- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet talk 16:12, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
Lady Six Monkey
- ... that Lady Six Monkey's conflict with Eight Deer Jaguar Claw has been called "an Iliad of the Mixtec people"? Source: Williams, p. 16
- ALT1: ... that Lady Six Monkey was the only one of her four siblings not to have been sacrificed? Source: Williams, p. 179
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Expanded fivefold (493 -> 3057 characters of prose size). No QPQ as this is my first nomination.
5x expanded by ModernDayTrilobite (talk). Self-nominated at 19:08, 10 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Lady Six Monkey; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Checked no qpq needed and expanded enough, fixed one cite above and checked other. Earwig tool found no copyvio. Added a couple of wikilinks and checked with tool no duplicate wikilinks. Read through carefully - is well written. Chidgk1 (talk) 08:53, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
@ModernDayTrilobite: I prefer the first hook as I find ALT1 a little depressing. Can you clarify re short description please? External link not working for me - perhaps remove that section? Also do you want pic in DYK if possible? Chidgk1 (talk) 09:05, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Hi, thanks for reviewing! The first hook is my preference as well. I'll remove the external link as well, as I just checked on a new device and it wasn't working for me there either.
- I'm admittedly a little confused about your question re: the short description – to my knowledge, the article doesn't have one at this time (though I now find myself wanting to go in and add one). Could you provide a little more detail on what you're looking for clarification on?
- As for the pic, I have no strong opinion on whether to include one or not. If we do go forward with adding a picture, I think the best choice would be the image from the infobox. ModernDayTrilobite (talk • contribs) 15:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- The short desc was previously "Iyadzehe" - perhaps someone removed it from Wikidata after I saw it here - anyway the one you just added looks better - I just shortened it slightly. Good to go.
- Great to hear, thank you! Your edit to the short description looks good to me. ModernDayTrilobite (talk • contribs) 17:10, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- The short desc was previously "Iyadzehe" - perhaps someone removed it from Wikidata after I saw it here - anyway the one you just added looks better - I just shortened it slightly. Good to go.