29 April 2024

• curprev 22:1522:15, 29 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 42,693 bytes +18‎ No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• curprev 16:0816:08, 29 April 2024‎ Dudeman4297 talk contribs‎ 42,675 bytes −32‎ →‎In Undertale: There was some weird structuring around the Genocide route portion, so I fixed it.
• curprev 12:1412:14, 29 April 2024‎ William Avery talk contribs‎ 42,707 bytes −25‎ MOS:'
• curprev 00:5600:56, 29 April 2024‎ HelloTHERE123456 talk contribs‎ m 42,732 bytes +23‎ The Australian ABC News was the one who had this story, not the American ABC News, according to the citation. Corrected this. Tag: Visual edit

27 April 2024

• curprev 06:4106:41, 27 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 42,709 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 06:3906:39, 27 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 42,708 bytes +185‎ avoiding ref bomb
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22 April 2024

• curprev 21:0121:01, 22 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 42,750 bytes +739‎ Undid revision 1220218484 by FizzleDrunk (talk) they're not Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• curprev 14:1114:11, 22 April 2024‎ FizzleDrunk talk contribs‎ 42,011 bytes −739‎ Removed irrelevant and unnecessary information which qualifies as fancruft Tags: Reverted Visual edit

20 April 2024

• curprev 15:0015:00, 20 April 2024‎ Ravenpuff talk contribs‎ m 42,750 bytes −2‎ →‎Concept and design: word
• curprev 14:5914:59, 20 April 2024‎ Ravenpuff talk contribs‎ 42,752 bytes −31‎ Fix syntax: MOS:POSS, MOS:LQ

18 April 2024

• curprev 22:2722:27, 18 April 2024‎ KGRAMR talk contribs‎ 42,783 bytes −4‎ →‎Merchandising: Why was Banpresto in italics?

12 April 2024

• curprev 15:3315:33, 12 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 42,787 bytes +1‎ null edit, added talk page discussion for content changes produced as part of GOCE edit, see previous two edits; now ending GOCE edit process
• curprev 15:1415:14, 12 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 42,786 bytes +227‎ →‎Critical reception: added citation, as source for quoted author's academic credentials and preferred pronouns ('they/their') to help future edits; ending GOCE edit session two (after making changes to my previous mistakes)
• curprev 15:1215:12, 12 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 42,559 bytes +1,069‎ →‎Critical reception: amended text to better fit arguments in cited source, adding direct quotations for support, rewording some paraphrase for clarity, attempting to retain original contributor's ideas; also corrected for source author's preferred pronouns ('they/their'), using "Elvery" instead of pronoun

10 April 2024

• curprev 23:3123:31, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 41,490 bytes −1‎ →‎Critical reception: re-tweaked sentence beginning "Conversely", for comma usage and clarity (fixing my previous tweak) Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 23:2823:28, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,491 bytes +20‎ →‎Critical reception: re-tweaked first two sentences of third parag, added "In addition," and cut "also" (same phrase 'has also been' repeated in previous parag.); changed "their" with "the two brothers" (to avoid pronoun ambiguity, 'their' followed by 'them') Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 23:2223:22, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 41,471 bytes −9‎ →‎Critical reception: del dup "staff staff" and errant "to" Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 23:2023:20, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,480 bytes +1‎ →‎Critical reception: cu of my previous edits, fixed awk usage, changed awk "that he 'comedic relief that is" to gramm. correct "he brings 'comedic relief that is " (my previous error, I think) Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 23:1523:15, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,479 bytes −1‎ →‎Critical reception: cu of my previous edits, changed "boss fights" to "boss fight", to be consistent w/ earlier references (and there is only one?), and for grammar (ft --> "boss fight and its theme", singular "fight'' b/c singular "its" Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 23:1023:10, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 41,480 bytes −1‎ removed unneeded comma Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 01:5501:55, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,481 bytes −14‎ →‎Concept and design: fixing my own previous edits, for grammar usage related to semi-colons (I've learned better style rules since prev edit), should be more 'standard grammar' now Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 01:4801:48, 10 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,495 bytes −22‎ →‎Critical reception: ce simplified last sentence, for less repetition Tag: Visual edit

7 April 2024

• curprev 05:5405:54, 7 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,517 bytes +100‎ No edit summary
• curprev 05:4805:48, 7 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,417 bytes −13‎ Undid revision 1217672263 by Greenish Pickle! (talk) Tag: Undo
• curprev 05:3905:39, 7 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,430 bytes +13‎ Restored revision 1217623595 by Greenish Pickle! (talk): Its his other name, which was also stated in wikia Tags: Twinkle Undo Reverted
• curprev 05:3305:33, 7 April 2024‎ Mir Novov talk contribs‎ 41,417 bytes −13‎ is there any reason to describe him as "the skeleton"? I don't feel him calling himself that once is enough to note it as any sort of full appellation. Tag: Reverted

6 April 2024

• curprev 22:5022:50, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,430 bytes +4‎ →‎Promotion and reception Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 22:4422:44, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,426 bytes +5‎ No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 22:4322:43, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,421 bytes −2‎ No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 16:4216:42, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,423 bytes −2‎ →‎References in popular media: a flimsy paragraph doesnt deserve another paragraph i think Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 16:4116:41, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,425 bytes −8‎ →‎Critical reception: if youre putting it at the end, then it will be mistaken as diff song Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 16:2616:26, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 41,433 bytes 0‎ →‎Concept and design: cu, removed italics from "-style" Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:0916:09, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,433 bytes −14‎ completed GOCE copy edit, removed {in use} tag
• curprev 15:5215:52, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,447 bytes −160‎ tweaked lead, second paragraph, to simplify and retain WP:NPOV, see talk page Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:4615:46, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,607 bytes +350‎ →‎Concept and design: heavily tweaked this section on Jørstad's ideas, to add clarity (what do examples signify?), more context (whose ideas?), and to fix little idea errors from previous, all based on the source provided (with some additions from source), and cu of sentences, punctuation Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:2815:28, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,257 bytes +12‎ →‎Concept and design: simplified first sentence about Jørstad and Japanese version Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:2615:26, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,245 bytes +8‎ →‎Concept and design: tweaked second paragraph for wording, adding punc (parentheses for parenthetical idea within main discussion, the "use of Comic Sans") Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:2115:21, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,237 bytes +44‎ →‎Critical reception: tweaked last section on Tumblr poll, for wording, punc, added a little context (redundant but helpful, maybe even for DYK) Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1715:17, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,193 bytes −2‎ →‎References in popular media: added white space (easier to read), to break up wall of text, tweaked sentence about Kenny Omega Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1515:15, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,195 bytes +20‎ →‎References in popular media: tweaked first part about Ben Davis, order of ideas, precise wording Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1315:13, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 41,175 bytes +8‎ →‎References in popular media: tweaked first sentence, adding context (date) and sp "landed" (not "lauded") Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1215:12, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,167 bytes +111‎ →‎Critical reception: tweaked last section, for word usage, to clarify argument, and adding context (also the title of the paper has interest and helps provide more context for idea) Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:1015:10, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,056 bytes +4‎ →‎Critical reception: tweaked sentences about use of song "In 2020" and "In 2022" for context and flow Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:0615:06, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,052 bytes 0‎ →‎Critical reception: reversed order of examples, to follow timeline (2020 then 2022)
• curprev 14:2314:23, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,052 bytes −8‎ →‎Critical reception Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 14:2014:20, 6 April 2024‎ Greenish Pickle! talk contribs‎ 41,060 bytes −37‎ I dont feel like we need subsectoon to thos Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• curprev 14:2014:20, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,097 bytes +1‎ →‎Boss fight and "Megalovania": reversed order of examples, to follow timeline (first 2020, then 2022)
• curprev 14:1714:17, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ m 41,096 bytes +4‎ →‎Boss fight and "Megalovania": cu added italics to title of game Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 14:1514:15, 6 April 2024‎ Yogabear2020 talk contribs‎ 41,092 bytes +45‎ →‎Boss fight and "Megalovania": tweaked order of ideas, first about song, then just about battle