to Matthew" (snoog's original source) cherry-pick the citation and embed the original video, leaving out any context from their representations of what was said. (I have also updated the text in the "health" section to eliminate OR (the claim that Jill Stein is opposed to wifi is too strong a claim: "opposed to" suggests a policy position rather than a response to a question. SashiRolls (talk) 08:52, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Inaccuracies concerning her stance on vaccines
This paragraph took a lot of work because it was necessary to split it up into several paragraphs for clarity, and a number of minor changes were made to eliminate subtle bias. As the text stands, it is clear that wikipedia's position is that Stein is to be distrusted on this issue. My version left all of the facts and references but added a more neutral tone.
clear contradiction between wiki-voice and citation
Currently existing text:
In an interview with the Washington Post, Stein stated that "vaccines have been absolutely critical in ridding us of the scourge of many diseases," but said that not all "issues" or "questions" around vaccines had been addressed or resolved.[160] She said, "There were concerns among physicians about what the vaccination schedule meant, the toxic substances like mercury which used to be rampant in vaccines. There were real questions that needed to be addressed. I think some of them at least have been addressed. I don’t know if all of them have been addressed.
My solution was to let the quote stand on its own without the contradictory text in Wiki-voice.
Jill Stein's position on vaccines, clearly and unequivocally stated
The following evidence that Jill Stein has clearly and unequivocally stated she thinks there is no link between vaccines & autism was summarily deleted without discussion despite the citation being on the talk page (#20 bottom 11:34 edit) above.
Stein has made unequivocally clear that she does not believe that vaccines cause autism, comparing the media frenzy around the issue to the birther issue used against Obama. [2]
Inaccurate characterization of "Brexit" opinion
As noted by another editor on the 28th of June (see #5 above), and by me in the talk above (#22), there is a factual error concerning Jill Stein's position on Brexit. I corrected this with the following text:
Having initially expressing understanding concerning the Brexit vote because of the European austerity policy,[3][4][5][6] Stein later clarified her position, adding that "Before the Brexit vote I agreed with Jeremy Corbyn, Caroline Lucas and the UK Greens who supported staying in the EU but working to fix it."[7]
Nowhere in the original text does she say she is in favor of the UK leaving the EU, as two editors have noted on the talk page already. As it currently stands the text has been reverted to:
Having initially spoken in favor of the UK leaving the European Union in her official statement on the referendum outcome, Stein later changed her official statement (without indicating so on her website), saying "Before the Brexit vote I agreed with Jeremy Corbyn, Caroline Lucas and the UK Greens who supported staying in the EU but working to fix it.
"celebratory" is much better, as it's not wrong to say that a lot of the Left (and Right) in Europe had mixed emotions (including euphoria) about Brexit for differing reasons, after watching the Greek referendum (and the French one before it). Given the size of the drama, I don't suppose that the two "victories" in her opening paragraph were just neutral sportscasting.
Thanks for improving this Snooganssnoogans. SashiRolls (talk) 19:37, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Conclusion
While these represent only the major changes that stick out in my mind, because of the severity of their impartiality, there were others as well. I grant that there may be points at which a word or two could/should be changed in my formulations, however I believe that in each case reasonable people, having done the work to study the original texts (in the case of Brexit), or read the text carefully, will agree that they represent improvements.
I would ask that these edits be restored in the interest of impartiality. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Action on this will restore my faith in the Wikipedia process (and probably of those who might land on Jill Stein's page or this talk page). That confidence has been badly damaged by this rollback and by the numerous personal attacks I have endured above in an effort to override an editor who seems unwilling to compromise despite the presentation of clear evidence. SashiRolls (talk) 20:54, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
NB: reference #2 is new. The rest are already in the article (though #1 is embedded in a blog)
- ^ a b c ""We Should Not Be Subjecting Children's Brains To Wi-Fi [&] Screens In Schools. It's Not OK" Jill Stein". Safe Teach for Schools.
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(help) - ^ "Green Candidate Jill Stein Isn't Anti-Vaccine". Young Turks. Retrieved 2016-08-13.
- ^ "The original, pro-Brexit statement".
- ^ "Jill Stein calls Britain Vote a "Wake-up Call"".
- ^ "Jill Stein calls Britain Vote a "Wake-up Call"".
- ^ "Green Party Hero Jill Stein Busted Trying to Cover Up Her Praise of Bigotry-Driven Brexit". 2016-06-27. Retrieved 2016-06-30.
- ^ "Stein calls Britain Vote a Wake-up Call". Retrieved 2016-06-25.
Request for Comment
Should some or all of the material listed in the previous section (censored material) be restored? SashiRolls (talk) 21:12, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose None of the sources are WP:RS.VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:44, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- The only new source is #2 (a video of Jill Stein speaking (which would seem to me to be a very reliable source concerning what she actually said)). In fact one of the sources of video (as noted above) is the same as the one currently cited, except that it is not embedded on the site "The World According to Matthew" (with the added spin of the Matthew in question) but goes directly to the source (video posted by Safe Teach for Schools. So it would seem you might be saying that the sources currently contained in the article are not WP:RS? SashiRolls (talk) 22:23, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose (i.e., exclude all). The excluded text doesn't improve the article and in some cases is confusing, misleading, inaccurate. Neutralitytalk 22:12, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- which cases? This one? clear contradiction between wiki voice and citation SashiRolls (talk) 22:23, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, comment is allowed on this page (updated my vote to take a picture) ^^ SashiRolls (talk) 23:23, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose (i.e., exclude all). For all the reasons I've already expressed. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 22:45, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- I sincerely thank you for not attacking me personally this time. SashiRolls (talk) 22:56, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose Unreliable sources should not be used. While Stein is not the best known candidate, there are sufficient reliable secondary sources for use in the article. TFD (talk) 01:56, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input, though I do not understand it. (note that with the exception of the video on vaccines I added no sources, so you seem to be suggesting that the sources already in the article should be eliminated?) SashiRolls (talk) 05:11, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose people on HRC's payroll need to eat, too; we cannot risk having their children starve. Have some compassion. 174.22.231.109 (talk) 03:31, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input. You're right; I'm being heartless. ^^ SashiRolls (talk) 05:09, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose (i.e., exclude all). For reasons already stated above, including "confusing, misleading, inaccurate." Gouncbeatduke (talk) 01:09, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- But, as above there is not one single concrete response indicating what is "confusing, misleading, or inaccurate". Could you be specific please? Thank you. SashiRolls (talk) 08:39, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
I would like to add here one of the most balanced perspectives I read during the discussion of another Request for Comment on Stein's running mate's page (without attribution, but with a link to the discussion): "RfCs are supposed to be discussions to reach consensus, not votes, correct?" Cf. RfC discussion SashiRolls (talk) 11:38, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
In this spirit I would like to particularly thank TFD for their careful comments on the Reliable Sources Noticeboard, which I will link to but not cite (as I don't want to inadvertently misrepresent the views presented there). I will note that the Snopes article on the question qualifies as "False" the claim that "Green Party presidential candidate Dr. Jill Stein has stated that she opposes the use of vaccines." noting that "We contacted Dr. Jill Stein's campaign for clarification on her position regarding vaccinations, and while we did not receive an immediate response, Stein shared our article and tweeted to proclaim that 'of course I support vaccinations'". This is in contrast to the current text in the Wikipedia article which seeks to muddy the waters. SashiRolls (talk) 12:35, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- To sum up what I've learned so far, both VictoriaGrayson and TFD think that the unreliable sources (that were in the article before my reverted edit and continue to be in the article after my reverted edit) should not be there. Snooganssnoogans has just added yet another tweet to the page. Based on what I've read above from TFD, tweets should not be considered WP:RS since they are primary sources? Thank you all for taking the time to participate in a debate on the talk page; this is helpful, because it helps people have confidence that there are no Conflicts of Interest at play seeing how forthcoming people are in their comments and that the principles espoused are uniformly applied by those who revert. I apologize for being so slow to understand... Could anyone be more specific in their comments regarding the censored material above, what exactly is wrong with it? VictoriaGrayson? I'm afraid the
lastIP voter doesn't seem too convinced of our wikipedian neutrality, which is honestly sad :( given that we do so strive for Neutrality that some of us have even written it into our usernames. Let's show the world that wikipedian spirit!! SashiRolls (talk) 15:20, 14 August 2016 (UTC)- Primary sources are not necessarily unreliable, but their use presents two problems: we are not allowed to interpret them but must use the interpretations provided in secondary sources and we need secondary sources to establish their significance. TFD (talk) 16:01, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK, I very much appreciate your response, TFD! (I suspected you might be the one to answer.) To return to the example of the only source that I actually added to the page, what is your opinion of its use?
- Primary sources are not necessarily unreliable, but their use presents two problems: we are not allowed to interpret them but must use the interpretations provided in secondary sources and we need secondary sources to establish their significance. TFD (talk) 16:01, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- ^ "Green Candidate Jill Stein Isn't Anti-Vaccine". Young Turks. Retrieved 2016-08-13.
- I identified this as an independent source which is both a primary source regarding what Jill Stein said, but a secondary source given the comments of the interviewer (and Cenk Uygur at the end of the video), who both say that her statement is unequivocally clear. My use of her comment about the "birther" scandal seemed to fit the definition of appropriate use of a primary source given at Wikipedia... "Primary sources may only be used on Wikipedia to make straightforward, descriptive statements that any educated person—with access to the source but without specialist knowledge—will be able to verify are directly supported by the source."
- What do you think? SashiRolls (talk) 16:28, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- The Young Turks is not by any stretch a reliable source. That one of their hosts thinks that she's been unequivocally clear on the issue does not add anything to the article. The article already has extensive coverage of Stein's comments on vaccines, and context and clarification by reliable sources, such as Washington Post and the Guardian. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:11, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- You are showing that you are completely biased with your statement given the video in question (below), you realize. Any (un)educated person can see that Cenk Ugyur's interpretation of Jill Stein's "no" when asked "Do you believe vaccines cause autism?" is directly supported by the primary source (Jill Stein being interviewed saying "no" to this question). This is very similar to your argument for misreading her statements concerning Brexit above (here and here). I mean no disrespect by saying this, I am merely calling a cat a cat, as we say in French.SashiRolls (talk) 17:20, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- The Young Turks is not by any stretch a reliable source. That one of their hosts thinks that she's been unequivocally clear on the issue does not add anything to the article. The article already has extensive coverage of Stein's comments on vaccines, and context and clarification by reliable sources, such as Washington Post and the Guardian. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:11, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- When a candidate has clarified her position on an issue (there is a whole paragraph in the article outlining her public statements on vaccines - which are far from being unequivocally clear), we should generally not rely on simple "yes" or "no" answers, and say this "makes it unequivocally clear". I would be fine with adding a simple "In a later interview ([insert date]), when asked [insert question asked by Young Turks], Stein answered "no"". The only who misread her Brexit statement is you. As I've said before, the worst reading comprehension I've ever encountered on wikipedia. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:50, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK. So you agree that this is a Reliable Source and that in fact you do NOT "oppose all". Thank you. Next, concerning your personal attack concerning Brexit. You have stated that I have the worst reading comprehension you have ever encountered on Wikipedia. This is an assertion that should be easy to prove. You claim Jill Stein stated she was in favor of the UK leaving the EU in her original statement (here and here as well as in your prose on her page). Could you please provide textual evidence for that claim, so that others can see how bad my reading comprehension is. Thank you for your time. SashiRolls (talk) 18:00, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- I have repeatedly explained it. I have zero interest in rehashing this discussion with you, which will go nowhere. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 18:07, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
Please note, what is requested is not an explanation, but textual evidence that justifies your call for a reversion of my edit. I know that you cannot provide it, because she says nothing of the kind. I understand that you, personally, could have misunderstood what she wrote, because she talks about a victory for those who oppose austerity, but nowhere does she say that she was in favor of the UK leaving the EU, as I and another user have pointed out. Yet, you called for a reversion and User:VictoriaGrayson complied. Then, you, User:VictoriaGrayson, and User:Neutrality all voted explicitly against correcting your error as well as including the citation you now admit has a place on the page. What's up with that Snooganssnoogans? We're supposed to all be care-bears making the world a better place with our impartial edits, aren't we? SashiRolls (talk) 18:24, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- The edits you just did (referencing the talk page) are a perfect example of your horrid reading comprehension and disregard of consensus. This is presumably why everyone opposes your edits in their entirety. Give you tentative support for one small edit and you run away with it (citing support) and turn the article into a mess again. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:34, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK, "your beach" as Fletch said years ago while having a gun held to his head. If you are intent on ensuring there is an anti-Stein bias on her wiki page, requiring people to request your "approval" to make changes (because you have Victoria Grayson & Neutrality backing you up for whatever their personal reasons), that's your business... I know when I am beat. I'll be contacting some admins concerning your personal attacks, and I'll leave it at that. It's obvious wikipedia tolerates WP:COI, with certain requirements, and ordinary bias. I admit that I am not patient enough (since I am not paid to edit) to continue this effort. Congratulations. You win.
- The edit to which you objected, in the interest of full disclosure, lest anyone think you are correct that I am distorting the verifiable truth about the citations in any way (I was toning down the current undue prominence given to the polemical citation in a 100 word squib written about a tweetstorm)...
- In a short article discussing these tweets at Forbes, Emily Willingham described Stein's statements on vaccines as "using dog whistle terms and equivocations bound to appeal to the “antivaccine” constituency".[1] In a later interview, at the Green Party convention, Stein stated that she did not believe that vaccines caused autism, and compared the media frenzy around the question to the birther issue which had been used against Barack Obama in 2008.[2]SashiRolls (talk) 19:52, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- ^ Willingham, Emily. "Jill Stein Sort Of Answers The Autism-Vaccine Question And No One Is Happy". Retrieved 2016-08-01.
- ^ "Green Candidate Jill Stein Isn't Anti-Vaccine". Young Turks. Retrieved 2016-08-13.
Doesn't seem neutral
Compared to other third party candidates this election, particularly Gary Johnson's, this page does not seem neutral. It contains whole paragraphs about Duverger's Law and how third party candidates affect elections, with little mention of Stein. None of this is on any other third party candidate's page, and it certainly doesn't appear on Gary Johnson's. That doesn't seem fair at all. It also links to articles with titles like "Friends Don't Let Friends Vote for Jill Stein" and overanalyzes every single issue in ways that do not appear even on Gary Johnson's, or even Hillary's page, such as when Stein has edited a Twitter post. And when Stein has been asked point-blank to clarify issues, such as when the tv show The Young Turks asked her point blank about vaccines, these sources are never used: https://www.facebook.com/TheYoungTurks/videos/10153832109549205/ Instead, the entry about vaccines on her page quotes other people talking about vaccines and how candidates should (or should not) approach them with little mention of Stein. It just seems that the page was written to discourage people from voting for Stein instead of being written in a neutral way such as the Gary Johnson page. Caladonia (talk) 14 August 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for the response above Caladonia, we're trying to take the page back from its current "owner", but there seems to be active opposition to there being a neutral page on Jill Stein on wikipedia. If you want to help, I would encourage you to sign your comment (permalink) and vote in the Request for Comment below. To see the full extent of the censorship, you may wish to see the section "Censored material" here. There is also comment on this issue at the Reliable Sources Noticeboard, and I have likewise posted the issue to the Neutral Point of View Noticeboard though it has not yet received comment there. Thanks again!SashiRolls (talk) 08:22, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- User:Caladonia, as someone who has edited on Trump's main article, Clinton's main article, the positions article of Trump, the positions article of Clinton, Pence's main article and Kaine's main article, let me assure that context behind positions and claims are all over those pages and there is nothing inconsistent between Stein's page and those pages (just see all the fact-checks, inputs by relevant academics, context provided by reliable news sources and so forth). If anything, those pages contain more critiques and damning context than this article, due to the extensive coverage those politicians have received. I have rarely if ever edited on Johnson's page, so I can't vouch for it. See the talk on "Editor removes reliable secondary sources about candidate's claims (inconsistent with other politicians' pages)" from this page where I substantiate those claims. Regarding the TYT interview, as I've stated before, I'm fine (and probably everyone else is) with saying "In a later interview ([insert date]), when asked [insert question asked by Young Turks], Stein answered "no"". Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:43, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- Actions speak louder than words dear Snoog, if you're fine with it, then please do it!
- Could you also indicate why you are opposed to adding that she compared the media frenzy around the question to the birther issue which had been used against Barack Obama in 2008? After all, Wikipedia does have a "birther" page, so there is pretty clear precedent for writing about this sort of smear campaign on Wikipedia. I appreciate any effort you will make to discuss the issue below after having deleted the content without comment several times now. SashiRolls (talk) 18:29, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- I can add both. Give it two minutes. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 18:38, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- My 1001st post is thank you. I'm turning over a new leaf. Thank you very much. :)
- Any comment on the other issues raised, like the undue weight given to Duverger's law here? (I did specifically note that the POV of this section was contested before the article was vandalized, based on the solid logic above.) SashiRolls (talk) 18:33, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- Duverger's Law has already been discussed and settled on the talk page. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 18:38, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
ps: ctrl-f ;) SashiRolls (talk) 21:27, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is addressed in "Editors continue to remove inconvenient content and context". Snooganssnoogans (talk) 21:38, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
Twitter & Reddit sourcing
Just to follow up on Snooganssnoogans's most recent edit in light of recent discussions, is it generally considered good practice to be adding tweets to politician's webpages? (I think I have understood that the consensus above (as well as on the Reliable sources noticeboard) is that this is generally not a good practice, since it is difficult to establish what is notable and what is not. SashiRolls (talk) 19:05, 14 August 2016 (UTC) Do other editors consider that this particular tweet is "notable" enough to be included on her page, and if so why?
"On 12 August 2016, the day when US-backed Syrian Democratic Forces captured Manbij from ISIL, Stein tweeted an apology to Syrians, "To Syrians who escaped Manbij because of U.S.-led forces, I'm sorry our weapons terrorized you for two years."
I personally don't think this is particularly notable, she's just pointing out that the weapons the US brought into the region fell into the hands of ISIS and that she feels bad about that fact. SashiRolls (talk) 18:52, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
Footnotes 95, 98, 99, 100, 105, 107, 112, 135, 140, 147, 156, 167 are either Twitter or Reddit. SashiRolls (talk) 19:05, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- There is nothing wrong with primary sources. For politicians who are not covered extensively in reliable sources, it may be necessary to use primary sources. I do think that tweet is notable, and that it reflects her take on US support for rebel groups in Syria, something which the positions section has not yet reflected. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:24, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- The tweet should therefore be restored. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:25, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
x Snooganssnoogans' page on Jill Stein x Moving forward constructively
(subject edited 19 Aug 2016 01:33 following Victoria Grayson's example)
Since June 8, 2016 this page has (quite largely) been owned by Snooganssnoogans. A cursory look at the history of the last 1250 edits makes clear that he is by far the dominant editor on this page and that anybody with whom he disagrees will be reverted (with the aid of his ally Victoria Grayson). There is an open "request for comment" where his most recent elimination of dissent is detailed. In general, Snooganssnoogans wishes to paint Stein in the most unflattering light possible and suppresses evidence that conflicts with this project. Since copyright information and the author's name generally figure at the front of print articles and books, it seems only appropriate to place this warning here, since the previous claim that this article read like a campaign brochure is far from correct today. At the moment the article has a number of factual errors or examples that have been pointed out to him by several different editors on the talk page (here, here, here, here, here, here, here, and here) but Snooganssnoogans, along with a few other editors (including an administrator and a person with rollback privileges (Cf. here)), do not seem to wish to relinquish any control over this article. There is also comment on this issue at the Reliable Sources Noticeboard, and it has likewise been posted to the Neutral Point of View Noticeboard though it has not received comment there as of this writing.
"If someone else is claiming "ownership" of a page, you can bring it up on the associated talk page." (Wikipedia: Ownership of content)
In the past few days, some constructive work has been going on, thanks to all involved. I would like to back off of my tone above. Really. Then I stumble across a sentence about a gorilla... (I'm sorry if that feels snarky, but to understand, please check out the page diff here (exchange between VictoriaGrayson & Eleutherius, linked to by Snooganssnoogans to see this has been discussed over and over again, and yet somehow has never dropped) Let's make a better page without any gorillas on it. Here was the last time that he removed the context concerning the poll, while saying he was adding a poll in the comment summary.SashiRolls (talk) 01:33, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
UNHACK this page, please
Below is the revert history for Victoria Grayson and Snooganssnoogans.
02 Aug -- 22 Aug 2016
Snoog: 22:32 Aug 22 diff, 12:30 Aug 22, 11:48 Aug 22 diff, 12:20 Aug 21 diff, 15:40 Aug 20 (diff), 13:05 Aug 19, 13:02 Aug 19, 21:59 Aug 18, 01:36 Aug 18, 21:00 Aug 17, 20:44 Aug 17, 11:34 Aug 13, 11:25 Aug 13, 11:24 Aug 13, 17:29 Aug 11, 00:28 Aug 9, 18:51 Aug 7, 13:51 Aug 7, 12:24 Aug 5, 09:47 Aug 5, 09:38, Aug 5, 14:03 Aug 3, 21:32 Aug 2, 21:30 Aug 2, 21:28 Aug 2
(Four different editors have been the target of this warring.)
VG: 04:28 Aug 20 diff, 03:15 Aug 18 (Snoog over limit), 17:09 Aug 13 (Snoog over limit), 15:51 Aug 9.
Neutrality restores the gorilla to the page after consensus is reached to remove it: diff SashiRolls (talk) 14:14, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
Please see the discussion on a potential WP:ANI topic opened below. This was originally suggested by NeilN here.
Citations removed
VictoriaGrayson has redirected the bias tag here, so I'll include a few examples recently deleted from the page in the process of clean-up:
- On Mother's Day 2016, Stein suggested that Clinton did not "reflect the values of being a mother".[1]
- A PPP poll released on 30 July 2016 showed her trailing behind a non-existent candidate called "Independent Harambe" (referring to the dead gorilla) with 5% versus 2% in general election polling.[2]
- In July 2016, Trump stated that a vote for Stein would be good for him: "I think a vote for Stein would be good — that’s the Green Party. Because I figure anyone voting for Stein is gonna be for Hillary. So I think vote for Stein is fine."[under discussion][3]
The last was more difficult to decide then the first two, so if anyone would like to argue for its notability, they are welcome too. She also has added a pro-Green bias tag. That is her right.
The most recent discussion is farther down on the talk page.
- ^ "Internet excoriates Green Party's Jill Stein for calling Hillary bad mom - AMERICAblog News". 2016-05-08. Retrieved 2016-07-19.
- ^ "Clinton Image Improves Following Conventions; Leads Trump by 5" (PDF).
- ^ Neidig, Harper (2016-07-28). "Trump: A vote for the Green Party helps me". Retrieved 2016-07-28.
SashiRolls (talk) 22:23, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
- * I'm fine with removing Stein's charge that Clinton does not reflect the values of being a mother. It did get RS coverage and is part of the campaign but does not deserve a lot of attention.
- * If this article is going to contain polling data (like the pages of Trump and Clinton), then it is relevant to put her polling numbers in context. That she fails to poll ahead of fictional independent candidates is relevant. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 22:04, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- There's really no need for such "context" here. People understand what 2% polling means. I'm sure Stein supporters could also point to examples of where she polled ahead of so-and-so in a particular poll. Choosing a poll in which she was farcically polled against a name given sympathetic coverage in recent media is cherry-picking and clearly undue. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 22:46, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, there's a link on the page to the discussion that points out equally unflattering and weird comparisons with her opponents. The number of people polled who considered that a specific candidate could, in fact, be Lucifer, was also in the source material. You linked to that context earlier in discussion, Snoogansnoogans
- Source: page two. To fact-check that another candidate is thought to be Lucifer by 33% of those polled, ctrl-f) ... SashiRolls (talk) 00:40, 19 August 2016 (UTC) this is not noteworthy or Wikipedia-worthy IMO. SashiRolls (talk) 01:58, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- * Trump's statement about the third party candidate is clearly relevant as part of the campaign. It is the one time that a candidate of the two major parties has spoken about the Green Party. Hard to argue that it's undue. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 22:04, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- I agree on the significance of the Trump statement, but there's no reason for a full quote. Let's replace it with "Trump himself has stated that a vote for Stein would be good for him because it likely takes away a vote for Hillary Clinton." We can put the quote in the footnote, if anywhere. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 22:46, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- sounds reasonable. SashiRolls (talk) 00:42, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Though I mostly want to ask which Republican candidate wouldn't say such a thing, ... SashiRolls (talk) 02:00, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- I agree on the significance of the Trump statement, but there's no reason for a full quote. Let's replace it with "Trump himself has stated that a vote for Stein would be good for him because it likely takes away a vote for Hillary Clinton." We can put the quote in the footnote, if anywhere. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 22:46, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
SashiRolls adds a bunch of tags to content he/she disagrees with, citing old complaints. Issues that have already been resolved.
There is only one editor that interprets the content this way. The fact that SashiRolls disagrees with any content that casts a critical eye on Stein, does not mean that it should be tagged in ways that suggests the content is unreliable. Please remove the tags. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 14:36, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- No, as the previous section makes clear, many many editors disagree with you. I had not noticed many of your factual errors, but after careful study of the talk page, I realized that you had managed to prevent editors from correcting them without addressing them. SashiRolls (talk) 14:55, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- Where are these "many many editors"? You even opened up an RfC, where it snowballed against you. There seems to be clear consensus.VictoriaGraysonTalk 15:01, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- an RfC is for discussion. No discussion towards a compromise took place, except on the Reliable Sources Noticeboard; I have followed the advice of the person who responded there, who stated that the Science section of the article had major problems. SashiRolls (talk) 15:03, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- An RfC is used to determine consensus. VictoriaGraysonTalk 15:06, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- an RfC is for discussion. No discussion towards a compromise took place, except on the Reliable Sources Noticeboard; I have followed the advice of the person who responded there, who stated that the Science section of the article had major problems. SashiRolls (talk) 15:03, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- Victoria Grayson should recuse herself from this page (edit: not the talk page, if she wishes to discuss, but from reverting), given her clear activism, as should you. Again, please see the section "Snooganssnoogans page on Jill Stein" concerning WP:OWN and the massive number of editors whose opinions you have disregarded.
- The eiron unrolls the scroll containing the 40K Snoogans signs
- then holds up the post-it with the 40 SashiRoll signs
- and wrinkles them into the rubbish. ^^
I am glad to see that the bot restored the systemic bias tag, though it did not restore the individual in-line disputed tags, one of which our Snoog had agreed to modify slightly, but has not modified since your revert. (the bit about Brexit, that I must admit I appreciated he had finally admitted he was distorting the truth about). Could you fix that as agreed Snoogans? Can I call you Snoogans, Snoogans? ^^
Let's be clear, concerning the title of the section: the issues have not been resolved: the systemic bias remains, but there will be others who will come by, and perhaps they will follow wiki policy as I have, be bold, and try to react. The list of disputed, under discussion, and POV tags that have been vandalised can be found on the history page for the time being. The eiron passes & flatters you fine. SashiRolls (talk) 17:31, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- After an admittedly quick perusal of a couple subsections of the article, I agree with the current tag claiming an anti-Stein bias. After a brief perusal of this talk page, the alternative wording suggested by SashiRoll (e.g. re Brexit) seems biased in the other direction. In other words, all participants on this talk page seem to be pushing a POV, focusing on point-scoring rather than trying to make the best encyclopedia we can, which is frustrating. It's hard for me to believe that there are not better sources summarizing Stein's record on the contentious issues under dispute in this article (maybe www.cnn.com/2016/08/16/politics/jill-stein-vaccine-gmo-science/?, but I don't have the time today myself to track them down and suggest neutral wording. -hugeTim (talk) 17:05, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- What precisely has an anti-Stein bias? The CNN source is already referenced on the page, and it covers all the issues that it's not referenced for in basically the same way as this wikipedia does. If you check the pages of Clinton (and her positions subpage), Trump (and his positions subpage), Kaine and Pence, you will see far more critical material on the candidates. This is the only page where users repeatedly try to remove such material. I have only applied the same standard that applies to all other politicians' pages (note that none of the users who delete this kind of material regularly edit the pages of major political candidates and consequently seem unfamiliar with the standards that are commonly accepted). On nearly every issue, Stein is quoted, and nearly all reliable sources are quoted when they provide context, so the claim that editors are infusing bias seems even more ludicrous. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:19, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- To clarify one concern about the current article, the vaccine paragraph goes on and on in an WP:UNDUE way--compare it to the single line on Donald Trump's page about his much more outlandish vaccine comments. This seems to be a case of WP:RECENTISM. That paragraph should be replaced by a summary in a few sentences, at most. Quoting the candidate or other selected sources can be done in a biased way, as should be obvious--but I'm willing to explain more if it's not. An example is where, in the Foreign Policy section, an errant comment about "ex-Nazis" in Ukraine is selected--not by an RS but by a Wikipedia editor--out of a pages-long phone interview conducted by "OnTheIssues.org" to highlight in an encyclopedia article. That entire Ukraine paragraph, in fact, is a case-study in the improper use of primary sources, bolstering an improper WP:SYNTHESIS of selected quotes from primary sources with a single secondary source: an opinionated blog post strongly critical of Stein. -hugeTim (talk) 17:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- As another, more comprehensive indictment of the bias of the current article, compare our Political Positions section with Ballotpedia's issues section on her: https://ballotpedia.org/Jill_Stein_presidential_campaign,_2016. (For those who aren't familiar, Ballotpedia is written by a professional staff of writers and researchers.) Their section provides a neutral and thorough presentation of her positions, whereas ours is selective and dominated by detailed presentations of her most controversial statements. -hugeTim (talk) 17:53, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- agree 174.19.224.236 (talk) 19:25, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- The length of the vaccine section is for three reasons: (i) because it quotes so much from Stein and the reliable sources. The quotes are there precisely because of a desire not to misrepresent or give the appearance of misrepresentation. (ii) Her position on vaccines is also far more nuanced than Trump's (equivocation, concerns about some issues but not others), and there are different claims that need to be put in context (toxic substances, corporate influence) and need the take of reliable sources. (iii) the issue is frankly one that has gotten her much coverage in reliable sources, so it's definitely not undue judging by coverage in the media. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:43, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- If you want to add more issues from Ballotpedia, please do! 19:43, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- I didn't add her statements on Ukraine, so I'm not entirely familiar with the issue. Note though that the pages of the Trump, Clinton, Pence and Kaine are full of positions and quotes lifted from interviews and by editors. There's nothing wrong with using primary sources, in particular when candidates are not big enough to get constant media coverage or when issues are important but still big enough for the candidate to warrant in-depth news coverage. So on that basis, I don't see any problem with noting that Stein has cited concerns about ex-Nazis in the Ukrainian government. I think it's hard to argue that it's not a salient issue, and that such a statement wouldn't be listed on the pages of all other major candidates in this election. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:43, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Points (ii) and (iii) on the vaccine paragraph are well-taken. To the extent that we retain a lengthy vaccine paragraph, I'd argue it belongs more in the 2016 Presidential Campaign subsection rather than under the Political Positions section. It should be told as a narrative of the controversy as it has unfolded in the past few weeks since the DNC as media coverage on her began to focus on that--to the extent that is the case. (I haven't been following it much, myself.)
- With regard to your reason (i), I'm taking that as an indication that you do think quoting someone's words is somehow automatically neutral. I'll grant you a desire to avoid "the appearance of misrepresentation," but such an appearance is often deceiving. To explain my thoughts on that further, I'll first quote (with some irony) from the relevant Wikipedia policy, WP:IMPARTIAL: "Even where a topic is presented in terms of facts rather than opinions, inappropriate tone can be introduced through the way in which facts are selected, presented, or organized. ... Try not to quote directly from participants engaged in a heated dispute; instead, summarize and present the arguments in an impartial tone."
- Do you really defend the inclusion of the quoted sentence "The modal view is leave the freaking system alone." in this article? What purpose does the entire Kahan quote serve that wouldn't be better served by a straightforward statement of the scientific consensus on vaccine safety, written in an encyclopedic tone, with a hyperlink to the relevant Wikipedia article with more detail? My sense is that the purpose it serves is to push an anti-Stein POV. And that's just one of many examples of quotations that do so in this article--both quotes of Stein critics and Stein quotes selected and arranged to advance a POV. (An example of the latter is the juxtaposition of her statements on the FDA with facts suggesting its objectivity--a juxtaposition also present in the source WaPo blog post by opinion journalist David Weigel--as opposed to juxtaposing them with a reliable source substantiating FDA bias or a fact about Monsanto-FDA ties.) I recognize that writing a NPOV article is hard work, whereas criticizing as I am is relatively easy. What I'm saying is that we should keep the tag to encourage people to keep working on this one. -hugeTim (talk) 21:39, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- The immunization schedule is not created by the FDA.VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- That may be relevant to a discussion about her comments on vaccines, but I don't see its relevance here on this talk page in a discussion about this article. For what it's worth, I personally disagree with her vaccine comments in question. -hugeTim (talk) 21:49, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for a substantive input, Hugetim. Regarding the quotes, it's just my experience that it's a pain in the ass to address controversial issues related to politicians without incorporating quotes. It sets the page up for endless edit warring in my experience, especially when there isn't a core team of editors on a particular page. Both for Trump and Clinton, we rely heavily on quotes in the controversial sections where there is room for a lot of interpretation (especially with Trump). So the quote-thing is fairly consistent with how we do it on other politicians' pages to avoid edit warring. Regarding the Kahan quote, that kind of context is all over other politicians' pages. See, for instance, the recent example of political scientist Brendan Nyhan's take on Trump's 'rigged' rhetoric on Trump's page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Political_positions_of_Donald_Trump), which is similar to Kahan's take on Stein's. While I think you raise valid concerns, these are all issues that are consistently applied to Clinton, Trump, Pence, Kaine. While one can quibble over what should be included on politicians' pages but I don't think anyone who regularly edits politicians' pages can say that Stein's page is distinct in any way from other major politicians. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 22:01, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- The immunization schedule is not created by the FDA.VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- What precisely has an anti-Stein bias? The CNN source is already referenced on the page, and it covers all the issues that it's not referenced for in basically the same way as this wikipedia does. If you check the pages of Clinton (and her positions subpage), Trump (and his positions subpage), Kaine and Pence, you will see far more critical material on the candidates. This is the only page where users repeatedly try to remove such material. I have only applied the same standard that applies to all other politicians' pages (note that none of the users who delete this kind of material regularly edit the pages of major political candidates and consequently seem unfamiliar with the standards that are commonly accepted). On nearly every issue, Stein is quoted, and nearly all reliable sources are quoted when they provide context, so the claim that editors are infusing bias seems even more ludicrous. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:19, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- After an admittedly quick perusal of a couple subsections of the article, I agree with the current tag claiming an anti-Stein bias. After a brief perusal of this talk page, the alternative wording suggested by SashiRoll (e.g. re Brexit) seems biased in the other direction. In other words, all participants on this talk page seem to be pushing a POV, focusing on point-scoring rather than trying to make the best encyclopedia we can, which is frustrating. It's hard for me to believe that there are not better sources summarizing Stein's record on the contentious issues under dispute in this article (maybe www.cnn.com/2016/08/16/politics/jill-stein-vaccine-gmo-science/?, but I don't have the time today myself to track them down and suggest neutral wording. -hugeTim (talk) 17:05, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Wikipedia sez: "On Mother's Day 2016, Stein suggested that Clinton did not 'reflect the values of being a mother'."We're making progress... I appreciated your edit today, which wasn't in fact entirely a revert. SashiRolls (talk) 00:09, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
Peace
It would a mistake not to have this title on a Jill Stein page. I've watched the video on Russia. I am not certain that she mentions human rights in Russia, (please check for yourself if it's important), but she does mention peace, and reducing military spending. I apologize to those people who needed to slow me down. (I made a mistake as I was editing and was stopped, appropriately, by the Buddhist bot, though some things could perhaps be restored). I'll go edit my life page for a while and let cooler heads continue (or not). Peace is necessary for communities to work well (wi-fi powered or no). Happy editing. SashiRolls (talk) 20:57, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
A Young Turks host is not a reliable source
This has been pointed out to SashiRolls before, yet she/he posts the TYT host's proclamation again to the article. Why is it so difficult to just add "In a later interview ([insert date]), when asked [insert question asked by Young Turks], Stein answered "no"". Why add a bunch of spin from questionable sources?
- Cenk Ugyur spoke at the Democratic National Convention. Actually, he makes no procalamation. There is an interview with Jill Stein that you do not want in the article. Remember you do not WP:OWN the article. This is not spin: it's what she said, as anyone can verify. If you (or anyone) disputes it, be humble, as I have been, and add a tag, as I have done.SashiRolls (talk) 15:01, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
The user also added a Snopes source that doesn't mention Stein's position on autism at all, showing again that the editor has horrid reading comprehension and persists in adding nonsense to the article. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 14:42, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
- I was moving too quickly and have corrected the error. I have separated the Snopes article from the autism question. It responds to the article immediately preceding it about having an anti-vaxxer in the White House. SashiRolls (talk) 15:01, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
Overkill
I've added four "under discussion tags" for two different reasons.
For the words "highly" in "highly critical", and "celebratory" in "celebratory statement" it seems to me that the tone would be more neutral with less modification (of the adj and of the N). (incidentally, I agree that Stein is highly critical, but that expresses my opinion about how critical she is...
For the other two sentences tagged, there is no mention of Jill Stein in them. Both are meant to show that the position of someone who was an anti-vaxxer or an anti-wifier would be factually incorrect. This is irrelevant in the fist case because it is established that Stein's position is not the position of an anti-vaxxer, as Snoogs pointed out by adding the line about her negative response when being asked if she believed that vaccines caused autism. Even if it were relevant to her position, there would be no reason to add it: on Copernicus' page, there is nothing about the scandalous fact that he didn't realize that orbital patterns were elliptical. But it's not relevant to Jill Stein's position. Likewise for the citation on the safety of wifi. It is not relevant, because Jill Stein has not said (as far as we are aware) that as a matter of policy, once elected, she will/would ban wifi in all the schools (or even that she is opposed to it as a matter of policy.) SashiRolls (talk) 20:28, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Also, having read the comments above, I agree with the problem concerning the obsession with the "now". I would have never included the bit on Brexit (which is a tempest in a teapot) if I were trying to write an objective article about Jill Stein. But, since it was already here, and knowing my own biases, I was certainly not going to delete it. The issue on Russia v. Ukraine is interesting because it marks a very strong distinction between the Stein candidacy and the Clinton candidacy. Still, given that the section on Russia still contains verifiably inaccurate statements... Again, happy editing. I'll check out Ballotopedia. SashiRolls (talk) 20:28, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- This has all been discussed before, and resolved before. These are new and ludicrous rationales to again try to remove the content that you find reflects poorly on Stein. This kind of content is completely consistent with what exists on other politicians' pages. I don't have the time to write an essay every day to address your daily freakout. These issues are addressed again and again throughout this talk page. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 20:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- This would not be an appropriate argument (even if it were true): wikipedia articles are not graven on tablets, but get changed over time. There has been no discussion on any of the four tags above, except between you and me. Let others express their opinion. (Also, one of the tags was added to a new bit added today by someone who's been quite active on Stein's running mates page... Thank you for making it impossible to revert your edit by adding the structuring elements I had previously added, but that you reverted. You have used 2 of your 3 reverts now. SashiRolls (talk) 21:31, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
I don't want to go overboard in noting all the overkill, but I do think there is, as Calandria has already noted, a good deal of overkill concerning polls. Though I've specifically marked the sentence concerning Jill Stein's position concerning a rise in the polls, the whole paragraph should be vetted for WP:CrystalBall gazing it seems to me. SashiRolls (talk) 00:51, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- "It is appropriate to report discussion and arguments about the prospects for success of future proposals and projects or whether some development will occur, if discussion is properly referenced." Both Trump and Clinton's pages feature polling data and clarification of the polling data by reliable secondary sources. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:55, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
I don't think her lack of statement on Russia's human rights should be included. Lack of a statement is not a policy position. Does any other candidate have non-statements like this under "Policy Positions"? While it may be factual that she didn't say anything about Russia's human rights record during a particular speech, there is also the question of notability given that the only source is an opinion blog. Masebrock (talk) 07:02, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- agreed. moreover watching the video shows that the claim that she does not criticize Russian foreign policy (military spending) is demonstrably false. For comparison on human rights, this table can be sorted from highest to lowest: List of countries by incarceration rate. I have gone ahead and removed it, pending further comment for maintaining it...
Editor adds a bunch of tags again. Please revert.
SashiRolls has again added a bunch of tags throughout the article to parts that have already been resolved, sometimes repeatedly. The article should also lose its 'systemic bias' tag at the top, which is wholly unsupported (there is no difference between this page and that of Clinton, Trump, Pence, Kaine) and the rationale for the 'systemic bias' charge has been thoroughly rebuked (note that most of the complaints that underline the accusation of bias have been rejected in the 'Request for Comment' talk section). It's difficult to edit this page when one user repeatedly adds nonsense that goes against consensus, refuses to address the issues in a substantive manner and tries to rehash arguments over the same issue again and again. Nothing ever gets resolved. Pinging other regular users to politicians' pages: User: Neutrality, User: VictoriaGrayson, User: Activist, User: Volunteer_Marek, User: Gouncbeatduke. What's one supposed to do in this kind of situation? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 21:41, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Request full protection status.VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:46, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- You will make "media studies" departments and the press very happy by doing such a thing, though you won't be doing Wikipedia or Clinton (seriously) any favors that way... it's your choice Snooganssnoogans. SashiRolls (talk) 22:01, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Could you do it? I'm not sure how. I've never made a formal request for anything. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 22:25, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry, but I have no interest in causing Wikipedia or Clinton harm, and for the press and the media studies departments, the record is already here. SashiRolls (talk) 23:05, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- (SashiRolls, please try to keep your comments constructive towards improving the encyclopedia.) Snooganssnoogans, I'll address here your response in the other section above to make clear that I disagree with you that the bias charge has been resolved. Here's another example: the line "Jonathan Chait characterized this as the 'Plan to Stop Trump by Electing Him President,'" which uses a quote as a pretext for including mockery of Stein in the article. What in the Hillary Clinton article, for instance, is comparable to that line? The reason I am citing such examples as evidence of systemic bias rather than just fixing them as I see them is because I see them everywhere I look in this article. These do not appear to be isolated instances of bias which have snuck in here or there but rather something systematic.
- I think there are substantial differences between the Kahan quote here and the Nyhan quote in the Trump positions article you cite, namely that the Nyhan quote uses more sober language and explains a topic that is a bit more obscure--we don't have a whole article about the effects of candidates making unfounded claims predicting election fraud. In any case, it seems a bit odd to use something you added a few days ago in a different article to justify something you wrote here. They may both be inappropriate according to Wikipedia policies.
- To be honest, I am starting to get the feeling that your response to my concerns--instead of referring to policy or responding to my policy references--amounts to saying that I'm not qualified to comment because I don't regularly edit candidate pages. I'm sure you don't mean say that; but if not, I would appreciate more substantial responses to my criticisms. -hugeTim (talk) 23:25, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- At the same time, I do respect your experience (regarding what works to avoid edit-warring) and appreciate everyone's efforts here. I need to back away from this and so won't be responding further. Best wishes. -hugeTim (talk) 23:32, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry, but I have no interest in causing Wikipedia or Clinton harm, and for the press and the media studies departments, the record is already here. SashiRolls (talk) 23:05, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- I just want to note that I have spoken in favor of removing the Chait quote. I don't think anyone has defended its use. It must have been accidentally restored when someone reverted some of SashiRolls' ridiculous massive edits in the past. I'll remove it. So the one example of systemic bias is something that's accidentally in the article and that we all agree shouldn't be here? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:44, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- I just used Nyhan as an example because it's recent and stuck in mind. It's incredibly tiring to recite every example of this when the pages are full of them, and when I've made reference to this again and again in different parts of this talk page. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:44, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- I'm not intimately familiar with Wikipedia' rules and rarely cite them. I just go by what's standard at the other major political candidates' pages, which are far more active and I'd assume those standards are developed with the Wikipedia rules in mind. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:44, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- For the record, although I see above where you acknowledged the Chait line was inappropriate, it looks to me like you never actually removed it and neither has anyone else since it was added on August 4th. That seems like evidence of systemic bias to me. Again, from my perspective, I saw something like that Chait line in every position-related section I happened to look at. But you may be right that I have just been unlucky in the few subsections I've chosen to examine. -hugeTim (talk) 00:04, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sincere thanks are due to you for taking an independent look into the page, hugeTim (& also for tracking that edit down!). Snooganssnoogans has now reached his daily revert limit (once again). I will stop editing and let others provide quality source material and eliminate partisanship on the page. SashiRolls (talk) 01:42, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- For the record, although I see above where you acknowledged the Chait line was inappropriate, it looks to me like you never actually removed it and neither has anyone else since it was added on August 4th. That seems like evidence of systemic bias to me. Again, from my perspective, I saw something like that Chait line in every position-related section I happened to look at. But you may be right that I have just been unlucky in the few subsections I've chosen to examine. -hugeTim (talk) 00:04, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- I'm not intimately familiar with Wikipedia' rules and rarely cite them. I just go by what's standard at the other major political candidates' pages, which are far more active and I'd assume those standards are developed with the Wikipedia rules in mind. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:44, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Fully-protected page request on 17 August 2016
- Please place your request at Wikipedia:Requests for page protection. You don't request it here. Eden5 (talk) 01:40, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- The result of User:Snooganssnoogans's request can be seen here. I have followed through on the administrator's suggestion and have filed a complaint on the edit warring noticeboard, in an effort to free the page for progress towards finding a solution. Peace to all involved. SashiRolls (talk) 02:43, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
No mention about Immunization Schedule? Continued denial of Immunization Schedule
(for purposes of understanding the discussion below, note that VictoriaGrayson changed the title of this section at 19:37, 18 August 2016)
Stein has repeatedly said she doesn't believe in the immunization schedule. See HERE or HERE. Do a CTRL+F for "schedule".VictoriaGraysonTalk 17:12, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- You need a source that says that, otherwise it is original research. TFD (talk) 17:50, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Did you not see the links I provided?VictoriaGraysonTalk 17:53, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- What are you talking about? I did the same CTRL+F on our article and found the mention about the schedule. What do you want to be different about that paragraph? 71.13.175.226 (talk) 18:23, 18 August 2016 (UTC) (p.s. this IP is a named user already involved in the discussions above, but I'd rather not explicitly say who.)
- Why are you editing as an IP? An accident?VictoriaGraysonTalk 18:53, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- I've locked myself out of my account to try to prevent myself from spending too much time on this. Not working, but I don't currently know the password. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 19:20, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Is this the section explaining why you placed a tag on the article alleging a strong, systemic pro-Stein bias in the article? I think more evidence is needed to even begin a discussion of such a claim. Please explain your tag further. Alternatively--and I say this as someone who has been tempted to do so in comparable circumstances--I'd ask you to consider whether you might be disrupting Wikipedia to make a point with that tag. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 19:47, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Why are you editing as an IP? An accident?VictoriaGraysonTalk 18:53, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- What are you talking about? I did the same CTRL+F on our article and found the mention about the schedule. What do you want to be different about that paragraph? 71.13.175.226 (talk) 18:23, 18 August 2016 (UTC) (p.s. this IP is a named user already involved in the discussions above, but I'd rather not explicitly say who.)
- Did you not see the links I provided?VictoriaGraysonTalk 17:53, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah, I read the first link you provided, the second is under a paywall. And it does not say "Stein has repeatedly said she doesn't believe in the immunization schedule." TFD (talk) 19:49, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
Regarding her statements yesterday the second article says:
After a series of confusing answers that echoed some anti-vaccine slogans, Stein gave her clearest answer to the contrary.
So even as of yesterday, Stein is still pandering to anti-vaxers.VictoriaGraysonTalk 20:49, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- The title says "Greens clean up remarks." You are beginning to show clear signs of paranoia. 174.19.224.236 (talk) 21:09, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Why is Stein still echoing anti-vaxxers?VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:27, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
- Your edit does not say that is "echoing" anti-vaxers, it says "Stein has repeatedly said she doesn't believe in the immunization schedule." As for why a reporter says Stein is "echoing" comments by anti-vaxers, I do not know. It could have to do with the candidate he supports but it is up to you to provide a source that tells us. Call me naive, but I would have thought that an argument based on actual facts would have been a better approach for the Clinton campaign. (Like Jill can't win, vote for Hill.) TFD (talk) 04:57, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- The source also editorializes that the author thought some of her comments were "confusing". Why would a Washington Post writer be confused by Stein? Because it's the Washington Post. (And since you don't consider the possible POV of a given source, will you please also include in this article that Stein is a CENSORED.) 174.19.224.236 (talk) 06:14, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Why is Stein still echoing anti-vaxxers?VictoriaGraysonTalk 21:27, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
You have added no proposed text to the page VictoriaGrayson? What specifically do you want to add? Unless I'm mistaken (due to the disruptive reverts) our wikipedia text already includes information about the fact that JS had concerns about vaccines, as did HRC. Over time, these concerns have become less acute as procedures have improved. As your second source makes clear, this "schedule" concern dates from when she was working as a practicing doctor.SashiRolls (talk) 10:23, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
Is this thread just a dilatory tactic ? SashiRolls (talk) 10:21, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
Moving Forward
1. In the interest of improving Wikipedia, I would like to point out that this sentence has been orphaned by the addition of intermediate material. A few comments about the citation: first, it references a tweet; second, it refers to an on-line multiple choice quiz; third, there is not mention on HRC's page of her match with Jill Stein. Is this notable for Stein but not for Clinton?
Is anyone in favor of keeping this citation in the text? (NB: it currently feels out of place in the text and doesn't look good in context (given that the surrounding information is more serious and encyclopedia-worthy): any suggestions as to where to move it in the text and/or how to rewrite it to make it seem less frivolous?
She has, for instance, said that she had a 99% match with Bernie Sanders (and 91% match with Hillary Clinton) on ISideWith, a political quiz on political stances.[101]
Comment:
- (i) It's part of the campaign, part of Stein's outreach to Bernie supporters. (ii) Clinton's page is smack-full of her campaigning and does include her ratings and rankings on scales measuring where she is on the political spectrum. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:09, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
2.The following citation has been removed: "Bernie Sanders has called upon his supporters to vote for Hillary Clinton." saying that the United States is not a multi-party parliamentary system and that "you're gonna end up having a choice. Either Hillary Clinton is going to become president, or Donald Trump."
Are there any quotes by former Green candidates on HRC's page ? SashiRolls (talk) 11:09, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
Comment:
- (i) A large part of Stein's campaign has revolved around reaching out to Sanders supporters and even to Sanders himself. There's absolutely no reason why Sanders' own rationale for not supporting third-party candidates, such as Stein, should not be included. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:09, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- (i)(a) 4 reasons: 1) Concision, 2) undue weight given to a virtually tautological statement (surely correct) of a member of an opposing party. 3) Stein is nowhere mentioned in the citation. 4) the citation does not support the claim in wiki-voice, they are different claims. SashiRolls (talk) 13:24, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sigh. A significant part of the section is about Stein's outreach to Bernie and Bernie supporters. How on Earth is Bernie's rationale for not supporting her candidacy undue weight? Are you seriously going to spend the next few months continuing to edit war 24/7 and peddle these ludicrous rationales for deleting content? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:33, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- How about you? Will you continue to edit war and peddle your moronic reasons for keeping content? 174.19.224.236 (talk) 14:38, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- For the 10th time, (i) these are the same standards that are applied to the pages of other major political candidates (not that none of the people who want to delete content on this page actually regularly edit the pages of major political candidates + none of the people can provide any substantive argument as to how Stein's page differs from Trump, Clinton, Pence, Kaine); (ii) reverts are perfectly acceptable when there is repeated consensus for the edits on the talk page (note that SashiRolls repeatedly goes against consensus + starts new discussions about issues that are already on the talk page rather than join existing discussions). Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:01, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- "reverts are perfectly acceptable when there is repeated consensus for the edits" -- No. You need to review WP:3RR. 174.17.227.62 (talk) 15:59, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- For the 10th time, (i) these are the same standards that are applied to the pages of other major political candidates (not that none of the people who want to delete content on this page actually regularly edit the pages of major political candidates + none of the people can provide any substantive argument as to how Stein's page differs from Trump, Clinton, Pence, Kaine); (ii) reverts are perfectly acceptable when there is repeated consensus for the edits on the talk page (note that SashiRolls repeatedly goes against consensus + starts new discussions about issues that are already on the talk page rather than join existing discussions). Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:01, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- How about you? Will you continue to edit war and peddle your moronic reasons for keeping content? 174.19.224.236 (talk) 14:38, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sigh. A significant part of the section is about Stein's outreach to Bernie and Bernie supporters. How on Earth is Bernie's rationale for not supporting her candidacy undue weight? Are you seriously going to spend the next few months continuing to edit war 24/7 and peddle these ludicrous rationales for deleting content? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:33, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Compromise proposal: Now that I have added a more powerful voice than Sanders making the same claim would you agree that this page is too heavily oriented towards the Washington Post? SashiRolls (talk) 19:04, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- No. Wtf? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:52, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
3. Snooganssnoogans , you have twice reverted moving West's endorsement to the same paragraph as Hedges'. Is there any reason why you oppose a paragraph concerning the various endorsements? Any reason you prefer to have them scattered around here and there?
Comment:
- No, I'm fine with lumping endorsements together. When your edits are so extensive and nonsensical, occasionally a reasonable edit gets accidentally reverted. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:01, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Good, I've added structuring elements and am leaving the page for a while again. SashiRolls (talk) 19:04, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- The article looks like crap after your "structuring elements". You didn't even bother to capitalize subsections, and the page doesn't bear any similarity to how the pages of Trump and Clinton are organized. This is all part of the 2016 campaign and should be organized under it. You divide Stein's Sanders outreach from Sanders' response, which is like so much of you editing incomprehensible. Thank you for continually making this article a mess. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:52, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is to allow better editing and decide appropriate weight. Also to allow new editors see at a glance what is under-represented in the presentation. SashiRolls (talk) 21:32, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- The article looks like crap after your "structuring elements". You didn't even bother to capitalize subsections, and the page doesn't bear any similarity to how the pages of Trump and Clinton are organized. This is all part of the 2016 campaign and should be organized under it. You divide Stein's Sanders outreach from Sanders' response, which is like so much of you editing incomprehensible. Thank you for continually making this article a mess. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:52, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
4. Should there be a gorilla on Jill Stein's page?
Comment:
Earlier, one user has argued that this is indeed important information, whereas two users disagree (myself included). Justification for the diverse arguments is found by searching for "gorilla". SashiRolls (talk) 14:10, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- (BLP/PA/You name it violation removed. Only in death does duty end (talk) 16:27, 19 August 2016 (UTC))
- Look. This is not helping. SashiRolls (talk) 15:33, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- It helps a lot. You are aware of it, I am, but some people apparently are not: somebody somewhere took a bullshit-joke survey to include an ape to show how ignorant or dumb some survey-takers are. It went viral via facebook or whatever, because people saw and know how funny it is. Then somebody else quickly made some stupid photo-meme and it made the rounds. -- And now some want to include it in a wikipedia article? Seriously? No, I mean, really?? "important information"? Why do we even have to explain to people that it isn't? School much? 174.17.227.62 (talk) 15:44, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Look. This is not helping. SashiRolls (talk) 15:33, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- VictoriaGrayson and Neutrality expressed support for keeping the polling data in. The user who deleted it never even tried to justify it on the talk page. Polling data is standard on Trump's and Clinton's pages. The fact that you don't like what the polls show isn't an argument for removing it. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:01, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- It's not a question of whether to include "polling data." It's a question of which poll results to include and how to present them. Please comment on the specific proposal here, which is to remove one sentence from the section describing her polling:
- Stein has polled as high as 7% in general election polling (a June 2016 poll). A CNN poll (released on August 1, 2016) showed that 13% of Sanders supporters would vote for Stein (10% for Libertarian Party candidate Gary Johnson).
A PPP poll released on 30 July 2016 showed her trailing behind a non-existent candidate called "Independent Harambe" (referring to the dead gorilla) with 5% versus 2% in general election polling.Between June 2016 and August 2016, Stein's polling average in a four-way race with Trump, Clinton and Johnson has ranged between 2.5% and 4.8%.
- Stein has polled as high as 7% in general election polling (a June 2016 poll). A CNN poll (released on August 1, 2016) showed that 13% of Sanders supporters would vote for Stein (10% for Libertarian Party candidate Gary Johnson).
- In case you missed my comment on this above, I'll copy it again here as I'm interested in your response: There's really no need for such "context" here. People understand what 2-5% polling means. I'm sure Stein supporters could also point to examples of where she polled ahead of so-and-so in a particular poll. Choosing a poll in which she was farcically polled against a name given sympathetic coverage in recent media (i.e. Harambe, the gorilla shot after a child climbed into its pen) is cherry-picking and clearly undue. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 15:18, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- It's far from clear what 2-5% polling means, and it doesn't hurt to provide the context. That she polls as high or lower than fictional candidates like Harambe (note that the respectable pollster - PPP - never identified this "independent Harambe" as the gorilla when it conducted the poll) and Dees Nutz is important for putting her polling numbers in context, as it suggests that individuals identified as independents in a four-way or three-way race will get 2-5% regardless of whether the polled know who they are. If you have more polling data to add, please do. I added the RCP polling average, and that 13% of Sanders supporters favor her, so it's not as if I'm standing in your way. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:30, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- A general statement to that effect would be fine--it's the highlighting of one specific poll result I am questioning. I also question whether it is true that any independent will get 2-5%. In fact, the results for Harambe and Deez Nuts were notable because they were surprising (and I'd wager to bet that less "interesting" names would garner less support from giggling poll respondents). For example, Lessig couldn't get more than 1% in a Dem primary poll despite being named several times. There's also a distinction between Indy candidates and minor party candidates. All of which is to say: yes to context but no to gratuitous insults masquerading as context. 71.13.175.226 (talk) 16:25, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- (In any case, the article actually misrepresents the poll results. Stein and "Harambe" were asked about in two separate questions. Stein's 2% came in a four-way question in which Gary Johnson got another 6%, whereas Harambe was listed as the only alternative to Clinton and Trump. This is another instance of bias in a long list substantiating the charge of systemic anti-Stein bias here.) 71.13.175.226 (talk) 16:36, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- You express valid concerns (unlike SashiRolls) but I think it still it warrants inclusion with the added context that you point out. In the interest of compromise, I'm prepared to drop it though. I've never been against compromise when presented with valid concerns. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 18:37, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- It's far from clear what 2-5% polling means, and it doesn't hurt to provide the context. That she polls as high or lower than fictional candidates like Harambe (note that the respectable pollster - PPP - never identified this "independent Harambe" as the gorilla when it conducted the poll) and Dees Nutz is important for putting her polling numbers in context, as it suggests that individuals identified as independents in a four-way or three-way race will get 2-5% regardless of whether the polled know who they are. If you have more polling data to add, please do. I added the RCP polling average, and that 13% of Sanders supporters favor her, so it's not as if I'm standing in your way. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:30, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- It's not a question of whether to include "polling data." It's a question of which poll results to include and how to present them. Please comment on the specific proposal here, which is to remove one sentence from the section describing her polling:
Snooganssnoogans, they are called Wikipedia:Single-purpose accounts.VictoriaGraysonTalk 18:15, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- @VictoriaGrayson:, no. Actually, he's declared himself to be a specific username which is not a single-purpose account. Are you unaware of that or just doubting it? 50.171.226.71 (talk) 04:44, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- were we talking about a gorilla or accounts? Talk:OK (ctrl-f on that page) SashiRolls (talk) 19:36, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
WOW
Let me just say that I used to have great respect for Wikipedia and even donated, but the tone of this article is outrageous when you get to the 2016 election. You have an entire section called "on third party chances" AND YOU DON'T EVEN PUT HER STATEMENT THERE, despite the fact that she has been asked about it multiple times in interviews and responded clearly. Literally ALL of the quotes are against her, none of it supports her - how is that neutral? Even if the Nadar spoiler myth is true in your mind, how is Trump's opinion a credible source? There isn't a heading that says this on Gary Johnson's page. If you're going to talk about Bernie endorsing Hillary, why don't you mention that afterward, donations to the Green Party skyrocketed? THAT is an indication of a coming big jump in her numbers. http://www.telesurtv.net/english/news/Jill-Stein-Donations-Up-by-1000-After-Sanders-Endorsed-Clinton-20160713-0030.html By the way, she has also been endorsed by Kshama Sawant.
As for the Harambe poll inclusion...it does not ask Hillary vs. Trump vs. Gary vs. Jill vs. Harambe; Harambe and Jill do not appear in the same question at any time. Also the same poll also reported that 18% of respondents think Hillary Clinton has ties to Lucifer; 21% weren't sure. But I don't see that interesting tidbit on her page when this "poll" came out! In fact, in the question, Trump and Hillary ARE directly competing with Harambe in the poll, not Gary or Jill, and in THAT poll 9% say Harambe or not sure when it's only Trump or Clinton. This poll seems terrible considering that it asks favorability ratings for Harambe but not Gary or Jill. Obviously obfuscated, as someone above mentioned. Then AGAIN you mention the "third party spoiler" idea, casually mentioning that third party support declines as the election draws closer. This should be on the Green Party and Libertarian Party pages, not Jill's.
You put an old quote about wifi under the education section. I have no problem with that, but it doesn't need its own section later in the article. Additionally, you should put it in context and link to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_IARC_Group_2B_carcinogens which includes wifi under "possibly carcinogenic." She agrees with the World Health Organization and that should be noted.
I find it interesting that you also add context when it suits an anti-stein tone. For example, after her comment on Obama committing war crimes, you don't mention Abdulrahman al-Awlaki. But you do provide a Guardian quote about how anti-vaxxers are against schedule changes when she mentions them. The Clinton bias is especially apparent when there is no mention of Hillary's previous anti-vax pandering in 2007 ("I am committed to make investments to find the causes of autism, including possible environmental causes like vaccines") and yet Jill has an entire section devoted to her "pandering" even though they said the same thing. Vaccines are mentioned nowhere on Clinton's 2008 presidential run page, political positions page, or main page.
The criticism of "11 of 15 are doctors who don't work for pharmaceutical companies" is outright propaganda. There should be the context of the "revolving door" here. Kathryn M Edwards, the current head of that board, "served as a Member of Clinical Advisory Board at NexBio, Inc. since April 2009." So she's "not working for them", she's just a member of the advisory board for a biopharmaceutical company that is being sued by California for fraud. https://www.fbi.gov/contact-us/field-offices/sandiego/news/press-releases/ansun-biopharma-to-pay-more-than-2-million-for-overbilling-the-u.s
GMOs are generally safe, she wants a moratorium on specific, new, unstudied ones. That should be clarified. The 2012 comment on reduced space exploration spending should be on her 2012 page. Frankly, the fact that the Reparations for Slavery is much bigger than even the other unnecessary headings is a case in point that this section is intended to scare people with how "radical" she is. Again, no context that we've given reparations to Asian Americans in the past. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.35.185.245 (talk) 21:06, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Welcome! You are obviously a much more knowledgeable editor than I am on the subject, and I appreciate your comments. Would you be uncomfortable adding two or three sentences to the page itself in the interest of balancing perspective? I'd like to see quality material being added while we're vetting the less solid material. The point of Wikipedia is to acccumulate pertinent info and leads for those who want to learn more about a subject. Not to prechew the Post, Tablet, and yesterday's reddit-tweets for them. Very helpful work, above. Again, thank you. SashiRolls (talk) 22:56, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
- Agree the is one of the most slanted articles I've read. This reads like an attack ad, especially the political positions section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:602:400:F27D:10D6:5491:DC1D:321D (talk) 00:48, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Why are so many specifics of the campaign here on her personal page and there is almost nothing on her actual campaign page? I started to edit the campaign page but then it is totally redundant with her personal page. The many details about health positions have an obvious tone against her and inoculate readers against considering the page as a neutral source. She is being widely covered in mainstream news, so why are the editors who are typing so many words about anti-vaxxers not doing the most basic citations of the key positions of the campaign? Aside from adding all on the wrong page. GreenIn2010 (talk) 00:49, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- The political positions of all major candidate (Clinton, Trump, Pence, Kaine) are on their main article. The anti-vaxxer comments are being covered by reliable news sources (includ. WaPo and the Guardian), so I don't understand what your point is about mainstream news and the focus on the anti-vaxxer stuff. If you want to add more political positions, go ahead. There's an interesting thing happening here where a string of Green Party-affiliated users and IP numbers complain about there being a dearth of her political positions, yet they can't be arsed to edit in the unspecified missing positions by themselves. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:13, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sounds more like RationalWiki at the end...(honestly, the difference is slight). If we are to keep the third party spoiler section, Democracy Now! has great interviews I would like to quote from, especially between Robert Reich/Chris Hedges and Kshama Sawant/Rebecca Traister on rejecting corporate duopoly. There should also be discussion of media bias, particularly in the wake of the DNC scandal and DWS's resignation. Stein was literally asked if she believed in God during the CNN Green Town Hall, which seemed planted IMO. As recently as 2012, Gallup polls show that the MOST damaging categories a presidential candidate can be in are atheist (#1), then Muslim (#2!). I hope it wasn't deliberate attempt to turn off centrist voters, but it's hard to believe there's no connection between a question like that and the fact that CNN's parent company is a major Hillary donor. I don't understand why fact like these are dismissed as conspiratorial or unrealistic. Does Wikipedia really believe that CNN wouldn't try to "gotcha" Jill Stein considering that they want Hillary to win? That's naive. Wikipedia should not follow CNN in confusing objectivity with neutrality. It goes against the very principle the site stands for - democratic, unfiltered, objective truth without bias or "top-down" editing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.35.185.245 (talk) 01:09, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- See WP:VNT.VictoriaGraysonTalk 04:36, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- "Debbie Wasserman Schultz was forced aside by the release of thousands of embarrassing emails among party officials that appeared to show coordinated efforts to help Clinton at the expense of her rivals in the Democratic primaries. That contradicted claims by the party and the Clinton campaign that the process was open and fair for her leading challenger, Sen. Bernie Sanders." The emails specifically mention Hillary's people asking if they could "get someone to ask his belief," as an atheist would turn off Southern voters, so I don't know why you're arguing semantics (for myself truth = verifiable) to defend the exclusion of campaign finance data or correspondence leaks. If you present that email, and then the town hall theism question - on a network with a demonstrated conflict of interest (CNN) - any reasonable person will draw the logical conclusion. My journalism professor explained that if you present all the information and organize it well, you won't unintentionally editorialize; the evidence tells the story. https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/hacked-emails-cast-doubt-on-hopes-for-party-unity-at-democratic-convention/2016/07/24/a446c260-51a9-11e6-b7de-dfe509430c39_story.html http://www.huffingtonpost.com/entry/wikileaks-dnc-bernie-sanders_us_579381fbe4b02d5d5ed1d157
- See WP:VNT.VictoriaGraysonTalk 04:36, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Sounds more like RationalWiki at the end...(honestly, the difference is slight). If we are to keep the third party spoiler section, Democracy Now! has great interviews I would like to quote from, especially between Robert Reich/Chris Hedges and Kshama Sawant/Rebecca Traister on rejecting corporate duopoly. There should also be discussion of media bias, particularly in the wake of the DNC scandal and DWS's resignation. Stein was literally asked if she believed in God during the CNN Green Town Hall, which seemed planted IMO. As recently as 2012, Gallup polls show that the MOST damaging categories a presidential candidate can be in are atheist (#1), then Muslim (#2!). I hope it wasn't deliberate attempt to turn off centrist voters, but it's hard to believe there's no connection between a question like that and the fact that CNN's parent company is a major Hillary donor. I don't understand why fact like these are dismissed as conspiratorial or unrealistic. Does Wikipedia really believe that CNN wouldn't try to "gotcha" Jill Stein considering that they want Hillary to win? That's naive. Wikipedia should not follow CNN in confusing objectivity with neutrality. It goes against the very principle the site stands for - democratic, unfiltered, objective truth without bias or "top-down" editing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.35.185.245 (talk) 01:09, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- That VNT page mentions that Wikipedia's other core value is neutral point of view, and I've already outlined multiple instances of how this article violates that principle by excluding pro-Jill sources to the point of unfairness. Why is Clinton's VERIFIED coordination with DWS to win the nomination not included on her 2016 campaign or main page? It's not even on the page for the Democratic Party presidential primaries 2016! But I can't edit her page...How do we create a Spanish language version of Jill Stein's page? I can write it and I'd like to clean up this one.71.35.185.245 (talk) 10:07, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
WOW indeed. This is an excellent (albeit partial) summary of what is wrong with this page. 174.19.243.30 (talk) 05:46, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Wikipedia uses reliable sources. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:13, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- So many problems with this user's comments:
- * Stein's comments about the lesser evil etc. is already covered. The campaign pointing to website polls as evidence of a coming lift is also mentioned. Trump's comments are not presented as an authoritative academic source, nor did he speak about Gary Johnson, so I fail to understand why it should be included there. If you have problems with the Gary Johnson page, I suggest you start to edit it. TeleSur is not a reliable source (how come every other user who wants to turn this article into a mess has a history of exclusively editing the pages of the Green Party and/or thinks that Venezuelan state propaganda is a reliable source?). I completely disagree with SashiRolls creating an entire subsection on 'third party chances'. All the content there should just be under the 2016 race subsection. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- * I'm fine with removing Harambe per discussion with one of the IP numbers above. Reliable sources citing academic research to put polling in context is vital. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- * Regarding Wi-Fi, this article quotes Stein and quotes reliable secondary sources. If Stein has updated her views on Wi-Fi, please add that clarification. If reliable sources say that Stein's Wi-Fi concerns are valid, add that also. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- * Both Clinton and Obama equivocated on vaccines in 2008 but have since strongly rejected the view that vaccines could be or are harmful. If you want to add Clinton's 8yr old position, go ahead. If Stein outlines why she thinks Obama is a war criminal, go ahead and add it. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- * The Washington Post is a reliable source by any standard. When you say that WaPo is "outright propaganda", yet promote the use of actual Venezuelan state propaganda, it reflects poorly on you. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- * The other candidates' page include positions that precede the 2016 race. If Stein has updated her views on GMOs, reparations and scientific research spending, please update the article. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I was referring to the "third party spoiler" section, I agreed it should be removed, as it isn't on GJ's page. RT's original source is US Uncut's phone interview with Stein herself. http://usuncut.com/politics/jill-stein-campaign-surge/ But this is exactly what I mean about bias, acting as if CNN supporting Hillary's campaign financially isn't a conflict of interest/isn't worth mentioning...that's clearly not showing the whole picture. Like RT, Fox and CNN exist exclusively as propaganda for their respective parties yet are top primary sources. WaPo is owned by Jeff Bezos, CEO of another known corporate Hillary donor. I can't believe this outrage at the suggestion that these corporations aren't spinning in favor of their preferred candidate - if they are, obviously they won't say that. Regardless, I wasn't questioning the veracity of WaPo's "only 2 of 15 *currently* work for pharmaceutical co." stat, just pointing out that the head of the board is one of the corporate employees and it is very likely that many of the doctors *previously* worked for Big Pharma, as HRC has previously worked for Wal-Mart and is now fueled by corporate megadonors. What I disagreed with was WaPo's (and the page's) implication that most of the doctors not *currently* working for corporations is good enough support to counter Stein's statements about that the revolving door of lobbyists in pharmaceuticals as a conflict of interest, which is what they're attempting to do without reporting how many of them used to work for Big Pharma. It's lazy journalism. More research is necessary to counter Dr. Stein's professional knowledge of corporations hand picking medical professionals to suit their needs. There is historical basis in corporate cronies hijacking health policy, from the tobacco industry to climate change to lead.[1] Snooganssnoogans if you think I'm such an anonymous charlatan, I'll let you fix this mess, as I've seen your condescension on this talk page and have no desire to edit war with a disrespectful mod. I've wasted enough time airing my grievances with this article already, but I'll check the new version so I can learn what "neutral" means on Wikipedia these days, from the master themselves. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.35.185.245 (talk) 12:34, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
getting past wow
Media studies are going to be important it seems to me, I hope that you will talk a little bit about the history of US Uncut. I suppose that reflexively referring to the talk page in the article itself with a suggestion like ctrl-f "media" would be inappropriate and ineffective. But while we wait patiently for the administration's response, there are some interesting media studies that echo with this page in surprisingly familiar ways: [Power plays]. Note that some of the studies are not that "new". SashiRolls (talk) 13:21, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Duverger's Law
Section 3.2.2.1 "On third party chances" does not fit into the topic.
It is not about Jill Stein, but vaguely about third parties.
If this needs to be brought up at all, it might be better to replace the whole section with a link, maybe https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Third_party_(United_States)
Or if it should remain, it needs to have a disclaimer that nowhere does Duverger's Law state or imply that the two dominant parties will continue to be the Republican Party and the Democratic Party, and in fact several times in US history dominant parties have dwindled to nothing.
I saw a claim that the Duverger's Law section has been discussed and reached final approval in the Talk section, but I did not find that discussion. Jethomas5 (talk) 15:16, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is discussed in "Editors continue to remove inconvenient content and context". If polling data is to be mentioned, it is valid to put it in context by using reliable sources. If the reliable source is misrepresented or if crucial context is missing from the piece, please add it. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:31, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Oh, that. You said it belonged and your friend agreed. Now you have modified it somewhat. I think this whole thing could better be replaced by a link to the Wikipedia article on Third Parties in the USA. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Third_party_(United_States)
Do you disagree? Jethomas5 (talk) 18:57, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I disagree with just linking to 'Third Party'. The section looks fine as is. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 19:06, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
It is redundant, repeating allegations about third parties by various sources. We do just as well to simply link to the Wikipedia discussion that says the same things. I tried editing it to show how I would like it. Jethomas5 (talk) 19:23, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Delete the "On Third Party Chances" Section
The Third party chances section has nothing to do with Stein and seems to be pretty biased. it should be deleted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Torinvlietstra (talk • contribs) 15:24, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- agreed. SashiRolls (talk) 01:58, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- It was SashiRolls's unwise decision to create a subsection for the content. It used to be part of the 2016 race section where it made sense and was relevant to the 2016 race. It should be place there again. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:35, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed, that section does not belong in this article, per WP:COATRACK.--JayJasper (talk) 15:40, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Jay Jasper and Torinvlietstra seem to me to think that the section AND the content of the section do not belong in the article.
- Clarify how it fits WP:COATRACK. It seems to fit perfectly with the exceptions to WP:COATRACK: "An article about an astronaut might mostly focus on his moon landing. A moon trip that took only a tiny fraction of the astronaut's life takes up most of the article. But that does not make it a coatrack article. The event was a significant moment in the subject's life, and his main claim to notability. A reader is not misled by the focus on the moon trip... Material that is supported by a reliable, published source whose topic is directly related to the topic of the article, is not using the article as a coatrack." Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:44, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Key phrase of the last sentence you quoted (emphasis mine): "published source whose topic is directly related to the topic of the article ". As previously noted, the sources do not directly address Stein per se as a topic. Thus, WP:COATRACK applies, per my reading of it. Or perhaps WP:SYNTH is more appropros. Bottom line: the entire section was about an electoral analysis, not about about Jill Stein, the actual subject of the article.--JayJasper (talk) 16:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I'm unsure which articles you're referring to. Maybe 30-60 minutes ago, I deleted the Chomsky article that SashiRolls added because it failed to refer to Stein or the Green Party (was that the article that you were concerned about). I also moved the rest of the section up where it now is in better context. All the articles mention Stein or the Green Party by name, except Sanders who is clearly alluding to the Green Party. Given that outreach to Sanders supporters and even to Sanders himself (offering him the ticket) has by all accounts been a major part of Stein's campaign, it's hard to argue that it's irrelevant to the 2016 race section to mention Sanders' rationale for not supporting Stein. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:14, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I must admit that this edit had escaped my attention when I commented previously. Thank you, I believe your revisions have sufficiently resolved the issue.--JayJasper (talk) 16:37, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Great to hear. Sorry about that, I should have clarified that I had just tinkered with the article. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:45, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
agreed,thanks to all involved.SashiRolls (talk) 19:12, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I must admit that this edit had escaped my attention when I commented previously. Thank you, I believe your revisions have sufficiently resolved the issue.--JayJasper (talk) 16:37, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I'm unsure which articles you're referring to. Maybe 30-60 minutes ago, I deleted the Chomsky article that SashiRolls added because it failed to refer to Stein or the Green Party (was that the article that you were concerned about). I also moved the rest of the section up where it now is in better context. All the articles mention Stein or the Green Party by name, except Sanders who is clearly alluding to the Green Party. Given that outreach to Sanders supporters and even to Sanders himself (offering him the ticket) has by all accounts been a major part of Stein's campaign, it's hard to argue that it's irrelevant to the 2016 race section to mention Sanders' rationale for not supporting Stein. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:14, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Key phrase of the last sentence you quoted (emphasis mine): "published source whose topic is directly related to the topic of the article ". As previously noted, the sources do not directly address Stein per se as a topic. Thus, WP:COATRACK applies, per my reading of it. Or perhaps WP:SYNTH is more appropros. Bottom line: the entire section was about an electoral analysis, not about about Jill Stein, the actual subject of the article.--JayJasper (talk) 16:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Clarify how it fits WP:COATRACK. It seems to fit perfectly with the exceptions to WP:COATRACK: "An article about an astronaut might mostly focus on his moon landing. A moon trip that took only a tiny fraction of the astronaut's life takes up most of the article. But that does not make it a coatrack article. The event was a significant moment in the subject's life, and his main claim to notability. A reader is not misled by the focus on the moon trip... Material that is supported by a reliable, published source whose topic is directly related to the topic of the article, is not using the article as a coatrack." Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:44, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
Consensus in this section would seem to be that the section AND its content do not belong on Jill Stein's page. Am I wrong?JayJasper, Torinvlietstra, and myself. Snoog tricked me with his description. Did he trick you too? SashiRolls (talk) 00:05, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
Here's how Snooganssnoogans described his change on the talk page: "removed the 'on third party chances' section, put the content in context. The Chomsky text does not mention Stein and appears to be on some random individual's blog, so I don't see how it's notable enough for inclusion.)" which led us all to believe that the content had disappeared (as it looked like it had in the diff linked to above). But no, it just landed back in the previous paragraph. Consensus in the last two section was ignored. again. I do appreciate Snooganssnoogans using the SAME argument I used against keeping the Bernie Sanders quote in the first place -- Jill Stein is nowhere mentioned in the quote. Imitation is the most sincere from of flattery after all. :) When the other quotes goes, Chomsky goes. I don't see what you've got against Chomsky... could you explain why he wouldn't be notable on a page about a Left politician? SashiRolls (talk) 00:31, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Again, your reading comprehension is awful. The user above you objected to your preferred version (the creation of the subsection, the contextfree and confusing placement of text, and the ridiculous Chomsky mention), but expressed approval of my re-organization of the material. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:39, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
I beg to differ. "Bottom line: the entire section was about an electoral analysis, not about about Jill Stein, the actual subject of the article." SashiRolls (talk) 00:44, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Are you thick or just fundamentally dishonest? One comment down, the users says that my "revisions have sufficiently resolved the issue". I mean, wtf? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:21, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thick-skinned? Apparently. ^^ SashiRolls (talk) 02:04, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
Incidentally, the idea for regrouping the references was the result of the talk page sections "Wow" and "Doesn't seem neutral" and takes account of the (in my view correct) point of view that much of this page should be on the 2016 presidential campaign page (expressed by several people above). Failing further comment to the contrary, the section seems to me ready for deletion, as there are about 6-8 who seem to feel differently than you do Snooganssnoogans. SashiRolls (talk) 01:10, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
GMOs
I want to make sure that editors of this page are aware that the page section about GMOs (just that section, not the entire page) is under Discretionary Sanctions. Here is an explanation of those sanctions:
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--Tryptofish (talk) 17:15, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Fantastic. It would be great if the vaccines section could also be put under discretionary sanctions. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:45, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- To my knowledge, ArbCom has not done that for vaccines, although there are some more general DS in place for pseudoscience, which I think might be a stretch here. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:30, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Tryptofish This is way beyond my Wikipedia knowledge. You seem to know the rules; what's your take on the very recent edits to this article where a user is promoting pseudoscience on the dangers of Wi-Fi and vaccines, and deleting corrections from reliable sources? I'm hamstrung by the 3RR rule, so can't stop those edits without the threat of being sanctioned myself for edit-warring. This article is full of these kinds of nonsensical edits. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 20:30, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Well, there's no easy answer. It really comes down to WP:NPOV. Because this page is a WP:BLP, it is appropriate to express Jill Stein's views as she expresses them. But any subsequent material, written in Wikipedia's voice, should on the one hand not simply read like a point-counterpoint rebuttal, but on the other hand, it should indicate the science per the preponderance of mainstream sources rather than what is WP:FRINGE. Rulings from ArbCom are not really about content, so much as about conduct, so they won't give you much in the way of rules about what the page should or should not say. If there is a consistent pattern of POV-pushing, you can ask at WP:AN for administrators to keep an eye on the page (I'm not an administrator), and I know that administrators have, in general, been keeping watch on pages about the 2016 election. If you do that, it would be best to say that you are not looking for anyone to be blocked, because it is a content dispute, but that you would like admins to watch for uncooperative editing that is POV. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:31, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Tryptofish This is way beyond my Wikipedia knowledge. You seem to know the rules; what's your take on the very recent edits to this article where a user is promoting pseudoscience on the dangers of Wi-Fi and vaccines, and deleting corrections from reliable sources? I'm hamstrung by the 3RR rule, so can't stop those edits without the threat of being sanctioned myself for edit-warring. This article is full of these kinds of nonsensical edits. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 20:30, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- To my knowledge, ArbCom has not done that for vaccines, although there are some more general DS in place for pseudoscience, which I think might be a stretch here. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:30, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Stein clarified her position on the GMO moritorium, that it would apply to "new genetically modified organisms being introduced into our ecosystems...."[4] No scientists question that new GMOs should be tested for safety, but the main controversy is GMO labelling, which Obama has banned but Clinton supports, sort of, at least at some point.[5] TFD (talk) 22:46, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I added her clarification (though her platform still calls for a moratorium without specifying that it applies to new GMOs) per your source. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:15, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Tryptofish: Some clarification: It's not the party platform, but Stein's platform (candidate platforms are not the same as those of parties). I don't particularly mind removing the quotes but we generally keep them on politicians' pages to make it clear that it's the candidates' own wording (the CNN source that we cite uses the quotes in the same way, most news does when describing politicians' positions) and to clarify what the difference between the old and new positions are. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:23, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- I added her clarification (though her platform still calls for a moratorium without specifying that it applies to new GMOs) per your source. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 23:15, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is not gotcha journalism. We should explain what she meant as reported in secondary sources, rather than pounce on words that could be misinterpreted. I edited the para. TFD (talk) 00:02, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Are you joking? The page should ignore what her official platform states? The page should only state what you interpret her meaning and "true position" to be? When candidates are vague and/or the stated positions conflict, we should mention both of the stated positions, not what some random editor interprets her truest position to be. That's at least the standards applied to Trump (despite the vociferous objections of some users to interpret his truest position like you do with Stein), Kaine, Clinton and Pence. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:10, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- See "No original research": "Policy: Unless restricted by another policy, primary sources that have been reputably published may be used in Wikipedia, but only with care, because it is easy to misuse them. Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation." It is not my interpretation but what appears in the CNN story. TFD (talk) 00:43, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- My apologies about my error about the platform, but I see that it has been fixed. I support the changes TFD made, because it remains clear what her position is. --Tryptofish (talk) 00:50, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- There's one sentence on GMOs in her platform and the section quoted it. There's zero room for misinterpretation and misuse. The Washington Post even cites her platform position on GMOs here, making no mention of a moratorium on "new" GMOs (https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/post-politics/wp/2016/07/29/jill-stein-on-vaccines-people-have-real-questions/). The CNN source also says that she wanted a moratorium (new GMOs not mentioned) and then added that Stein later clarified that it applied to new GMOs, which is completely consistent with how the section used to look. So you're the one picking partial bits from the CNN source, misleading readers. If Stein, like Trump, is making up policy as she goes alongr, the page should reflect that, not have editors pick the stated positions of hers that they like the most and exclude those they don't. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:05, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- While you are saying that there is "zero room for misinterpretation," the CNN article says that the Green Party would not have a moritorium on existing GMOs. If you feel that Clinton is the best candidate, then you should accept that an article and fair representation of each candidate will serve her better than her supporters misrepresenting her opponents. TFD (talk) 01:49, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- I have not read the CNN source, but if it says that the Green Party says A, Jill Stein's platform says B, and Stein later clarified it to C, and the source also presents A, B, and C as being different from each other, then it would be appropriate to cite it as saying so. If it does not present A, B, and C as related in that way, then we should leave the section as it is. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:56, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- CNN refers to it as a clarification A of her proposal B. I don't see why the section can't say something along these lines: "Stein's official platform calls for "a moratorium on GMOs and pesticides until they are proven safe" (cite: her platform + the Washington Post story that mentions this part of her platform). She later clarified that her proposal would entail a moratorium on "new" GMOs and that she would "phase out" GMO foods currently being grown (cite the CNN source)". On the pages of other politicians, we usually run through candidates' history of statements on an issue if they are vague and contradictory. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 02:16, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- The CNN source says (i) she "has called for a moratorium" on GMOs (without specifying "new" GMOs) + (ii) "Stein clarified her GMO moratorium proposal, telling CNN Wednesday" that a moratorium should be on "new" GMOs. The first part is referring to her platform, the second is CNN asking her about the moratorium and Stein proceeds to present a moratorium on "new" GMOs. So Stein's platform presents one policy position and Stein later presents a seemingly different position when questioned by CNN. Note that never does she specify that existing GMOs would be allowed. This kind of nuance is important: there is a difference between wanting to ban existing GMOs and ban new GMOs. If you don't want to use her platform directly, you can source the WaPo article that I linked to which cites her platform (presuming that you're actually interested in presenting her position on the issue). The last sentence of yours is nonsensical and not substantive. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 02:05, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- I have not read the CNN source, but if it says that the Green Party says A, Jill Stein's platform says B, and Stein later clarified it to C, and the source also presents A, B, and C as being different from each other, then it would be appropriate to cite it as saying so. If it does not present A, B, and C as related in that way, then we should leave the section as it is. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:56, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- While you are saying that there is "zero room for misinterpretation," the CNN article says that the Green Party would not have a moritorium on existing GMOs. If you feel that Clinton is the best candidate, then you should accept that an article and fair representation of each candidate will serve her better than her supporters misrepresenting her opponents. TFD (talk) 01:49, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- See "No original research": "Policy: Unless restricted by another policy, primary sources that have been reputably published may be used in Wikipedia, but only with care, because it is easy to misuse them. Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation." It is not my interpretation but what appears in the CNN story. TFD (talk) 00:43, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Are you joking? The page should ignore what her official platform states? The page should only state what you interpret her meaning and "true position" to be? When candidates are vague and/or the stated positions conflict, we should mention both of the stated positions, not what some random editor interprets her truest position to be. That's at least the standards applied to Trump (despite the vociferous objections of some users to interpret his truest position like you do with Stein), Kaine, Clinton and Pence. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:10, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is not gotcha journalism. We should explain what she meant as reported in secondary sources, rather than pounce on words that could be misinterpreted. I edited the para. TFD (talk) 00:02, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
I am not arguing that your interpretation is incorrect, merely that policy does not allow your version because it relies on your interpretation. I have posted the issue to NORN. If you respond there, please bear in mind that the issue is not whether you think there is a contradiction between the platform and what Stein said, but whether stating that is consistent with OR policy. TFD (talk) 03:06, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Could you add this as a third possible version: "Stein's official platform calls for "a moratorium on GMOs and pesticides until they are proven safe" (cite: her platform + the Washington Post story that mentions this part of her platform). She later clarified that her proposal would entail a moratorium on "new" GMOs and that she would "phase out" GMO foods currently being grown (cite the CNN source)"? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 03:23, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Why not just present her position? "The witness said it was 100 degrees that day. When questioned, he clarified that it was 100 degrees Fahrenheit." Would it not be more straightforward to just say what he meant? The only reason one would mention the clarification is to imply that the witness meant it was 100 Celsius. If you want to imply that Stein has changed her position or is now misleading the public, that is original research. TFD (talk) 09:21, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- In my opinion, what is on the page now is sufficient. I'm not hearing that the sources are arguing that it was some sort of change of position, in the sources' opinion. The only change I would like to see is to remove the WP:SCAREQUOTES around "phase out", because "phase out" is not a sufficiently unusual phrase that it would need to be placed as a direct quote; the effect of the punctuation is to imply that phasing out is somehow a questionable goal. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:01, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Why not just present her position? "The witness said it was 100 degrees that day. When questioned, he clarified that it was 100 degrees Fahrenheit." Would it not be more straightforward to just say what he meant? The only reason one would mention the clarification is to imply that the witness meant it was 100 Celsius. If you want to imply that Stein has changed her position or is now misleading the public, that is original research. TFD (talk) 09:21, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
Snooganssnoogans|Snooganssnoogans do you believe that Path(e)os > Atheist > Danthology is a reliable (or notable) source?
AlejandroMS's recent edits
@AlejandroMS:: I reverted your recent edits.
In these edits, you
- Removed a very large amount of sourced material, including some longstanding content that no user has objected to and some content that consensus strongly favors; and
- Inserted a bunch of improper text, including:
- POV text, e.g,, "the Obama administration's fierce prosecution of whistleblowers revealing government corruption" is not NPOV (see WP:NPOV); "several articles have been published lately that accuse certain individuals and organizations of creating anti-Stein smear campaigns" (not NPOV, especially when cited to a Russian propaganda network (RT) and a left-wing opinion website (Counterpunch)).
- Unsourced and promotional text, e.g., "Stein's Harvard medical school education and teaching tenure combined with her holistic views do not put her at great odds with most of the leading scientists when it comes to topics such as climate change, global warming or vaccines." (No source provided, reference to her education is promotional in tone).
- Addition of material that doesn't mention Stein at all and is irrelevant, e.g.:
- inserting a reference to one appointment made by Pres. Obama (irrelevant and cited only to Wikipedia itself, which is not permitted, see WP:CIRCULAR)
- inserting a discussion of the Green Party platform outside of the Stein-specific context;
- inserting a discussion of GMO regulation abroad and across the U.S. (irrelevant to Stein's bio);
- inserting a long (and rather misleading) block of text about the safety of Wi-Fi, cited to unreliable websites ("electromagnetichealth.org") and links to a variety of Wikipedia articles (again, irrelevant to Stein, improperly sourced, and a violation of WP:FRINGE).
In your revert, you added back the bit about the gorilla. I suppose this was an accident? Several solid edits were also included in this, but I agree that there were a significant number of questionable moves in AlejandroMS's edits (though there were also constructive efforts included). SashiRolls (talk) 11:23, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
Consensus ignored / Open ANI concerning Snooganssnoogans ?
Despite the clear consensus above on whether or not the gorilla should stay on Jill Stein's page, this morning I found it had found it's way back onto the page (possibly in "Neutrality"'s revert?). I have also deleted the "On 3rd party chances" section along with its content as consensus seems to have been reached that these two items have no place whatsoever on her biography page. SashiRolls (talk) 10:56, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- There's absolutely no consensus that the content in the "On 3rd party chances" section should be removed. You just emerged from a discussion where it was pointed out to you that you misrepresented the views of another user, a user who favored keeping the content in the "On 3rd party chances" section as per my edit. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:17, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Do you mean when JayJasper wrote: "Bottom line: the entire section was about an electoral analysis, not about about Jill Stein, the actual subject of the article.--JayJasper (talk) 16:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC) "
- The user is referring to an older version (YOUR version where there's a ridiculous subsection called 'on third party chances' which contains an irrelevant Chomsky comment and a bunch of comments out of context). After seeing my edit (how the article looks like now), the user says that my "revisions have sufficiently resolved the issue". This has now been pointed out to you twice, yet you persist in misrepresenting the issue.Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:27, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- I believe the text above concerning his "bottom line" is clear, and that your misleading revert tricked us all into believing you had deleted the section along with its content (as stated). There is no need to reply further, if JayJasper wishes to respond, either above or here, as to whether he saw what you actually did or just relied on what you said you did, that would be a helpful action in an effort to undo the hacking of this page. SashiRolls (talk) 12:38, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- The guy links to the edit in question, and says explicitly that my "revisions have sufficiently resolved the issue". How clear can he be?! Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:40, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- I believe the text above concerning his "bottom line" is clear, and that your misleading revert tricked us all into believing you had deleted the section along with its content (as stated). There is no need to reply further, if JayJasper wishes to respond, either above or here, as to whether he saw what you actually did or just relied on what you said you did, that would be a helpful action in an effort to undo the hacking of this page. SashiRolls (talk) 12:38, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- The user is referring to an older version (YOUR version where there's a ridiculous subsection called 'on third party chances' which contains an irrelevant Chomsky comment and a bunch of comments out of context). After seeing my edit (how the article looks like now), the user says that my "revisions have sufficiently resolved the issue". This has now been pointed out to you twice, yet you persist in misrepresenting the issue.Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:27, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Do you mean when JayJasper wrote: "Bottom line: the entire section was about an electoral analysis, not about about Jill Stein, the actual subject of the article.--JayJasper (talk) 16:05, 20 August 2016 (UTC) "
I also removed a line from the lead which had no business being there (but was there to be sure that something negative appeared if the article is shared on FB or other social media, cf. FB opengraph debugger). Similar tactics have been used for the talk page to ensure that if it is posted to social media, a sentence about "pro-Stein" slant appears... SashiRolls (talk) 10:56, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
Should a WP:ANI be opened concerning the unhelpful edit behavior being exhibited on this page, as initially suggested by NeilN here.?
Comment:
SashiRolls reverts content that already has consensus for the umpteenth time
This revert (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jill_Stein&type=revision&diff=735538991&oldid=735538215) has already been discussed multiple times on the talk page, getting consensus the first time and in subsequent discussions. In pretending he/she has consensus for this revert, SashiRolls repeatedly misrepresents the view of one user, "JayJasper", who finds no problems with the content that was reverted. This has been pointed out to SashiRolls twice (edit: thrice now), but he/she persists in misrepresenting this user's views and claims that it entails consensus. Please restore. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:39, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
Request for comments
Should the following text be included in the article (this is the context: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jill_Stein&oldid=735538215#2016):
- Sanders has called upon his supporters to vote for Clinton, saying that the United States is not a multi-party parliamentary system and that "you're gonna end up having a choice. Either Hillary Clinton is going to become president, or Donald Trump."[1][2] In July 2016, Trump stated that a vote for Stein would be good for him: "I think a vote for Stein would be good — that’s the Green Party. Because I figure anyone voting for Stein is gonna be for Hillary. So I think vote for Stein is fine."[under discussion][3] According to political scientist Amanda Skuldt, third-party candidates stand no chance of winning the 2016 election due to Duverger's Law, which suggests that the electoral system in the United States has a law-like tendency towards a two-party system.[4] Skuldt argues that recent third-party candidates have chiefly had a spoiler effect: splitting votes between candidates with similar ideologies and causing a strong opponent of both to win, as when Ross Perot split the Republican vote in 1992 and Ralph_Nader split the Democratic vote in 2000.[4]
References
- ^ "Sanders warns his supporters against choosing a third party". Washington Post. Retrieved 2016-07-26.
- ^ "Alex Seitz-Wald on Twitter". Retrieved 2016-07-26.
- ^ Neidig, Harper (2016-07-28). "Trump: A vote for the Green Party helps me". Retrieved 2016-07-28.
- ^ a b "Could a third-party candidate win the U.S. presidency? That's very unlikely". Washington Post. Retrieved 2016-08-02.
Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:10, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Include. All the sources mention Stein or the Green Party by name, except Sanders who is clearly alluding to the Green Party. Given that outreach to Sanders supporters and even to Sanders himself (offering him the ticket) has by all accounts been a major part of Stein's campaign (and is a dominant theme in the preceding paragraphs in this article), it's hard to argue that it's irrelevant to the 2016 race section to mention Sanders' rationale for not supporting Stein. Trump's statement about the third party candidate is clearly relevant as part of the campaign. It is the one time that a candidate of the two major parties has spoken about the Green Party. Hard to argue that it's undue, especially when the preceding sections are about Stein's thoughts on the two major party candidates. The academic research being cited is clearly relevant for context and facts about the issues that Stein, Sanders and Trump are addressing. This content also currently exists on Gary Johnson's page. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 13:15, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude 1) You were asked to seek consensus about your revert, not about this question. Your reversion here was to undelete the section "On Third Party Chances" against current consensus, based on my reading of the talk thread which you don't seem to be doing. Could you reformulate your question to include the Chomsky quote on Lesser Evil Voting that has as much place in the question as Trump or Sanders. Nobody but you has disputed the Chomsky quote. Thank you. SashiRolls (talk) 14:29, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- ? If you want to include the Chomsky quote (which you yourself added and then deleted, and which nobody has expressed support for), create your own request for comments. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 14:35, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude This article is about Jill Stein, not the Green Party or their 2016 presidential campaign. And if we are going to provide opinions, we need to balance them. For example, while Duverger's law says that in a first-past the post system, there will only be two viable parties, the U.S. is the only country where that holds true. Ironically Duverger said that in the two party system there would be no difference between the two. Each would position itself in the middle of the spectrum in order to maximize electoral appeal. TFD (talk) 15:46, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is for the 2016 section in Jill Stein's article. Should her 2016 presidential campaign be covered or not? You think it's undue to mention that Sanders chose to support Clinton after two paragraphs of Stein reaching out to Sanders supporters and Sanders himself? If you can find an article by a political scientist that says that Duverger's Law doesn't apply to the US presidential race, you should add it. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:52, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Obviously the campaign should be mentioned but the detail is excessive, particularly the commentary when we have not established the weight of the various opinions. Patrick Dunleavy, Professor of Political Science and Public Policy at the London School of Economics and Political Science, says "But the fact that one country appears to offer strong support to Duverger’s Law is not in itself very helpful, since the USA has many other features that might conduce to the same effect – including a Presidential system, the absence of socialism, a political plutocracy, an absence of much limits on campaign spending and political advertising, etc."[6] TFD (talk) 16:44, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Dunleavy argues that the US political system is conducive to a two-party system (the same argument as by Skuldt) but that other reasons might be at play other than Duverger's Law, including the Presidential system. Note that the author does not comment on US presidential contests, and does not talk about the chances of third party candidates in US presidential contests. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:55, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- He does not argue that the U.S. is conducive to a two party system, but that it might be. And of course it might be, because it has an effective two party system. But if the application of Duverger's law to the U.S. is questionable, why mention it in this article? TFD (talk) 17:12, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- He pretty clearly argues that the US is conducive to a two party system (did you seriously read that with the take-away that Dunleavy believes that GOP and Dems "might" dominate the 2016 Congressional election rather than that they "will" dominate the 2016 Congressional election?). Nowhere in the piece does he address the presidential race and whether Duverger's Law applies there, so it's not right to say that the application of Duverger's Law to the 2016 presidential race is questionable. He even mentions the presidential system as one factor that could explain the two-party system. The proposed text is also specific in that this is Skuldt's argument. If there are academics who don't believe that the US system is conducive to a two-party system or attribute other reasons for the two-party system, you should feel free to add those to the article (though they have to make references to Stein and the Green Party). Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:29, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- For other reliable sources that mention Duverger's Law in the context of Stein, see NY Times[7] and Christian Science Monitor[8]. So this is not some fringe and non-academic theory that's getting undue weight. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:33, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Saying that the U.S. has a two party system and saying it is conducive to a two party system are different things. According to Duverger's law for example, the UK is conducive to a 2 party system, yet 11 parties won seats in the last election and third parties accounted for 1/3 of the votes cast. And stricly speaking, your other sources do not "mention Duverger's Law in the context of Stein," they mention it in terms of the U.S. election and third parties, and mention Stein. The NYT article for example is called, "Can Gary Johnson, the Libertarian Nominee, Swing the Election?" While it might be appropriate to mention that there are obstacles to a third party candidate, you're taking it into excessive detail about a theory that probably is not relevant. Anyway the most common reason for the lack of third parties in the U.S. is the lack of ideological diversity. TFD (talk) 18:13, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- He does not argue that the U.S. is conducive to a two party system, but that it might be. And of course it might be, because it has an effective two party system. But if the application of Duverger's law to the U.S. is questionable, why mention it in this article? TFD (talk) 17:12, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Dunleavy argues that the US political system is conducive to a two-party system (the same argument as by Skuldt) but that other reasons might be at play other than Duverger's Law, including the Presidential system. Note that the author does not comment on US presidential contests, and does not talk about the chances of third party candidates in US presidential contests. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 16:55, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Obviously the campaign should be mentioned but the detail is excessive, particularly the commentary when we have not established the weight of the various opinions. Patrick Dunleavy, Professor of Political Science and Public Policy at the London School of Economics and Political Science, says "But the fact that one country appears to offer strong support to Duverger’s Law is not in itself very helpful, since the USA has many other features that might conduce to the same effect – including a Presidential system, the absence of socialism, a political plutocracy, an absence of much limits on campaign spending and political advertising, etc."[6] TFD (talk) 16:44, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is for the 2016 section in Jill Stein's article. Should her 2016 presidential campaign be covered or not? You think it's undue to mention that Sanders chose to support Clinton after two paragraphs of Stein reaching out to Sanders supporters and Sanders himself? If you can find an article by a political scientist that says that Duverger's Law doesn't apply to the US presidential race, you should add it. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:52, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. It might be appropriate for a page about the 2016 election, but it really is not biographical material. It sounds more like an editorial in Wikipedia's voice, opposing votes for third party candidates. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:07, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude per Tryptofish. It is inappropriate for a biographical article and overly editorial and biased.--TM 22:25, 21 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude, of course, per above comments; biography, not editorial about the election. 174.19.243.30 (talk) 02:07, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude, these seem like cherry-picked quotes chosen to advance a certain point of view.Masebrock (talk) 06:48, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- I dare you to find any other quotes by Sanders, Trump or political scientists about Stein. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:05, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- It would be trivially easy to find quotes from other political scientists about Jill Stein. Cornel West would be a place to start. Masebrock (talk) 17:24, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- West is not a political scientist. He neither has a PhD in poli sci nor has he published any poli sci research. I look forward to seeing a long list of quotes, seeing as how it's "trivially easy" to find them. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:32, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- True. But anyway, I'm not letting you set the goalposts. Restricting quotes to only political opponents and PhD political scientists is silly. There are plenty of notable people who have quotes about Jill Stein. Including a list of quotes about a political figure must be done with deliberate caution as not to be seen advancing a POV. Which is why I think at this point, with so much controversy over this page, it is a very bad idea. Masebrock (talk) 17:58, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- West is not a political scientist. He neither has a PhD in poli sci nor has he published any poli sci research. I look forward to seeing a long list of quotes, seeing as how it's "trivially easy" to find them. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:32, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- It would be trivially easy to find quotes from other political scientists about Jill Stein. Cornel West would be a place to start. Masebrock (talk) 17:24, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- I dare you to find any other quotes by Sanders, Trump or political scientists about Stein. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 12:05, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose Seems very WP:COATish. TimothyJosephWood 23:09, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
call for copy editing help
This is our current wiki-text:
In response to a twitter question on whether vaccines cause autism, Stein tweeted, "there is no evidence that autism is caused by vaccines" but quickly deleted the tweet and tweeted instead the more circumspect, "I'm not aware of evidence linking autism with vaccines.
I would propose:
In response to a twitter question on whether vaccines cause autism, Stein first responded, "there is no evidence that autism is caused by vaccines," then revised her tweet to a more prudent "I'm not aware of evidence linking autism with vaccines."
Better suggestions:
In March 2016, she tweeted, "Nuclear power plants = weapons of mass destruction waiting to be detonated."
Sanders content
I'm removing the back-and-forth on Sanders until there is some consensus on whether to include it, and if so on how to word it. The article's five full sentences on Sanders appeared excessive to me, and very shaky based on three key facts:
- The content was based mostly on a Reddit post made by Stein, a Tweet made by Stein, and a Democracy Now! interview. That could probably support some content (self-published sources are acceptable to cite for a person's own opinions), but it does indicate that there's not a very large amount of secondary coverage on the topic.
- More importantly, we absolutely cannot include five sentences on Stein's comments about, and overtures to, Sanders without also including Sanders' response. It would mislead the reader and paint an incorrect impression to do otherwise.
- Details about the Stein-Sanders back-and-forth can be and should be addressed, if anywhere, at Jill Stein presidential campaign, 2016. This is mostly in the context of the campaign, rather than in the context of Stein's biographical details (i.e., her personal views and positions, her career, etc.)
--Neutralitytalk 21:40, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed. If the text on Stein's outreach to Sanders supporters and to Sanders himself is to be kept in the article, then it is crucial not to omit that Sanders has explicitly rejected those overtures. Otherwise, the article gives the impression that Sanders has yet to take a position on the matter. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 22:35, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- We should mention that Stein offered to step aside so that Sanders could be the Green Party candidate. We could also mention - briefly - the reasons for the offer and refusal. But any greater detail belongs in the campaign article. TFD (talk) 22:44, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- I'd probably be fine with this. Anyone have suggested language? Neutralitytalk 23:04, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
Call for Neutrality
Neutrality, could you revert camarade Snoog please; this is pertinent in polling. Note it comes from a vote Stein or vote Clinton debate of very high quality... Of course the whole polling bit could go on the campaign page too... but if it stays, I see no reason not to include this. Thanks for your neutrality, neutrality. :)
Concerning the Left, internationally, Chris Hedges spoke of the long view in his debate with Robert Reich concerning the quadrennial election: "We have to remember that 10 years ago, Syriza, which controls the Greek government, was polling at exactly the same spot that the Green Party is polling now—about 4 percent. We’ve got to break out of this idea that we can create systematic change within a particular election cycle."
User:SashiRolls, 18:09, August 22, 2016
- I'm not sure why this is directed at me — you added this content and Snooganssnoogans, quite properly, removed it. The obnoxious snark (i.e., sarcastic language like "camarade") isn't particularly helpful, by the way.
- As to the issue: this quote from Hedges (an endorser of Stein) falls into the category of "generic punditry" that isn't helpful in a biographical article. (I highly doubt whether it would even be appropriate in Jill Stein presidential campaign, 2016). We already mention briefly that Hedges is a supporter of Stein. I see no reason why we should shoehorn a long quote from him into this article. That would be akin to including a laudatory quote from, say, Barney Frank or David Brock on the Hillary Clinton page about the brilliance of Clinton's campaign strategy or something. It just wouldn't belong.
- If this was a full-scale theme of Stein's campaign — rather than an offhand comment by one of her supporters — then I might feel differently. There is zero evidence that this is the case. Neutralitytalk 23:22, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is directed at you for two reasons: 1) either you know the page better than I do and so you know that many of the quotes on the page are from non-notable sources, e.g. Dan Arel on GMOs. On the other hand, a long-time associate, fellow traveler, surrogate or whatever you want to call him, who is speaking precisely on the election at hand, is not a source conerning policy? Hmm... it's almost like Wasserman-Schulz doesn't have her place on HRC's 2016 campaign page... Justice is blind, neutrality. Power to the people. (yes, I imagine that's part of the program in other words.))SashiRolls (talk) 23:31, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- or 2) you don't know the page and are unaware of what is happening on this page (i.e. that the consensus is being ignored, that this page is biased (as it says on the page itself).
- Concerning snark, when new members to the thread are greated with threatening language (I dare you to...), you are going to have to deal with a bit of snark now and then. We've seen snark recurrently from many (one-time) visitors to this talk page, and in some old edit summaries concerning your gorilla and Lucifer. Why do you think that is?SashiRolls (talk) 00:01, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- Strange that Occupy appears only as a caption on the page. (also)SashiRolls (talk) 23:40, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- I genuinely cannot make heads or tails of what you are trying to say. In any case, I have started an RfC on the Chris Hedges quote, below. It is really regrettable when editors focus on other users and make vague comments, when really we should be focusing on the content and making specific suggestions whenever possible. Neutralitytalk 23:51, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
Crystal Ball
With the exception of the Chomsky quote, which does actually pertain to going to the polls, the rest of the paragraph doesn't seem to me to be likely to be what a Wikipedia user interested in learning about Jill Stein would be most interested in. (just my opinion mind you...) — Preceding unsigned comment added by SashiRolls (talk • contribs) 02:09, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
Undue weight on polling in 2016 election
I have deleted the following sentence from the page because it indicates a clear anti-Stein bias on the part of Wikipedia:
"In an August fundraising email, the Stein campaign cited a website poll (an unreliable measure of public sentiment) as indicative of a coming 'big jump in Jill's numbers'." (One of three wiki-voice references to "Why Friends Don't Let Friends Vote for Jill Stein" in the Wikipedia article, which the major anti-Stein players have repeatedly used (here 3x, but also on her running mate's page). This article originally appeared in an obscure magazine named Tablet (funded by a special interest) and has since been syndicated and repackaged to the sort of "Neutral" reliable source the anti-Stein crew seems to prefer to serious discussion: Truth Jihad, see here.
If the anti-Stein krew wish to argue for the inclusion of the Truth Jihad editorial, it would be helpful to rewrite the elements in wiki-voice in an unbaised manner, though I don't really believe this is a useful or neutral citation for Jill Stein's biography page.
When I first arrived on this page, there were 80K signs on the page. There are still 80K signs on the page. Why? Because the anti-Stein crew is fighting tooth and nail to prevent visitors to her page from learning anything positive about her and so delete any serious discussion of issues. One of the most powerful members of the anti-Stein crew is an administrator who goes by the name of "Neutrality", but who shows significant bias in his "copy-editing", writing and reverts (and who has been called out in the Atlantic for being the most active editor on Tim Kaine's wikipedia page just prior to his announcement as the Dems VP candidate). He (or his aggressive ally Snoogans) have removed the reference to the long and detailed debate between Robert Reich and Chris Hedges entirely on more than one occasion, and have now removed this direct quote from it (in the context of a biased paragraph on polling):
"We have to remember that 10 years ago, Syriza, which controls the Greek government, was polling at exactly the same spot that the Green Party is polling now—about 4 percent." We’ve got to break out of this idea that we can create systematic change within a particular election cycle (the previous sentence, which I chose not to include, was "And this is, of course, why I support Dr. Stein and the Green Party." Why? Because "this" refers to the prescience of Ralph Nader concerning the "corporate coup d'état" in the previous paragraph. I added the Chomsky quotation because Neutrality asked me to provide evidence that this was a "party-wide issue", though I assume he means international left issue...
Presumably, the anti-Stein lobby given free reign on her biography page to hassle good faith editors does not wish for anyone coming to this page to learn more about what Chris Hedges had to say... particularly the lines "We have bailed out the banks, pushed through programs of austerity. This has been a bipartisan effort, because they’ve both been captured by corporate power. We have undergone what John Ralston Saul correctly calls a corporate coup d’état in slow motion, and it’s over." (Note how during this campaign of misrepresentation, the context of Jill Stein's remarkably similar comments on bank bailouts and austerity has been removed in order to cherry pick a sentence about Nazi Germany, counting on the reader to be shocked by the statement ripped out of context.)
Similarly, the 2 hour long video from the University of the Left featuring Glen Ford, Jill Stein and Chris Hedges was also deleted without first seeking comment, as Chomsky has been on several occasions. Similarly, reference to Jill Stein preferring to spend money helping Puerto Ricans to spending money on the military has also been summarily deleted...
Looking forward to the anti-Stein clan beginning to work seriously towards removal of the anti-Stein bias tag that is on the page by allowing inclusion of some content favorable to her campaign, rather than simply toning down the many factual misrepresentations we've found in the thread (gorilla, Brexit, vaccines, putative lack of critique of Russian foreign policy, wifi, tweets vs. policy positions, etc. ...) SashiRolls (talk) 22:36, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- The editing of this page would be a lot better off if editors would focus on content, and refrain from describing other editors as pro- or anti-Stein "crew" or "clan". --Tryptofish (talk) 22:58, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- 99% of the above is content based, talking about the factual misrepresentations and inappropriate clipping of citations... issues that have been brought up over and over again and summarily dismissed. Note that it was Alejandro who most recently pointed out the clipped citation on Nazi Germany. SashiRolls (talk) 23:05, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- SashiRolls, your constant personal attacks and lengthy rants — inveighing against not only me (with whom you appear quite preoccupied), but any and all editors who disagree with you on content — is tiresome in the extreme. You have been repeatedly and explicitly advised about WP:NPA, WP:AGF, and casting aspersions, yet you continue to refer to other users as "Clinton spinners"; "the anti-Stein lobby"; "the anti-Stein crew," and "the HRC folks"; you advance ridiculous conspiratorial assertions (that we are part of a shadowy cabal); and you deploy sarcasm and snark at every single opportunity; Please cut it out. Neutralitytalk 23:15, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- Seconded. Since this article is related to post-1932 American politics, it's covered under WP:ARBAPDS. Continued battleground mentality could result in sanctions. clpo13(talk) 23:21, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
Comments on the 2016 polling paragraph:
Allow or prohibit counterbalancing argument to "Friends Don't Let Friends Vote for Jill Stein"?
Comments on the truncated citation from Jill Stein on the rise of far-right parties internationally:
Require impartial full citation of the argument for inclusion of the word "Nazi" or permit the continued partial citation without the argumentation behind it?
RfC: Should the following two sentences -- one about the fundraising email, the other a quote from Chris Hedges -- be included or excluded from the section on Stein's 2016 presidential campaign?
Should the following two contested sentences -- one about a Stein fundraising email, the other a quote from Chris Hedges -- be included or excluded? (Discussion for each is separated). Neutralitytalk 23:38, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- As a courtesy, I am pinging the following logged-in users who have weighed in on recent prior discussions on this page: @Gouncbeatduke:, @SashiRolls:, @Snooganssnoogans:, @VictoriaGrayson:, @The Four Deuces:, @Tryptofish:, @Namiba:, @Masebrock:, @Clpo13:. Neutralitytalk 23:45, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
Sentence 1: Fundraising email
The first sentence at issue is the following, cited to a piece in Tablet magazine:
- In an August fundraising email, the Stein campaign cited a website poll (an unreliable measure of public sentiment) as indicative of a coming "big jump in Jill's numbers".[1]
References
- ^ "Friends Don't Let Friends Vote for Jill Stein". Retrieved 2016-08-12.
- Probably exclude. Although I would not be too upset if this stayed in — and this incident was a little strange — this doesn't seem like worthy of inclusion in a biography. Perhaps this would be better suited for Jill Stein presidential campaign, 2016. Neutralitytalk 23:38, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. Not biographical, but well-suited to the campaign page. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:54, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- Neutral. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:16, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. Sentence as written is a vehicle for POV. The article being republished by Truth Jihad is a strong sign that it should be considered suspect. [9]SashiRolls (talk) 00:25, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. Her citation of this poll is not notable, the only source reporting it is an obscure opinion article. Masebrock (talk) 03:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude Seems like POV pushing. Iazyges (talk) 21:03, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. A bunch of reasons. Failed verification, not neutral, not biographically noteworthy, and not noteworthy even in the Stein campaign article. Random missives from politicians' electoral campaigns that don't receive substantial news coverage are simply not encyclopedia material. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 20:44, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. Summoned by bot. Seems trivial and POV. If there are more sources I might reconsider. Coretheapple (talk) 14:04, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Sentence 2: quote from Stein supporter Chris Hedges
The second sentence at issue is the following, cited to an interview in Democracy Now!:
Concerning the Left, internationally, Chris Hedges spoke of the long view in his debate with Robert Reich concerning the quadrennial election: "We have to remember that 10 years ago, Syriza, which controls the Greek government, was polling at exactly the same spot that the Green Party is polling now—about 4 percent. We’ve got to break out of this idea that we can create systematic change within a particular election cycle."[1]
References
- ^ "Chris Hedges v. Robert Reich on Clinton, Third Parties, Capitalism & Next Steps for Sanders Backers". Democracy Now!. Retrieved 18 August 2016.
- Exclude. Not a close call. This overlong quote from Hedges (an endorser of Stein) falls into the category of "generic promotional punditry" that isn't helpful in a biographical article. This strained comparison to Greece hasn't been made by any other commentator of note. We already mention briefly that Hedges is a supporter of Stein (under "Endorsers"). I see no reason why we should shoehorn a long quote from him into this article. That would be akin to including a laudatory quote from, say, Barney Frank or David Brock on the Hillary Clinton biography about the brilliance of Clinton's campaign strategy or something. It just wouldn't belong. See also WP:QUOTEFARM. Neutralitytalk 23:38, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- Neutral, leaning exclude. I don't feel strongly about this, because it seems to me to be a positive statement about Stein, or at least about her approach to politics, but it also seems more about the campaign than about the person, and it is a bit long. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:57, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. For the reasons outlined by Neutrality. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:16, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Include the idea. This sets up the following Chomsky quote about election cycles, since they use exactly the same words. In order for Greens to be on the ballot locally in many states, they must run candidates for governor, president... and so the bit about "election cycles" is the most important (in my view). Concerning Syriza, Podemos, Corbyn, etc., just as the article mentions a rise in right-wing parties in Europe (or would if the argumentation concerning the Nazi quote weren't improperly truncated) it could also mention the rise of left-wing parties in Europe (Podemos, Syriza, Sinn Fein, les insoumises / FDG, Corbyn labor, ...) I hope this is a sign that there will be more open discussion in the months to come. Thank you for asking both questions, neutrality.SashiRolls (talk) 00:25, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude As Neutrality said, this is "generic promotional punditry." Masebrock (talk) 03:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. This isn't about Jill Stein so it has no place in a biography about her. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 20:45, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude. Summoned by bot. Seems trivial and not sufficiently relevant to the subject matter. Coretheapple (talk) 14:06, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Remove systemic bias tag?
Progress is being made, I think. What needs to be done before removing the systemic bias tag? (The education section remains partial (no mention of Common Core criticism yet, for example.) I'm getting close to finished here on this page (RW time constraints). I hope that others will be around to keep moving it in the right direction... (towards more peace and less war...)
I would love to hear consensus to remove that tag soon, but I think there is still some work to be done. Tried to redirect tag here to reflect progress made, but failed to do so. Thank you to all involved. SashiRolls (talk) 04:28, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
I think there are still some problems with the science section. First, it is weasel-wording to say she "has been criticized for holding what CNN terms "out-of-the-mainstream" views on a number of science-related topics." Also, when we use in-line citations we should refer to the the author who wrote the words, in this case Eli Watkins. And we cannot use headlines as sources. What Watkins wrote was, she "has experienced significant backlash online as she has moved from her base within the Green Party to a national audience."
The vaccine section is too long. What is the point of a whole paragraph explaining that she says vaccines do not cause autism? There is nothing in the Clinton article, although she said, "I am committed to make investments to find the causes of autism, including possible environmental causes like vaccines…We don't know what, if any, kind of link there is between vaccines and autism - but we should find out."[10] A lot of the editors here edit that article.
The criticism in GMO is also confusing. Certainly GMOs are not released until they are found to be safe. Otherwise it is not clear what is unscientific about Stein's position. Support for GMO labeling is not by definition unscientific.
The Wi-Fi section is confusing too. She discusses two issues. The first is that she thinks kindergarten children should spend more time interacting with other children than staring at a screen. There is no science-based rebuttal in the sources, although it is dismissed as unscientific. The other is that WiFi could cause harm. CNN uses a WHO report from 2006 to say that no adverse effects have been found. But currently they say, "Extensive research has been conducted into possible health effects of exposure to many parts of the frequency spectrum. All reviews conducted so far have indicated that exposures below the limits recommended in the ICNIRP (1998) EMF guidelines, covering the full frequency range from 0-300 GHz, do not produce any known adverse health effect. However, there are gaps in knowledge still needing to be filled before better health risk assessments can be made."[11] That is consistent with what Stein said.
I notice too that there is no assessment on whether her views on climate change are unscientific. TFD (talk) 05:28, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the input. I've tried to address some of the concerns you mentioned, though I don't think I can remove anything, personally. Perhaps an RFC on the Wifi section? :) SashiRolls (talk) 15:20, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
GMOs and pesticides
- I'm only responding to what TFD raised about GMOs. This was discussed in extreme detail in the GMO RfC. Whether or not GMOs are not released until they are found to be safe is debated in reliable secondary sources. The RfC consensus is that scientists say that new GMOs should not be released until they are tested and found to be safe, and that whether or not this actually occurs depends upon the details of government regulation in a given location, and that this regulation varies very widely. The consensus was also that, although claims that GM foods might be unsafe are widespread in the general public (as indicated by polling), the scientific consensus is that claims of them being unsafe are unfounded. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:16, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- On the same topic, I just made this edit: [12]. (That's 1RR for me.) I tried to explain it in the edit summary, but I'm happy to clarify if there are questions. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:23, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- I see now that SashiRolls reverted me (that's 1RR for you, too), and I've read the edit summary. Perhaps you could expand a little more on why you feel the content is justified, and then we can discuss that. Thanks. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:13, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- We currently have a paragraph title created by ?? called "GMOs and pesticides" containing a quote by a business and economics editor named Jordan Weissmann, who has "described Stein's position on GMOs as contradicting extensive scientific study, and her position on pesticides as based on a discredited theory." Not sure why you would revert this edit Tryptofish? by mistake or am I missing something? SashiRolls (talk) 20:19, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) OK, thanks for discussing it. No, it was not by mistake. Here are my concerns. First, the source cited is not a particularly good one for scientific matters, as it comes from an advocacy group. (And I am trying to be attentive to the consensus of the community RfC on content about GMOs, where the consensus was against having page sections that leave readers with the impression that there are health hazards.) Second, the source says nothing about Stein, so there is some WP:SYNTH in applying it to her policy. Third, Stein's policy, as I understand it, is primarily about pesticide use on GM crops, as opposed to crops in general (please correct me if I'm wrong). Pesticides are commonly discussed in relation to GM crops, because there are pesticides such as glyphosate that are specifically intended for use on GM crops. But the source never mentions GMOs, and it's about neurotoxic insecticides such as the organophosphates that are not directed at GM crops and were used long before GM crops were even invented. So the source seems unrelated to Stein's position. Also, the discredited theory referred to by the other source is about colony collapse disorder, something not discussed at all in the source you cited. And finally, it seems to me that the quotation is just overlong and WP:UNDUE, especially since it never refers to anything Stein has said. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:39, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- We currently have a paragraph title created by ?? called "GMOs and pesticides" containing a quote by a business and economics editor named Jordan Weissmann, who has "described Stein's position on GMOs as contradicting extensive scientific study, and her position on pesticides as based on a discredited theory." Not sure why you would revert this edit Tryptofish? by mistake or am I missing something? SashiRolls (talk) 20:19, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- This Jordan guy doesn't seem to have a wikipedia page, not sure why he's an authority on science. (note that it's another takedown article (see title) but of somewhat higher quality than the others...) SashiRolls (talk) 20:23, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- I used that source because it is already cited on the page. If you'd like to cite other sources, I've got plenty of them. He's not an authority on science as a primary source about scientific findings, but he is not unreasonable as a secondary source reporting what scientists have widely found. Whether or not one considers it a "takedown", what he concludes is by far the scientific consensus, and it is also a consensus on Wikipedia following the GMO RfC. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:39, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- You realize that the author is Jill Stein, right? (or at least one of the 4 co-authors)... if Jordan wants to say negative things about her views on pesticides, we should have a direct citation of what she actually says about pesticides no? SashiRolls (talk) 20:50, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- No, I did not know that! There was nothing in your edit to attribute it to her, and I don't see her name anywhere in the linked source. But that certainly does change things! I still think we can make it less of a quotefarm, by paraphrasing it and better integrating it into the section. (The other author is Jordan Weissmann, so Jordan is his first name.) --Tryptofish (talk) 20:56, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- I don't know that paraphrasing is necessary, but if it is... You might also find it interesting to search for "autism" (which is in the chapter) and "vaccines" (which aren't), because this does confirm what she said on the "Young Turks", there was no discussion of vaccines in their treatment of autism in "In Harm’s Way: Toxic Threats to Child Development"... :) SashiRolls (talk) 21:02, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, I would like for you to substitute one of your better sources. I thanked you for adding it to replace Danthology because it was better written and appeared in a reputable (generalist) news source. (It also rang some bells...) If you have a scientist talking about Jill Stein's published work, please, by all means, add it! You asked me somewhere above to correct you if you were wrong. I'm not an expert on the Green policy concerning pesticides. I am not a member of the party, nor have I had any contact with people who are, except possibly here. I'm here writing (which I hadn't planned to be), because a few weeks ago I wanted to learn something about Ajamu Baraka, whom I'd never heard of. His page (at the time) seemed very biased. Once that page seemed to be less biased, I came here, and unfortunately felt the need to raise hell once again because of what I found. I would much rather let the Green experts write; but seeing that this source material is directly relevant, it seemed to me to be worth adding. Given an atmosphere that has been a bit tense since at least mid-July, I see that not many editors are willing to be bold at the moment, so I'm following up on the tag I added, hoping to soon be able to remove it and let others carry on the work... SashiRolls (talk) 22:08, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks. I saw the sentence you added about scientific sources, and it certainly is helpful. However, there is a problem in that you basically said something very similar to the consensus language from the GMO RfC, but the outcome of that RfC is that only the exact language is permitted anywhere on Wikipedia (and I think that the exact language would be overly wordy for use here). So we will have to come up with some other way of handling it. I'll give it some thought. --Tryptofish (talk) 00:19, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK, I have an idea. The Guardian really only talks about vaccines, so it's not a useful cite here. But the Post piece really says the same thing as Slate said. So I think we can revise the sentence that is now attributed to Weissmann at Slate, so that it is attributed instead to Ehrenfreund at the Washington Post and Weissmann at Slate. That way, we aren't just relying on Weissmann as a source, and we can also leave out the sentence that overlaps with the RfC language. I'd also like to revisit the order of the sentences. Because I removed what Weissmann said about pesticides, we don't need to present Stein as rebutting Weissmann, and there is some logic to keeping all of Stein's positions together. --Tryptofish (talk) 00:32, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Aren't there enough sources cited (the Guardian cites Scientific American, the WaPo piece cites an EU report and AAAS + Slate) just to state "However, extensive scientific research shows that GMOs are no more dangerous than conventionally bred strains. (cite G, WaPo and S)"? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:03, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- There's no problem with having sufficient sourcing. Rather, the problem is that editors have been warring for several years over language such as "no more dangerous". Under the Discretionary Sanctions, we must either use the exact wording from the RfC, or not say it at all.
- I observe that SashiRolls has not responded to what I suggested above, but instead just slapped a tag in the section, referring to Mr. Weissmann as "Jordy". Given that what I suggested addresses the concerns over relying simply on Weissmann as a source (and given that we really must bring the page in line with the DS), I feel justified in going ahead with what I proposed. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:45, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Aren't there enough sources cited (the Guardian cites Scientific American, the WaPo piece cites an EU report and AAAS + Slate) just to state "However, extensive scientific research shows that GMOs are no more dangerous than conventionally bred strains. (cite G, WaPo and S)"? Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:03, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- No, I did not know that! There was nothing in your edit to attribute it to her, and I don't see her name anywhere in the linked source. But that certainly does change things! I still think we can make it less of a quotefarm, by paraphrasing it and better integrating it into the section. (The other author is Jordan Weissmann, so Jordan is his first name.) --Tryptofish (talk) 20:56, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- You realize that the author is Jill Stein, right? (or at least one of the 4 co-authors)... if Jordan wants to say negative things about her views on pesticides, we should have a direct citation of what she actually says about pesticides no? SashiRolls (talk) 20:50, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- I used that source because it is already cited on the page. If you'd like to cite other sources, I've got plenty of them. He's not an authority on science as a primary source about scientific findings, but he is not unreasonable as a secondary source reporting what scientists have widely found. Whether or not one considers it a "takedown", what he concludes is by far the scientific consensus, and it is also a consensus on Wikipedia following the GMO RfC. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:39, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- This Jordan guy doesn't seem to have a wikipedia page, not sure why he's an authority on science. (note that it's another takedown article (see title) but of somewhat higher quality than the others...) SashiRolls (talk) 20:23, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
We discussed GMOs on the talk page of the GMO article. There is no evidence that GMO products currently available are unsafe, but there is no scientific consensus that there has been sufficient testing. However, the safety issue is only part of the argument against GMOs. They are government subsidized crops (sour corn, soy, beets, cotton, canola and alfalfa) that are mostly used to produce cheap high fructose corn syrup, cooking oil, and feed for factory farmed animals. There are also problems with the reliance on hydrocarbon based fertilizers, lack of genetic diversity and private ownership of crop DNA. The export of government subsidized corn to Mexico impoverished millions of farmers who then entered the U.S. as illegal immigrants. The availability of cheap government subsidized high fructose corn syrup, cooking oils for French fries and feed for factory farmed beef, pork and chicken sold as fast foods has led to an obesity epidemic. It has also impoverished many U.S. farmers. Caribbean sugar producers, who face import tariffs or (in the case of Cuba) import bans, find it hard to compete with U.S. government subsidized beet sugar.
Ironically the people that finance the main pro-GMO website also finance a website that claims global warming is a hoax.
The claim that opposition to GMO is an irrational reaction to science is a strawman argument. There are other reasons for their opposition. It is disingenuous to say that Stein opposes GMO because she does not understand science.
TFD (talk) 05:51, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with you that we should not assert that she does not understand the science, and I sure hope that it does not say that anywhere on the page. The sources that I have seen criticizing her about this say that, in the sources' opinion, she is being disingenuous in disregarding the science that an MD certainly is aware of. We should of course attribute any such opinions to sources, and not say them in Wikipedia's voice. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:45, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
Nazi
A quick comparison yesterday allowed me to verify what I suspected: of the candidate's pages Jill Stein's is the only one to contain the word Nazi. Twice.
Originally, the citation containing this word was massively truncated and no context was given. I improved the context by paraphrasing the beginning of the article and added reference to the 2015 film Fascism, Inc. which provides important context for the use of the word "Nazi" (highlighted in blue) on a political candidate's page. I believe this is often referred to as the Godwin point...
Of course, it is true that Stein & Baraka are two of the few politicians talking about fascism, white supremacy and the rise of right wing groups in Europe & in the US.
Wukai has claimed that adding a link to a film that gives context to Jill Stein's remarks is OR (here). The same argument should be used about the most recent sentence Snooganssnoogans added in GMO (his revert of my "better source tag" here without adding a better source on pesticides), and about the sentence that has been fought over giving "needed" context (from "Green party candidate Jill Stein accused of 'anti-vaxxer' sympathies") on the current state of science concerning vaccines and autism (despite the fact that Jill Stein's entire section on autism in "In Harm's Way" contains not one single word about vaccines)...
Either the deleted content (film) concerning the relationship between neo-liberalism and neo-fascism should be restored or I would ask Wukai to type out the whole citation of the off-the-cuff interview that has been truncated in order to add the word Nazi to Stein's page without trying to understand that she's talking about ( IG Farben (which became Sanofi Pasteur, Basf, Bayer, etc...) ) SashiRolls (talk) 22:47, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
Saving the deleted context here for the time-being: "Aris Chatzistefanou's documentary Fascism, Inc. provides historical context for these comments."[1]
References
- ^ Chatzistefanou, Aris. "Fascism, Inc". Aris Chatzistefanou's youtube channel. Retrieved 23 August 2016.
- There is absolutely zero reason for this article to note that Stein's argument mirrors that of some random youtube documentary. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:54, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Not a random documentary, but a documentary that is directly relevant to the discussion of neoliberalism and neofascism, made by a notable director who crowd-funded this video. The director is notable (he has a wikipedia page and an IMDB page and has worked with the likes of Slavoj Žižek and Naomi Klein).
- The film barely has a 100 votes on IMDB. I can't think of a clearer example of both undue weight and original research. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:25, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- It has not been released in the US. It has a 20 or 25 to 1 like/dislike ration on youtube and over 80,000 views there (between the long and short version). It is the follow-up to Catastroika and Debtocracy. I thought you would be happy to see that the systemic bias tag was removed from this page in which you have invested so much effort, Snoog. Peace. SashiRolls (talk) 12:08, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- The film barely has a 100 votes on IMDB. I can't think of a clearer example of both undue weight and original research. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 10:25, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Not a random documentary, but a documentary that is directly relevant to the discussion of neoliberalism and neofascism, made by a notable director who crowd-funded this video. The director is notable (he has a wikipedia page and an IMDB page and has worked with the likes of Slavoj Žižek and Naomi Klein).
- I agree with Snooganssnoogans that there is no reason for this article to note that Stein's argument mirrors a fairly obscure documentary. This article is (or at least should be) a biography of an individual, not a musing on "neoliberalism and neofascism." The fact that the director or the documentary may be notable for other reasons is beside the point, Neutralitytalk 13:13, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- How then do you propose balancing the inappropriate weight given to Nazism on the page without giving context to the well-known argument Jill Stein is citing? Note the "musings" on "neoliberalism and neofascism" were introduced by the editor who added the quote through (very) partial citation. SashiRolls (talk) 13:22, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- SashiRolls: You should immediately self-revert your reinsertion of the content here. You are the only editor to support this content, and two editors - myself and Snooganssnoogans - have expressed clear, policy-based objections to this content. It is absolutely unacceptable for you to edit-war to shoehorn into the article that completely strays from the article topic. See WP:BRD. Neutralitytalk 13:29, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- I do not think either of the quotes put Stein in a bad light, are out of context or need explanation. TFD (talk) 19:00, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
RfC: Should the article discuss a crowd-funded YouTube documentary or include a quotation from Chris Hedges stating that "the Democratic Party is one of the engines for ... proto-fascism," or include similar content?
Should the article include the following sentence (or any similar content), referring to a YouTube video that describes itself as a "crowd-funded documentary on the rise of neo-fascism in Greece and Europe," and quoting from Chris Hedges stating that "the Democratic Party is one of the engines for ... proto-fascism" as follows (see diff/context? Neutralitytalk 16:57, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
The same argument about liberalism leading to fascism has been advanced both by Aris Chatzistefanou in Fascism, Inc. and by Chris Hedges in his debate with Robert Reich: "[T]hese neoliberal policies, which the Democratic Party is one of the engines for, have created this right-wing [...] proto-fascism. You can go back and look at the Weimar, and it was very much the same." [1][2]
References
- ^ Cite error: The named reference
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was invoked but never defined (see the help page). - ^ Chatzistefanou, Aris. "Fascism, Inc". Aris Chatzistefanou's youtube channel. Retrieved 23 August 2016.
Comments
- Exclude this sentence and all similar content. This is ridiculous, irrelevant, unencyclopedic, unreliable, undue weight, fringe content. The documentary exists on YouTube, was created as a "crowd-funded documentary on the rise of neo-fascism in Greece and Europe," and has little or nothing ato do with Jill Stein or her candidacy. The same is true of the Hedges quote. It is truly regrettable that SashiRolls — in the face of no support from other editors, and a substantial amount of opposition from other editors — has been willing to edit-war to restore this clearly unsuitable material. I really regret the necessity of moving to formal processes like RfCs at the insistence of SashiRolls due to his/her refusal to meaningfully engage or listen to other editors. Neutralitytalk 16:57, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Courtesy-pinging users: @Tryptofish:, @Snooganssnoogans:, @Masebrock:, @SashiRolls:, @Iazyges:, @Clpo13:, @The Four Deuces:. Neutralitytalk 17:00, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Also @VictoriaGrayson:, @Gouncbeatduke:. Neutralitytalk 18:50, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Neutrality: Hm, I wasn't aware edit warring was involved, what was the extent of this edit warring? Iazyges (talk) 22:53, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Comment The text supports Stein's comments, "The answer to neofascism is stopping neoliberalism. Putting another Clinton in the White House will fan the flames of this right-wing extremism. We have known that for a long time, ever since Nazi Germany." I do not think any addition should be made to her comments unless they are directly about what she said, and not just supporting a the same view. That applies to all her comments. TFD (talk) 17:11, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude - I explain my thinking in talk above. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 17:45, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Include The text supports Stein's comments and allows the uninitiated to explore an argument that Stein was only able to sketch in a few seconds and which had been further abridged until I paraphrased the beginning of the quote. Obviously a 1:20 documentary goes into a great deal more detail showing how industrialists (both German and American) profited from the Second World War. The point of an encyclopedia (especially one permitting hyperlinks) is to suggest paths for further learning, and not simply to highlight "Nazi Germany" in blue. Regarding the attacks and accusations, I understand what is behind them and so will ignore them. At least we've gotten some of the BS off of the page, a neutral point of view will likely not be possible with the people who have been occupying the thread 24/7 since late June. I thought that the purpose of Wikipedia was to provide links to information that people might not be aware of, but it seems that it is to influence elections through half-quotes (nb: there was no mention of the fact that JS is referring to the rise of fascism internationally until I restored the beginning of the citation, so as it originally existed on the page, the quote made little sense (except to those who happen to have studied history and who know about the links between the industrialists and the fascists) and is meant to make JS appear "fringe". It is indeed interesting that there is still nothing on the page about climate change in the section called "science". But, I suppose that only the Greens can be blamed for that, one can't expect those who are against Stein to provide a balanced view of the Green party platform. SashiRolls (talk) 18:13, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude Not appropriate on a biographical page. Masebrock (talk) 18:28, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Absolutely oppose inclusion: Completely coatracky and non-neutral. This is a biography of Jill Stein, not a debate over the validity of her views. --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 20:33, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- Exclude - It's inappropriate to use sources in this manner. A self-published fringe documentary is not an appropriate BLP source at all. The content in question is not biographical, and is a clear example of WP:COATRACK.- MrX 23:14, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
Science: Newest elimination of balancing material
- @Iazyges: You asked about edit-warring. There is documentation in the Talk thread in the section "Unhack this page", which describes the reverts in a 2 week period. I, personally, have tried to minimize the number of reverts I have used and have rarely if ever had to reach the daily maximum of 3RR.
A perfect example of the sort of edit warring that has been going on is the deletion of the second balancing sentence below. Since the goal of the wiki-essay on science would seem to be to show that Stein has dangerous ideas about science, direct evidence that scientific experts have praised Stein's work relating pesticide use to problems of child development is inconvenient. Rather, the article prefers to rely on business and economics editors (Cf. Jordan Weissmann quote in GMO / Pesticides) instead of actual scientists discussing her work.
I would ask that Neutrality undo his reversion of the content in green below (or better just copy/paste from here as I've added the direct link to the text by the 6 experts. It provides balance to the CNN/Huffington Post journalism by providing evidence concerning senior members of the scientific community's view on Stein's published work on science. Granted, it may be necessary to add the word "Nevertheless" to indicate that there are two different views being presented...
In the 2016 election, Stein was criticized in several media outlets for holding what CNN termed "out-of-the-mainstream" views on a number of science-related topics.[1][2] The peer-reviewed report she co-authored with Physicians for a National Health Program in May 2000 ("In Harm's Way: Toxic Threats to Child Development") was praised by six experts on public health.[3]
References
- ^ Watkins, Eli (17 August 2016). "Anti-science claims dog Green Party's Jill Stein". CNN. Retrieved 17 August 2016.
- ^ Sosa, Chris (August 9, 2016). "Jill Stein's Dangerous Anti-Science Campaign". The Huffington Post. Retrieved August 23, 2016.
- ^ "Scientists Endorse In Harm's Way". Physicians for Social Responsibility. Retrieved 23 August 2016.
The references for neutrality's reverts are here and here. SashiRolls (talk) 00:41, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
Likewise, I see that both Snooganssnoogans and Tryptofish have removed my "better source needed" tag without addressing the concern that neither of their references have any scientific credentials. As such, I am restoring the hard work I've done to read through the scientific reports authored by Jill Stein. These reports have a clear place in any discussion concerning her views on science. The preventive measures taken by Tryptofish to spin away from criticism of Stein's views towards claims that she is pandering will be acknowledged by putting the endorsements first and the smear campaign second. SashiRolls (talk) 02:41, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Did you see what I said in earlier talk before I made that edit? If you persist in claiming that I am "spin"ning instead of simply editing in good faith, or continue referring to living people as "Jordy", you should expect to find yourself brought before administrators. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:39, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- This is WP:SYNTH. Her prior work on public health issues is not a "political position." This material should appear under the section dealing with her prior career. Neutralitytalk 03:04, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Your claim that this is not a "political position" is rebutted in the link (which it might be worth noting you haven't had much time to read in the 10 minutes since I posted it (assuming you weren't sitting on the page waiting for me to edit):
"The authors of In Harm's Way have done a masterful job of assembling a vast amount of information, and organizing and presenting it in a forceful and clear fashion. The sociopolitical analysis may be the most important part of the book. I hope it is widely distributed and read." Herbert L. Needleman MD Professor of Psychiatry and Pediatrics University of Pittsburgh School of Medicine Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
SashiRolls (talk) 03:14, 26 August 2016 (UTC)"Balancing a passionate commitment to children's health with a careful presentation of scientific evidence, In Harm's Way is a wake-up call. It shines a light on the potential role of toxic chemicals in several increasingly common neurodevelopmental disorders, including ADHD and autism. It points out that current regulations offer little or no margin of safety. Those of us in the health professions, our patients, and policy makers need to pay close attention." Howard Frumkin MD DrPH, Chair Department of Environmental and Occupational Health Rollins School of Public Health Emory University Atlanta, Georgia
- Your claim that this is not a "political position" is rebutted in the link (which it might be worth noting you haven't had much time to read in the 10 minutes since I posted it (assuming you weren't sitting on the page waiting for me to edit):
- No - in context, you are trying to use the paper as a way to "rebut" the criticism that she holds anti-science views. That's classic WP:SYNTH. Neutralitytalk 03:30, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- You are correct about that, I agree. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:39, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- No - in context, you are trying to use the paper as a way to "rebut" the criticism that she holds anti-science views. That's classic WP:SYNTH. Neutralitytalk 03:30, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK, so you agree that it is related to her political positions. Good. Now, the rules regarding "synth" are: "Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources. Similarly, do not combine different parts of one source to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by the source." Has my text done either of these things? I really don't think so. I have rebutted the criticism only by pointing out the lack of credentials of those criticizing. The section we are editing, as a reminder, is Political Positions > Science. The sources state that the reports take political positions concerning "current regulations [which] offer little or no margin of safety." SashiRolls (talk) 03:37, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Having these two sentences (which don't have anything to do with each other logically) right next to each other directly violates the restriction on "combining material from multiple sources to ... imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources," that conclusion being that any criticism of anti-science views is incorrect. Once again, this is classic WP:SYNTH. Neutralitytalk 03:49, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Nope: the logical inference -- if there is one -- is that scientists are the best judges of science. I have repeatedly asked for a reference from a scientist directly relating to JS's views on sciences. Tryptofish said he had a whole host of them (here). Yet we still have the same young political reporter, and the business/economics editor. A WP:Synth claim (logical inference) would be that there is a smear campaign afoot. That claim is directly made by Jill Stein in her interview at the Green Party convention and is not contained in this introductory section. That claim has also been made on this talk page by several editors, although the word has not always been used. Cf. Talk:WOW SashiRolls (talk) 04:11, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- You are referring to where I said that there are plenty of scientific sources that reflect the mainstream scientific position, not that scientists go around commenting about Stein, and you are trying to make it sound like I said that there are sources where scientists express political positions about Stein, which I did not say. However, there is absolutely noting wrong with journalists reporting that scientists say such-and-such. There is no reason for anyone to do scientific research about Stein's political positions, when the scientific research has already been done.
- Nope: the logical inference -- if there is one -- is that scientists are the best judges of science. I have repeatedly asked for a reference from a scientist directly relating to JS's views on sciences. Tryptofish said he had a whole host of them (here). Yet we still have the same young political reporter, and the business/economics editor. A WP:Synth claim (logical inference) would be that there is a smear campaign afoot. That claim is directly made by Jill Stein in her interview at the Green Party convention and is not contained in this introductory section. That claim has also been made on this talk page by several editors, although the word has not always been used. Cf. Talk:WOW SashiRolls (talk) 04:11, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Having these two sentences (which don't have anything to do with each other logically) right next to each other directly violates the restriction on "combining material from multiple sources to ... imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources," that conclusion being that any criticism of anti-science views is incorrect. Once again, this is classic WP:SYNTH. Neutralitytalk 03:49, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- OK, so you agree that it is related to her political positions. Good. Now, the rules regarding "synth" are: "Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources. Similarly, do not combine different parts of one source to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by the source." Has my text done either of these things? I really don't think so. I have rebutted the criticism only by pointing out the lack of credentials of those criticizing. The section we are editing, as a reminder, is Political Positions > Science. The sources state that the reports take political positions concerning "current regulations [which] offer little or no margin of safety." SashiRolls (talk) 03:37, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- You also mischaracterize Stein et al's book as "peer reviewed" in the way that scholarly publications in scientific journals are peer reviewed. And the scientists you refer to as endorsing the book are quoted as blurbs by the publisher. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:39, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- You are wrong. You have twice deleted the word "peer reviewed". Why are you so adamant in refusing to admit that this publication was peer reviewed (both in 2000 and 2002)? SashiRolls (talk) 00:27, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- What you are saying is WP:ABF. I was going by what was cited in that section at the time that I said it. There was nothing to indicate that it was republished in a peer-reviewed journal in 2002, until I added the cite to that section. --Tryptofish (talk) 00:33, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- You are wrong. You have twice deleted the word "peer reviewed". Why are you so adamant in refusing to admit that this publication was peer reviewed (both in 2000 and 2002)? SashiRolls (talk) 00:27, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- You also mischaracterize Stein et al's book as "peer reviewed" in the way that scholarly publications in scientific journals are peer reviewed. And the scientists you refer to as endorsing the book are quoted as blurbs by the publisher. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:39, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
I think we should rephrase the description. CNN did not criticize Stein, it said she had been criticized by her "mainstream opponents." That would be Clinton, who doesn's know if vaccines cause autism and Trump, who thinks climate change is a hoax. The other source is an op-ed by a member of the Clinton campaign who of all things is a PETA supporter. (Since most GMO is used for animal feed, it is hard to understand why he thinks government should subsidize it.) If we accurately describe the source of the criticism and Stein's reply, that should provide adequate neutrality. TFD (talk) 16:39, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- That's a very good idea. I agree. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:39, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- Strange that your edit did nothing of the kind. SashiRolls (talk) 00:27, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- No, I made exactly that edit. You just are not paying attention. --Tryptofish (talk) 00:33, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Strange that your edit did nothing of the kind. SashiRolls (talk) 00:27, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Request for Comment: Ajamu Baraka on Jill Stein's biography page
Should either of the following sentences (in any form) be included on Jill Stein's biography page?
When asked if she considered it appropriate to call President Obama an "Uncle Tom" as her running mate did, Stein answered "I would never do that." When asked if she would make Baraka apologize for calling Obama an "Uncle Tom", Stein said that she would not.[1]
When asked if she agreed with her running mate's reference to the “gangster states” of NATO, Stein answered that she would not use Baraka's language but that "he means the same thing I'm saying".[2]
SashiRolls (talk) 00:27, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Staff, Post Opinions (2016-08-25). "A transcript of Jill Stein's meeting with The Washington Post editorial board". The Washington Post. ISSN 0190-8286. Retrieved 2016-08-26.
- ^ Staff, Post Opinions (2016-08-25). "A transcript of Jill Stein's meeting with The Washington Post editorial board". The Washington Post. ISSN 0190-8286. Retrieved 2016-08-26.
- No. This material, added by Snooganssnoogans here, does not seem appropriate to Jill Stein's bio page. Both statements are already present on Ajamu Baraka's page.SashiRolls (talk) 00:28, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, include both. Clearly relevant to Stein, bears on her political views and issues of high importance (NATO, U.S. racial relations, views on the current U.S. president), well-cited and framed in a NPOV manner (indeed, these are quotes/paraphrases from the subject directly). This is wholly appropriate to the biography of a political figure. Neutralitytalk 00:36, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Courtesy-pinging users: @Tryptofish:, @Snooganssnoogans:, @Masebrock:, @MrX:, @Iazyges:, @Clpo13:, @The Four Deuces:, @DrFleischman:, @VictoriaGrayson:, @Gouncbeatduke:. Neutralitytalk 00:46, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, but in revised form. I've revised it. (No need to ping me; I'm watchlisting.) --Tryptofish (talk) 00:48, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Your revisions were good with me, thanks for those. Neutralitytalk 01:00, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- I think the Uncle Tom comments could be clarified and shortened better than you did. She never says it's inappropriate or disapproves of Baraka calling Obama an Uncle Tom in the WaPo interview when asked point blank (if I recall correctly). She just says that she herself would not use that term and that she would not ask Baraka to apologize. I think both of those are important and need to be mentioned. I think the NATO remarks should be put in the political positions section, as they reflect her attitude on NATO (she's taking a position on a description of the alliance). Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:07, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- It's OK with me if you go ahead and make those changes. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:10, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- I'm holding off on the changes. I'm not entirely sure what the revert rules are, and I don't want to take any risks given SashiRolls's repeated attempts to get me sanctioned or banned. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 09:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- I approve of that as well (the NATO comment is a political position about NATO, rather than a remark about Baraka personally). Neutralitytalk 01:11, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- It's OK with me if you go ahead and make those changes. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:10, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes. Include both. The NATO comment should be under Stein's political positions, as it reflects on her attitude towards NATO. I'm fine with keeping the 'Uncle Tom' comment in the 2016 race subsection of this article (where it currently is). Snooganssnoogans (talk) 00:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Comment: How do we evaluate this without the sources? --Dr. Fleischman (talk) 05:07, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- I've added the source (i.e. the same Jeff Bezos-owned paper that notoriously ran 16 stories against Bernie Sanders in a 16-hour period during the democratic primary) Cf. Washington Post Ran 16 Negative Stories on Bernie Sanders in 16 hours (original source: Fairness and accuracy in reporting (FAIR))
- No If we are going to select particular quotes to highlight out of a large transcript, it needs to be based on actual notability, not assumed notability. The appropriate weight to give a comment is based on the weight it was given in secondary sources. It's not Wikipedia's job to go through politician's interviews with a fine-tooth comb and pick out the parts we personally want to highlight. The most immediate problem of doing this is that while one editor may want to highlight, for example, her comments about NATO, another may find her comments about the DEA to be the most important. Masebrock (talk) 07:42, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Jonathan Capeheart in a WaPo op-ed and the WaPo editorial board highlighted her NATO comments (https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/jill-steins-fairy-tale-candidacy/2016/08/25/3bf8ba1a-6b08-11e6-99bf-f0cf3a6449a6_story.html?utm_term=.349f0327247c) and the Capeheart op-ed also highlighted her Uncle Tom comments (https://www.washingtonpost.com/blogs/post-partisan/wp/2016/08/26/jill-steins-foul-language-on-race/?utm_term=.7beb9d1c4577). She was asked about the Uncle Tom comments both in her WaPo interview and the CNN townhall, so I think it's hard to argue that it's not notable. If she makes comments about the DEA, please add them. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 09:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- 1) Jill Stein made no "Uncle Tom" comments. 2) The problem that I have with you is the following. You read an article and then cite it partially:
For each thing you added from the Post article, this is what you did... and yet you have the support of Wikipedia. In fact, for my own purposes, as one who is writing on Wikipedia bias, you are actually quite helpful, because the tolerance of this sort of action despite a number of administrators being aware of it, and a certain number actually encouraging it, says a lot about Wikipedia. 3)I have included sentences that analyze the situation objectively (notably adding a sentence from Chomsky saying that the holier than thou attitude of those who refuse LEV is dangerous and wrong... it would be interesting for you to try to do the same (include something positive about JS instead of always cherry-picking the negative). But -- again -- you're doing me more good (on a personal level) with your current editing strategy because you're providing me with more material daily.SashiRolls (talk) 12:29, 27 August 2016 (UTC)At this point, I’m not prepared to speak to that in detail,
but I will say that coming out of the fall of the Berlin Wall and the expansion of NATO and the unification of Germany that we made a very clear commitment that NATO would not move one inch to the East, yet we certainly have.I would only note that there’s provocation going on here on both sides and that it’s very important for us to have a diplomatic approach to this.
- 1) Jill Stein made no "Uncle Tom" comments. 2) The problem that I have with you is the following. You read an article and then cite it partially:
- Jonathan Capeheart in a WaPo op-ed and the WaPo editorial board highlighted her NATO comments (https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/jill-steins-fairy-tale-candidacy/2016/08/25/3bf8ba1a-6b08-11e6-99bf-f0cf3a6449a6_story.html?utm_term=.349f0327247c) and the Capeheart op-ed also highlighted her Uncle Tom comments (https://www.washingtonpost.com/blogs/post-partisan/wp/2016/08/26/jill-steins-foul-language-on-race/?utm_term=.7beb9d1c4577). She was asked about the Uncle Tom comments both in her WaPo interview and the CNN townhall, so I think it's hard to argue that it's not notable. If she makes comments about the DEA, please add them. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 09:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Eric Draitser "'Uncle Tom' and the Pathology of White Liberal Racism", MintPress News
I have removed commentary attributed to Eric Draitser, writing in "Mint Press News." This website is not a reliable or well-regarded source of commentary, not is Draitser a noteworthy commentator.
"Mint Press News" is known for advancing "crazy conspiracy theories" (see here, from Foreign Policy magazine) and was referred to by the NY Times as an "an obscure Internet news service" that misattributed an article to a reporter and "refused 'repeated demands' to remove her byline."
In sum, this is very low-quality commentary that we just shouldn't use per WP:FRINGE and WP:WEIGHT. Neutralitytalk 01:00, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, I think that's fair. I was trying very hard to accommodate it after the other editor added it, but it really amounted to special pleading in Wikipedia's voice. --Tryptofish (talk) 01:03, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- MintPress News is not a reliable source. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 01:09, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
I have taken the liberty of adding the title of, and a reference to, the article[1] you do not wish to appear in the wikipedia article, responding to CNN's biased questioning, which was mirrored by this Post article (i.e. no-one asks "why" he called Obama a name...) SashiRolls (talk) 06:54, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Draitser, Eric. "Ajamu Baraka, "Uncle Tom," And The Pathology Of White Liberal Racism". Mint Press News. Retrieved 24 August 2016.
The section on Electoral campaign history is very misleading. The implication is that this is the history of her campaigns for positions that she got elected to. It ought ot be called something like Failed Electoral bids. Except I guess she got elected to tow council, of a very small town. That one could be in its own section.14:50, 27 August 2016 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 160.39.35.48 (talk)
WP:SYNTH on Assange
In the morning (10am) of the 23rd of August an op-ed was published in the Hill. Later in the day (5pm) a story on the Saudi leaks was published by AP[1]. However, in wiki-voice, Snooganssnoogans writes
After an investigation by the Associated Press found that Wikileaks had exposed personal data of everyday Saudis, including health and crime records, Stein called Julian Assange a "hero" and wrote an op-ed praising Wikileaks. In the op-ed, she wrote, "On that note, one of the strangest developments this year has been seeing journalists attack WikiLeaks for doing what journalists are supposed to do: reveal the unvarnished truth to the public. WikiLeaks has done us an invaluable service by shining a light into the dark corners of power where corruption and wrongdoing fester."[2][3]
References
- ^ "Private lives are exposed as WikiLeaks spills its secrets".
- ^ Rehkopf, Bill (2016-08-23). "EXCLUSIVE Jill Stein op-ed: In praise of WikiLeaks". Retrieved 2016-08-27.
- ^ "Presidential hopeful Jill Stein defends 'heroic' Wikileaks amid claims it outed Saudi gays". Retrieved 2016-08-27.
The first part of the citation has been removed, though of course something can/should be said about the questionable tactics employed by Wikileaks concerning the redacting of private info. As it stood however the sentence was demonstrably false based on publication dates as minimal fact-checking would have shown.SashiRolls (talk) 14:55, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- You're correct to remove the first part of the first sentence. I assumed Pink News had gotten its dates correct without checking. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 15:03, 27 August 2016 (UTC)