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Restored this deleted section. Referees said "move ALT2 to April 1 (done), promote ALT1a (not done)". Cheers. [[User:Materialscientist|Materialscientist]] ([[User talk:Materialscientist|talk]]) 23:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC) |
Restored this deleted section. Referees said "move ALT2 to April 1 (done), promote ALT1a (not done)". Cheers. [[User:Materialscientist|Materialscientist]] ([[User talk:Materialscientist|talk]]) 23:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC) |
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::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px|link=]] All checks out. --[[User:Trust Is All You Need|TIAYN]] ([[User talk:Trust Is All You Need|talk]]) 8:51 am, 14 February 2011, Monday (12 days ago) (UTC−5) |
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:[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px|link=]] Returned from Prep 4 per concerns on DYK discussion page. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 6:58 am, 23 February 2011, last Wednesday (3 days ago) (UTC−5) |
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::I'm tackling the issues right now. I forgot to reply here on this but I had to wait until the weekend until I could find some actual time to improve this article. [[User:Ktr101|Kevin Rutherford]] ([[User_talk:Ktr101|talk]]) 23:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC) |
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Articles created/expanded on February 12
Batman River
- ... that the air base of Batman was used for rescue operations during the Gulf War?[1]
- Comment: ALT1 ... that the largest oil field in Turkey lies in the Batman Province, near the Batman River? [2]
We've got 4 expanded Batman articles (city, province, river and oil field). They could be squeezed into one hook, but it would be ugly, thus maybe 2-3 hoooks. Please suggest other alts (articles can be shuffled between various hook combinations). Maybe its better to drop the river from ALT1. The "near" part can be verified using this map and Google maps - it is just some 6 km away. Materialscientist (talk) 10:10, 12 February 2011 (UTC) Created/expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 10:10, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
- Some possible April Fools' Day hooks. 2 is for the province, 3 is the river, and 4 is the city. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 18:59, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Batman is half female?
- ALT3 ...
that Batman killed 11 people in 2006?
- Thanks and sorry - the source is unclear whether it was Batman or its tributary or both. Materialscientist (talk) 00:27, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT4 ... that Batman was in Terminator 3: Rise of the Machines?
- The source for ALT4 is a bit shaky (IMDB). Reviewed Lauritz Weidemann. Materialscientist (talk) 12:17, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- Alt5... may be something like Batman helped save people during the Gulf War? Victuallers (talk) 13:06, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- 1st April is a possibility, but there are 4 articles in here, only some can go there. Materialscientist (talk) 13:12, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- What is the fourth article? Can you propose a hook with all four. I think that would be best. I like ALT1 above and encourage a similar 4 in 1.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:58, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- Batman Province, capital, river and oil field (look at the credits inside this section). I don't think piling them up (.. that a field lies near the city and river, in the Batman province, and is the largest in Turkey) would work. Materialscientist (talk) 22:43, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- It could work depending on the hook. However, I don't see an individual hook for the article this nomination was originally intended to promote.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:11, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- See top two hooks. The rest is not mine. Materialscientist (talk) 22:45, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- It should probably be decided pretty soon if an April Fools' hook should be used and if so, which one. I assume only one would be used. Then hook(s) can be determined for the remaining articles. Here's one more possibility, for the river.... MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 03:55, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT6 ... that Batman's previous identity was Nymphius?
- See top two hooks. The rest is not mine. Materialscientist (talk) 22:45, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- It could work depending on the hook. However, I don't see an individual hook for the article this nomination was originally intended to promote.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:11, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- Batman Province, capital, river and oil field (look at the credits inside this section). I don't think piling them up (.. that a field lies near the city and river, in the Batman province, and is the largest in Turkey) would work. Materialscientist (talk) 22:43, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
I like ALT1. Batı Raman oil field, Batman Province, and Batman River all are valid 5x expansions. I have been thumbing through various refs and do not see a ref saying the oil field is in the Province or near the River although I see refs saying it is in Southeast Turkey.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:37, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. There is also the city. For location see the map on the second page of this pdf (linked above). It shows the field near the city, unfortunately without a length scale, but the distance is few km as can be verified with Google maps (also linked above, it also shows that the Batman River flows outside the city, but this can be verified through some refs too). Materialscientist (talk) 05:03, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1 (revised) ... that the largest oil field in Turkey lies in the Batman Province, near the Batman River as well as Batman, Turkey?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:41, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- If you are looking for credit for the city, the ALT 1 (revised) would be the proper form. So I will consider that. However, regarding the issue at hand. You need to point me to references used in the article that support the claim made in the hook. Each article will need to include a reference establishing its validity in the hook. Don't just present links. Adjust the articles as necessary or present another hook for review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:41, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Batman, Turkey is also a valid 5x expansion.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:49, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- I am looking not for credit, but for an interesting hook. My thought was to have two: 1 quirky with Batman city and another more plain with 3 other articles. I am not happy with ALT1a because it squeezes too much into one hook - I would rather abandon some articles but make it better. I have not seen any objection against my top two hooks; both are referenced, above and in the article(s). I am open to quirky April 1 suggestions, like ALT5 and would welcome some help with this stuck nom. Materialscientist (talk) 04:53, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Transmission electron microscopy DNA sequencing. Materialscientist (talk) 11:51, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT for April Fool's "... that the Batman is dammed? Clarityfiend (talk) 23:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I continue to feel that the sourcing for the location within the article is unclear. The sources say it is in the Southeastern Anatolia Region, but we have no source saying it is in Batman or the Batman Province is in the region. P.S. ALT1 (revised) could be altered to remove any indivual hook you want to use separately.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:11, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- I believe you were looking at the first paragraph of Batı Raman oil field whereas the location is (and was) described and referenced in the second. I've added river there for completeness. Materialscientist (talk) 03:25, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- I continue to feel that the sourcing for the location within the article is unclear. The sources say it is in the Southeastern Anatolia Region, but we have no source saying it is in Batman or the Batman Province is in the region. P.S. ALT1 (revised) could be altered to remove any indivual hook you want to use separately.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:11, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT for April Fool's "... that the Batman is dammed? Clarityfiend (talk) 23:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Batman, Turkey is also a valid 5x expansion.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:49, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Ok guys. Promoting this is way overdue. If no useable hook is found in the next day, it's time to pass on this one.4meter4 (talk) 12:57, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- There is no reason not to promote this. All the issues raised are either really non-issues or have now been addressed. I support moving Alt-2 to April Fools (excellent hook) and reworking Alt-1 to omit that article.
- Alt1a (2nd revision) ... that the largest oil field in Turkey lies near Batman, Turkey and the Batman River?
- SpinningSpark 17:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- There we go. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:20, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Restored this deleted section. Referees said "move ALT2 to April 1 (done), promote ALT1a (not done)". Cheers. Materialscientist (talk) 23:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 14
Pleasure Dissociative Orgasmic Disorder
- ... that people who suffer from Pleasure Dissociative Orgasmic Disorder are unable to feel pleasure from an orgasm?
- Reviewed: Battle of Quebec (ice hockey)
Created by Ktr101 (talk). Self nom at 10:14 pm, 13 February 2011, Sunday (13 days ago) (UTC−5)
- Returned from Prep 4 per concerns on DYK discussion page. - Dravecky (talk) 6:58 am, 23 February 2011, last Wednesday (3 days ago) (UTC−5)
- I'm tackling the issues right now. I forgot to reply here on this but I had to wait until the weekend until I could find some actual time to improve this article. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 23:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 17
Oprahization
- ... that politicians discuss the ways in which they and their families have suffered because of Oprahization?
Created by Cryptic C62 (talk). Self nom at 03:12, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
- I reviewed the nomination for Don Charles. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 03:12, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 18
List of people who adopted matronymic surnames
- ... that Marilyn Monroe, Dr. Seuss, Elvis Costello, and Prince Philip all adopted matronymic surnames?
- Comment: was created the day before the 5x expansion;
currently athas survived AfD and is now ready for consideration here.
- Comment: was created the day before the 5x expansion;
5x expanded by Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk), Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk), Orlady (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 05:00, 25 February 2011 (UTC) Reviewed Black Society for Salvation; diff=[3] --Orlady (talk) 05:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Gary J. Aguirre
- ... that Gary Aguirre was fired from the SEC for trying to do his job?
- ALT1:... that Gary Aguirre, who predicted the 2008 financial crisis, was fired from the SEC?
- ALT2:... that former SEC investigator Gary Aguirre says the SEC has gone from protecting the public from Wall Street to protecting Wall Street from the public?
Created by Marrante (talk). Self nom at 16:23, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Arthur Cheetham and Cinema of Wales —Marrante (talk) 17:04, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
- full of insight! I prefer ALT1, the first hook requesting to understand SEC without context, ALT2 a bit too complex (extra comma removed). --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:56, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
- Comment: I would like to put a hold on this article going on the main page. The article involves a few legal points that need to be stated precisely. At the time I submitted the nomination, I was not aware that I had made some factual errors, which I am in the process of correcting, but have not yet finished. I will probably need a few days yet. Though I know sometimes articles sit here for days before they're moved to the queue, it would be great if I didn't have to worry about it moving to the main page before these changes are made. Thanks in advance. Marrante (talk) 21:35, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
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- It should be easy to re-create it. To find out what happened, please see User talk:Marrante. --PFHLai (talk) 04:29, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- The article is restored but I think we should respect the hold of the author. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:27, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- It should be easy to re-create it. To find out what happened, please see User talk:Marrante. --PFHLai (talk) 04:29, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
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I'm still checking the factual accuracy of this article and hope to have some idea tomorrow (Saturday, Feb 26) as to its suitability for the main page. In the meantime, here are two more alt hooks to consider.
- ALT3:... that Gary Aguirre, who predicted the 2008 financial crisis, was fired from the the very agency set up by the U.S. Congress to prevent such things?
- ALT4:... that Gary Aguirre was fired by the SEC while investigating a large hedge fund for insider trading, found the evidence after he was fired, and had to force the SEC to file charges in the case?
- — Marrante (talk) 13:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT5:... that Gary Aguirre, who predicted the 2008 financial crisis, was fired from the SEC, the agency set up by the U.S. Congress to prevent such things? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:44, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 19
Anne Sharp
- ... that Scottish coloratura soprano Anne Sharp performed in Britten's Albert Herring in both the premiere in 1948 and the first recording?
Created/expanded by Morag Kerr (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 11:05, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Date, length OK. However, some paragraphs lack inline citations. I also don't see the hook fact stated explicitly in the text, though that may be because I don't understand the terminology. I wonder what you think of this alt:
- ALT1: ... that even in her thirties, Scottish coloratura soprano Anne Sharp was able to pass as a teenager, performing the role of Emmie Spatchett in Albert Herring at the first Aldeburgh Festival? Yoninah (talk) 17:03, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Like it, thank you. I had looked for an online ref and found it for the recording, which refers to the premiere, but the ALT is supported by the pic, smile. It's the author's first article, as far as I know, let's try to help. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:50, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Well, only now I realize something happened to the pic, removed "pictured". You saw it, though, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:56, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Yesterday the image was removed from the article, so I removed it here. Glad you like the alt. However, the article still lacks inline citations on some paragraphs. Yoninah (talk) 10:05, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- To clarify (I didn't make this nomination, but fine), Anne Sharp played the smaller part of Cis in Albert Herring in the premiere, but switched to playing Emmie after only a few performances. She is Emmie in the recording. So it is correct to say she was in both the premiere and the recording (which was a live recording of a performance), but she had different roles. That recording has most of the original cast in it. Morag Kerr (talk) 14:52, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
About the photo. I do not understand why it was deleted. It is a photo which appeared in opera programmes - the little biographies of the cast they have at the back, which are accompanied by photos. I'm not even sure it's "non-free content", but I was trying to be as correct as possible by crediting the photographer. Morag Kerr (talk) 14:52, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 20
Harry Marks
- ... that Harry Marks (pictured), whose Financial News crusaded against fraudulent stock market schemes, was himself widely implicated in dubious share promotions?
- Reviewed: The Satirist
Created/expanded by Shimgray (talk). Self nom at 02:03, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
National Screen Institute
- ... that when first founded, the Canadian National Screen Institute originally functioned as part of the University of Alberta in Edmonton?
Created by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 02:42, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- I reviewed Malus baccata [4]. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 06:54, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Date, length OK. However, with all its references, the article really doesn't show notability, just the fact that it exists. The page also reads like a brochure for the university and its programs. Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks... but this is DYK and not AFD. The National Screen Institute is a government-affiliated non-profit organization. The applicable guideline for such a boring topic begins with ""An organization is generally considered notable if it has been the subject of significant coverage in reliable, independent secondary sources." So this non-profit organization has its "notability" found through the numerous secondary independent sources that have addressed this organization and its programs directly and in boring detail for nearly 26 years. A succinct stub would need only state "This organization was founded to assist Canadian filmmakers"... but that one sentence is pretty useless in increasing a reader's understanding of the topic... and I was careful to avoid all hype and describe as boringly and dryly as possible, the programs it uses to assist filmmakers. What "more exciting hook" might you come up with yourself for a boring NPO? Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 04:17, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I reviewed Malus baccata [4]. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 06:54, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Grammy Award for Best Americana Album
- ... that American multi-instrumentalist Levon Helm won the first Grammy Award for Best Americana Album in 2010 for the album Electric Dirt?
Created by Another Believer (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- The article falls very slightly short of the 1500 character requirement (I don't think the footnote can be counted as "readable prose").
decltype
(talk) 14:06, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Hmm, I must not understand the character count tool then, as I generated a count of 2,000 characters for the lead alone. --Another Believer (Talk) 21:36, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Ahh, I don't know which tool you are using, but the discrepancy probably arises from the pull quote. To the best of my knowledge, those do not count as readable prose for the purposes of DYK. Could the article possibly be expanded a little bit?
decltype
(talk) 13:46, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Ahh, I don't know which tool you are using, but the discrepancy probably arises from the pull quote. To the best of my knowledge, those do not count as readable prose for the purposes of DYK. Could the article possibly be expanded a little bit?
- The article falls very slightly short of the 1500 character requirement (I don't think the footnote can be counted as "readable prose").
Rhodri Giggs
- ... that Rhodri Giggs won the Mossley F.C. Player of the Year award in 2005?
Created by 03md (talk). Self nom at 08:40, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- I wanted to keep the hook as R. Giggs to make the hook interesting (initial glance would indicate Ryan Giggs). 03md 18:50, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
I'd be more interested if you said that "Rhodri Giggs is the younger brother of Ryan Giggs!♦ Dr. Blofeld 22:09, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
Lament of Edward II
- ... that the Anglo-Norman Lament of Edward II, written c 1327, is the only surviving poem by Edward II of England?
- Reviewed: Ficus yoponensis
Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 23:55, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- You cite
threefourfive! sources that contradict or question its authorship (Giancarlo says it is "supposedly" by him and refers to the poet as "Edward" in scare quotes, hardly a ringing endorsement), and only one that says it is by Edward - and that source happens to be its publisher. Could you add more citations to say that it is by him? You also need a cite for your hook statement, ie. "No other poems of Edward survive." These problems need to be fixed before it can be suitable for the main page. Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 05:56, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- Really much of the long note discussing sources could be in the text, and if necessary the "only surviving" dropped.
- You cite
- ALT1: ... that the Anglo-Norman Lament of Edward II, written c 1327, is traditionally credited to Edward II of England? Johnbod (talk) 21:01, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Current nominations
Articles created/expanded on February 21
Highweek
- ... that the parishioners of Highweek petitioned the pope for their own graveyard?
Created by Wikwiltz (talk). Nominated by Smalljim (talk) at 16:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: the Minuscule one directly below.
- Comment: I know there's an AfD on the article, but it'll surely be kept. There's an online ref for the hook at Google books, bottom of p 60 and top of next page. —SMALLJIM 17:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- The article mentions Pope Martin V but does not say that the villagers petitioned him. If that is fixed, shouldn't this hook link to Pope Martin V, and shouldn't the hook tell the reader where Highweek is in general? Binksternet (talk) 19:40, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the quick response - I've reworded the relevant section of the article and changed "villagers" to "parishioners" in the hook. As for linking the pope and saying where Highweek is, I think it's better not to give too much away: less is more - WP:DYKHN H7. —SMALLJIM 22:05, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Minuscule 831, Minuscule 1076, Minuscule 1078, Minuscule 1356
- ... that Minuscule 831, 1076, 1078, and 1356 have the Pericope Adulterae at the end of the Gospel of John?
- Reviewed: Swan's Landing Archeological Site
Created by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 23:23, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Isn't this a bit lacking in "hookiness"? I've checked the first article for size and date - OK. I'd have to take the sourcing on good faith: the reference, although online, is in German shorthand. Why not go all out for obscurity and have something like:
ALT1 ... that the lacunose Minuscule 831 has the Pericope Adulterae at the end of John? —SMALLJIM 17:03, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Isn't this a bit lacking in "hookiness"? I've checked the first article for size and date - OK. I'd have to take the sourcing on good faith: the reference, although online, is in German shorthand. Why not go all out for obscurity and have something like:
While Europe Slept: How Radical Islam is Destroying the West from Within (book)
- ... that Bruce Bawer's While Europe Slept: How Radical Islam is Destroying the West from Within has been described both as a "well written and well informed" and one that uses "wildly exaggerated statistics"?
- Reviewed: Lorene Cary
- Comment: Although the edit history looks like the article was created on March 5, it is not the case. The article was created on February 22, 2011 The history is misleading because the article was moved from my user space with the old history of absolutely different article I wrote there.
Created by Mbz1 (talk) and Ironholds (talk). Self nom at 07:11, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Comment According to the article's history, you started working on it on February 21. User:Ironholds deleted the older revisions of your user subpage and subsequently restored your recent work. Is that right? --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 12:27, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, but I worked on it in my user space. It was moved to the main space on February 22, and it is considered the day of the creation of the article.--Mbz1 (talk) 13:33, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- I see. Ironholds deleted the article after you moved it to the main space, and he restored 44 revisions going back to February 21 (the beginning of your work on this topic). Both the dates are OK for the DYK requirements and your nomination can be simply moved to February 21. Is the date (February 22) important for you? Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 14:04, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, but I worked on it in my user space. It was moved to the main space on February 22, and it is considered the day of the creation of the article.--Mbz1 (talk) 13:33, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Comment According to the article's history, you started working on it on February 21. User:Ironholds deleted the older revisions of your user subpage and subsequently restored your recent work. Is that right? --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 12:27, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Actually Ironholds by my request moved the article from my user space to main space after he did some work on it in my user space. The date (February 22) is very important for me for personal reasons, but of course this importance has nothing to do with DYK nomination, and that's why I will move the nomination to February 21 as you requested. Thanks.--Mbz1 (talk) 16:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- In any case, it is a good, balanced and well written piece of information and a very interesting article. I checked both the reviews cited in the hook, the online version of the article published by the Economist is available here. Thanks for your work, Mbz. --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 16:53, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Sorry, but I think this one needs some work. The "critical reception" section is all over the shop and needs a cleanup. The "Summary" section is also not much of a summary. On topics as sensitive as this, we need to get things right. Gatoclass (talk) 16:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- What exactly do you suggest to change? I think the article presents various contrasting opinions and reviews regarding this sensitive topic/book. It is a new work and it isn't perfect, but I can't find any significant bias or imbalance in the article. --Vejvančický (talk | contribs) 21:57, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Sorry, but I think this one needs some work. The "critical reception" section is all over the shop and needs a cleanup. The "Summary" section is also not much of a summary. On topics as sensitive as this, we need to get things right. Gatoclass (talk) 16:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Just looking at one source, the Boston Globe review as currently treated in the article seems to be mis-represented; the quote used is the reviewer's summary of Part I of the book. The reviewer discusses Part II separately and with much stronger criticism. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 23:58, 24 February 2011 (UTC) Now expanded to cover this. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 00:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I'm currently working on this article. I will leave a note here when I'm done. Gatoclass (talk) 04:51, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Tibouren
- ... that ampelographer Pierre Galet suspects that the Provence wine grape Tibouren was likely introduced to Marseilles by the Ancient Greeks, but could also be Middle Eastern in origin?
- Reviewed: Edward L. Kessel
- Comment: Primary refs are Jancis Robinson's grape guides (FN#1 and #3) but online Wine Pros link (FN#3) can assist with some verification.
5x expanded by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 06:55, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Gary Albright Memorial Show
- ... that Japanese wrestler Maunakea Mossman (pictured) made his wrestling debut in the United States at the Gary Albright Memorial Show in 2000?
Created by 72.74.226.25 (talk). Self nom at 21:55, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Yokozuna Memorial Show
- ... that The Headshrinkers, who had last wrestled in the World Wrestling Federation in 1994, were reunited at the Yokozuna Memorial Show in 2001?
Created by 72.74.226.25 (talk). Self nom at 21:55, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
The Mouse Problem
- ... that the Monty Python sketch "The Mouse Problem", a mockumentary about men who want to be mice, parodies 1960s television exposés on homosexuality?
- ALT1:... that the Monty Python sketch "The Mouse Problem", broadcast in 1969, is considered to have prefigured furry fandom?
- Reviewed: Lament of Edward II
Created by Roscelese (talk). Self nom at 06:03, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- That is a brilliant sketch, but the main chunk of the text is currently an unreferenced plot, without which there is not much content. Is there anything else you can add? SmartSE (talk) 14:29, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- I could just cite the plot to the text of the sketch, which is linked - would that be good? (Though per Wikipedia:When to cite, it is generally presumed that the fictional work itself is the source.) Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 21:25, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Isn't that link problematic as a non-sanctioned transcript of the copyrighted material (WP:COPYLINK)? - Brianhe (talk) 22:24, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Suillus salmonicolor, Partial veil
An orange mushroom lying on its side among small green plants
- ... that Suillus salmonicolor, an edible mushroom, is thought to taste like lemons?
Created by Sasata (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 04:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that slippery Jills have a lemony flavor?
- The alt seems "hookier" to me, but would probably get more views without a picture. Sasata (talk) 05:56, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that it has not been determined whether the slippery Jill is different from another mushroom? -- Rcej (Robert) - talk 09:42, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Avielochan. Sasata (talk) 06:07, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- I like ALT1 but are you sure the lemon taste is correct? You've referenced an offline book which I would normally be fine with, but I tried to see if there were any less reliable sources for it but couldn't find anything. There are plenty saying it is lemon coloured, but nothing about taste AFAICT. mushroom expert says that it has no distinct taste. Do Bessette et al. cite anyone else for this, or is it their own observation? SmartSE (talk) 10:54, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- I wouldn't go so far as to say they taste like lemons, but they are reported as "edible and very good, with a lemony flavor ..." (North American Boletes, 2001, p. 251). They do not cite a source for this (I'm pretty sure it's their own observation). The book is about as reliable a source as one can find about North American bolete species. Howz about this for a short, hooky alternative, avoiding the taste issue altogether: Sasata (talk) 15:41, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that slippery Jills wear a baggy veil?
- If you like this last one I could expand the veil article 5x to make it a double. Sasata (talk) 15:43, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- I think it's best to avoid the taste if it seems doubtful, so therefore, in the words of Kurtis Blow "Just do it, just do it, just do it, do it, do it!" I think there needs to be an s in there somewhere though - either "Jills" or "wears". SmartSE (talk) 09:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Added s. Please check back in a day and I'll have the second article ready. Thanks! Sasata (talk) 13:52, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Partial veil has now been expanded from 653 to 3831 bytes (=5.9X). Sasata (talk) 19:07, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 22
Maya city
- ... that the earliest known Maya city in the Maya lowlands of Mesoamerica dates to around 750 BC?
Created by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 20:37, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Ashford Black Marble
- All criteria appear to have been met. Strikerforce (talk) 21:34, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
ProtectMarriage.com
- ... that the Yes on Proposition 8 campaign was "the single largest, most powerful grassroots movement in the history of American ballot initiative campaigns" according to Ron Prentice of ProtectMarriage.com?
Created by Lionelt (talk). Self nom at 19:54, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed George C. Kimble Lionel (talk) 19:55, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Shapeshifting (album)
- ... that Young Galaxy and producer Dan Lissvik of Studio collaborated across the Atlantic using Skype to produce their new album Shapeshifting?
- Reviewed: Garden of Earthly Delights (film)[5]
Created by The Interior (talk). Self nom at 10:40, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Can you please fix ref 2. It's pointing to a page of Google hits and I can't find the Alex Hudson article (November 11, 2010) on Exclaim.ca. —Bruce1eetalk 13:55, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. The Interior (Talk) 19:53, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
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- With quoted text removed (as it is supposed to be), this article has less than 1500 characters of prose.4meter4 (talk) 13:34, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- "A2: The prose portion of the article, which must be 1500 characters, excludes (in addition to categories listed in the rules) block quotes."(my bold) Quotes within paragraphs are usually considered part of the prose, I believe. I know this is short, but it's a new album without many reviews yet. I was careful to get over the 1500 limit. The Interior (Talk) 16:08, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- With quoted text removed (as it is supposed to be), this article has less than 1500 characters of prose.4meter4 (talk) 13:34, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Heinrich-Heine-Straße (Berlin U-Bahn)
- ... that the Heinrich-Heine-Straße U-Bahn station in Berlin is landmarked because its years as a ghost station preserved it almost unchanged?
- ALT1:... that the unusual narrowness of the Neanderstraße meant that Berlin U-Bahn stations built under it in the 1920s, such as Heinrich-Heine-Straße, were the first to have entrances built into buildings?
5x expanded by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 22:27, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- I reviewed Richard Watson (singer): diff --Yngvadottir (talk) 18:49, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
John M. Bacon
- ... that after a skirmish with the Pillager Band of Chippewa Indians at the Battle of Sugar Point (1898), Brig. gen. John M. Bacon was reported killed, with a hundred of his men?
Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 22:08, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- I'll review something later today, or maybe tomorrow. If approved, I'd like this held for Bacon Day, 1 March--bacon keeps very well. Also, if any of you (Bushranger, maybe?) who write regularly on military matters can have a look at the article--I'm not familiar with military topics and can use all the help I can get. Thanks in advance, Drmies (talk) 22:10, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
N. D. Cocea
- ... that N. D. Cocea's republican activism in the Kingdom of Romania involved fabricating rumors about a peasant revolt, supporting Soviet Russia, and being tried for lèse majesté?
- Reviewed: Courts of Jersey
Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 12:36, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Tell Ghoraifé
- ... that finds at the prehistoric Neolithic Tell Ghoraifé, located 22 kilometres (14 mi) east of Damascus, Syria, show the evolution that took place over a millenia, from wild to domesticated barley?
Created by Paul Bedson (talk), Zozo2kx (talk). Self nom at 09:31, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: HMS Grenade (H86) ([6])
Charles Dvorak
- ... that Charles Dvorak (pictured) missed the pole vault finals at the 1900 Olympics after being told the event was postponed, but returned to win the gold medal at the 1904 Olympics?
5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 03:57, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Mothers' Bus
- ... that during the takeover of the hijacked Mothers' Bus by the Yamam, the hijackers killed two mothers, of two and four children, giving the incident its name?
Created by Tzu Zha Men (talk). Self nom at 23:14, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- -Length, date verified. Added source.Smallman12q (talk) 15:10, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Abd al-Samad
- ... that 16th-century Mughal miniature painter and director of Akbar's imperial workshop, Abd al-Samad, may have been the same person as Persian miniature artist Mirza Ali (example pictured)?
5x expanded by Johnbod (talk). Self nom at 20:38, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Reviewed: All Saints Church, Newton Green
UAAP Season 51 men's basketball tournament
- ... that a gun was fired during a melee on an 1987 basketball game between Ateneo de Manila University and the University of the Philippines?
- Comment: Question: I've submitted four suggestions this week. How many suggestions should I review?
Created by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 18:02, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Answer: since, according to your user page, you've created/expanded 48 DYKs, you are not a "new nominator", and are required to review one entry for each one of your own, i.e. 4 in total. GregorB (talk) 20:02, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Boohoo. LOL. OK, 4 it is. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 06:10, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- It turns out I'll only need to review three as my earlier nominated went to the queue w/o a accompanying review. Anyway, I reviewed Island of Peace massacre. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 13:45, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Note: I'm willing to review a fourth article to correct the mistake. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 13:45, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
All Saints Church, Newton Green
- ... that All Saints Church, Newton Green, (pictured) in Suffolk has been divided at the chancel arch, the chancel being used for worship, while the rest of the church is redundant?
- Reviewed: Pulney Andy
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 16:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Creal Reef Light
- ... that Creal Reef, Queensland, the location of Creal Reef Light, was named by the captain of the HMAS Moresby after a pilot of the No. 101 Flight RAAF who assisted the Moresby with her surveys?
- Reviewed: Walter Coy ([7])
Created by Muhandes (talk). Self nom at 15:09, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Length, history and hook all check out. Maybe put the word "1920s" in there somewhere to add historical context? Philg 88talk 07:16, Saturday, June 15, 2024 (UTC)
- I wanted to, but I have a length problem. ALT1 below is 205 chars, if the editor moving this to the queue thinks it's better
- ALT1 ... that Creal Reef, Queensland, the location of Creal Reef Light, was named in the 1920s by the captain of the HMAS Moresby, after a pilot of the No. 101 Flight RAAF who assisted the Moresby with her surveys?
--Muhandes (talk) 22:33, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Even shorter:
- ALT2: ... that Creal Reef, Queensland, site of Creal Reef Light, was named in the 1920s by the captain of the HMAS Moresby, after an Australian air force pilot who assisted the Moresby with her surveys? Yoninah (talk) 20:50, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Robert Morison
... that in 1672 Scottish soldier turned botanist Robert Morison was the first person to describe a specific group of plants, the Umbelliferae, thereby establishing the basis for all later systems of plant classification?
5x expanded by Philg88 (talk). Self nom at 09:30, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
ALT1 (shorter) ... that in 1672 Scottish botanist Robert Morison was the first person to describe a specific group of plants, the Umbelliferae, thereby establishing the basis for all later plant classification?
- Reviewed Benjamin Burns Diff
- I'm not sure this hook (or the article) really captures the meaning in the reference. It states that Morrison's work on Umbelliferae "was the first monograph of a definite group of plants, and is remarkable for the sense of relationship between the genera that inspires it". I get quite a different impression from "the first person to describe a specific group of plants". In botanical language, to describe a taxon is quite different from monographing it. I would suggest changing both to quoting the citation directly, and state that 'Morrison produced the "first monograph of a definite group of plants"'. --Stemonitis (talk) 06:48, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for the suggestion.
ALT2 ... that in 1672 Scottish botanist Robert Morison wrote "the first monograph of a specific group of plants", covering the Umbelliferae, thereby establishing the basis for all later plant classification?
- Sorry to be a pain about this, but do you have a page number for the second part, that it established the basis for all later plant classification? It is not directly cited, and your Linnaeus quote seems to contradict it, in that "Morison ... revived system which was half expiring" and "All that is good in Morison is taken from Cesalpino", suggesting that Morrison's role was not so great. Is it perhaps enough to state that:
- ALT3 ... that in 1672, the Scottish botanist Robert Morison wrote the "first monograph of a specific group of plants", the Umbelliferae?
- That would be backed up by the reference. (I'm assuming these changes will be carried across to the article.) --Stemonitis (talk) 07:27, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- No pain at all - it should follow the rules. To add a bit more zest can I propose:
- ALT4 ... that in 1672, the Scottish botanist Robert Morison was the first person ever to write a "monograph of a specific group of plants", the Umbelliferae?
- Yes. Date OK, expansion verified, hook confirmed. ALT3 and ALT4 are both acceptable; I've struck the others out. --Stemonitis (talk) 16:32, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Employees' State Insurance
- ... that the Employees' State Insurance scheme provides social security and health insurance to over 50 million Indians?
- Reviewed St Augustine's Church, Norwich, diff
- Created by Longhairandabeard (talk). Self nom at 15:58, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- The hook is a really good one, the article is well-informing and the prose is fine. As for the references they are fine, just: this [8] (ref. nr.3) clearly mentions "over 5 crore", so the hook is just OK, but the other one [9] needs the page number. The same goes to ref. nr. 1 which needs the page number, though its first footnote citing the establishment's year 1948 can be easily noted as it's in the very beginning of the document. The rest is just fine. I just advise to better create a lead article and then divide the content into sections as per WP:LAYOUT (the references' information is abundant) but this could be a future task, for DYK is OK with just this references query complied. Empathictrust (talk) 15:12, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Page numbers now included in inline refs. The plan is to have a full-fledged article in the next one month or so.. There is enough material available to write a book on the subject, I'll just try for FA :-) -- Longhairandabeard (talk) 10:02, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Maersk Triple E class
- ... that Maersk Line's Triple E Class are expected to be the largest ships in the world when they enter service?
- ALT1:... that the first ten ships of Maersk Line's new Triple E Class cost US$1.9 billion?
- Reviewed Eduardo Iturrizaga: diff. This is my first DYK, so be gentle with me :-) bobrayner (talk) 13:21, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Created by Bobrayner (talk). Self nom at 11:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC).
- Wow! Date and size check out. The first hook is fine, though I've adjusted the article slightly for clarity. The ALT should say something like "will cost...", because it won't (all) have been paid yet. I note too that the Economist article quotes the cost as $1.8 billion, but what's $100 million between friends? No preference as to which hook is the better. —SMALLJIM 19:39, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Between currency-exchange issues, rounding by newspaper editors, minor little bits of the contract &c, there's plenty of room for variation in the headline cost of a complex product that hasn't been built yet. Ditto for the tech specs; different sources give slightly different numbers in some cases. Hence a non-numeric hook may be better. bobrayner (talk) 20:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 23
Colin Hatch
- ... that convicted murderer Colin Hatch on 22 February 2011 died in an incident at Full Sutton prison in the East Riding of Yorkshire?
--BabbaQ (talk) 22:39, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Ashford Black Marble
- .
.. that unworked blocks of Ashford Black Marble that made pictures (see example) were found behind a pub in Derby?
Created by Parkywiki (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 17:42, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- (alt)... that Derby Museum has a diagram of Ecton Hill (see picture) made from Ashford Black Marble and other minerals?
- Size and date OK. ALT hook verified. Main hook: neither the article nor its reference mention that the blocks found behind the pub formed pictures. Simon Burchell (talk) 20:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Fine - obviously I meant that you made pictures out of marble that these blocks were made of, not that the blocks made pictures. Ive struck out the main one for speed as I prefer the alt anyway Victuallers (talk) 21:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- In that case, all OK! Simon Burchell (talk) 22:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Cryptantha crassipes
- ... that the rare borage Terlingua Creek cat's-eye grows only on gypsum-rich limestone near Big Bend National Park in Texas?
Created by IceCreamAntisocial (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 16:07, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Crotalaria avonensis
- ... that after the rare legume Crotalaria avonensis was first collected in 1950, it took 39 more years to become recognized as a distinct species and named?
Created by IceCreamAntisocial (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 21:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Stielgranate 41
- ... that Wehrmacht used "stick grenades" for their PaK-36 anti-tank guns??
Created by Felis domestica (talk). Self nom at 15:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Bicycle helmet laws
- ... that thirteen U.S. states have no state or local bicycle helmet laws at all?
Created by Suzanne10 (talk). Nominated by Mike Christie (talk) at 02:24, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
I haven't reviewed another nom as I haven't nominated five DYKs; I may review one later but wanted to get this nom in first. Mike Christie (talk – library) 02:24, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Not to worry -- that requirement is only for people who nominate their own articles. It doesn't apply to nominations of other people's articles. :-) --Orlady (talk) 03:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Regarding the nominated article, the article looks like a fine contribution, but it sports a "globalize" template right now, and in reviewing the article I had some other concerns.
- Starting with the lead, I think the statement "The majority of states in the U.S. have laws requiring children under the age of sixteen to wear helmets" is inaccurate, since the article indicates that fewer than half of the states have such laws, although there are local laws in some of the states. That should be revised to state that (for example) 22 U.S. states have these laws and some municipalities and counties in other states also have them.
- Another editor has fixed this. Mike Christie (talk – library) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Excellent phrasing, now used. Thanks! NebY (talk) 15:27, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- I think that the article has too many direct quotations when the quoted content is simply a statement of a fact. For example, it should be able to present the hook fact without surrounding it with quotation marks.
- I've slightly rephrased that sentence though much of it is a list so can't really be rephrased. I have proposed an alternate hook below based on the new version of the sentence. I'll suggest to the primary author that she rephrase some of the other quotes too. Mike Christie (talk – library) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- The first sentence under "Facts" is unsourced and looks like an opinion.
- I've cut it; I don't think it was necessary. Mike Christie (talk – library) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Starting with the lead, I think the statement "The majority of states in the U.S. have laws requiring children under the age of sixteen to wear helmets" is inaccurate, since the article indicates that fewer than half of the states have such laws, although there are local laws in some of the states. That should be revised to state that (for example) 22 U.S. states have these laws and some municipalities and counties in other states also have them.
- As for that "globalize" template, I've already found two references about British Columbia's helmet law. I bet there are others... --Orlady (talk) 03:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC) Or the article could be retitled "Bicycle helmet laws in the United States." --Orlady (talk) 03:52, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- I'll go see if I can fix these points; obviously your comments are going to improve the article. However, can you tell me for future reference if nominated DYK has to also meet some minimum quality standards that I should be aware of? I thought the only requirements were a certain length and that the hook should be supported with an inline reference. Is there anything else that needs to be done -- e.g. do tags such as the globalize tag mean it can't be supported? Or is it just that the higher quality an article is, the more likely it is to get support? Thanks. Mike Christie (talk – library) 14:32, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1: "... there are 39 U.S. states that have no state-wide bicycle helmet laws?" Mike Christie (talk – library) 14:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Actually the source gives 21 states with state-wide laws and there are 50 states in the Union. If I've got my arithmetic right that leaves 29 without and I have edited the article to conform to the following suggestion:
- ALT2: "... there are 29 U.S. states that have no state-wide bicycle helmet laws?" Richard Keatinge (talk) 17:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Edgar Gilbert
- ... that Edgar Gilbert investigated the mathematics of shuffling playing cards?
Created by David Eppstein (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 16:41, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Hubert G. Chevis
- ... that the 1931 murder of Hubert G. Chevis, a lieutenant in the British Army, was never solved?
Created by Sakurakaze (talk), Bruce1ee (talk). Nominated by Bruce1ee (talk) at 10:05, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Date, length, hook ref all verified. I can't resist suggesting this alt hook:
- ALT1: ... that British Army Lieutenant Hubert G. Chevis was murdered in 1931 with a plate of poisoned partridge? Yoninah (talk) 21:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Mobilization of the Bulgarian Army in 1915
- ... that Bulgaria mobilized more than 600,000 soldiers, or 12–13% of its population, upon its entry to World War I?
Created by Avidius (talk). Nominated by TodorBozhinov (talk) at 08:29, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Viktor Kolář
- Date, length OK. Foreign-language hook ref AGF. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:23, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Howard C. Reiche School
- ... that 12 years after the U.S. Department of Education gave Blue Ribbon status to the Howard C. Reiche School in Portland, Maine, it was declared deficient under No Child Left Behind?
5x expanded by Orlady (talk). Self nom at 01:41, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Reviewed Cass County Courthouse (Iowa); diff=[11] --Orlady (talk) 02:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
: Notable and hook is correct. I added "Portland, Maine" to attract more potential reader selection. Billy Hathorn (talk) 17:08, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Duanesburg High School
- ... that former child actor Philip Amelio once taught English and coached baseball at Duanesburg High School?
Created by Bearian (talk). Self nom at 23:29, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Rudolph Stauffer and Harriman (Erie Railroad station). Bearian (talk) 00:01, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- I think this article is too sketchy for a DYK, needs more info, but the one about the child actor is a good one. Billy Hathorn (talk) 21:53, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
William Martin (naturalist)
- ... that William Martin's Petrificata derbiensia, the first scientific study of fossils in English (see illustration), said that his fossils were not the remains of small crocodile tails?
- Comment: Grammy Award for Best Female Rap Solo Performance reviewed Victuallers (talk) 16:20, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
5x expanded by Victuallers (talk). Self nom at 16:05, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- The article doesn't actually say this. It says that the uncles and cousins thought that they were tails, but not that he said the remains were not tails. — KV5 • Talk • 02:47, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- I have added a quote to the ref. Martin says what each fossil is - whether it is considered to be grass, vegetable or a shell - he notes that others used to say they were crocodile tails - Do you think we need to change the hook? Victuallers (talk) 17:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Isabelle de Borchgrave
- ... that Belgian artist Isabelle de Borchgrave creates life-size, painted paper sculptures of wedding gowns, shoes, needlework lace, and strings of pearls?
Created by Patriciathornton (talk). Nominated by Zachlipton (talk) at 08:24, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Huh? This seems rather restrictive reading of the rules. In fact, half of the current set of DYKs on the homepage have body paragraphs without citations. My understanding is that the rules require that the hook's claims must be backed by inline citations, and I believe that is the case with this article (ref #10), and that the article generally conform to core policy, which this article again seems to do. The article is really rather well sourced. Certainly I don't see any unsourced or poorly referenced negative material, which the rules specifically prohibit. In any case, seeing as the goal here is to improve articles and not quibble over rules, I have improved the referencing in the article to ensure that every paragraph has at least one citation. Zachlipton (talk) 19:51, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Al-Rawda
- ... that the Bronze Age settlement Al-Rawda, located in the Syrian steppe, southeast of Aleppo, played a major part in the development of extensive pastoralism in the region at the end of the third millennium BC?
Created by Zozo2kx (talk). Self nom at 15:11, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Date and length OK, offline source AGF, but hook slightly >200 characters and rather rambling. How about something like the following (or you may be able to suggest a better one):
- ALT1 ... that the Bronze Age settlement Al-Rawda, southeast of Aleppo, Syria, played a major part in the development of extensive pastoralism in the region at the end of the third millennium BC? --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 17:35, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
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- for ALT1. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 20:37, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Everything is good — I count 1689 characters (after making a couple of little modifications), the article was written just yesterday, and you've used great academic sources. Two questions — (1) Could you expand the article a little more? You're well past the 1500-character minimum, but even longer would be better. (2) Do your sources give any indication of the site's precise location? Coordinates would be highly useful if you could add them. Of course, neither of these issues are problems, and they're definitely not required by the rules; I'm just asking in my capacity as another editor. Nyttend (talk) 20:42, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Both things were done yesterday by User:Zoeperkoe (Expanded, precise location), so I added him to the DYKmake. Thanks again. Yazan (talk) 03:48, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Might I also suggest another hook that might possibly draw more visitors?
- ALT2 ... that offerings in the 4000-year old temple of Al-Rawda, Syria, came from as far as Egypt, Afghanistan and India? -- Zoeperkoe (talk) 03:57, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Environmental issues in Russia
... that among Russia's many environmental issues is water pollution, which affects 75% of the country's surface water?
Created by Slon02 (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 02:53, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed - suggested reword, "... that a top environmental issue in Russia is water pollution, affecting 75% of the country's surface water?" CycloneGU (talk) 07:03, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- Or "... that water pollution, which affects 75% of the country's surface water, is a major environmental issue in Russia"? Ericoides (talk) 19:11, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed - suggested reword, "... that a top environmental issue in Russia is water pollution, affecting 75% of the country's surface water?" CycloneGU (talk) 07:03, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
Glee: The Music, Volume 5
- ... that Glee: The Music, Volume 5 includes two original songs written specifically for the series?
Created by CycloneGU (talk). Self nom at 07:11, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- This is being proposed for inclusion on March 8, when the soundtrack comes out. The article itself will get significant expansion up to March 8 and beyond, when reception is covered. This can be reworded if need be, and I'll happily participate in that process to find a better wording. Please keep in mind the March 8 proposed inclusion when considering article length and observe future work on the article before dismissing it. CycloneGU (talk) 07:12, 23 February 2011 (UTC)
- I have noticed a holding area for March 8 as International Women's Day and several holding requests for that. If it turns out March 8 is impossible, it might be possible to try for March 15 as that is the air date of the episode using the songs I refer to in the hook. In such a case, the hook would need rewriting to refer to "tonight's episode of Glee". CycloneGU (talk) 00:58, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Český Šternberk Castle
- ... that Český Šternberk Castle (pictured) appears several times in the Albanian-Czech movie The Sorrow of Mrs. Schneider, where then castle's owner Jiří Sternberg is portrayed by the Italian actor Michele Placido?
Created by Empathictrust (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Employees' State Insurance ([13]])
Articles created/expanded on February 24
Dayr al-Shaykh
- ... that the shrine of a famous medieval shaykh in the currently depopulated village of Dayr al-Shaykh became a place of pilgrimage for locals following his death in the 13th-century?
5x expanded by Al Ameer son (talk), Huldra (talk), Tiamut (talk), and Zero0000 (talk). Self nom at 23:34, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
HMS Hotspur (H01)
- ... that the British destroyer HMS Hotspur was so badly damaged after she rammed the Italian submarine Lafolè on 20 October 1940 that her repairs were not completed until 20 February 1941?
5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Self nom at 16:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Do you have a reference for the permanent repairs at Malta (specifically to be placed at the end of that sentence per DYK rules?) Otherwise, image, expansion and length all check out. Harrias talk 22:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Added.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:57, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Beta (plasma physics)
Edward Innes Pocock
- ... that Scotland rugby union international Edward Innes Pocock was also a member of Cecil Rhodes' Pioneer Column?
Created by User:FruitMonkey (talk). Self nom at 11:56, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: St Mary's Church, Redgrave
Beta (plasma physics)
- ... that Troyon's exploration of the limits of Beta in tokamak fusion power designs suggested they were fundamentally limited to less than the 5% needed to build a practical reactor?
5x expanded by User:Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 14:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Good to go.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Thunderbolt (interface)
- ... that Intel's newly released Thunderbolt interface uses Apple's Mini DisplayPort connectors to support both data and displays at the same time?
5x expanded by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 14:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewd article below Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Maury Markowitz is referring to Seara (newspaper). I'm just specifying this because the order in the queue may shift (Seara may get picked up before Thunderbolt), and the meaning of "article below" will hence be lost. Dahn (talk) 11:49, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Seara (newspaper)
- ... that, in its Great-War-era campaign against Romania's alliance with the Entente Powers, Seara newspaper employed conservatives, socialists and anarchists as contributors?
- Reviewed: Zayd Mutee' Dammaj
Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 13:08, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- This is a great article! Hook is well supported. However, I'm not sure "1910s" means anything to the average reader; perhaps "Great War-era" might be suitable replacement? Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you! I was thinking of something along the lines of "World War I" myself, but wanted to avoid the impression that this happened as Romania was fighting in the war, when in fact it came during the time when Romania was neutral - i.e. these guys weren't treasonous, they were just part of an open debate. But maybe I'm being too cautious, in which case please feel free to tweak the hook. Dahn (talk) 14:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I see what you mean, but I think "war era" should be OK - I think it will lead to less confusion than "1910s", which I read to be "1910" and then went hunting for the ref. Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:34, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Donald S. Sanford
- ... that Donald S. Sanford, who wrote the screenplay for the 1976 World War II epic film Midway, was a sonarman in the U.S. Navy during World War II?
Created by Scanlan (talk). Nominated by Dravecky (talk) at 09:31, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Looks fine, hook well supported. However, do we really need the "S" in the article name? Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:34, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Bad Dreams (Fringe)
- ... that in order to shoot the driving scenes in the Fringe episode "Bad Dreams", the director had the actors drive back and forth on the 59th Street Bridge?
- ALT1: ... that because director/writer Akiva Goldsman had an aversion to hospitals, he shot the mental hospital scenes in the Fringe episode "Bad Dreams" in a church?
Created Ruby2010 talk 02:53, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Alt1 is a far stronger hook than the first suggestion. Film-makers frequently re-tread the same ground over and over to get the shots that they want. Relocating from a hospital to a church due to a phobia is pretty unusual. danno 22:12, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Adoption of Ala'a Eddeen. Ruby2010 talk 03:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Domaine Jean-Luc Colombo
- ... that Rhône winemaker Jean-Luc Colombo lamented the competition from California wines, describing their rise as "losing civilisation and vulgarising wine"?
- Reviewed: Khor Virap
- Comment: Online Decanter ref (FN#5) in the Winemaking philosophy section
Created by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 02:05, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Ready to go, but only after I chopped a bit on his education that wasn't in any source. Your referencing style is confusing: by citing two sources at the same spot (end of the second paragraph), you make it impossible to tell what comes from what source. It's not enough to disqualify this from DYK, but it's enough to make me quite uncomfortable; could you please separate the referencing for that paragraph? Nyttend (talk) 15:44, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I apologize for the confusion, but I did have a cite right after the quote that hook is using (and I noted in my comment above which source was use to facilitate any reviewing). Also, considering that it is an online source, I'm not sure why this needed an AGF tick? To my knowledge, the Decanter article is not even behind a paywall. In the grand scheme of things, it's not a big deal but I fret that you may have made this review harder on yourself than what it really should have been. :) AgneCheese/Wine 02:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- What's the point of the AGF tick? I assumed it was meant for cases in which the article had one or more sources that weren't available to the reviewer; I used it because you have a couple of print sources. As well, I'm not complaining about the hook citation: I'm talking about citations 1 and 3 being used adjacent to each other after "Châteauneuf-du-Pape estate Les Cailloux." Sorry for causing confusion. Nyttend (talk) 05:01, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Typically the AGF hook is used when you can't personally verify the sources relating to the hook (since that is what is being featured on the main page). But again, in the grand scheme, it is no big deal. :) As for the confusion about FN#1 and FN#3 next to each other at the end of lead, I did that because FN#1 is an offline book source which covers the entire paragraph while FN#3 is an online source that corroborates several of the details in that paragraph (organic vit, extended maceration, 100s of clients, his influence, work with Chapoutier and Chateau Fortia, etc). I had an idea for a potential hook (which I ultimately didn't use) and wanted to make sure that I had a secondary online ref to assist in verification if I used it. While FN#1 covered it all, having a secondary online ref can be useful. But again, it's alright :) I appreciate you taking the time to review my nom. AgneCheese/Wine 18:10, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- What's the point of the AGF tick? I assumed it was meant for cases in which the article had one or more sources that weren't available to the reviewer; I used it because you have a couple of print sources. As well, I'm not complaining about the hook citation: I'm talking about citations 1 and 3 being used adjacent to each other after "Châteauneuf-du-Pape estate Les Cailloux." Sorry for causing confusion. Nyttend (talk) 05:01, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Grammy Award for Best Male Rap Solo Performance
- ... that American performing artists Nelly and Eminem received Grammy Awards for Best Male Rap Solo Performance during the two years the Best Rap Solo Performance was split into male and female categories?
5x expanded by Another Believer (talk). Self nom at 23:29, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Comment: Instead of "singers", I would call them artists or rappers. Ruby2010 talk 02:55, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Changed "singers" to "performing artists". --Another Believer (Talk) 18:09, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Robert L. Miller
- ... that the constituent services of Mayor Robert L. Miller of Campbellsville, Kentucky, sometimes included sweeping out the basements of houses during rainy seasons?
Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 20:31, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Good for me. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 14:39, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Duanesburg High School
Lockington Locks
- ... that the Lockington Locks (pictured) lay at the end of the highest point on the Miami and Erie Canal?
Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 19:47, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
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- Good work, as usually. Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 23:30, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
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Church of St John Maddermarket
- ... that much of the stained glass in the Church of St John Maddermarket (pictured) in Norwich was damaged by a gas explosion in 1876?
- Reviewed: Al-Rawda
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 17:44, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Adoption of Ala'a Eddeen
- ... that an American soldier, who was deployed to Iraq, adopted an Iraqi boy who could not walk because of cerebral palsy?
- Reviewed: Bicycle Race
Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 16:09, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- While the date, length, and sources check out, the article does not sound very encyclopedic. It sounds more like a newspaper article. I think another opinion is needed before it's submitted to the queue. Also, I removed a comma after "boy". Ruby2010 talk 03:00, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Well, about coma it could be either way I believe. About the article being "not very encyclopedic", do you have any particular suggestions? This is a notable story that was reported in many sources, and IMO should be represented on Wikipedia also. I am sure wikipedia have many other articles that as you say "sound more like a newspaper articles". If you believe the article to be not encyclopedic, you may nominate it on deletion, but as long as it stays on wikipedia there's no valid reason to prevent it promotion for DYK.--Mbz1 (talk) 04:26, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- While the date, length, and sources check out, the article does not sound very encyclopedic. It sounds more like a newspaper article. I think another opinion is needed before it's submitted to the queue. Also, I removed a comma after "boy". Ruby2010 talk 03:00, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
St Augustine's Church, Norwich
- ... that the brick tower of St Augustine's Church (pictured) in Norwich is the only one of its kind in the city?
- Reviewed: AA.20
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 12:12, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed, Good to go: hook, refs, image copyright all good; suggesting alternative hook which may be more interesting:
- ALT1 - ... that St Augustine's Church (pictured) in Norwich has a monument to a textile manufacturer, raised by 600 weavers?
-- Longhairandabeard (talk) 14:11, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- The original hook is more "important". ALT1 maybe more "interesting". Not sure which is the better; leave it to the PTB (powers that be). --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 20:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- I would tend to agree with LHaAB. I totally understand Peter's view that the tower fact is more important, but at a glance it isn't as enticing to me as "600 weavers" is. danno 22:26, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- The original hook is more "important". ALT1 maybe more "interesting". Not sure which is the better; leave it to the PTB (powers that be). --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 20:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Lee Crooks
- ... that former Manchester City footballer Lee Crooks will soon be serving on the frontline in the War in Afghanistan?
5x expanded by MickMacNee (talk). Self nom at 07:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Ralph LaPointe. MickMacNee (talk) 07:43, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Parapinnixa affinis
- ... that the California Bay pea crab is one of only two marine crustaceans to be included on the IUCN Red List of endangered species?
- Reviewed: Robert Morrison ([14])
5x expanded by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 06:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Expansion, date, and hook ref okay. However, to me as a non-biologist it would be more interesting to read that a crab lives inside a worm, so how about:
- ALT1... that the California Bay pea crab lives commensally in the tubes of worms? --Pgallert (talk) 10:20, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- I've never heard the phrase "ringed worm" (="segmented worm" ="annelid"?), so I'd change that to "bristle worm", "tube-dweling worm", or just "worm" (there is also the potential for confusion with ringworm), but apart from that, I'm happy with either hook. It's a shame we haven't got an article on or a picture of Terebella. --Stemonitis (talk) 09:38, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
First Deputy Prime Minister of the Russian Federation
- ... that a First Deputy Prime Minister of the Russian Federation has to be nominated by the Prime Minister and later appointed by the President to take office?
Created by TIAYN (talk) 10:08, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
A Darker Domain
- ... that Val McDermid's novel A Darker Domain explores the social and emotional implications of the UK miners strike of 1984-1985?
5x expanded by Sadads (talk). Self nom at 19:04, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Church of St John Maddermarket, Sadads (talk) 19:10, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Zayd Mutee' Dammaj
- ... that Zayd Mutee' Dammaj was a Yemeni politician and writer whose 1984 novel The Hostage was selected by the Arab Writers Union as one of the 100 best Arabic novels of the 20th century?
created by Peripatetic (talk). Self nom on 24 February 2011 (UTC)
- The source for the hook is a blog, which puts a strain on WP:RS. I'm sure an info of this magnitude can be referred to better sources, both Anglophone and Arabophone. Dahn (talk) 12:56, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Disi Water Conveyance Project
- ... that due to the Disi Water Conveyance Project currently under construction, citizens of Amman, Jordan may soon be drinking extremely radioactive water?
- Reviewed: Jeff Krogh ([15])
Created by E2eamon (talk). Self nom at 00:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- This doesn't seem very NPOV based on the article. The article cites one study that tested existing wells in the aquifer, but I'm not seeing citations that describe tests of the actual water to be delivered by the project. Maybe an alternate hook that just says they are building this massive project and there are concerns about radioactivity in the aquifer? Zachlipton (talk) 22:18, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I agree. I have seen some somewhat misleading hooks on DYK before (things that make puns, etc), and thought that this would be acceptable because, technically, it does say that they "may be drinking" radioactive water. If, however, there are concerns, I understand, and thus propose an alternate. --E♴ (talk) 23:39, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT 1: ... that there are concerns about radioactive water in the aquifer supplying the Disi Water Conveyance Project?
Frederic M. Halford
- ... that British angler and author Frederic M. Halford, pseudonym Detached Badger is known as The father of modern dry fly fishing?
Created by Mike Cline (talk). Self nom at 18:01, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Escobaria minima
Articles created/expanded on February 25
Lebia grandis
- ... that the ground beetle, Lebia grandis, can eat about twenty three eggs (pictured) or three larvae of the Colorado potato beetle every day?
- Reviewed: Collective leadership
Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nom at 19:11, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Good one! Offline source accepted in good faith.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 21:18, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Xochimilco
- ... that the canals and chinampas of Xochimilco in Mexico City are in danger of disappearing within 50 years despite being a World Heritage Site?
5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 02:15, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewd Jason Booth
Ndumbe Lobe Bell, Jantzen & Thormählen
- ... that King Ndumbe Lobe Bell of the Duala assigned his sovereign rights to the trading firm of Jantzen & Thormählen in 1884?
- Reviewed: Gross Barmen, Carl Hugo Hahn, Franz Heinrich Kleinschmidt
- Comment: Reviewed articles moved to the queue before this was submitted.
Created by Aymatth2 (talk). Self nom at 23:50, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Golding Bird
- ... that physician Golding Bird invented the electric moxa in order to save patients from having to be burnt with glowing charcoal?
5x expanded by Spinningspark (talk). Self nom at 22:32, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Corwin Clairmont [16]
The Satirist
- ... that Sir James Hogg and the Duke of Brunswick each pressed charges against Barnard Gregory for libel because of articles that he published in The Satirist?
Created by Qrsdogg (talk). Self nom at 19:32, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Corwin Clairmont
- ... that artist Corwin Clairmont designed the Salish-Kootenai's tribal seal when he was 15 and it is still used today?
Created by Missvain (talk). Self nom at 07:23, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- checked for length, date, hook and source. The tribal name is a bit of a mouthful, is there not a short version that could be used in the hook? SpinningSpark 23:35, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- How about Salish-Kootenai? :) Missvain (talk) 05:31, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. SpinningSpark 10:30, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Canterbury Provincial Council Buildings
- ... that the Canterbury Provincial Council Buildings (pictured), substantially damaged in the 2011 Christchurch earthquake, contain a building that is regarded as Benjamin Mountfort's most impressive achievement?
- Reviewed: MXR Dyna Comp (diff)
Created by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 04:21, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- I've found a photo of the Stone Chamber itself, which is the "most impressive achievement" referred to in the hook. I've added it here, but note that I've put a rename request on the file (to File:Canterbury Provincial Council Stone Chamber.jpg), as 'Church' is wrong. Schwede66 21:05, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Transmission Electron Microscopy DNA Sequencing
- ... that transmission electron microscopy DNA sequencing is a promising new technology which allows sequencing of individual DNA molecules?
Created by Jmgrants (talk). Nominated by Jayron32 (talk) at 01:57, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Provisional - useful article, maybe somewhat overpromoting the involved companies and projects, but this is a small part which can be brushed up and is not that bad for this science area. I've tweaked the hook. This image won't do in 100x100px. Actual electron microscopy image of DNA would be nice. Materialscientist (talk) 11:49, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on February 26
William Herbert Fowler
- ... that amateur cricketer and golf course architect William Herbert Fowler redesigned the 18th hole at Pebble Beach Golf Links, lengthening it from a 379 yard par 4 to a 548 yard par 5?
- Reviewed: HMS Hotspur (H01)
Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 22:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Maryland Route 24
- ... that Maryland Route 24 parallels Deer Creek through Rocks State Park?
5x expanded by Viridiscalculus (talk). Self nom at 22:16, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Al Mar Knives
- ... that Al Mar Knives was the first knife factory to sell a production knife for more than $100US?
- Reviewed: Lebia grandis
Created by Mike Searson (talk). Self nom at 21:17, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Rabatment of the rectangle
- ... that Renaissance artists and architects used rabatment of the rectangle (example pictured) as a compositional tool in their work?
Created by Mattdm (talk), Binksternet (talk). Nominated by Binksternet (talk) at 19:54, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Betty Jane Gorin-Smith
- ... that the Metropolitan Cathedral of Campinas (original name Catedral Metropolitana Nossa Senhora da Conceição) located in Campinas, built between 1807 and 1883 and also opened in 1883, is considered the building as the world's largest built in rammed earth, with 4000 m² area, and also one of the highest?
Created by Marlonsales (talk). Self nom at 18:52, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- ... that the historian Betty Jane Gorin-Smith penned a 2006 study of Confederate General John Hunt Morgan's 1863 raids though central Kentucky?
Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 16:57, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
:Reviewed Howard C. Reiche School
Kathleen, Duchess of Newcastle
- ... that Kathleen, Duchess of Newcastle was influential in the development of the Wire Fox Terrier and the Borzoi dog breeds?
- ALT:... that Kathleen, Duchess of Newcastle purchased a dog from the Tsar of Russia in 1892 for a sum equivelent to nearly £20,000 in modern currency?
- Reviewed: On the Brink
Created by Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 16:40, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
iLoo
- ... that the iLoo was a canceled Microsoft project by British subsidiary MSN UK to develop a Wi-Fi-enabled Internet portable toilet for summer festivals?
- Reviewed: Mothers' Bus
5x expanded by Smallman12q (talk). Self nom at 15:14, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
St Mary's Church, Redgrave
- ... that the entrance to a burial vault below St Mary's Church, Redgrave, (pictured) in Suffolk was accidentally discovered during a rehearsal for Quasimodo?
- Reviewed: Ohinetahi
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 11:00, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Length, date and multiple sources all check out. Good to go. FruitMonkey (talk) 11:42, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
M-46 (Michigan highway)
- ... that M-46 is only one of three trans-peninsular state highways in the Lower Peninsula of Michigan?
- Reviewed: B96 Pepsi SummerBash
5x expanded by Imzadi1979 (talk). Self nom at 08:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Ohinetahi
- ... that Ohinetahi, the historical home and formal garden in New Zealand owned by Sir Miles Warren, architect of the Christchurch Town Hall, was extensively damaged subsequent to the 2010 Canterbury earthquake?
Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 06:29, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Length, date, ref OK. The hook is slightly long (I make it 206 characters with spaces), but in view of the timely nature of the hook, I would be prepared to accept it. You could I suppose make it "fit the rules" as:
- ALT1 ... that Ohinetahi, the historical home and formal garden in New Zealand owned by Sir Miles Warren, architect of the Christchurch Town Hall, was badly damaged due to the 2010 Canterbury earthquake? — but I have no strong feeling about that. I recommend that the hook should appear on the main page soon. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 10:53, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
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- Reviewed: Cryptantha crassipes. --Rosiestep (talk) 20:59, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
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- ALT2: ... that Ohinetahi, the historical home and formal garden in New Zealand owned by Sir Miles Warren, architect of the Christchurch Town Hall, was extensively damaged during the 2010 Canterbury earthquake? --Rosiestep (talk) 20:59, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
B96 Pepsi SummerBash
- ... that The Price is Right featured tickets to the 2009 B96 Pepsi SummerBash as a showcase showdown prize that year?
Created by Strikerforce (talk). Self nom at 04:47, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- with respect to the nomination. I updated the hook to format the subject article in bold, put the game show name in italics, and use a better link for the game show. (The Price Is Right vs. The Price Is Right.) Have you reviewed another nomination here, or are you a new editor claiming the exemption? Second, you will want to reformat your references in the article so that they aren't bare URLs. Please add authors (if known), publishers, dates and access/retrieval dates for the sources used. Otherwise the article creation and source check out. Imzadi 1979 → 08:41, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- This is my first attempt at DYK. I am headed off to bed in a few minutes,
so I will make the suggested improvements to the article later on today.Thank you for your comments! Strikerforce (talk) 08:51, 26 February 2011 (UTC)- I went ahead and made the suggested changes while they were still fresh on my mind. Strikerforce (talk) 09:21, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- with the recent updates to the article. In the future though, please note that you're claiming the exemption under the rules up front, or your nominations may not get reviewed and approved. Imzadi 1979 → 21:12, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- I went ahead and made the suggested changes while they were still fresh on my mind. Strikerforce (talk) 09:21, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Collective leadership
A man with greying hair, in military uniform with five medals
- ... that collective leadership was seen as the ideal form of governance by Soviet ideologists during the rules of Nikita Khrushchev and Leonid Brezhnev?
Created by --TIAYN (talk) 13:42, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed M-46 (Michigan highway) --TIAYN (talk) 13:48, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
- Length, date and hook are fine. My only query would be the formating of the references. These seem strange to me. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:59, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
Special occasion holding area
- Do not nominate new articles for a special time in this section. Instead, please nominate them in the candidate entries section above under the date the article was created or the expansion began, and indicate your request for a specially-timed appearance on the Main Page.
- Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.
March 1
St. Davids Day
William Haggar and Desperate Poaching Affray
- ... that film pioneer William Haggar's 1903 short Desperate Poaching Affray (pictured) is believed to have been a key influence on the chase sub-genre of early film?
Desperate Poaching Affray, created by FruitMonkey (talk). William Haggar, x5 expansion by FruitMonkey (talk). Self nom at 20:45, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Replaced 's with {{`s}} per rule C7. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 13:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
Barry Jones (boxer)
- ... that Welsh boxer Barry Jones lost his WBO Super featherweight title through events caused by an anomaly in a brain scan?
Barry Jones (boxer) new article, self nom by FruitMonkey (talk). 00:01, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Croatian Museum of Naïve Art
Blue Ribbon Bacon Festival
- ... that in the 2010 Blue Ribbon Bacon Festival, the 600 guests ate approximately 30,000 strips of bacon?
Created by Worm That Turned (talk). Self nom at 15:56, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
- reviewed Casper the Commuting Cat,Casper (cat) hereWorm 16:02, 31 January 2011 (UTC)
- I'd suggest mentioning Iowa in the hook, and save it for National Pig Day on March 1st. --PFHLai (talk) 06:48, 6 February 2011 (UTC)
- ALT... that during the 2010 Blue Ribbon Bacon Festival in Des Moines, Iowa, the 600 guests ate approximately 30,000 strips of bacon?
March 8 (International Women's Day)
Rose Catherine Pinkney
- ... that Rose Catherine Pinkney has developed dozens of American television shows, including The X-Files and Girlfriends?
Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 19:41, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewing: The Batman topic of Batı Raman oil field, Batman, Turkey, Batman Province and Batman River--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:28, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- This one might be a good DYK for International Women's Day (March 8). Kaldari (talk) 23:12, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- That is fine by me. Should I move it to that date?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:08, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Despina Storch
- ... that alleged German spy Despina Storch (pictured) was immortalized as "Turkish Delight", "Turkish beauty", and a "modern Cleopatra" in spy literature?
- Reviewed: The Tip-Off
Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 21:11, 19 February 2011 (UTC)
- Verified, nice work. Brandmeister t 00:18, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- Any chance you guys would want to hold this one for International Women's Day (March 8)? There's a holding space for the date in the special occasions section below. Kaldari (talk) 23:06, 20 February 2011 (UTC)
- Yep, no problem. Brandmeister t 08:46, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Lorene Cary
- ... that author Lorene Cary (pictured) was the second African American girl accepted at the "elite" St. Paul's boarding school in New Hampshire, and in 1991 published a memoir of her experiences, Black Ice?
Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 04:38, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Comment I believe that this article could make a great hook for the March 8 International Women's Day. May it please be moved there? Thanks.--Mbz1 (talk) 05:55, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
- Moved to March 8 holding area - The Bushranger One ping only 06:11, 22 February 2011 (UTC)
June 19
Rizal Day
- ... that Philippine town of Daet, Camarines Norte was the first place to celebrate Rizal Day with its construction of the first Rizal monument (pictured)?
Created/expanded by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 05:42, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Request: I suggest this appear either on June 19 (Rizal's birth), December 30 (Rizal's execution) or any date from June 15-24 (Daet's Pineapple Festival). –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 05:46, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Size and date are fine. However, the hook is unreferenced. There is a reference at the end of a paragraph containing the hook, several sentences in - this is unsatisfactory. Ideally, each sentence should be referenced; at the very least - the hook one should be. The problem is fixable, and once this is solved the article should be a "go" for DYKing. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 05:54, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Please see references nos. 1 and 2. All paragraphs are referenced. It'll be pretty hard to read that thing when every sentence, even the hook, has a citation. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 05:57, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- I don't see why. On the other hand, in the case only a para has a ref, it is impossible to trust anything but the last sentence. Consider what will happen when somebody adds more content to the middle, or moves the current one around. I don't think an article with any unreferenced sentence can become a FA, and GA and DYKs require them for most sentences those days, too. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 07:07, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- You see, that only works if each sentence has a different reference than the previous one (such as FAs and some GAs). If I'd be reusing those two references on every sentence, it's repetitive and unsightly. Where's the DYK rule that every sentence has to be cited? The only relevant rule is rule D2 and it doesn't mention citing every sentence, especially if the entire paragraph is referenced on that/those reference/s.–HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 07:30, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Just for the heck of it, I did just that, citing every sentence in the first section, and it now looks unsightly with those repetitive [1][2] after every sentence. I know we should be citing and stuff, but this is not the way to do it if there are only a few references. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 07:35, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. One gets used to that after a while, it is a wiki-necessity. I also asked for clarification of inline citations and DYK rules here. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 08:01, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Common Schools Act of 1871. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 06:00, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
Halloween
Rhacophorus vampyrus
- ... that the tadpole of the Vampire flying frog Rhacophorus vampyrus has two fang-like hooks in its mouth?
Created by Newone (talk), Ka Faraq Gatri (talk). Nominated by Ka Faraq Gatri (talk) at 14:59, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
- Comment If the article meets DYK criteria, suggest moving it to Special Occasions section and keeping for Halloween. The authors of the paper on which this article is substantially based have stated that they intend to publish a separate paper on the tadpoles of this species so the move would also allow time for any material from this paper (assuming it is published in time) to be incorporated. Ka Faraq Gatri (talk) 16:56, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
- That's confirmed. I agree that this should be kept for Halloween, especially as "A detailed description of the new tadpole will be published separately." which might be available by October. It's certainly an early start for the Halloween collection, does anyone think it is a problem to save it until then? SmartSE (talk) 23:41, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
Comment Halloween is just under 10 months away. I can't help thinking that if every vaguely ghoulish or spooky article is saved up that long, it will create a massive backlog (and a precedent for other days). After all, there are only 3-4 sessions of 6 or 7 hooks available for any particular day. Bob talk 22:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
See also
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