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Nominator: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 18:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 17:05, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will complete a review in the next couple of days. -Riley1012 (talk) 17:05, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written
Great job on the prose, I have no suggestions here.

2. Verifiable
The article uses reliable sources and has a proper references section. Passes copyvio check

• Spot check:

• No issues: 2, 5, 8, 10, 15, 17, 23, 26, 34, 40, 46, 50, 55, 65

3. Broad

• The youngest defenceman on the Otters that season, Drysdale told reporters that he hoped the team would "be competitive all year round". This sentence should be removed- the quote isn't providing anything interesting or new (presumably everyone would want their team to be competitive...)
• As a child, Drysdale wore No. 4 as a tribute to Bobby Orr, one of his father's favourite players. During his time in Anaheim, he was roommates with teammate Trevor Zegras. The first sentence can be moved to the Early life section, and the second sentence can be removed entirely. The Personal life section should be deleted unless there's more information you can add.

4. Neutral
The article is neutral.

5. Stable
The article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated
The image used is free use and has a relevant caption.

GhostRiver (talk · contribs) I've completed my review; let me know if you have any questions. -Riley1012 (talk) 20:38, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]