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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 07:57, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
- Doesnt "free agent" a better word for "without a club"?
- In the lead, information should be provided about his spell with Banik Ostrava.
- In which year did he marry?
- If her wife is a renowed personality, then please mention so.
- Do we know nothing about his parents?
- The section of Banik Ostrava is bit short. I think, it should be expanded.
- In the infobox, we can see three youth clubs in which he played, but no information about them is provided in the text.
- Please mention the result of his debut match with Liverpool.
- Then the Premier League was known as FA Premier League.
- When? It was called the Premiership between 1993 and 2007 per our article on the topic. C679 15:00, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
- Why was he substituted off? Please mention only if he sustained an injury.
- The last sentence of the second paragraph of the Liverpool section requires citation.
RRD13 (talk) 08:26, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
- Mention the comptetion in which he debuted against Blackburn.
- You can put League Cup within brackets beside Carling Cup for the ease of comprehension.
- Again, the comptetion should be metioned in which he scored against Sheffield United.
- For how many years contract did he sign for Lyon?
- Again, please mention the comptetion in which he made his debut.
- "he appeared as a substitute"- it should be "he appeared as a 00th minute substitute for ABC player"
- Featured articles such as Thierry Henry do not include this information. Can you explain what part of the Good article criteria call for it? C679 22:10, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
- "On 1 November, Baroš was arrested in France..." what is it doing in the Lyon section? It should be in the Personal life.
- The timespan of the loan…
RRD13 (talk) 19:30, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
- " Baroš played a significant role in the club winning the 2008 FA Cup."- I think it should be reworded.
- "Ankaragucu"- the club should be appropriately linked.
- "Baroš spent some time out of the first team"- What do you mean by this?
- "Samsunspor"- the club should be appropriately linked.
- "told by coach Fatih Terim"- it should be "told by then coach Fatih Terim"
- Mention the competition in which he made his debut for Antalyaspor.
- The infobox says that he is a free agent, but this section does not say anything of his release from the club.
- Again, please mention in which competition he made his debut for the national team against Belgium.
- Who was the other one to be shown red card?
- After UEFA 2004, information has been given about 2006 Fifa World Cup. But no information has been given about the matches played by him in 2005. I am emphasising on it because he scored 5 goals in 11 matches.
- What was the breach of discipline?
- The career statistics table is not correct. Please refer to the MOS.
RRD13 (talk) 05:21, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
- Here it says that Baros has scored 27 goals in 108 appearances for Liverpool. But the statistics table in the article shows one match less.
- The lfthistory site includes a 2002 Community Shield match in a column entitled "other". Such matches are not included at the Wikipedia article. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
- The MOS clearly indicates a separate column for other matches. For example Chris Smith (footballer born 1981), Pablo Ibáñez etc. RRD13 (talk) 15:05, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
- I don't think one match over the course of 21 seasons (including part seasons) justifies a separate column. The "MOS", as you call it, is a proposal and not officially sanctioned as far as I can tell. Is it worth putting in a new column with 20 zeros and a single "1", in your opinion? C679 15:29, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
- The MOS clearly indicates a separate column for other matches. For example Chris Smith (footballer born 1981), Pablo Ibáñez etc. RRD13 (talk) 15:05, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
- The lfthistory site includes a 2002 Community Shield match in a column entitled "other". Such matches are not included at the Wikipedia article. C679 06:20, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
- Why in the totals cell under "–" filled cells, some are filled with "–" and some with 0?
- Can you please tell me where does the statistics for youth teams of Czech Republic come from?
- The "u" is in lower case.
- What is the Antalyaspor squad template doing in the article?
RRD13 (talk) 03:50, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
@Royroydeb: Is there anything else? C679 17:17, 16 March 2014 (UTC)