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::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px|link=]] There we go. [[User:Wizardman|<span style="color:#030">'''''Wizardman'''''</span>]] <sub>[[User:Wizardman/Operation Big Bear|<span style="color:#600">Operation Big Bear</span>]]</sub> 19:20, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px|link=]] There we go. [[User:Wizardman|<span style="color:#030">'''''Wizardman'''''</span>]] <sub>[[User:Wizardman/Operation Big Bear|<span style="color:#600">Operation Big Bear</span>]]</sub> 19:20, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Restored this deleted section. Referees said "move ALT2 to April 1 (done), promote ALT1a (not done)". Cheers. [[User:Materialscientist|Materialscientist]] ([[User talk:Materialscientist|talk]]) 23:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Restored this deleted section. Referees said "move ALT2 to April 1 (done), promote ALT1a (not done)". Cheers. [[User:Materialscientist|Materialscientist]] ([[User talk:Materialscientist|talk]]) 23:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

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::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px|link=]] All checks out. --[[User:Trust Is All You Need|TIAYN]] ([[User talk:Trust Is All You Need|talk]]) 8:51 am, 14 February 2011, Monday (12 days ago) (UTC−5)
:[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px|link=]] Returned from Prep 4 per concerns on DYK discussion page. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 6:58 am, 23 February 2011, last Wednesday (3 days ago) (UTC−5)
::I'm tackling the issues right now. I forgot to reply here on this but I had to wait until the weekend until I could find some actual time to improve this article. [[User:Ktr101|Kevin Rutherford]] ([[User_talk:Ktr101|talk]]) 23:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC)


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Articles created/expanded on February 12

Batman River

We've got 4 expanded Batman articles (city, province, river and oil field). They could be squeezed into one hook, but it would be ugly, thus maybe 2-3 hoooks. Please suggest other alts (articles can be shuffled between various hook combinations). Maybe its better to drop the river from ALT1. The "near" part can be verified using this map and Google maps - it is just some 6 km away. Materialscientist (talk) 10:10, 12 February 2011 (UTC) Created/expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 10:10, 12 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Some possible April Fools' Day hooks. 2 is for the province, 3 is the river, and 4 is the city. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 18:59, 12 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT2 ... that Batman is half female?
  • ALT3 ... that Batman killed 11 people in 2006?
Thanks and sorry - the source is unclear whether it was Batman or its tributary or both. Materialscientist (talk) 00:27, 13 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Alt5... may be something like Batman helped save people during the Gulf War? Victuallers (talk) 13:06, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
1st April is a possibility, but there are 4 articles in here, only some can go there. Materialscientist (talk) 13:12, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • What is the fourth article? Can you propose a hook with all four. I think that would be best. I like ALT1 above and encourage a similar 4 in 1.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:58, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Batman Province, capital, river and oil field (look at the credits inside this section). I don't think piling them up (.. that a field lies near the city and river, in the Batman province, and is the largest in Turkey) would work. Materialscientist (talk) 22:43, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It could work depending on the hook. However, I don't see an individual hook for the article this nomination was originally intended to promote.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:11, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
See top two hooks. The rest is not mine. Materialscientist (talk) 22:45, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • It should probably be decided pretty soon if an April Fools' hook should be used and if so, which one. I assume only one would be used. Then hook(s) can be determined for the remaining articles. Here's one more possibility, for the river.... MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 03:55, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT6 ... that Batman's previous identity was Nymphius?

I like ALT1. Batı Raman oil field, Batman Province, and Batman River all are valid 5x expansions. I have been thumbing through various refs and do not see a ref saying the oil field is in the Province or near the River although I see refs saying it is in Southeast Turkey.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:37, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. There is also the city. For location see the map on the second page of this pdf (linked above). It shows the field near the city, unfortunately without a length scale, but the distance is few km as can be verified with Google maps (also linked above, it also shows that the Batman River flows outside the city, but this can be verified through some refs too). Materialscientist (talk) 05:03, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1 (revised) ... that the largest oil field in Turkey lies in the Batman Province, near the Batman River as well as Batman, Turkey?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:41, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
If you are looking for credit for the city, the ALT 1 (revised) would be the proper form. So I will consider that. However, regarding the issue at hand. You need to point me to references used in the article that support the claim made in the hook. Each article will need to include a reference establishing its validity in the hook. Don't just present links. Adjust the articles as necessary or present another hook for review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:41, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Batman, Turkey is also a valid 5x expansion.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:49, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I am looking not for credit, but for an interesting hook. My thought was to have two: 1 quirky with Batman city and another more plain with 3 other articles. I am not happy with ALT1a because it squeezes too much into one hook - I would rather abandon some articles but make it better. I have not seen any objection against my top two hooks; both are referenced, above and in the article(s). I am open to quirky April 1 suggestions, like ALT5 and would welcome some help with this stuck nom. Materialscientist (talk) 04:53, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewed Transmission electron microscopy DNA sequencing. Materialscientist (talk) 11:51, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT for April Fool's "... that the Batman is dammed? Clarityfiend (talk) 23:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I continue to feel that the sourcing for the location within the article is unclear. The sources say it is in the Southeastern Anatolia Region, but we have no source saying it is in Batman or the Batman Province is in the region. P.S. ALT1 (revised) could be altered to remove any indivual hook you want to use separately.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:11, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I believe you were looking at the first paragraph of Batı Raman oil field whereas the location is (and was) described and referenced in the second. I've added river there for completeness. Materialscientist (talk) 03:25, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok guys. Promoting this is way overdue. If no useable hook is found in the next day, it's time to pass on this one.4meter4 (talk) 12:57, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There is no reason not to promote this. All the issues raised are either really non-issues or have now been addressed. I support moving Alt-2 to April Fools (excellent hook) and reworking Alt-1 to omit that article.
Alt1a (2nd revision) ... that the largest oil field in Turkey lies near Batman, Turkey and the Batman River?
SpinningSpark 17:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
There we go. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:20, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Restored this deleted section. Referees said "move ALT2 to April 1 (done), promote ALT1a (not done)". Cheers. Materialscientist (talk) 23:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 14

Pleasure Dissociative Orgasmic Disorder

Created by Ktr101 (talk). Self nom at 10:14 pm, 13 February 2011, Sunday (13 days ago) (UTC−5)

All checks out. --TIAYN (talk) 8:51 am, 14 February 2011, Monday (12 days ago) (UTC−5)
Returned from Prep 4 per concerns on DYK discussion page. - Dravecky (talk) 6:58 am, 23 February 2011, last Wednesday (3 days ago) (UTC−5)
I'm tackling the issues right now. I forgot to reply here on this but I had to wait until the weekend until I could find some actual time to improve this article. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 23:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 17

Oprahization

  • ... that politicians discuss the ways in which they and their families have suffered because of Oprahization?

Created by Cryptic C62 (talk). Self nom at 03:12, 17 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 18

List of people who adopted matronymic surnames

  • Comment: was created the day before the 5x expansion; currently at has survived AfD and is now ready for consideration here.

5x expanded by Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk), Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk), Orlady (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 05:00, 25 February 2011 (UTC) Reviewed Black Society for Salvation; diff=[3] --Orlady (talk) 05:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date and length are fine. However, too many of the entries in the list are tagged for citation needed or lack a cite. Those entries should either be cited with reliable references or removed before this is approved for DYK. Best.4meter4 (talk) 13:54, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Gary J. Aguirre

Created by Marrante (talk). Self nom at 16:23, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


  • full of insight! I prefer ALT1, the first hook requesting to understand SEC without context, ALT2 a bit too complex (extra comma removed). --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:56, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: I would like to put a hold on this article going on the main page. The article involves a few legal points that need to be stated precisely. At the time I submitted the nomination, I was not aware that I had made some factual errors, which I am in the process of correcting, but have not yet finished. I will probably need a few days yet. Though I know sometimes articles sit here for days before they're moved to the queue, it would be great if I didn't have to worry about it moving to the main page before these changes are made. Thanks in advance. Marrante (talk) 21:35, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Article has been deleted. Schwede66 20:32, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It should be easy to re-create it. To find out what happened, please see User talk:Marrante. --PFHLai (talk) 04:29, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article is restored but I think we should respect the hold of the author. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:27, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you Gerda. I would like to continue to hold this article for a short period. I am in the process of making sure there are no factual errors in the article. I hope to be able to finish that process in a day or two. Marrante (talk) 14:18, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm still checking the factual accuracy of this article and hope to have some idea tomorrow (Saturday, Feb 26) as to its suitability for the main page. In the meantime, here are two more alt hooks to consider.

Marrante (talk) 13:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 19

Anne Sharp

Created/expanded by Morag Kerr (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 11:05, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length OK. However, some paragraphs lack inline citations. I also don't see the hook fact stated explicitly in the text, though that may be because I don't understand the terminology. I wonder what you think of this alt:
  • ALT1: ... that even in her thirties, Scottish coloratura soprano Anne Sharp was able to pass as a teenager, performing the role of Emmie Spatchett in Albert Herring at the first Aldeburgh Festival? Yoninah (talk) 17:03, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Like it, thank you. I had looked for an online ref and found it for the recording, which refers to the premiere, but the ALT is supported by the pic, smile. It's the author's first article, as far as I know, let's try to help. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:50, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Well, only now I realize something happened to the pic, removed "pictured". You saw it, though, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:56, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yesterday the image was removed from the article, so I removed it here. Glad you like the alt. However, the article still lacks inline citations on some paragraphs. Yoninah (talk) 10:05, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
To clarify (I didn't make this nomination, but fine), Anne Sharp played the smaller part of Cis in Albert Herring in the premiere, but switched to playing Emmie after only a few performances. She is Emmie in the recording. So it is correct to say she was in both the premiere and the recording (which was a live recording of a performance), but she had different roles. That recording has most of the original cast in it. Morag Kerr (talk) 14:52, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

About the photo. I do not understand why it was deleted. It is a photo which appeared in opera programmes - the little biographies of the cast they have at the back, which are accompanied by photos. I'm not even sure it's "non-free content", but I was trying to be as correct as possible by crediting the photographer. Morag Kerr (talk) 14:52, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 20

Harry Marks

A caricature of a middle-aged man sitting cross-legged in a chair, holding a newspaper

Created/expanded by Shimgray (talk). Self nom at 02:03, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length OK. Offline hook refs AGF. Nice job. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 19:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


National Screen Institute

Created by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 02:42, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I reviewed Malus baccata [4]. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 06:54, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Date, length OK. However, with all its references, the article really doesn't show notability, just the fact that it exists. The page also reads like a brochure for the university and its programs. Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
This article isn't structurally ready for the main page. We don't promote articles with expansion tags and headings with no prose underneath. Best.4meter4 (talk) 15:04, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Grammy Award for Best Americana Album

Created by Another Believer (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article falls very slightly short of the 1500 character requirement (I don't think the footnote can be counted as "readable prose"). decltype (talk) 14:06, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hmm, I must not understand the character count tool then, as I generated a count of 2,000 characters for the lead alone. --Another Believer (Talk) 21:36, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ahh, I don't know which tool you are using, but the discrepancy probably arises from the pull quote. To the best of my knowledge, those do not count as readable prose for the purposes of DYK. Could the article possibly be expanded a little bit? decltype (talk) 13:46, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
DYK check gives 'Prose size (text only): 1522 characters (246 words) "readable prose size"', excluding the blockquote and footnotes. - PKM (talk) 01:12, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, but that is including the Each year is linked to the article about the Grammy Awards held that year., which is technically a footnote. decltype (talk) 06:27, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Rhodri Giggs

Created by 03md (talk). Self nom at 08:40, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • I wanted to keep the hook as R. Giggs to make the hook interesting (initial glance would indicate Ryan Giggs). 03md 18:50, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'd be more interested if you said that "Rhodri Giggs is the younger brother of Ryan Giggs!♦ Dr. Blofeld 22:09, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • We've got to put this on hold for the time being while the article goes through an AfD process. Schwede66 20:34, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lament of Edward II

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 23:55, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • You cite three four five! sources that contradict or question its authorship (Giancarlo says it is "supposedly" by him and refers to the poet as "Edward" in scare quotes, hardly a ringing endorsement), and only one that says it is by Edward - and that source happens to be its publisher. Could you add more citations to say that it is by him? You also need a cite for your hook statement, ie. "No other poems of Edward survive." These problems need to be fixed before it can be suitable for the main page. Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 05:56, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Really much of the long note discussing sources could be in the text, and if necessary the "only surviving" dropped.

Current nominations

Articles created/expanded on February 21

Highweek

  • ... that the parishioners of Highweek petitioned the pope for their own graveyard?

Created by Wikwiltz (talk). Nominated by Smalljim (talk) at 16:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Reviewed: the Minuscule one directly below.
  • Comment: I know there's an AfD on the article, but it'll surely be kept. There's an online ref for the hook at Google books, bottom of p 60 and top of next page.  —SMALLJIM  17:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article mentions Pope Martin V but does not say that the villagers petitioned him. If that is fixed, shouldn't this hook link to Pope Martin V, and shouldn't the hook tell the reader where Highweek is in general? Binksternet (talk) 19:40, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for the quick response - I've reworded the relevant section of the article and changed "villagers" to "parishioners" in the hook. As for linking the pope and saying where Highweek is, I think it's better not to give too much away: less is more - WP:DYKHN H7.  —SMALLJIM  22:05, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Minuscule 831, Minuscule 1076, Minuscule 1078, Minuscule 1356

Created by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 23:23, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Isn't this a bit lacking in "hookiness"? I've checked the first article for size and date - OK. I'd have to take the sourcing on good faith: the reference, although online, is in German shorthand. Why not go all out for obscurity and have something like:
    ALT1 ... that the lacunose Minuscule 831 has the Pericope Adulterae at the end of John?  —SMALLJIM  17:03, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

While Europe Slept: How Radical Islam is Destroying the West from Within (book)

Created by Mbz1 (talk) and Ironholds (talk). Self nom at 07:11, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment According to the article's history, you started working on it on February 21. User:Ironholds deleted the older revisions of your user subpage and subsequently restored your recent work. Is that right? --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 12:27, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yes, but I worked on it in my user space. It was moved to the main space on February 22, and it is considered the day of the creation of the article.--Mbz1 (talk) 13:33, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      • I see. Ironholds deleted the article after you moved it to the main space, and he restored 44 revisions going back to February 21 (the beginning of your work on this topic). Both the dates are OK for the DYK requirements and your nomination can be simply moved to February 21. Is the date (February 22) important for you? Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 14:04, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
        • Actually Ironholds by my request moved the article from my user space to main space after he did some work on it in my user space. The date (February 22) is very important for me for personal reasons, but of course this importance has nothing to do with DYK nomination, and that's why I will move the nomination to February 21 as you requested. Thanks.--Mbz1 (talk) 16:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      • In any case, it is a good, balanced and well written piece of information and a very interesting article. I checked both the reviews cited in the hook, the online version of the article published by the Economist is available here. Thanks for your work, Mbz. --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 16:53, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, but I think this one needs some work. The "critical reception" section is all over the shop and needs a cleanup. The "Summary" section is also not much of a summary. On topics as sensitive as this, we need to get things right. Gatoclass (talk) 16:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
What exactly do you suggest to change? I think the article presents various contrasting opinions and reviews regarding this sensitive topic/book. It is a new work and it isn't perfect, but I can't find any significant bias or imbalance in the article. --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 21:57, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Besides positive and negative reviews are mixed in the original sources, and it is all, but impossible to separate those.--Mbz1 (talk) 23:33, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Just looking at one source, the Boston Globe review as currently treated in the article seems to be mis-represented; the quote used is the reviewer's summary of Part I of the book. The reviewer discusses Part II separately and with much stronger criticism. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 23:58, 24 February 2011 (UTC) Now expanded to cover this. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 00:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm currently working on this article. I will leave a note here when I'm done. Gatoclass (talk) 04:51, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tibouren

  • Reviewed: Edward L. Kessel
  • Comment: Primary refs are Jancis Robinson's grape guides (FN#1 and #3) but online Wine Pros link (FN#3) can assist with some verification.

5x expanded by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 06:55, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • 5x expansion verified. Date, length, hook all verified. Fixed links and it's good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:08, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Gary Albright Memorial Show

Taiyō Kea at AJPW "Pro-Wrestling Love in Taiwan 2010", National Taiwan University Gymnasium, Taipei.

Created by 72.74.226.25 (talk). Self nom at 21:55, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length, hook ref all verified. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:16, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Yokozuna Memorial Show

Created by 72.74.226.25 (talk). Self nom at 21:55, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The Mouse Problem

Created by Roscelese (talk). Self nom at 06:03, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • That is a brilliant sketch, but the main chunk of the text is currently an unreferenced plot, without which there is not much content. Is there anything else you can add? SmartSE (talk) 14:29, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I could just cite the plot to the text of the sketch, which is linked - would that be good? (Though per Wikipedia:When to cite, it is generally presumed that the fictional work itself is the source.) Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 21:25, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Isn't that link problematic as a non-sanctioned transcript of the copyrighted material (WP:COPYLINK)? - Brianhe (talk) 22:24, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reply to self -- I removed the external link, and added a citation to The Complete Monty Python's Flying Circus: All the Words (an authorized book with the scripts). — Brianhe (talk) 00:03, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the late reply. I'm never too sure about whether plots need cites or not - my main concern if they don't is that it is OR. Can I leave this to someone who knows more about it? FWIW, the hook is confirmed. SmartSE (talk) 09:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Suillus salmonicolor, Partial veil

An orange mushroom lying on its side among small green plants

  • Comment: I'm somewhat colorblind, so I'm not sure that "orange" in the alt text is correct. Please fix it if necessary. Nyttend (talk) 04:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Sasata (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 04:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The alt seems "hookier" to me, but would probably get more views without a picture. Sasata (talk) 05:56, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I like ALT1 but are you sure the lemon taste is correct? You've referenced an offline book which I would normally be fine with, but I tried to see if there were any less reliable sources for it but couldn't find anything. There are plenty saying it is lemon coloured, but nothing about taste AFAICT. mushroom expert says that it has no distinct taste. Do Bessette et al. cite anyone else for this, or is it their own observation? SmartSE (talk) 10:54, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I wouldn't go so far as to say they taste like lemons, but they are reported as "edible and very good, with a lemony flavor ..." (North American Boletes, 2001, p. 251). They do not cite a source for this (I'm pretty sure it's their own observation). The book is about as reliable a source as one can find about North American bolete species. Howz about this for a short, hooky alternative, avoiding the taste issue altogether: Sasata (talk) 15:41, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you like this last one I could expand the veil article 5x to make it a double. Sasata (talk) 15:43, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think it's best to avoid the taste if it seems doubtful, so therefore, in the words of Kurtis Blow "Just do it, just do it, just do it, do it, do it!" I think there needs to be an s in there somewhere though - either "Jills" or "wears". SmartSE (talk) 09:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Added s. Please check back in a day and I'll have the second article ready. Thanks! Sasata (talk) 13:52, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Good to go. AGF for the offline sources. SmartSE (talk) 15:12, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 22

Maya city

Created by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 20:37, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

ProtectMarriage.com

  • ... that the Yes on Proposition 8 campaign was "the single largest, most powerful grassroots movement in the history of American ballot initiative campaigns" according to Ron Prentice of ProtectMarriage.com?

Created by Lionelt (talk). Self nom at 19:54, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Shapeshifting (album)

Created by The Interior (talk). Self nom at 10:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Can you please fix ref 2. It's pointing to a page of Google hits and I can't find the Alex Hudson article (November 11, 2010) on Exclaim.ca. —Bruce1eetalk 13:55, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks. Length, date and hook refs verified. —Bruce1eetalk 06:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
With quoted text removed (as it is supposed to be), this article has less than 1500 characters of prose.4meter4 (talk) 13:34, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "A2: The prose portion of the article, which must be 1500 characters, excludes (in addition to categories listed in the rules) block quotes."(my bold) Quotes within paragraphs are usually considered part of the prose, I believe. I know this is short, but it's a new album without many reviews yet. I was careful to get over the 1500 limit. The Interior (Talk) 16:08, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Heinrich-Heine-Straße (Berlin U-Bahn)

  • ALT1:... that the unusual narrowness of the Neanderstraße meant that Berlin U-Bahn stations built under it in the 1920s, such as Heinrich-Heine-Straße, were the first to have entrances built into buildings?

5x expanded by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 22:27, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

John M. Bacon

Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 22:08, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'll review something later today, or maybe tomorrow. If approved, I'd like this held for Bacon Day, 1 March--bacon keeps very well. Also, if any of you (Bushranger, maybe?) who write regularly on military matters can have a look at the article--I'm not familiar with military topics and can use all the help I can get. Thanks in advance, Drmies (talk) 22:10, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

N. D. Cocea

Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 12:36, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article is quite full of juicy hooks, so feel free to alt me. Dahn (talk) 12:37, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Tell Ghoraifé

Created by Paul Bedson‎ (talk), Zozo2kx (talk). Self nom at 09:31, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length OK. Offline hook ref AGF. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:30, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Charles Dvorak

University of Michigan pole vault champion Charles Dvorak in 1903

5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 03:57, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Mothers' Bus

  • ... that during the takeover of the hijacked Mothers' Bus by the Yamam, the hijackers killed two mothers, of two and four children, giving the incident its name?

Created by Tzu Zha Men (talk). Self nom at 23:14, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Abd al-Samad

5x expanded by Johnbod (talk). Self nom at 20:38, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed: All Saints Church, Newton Green

  • 5x expansion verified. Date, length, hook ref verified (I added the link from Google Books). Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

UAAP Season 51 men's basketball tournament

  • Comment: Question: I've submitted four suggestions this week. How many suggestions should I review?

Created by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 18:02, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Answer: since, according to your user page, you've created/expanded 48 DYKs, you are not a "new nominator", and are required to review one entry for each one of your own, i.e. 4 in total. GregorB (talk) 20:02, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It turns out I'll only need to review three as my earlier nominated went to the queue w/o a accompanying review. Anyway, I reviewed Island of Peace massacre. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 13:45, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Note: I'm willing to review a fourth article to correct the mistake. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 13:45, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All Saints Church, Newton Green

A flint church with red tiled roofs seen from the southwest, showing a tower with a battlemented parapet, the nave with a porch, and the chancel

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 16:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Creal Reef Light

Created by Muhandes (talk). Self nom at 15:09, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Length, history and hook all check out. Maybe put the word "1920s" in there somewhere to add historical context? Philg 88talk 07:16, Saturday, June 15, 2024 (UTC)
I wanted to, but I have a length problem. ALT1 below is 205 chars, if the editor moving this to the queue thinks it's better
ALT1 ... that Creal Reef, Queensland, the location of Creal Reef Light, was named in the 1920s by the captain of the HMAS Moresby, after a pilot of the No. 101 Flight RAAF who assisted the Moresby with her surveys?

--Muhandes (talk) 22:33, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Robert Morison

5x expanded by Philg88 (talk). Self nom at 09:30, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'm not sure this hook (or the article) really captures the meaning in the reference. It states that Morrison's work on Umbelliferae "was the first monograph of a definite group of plants, and is remarkable for the sense of relationship between the genera that inspires it". I get quite a different impression from "the first person to describe a specific group of plants". In botanical language, to describe a taxon is quite different from monographing it. I would suggest changing both to quoting the citation directly, and state that 'Morrison produced the "first monograph of a definite group of plants"'. --Stemonitis (talk) 06:48, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the suggestion.
  • Sorry to be a pain about this, but do you have a page number for the second part, that it established the basis for all later plant classification? It is not directly cited, and your Linnaeus quote seems to contradict it, in that "Morison ... revived system which was half expiring" and "All that is good in Morison is taken from Cesalpino", suggesting that Morrison's role was not so great. Is it perhaps enough to state that:
  • ALT3 ... that in 1672, the Scottish botanist Robert Morison wrote the "first monograph of a specific group of plants", the Umbelliferae?
  • That would be backed up by the reference. (I'm assuming these changes will be carried across to the article.) --Stemonitis (talk) 07:27, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
No pain at all - it should follow the rules. To add a bit more zest can I propose:
ALT4 ... that in 1672, the Scottish botanist Robert Morison was the first person ever to write a "monograph of a specific group of plants", the Umbelliferae?
  • Yes. Date OK, expansion verified, hook confirmed. ALT3 and ALT4 are both acceptable; I've struck the others out. --Stemonitis (talk) 16:32, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Employees' State Insurance

Reviewed St Augustine's Church, Norwich, diff
Created by Longhairandabeard (talk). Self nom at 15:58, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The hook is a really good one, the article is well-informing and the prose is fine. As for the references they are fine, just: this [8] (ref. nr.3) clearly mentions "over 5 crore", so the hook is just OK, but the other one [9] needs the page number. The same goes to ref. nr. 1 which needs the page number, though its first footnote citing the establishment's year 1948 can be easily noted as it's in the very beginning of the document. The rest is just fine. I just advise to better create a lead article and then divide the content into sections as per WP:LAYOUT (the references' information is abundant) but this could be a future task, for DYK is OK with just this references query complied. Empathictrust (talk) 15:12, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for the review! Page numbers now included in inline refs. The plan is to have a full-fledged article in the next one month or so.. There is enough material available to write a book on the subject, I'll just try for FA :-) -- Longhairandabeard (talk) 10:02, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Maersk Triple E class

Reviewed Eduardo Iturrizaga: diff. This is my first DYK, so be gentle with me :-) bobrayner (talk) 13:21, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Created by Bobrayner (talk). Self nom at 11:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC).[reply]
  • Wow! Date and size check out. The first hook is fine, though I've adjusted the article slightly for clarity. The ALT should say something like "will cost...", because it won't (all) have been paid yet. I note too that the Economist article quotes the cost as $1.8 billion, but what's $100 million between friends? No preference as to which hook is the better.  —SMALLJIM  19:39, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Between currency-exchange issues, rounding by newspaper editors, minor little bits of the contract &c, there's plenty of room for variation in the headline cost of a complex product that hasn't been built yet. Ditto for the tech specs; different sources give slightly different numbers in some cases. Hence a non-numeric hook may be better. bobrayner (talk) 20:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Agreed. for the original hook.  —SMALLJIM  22:16, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 23

Colin Hatch

--BabbaQ (talk) 22:39, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ashford Black Marble

design from black marble with other rocks

Created by Parkywiki (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 17:42, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

(alt)... that Derby Museum has a diagram of Ecton Hill (see picture) made from Ashford Black Marble and other minerals?
  • Size and date OK. ALT hook verified. Main hook: neither the article nor its reference mention that the blocks found behind the pub formed pictures. Simon Burchell (talk) 20:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Fine - obviously I meant that you made pictures out of marble that these blocks were made of, not that the blocks made pictures. Ive struck out the main one for speed as I prefer the alt anyway Victuallers (talk) 21:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Cryptantha crassipes

Created by IceCreamAntisocial (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 16:07, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date, hook's ref verified. --Rosiestep (talk) 20:51, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Crotalaria avonensis

  • ... that after the rare legume Crotalaria avonensis was first collected in 1950, it took 39 more years to become recognized as a distinct species and named?

Created by IceCreamAntisocial (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 21:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Stielgranate 41

Stielgranate 41 fitted on the PaK-36 barrel

Created by Felis domestica (talk). Self nom at 15:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Bicycle helmet laws

Created by Suzanne10 (talk). Nominated by Mike Christie (talk) at 02:24, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I haven't reviewed another nom as I haven't nominated five DYKs; I may review one later but wanted to get this nom in first. Mike Christie (talklibrary) 02:24, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Not to worry -- that requirement is only for people who nominate their own articles. It doesn't apply to nominations of other people's articles. :-) --Orlady (talk) 03:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Regarding the nominated article, the article looks like a fine contribution, but it sports a "globalize" template right now, and in reviewing the article I had some other concerns.
  • Starting with the lead, I think the statement "The majority of states in the U.S. have laws requiring children under the age of sixteen to wear helmets" is inaccurate, since the article indicates that fewer than half of the states have such laws, although there are local laws in some of the states. That should be revised to state that (for example) 22 U.S. states have these laws and some municipalities and counties in other states also have them.
    Another editor has fixed this. Mike Christie (talklibrary) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    Excellent phrasing, now used. Thanks! NebY (talk) 15:27, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think that the article has too many direct quotations when the quoted content is simply a statement of a fact. For example, it should be able to present the hook fact without surrounding it with quotation marks.
    I've slightly rephrased that sentence though much of it is a list so can't really be rephrased. I have proposed an alternate hook below based on the new version of the sentence. I'll suggest to the primary author that she rephrase some of the other quotes too. Mike Christie (talklibrary) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The first sentence under "Facts" is unsourced and looks like an opinion.
    I've cut it; I don't think it was necessary. Mike Christie (talklibrary) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
As for that "globalize" template, I've already found two references about British Columbia's helmet law. I bet there are others... --Orlady (talk) 03:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC) Or the article could be retitled "Bicycle helmet laws in the United States." --Orlady (talk) 03:52, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I'll go see if I can fix these points; obviously your comments are going to improve the article. However, can you tell me for future reference if nominated DYK has to also meet some minimum quality standards that I should be aware of? I thought the only requirements were a certain length and that the hook should be supported with an inline reference. Is there anything else that needs to be done -- e.g. do tags such as the globalize tag mean it can't be supported? Or is it just that the higher quality an article is, the more likely it is to get support? Thanks. Mike Christie (talklibrary) 14:32, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Actually the source gives 21 states with state-wide laws and there are 50 states in the Union. If I've got my arithmetic right that leaves 29 without and I have edited the article to conform to the following suggestion:

Edgar Gilbert

Created by David Eppstein (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 16:41, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length, hook ref all verified. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:10, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hubert G. Chevis

Created by Sakurakaze (talk), Bruce1ee (talk). Nominated by Bruce1ee (talk) at 10:05, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Mobilization of the Bulgarian Army in 1915

Created by Avidius (talk). Nominated by TodorBozhinov (talk) at 08:29, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Howard C. Reiche School

5x expanded by Orlady (talk). Self nom at 01:41, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed Cass County Courthouse (Iowa); diff=[11] --Orlady (talk) 02:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC) [reply]

  • Comment by nominator: This is currently listed at AfD, but I believe its notability has been amply established. --Orlady (talk)
:  Notable and hook is correct. I added "Portland, Maine" to attract more potential reader selection. Billy Hathorn (talk) 17:08, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Duanesburg High School

Created by Bearian (talk). Self nom at 23:29, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think this article is too sketchy for a DYK, needs more info, but the one about the child actor is a good one. Billy Hathorn (talk) 21:53, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I can't work on it today, but will over the weekend, Monday at the latest. Bearian (talk) 17:06, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

William Martin (naturalist)

horn shaped rock
error?

5x expanded by Victuallers (talk). Self nom at 16:05, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article doesn't actually say this. It says that the uncles and cousins thought that they were tails, but not that he said the remains were not tails. — KV5Talk • 02:47, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I have added a quote to the ref. Martin says what each fossil is - whether it is considered to be grass, vegetable or a shell - he notes that others used to say they were crocodile tails - Do you think we need to change the hook? Victuallers (talk) 17:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Isabelle de Borchgrave

Created by Patriciathornton (talk). Nominated by Zachlipton (talk) at 08:24, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Several paragraphs without citations (see the rules). Johnbod (talk) 16:14, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Huh? This seems rather restrictive reading of the rules. In fact, half of the current set of DYKs on the homepage have body paragraphs without citations. My understanding is that the rules require that the hook's claims must be backed by inline citations, and I believe that is the case with this article (ref #10), and that the article generally conform to core policy, which this article again seems to do. The article is really rather well sourced. Certainly I don't see any unsourced or poorly referenced negative material, which the rules specifically prohibit. In any case, seeing as the goal here is to improve articles and not quibble over rules, I have improved the referencing in the article to ensure that every paragraph has at least one citation. Zachlipton (talk) 19:51, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The referencing looks much better now, thanks. Date, length OK. Offline hook ref AGF. Tweaked hook for interest and it's good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:37, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Al-Rawda

Created by Zozo2kx (talk). Self nom at 15:11, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date and length OK, offline source AGF, but hook slightly >200 characters and rather rambling. How about something like the following (or you may be able to suggest a better one):
  • Thanks, yeah ALT1 is fine. Yazan (talk) 17:55, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • for ALT1. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 20:37, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Everything is good — I count 1689 characters (after making a couple of little modifications), the article was written just yesterday, and you've used great academic sources. Two questions — (1) Could you expand the article a little more? You're well past the 1500-character minimum, but even longer would be better. (2) Do your sources give any indication of the site's precise location? Coordinates would be highly useful if you could add them. Of course, neither of these issues are problems, and they're definitely not required by the rules; I'm just asking in my capacity as another editor. Nyttend (talk) 20:42, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Both things were done yesterday by User:Zoeperkoe (Expanded, precise location), so I added him to the DYKmake. Thanks again. Yazan (talk) 03:48, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT2 is actually much better. Yazan (talk) 04:15, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Agreed; I think ALT2 is better. bobrayner (talk) 13:29, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Environmental issues in Russia

Created by Slon02 (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 02:53, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Both of these hooks are better than my original one. Admin, when you move this to the queue, be sure to replace the DYK nom template that links to me with a template that links to Ericoides or CycloneGU. Nyttend (talk) 20:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Glee: The Music, Volume 5

Created by CycloneGU (talk). Self nom at 07:11, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • This is being proposed for inclusion on March 8, when the soundtrack comes out. The article itself will get significant expansion up to March 8 and beyond, when reception is covered. This can be reworded if need be, and I'll happily participate in that process to find a better wording. Please keep in mind the March 8 proposed inclusion when considering article length and observe future work on the article before dismissing it. CycloneGU (talk) 07:12, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I have noticed a holding area for March 8 as International Women's Day and several holding requests for that. If it turns out March 8 is impossible, it might be possible to try for March 15 as that is the air date of the episode using the songs I refer to in the hook. In such a case, the hook would need rewriting to refer to "tonight's episode of Glee". CycloneGU (talk) 00:58, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Český Šternberk Castle

The eastern view of the castle Český Šternberk

Created by Empathictrust (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on February 24

Dayr al-Shaykh

  • ... that the shrine of a famous medieval shaykh in the currently depopulated village of Dayr al-Shaykh became a place of pilgrimage for locals following his death in the 13th-century?

5x expanded by Al Ameer son (talk), Huldra (talk), Tiamut (talk), and Zero0000 (talk). Self nom at 23:34, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

HMS Hotspur (H01)

A camouflaged warship with two funnels and one mast. Two guns are visible forward.

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Self nom at 16:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Do you have a reference for the permanent repairs at Malta (specifically to be placed at the end of that sentence per DYK rules?) Otherwise, image, expansion and length all check out. Harrias talk 22:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks, the article is now good to go! Harrias talk 23:21, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Edward Innes Pocock

A black and white profile shot of a moustached man with slicked black hair and thick sideburns

Created by User:FruitMonkey (talk). Self nom at 11:56, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Beta (plasma physics)

  • ... that Troyon's exploration of the limits of Beta in tokamak fusion power designs suggested they were fundamentally limited to less than the 5% needed to build a practical reactor?

5x expanded by User:Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 14:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thunderbolt (interface)

5x expanded by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 14:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Maury Markowitz is referring to Seara (newspaper). I'm just specifying this because the order in the queue may shift (Seara may get picked up before Thunderbolt), and the meaning of "article below" will hence be lost. Dahn (talk) 11:49, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Seara (newspaper)

Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 13:08, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • This is a great article! Hook is well supported. However, I'm not sure "1910s" means anything to the average reader; perhaps "Great War-era" might be suitable replacement? Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! I was thinking of something along the lines of "World War I" myself, but wanted to avoid the impression that this happened as Romania was fighting in the war, when in fact it came during the time when Romania was neutral - i.e. these guys weren't treasonous, they were just part of an open debate. But maybe I'm being too cautious, in which case please feel free to tweak the hook. Dahn (talk) 14:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I see what you mean, but I think "war era" should be OK - I think it will lead to less confusion than "1910s", which I read to be "1910" and then went hunting for the ref. Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:34, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Okay then, tweaked accordingly. Dahn (talk) 14:39, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Donald S. Sanford

Created by Scanlan (talk). Nominated by Dravecky (talk) at 09:31, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Looks fine, hook well supported. However, do we really need the "S" in the article name? Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:34, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Bad Dreams (Fringe)

Created Ruby2010 talk 02:53, 25 February 2011 (UTC) [reply]

  • Alt1 is a far stronger hook than the first suggestion. Film-makers frequently re-tread the same ground over and over to get the shots that they want. Relocating from a hospital to a church due to a phobia is pretty unusual. danno 22:12, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewed Adoption of Ala'a Eddeen. Ruby2010 talk 03:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Domaine Jean-Luc Colombo

  • Reviewed: Khor Virap
  • Comment: Online Decanter ref (FN#5) in the Winemaking philosophy section

Created by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 02:05, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ready to go, but only after I chopped a bit on his education that wasn't in any source. Your referencing style is confusing: by citing two sources at the same spot (end of the second paragraph), you make it impossible to tell what comes from what source. It's not enough to disqualify this from DYK, but it's enough to make me quite uncomfortable; could you please separate the referencing for that paragraph? Nyttend (talk) 15:44, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I apologize for the confusion, but I did have a cite right after the quote that hook is using (and I noted in my comment above which source was use to facilitate any reviewing). Also, considering that it is an online source, I'm not sure why this needed an AGF tick? To my knowledge, the Decanter article is not even behind a paywall. In the grand scheme of things, it's not a big deal but I fret that you may have made this review harder on yourself than what it really should have been. :) AgneCheese/Wine 02:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
What's the point of the AGF tick? I assumed it was meant for cases in which the article had one or more sources that weren't available to the reviewer; I used it because you have a couple of print sources. As well, I'm not complaining about the hook citation: I'm talking about citations 1 and 3 being used adjacent to each other after "Châteauneuf-du-Pape estate Les Cailloux." Sorry for causing confusion. Nyttend (talk) 05:01, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Typically the AGF hook is used when you can't personally verify the sources relating to the hook (since that is what is being featured on the main page). But again, in the grand scheme, it is no big deal. :) As for the confusion about FN#1 and FN#3 next to each other at the end of lead, I did that because FN#1 is an offline book source which covers the entire paragraph while FN#3 is an online source that corroborates several of the details in that paragraph (organic vit, extended maceration, 100s of clients, his influence, work with Chapoutier and Chateau Fortia, etc). I had an idea for a potential hook (which I ultimately didn't use) and wanted to make sure that I had a secondary online ref to assist in verification if I used it. While FN#1 covered it all, having a secondary online ref can be useful. But again, it's alright :) I appreciate you taking the time to review my nom. AgneCheese/Wine 18:10, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Grammy Award for Best Male Rap Solo Performance

5x expanded by Another Believer (talk). Self nom at 23:29, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: Instead of "singers", I would call them artists or rappers. Ruby2010 talk 02:55, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Changed "singers" to "performing artists". --Another Believer (Talk) 18:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Robert L. Miller

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 20:31, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed Duanesburg High School

Lockington Locks

A large canal lock built of limestone, almost entirely empty of water and clearly abandoned

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 19:47, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment I'll review something when I get the chance. Nyttend (talk) 19:47, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Church of St John Maddermarket

A stone church seen from the southeast, showing the south aisle, clerestory, and west tower

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 17:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, source, new article confirmed, Sadads (talk) 19:09, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Adoption of Ala'a Eddeen

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 16:09, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

While the date, length, and sources check out, the article does not sound very encyclopedic. It sounds more like a newspaper article. I think another opinion is needed before it's submitted to the queue. Also, I removed a comma after "boy". Ruby2010 talk 03:00, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Well, about coma it could be either way I believe. About the article being "not very encyclopedic", do you have any particular suggestions? This is a notable story that was reported in many sources, and IMO should be represented on Wikipedia also. I am sure wikipedia have many other articles that as you say "sound more like a newspaper articles". If you believe the article to be not encyclopedic, you may nominate it on deletion, but as long as it stays on wikipedia there's no valid reason to prevent it promotion for DYK.--Mbz1 (talk) 04:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I did, article at AfD. Yazan (talk) 05:34, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

St Augustine's Church, Norwich

A church seen from the southwest with a large brick tower on the left and the flint body of the church on the right, showing the clerestory, south aisle and porch

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 12:12, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed, Good to go: hook, refs, image copyright all good; suggesting alternative hook which may be more interesting:
ALT1 - ... that St Augustine's Church (pictured) in Norwich has a monument to a textile manufacturer, raised by 600 weavers?

-- Longhairandabeard (talk) 14:11, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The original hook is more "important". ALT1 maybe more "interesting". Not sure which is the better; leave it to the PTB (powers that be). --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 20:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I would tend to agree with LHaAB. I totally understand Peter's view that the tower fact is more important, but at a glance it isn't as enticing to me as "600 weavers" is. danno 22:26, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lee Crooks

5x expanded by MickMacNee (talk). Self nom at 07:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Parapinnixa affinis

5x expanded by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 06:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Expansion, date, and hook ref okay. However, to me as a non-biologist it would be more interesting to read that a crab lives inside a worm, so how about:
  • I've never heard the phrase "ringed worm" (="segmented worm" ="annelid"?), so I'd change that to "bristle worm", "tube-dweling worm", or just "worm" (there is also the potential for confusion with ringworm), but apart from that, I'm happy with either hook. It's a shame we haven't got an article on or a picture of Terebella. --Stemonitis (talk) 09:38, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The annelid article says so, that's where I got it from. Changed to "worms". all good, both hooks check out. --Pgallert (talk) 10:12, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

First Deputy Prime Minister of the Russian Federation

Created by TIAYN (talk) 10:08, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed Black Thunder (chocolate bar) --TIAYN (talk) 10:11, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • AGF on foreign language sources, but the prose size is barely 268 chars, it needs to be at least 1500. Yazan (talk) 18:58, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

A Darker Domain

5x expanded by Sadads (talk). Self nom at 19:04, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Zayd Mutee' Dammaj

created by Peripatetic (talk). Self nom on 24 February 2011 (UTC)

  • The source for the hook is a blog, which puts a strain on WP:RS. I'm sure an info of this magnitude can be referred to better sources, both Anglophone and Arabophone. Dahn (talk) 12:56, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Disi Water Conveyance Project

Created by E2eamon (talk). Self nom at 00:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • This doesn't seem very NPOV based on the article. The article cites one study that tested existing wells in the aquifer, but I'm not seeing citations that describe tests of the actual water to be delivered by the project. Maybe an alternate hook that just says they are building this massive project and there are concerns about radioactivity in the aquifer? Zachlipton (talk) 22:18, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I agree. I have seen some somewhat misleading hooks on DYK before (things that make puns, etc), and thought that this would be acceptable because, technically, it does say that they "may be drinking" radioactive water. If, however, there are concerns, I understand, and thus propose an alternate. --E♴ (talk) 23:39, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT 1: ... that there are concerns about radioactive water in the aquifer supplying the Disi Water Conveyance Project?


Frederic M. Halford

Detached Badger at work

Created by Mike Cline (talk). Self nom at 18:01, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Reviewed: Escobaria minima

Articles created/expanded on February 25

Lebia grandis

Colorado potato beetle eggs

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nom at 19:11, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Xochimilco

Part of the Xochimilco Ecological Reserve

5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 02:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Ndumbe Lobe Bell, Jantzen & Thormählen

King Ndumbe Lobe Bell in 1874

Created by Aymatth2 (talk). Self nom at 23:50, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Golding Bird

  • ... that physician Golding Bird invented the electric moxa in order to save patients from having to be burnt with glowing charcoal?

5x expanded by Spinningspark (talk). Self nom at 22:32, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Reviewed Corwin Clairmont [16]

The Satirist

Created by Qrsdogg (talk). Self nom at 19:32, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Corwin Clairmont

Created by Missvain (talk). Self nom at 07:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • checked for length, date, hook and source. The tribal name is a bit of a mouthful, is there not a short version that could be used in the hook? SpinningSpark 23:35, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good to me. SpinningSpark 10:30, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Canterbury Provincial Council Buildings

View of a building in Gothic Revival architectural style.

View of a building in Gothic Revival architectural style.

Created by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 04:21, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • I've found a photo of the Stone Chamber itself, which is the "most impressive achievement" referred to in the hook. I've added it here, but note that I've put a rename request on the file (to File:Canterbury Provincial Council Stone Chamber.jpg), as 'Church' is wrong. Schwede66 21:05, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Transmission Electron Microscopy DNA Sequencing

Step 1: Denature DNA Step 2: Heavy atom labeling Step 3: DNA Alignment on substrate Step 4: TEM Imaging Step 5: Data Analysis

Created by Jmgrants (talk). Nominated by Jayron32 (talk) at 01:57, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Provisional - useful article, maybe somewhat overpromoting the involved companies and projects, but this is a small part which can be brushed up and is not that bad for this science area. I've tweaked the hook. This image won't do in 100x100px. Actual electron microscopy image of DNA would be nice. Materialscientist (talk) 11:49, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Articles created/expanded on February 26

William Herbert Fowler

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 22:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Maryland Route 24

5x expanded by Viridiscalculus (talk). Self nom at 22:16, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Al Mar Knives

  • ... that Al Mar Knives was the first knife factory to sell a production knife for more than $100US?

Created by Mike Searson (talk). Self nom at 21:17, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Rabatment of the rectangle

A rectangle with a dotted line running through it to show a square section within the larger rectangle

Created by Mattdm (talk), Binksternet (talk). Nominated by Binksternet (talk) at 19:54, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Betty Jane Gorin-Smith

  • ... that the Metropolitan Cathedral of Campinas (original name Catedral Metropolitana Nossa Senhora da Conceição) located in Campinas, built between 1807 and 1883 and also opened in 1883, is considered the building as the world's largest built in rammed earth, with 4000 m² area, and also one of the highest?

Created by Marlonsales (talk). Self nom at 18:52, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 16:57, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

:Reviewed Howard C. Reiche School

Kathleen, Duchess of Newcastle

Created by Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 16:40, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • There are two images on the article, but I don't think either would work as a thumbnail on the main page. Miyagawa (talk) 16:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

iLoo

5x expanded by Smallman12q (talk). Self nom at 15:14, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

St Mary's Church, Redgrave

A stone church seen from the south, showing a tower with pinnacles, a nave with clerestory, south aisle, south porch, and a chancel

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 11:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date and multiple sources all check out. Good to go. FruitMonkey (talk) 11:42, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]


M-46 (Michigan highway)

5x expanded by Imzadi1979 (talk). Self nom at 08:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date and multiple sources all check out. Good to go. --TIAYN (talk) 13:47, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ohinetahi

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 06:29, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length, date, ref OK. The hook is slightly long (I make it 206 characters with spaces), but in view of the timely nature of the hook, I would be prepared to accept it. You could I suppose make it "fit the rules" as:
ALT1 ... that Ohinetahi, the historical home and formal garden in New Zealand owned by Sir Miles Warren, architect of the Christchurch Town Hall, was badly damaged due to the 2010 Canterbury earthquake? — but I have no strong feeling about that. I recommend that the hook should appear on the main page soon. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 10:53, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Nice work. The etymology section is unsourced. Schwede66 16:06, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

B96 Pepsi SummerBash

Created by Strikerforce (talk). Self nom at 04:47, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • with respect to the nomination. I updated the hook to format the subject article in bold, put the game show name in italics, and use a better link for the game show. (The Price Is Right vs. The Price Is Right.) Have you reviewed another nomination here, or are you a new editor claiming the exemption? Second, you will want to reformat your references in the article so that they aren't bare URLs. Please add authors (if known), publishers, dates and access/retrieval dates for the sources used. Otherwise the article creation and source check out. Imzadi 1979  08:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
This is my first attempt at DYK. I am headed off to bed in a few minutes, so I will make the suggested improvements to the article later on today. Thank you for your comments! Strikerforce (talk) 08:51, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I went ahead and made the suggested changes while they were still fresh on my mind. Strikerforce (talk) 09:21, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
with the recent updates to the article. In the future though, please note that you're claiming the exemption under the rules up front, or your nominations may not get reviewed and approved. Imzadi 1979  21:12, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Collective leadership

A man with greying hair, in military uniform with five medals

Created by --TIAYN (talk) 13:42, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed M-46 (Michigan highway) --TIAYN (talk) 13:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Length, date and hook are fine. My only query would be the formating of the references. These seem strange to me. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:59, 26 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Special occasion holding area

Do not nominate new articles for a special time in this section. Instead, please nominate them in the candidate entries section above under the date the article was created or the expansion began, and indicate your request for a specially-timed appearance on the Main Page.
Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

March 1

St. Davids Day

William Haggar and Desperate Poaching Affray

Black and white still of a man being chased through a river surrounded by pursuers which includes policemen

Desperate Poaching Affray, created by FruitMonkey (talk). William Haggar, x5 expansion by FruitMonkey (talk). Self nom at 20:45, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Replaced 's with {{`s}} per rule C7. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 13:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed St Faith's Church, Little Witchingham

Barry Jones (boxer)

  • ... that Welsh boxer Barry Jones lost his WBO Super featherweight title through events caused by an anomaly in a brain scan?

Barry Jones (boxer) new article, self nom by FruitMonkey (talk). 00:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed Croatian Museum of Naïve Art

Blue Ribbon Bacon Festival

Created by Worm That Turned (talk). Self nom at 15:56, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

reviewed Casper the Commuting Cat,Casper (cat) hereWorm 16:02, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

March 8 (International Women's Day)

Rose Catherine Pinkney

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 19:41, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • This one might be a good DYK for International Women's Day (March 8). Kaldari (talk) 23:12, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, but after it is reviewed and approved. Thanks! Kaldari (talk) 02:38, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Date, length, hook ref all verified. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 19:41, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Despina Storch

Despina Storch portrait

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 21:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Any chance you guys would want to hold this one for International Women's Day (March 8)? There's a holding space for the date in the special occasions section below. Kaldari (talk) 23:06, 20 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Moved to March 8 holding area. Yoninah (talk) 20:05, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lorene Cary

2006 portrait of Lorene Cary, showing her in profile

Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 04:38, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length and the hook check out. Good to go.--Mbz1 (talk) 04:59, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I believe that this article could make a great hook for the March 8 International Women's Day. May it please be moved there? Thanks.--Mbz1 (talk) 05:55, 22 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • With thanks to Mbz1, I've added an image. Drmies (talk) 22:03, 23 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

June 19

Rizal Day

A stone pylon with two gold stars at the sides, below of which are inscribed "A Jose Rizal".

Created/expanded by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 05:42, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Request: I suggest this appear either on June 19 (Rizal's birth), December 30 (Rizal's execution) or any date from June 15-24 (Daet's Pineapple Festival). –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 05:46, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Size and date are fine. However, the hook is unreferenced. There is a reference at the end of a paragraph containing the hook, several sentences in - this is unsatisfactory. Ideally, each sentence should be referenced; at the very least - the hook one should be. The problem is fixable, and once this is solved the article should be a "go" for DYKing. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 05:54, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't see why. On the other hand, in the case only a para has a ref, it is impossible to trust anything but the last sentence. Consider what will happen when somebody adds more content to the middle, or moves the current one around. I don't think an article with any unreferenced sentence can become a FA, and GA and DYKs require them for most sentences those days, too. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 07:07, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • You see, that only works if each sentence has a different reference than the previous one (such as FAs and some GAs). If I'd be reusing those two references on every sentence, it's repetitive and unsightly. Where's the DYK rule that every sentence has to be cited? The only relevant rule is rule D2 and it doesn't mention citing every sentence, especially if the entire paragraph is referenced on that/those reference/s.–HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 07:30, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Just for the heck of it, I did just that, citing every sentence in the first section, and it now looks unsightly with those repetitive [1][2] after every sentence. I know we should be citing and stuff, but this is not the way to do it if there are only a few references. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 07:35, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Halloween

Rhacophorus vampyrus

  • ... that the tadpole of the Vampire flying frog Rhacophorus vampyrus has two fang-like hooks in its mouth?

Created by Newone (talk), Ka Faraq Gatri (talk). Nominated by Ka Faraq Gatri (talk) at 14:59, 9 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment If the article meets DYK criteria, suggest moving it to Special Occasions section and keeping for Halloween. The authors of the paper on which this article is substantially based have stated that they intend to publish a separate paper on the tadpoles of this species so the move would also allow time for any material from this paper (assuming it is published in time) to be incorporated. Ka Faraq Gatri (talk) 16:56, 9 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • That's confirmed. I agree that this should be kept for Halloween, especially as "A detailed description of the new tadpole will be published separately." which might be available by October. It's certainly an early start for the Halloween collection, does anyone think it is a problem to save it until then? SmartSE (talk) 23:41, 10 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
SUPPORT waiting till Halloween, esp. if we can get a good, free picture of the scary tadpoles. --PFHLai (talk) 04:06, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I've moved this as there were no objections. If someone wants to make a subpage for it, like we have for April Fools' nominations then feel free. SmartSE (talk) 12:46, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Halloween is just under 10 months away. I can't help thinking that if every vaguely ghoulish or spooky article is saved up that long, it will create a massive backlog (and a precedent for other days). After all, there are only 3-4 sessions of 6 or 7 hooks available for any particular day. Bob talk 22:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

See also